Pokemon Black 2 & White 2

[Kyurem]

This is another new template, this inparticular one is the Updated version of one I had up earlier

I added some holo to the template, but that's it (All of my SP and EX will have these holo's the holo's will only vary on EX)
Then there is the Suicune EX, in case you didn't know the two unknown on the template are Unknown "E" and Unknown "X" this reads EX obviously, so like my other templates, it's a lot different than real cards.

So please tell me what you think!

 

[Zygarde]

RE: EX Rivalries fake TCG set

Nice, cool blanks, but you should definetely credit Nekoban Ryo for the glass energy symbols. Also, I noticed you're building up a faking resource page. You should get in touch with aschefield101, as he also has a page of his own. You may want to post your blanks there.

 

[Kyurem]

RE: EX Rivalries fake TCG set

Nice, cool blanks, but you should definetely credit Nekoban Ryo for the glass energy symbols. Also, I noticed you're building up a faking resource page. You should get in touch with aschefield101, as he also has a page of his own. You may want to post your blanks there.

I know Aschefield from DA, I got the glass ernergy symbols from Pokemoncardresources.deviantart.com and I'm pretty sure I credited him in the description(However I will check!) and thanks! I was working on my own energy symbols but lost track of time, I have A LOT of school work to do, and I'm sick so this hasn't been a great week for me. And yeah that might be a good idea, I'll see what I can do!

 

[Zygarde]

RE: EX Rivalries fake TCG set

That's fine,then. Welcome to the 'Beach! I might try your blanks later today

 

[Kyurem]

RE: EX Rivalries fake TCG set

That's fine,then. Welcome to the 'Beach! I might try your blanks later today

Cool thanks, My next ones will be a lot better

 

[aschefield101]

RE: EX Rivalries fake TCG set

Custom blanks! We like!

 

[Xous]

RE: EX Rivalries fake TCG set

Here are my views on the card:

As far as text is concerned, the way it's arranged looks nice. I'm used to everything being set to the left so at first I didn't like the attacks being centered with the effects set to the left, but after looking at it more it looks alright. I think the + symbol in the first attack's base damage would look better bold (or if it is bold already, then more bold) since it would stand out more. I don't really like the placement of the Retreat Cost area (and it looks like it says "Restreat"?), but since it doesn't have any cost there it's hard to judge if that would look right. If the Weaknesses can stack (like a Water Fighting x2) in the Weakness area then the placement of the Retreat is definitely good.

I'm a fan of cards with darker borders, but the border here looks too flat with so many other parts of the card being so well textured. (Then again, I'm not a huge fan of real cards having those pure yellow borders, so it's most likely me.) With there being so much going on with the rest of the card texture-wise, I think having a Galactic-style texture on the border would look nice.

Overall though, very nicely done! Looking forward to seeing more.

 

[Serperior]

RE: EX Rivalries fake TCG set

The cards are nice-looking, but my favorite part is the Energy symbol. They're so unique, especially with that glassy texture. Very nice.

 

[Kyurem]

RE: EX Rivalries fake TCG set

Here are my views on the card:

As far as text is concerned, the way it's arranged looks nice. I'm used to everything being set to the left so at first I didn't like the attacks being centered with the effects set to the left, but after looking at it more it looks alright. I think the + symbol in the first attack's base damage would look better bold (or if it is bold already, then more bold) since it would stand out more. I don't really like the placement of the Retreat Cost area (and it looks like it says "Restreat"?), but since it doesn't have any cost there it's hard to judge if that would look right. If the Weaknesses can stack (like a Water Fighting x2) in the Weakness area then the placement of the Retreat is definitely good.

I'm a fan of cards with darker borders, but the border here looks too flat with so many other parts of the card being so well textured. (Then again, I'm not a huge fan of real cards having those pure yellow borders, so it's most likely me.) With there being so much going on with the rest of the card texture-wise, I think having a Galactic-style texture on the border would look nice.

Overall though, very nicely done! Looking forward to seeing more.

Thank you! It won't be hard for me to do that still. I added (or tried to) that kind of effect on a new border I made (for a different set) and I think it turned out alright. I can definitely try and add those effects to the border, and I understand the dislike of the yellow border, it drives me crazy.

The cards are nice-looking, but my favorite part is the Energy symbol. They're so unique, especially with that glassy texture. Very nice.

of course I didn't make those lol.

EDIT: also it does say Restreat lol, sadly I do not have the time to fix this.

 

[Kyurem]

Black 2 & White 2 (A.K.A Team's Return)

Black 2 & White 2 (A.K.A Team's Return)
Ok so these aren't great either but I'm doing my best to develop new templates, I feel like I'm getting better but I'm not sure...This is a prerelease Rocket's Charizard, please tell me what you think.
Note: This set includes all teams: Team Rocket, Team Aqua, Team Magma, Team Galactic, Team Plasma.
http://www.pokemonspiral.com/uploads/2/8/7/8/2878856/7040182_orig.png

 

[King Arceus]

My only complaint is that the foil part that goes over the description of the attack is it makes it harder to read. Perhaps have it with less opacity or use a lighter color for that. Another minor thing is you put Back instead of Black in the lower right corner. Otherwise they look good.

 

[aschefield101]

bottom right "back & white" typo

 

[TheGuy]

I like the cards, the only thing is, your Charizard card has a Typhlosion foil on it, you might want to fix that.

 

[Kyurem]

My only complaint is that the foil part that goes over the description of the attack is it makes it harder to read. Perhaps have it with less opacity or use a lighter color for that. Another minor thing is you put Back instead of Black in the lower right corner. Otherwise they look good.

lol back 2 & white 2...fail thanks for pointing that out, and I did mean to change opacity but I forgot

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I like the cards, the only thing is, your Charizard card has a Typhlosion foil on it, you might want to fix that.

It's for all rocket cards, they will all have Tyhplosion lol.

 

[Pikachu!]

My only complaint id that it Says BACK AND WHITE 2 By waht i have read (sorry for caps)

 

[CMP]

Pikachu, please don't post in threads older than 2 weeks. Doing so is considered reviving a dead thread, and is a warnable offense. Thanks!

Here are my criticisms:

While sometimes using various fonts can add to a card style, in this case, the fonts don't mesh well enough. Namely the "Basic" and level fonts. I'm not sure what it is exactly, but they don't look like they belong with the rest of the card.

I would slightly lighten the black in the HP box, as it gets a little hard to read the HP at the bottom. Additionally (and this goes for the black-white gradient on Suicune as well), the border looks a little flat. There is usually some kind of shadow or glow to separate the type texture and the card border. Perhaps if this was added, the flatness problem could be alleviated.

Since you added the circles in the attack box, why not line up the Energy cost with them? It looks silly otherwise. The EX-era used them like that, so I'm not sure if I see the point of them otherwise.

As KA pointed out, I would lighten the foil a little bit as it makes the attack/power text hard to read. Also: why does Suicune have a Dragon-type resistance? Water doesn't resist Dragon in the games (nor should Charizard resist Darkness, though I suppose that could be a special case since it is a Rocket-owned Pokémon).