You said text is your weak point? Oh no, my friend, those are some pretty original effects! I don’t think I’ve ever seen a card (be it official or fake) which utilizes rarity.
I try to cover up my grammatical blunders with weird effects and mechanics, though that usually means that I have an even harder time of getting the wording right.
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The “Evolves from…” text should be Frutiger LT Std Bold Italic. Additionally, the HP width looks too thin – is it Futura Std at 88%? I’m not taking points off for it, as it’s hard to tell, so I’m just letting you know for future reference! The stats bar text looks a little off, too – slightly too wide, perhaps? What font did you use? There should be a larger space between each part (the number, species, height, and weight)
I used
this for the font and placement reference, so I used Futura LT Medium for the 'Evolves from...' text (many thanks to aschefield for providing this and the Dark blank, btw). I actually do not have any font from the Frutiger family!
Yes the HP is too thin, I noticed only after I submitted my entry though (as well as other errors
). I think it was at 86% perhaps? Guess 88% is the correct width - duly noted!
For the stats bar text I did not have Gill Sans, so I tried to match the font with Gill Sans Std by varying the width and spacing. I couldn't quite nail that spacing unfortunately. Well, more tinkering with that for next month (unless of course, I find Gill Sans instead).
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As expected, so many silly mistakes (170.06 lbs whoops!). That said, the retreat cost capitalisation and contracted english are things I really ought to remember, I've gotten rusty.
You worded that Ability better than I ever could!
The attack power was originally 10+70, but I up-scaled it a bit upon seeing the power level of the current Megas and EXs. I really considered bumping up its RC by 1 so that the energy discard has more of an impact (though that would deviate from the old cacturne cards, from what I recall they all have 1 RC cost).
Perhaps I should have opted for 20+70? Or 30+60? Oh well
I estimated I would get 40/41 points, so I pretty much agree with the score haha