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Welcome to the second part of my story, Pokémon Legacy!

As some of you might have noticed, and some haven't, this is the second thread of the story. For all those who want to start reading this story but haven't read the first part, don't worry. For now the story will focus on the prelude, and it'll show a small introduction to the story. In short, it's a summary of what happened in the first part. So after you read that, you'll be fully up to date what took place before this story starts and you can enjoy the story as much as any other!

For the people who actually read the first half, I'm sorry to inform you that the first chapter of the second book isn't finished at this thime, but I'll be posting it as soon as possible. Feel free to leave a comment anyways, and if you think I missed anything REALLY important in this introduction, please state so. I'll add it to the introduction before moving on then.

But for now, here's the prelude and the introduction for you all!

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[Prelude]

It is in the far future, and pokémon development has had its peaks during this time. However, during a certain incident most, if not all, civilisation has disappeared from our planet’s surface. Wild pokémon now roam the world, and the world has been divided into a few separate continents. In this world of the future, people have lost the track of time, at least after the year 4051, according to the Christian Calendar. Fierce battles are waged across the whole world, as many groups or clans are fighting each other for supremacy over the world. Amongst the biggest competitors are the PMC, Team Twilight, Team Eclipse, Team Neo Rocket, Team Infectus, and Team Galaxy. Apart from these main competitors, many smaller groups also compete, as well as some individuals. In this aggressive environment every issue is solved by battling each other, and only the strongest will survive. People who don’t possess pokémon of their own, or who can’t look after themselves in any way are usually living in fragile constructed cities, usually ’’protected’’ by a group of trainers. The biggest of the groups have their own base, and also their own cities within them, for their followers to live safely inside, far away from other groups their influence or attacks. This story that you will behold is told by me, Brian Shephourd. If I might fall during the battle for our planet, then at least some of you will know what my actions were, and how I experienced this era…

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[Introduction]

Welcome to my journal. My name’s Brian Shephourd, and this is my tale of the far future I live in. What you are reading right now is the second part of my dairy.

For those of you who haven’t read the first part, allow me to give you a short summary of what I’ve been trough not too long ago…

I’m a member of the Pokémon Masters Clan, or PMC for short. Our base was being attacked by Team Galaxy, a rival organisation we are at war with. During their raid, they kidnapped one of my closest friends. So after asking permission to our leader Black Rayquaza a few friends and myself went out to go at Team Galaxy’s base to not only rescue our friend, but also to gain some information on Team Galaxy’s research and other goals.

In order for us to infiltrate the Team Galaxy base, we had to pretend to be one of their troops, and thus we were forced to participate in the so called Recruitment Survey. The Recruitment Survey was a large scale tournament between all potential new recruits, and only the strongest would actually be able to enter Team Galaxy as new members. As we entered the Recruitment Survey, I met up with a new person who was sent after us to infiltrate the Team galaxy base as well. His name was Daniel, and he came on orders of Black Rayquaza himself to aid me and my friends. During this Recruitment Survey I fought many tough opponents, but I managed to win each battle, until I confronted a special girl… a girl named Shannon.

During my fight with the Shannon I learned of a new pokémon ability, one that I had never witnessed before… The ability was named apocalypse, and it was an attack in which the pokémon underwent a whole transformation as a result of the pokémon’s anger and hatred. The result was overwhelming… The pokémon gained tremendous attacking abilities, and the move itself rendered the opposing pokémon and trainer unable to move, or even perform any other action. So unprepared for this encounter, I was slaughtered in battle by Shannon and her pokémon. My Recruitment Survey went on though, and I was glad I still got a chance to enter Team Galaxy despite my loss.

After that, it all began to change was the weirdest… With the Recruitment Survey still going on, the Team Galaxy base was attacked by a single man who simply forced his way trough the base by brute force alone…! As numerous Team Galaxy Grunts gave their best to stop the invader, they were simply pushed aside and beaten to a pulp by the invader’s Machamp who also appeared to be capable of using the apocalypse attack. Not long thereafter I faced the intruder one on one, but I was simply being toyed with… After the short but brutal battle, a second invader joined in, claiming to have gotten what they needed. Shannon then joined by at their side, and to my shock one of my closest friends joined in as well! Thomas was his name, and he assured me that it was nothing personal. The four of them then left the Team Galaxy base, and I was hospitalised due to my own injuries the invader’s Machamp had given me.

Once I woke up, I met a new person named Freya. Freya revealed to me that she was part of Team Galaxy only to reach her own goals, and that she had discovered I was pretty much the same. Due to a condition I couldn’t escape from I was forced to tell my own story, but Freya promised me to keep it a secret. And gladly, she did. After I managed to return to the normal activities that took place after the Recruitment Survey, I was delighted to hear that I passed the Recruitment Survey without being able to finish it due to my injuries. My remaining friends had successfully entered Team Galaxy as well, and our true mission could finally begin. Or so, we thought.

Right as the ceremony to celebrate the Recruitment Survey had come to an end was about to finish, one of our long lost leaders appeared at the Team Galaxy base… Max Shade IV! After quite the dramatic entry, Max Shade IV revealed that he came for his own business to the Team Galaxy base, and he made his way to Team Galaxy’s leader, Cyrus. I decided to follow him, and together with the team I was appointed to as the leader I made haste to follow and confront him. Only then did we find Max Shade IV battling Cyrus, who proved to have some tricks of his own… Max revealed that he had come to rescue the legendary pokémon Mesprit from Cyrus’ clutches, and a fierce battle was waged between the two mighty pokémon trainers. In the end Max Shade IV proved victorious, and it appeared he had only faced a cyborgs clone of Cyrus himself, which had now lured Max in a trap. Max managed to escape, and he told us that he would return to our side once he had taken care of his own business. Until then, we would have to manage on our own.

After the fierce battle, I obtained a pitch black pokéball that proved to be a ball Cyrus used to capture and manipulate Mesprit, but that Cyrus wasn’t completely sure about the origins of the pokéball either… For that cause, my team and I were sent on a new mission. During this mission Freya and my two other friends who had infiltrated the Team Galaxy base, Chris and Kenny, would accompany me and my team. After spending the night in a very special room at the Team Galaxy base our new mission began. We were transported to an area outside of the Team Galaxy base, and it turned out to be an ancient village deeply buried underneath a think layer of ice. As we began to investigate the various tunnels and caves in which the village had been preserved, we encountered some old familiars…

Shannon and Thomas, as well as the other invader whom had taken the things they needed from the Team Galaxy base appeared in front of us, and a mighty battle ensured. Freya, Daniel and I were now separated from the rest of our team because the tunnel leading to the area we were in had collapsed. Not long thereafter we were all defeated and taken capture. We had no choice but to watch as the black pokéball that I had obtained was used by our enemies to awaken an ancient terror… An Aerodactyl who appeared to be in its apocalypse form non-stop was awakened using the powers of the mysterious pokéball, and it began to unleash its fury by rampaging the cave. It was eventually captured, and as our enemies retreated, Thomas stayed behind… To confront Kenny, Chris and me in a three versus one battle.

The battle between Thomas, Kenny, Chris, and me turned out for the worst as Thomas killed Kenny and Chris, leaving me alone to face Thomas and his newly gained powers… As I was losing the battle I learned of a new ability myself, which appeared to be the exact opposite of the apocalypse attack… The ability I mastered was called ragnarok, and as Thomas and I fought a fierce battle it proved that my ragnarok gave me the upper hand in the battle to win. As I managed to defeat Thomas it turned out that Thomas never wanted to do the actions he had done, but that Shannon had forced him to do them by means unknown. I was relieved to see Kenny and Chris turned out to be okay after all, and before we could get a full explanation of Thomas Shannon appeared and took his life.

Daniel, Kenny, Chris, and I decided to give Thomas a worthy funeral, and we finished the investigation mission we were sent out to do… While Thomas’ body was being transported to the PMC base, we returned to our own cruiser and we returned to the Team galaxy base to rescue our missing friend, and to return to the PMC ourselves…

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Really good! I like the build-up alot. Although,wud you mind being more descriptive? I suppose I'll have to go read Book 1 now. Aain, great storyline. ;p

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Good storyline, but you need to give more "vivid" detail.
 
RE: Pokémon Legacy (''Book 2'' is open, prelude and introduction online!) Please comment!

Well, I managed to finish it in time! :D Here's chapter 1 for you all, so please read it and leave comments! ANY feedback is welcome, and it might help me to improve this story, so don't be shy to give it!

Enjoy!

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Chapter 01: Returning to the Team Galaxy base.

’’Rise and shine, sleepy head.’’
’’Ungh… W-What the…?’’

As I slowly opened my eyes, I could see Freya standing in front of me. Her long light blue hair partly hung over her face, but her glasses could be recognised miles away… At least, for me that is.

’’Why are you waking me…?’’
’’Well, we’re almost ther-’’

Before Freya could finish here sentence the cruiser began to shake heavily, and Freya’s forehead slammed against mine…

’’Ouch! I’m awake alright…!’’
’’S-Sorry…! But as I was saying, we’re almost there. Team Galaxy HQ is only five more minutes, so you better start to wake up.’’
’’Yeah, thanks… Ugh… And please tell that pilot to watch what he’s doing…!’’
’’Sure thing… After I’ve taken an aspirin…’’

Freya then left the room I was in, and I prepared to get up from my seat. I undid my belts, and I walked over to the mirror.

’’Now, let’s see…’’

As I looked in the mirror I could see my own face clearly… With the bulb and all on my forehead… My brown hair had already grown back to its normal length since I last cut it to infiltrate the Team Galaxy base, so I decided to cut it again. My brown eyes were still a little red from when I was sleeping, so I quickly wet my hands in the sink and rubbed through my face. Some of the water splashed on the mirror, and as I looked in the mirror I saw my own distorted reflection.

’’Well, the mirror certainly reflects how I feel…’’

I leaned with both my hands on the sink, and I slowly began to look down the sink’s draining hole. I thought of what I’ve been through and most importantly how I could have abandoned Thomas back there… Of course, I didn’t really abandon him, but I couldn’t help but feel that way. As I grabbed the razor to cut my hair, I noticed someone was standing in the door opening of my cabin. Blond hair in a bowl haircut, joined by deep blue eyes reflected in my mirror. At that moment, Chris joined me in my cabin.

’’So, how are you…? You slept well?’’
’’Decently, thank you. How about you?’’
’’Kenny and I haven’t closed a single eye. We could blame it on Matthew’s snoring, but truth is we were worried about you.’’
’’I’m fine, thank you. But why where you worried then?’’
’’Don’t you remember? After we finished our research and headed back for the cruiser you collapsed in the cave…’’
’’I did…?’’
’’Yeah, you were out stone cold. We were all relieved to see you where still alive…!’’
’’Well, fighting with Thomas took its toll I guess…’’
’’Well, just take it easy. We’ll handle things if you’re having trouble with it.’’
’’Hey, relax. I’ll manage, don’t worry. I’ll just need to cut my hair and I’ll be right there with you guys. Just give me a few seconds, okay?’’
’’Okay. We’ll be waiting for you in the main cabin then. We’ll also shortly arrive at Team Galaxy HQ, so please be ready to disembark. I’m also quite positive that Cyrus wants that report as soon as possible…’’
’’He’ll get his report… But first I want to have a word with everyone before we leave the cruiser. Please tell the others that.’’
’’I will, don’t worry. See you soon.’’

Chris left my cabin, and I finally got time to cut my hair… Or so, I thought…

’’BBBBBBBBBBBBBBRRRRRIIIIIAAAAANNNNNNNN!!!’’
’’What the…?!’’

With a loud roar Cody kicked my door open, and he came running in.

’’Cody…?! W-What’s the meaning of this…?!’’
’’I heard you were awake, so I decided to come right away!’’
’’For what…?!’’
’’Just to tell you that I’ll keep an eye on you mister…! I’m still planning on beating you, and so I will! My Heatran and I are ready anytime, anywhere to kick your sorry a-’’
’’Please! Just get out! I need to prepare myself to get back to the base, you idiot!’’

I kicked Cody out of my cabin and I locked the door behind him.

’’Finally… Some rest…’’

I cut my hair and I prepared all of my stuff for disembarking. I put on my Team Galaxy uniform, and I left my cabin to meet the others. Apparently we had already arrived at the Team Galaxy base…

’’Everybody! Brian is back!’’
’’Thank you Daniel.’’

As I came inside the main cabin, all of my other team members saluted me. I decided to look around, and take a good look of everybody after the mission… surely, we all were having a harsh time after the mission, giving what had happened to all of us…

First in line was Ben. Ben’s black hair was as wild as ever, with his red headband keeping it up in the air. His eyes were still burning with his never ending passion for aggressive battling, and his scar across his right eye prove it.

Next to Bend stood Iris. Iris’ blond hair was as perfect as ever, with her sweet smile capable of cheering up anyone’s bad day. She was rather unsure of herself, but I was proud at her she had managed to hold her own during the last mission.

Daniel stood next to Iris, his green hair and brown eyes grasping anyone’s attention right away. Despite his size he had proven to be worthy companion in battle, and I was glad I could rely on him not too long ago. My Dragonite and his Delcatty made quite a good team!

Curt looked at me with curiosity. The front of his hair was a bright blond colour; while the back of his hair was pitch black. Despite his hair being an eye catcher, he himself was really a guy to play on the background.

Cody was looking angry at me, the passion burning in his black eyes… The passion to beat the crap out of me that is…! His long black hair was as wild as ever, and his eyes looked just as piercing as the day I met him… Would he ever change…?

Tucker, who was rather chubby, tried to conceal he was eating some remaining bits of cake as he looked at me, but I didn’t mind. Even though I didn’t see him in action all that much during our last mission, his skills were defensive anyways… His short red hair was in the same model as always…

Riaz, the only tanned one in our midst was actually yawning as I looked at him… I guess he was really tired… And he deserved to be. After we all spread out to search for any information, Riaz gave it his all, as he always does. I couldn’t help but softly chuckle at the sight of his bald head…!

Matthew looked at me full of hope. I knew him for a while now, and he certainly was a nice guy… His Snorlax really was something to watch out for, and his Munchlax was pretty powerful as well. His light brown hair was in the same groovy haircut as always…

Eric stood next to Matthew, and as usual he was on the background leaning in the shadows… As with Cody, Eric’s long black hair was pretty wild, only a little steeper than Cody’s. He was looking out of the window, so I guess everything was alright with him as well.

Johan was still concealing his eyes behind his brown hair, with the glasses on top of that… I still wondered if he was even able to see anything with his hair in front of his eyes, but who was I to question? I thought it was too bad I couldn’t see him and his psychic pokémon in action during the mission, but I still might see it in the future…

The last one of my own team was Kennedy. He was rather small, just like Daniel. His curly orange hair was as messy as always. He wasn’t too different from Iris actually, as he was still learning the true potential of his pokémon.

I then looked at the door towards the Team Galaxy base and I noticed Freya, Chris, and Kenny standing there. Logical, seeing as how they weren’t part of Cody’s and my team.

Freya’s blue hair was once more in a ponytail, and with her deep blue eyes she was staring at the rest of our team members. She was probably observing how they had fared during the mission and the trip back…

Chris’s blond hair was as strict as always, not a single hair poking out from the rest. His blue eyes were looking directly back at me. I suppose to see if I was still okay and all.

Kenny on the other hand stood against the door with his arms crossed over each other and his eyes closed. His long, brown, pointy hair stood as high as ever, and as usual I wondered if he really couldn’t just cut it or something…

But after seeing how all of us were doing okay, I decided to tell my team members what I had wanted to tell them in the first place…

’’Alright everybody, listen up. First of all, I want to thank you and tell you how proud I am of you for sticking with me thorough the whole mission. You truly can be proud on yourself and on your team mates.’’

Everyone began to applause, and softly cheering against each other. Unfortunately I had to interrupt them.

’’But! I need to make one thing very clear to all of you. That we encountered those Team Omega members will be kept top secret. That we even buried one of them will also be top secret. Nobody outside of this cabin will ever know of this, are we clear?’’

Everybody nodded in agreement, but I wanted to make sure nobody would even think about telling anything about those events…

’’Should anyone break this promise we just made, I will hunt them down personally… And what their fate will be is too gruesome to say in words, so let’s just keep it at that. I have faith in each and every one of you, but I can’t stress enough that those events are classified to even our superiors.’’

Riaz raised his hand, and I decided to let him ask his question.

’’But sir, what are we going to tell them when they ask us why the cave collapsed?’’
’’That’s easy. As we performed research the main structure of the cave became unstable and collapsed. We’re glad we all managed to get out of there alive. Any further questions, anybody…?’’

The whole team nodded denying, so I guess we were finally ready to return to the Team Galaxy base.

’’Alright everybody, welcome home! You guys can all return to your dorms, as Freya, Chris, Kenny, Daniel, and I will bring report. Thanks once again for your help and assistance, I’m sure we couldn’t have done it without you! Be sure to get enough rest, since tomorrow’s going to be a really busy day!’’
’’Aye sir!’’

Freya and Cody opened the doors of the cruiser, and the rest of our team members ran off to their dorms. I was just as excited as them to be back at a safe place, but at the same time I still felt uneasy. Not only because Team Galaxy’s base wasn’t my true home, but also because I just couldn’t shake the thought Thomas was gone forever… My inner remorse was being broken by Cody though…

’’Yo Brian.’’
’’What is it this time?’’
’’Some nice speech you had there. Also, I’m sorry for bothering you back there. I forgot you’re having a rough time at the moment because of that Thomas guy… So I won’t be bothering you too much right now…’’
’’Thanks Cody. I appreciate that.’’
’’But you should also note we lead this team, and not just you Brian! Keep that in mind, heh heh…! I’ll correct you if I need to!’’

Cody left with those words, and I didn’t expect any less from him. Cody being sympathetic? Who was I kidding…?

’’Brian, listen. If you want I can go and report to Cyrus on my own. You could spend some time with Chris and Kenny if you want… Seeing how the three of you lost a close friend…’’

For a moment I looked up. Freya seemed really concerned about me… But I decided to calm her down, and on top of that I already had some plans…

’’Don’t worry Freya, I’m fine. I’ll join you in reporting to Cyrus. On top of that I have some questions of my own I’d like to ask him anyways…’’
’’Oh? What type of questions…? Maybe I can answer them for you?’’
’’No thanks. The answers I crave… Only Cyrus can give me those…’’

With those words I took the first steps outside of the cruiser, on my way to Cyrus… All the answers I craved… I was sure to get them from him…!

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Interesting... Cody being nice, even if it was only for a second, was really NOT what I would've foreseen happening D:

Also, you said carved and not craved at the bottom. Just point stuff out like always :p

It's a good start though; sets the story up to continue on where you left off. Which of course is always a good thing :)

Keep at it! Maybe we'll see more comments this time round once people "catch up" ;)
 
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I missed the entire first book, and with fifty chapters, it's not likely I'll be catching up. Good little first bit. Kinda weird, though, but I suppose that's cause I missed the entire first book.

There were also a few errors aside from the one cal mentioned, and I will point them out to you if asked.

Have you read my fic yet?
 
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Well, James, you certainly got more descriptive! :D

Uhhhh...when you were descriping Curt, I think you meant "hair" not "air". Its cool though, I have to edit my posts a dozen times before it has correct grammar!

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Thank you all for your comments! I've watched the grammar and such more with this chapter, so I hope this one's flawless! ;)

PMJ - I'm still reading, but some unfortunate events came between... Don't worry, I'll let you know when I've finished it! ;)

Brian and Co are ready to report to Cyrus, who in turn has his own surprise for them...! What can it be...?! And how will they react?! Just read on...!

Enjoy!

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Chapter 02: Cyrus’ personal lab

’’We reached the requested floor. We hope you enjoyed your stay in our elevator.’’
’’Yeah, yeah, just open…!’’

Pretty annoyed I slammed my fist against the elevator’s door. I never liked elevators in the first place, let alone when they made me wait…!

’’That’s odd…’’
’’Hm? Freya? What’s odd?’’
’’The elevator never had a voice before…?’’
’’Heh, seems like Cyrus thought of Brian then…!’’
’’Oh, and why’s that, mister smart Chris?’’
’’Well, he must have noticed you hate elevators, and maybe he wanted to comfort you with a talking one…?’’
’’Very funny Kenny…’’

Both Chris and Kenny began chuckling, and Freya couldn’t help but laugh along. I on the other hand just got even more annoyed, and I almost lost my temper… But the elevator doors finally opened, and because of that Freya, Chris, and Kenny avoided my divine wrath…!

’’Welcome back. I hope you have some good news for me?’’

We all looked surprised as we stepped out of the elevator, as in front of us was Cyrus himself… even outside of his main room…! Could it be that he was waiting for us…?

’’G-Good day sir…!’’

I mumbled, as all of us saluted. None of us expected Cyrus to actually await us right as we exited the elevator…

’’I’ll see you in my room. And make haste. I’m almost dying to find out with you discovered.’’

Then, in an instant Cyrus vanished in thin air, and only then did we discover it was nothing more than a hologram of Cyrus. We walked through the hallway and entered Cyrus’ room.

’’Welcome, Brian, Chris, Kenny, and Freya. Please be seated.’’

Cyrus was behind his desk, holding a glass of red wine in his right hand as he pointed us to our seats with his left hand. As we all took our seats, I noticed Cyrus looked at us with unknown intentions in his eyes… He had this rather curious look in his eyes, but at the same time he looked quite suspicious…

’’So, I hope you are all sitting comfortably?’’
’’Y-Yes sir, thank you…’’

I couldn’t help but mumble at Cyrus’ piercing look. Cyrus put away his glass wine and leaned on his desk using his elbows. His head then rested on his hands, which he folded while he looked at us. With his mouth now covered, all we could do was look at Cyrus penetrating eyes, and I think it’s sure to say we were all quite uncomfortably in our situation…

’’So, what did you discover…? Tell me everything.’’

I swallowed and looked at the others. They all looked at me, and without speaking we came to the agreement of letting me do the talking.

’’We entered the ancient village as you asked us to do, sir. We did some tests and research at the site, but soon it proved that the cave was unstable. So we took our research with us, and we barely managed to escape.’’
’’I see. So, did you bring the black pokéball with you?’’
’’But of course. Would you like to have it, sir?’’
’’No thank you, I want you to look after it anyways. Just make sure you’re having it with you at any given time.’’
’’I will sir, don’t worry.’’
’’So, what are your exact conclusions after doing your research?’’

For a moment I paused. I thought of what to say, but I then realised it didn’t matter what I said or not. All data had already been sent back to the PMC base as well, and if I kept any information secret for Cyrus and he discovered it I’d be in some real trouble as well…

’’Well, first of all we couldn’t find any exact information regarding the origin of the ball… In fact, it’s not even sure if the village the ball was discovered in was actually the real place the ball came from. There’s quite the possibility the ball got there by means unknown from its actual birth place, if I’m allowed to call it like that.’’
’’That’s some information I already had in my possession. I’m more curious at what you discovered concerning the abilities the ball has…?’’
’’Well, for as far as we know there is nothing inside the pokéball at all. So even if one would be able to open it, it would be empty anyway. It seems that the ball has the option to create a link between different dimensions though.’’

Cyrus then leaned back in his chair, and his piercing look somewhat vanished. Instead he began to look more fascinated, as if I was telling him something new.

’’It can link with other dimension you say…?’’
’’Yes. While in the ancient village the ball connected to a new dimension and revealed another person. It should be noted that we have no information on this other dimension, except that it isn’t the dimension Team Omega uses.’’
’’So, did you manage to get contact with the other person?’’
’’Unfortunately not. The link between the two dimensions was briefly cut off. Whether it was due to an unstable link or that the link was too weak to maintain presence is unknown. We tried to re-establish the link in various ways and methods, but all have proven ineffective.’’
’’That’s rather… a big disappointment…’’
’’We mourn about it as much as you sir. There’s one other ability we discovered while in the ancient village though. Frozen inside the ice an ancient pokémon awakened when it was exposed to the ball’s energy. The pokémon managed to escape, and its whereabouts are currently unknown.’’
’’Unknown you say…?’’

Cyrus looked at me questioning. With one of his eyebrows lifted his piercing glare returned, and it struck us all as a lightning strike at a clear sky.

’’I suppose you didn’t try to search for that ancient pokémon, now did you…?’’
’’Well… It flew off, and we weren’t in the position to pursue it...’’
’’I see. Could you describe to me what the pokémon looked like…?’’
’’But of course. The pokémon in question was an Aerodactyl… Only it was different from all other Aerodactyls.’’
’’You mean transformed, looking unnatural? As if it was using that apocalypse attack those invaders used while wrecking my precious base? That type of different?’’

I didn’t know what to say. Cyrus hit it right on the spot, as if he was some kind of psychic mastermind…! Could it be… someone of us was bugged with a camera or something…? Could it be that Cyrus saw everything without us knowing it…? For a moment I panicked…!

’’You seem surprised how I know this.’’
’’Y-Yes… I had no idea you already knew…?’’
’’Oh, don’t worry; it was just a lucky guess. Well, not completely lucky, but still…’’
’’W-Would you mind explaining yourself, s-sir…?’’
’’Sure. But I can’t simply do it in words alone. So please, hold on to your seats…’’
’’Huh?’’

But before I knew what was happening my seat grabbed me around my waist and arms with some belts, and the floor underneath us opened…!

’’W-W-What the heeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!’’

Before I knew it Cyrus, Chris, Kenny, Freya, and I were falling through a long shaft, which seemed endless as we fell with tremendous speed…!

’’Hold on just a little longer! We’re almost there!’’

I was still in shock of the long fall we made, but I then slowly began to realise we had already stopped falling…! Cyrus stood up, and at the same time our belts opened as well. As we all stood up, I didn’t believe my eyes…!

’’Welcome to my personal lab…!’’

Cyrus said as he walked towards a large door which shifted open as he approached. He held his arms wide open, and made a small turn as he walked inside. We followed him, and we could see all sorts of complicated machinery, as well as some pokémon locked up in various cages or machines…!

’’Please simply follow me and ignore most, if not all, experiments we come across. The thing I wish to show you is under strict supervision, so it’ll be quite the walk…’’
’’Ugh… I hate walking…’’

Kenny mumbled, and all of a sudden Cyrus stopped walking. He turned around and confronted Kenny right in his face…!

’’So… You hate walking, hm?’’
’’Y-Yes sir…!’’
’’Well then, let’s use some of my toys then. Freya is already familiar with these, but I expect you can handle them just as well in no time.’’

Cyrus grabbed the remote control he used to summon his mobile lab once more, and this time he pressed a button stationed sideways of the device. In the ceiling a large plate shifted, and it revealed a sort of storage room. Out of the opened ceiling five floating platforms came towards us, and we all took place on them.

’’Alright, we don’t have to walk as you can see. The controls of our hover-discs isn’t all that complicated. With your right or left arm you control up and down, and using your legs you control any other direction. Not too difficult, huh?’’
’’N-No sir…!’’

I was quite surprised. Who would’ve thought Cyrus was actually this kind…? Or maybe even… playful…?

’’Alright then, let’s go. But what you’re about to see is top classified. But since you are already aware of more things than the most average employee that I have, I think it’s of no harm to show you.’’

We all raced trough Cyrus’ lab with incredible speed, and Chris and Kenny were actually toying around while gliding through the air…! I could only wonder what Cyrus was planning on showing us until something catched my eye… Immediately I stopped, and I turned to look at it. Cyrus and the others noticed I stopped and made haste to turn around to get back to me.

’’What is it, Brian?’’

Chris was the first to reach me, and all I could do was point at what I saw…

’’C-Chris… L-Look…!’’

Chris looked with me, and he noticed what I saw…

’’T-That’s… horrible…!’’

In front of us was a large container full of bodies… Not just any bodies… Bodies which belonged to PMC members…! The container was full of dead PMC members, their scorched and ripped clothes being the last evidence of who and what they once where… We looked a little behind the container and we saw some cell blocks. In these cell blocks all kind of prisoners were being held, including some PMC members. A little to the left of the cell blocks a wall full of equipment was placed, with some sort of binding equipment for strapping one’s hands and feet to the wall…

’’Ah, I see you’ve found my little interrogation room…!’’
’’Interrogation room…? Don’t you simply mean torture room…?’’
’’Well, you could call it whatever you want. But I assure you, if our prisoners simply spill all their secrets, there’s no pain in their death.’’
’’So, you kill any prisoner you’ve interrogated…?’’
’’Oh no, not all prisoners. Some I keep as slaves, and others I keep as test subjects, whatever suits my ends.’’
’’I see… So are these guys all prisoners this base got?’’
’’No, not at all. Usually our west wing stores them, but after the raid we suffered we had to store some prisoners at various places. The prisoners you see here are here for quite a while now… But let us move on.’’

Relieved to hear Bob couldn’t be inside the cell blocks or the container holding the bodies I decided to follow Cyrus after all. I felt pity for the captured and tortured members, but there was nothing I could do for them… At least, not now…!

’’Well then, here we are. Take a good look, and you’ll understand why I knew what you were talking about.’’

Freya, Chris, Kenny, and I couldn’t believe our eyes… In front of us was a large chunk of ice, containing yet a new pokémon…

’’I-Is this… the same as that Aerodactyl…?’’

I stuttered as I got closer to get a closer look.

’’That’s up to you to confirm.’’

As I came closer I could clearly see the pokémon which was trapped in the ice… In front of me a Weavile appeared, with one of the most ferocious looks in its eyes that I had ever seen… Its claws were humongous, and definitely as sharp as diamonds…! Its entire body was covered in these long, sharp spikes, and its growling mouth portrayed multiple rows of sharp teeth… There was no doubt… This Weavile belonged to the same group as the Aerodactyl we encountered earlier…!

[end Chapter 02]
 
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So THAT'S what they were after!? Well, there's a surprise... I wonder if they found it first time round. That is, found it and didn't have the means to retrieve it...

Hopefully Bob WASN'T in that torture room... I know you said he couldn't be seen, but they didn't spend a long time LOOKING.. so maybe he WAS there D:

But alas, I have work to do... keep it up! :D
 
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Well everyone, here's the third installment of the second book of the still ongoing story: Pokémon Legacy!

Also, pleas epeople, I want YOUR comments! :D So don't be a shy guy and comment please! ;)

IMPORTANT!

as for now, this is probably one of the most horrific chapters so far, but this simply HAD to be introduced in the story, so please bear with me... anyways...

enjoy!

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Chapter 03: Cyrus’ own gruesome show…

’’Control room? Cyrus here. Make preparations to defrost lab specimen UO-D1. Make all preparations as you did last time. We need to freeze it in again later.’’
’’Roger sir.’’

Cyrus’s headset disappeared underneath his clothes, and some supreme technology must have been involved for sure…! I decided to make a little chat with Cyrus while we all waited for the lab to get ready to defrost the Weavile we all saw in front of us…

’’So sir, you actually intend to defrost the pokémon? Isn’t that dangerous?’’
’’Only if you get close to it. Besides, it’s not the first time we did it.’’
’’And after defrosting it you do some tests on it, and afterwards you put it back in the freezer…?’’
’’You could put it that way, yes.’’
’’So what’s the shortcut standing for?’’
’’UO-D1? Unidentified Origin-sector D. And it’s the first and only pokémon we have found in sector D so far. Well, we cleared investigation sector D in its entirety but there simply aren’t any other pokémon trapped in the ice left there.’’
’’So, when you defrost it, it simply starts running around again?’’
’’It’s not that easy. You see, we discovered that the black pokéball you hold is the key to actually grant this pokémon life. If we were to simply defrost it, we would have a dead body. Expose it to the energy the black pokéball radiates and the pokémon is filled with life energy. However, it appears that it will only work on this kind of pokémon. At first we thought the Weavile we had here was an unique case of pokémon, but after the assault on our base and hearing what you’ve been through I’m now positive there are more out there.’’

Upon hearing Cyrus’ information I was baffled. He already knew the black pokéball had a link to these apocalypse pokémon, and he also knew how to use it to awaken this Weavile… What more could he possibly know that he didn’t tell us already…?

’’So, do you think these pokémon are perhaps… aliens?’’
’’Aliens…? Aliens?! Of course they aren’t! Like I stated before, the actual origin of this Weavile is unknown. But we are for the full hundred percent sure that the pokémon originates from our very own planet, Earth. Or at least, it did.’’
’’Did…? I think I don’t fully understand…?’’
’’We took some body tissue from this wonderful test subject, and we did an incredible discovery… Within the pokémon’s cellular structure living cells and dead cells have merged…! Instead of destroying each other the cells actually merge with each other to create a unique case of body structure in itself…! It is fascinating and frightening at the same time!’’
’’So… are these pokémon… half living zombies…?’’
’’No, they’re far from that. They are alive, despite some dead body cells being present. It allows them to manipulate certain parts of their body in various ways, by interchanging the cells on various locations of their body.’’

For a moment I looked puzzled, as I still didn’t get the full picture of what Cyrus was telling me. At the same time our hover discs went to auto pilot, and we were all transported to a separate part of the lab, together with the chunk of ice holding the Weavile. While moving to there Cyrus finally spoke in language I could explain…

’’Just to put it simple for you… See it as a giant jelly. It can wiggle and bounce around without sustaining damage. On top of that, when you slice a jelly in two, both halves remain perfectly intact. Of course we didn’t try to slice this Weavile in two halves, but the cells provide the body with the option to split into various smaller pieces when taken enough damage.’’

For a moment I slipped away in thoughts. So when that Aerodactyl used that hades ability back there, it simply took too much damage and divided its own body to reduce the impact… Not only that, it managed to counter attack with the small parts of its body as well, as it absorbed Jason’s Machamp afterward… And that all due to something that could be compared to a jelly…?

’’I see you’re considering the information I gave you. Know that that’s not all what I have to tell you. Not only can you compare it with a jelly, at the same time it has many abilities clay also has. Not only can all the different jelly parts return to the whole, during this process the parts can absorb anything the come in contact with…! Matter and size doesn’t matter at all…! Upon contact the smaller body parts will simply pass on their genetic structure to the victim, whether its something organic or not doesn’t matter, and as the victim also transforms into smaller body parts the original user will simply draw in and absorb the victim.’’
’’We encountered this ability when facing that Aerodactyl… The effects were horrifying…’’
’’Oh, but that’s not all…! After the body splits into various smaller parts, they can reshape in any form at will!’’

For a moment I was shocked. Did that mean a pokémon like that Aerodactyl and the Weavile we had right here had no physical restrictions at all…?!

’’Do size and form play any role in this form manipulation…?’’
’’Not at all. See it as if the pokémon has the ability any Ditto has. Only these pokémon aren’t restricted to what body part they transform, while Ditto transforms as a whole. Imagine all the power a single one of these pokémon holds…? If I were to control just one of them… And in effect this Weavile, then I could march trough the entire world as I spread destruction through all my enemies with just this Weavile!’’

Cyrus was right… And the more I thought about what Cyrus had just said, the more I realised how lucky the others and I had been, seeing that Aerodactyl wasn’t capable of using its full potential… Not only against us alone, but against the whole world…!

’’But, enough information for now. So, if I may?’’

Cyrus held out his hand, and made a gesture to give him the black pokéball. I handed it over without hesitation, but I couldn’t help but to inform Cyrus that the pokéball’s energy had run dry from our latest mission…

’’The pokéball’s energy was all used up as we awakened the Aerodactyl and tried to contact that person in the other dimension. I’m afraid it’s of little use as it is now?’’
’’Fear not. I used it for various tests before, and I also had to endure it ran out of energy. So then I decided to find a solution for that…! Control room?’’


From Cyrus jacket once more the headset came, and Cyrus immediately got a connection.
’’Yes, my lord?’’
’’I have need for the soul charger. Bring it to me.’’
’’The… soul charger…?! B-But sir…?!’’
’’Silence! Just bring it to me! The need is urgent.’’
’’Y-Yes sir… Who should be the source?’’
’’Just open up a cellblock with qualified contestants. I’ll need quite the material for this one.’’
’’Yes sir, I’ll open up cellblock 21G. I have three possible candidates in perfect condition sir. Would you like to choose the sorce?’’
’’Give me the names.’’

The whole conversation puzzled me, but after thinking it over I slowly began to get an idea of what this soul charger might be, as well as it was for. But as the control room began to speak once more I froze…

’’First candidate: David Kleen. Second candidate: Benjamin Utters. Third candidate: Bob Renalds.’’

The last sentence boomed through my head…! For the first time since I got to this base I finally got news concerning Bob…! I still had no idea what his current state was, but at least he was alive… and he was in cellblock 21G… But for how long…?

’’Hmm… Out of those three, who is the most qualified for the soul charger?’’
’’It is a tie sir. Both David Kleen and Bob Renalds share as much potential.’’

My hearth began beating faster than ever. If Cyrus chose Bob, and if the machine does what I think it does, we might need to drop our cover faster than expected… On top of that we had no place to directly flee to, since we were in the middle of Cyrus’ lab which was located deep, deep underneath the ground and ice…!

’’Bring me this David Kleen then. I have no preference for either of them, as long as he’s qualified.’’
’’Understood. David Kleen will arrive with the soul charger in less than two minutes sir. Our apologies for the wait.’’
’’No need. Just hurry up.’’
’’Roger.’’

I was relieved to hear Bob wasn’t chosen to serve as the machine’s so called source, and now we knew where he was…! Finally something good happened for us, after all the bad things that had happened in the past few weeks… Not long after the communication between Cyrus and the control room a shaft in the wall opened, revealing a large machine as well as a single prisoner trapped inside a cage. To my horror that David Kleen person wore a PMC uniform as well, so my guessing was that the cellblock 21G was full of our kidnapped comrades…

’’Yes, he seems rather appropriate. I’m glad my control room never lets me down. Now, to recharge the black pokéball…’’

Cyrus put the black pokéball in the machine, and to my surprise a long hose like tentacle unwrapped itself from the machine, which ended in this sort of trident pincer…

’’Well, David. Tell me. How is your life so far?’’

Cyrus was obviously mocking David, which looked in disgust at Cyrus. He didn’t reply however…

’’You worthless worm!’’

Cyrus flew to the cage and grabbed David by his neck and he began to strangle him…!

’’When I ask you something, you are obliged to answer…! Don’t think it’s an option you have or not! So, once again, maggot… How is your life so far…?!’’

Cyrus let loose David’s neck, and David fell to the floor of his cage while grasping for air. He then slowly crawled back to his feet, and he spit at Cyrus.

’’Fine, I’ll answer your stupid question… There’s nothing left I have to lose anymore…’’
’’Good. Now be a nice little dog and tell me.’’
’’Up until recently my life’s been great. The Pokémon Masters Clan truly is my only home, and forever will be.’’

As David spoke Cyrus prepared all kind of things with the machine. He pulled some switches, pressed some buttons, and most importantly he closely watched at the trident shaped pincer…

’’Continue. Surely such a fit young man as yourself must have had a wonderful life to be in the condition you are in now…?’’
’’I told you numerous times before. Because I had a wonderful life at the PMC I will remain positive about my life. No matter what horrific experiments you conjure on me, or for that case on any other PMC member, we will all keep hope just because of that.’’
’’Impressive. I must admit, out of all the prisoners I got here, those that originate from that cursed Pokémon Masters Clan are the most cheerful ones… No wonder you were picked as a valid source for the soul charger…!’’

Cyrus grabbed the hose like tentacle, and pulled the trident shaped pincer with him towards David’s cage. He then turned around to face us, and as if holding atrophy he greatly held the trident pincer high up in the sky in his right hand.

’’What you are about to see is the pinnacle of technology that involves humans! Take a good look, and be fascinated! The soul charger took years to complete, but the results are outstanding! Now, behold!’’

Cyrus snapped in his fingers, and the normally steady bars of David’s cage became a liquid that ensnared his both wrists, his neck, and both of his heels as the liquid pushed him forward towards Cyrus. David tried to resist and fight back with all his strength, but it was futile…

’’David, you worthless maggot… Have no regrets. Despite your useless life you have finally found a cause. Dream of the useless life you once had, and enjoy it in your eternal dreams…!’’
’’N-No… No, please… Y-You can’t… be serious…? No… No… Please…! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!’’

My fears became reality before my own eyes… Despite David’s loud screaming Cyrus pulled the trident pincer and stabbed it right inside David’s belly, pushing it deeper into David’s body upward, to enter his ribcage… In spite of what I saw, there was little to no bleeding involved as Cyrus inserted the trident pincer inside David’s body, but it didn’t make it any less horrific to watch at…

’’Now then. Farewell.’’

Cyrus pulled a lever I hadn’t noticed before which was attached to the end of the trident pincer, and as soon as it was pulled the machine began to activate… Before my own eyes David’s body was drained clear of any fluids, and at the end of David’s scream a bright white light was emitted from his mouth, eyes, and nose holes. It didn’t last for long though, as within less than three seconds the light that shone outwards began to get pulled back inside David’s body, and assumable enough into the machine afterwards…

’’Isn’t it beautiful…?’’

Cyrus pulled the trident pincer back towards him, and whatever that remained that was once David now simply turned to dust. Cyrus floated back towards the main machine, and he grabbed the black pokéball. Though I had my sincere doubts at how Cyrus had managed it, I couldn’t deny it worked… The Black pokéball was brimming with energy… Cyrus then turned back at us, and even with a little sarcastic tone he began to speak to us as he saw we were all shocked at what had just happened…

’’Now then. Shall we continue with our little show…?’’

[end Chapter 03]
 
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Woahs... that was rough...

Yeah, I didn't quite expect that to happen before I read the chapter. As you went through though, it became obvious that something along those lines was going to happen. HOWEVER, that didn't make it any less horrifying to think about...

Good amount of detail there though IMO; enough to know exactly what was going on, but not so much as to completely horrify the reader to the extent where they have nightmares about it. Which wouldn't be a good thing ;)

Keep at it!
 
Well, after a LONG time chapter 4 is here from the 2nd book! Its been a while, so maybe some people want to re-read at least the previous chapter...! ;)

Cyrus awakens the Weavile, and decides to show Brian & Co just how powerful it is...!

Enjoy!

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Chapter 04: Weavile’s power tested (part 1)

’’Behold! As the black pokéball’s energy fills the Weavile’s body, it will live again!’’

Cyrus sounded like a mad scientist while releasing the black pokéball’s energy, but then again, I personally thought Cyrus was mad anyways… So I guess it fits for him to sound like that. While we watched the scene in front of us, I still felt a little uneasy due to what had just happened… It also made me think a little. Cyrus just demonstrated how he poured new energy in the black pokéball, but at what cost…? Did the black pokéball really require the human sacrifice to recharge…? And if it really required it, would it need a human life each time it would recharge…? But all of a sudden Cyrus pulls me back to reality…

’’Brian! Pay attention! This is a once in a lifetime experience! You can day dream anytime later!’’
’’Y-Yes sir…!’’

Freya, Kenny, Chris, and I look down into this large bowl like structure, which is used to defrost the Weavile- as well as keeping it locked inside I guess… The Weavile is almost completely defrosted, and Cyrus inserts the black pokéball into a sort of container, which then radiated a powerful black beam at the Weavile. The black beam hit the Weavile’s crystal on its forehead, and after that the bowl like structure was lit in a bright white light which blinded us for a moment. We all turned away for a moment, but I kept looking while holding my hands for my face. I still did my best to look through my fingers, and I barely managed.

’’Man, I’m glad I don’t have a light that bright in my room…!’’
’’I bet we all are Kenny!’’

Kenny and Freya were joking around, and just as I wanted to join in with them I got the scare of my life…! The light was slowly fading away, but right in front of me the Weavile rushed at me, and I totally forgot there was this glass between me and him… Within less than a split second the Weavile slammed against the glass, with both of its claws scratching furiously in my direction against the glass…!

’’Wow, look at that guy…! It looks totally insane! I’m glad the glass is between us and that thing…! You okay Brian…?’’
’’Yes, I’m fine, thank you Freya…’’

Cyrus then came towards us on his hover disk, slightly mocking me as he joined up with us.

’’Love at first sight I notice?’’
’’It appears so, sir…’’
’’Oh, cheer up Brian. Here’s the black pokéball for you to carry. Take good care of it.’’
’’I will sir.’’
’’Isn’t it magnificent…? Just look at it… Immediately after being resurrected its furious… Full of hatred if I may say so… Imagine what I could do with this pokémon if I were to tame it… Unleash it upon the world to grasp dominance…!’’


Chris began to interfere with Cyrus’ thoughts, and started a discussion.

’’But sir, I’m sure you’ll need more than pure hatred to defeat millions of pokémon to grasp world dominance…?’’
’’But of course. But hatred can be a great fuel to awaken a great power…! The hatred that fuels this Weavile… it is magnificent!’’
’’But is it possible to conquer the whole world with it…?’’
’’I understand you’re doubtful. Allow me to demonstrate its full potential then.’’

Cyrus grabbed his remote control once more, and he pressed various buttons on it. We all then looked at the bowl structure, but to our surprise nothing happened.

’’You’re looking at the wrong place. Turn around.’’

We all turned around to look the other way, and in front of us Cyrus stood with a big grin on his face… But what’s more, there was something behind him…! A large computer like machine had appeared behind Cyrus, and without a doubt Cyrus was proud to show us what the machine was capable of…

’’Now then… Chris, you were doubtful of this Weavile’s power… So please, be my guest and come forward.’’

Chris moved his hover disk forward and stood next to Cyrus. Quite nervous we all looked, as we had no idea what Cyrus was planning, nor did we know what the machine was capable of…!

’’Well Chris, in front of you is my pokémon database machine. In it you will find any pokémon I have available data on. What’s more, this machine will duplicate the pokémon for use…! So select whichever pokémon you want from my database, and we’ll see how this Weavile will fight against it…!’’

We were all a little shocked and amazed at the same time…! If Cyrus was telling the truth about the duplication part then this machine would mean that one could raise an entire army of pokémon with just this machine…!

’’Sir… You mean I can pick any pokémon from this database to fight against that Weavile…? Literally any pokémon…?’’
’’Have a good time, but make it quick. Pick whichever pokémon you want. Unfortunately I don’t have complete data on all pokémon, but most of my experimental pokémon are also stored in the machine’s database.’’
’’Awesome! Give me a second, I know exactly which pokémon I’m going to pick…!’’

As Chris excited browsed through a long list of various pokémon I decided to ask Cyrus about the machine.

’’Lord Cyrus, this machine must be the pinnacle of your technology…? Reconstructing an entire pokémon from mere data… It seems impossible to do actually…!’’
’’This is indeed one of my better inventions… But none of my inventions is perfect of course… This invention’s weakness for example… It creates the pokémon from basic cells stored inside it, but the cellar structure will fail to maintain after a certain period of time. The pokémon created by this machine are also mere replicas of the original… They are controlled by the machine itself, and have no will or thoughts of their own.’’
’’So this machine is in effect their brains then…? And what if the cellar structure becomes unstable then…?’’
’’More then just the brains mind you… It rather creates the soul of the replicated pokémon. And on the issue of the cellar structure… You can see it in two ways; either as a fire cracker, or as a sand castle.’’
’’Excuse me…? Fireworks and beach buildings…?’’
’’For comparison. What does a fire cracker do when the fire reaches the powder? It explodes into many smaller pieces. And what happens if a sand castle is kicked? It will fall apart in many ways, leaving nothing but a pile of sand left with what you started. The same goes for these replicated pokémon. One time they explode, and at another time they simply fall apart.’’
’’That’s… interesting I guess…? And you can’t say which one will explode and which one will fall apart beforehand…?’’
’’That’s impossible to tell, you see-’’

But just as Cyrus wanted to explain a lot of things to me that I wouldn’t understand either way, Chris came barging in our conversation excited about the pokémon he found.

’’I heard some pretty cool descriptions from this one particular pokémon, so I thought of using it against the Weavile…?’’
’’And which one may that be…?’’
’’This one!’’

Chris pointed on the screen of the machine, and I was shocked to see Chris’ choice…

’’Ah, a nice choice you made Chris. After the Mesprit Project this is one of my most valuable pokémon to be able to use…’’

In front of me Chris pointed at the screen of the machine and he showed us he chose Mesprit to be used in the battle against Weavile… After my own encounter with Mesprit I was kind of nervous on what would become of the battle…

’’Very well then, let’s all return to see what will happen.’’

As we all moved back to were we where the machine began to do its work. The Weavile was still slamming and scratching the glass furiously, but luckily for us it wouldn’t budge an inch. The machine then launched a small white beam into the bowl like structure, and a small energy sphere was created. It caught the Weavile’s attention, and it growled ferociously. Within seconds the energy sphere transformed into Mesprit with its eyes closed, but not the normal one…

’’Mesprit, activate!’’

As I experienced a déjà vu of some sort, I watched as Mesprit’s crystal on its head turned a deep black colour again, and its eyes opened to reveal its eyes which were shining in a dark blue energy. Not before long the crystal on Mesprit’s head began to surge with energy, and a dark energy was emitted from Mesprit’s eyes and mouth as it gained strength. Afterwards Mesprit’s eyes were covered in pitch black energy, and it appeared to be ready for battle.

’’Well then… Begin!’’

Mesprit darted forwards with incredible speed, but the Weavile was quick to react… Unimaginable quick…! Mesprit had just started to fly towards the Weavile and it already moved into a totally different direction… It was almost as if it knew beforehand what happened…!

’’W-Wow…! I didn’t know Mesprit possessed such powers…’’
’’What are you mumbling Chris…? You should look at the Weavile! You fool!’’
’’Y-Yes sir…!’’

The Weavile roared in agony, and both of its claws began to shine in a black colour.

’’Now, pay close attention to the Weavile… This is why I want it under my control…!’’

Holding our breath we looked concentrated at the Weavile, which let out yet another roar before moving into action. In front of our eyes the Weavile darted towards Mesprit with untraceable speed, but there was more…! Using the dark energy the Weavile used a night slash attack, but it immediately disappeared from sight, only to re-appear behind the struck Mesprit, hitting it again and again from behind with multiple night slash attacks… Each time Mesprit tried to turn and confront the Weavile face to face the Weavile would simply warp away again before re-appearing at Mesprit’s back…

’’W-What the…?!’’

Chris mumbled shocked, as we all looked at how the Weavile mercilessly butchered Mesprit while leaving not a single opening to be attacked. Cyrus was the one to pull us out of our shock though…

’’Well then, now it’s only a matter of time…’’
’’What do you mean…?’’ I asked surprised.
’’You’ve seen nothing yet… That Weavile is only warming up…!’’
’’I-Impossible…!’’

[end chapter 04]
 
Well well well... this IS still going :D

Hmm, that Weavile is certainly wicked. 50 poké dollars says that it's going to use Apocalypse/Hades thing in the next chapter! D:

Funny how Mesprit is the one to be chosen by Chris...

BTW, there's a "cellar" where you want "cellular"... cellular structure :)

Other than that, good to see you writing again man! :D
 
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