Writing PokeBeach: Cold-blooded ~Chappie 3 is now up!!!!~

Should I keep going with this story?

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Typical Bob, yelling at me to do something.
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I AM NOT ALWAYS YELLING AT YOU TO DO THINGS!!! D:

Jk. Thanks for putting me in! I thought it was a little short though. Oh well. Other then that, good job! Make it longer next time though! >:OOO

(I need to stop yelling at you... XP)
 
Juliacoolo said:
Good chapter. I thought Zyflair was a girl though... Can't wait to see more.
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Ha! I have proof Zyflair isn't a girl! XP

Thanks for the coments guys! Everyone who asked to be in the story, don't worry, I'll try to fit ya in! But you mostly likely won't be in the next few chappies, but y'all be in.
 
Twilight ShayminLvr said:
Ha! I have proof Zyflair isn't a girl! XP

Thanks for the coments guys! Everyone who asked to be in the story, don't worry, I'll try to fit ya in! But you mostly likely won't be in the next few chappies, but y'all be in.
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That's quite a bit disturbing. As for chapter four, I have some suggestions if you are willing to take them.
 
I'm not that well known, but can I be in?
Great chapter by the way. Cliffhanging is a good skill.
 
Juliacoolo said:
That's quite a bit disturbing. As for chapter four, I have some suggestions if you are willing to take them.
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I know. I must sound like a stalker XP Nah, just a friend.

And I already said I was taking any suggestions. ;]
 
Sure sonicyellow ^-^ Glad you guys still suport this (werid, crazy, blood) story! xP
Chappie 4 should be up this weekend!
 
I think there should be a traitor that becomes a mod. It would of been perfect if you started this right before Zyflair went enviromental. I'll PM you some more ideas. I'm looking forward to CHP.4!
 
This story is great! I'm hooked! I can find no more grammar problems than others already did.

......I want to be in the story!!! :D
 
Trying to get the next chappie up as soon as I can. It's about half way done and I just keep forgeting to finish...It'll most likely be up by the end of the week.
 
Try not to shove all the people saying 'I wanna be in!' into your story straight away. It'll make it look a little messy and cluttered.
Best to just add characters in very gradually, or just small appearances from characters.

Just try not to have too many people at once. =p
 
Twilight ShayminLvr said:
I just keep forgeting to finish...
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What? Does your head hurt? >=)

The mood of this work is great. It's hardly romanticized in anyway and not exaggerated (as I've known a particular writer to do, no offense). Keep writing as you normally do and don't rush. WE all can wait for a masterpiece (to be more truthful, we HAVE to!).

Go for it.
 
Zyflair said:
What? Does your head hurt? >=)

The mood of this work is great. It's hardly romanticized in anyway and not exaggerated (as I've known a particular writer to do, no offense). Keep writing as you normally do and don't rush. WE all can wait for a masterpiece (to be more truthful, we HAVE to!).

Go for it.
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Your not talking about me, right?

I dont let people who ask be in my story, you have to earn that right lol. Anyways, great story, love it. Keep it up
 
Copying this straight from DeviantART.

"Working on the next Chapter of Cold-Blooded guys, just have a tiny case of writer's block..."

So in other words, I'm still working on chappie 4.
 
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