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EVENTUALLY ILL BE GETTING THE FIRST CHAPTER IN


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Chapter one: a strange world


In a strange world inhabited by creatures named pokemon darkness has arisen strange pokemon that have been turned to darkness have been sighted.
Apparently these pokemon have been seen before.
A man named Eagun living in the agate village, his granddaughter Cindy, long ago Team Snagem member Wes, professor Krane, and Micheal an assitant of professor Krane.
They all went through long experiences with what they call "Shadow Pokemon".Eagun seems to know a lot about it after going throught the experience twice.
Now time for the adventure to begin.
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The adventure starts with a boy named Steven and his neighbor Trayvon. They were out back of Trayvon?s house on his trampoline playing basketball wen suddenly:

Steven: Ahhhh what is that?
Trayvon: I don't know it looks like some sort of rift!
Both of them grabbed at the basketball net but Steven tripped overr something that the rift spit out and Steven got sucked into the rift.
Trayvon: What just happened where'd Steven go?
He walked toward what tripped Steven, picked it up, looked at it and realized.
Trayvon:This is a Pokeball like from the games!!!


TO BE CONTINUED


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CAN U TELL SOME PEOPLE ABOUT MINE THEYLL NEVER FIND IT UTHERWISE

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chapter 2: old freinds and a new world

So as Steven fell into the unknown world to him he was a scared as he could be. He didn’t know what was going on he go sucked into a rift that people didn’t think was possible to open.

Steven: What’s going on! This isn’t even possible what’s happening?

He suddenly got spit out of the sky and landed painfully on the ground.

*********************Back on Earth *********************

Trayvon: oh my god he’s gone
He realized that someone was watching, it was two of Steven’s friends AJ and Summer.
They saw the whole thing.
AJ: What happened?!
Trayvon: I don’t know.
Summer grabbed the pokeball from him and saw the button
Summer: Maybe there’s Something in here that can help.
Trayvon: No! don’t
She pressed the button and the rift suddenly reopened AJ and Summer got pulled in but Trayvon held onto the basketball net, but unfortunatly the pokeball got sucked in with Summer and AJ

**********In the pokemon world three days later**************

Steven: It’s been three days and nothings happened…
Suddenly the rift reopened and summer and AJ fell out .
Steven: Summer? AJ?
AJ: What happened?
Summer: Where are we?
Steven: I’m geussin the pokemon world
AJ: Like in the games that cant be true!
Steven: It is check these out
Steven showed them pokeballs on his belt
???:He’s right this is the pokemon world.
Summer: Who are you?
???:That doesn’t matter but I was the one that brought you here
Steven whispers to himself: what…?

TO BE CONTINUED


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Chapter 3: The truth and a discovery

Summer: You were the one who brought us here?!
???: Yes
AJ: why?
???: because the world is in danger
Summer: So what do we do about that it's not our problem!
???:Yes it is if our world falls then so will yours
Steven: that isn't possible our worlds aren't linked
???: then how'd you get here?
Steven:...
???:exactly, here I want you to take these
Summer: poketches?
???:I modified them they are now snagem machines too
AJ: you mean like for shadow pokemon?
???: yes
Steven: Why'd you give us extras?
???: because two more people are coming.
***********************back on Earth***************************
Andrew: So they just got sucked into a rift that randomly opened
Trayvon: Ya
Sarah: That's impossible
Trayvon: but it did happen how else did they all disappear?
Andrew: I...don't know.
Sarah: There's gotta be some reason
Trayvon: It's true though!
Andrew: The only way we can be sure is to analyze something that came from the rift is there anything that got spat out of the rift?
Trayvon: yes there was a pokeball
Sarah: what? But those don't exist there only in games
Trayvon: there was though, but it got pulled in when Summer and AJ got pulled in.
Andrew: how did the rift open again?
Trayvon: When summer opened the pokeball. Why?
Sarah: Then its almost like the pokeball was ment to pull them in?
Andrew: That's it! It was designed to pull them in but I think it was meant to be analyzed so then it would pull alot of us in!
Sarah & Trayvon: OF COURSE!

TO BE CONTINUED


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I AM NOT CURRENTLY ACEPTING CHARACTERS
 
probably three im not acepting characters until season 2 which takes place five years later wen all new characters come in and the current characters role is finished


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Chapter four: A new decision and a breakthrough

Andrew: so it’s almost as if they wanted us to come to the pokemon world
Sarah: did anything fall out of the pokeball wen Summer opened it?
Trayvon: ummm I think somethink like a piece of paper fe…..
Andrew: …like a note to explain what happened to us.
Trayvon: ya that makes sense
Sarah: We have to find it.
*****************in the pokemon world********************

???: there’s a man named Professor Mitchum who lives not far away from here he will give you a pokemon to help
AJ: we aren’t duin this
???: YOU HAVE NO CHOICE!
AJ: look we aren’t going to du something just beca….
Steven: we have to
AJ: what…?
Steven: I’ve always wanted to do something exciting in my life and now I can I can save the world and I don’t care if you guys don’t want to help im going
Summer: he’s right
AJ: wha…?
Steven: you heard him if this world falls so does ours
AJ: well ya but can’t we find someone else to do this?
Steven: AJ don’t you understand! If we don’t help then we don’t go back to our world
AJ: I…well…ok I’ll help too but after this you have to send us back after ok?
???: ya of course
***********************on earth***********************
Trayvon: look here it is the note from the pokeball
note :To whoever finds this note Steven and however many other people are missing have been brought to the pokemon world they will be returning soon
Andrew we have to scan the note if we can establish communication with where it came from and bring them back
Sarah: wait the note says they were brought to the pokemon world if there is a note there was a purpose they were brought to the pokemon world.
Andrew: we have to scan it now!

TO BE CONTINUED

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I am not acepting characters until season 2
 
Chapter 5: You and me and Pokemon

Andrew: We have to scan this right away
Sarah what good is it going to do?
Andrew: I’ve been doing some experimenting with rifts opening and closing them I should be able to open this portal to the pokemon world long enough so that we can get in find them and get out
Trayvon: so how do you open the rift?
Andrew: I have a special device that lets me break through the barrier of time and space all I needed was a sample from the place I wanted to go
Trayvon: How is that even possible?
Andrew: …that’s…not a question for right now
Sarah: he’s right
******************************meanwhile**********************
Steven: We should head to professor Mitchum now
AJ: istill don’t want to do this but okay
Summer: I don’t get it its been like a week here but my normal watch says its only been like 48 hours
AJ: I’m guessing time moves faster here which is a good thing for us so if we get this over with fast we won’t have been gone as long
Steven: ya he’s probably right
Summer: how far is the lab from here?
Steven: not that far apparently probably another hour in this world’s time
AJ: well that’s still annoying
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AJ: so this is the lab?
Steven: ya
Summer: Prof. Mitchum are you here?
Mitchum: yes what is it you want….those are modified poketches so you three must be the heroes
Summer: apparently
Mitchum: well you three caan choose from these three pokemon
Steven: I guess I’ll take tyrogue
AJ: I want sneasel
Summer: I’ll take the chingling then
***************************back on Earth***********************
Andrew: I got it opened!
*The door opens* Sarah: Nathan careful!
He trips and falls in
Trayvon: I’m not missing my chance! *He jumps in*
Sarah: c’mon andrew
Andrew no I’ll stay behind to monitor you take this *gives sarah a communicator
Andrew: stay safe *Sarah jumps in*


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Chapter 6: The Battle Begins
So as Trayvon, Nathan, and Sarah fell through the portal they felt like they saw a split in the portal trayvon fell through the left way while Sarah and Nathan fell through the right side when suddenly a rift opened in the sky over Steven AJ and Summer
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Steven: What the heck?
Sarah: Ahhhhhhh!
Nate: help!
Summer: huh?
*Thump*
AJ: ouch
Steven: that hurt
Sarah: Summer?
Steven: Nate?
AJ: How did you guys get here?
Nate: Andrew opened the portal
Summer: where is Andrew then?
Sarah: he stayed behind wait wheres trayvon?
Steven: he came too?
Nate: ya but we don’t know what happened to him
Sarah: oh no the communicator Andrew gave us smashed
Nate: so we’re stuck here?
Sarah: I guess s…
???: don’t move
???: we’re taking the old guy
Mitchum: help
??? Go cubone
AJ: my poketch is responding
Mitchum: AJ only yours is responding you have to capture it send out your sneasel and battle!
AJ: ok go sneasel!
???: cubone bone club
AJ: counter with slash
AJ: now use ice shard
Mitchum: ok its weak now scan it with that poketch and press enter!
AJ: got it now go snag ball!
The pokeball flies at cubone and captures it
AJ: I got cubone!

TO BE CONTINUED

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