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Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Chaos Eternity


Ch. 1: The Contest

Blaze Top Village

Fire blazed around the whole battlefield. Little bubbles came from the top, and floated away.

"Finally, some fresh air" exclaimed the little Torchic. Footsteps were heard behind him.

"Huh? Is someone there?" shouted Torchic. But all that was heard were the little heat bubbles rising from the ground.

A shadow appeared from the lava. "Ahh! What is that?" shouted the scared Torchic. Torchic turned around, only to be grabbed by a mystic figure, and then taken away.

Emerald City

"Is everyone ready?" shouted the Grovyle. It was the pokemon contest day and people were anxious and couldn't wait until their turn and to find out their opponent. "Begin!"

The two pokemon, Blaziken and Garchomp fought it out till the very end! "Blazing Tornado!" shouted Blaziken. Fire shrouded Blaziken in a Hurricane form and hit Garchomp straight into the judges table. But this wasn't over.

"I'll get you for that! Take This!" shouted Garchomp. Garchomp used Dragon Rage. Garchomp first jumped into the air and gabbed onto Blaziken, first mistake. Blaziken quickly used Counter and got out of Garchomp's hold, giving him the upper hand!

"Final Destination Flames!" exclaimed Blaziken. Fire burned in his eyes. But why? Blaziken pointed his palm at Garchomp, who was lying down on the floor, too hurt to get up.

A little flame ball appeared in Blaziken's hand, seemed harmless. "Die!" shouted Blaziken.
The ball hit Garchomp making it fly right through the ceiling of the building and then and explosion of fire hit Garchomp outside, not harming anyone inside, meaning it was legal for the contest.

"We have our winner!" shouted Grovyle as he walked over to Blaziken holding a trophy.

"Is this, for me?" asked Blaziken. Grovyle nodded and Blaziken quickly snatched it out of his hand. "Why are you so proud? You won this trophy 3 years in a row now" said Grovyle. Blaziken gave a mean look.
Grovyle quickly glided out of the contest hall after picking up his pay check for the contest. Blaziken gave his thank you to everyone, and left the building.

Seaburn Town

He walked home only to find his house burned down and one little paper right under his feet.

"The Shadow Elite" mumbled Blaziken as he started walking, passing his
house.​


Please comment and tell me if it is good or not? It isn't exactly Mystery Dungeon, but its along those lines.​


Ch. 2: The Past

Alley

The little Torchic was grabbed and thrown into an alley where 6 Pokemon met together. The Shadow Elite.

“Get off of me!” shouted Torchic! A burning blaze aura surrounded his small, but ferocious body.

Shadow Peak

“Keep him down. Get him to the base” said a shadowy figure. Torchic fainted, only to wake up in a small room with no light.

At first, Torchic thought they were crazy, but after 3 days in the tiny room without food, water, or light, he got used to it.

Then, the door opened. 2 creatures appeared in front of Torchic. One was a Dark Dog, the other a somewhat of a Dinosaur figure. Torchic could not really see well.

The grabbed him from the back and threw him in front of the master. The master used some spell or ritual and gave Torchic so called, “Dark Energy.”

Torchic awoke in a room with another somewhat dog-like figure, on two feet. The dog had a Blade in his hand, he threw it to Torchic, and took out his own blade.

“Get up” commanded the dog. He came and attacked Torchic with the blade but Torchic quickly moved to the side and slashed the dog like figure. Torchic then kept on attacking as tears ran down his eyes.
“I’ll Kill You! My anger burns stronger than me! But my power burns stronger than my anger!” shouted Torchic. He then shot Embers out of his mouth. After Torchic opened his eyes, the whole place was on fire. All 6 Shadow Elites had escaped, leaving Torchic to die.

Even though Torchic was the apprentice, the Shadow Elite left him and would search for another protégé.

Another shadowy figure appeared in front of Torchic, though he was not the Shadow Elite. He was an abandoned apprentice who loved the place.

“Follow me” said the pokemon. It was a Houndour. Houndour walked on and looked back every once in a while to check on Torchic who was always right behind.

Finally, they got to a door. Houndoor opened the door and they both fell through a hole. Then they heard a giant explosion! The way back up was lost.

“It’s ok, come with me, I’ll find a way back up” said Houndoor. Houndour dug a hole through the ground and they got out safely, and the whole town was safe too.

“For a second I thought we were goners” said Houndour as he sat down to take a deep breath.

“What is going on? Where is my family?” asked Torchic.
Houndour sighed and took a deep breath. “The Shadow Elite pick a pokemon for an apprentice, and then kill anyone related to them so they won’t come to save them” said Houndour as a tear crossed his face.
“Mommy? Daddy? Gone?” said Torchic as more tears flowed down his eyes.

Houndour picked him up and took him to their hut to care for as another family member.

4 Years have passed and Houndour and Torchic trained heavily together. But Torchic was no longer a Torchic and Houndour was no longer a Houndour. They were Combusken and Houndoom!

“Hey, let’s go out to get some berries, I’m a bit hungry” said Combusken. Combusken took on step out to the forest and bumped into a big opponent.

“You’re not going anywhere!” shouted the pokemon. It was a Feraligatr. His teeth crunched and his teeth were as sharp s a dagger.

Feraligatr slashed Combusken to the ground and hurried into town, though stopped by Houndoom.

“Stop right now! Flamethrower!” shouted Houndoom. “Hydro Pump!” shouted Feraligatr as a the two attacks slammed into each other. The forces of the two attacks were almost equal, but Feraligatr was winning.
Houndoom flew back and lay down for rest. As Feraligatr passed by Houndoom, he stepped on him, knocking Houndoom out. Feraligatr advanced to the rest of the town and killed every living creature.
Houndoom and Combusken got up at the same time and saw Feraligatr heading their way. “Feraligatr! I’ll kill you!” shouted Houndoom. Fire burned in Houndoom’s eyes. Houndoom lunged forward and blasted a Fire Blast attack, but Feraligatr walked right through it.

“Geez, you guys are still alive? Silver Slash!” shouted Feraligatr. Feraligatr’s claws became bright and silver, and Feraligatr slashed Houndoom to his death.

Combusken walked over to Houndoom. “Houndoom! Houndoom!” cried out Combusken. “Defeat him. I know you can. Gain honor for this town” said Houndoom as his last words before he fell under the effects of the sinister Feraligatr.

“Feraligatr!!!” shouted Combusken. Flames shot through the ground and swirled around Combusken. His eyes burned with power. “I’ll kill you!” shouted Combusken. Fire shrouded his powerful body and a flash of light crossed Feraligatr’s eyes. The new Combusken was now…a Blaziken.
“I’ll Kill You!” shouted Blaziken. He lunged forward at Feraligatr and punched him in the stomach and threw him up into the air. “You’ll pay for everything you’ve done! You’ll Pay!” shouted Blaziken. A giant energy fire ball was gathering in Blaziken’s hand. Feraligatr was lying down on the floor unable to get up. “Die!!!” shouted Blaziken. The attack made Feraligatr fly up into the air and a giant flame explosion defeated Feraligatr in one strike.

“Honor is regained” said Blaziken as he walked away from the burning village.

The first chapter was aligned to the center, but the second and the rest won't be. I hope it won't be too confusing, sorry.

Ch. 3: The Past (Part 2)

Shadow Peak

Blaziken sensed the Shadow Elite’s new base. “That had to be a Shadow Elite” thought Blaziken as he picked up a strong power level from a far region.

Shadow Elite Base 2

Fire burned around him as he flew towards his destination. He landed in front of the huge building covered in darkness. He entered the double doors and eye-balled the Lucario.

“Who are you? Get out or we’ll make you” said Lucario.

“You don’t remember me, do you? It’s only been 4 years. Maybe this’ll refresh your memory. Torchic?” said Blaziken. Lucario’s eyes widened.
“So, you didn’t die? How did you survive?” asked Lucario.

“A friend” mumbled Blaziken. He stepped closer, and Lucario stepped back. “You’re afraid, aren’t you?” said Blaziken. “Me? No way!” said Lucario. “Then why did you step back” said Blaziken. Lucario was silent.
“I’ll destroy you!” shouted Lucario. He lunged forward for a punch, but only to miss but Blaziken’s quick agility. Blaziken moved Lucario’s hand out of the way, grabbed it, and threw him onto the ground.

“Come on, that can’t be all you’ve got?” taunted Blaziken. Lucario lunged with another punch, but Blaziken dodged it, or did he?

Lucario appeared behind Blaziken without Blaziken even knowing. Lucario used Mega Punch at Blaziken sending him backwards. “Aura Sphere!” exclaimed Lucario. A blast came out of Lucario’s hand and hit Blaziken right on!

“Wow? Is that all you’ve got?” copied Lucario. Blaziken blasted a Flamethrower but missed. Lucario had jumped to the side and countered with another Aura Sphere sending Blaziken flying backwards!

“Looks like I’m underestimated you” said Blaziken. Blaziken Sky Uppercutted Lucario with extremely quick speed but Lucario gained his balance and shot an Aura Sphere, but at the same time Blaziken shot a Flame Sphere from his hand. The two attacks collided, but they stopped each other in mid-air. Lucario’s and Blaziken’s power were equal!

“Well, looks like we just have to raise our power level until one fades out” said Blaziken. Blaziken powered up his Sphere to his full extent and just blasted all his power at Lucario. Lucario wasn’t ready for this because he thought Blaziken would raise his power gradually. Lucario flew to the ground and was badly hurt.

A metal piece was hanging on his ear and he spoke into it. “Evacuate, I’ll finish this scum off” said Lucario. There were four noises heard from outside and the Shadow Elite’s were gone.

“Final Sphere!” shouted Lucario. A giant Aura Sphere flew out of Lucario’s hand and Blaziken could barely stop it. He was holding back his power, and he knew there was only one way to overcome this great force he was trying to stop. “Final Heat Sphere!” shouted Blaziken. Blaziken also blasted a giant sphere at Lucario and the two attacks collided, again.

“Ughh! I’ll kill you!” shouted Lucario. He lunged all his power into his attack, but it wasn’t enough! “It can’t be, you’re a-“ Lucario was stopped when Blaziken used all his force and won the battle. There was a huge explosion that impacted both Blaziken and Lucario. Lucario flew back and crashed into the all, and died. But Blaziken was just pushed back a bit from the force of the explosion.

“Well, two down, four more to go” said Blaziken as he wiped his hands and stepped out of the building. Then the building blew up right behind him. “So, he plotted to blow me up? Well, I guess I was lucky” said Blaziken as he left the burning building.

He then tried to sense where the other Shadow Elite’s were, but he couldn’t. “Ughh, where could they be?” wondered Blaziken. He walked over to the burning building again and scavenged inside and found a piece of paper. “Siamese Falls” the note wrote. Blaziken flew towards the place and he knew it very well. He was born there.

Siamese Falls

“So, they are here somewhere” said Blaziken as he glanced around the area. He sensed a great power where an old man was standing. “A Human?” said Blaziken in shock. The man had glasses on, he was probably blind.

Though the blind man looked over at Blaziken and took his glasses off and his glasses pointed to a mysterious shop. Blaziken entered the shop and saw 3 pokemon. Dragonite, Tyranitar, and Salamence.
“Party’s over” said Blaziken. But then the shadows faded away. “Huh?” wondered Blaziken.

“I need to get away. I have to go live a normal life. I’ll get them when the time comes” said Blaziken as he remembered a place on a map.

“Emerald City” he said as he flew there.


Ch. 4: Master of the Shadows

Seaburn Town

Blaziken walked away from his burning house, and just as he passed his neighbors, a small pokmon came out. It was a small Electrike. He was the son of Blaziken’s neighbors.

“I’ll miss you” Blaziken said as he patted Electrike’s head.
He finally got to the end of Seaburn Town, and he was face to face with the Eternal Forest. He entered without fear.

Eternal Forest

There were small patches of grass and bushes and huge trees. The trees blocked out most of the sunlight, but there were small fragments of light here and there.

Blaziken sighed, he looked around and saw nothing but green. Then a shadow flashed through the trees. “Who’s there?” Blaziken said in a low voice.

“Don’t be alarmed. It’s just me, an Alakazam” Alakazam said as he popped out of the bushes. He had a hearty smile on his face and looked somewhat old.

“What do you want from me?” Blaziken asked. “Blaziken, why don’t you tell me your name? Your name can’t be Blaziken” the Alakazam said, keeping a smile after every word.

“Why would I tell a stranger like you?” Blaziken said as he made a fist, ready to attack the Alakazam. “Because your worst enemies might be your only friends. My name is Kyzan. I used to live in the big city and train many pokemon to reach their full potential. Only 6 of my students really achieved their strongest. But now, they are pure evil” Kyzan finished.
“My name is Shin. That is short for my full name, Shinato” Shin said. “I bet I’ve learned more about you than anyone else in the world. You see, you wouldn’t have told me your name if you didn’t trust me, Shin. Your destiny is to follow in my footsteps” Kyzan said.

Then Shin realized it. He realized everything, this was no ordinary Alakazam. He trained the Shadow Elite!

“You’ve trained the Shadow Elite! If it wasn’t for you, my whole family and my best friend would still be alive today! This is all your fault!” shouted Shin. A fireball was beginning to appear in his hand.

“This would never have happened!” Shin shot the fireball at Alakazam, but Alakazam just flinged it away with his Psychic spoons. “If you plan to beat the Shadow Elite with that, you’ve got a long way to go” Kyzan said.

Anger fluttered through Shin’s mind. “This man is getting on my nerves” he thought. “Are you ready to begin your training?” Kyzan asked. “Training? Training for what?” Shin asked.

“You catch on very slowly, I see. We didn’t meet randomly, I saw the future and saw where you were headed so I caught you here. I will train you to defeat the Shadow Elite” he said as he walked closer to a tree.

“I already killed 2 of the Shadow Elites! I think I can handle them myself” Shin said. “You killed the #6 Rank and #5 Rank! The weakest there are! If you plan to defeat their leader, I suggest you work with me” Kyzan said.

Shin was even more angered by this guy’s attitude, but he calmed down. “The Shadow Elite are very tough; don’t mess with them if you can’t beat them” Kyzan said. He walked over to a tree and it had symbols that could only be read by true warriors.

“What’s all this gibberish” Shin whined. “This is no Gibberish my boy, this is the symbols of a true warrior! You seem quite tense when looking at those letters, are you alright?” asked Kyzan.

Shin became really dizzy, and his whole mind was not ready for such things to take in. “It can’t be! They have given you Dark Energy! There is no controlling this anger you have. You are truly a warrior, but if you get too much out of hand, you could destroy the whole world yourself!” Kyzan said in fear.

A Dark Pulse attack was shot out of Shin’s body sending Kyzan backwards! Kyzan trembled in fear from all the dark energy surrounding and shrouding Shin. “No, no! This is all wrong! This isn’t how it’s supposed to end! This is not how I prophesized!” shouted Kyzan. Another Dark Pulse attack with more power was shot out of Shin and hit Kyzan straight into the tree with symbols.

“Spare me” Kyzan hoped Shin would snap out of it soon enough. “There is only one way to stop this! Master of the Shadows! Appear!” Kyzan shouted. A big, dark, shadowy dragon came from the sky and landed in the distress call.

“What is it Kyzan?” asked Giratina. “It’s Shin. He is a-“ Kyzan was stopped when another Dark Pulse with more power than the others combined hit both Giratina and Kyzan. Kyzan flew backwards and was finally knocked out.

Giratina fired a Water Pulse attack and it hit Shin, but did nothing. Dark Energy completely took over him. There was no escaping Shin’s wrath. He was mad with power!

Shin walked over to Giratina and grabbed him by the neck and blasted him into the sky! “Die!!!” Shin had a flame like ball in his hand and blasted it at Giratina. Giratina flew into the sky and there was a large explosion, then Giratina’s body dropped to the ground.
“What a shame” Shin said as he disappeared.

A few hours later, Kyzan awoke and saw Giratina awake, in huge pain. He healed him with his Recover attack, he knew how to generate the power and give it to others. Giratina got up, still very weak.

“H-He has to be stopped!” shouted Giratina. “Sir, he’ll head straight for the Shadow Elite! He’ll completely wipe them out! Sir, after that, he’ll destroy the whole world!” Kyzan said with a worried tone.

“Kyzan, remember back in the old days, how we saved the world. We are now re-awakened. We’ve been given another chance. We have to stop him before he reaches Mt. Kytis! If he gets there, the whole world will reach havoc!” said Giratina.

Giratina grabbed Kyzan and flew to his Sky Pillar, it used to be Rayquaza’s home, but Rayquaza left for his missions. “We’ll plan here. Kyzan, don’t worry, the world will be OK”


Ch. 5: The Symbolized Sword

Sky Pillar


Flames were all around Giratina's Sky Pillar. "Sir, are you sure this is a good place to stay?" Kyzan asked. "Nobody can come here, it is the safest place in the world" Giratina replied.

Kyzan looked around the Sky Pillar and noticed a dark, shaded area. "Giratina?" Kyzan called. Giratina examined the shadow mark, and his eyes widened. "Run. Run!!!" Giratina screamed.

Kyzan teleported out of the Pillar and looked up at the sky. There was a huge shadow bomb that exploded and there was no sign of Giratina.

"This isn't good. This is really bad” Kyzan thought. The Giratina's head fell from the sky and splattered on the ground next to Kyzan.

Kyzan shook in fear. "No, I have to stop him, or else the symbols will activate!" he shouted. Then a giant explosion was heard from afar. It sounded like an Atom Bomb!

"It has to be him" Kyzan mumbled. He flew towards the place. It was a wasteland. He looked around but all he could see was dust. Then there was another explosion nearby and he appeared a second after it.

The dust flew in his face but he could see. He sensed a strong energy, but not Shin. "Hello, master" a voice said. A pokemon with a long tail appeared in front of him.

"Mewtwo" Kyzan trembled in fear. "Yes, and it seems like we have to team up to defeat this, monster if I may say" Mewtwo replied.
"Why would I help you?" Kyzan said. "It's either that, or you die" Mewtwo said.

Then Shin appeared in front of both of them. "Finally, we meet face to face" Mewtwo said with a smirk. Shin took out a sword, with symbols. When Mewtwo saw the symbols, the words started to shine and they translated into English.

It wrote, "The Sword of the True Legendary Pokemon."

"This is not possible! You can't be a legendary pokemon, unless, unless you are the strongest pokemon in the world!" Kyzan shouted. "Stop this stupid mumbling, I'll crush you here and now!" Mewtwo shouted.

Shin lunged at Z with the sword, but he merely pushed him out of the way. "By the way, my name is Z. One letter and that's it. Psychic!" Z shouted.

The blast hit Shin, but did nothing whatsoever. "I've had enough of you!!!" Shin shouted. His dark energy became even stronger and the darkness was very very visible.

"Shine Blade!" Shin shouted. The dark energy disappeared and then fire took over. He flew at Z and slashed his sword 20 times, and after every cut there was a single ember flame inserted into Z's body.

Shin slammed him into the air with his sword and then punctured the sword into his chest. He then slammed him into the ground, with the sword still in Z's body.

As Z was lying on the ground, and Shin on his knees holding the sword, fire swirled around Shin. His own flame cut him on the side of the chin and there was a half an X.

The fire swirled even stronger around him. "Gahhh!!!" Shin shouted as his swirling fire expanded and exploded to all sides around him. The expansion of the attack kept moving forward until it stopped at about one mile.

The fire had struck Kyzan, who couldn't get away in time. He did not see it coming.

Z, whose body was singed from the explosion, he was still alive, though. "You don't deserve this dark energy" he said. Z touched his forehead and all the shadow energy was taken away from him.

Then Shin who was still out of control took the sword out of Z's body. "You killed so many people, now I take your life!" Shin shouted.

Shin jumped up into the air and slashed the sword in the air and a fire slash came out of the sword. It crashed into Z and Z burned to ashes.

"It's finally over" Shin said as he fell to the ground, unconscious.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1 is up)

This is looking good, PokeLen! One quick question, does this mean you'll quit the other one? That's a good fanfic, too.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1 is up)

Well, I'm not really sure. This fanfic will be updated more often rather than the other one. I am still working on the next chapter for the other one. I just am trying to mix comedy with action. I want them to merge...and it's not working well. I keep re-doing the chapter. Once I get it good, I'll put it up. For this fanfic, I have things all planned out. If I could put spoiler buttons and stuff, I would, but I dont know how to...

Oh well...I'll give you a sneak preview of the next chapter's name. It's called the past and it will be all about Blaziken's past. It will have two parts and I'm working on part 2 right now. Part 1 is already finished. It's actually very cool, and then you'll know almost everyone in the Shadow Elite. Part 1 is a bit deceiving. Well, thats a bit too much right there...anyways, thanks for the complement. I promise the fanfic will be better than anything I've ever written before.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1 is up)

PokeLen said:
Well, I'm not really sure. This fanfic will be updated more often rather than the other one. I am still working on the next chapter for the other one. I just am trying to mix comedy with action. I want them to merge...and it's not working well. I keep re-doing the chapter. Once I get it good, I'll put it up. For this fanfic, I have things all planned out. If I could put spoiler buttons and stuff, I would, but I dont know how to...

Oh well...I'll give you a sneak preview of the next chapter's name. It's called the past and it will be all about Blaziken's past. It will have two parts and I'm working on part 2 right now. Part 1 is already finished. It's actually very cool, and then you'll know almost everyone in the Shadow Elite. Part 1 is a bit deceiving. Well, thats a bit too much right there...anyways, thanks for the complement. I promise the fanfic will be better than anything I've ever written before.
It that's true, I'm sure this will be one of my favs. Can't wait for more:D:D
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1 is up)

Well, thank you. I still haven't had the chance to look at your fanfic. I'll read little by little.

If you've read my really old ones, those were the best. Well, I don't think you were at PokeBeach when Me, KBP (Shadow_Master), and Dragon Rider of PokeBeach ruled the fanfic era. We started it all up pretty much, and we all had about 3 fanfics at a time. My most successful one was...um...I can't remember it's name, but it had about 15 chapters at the end of the season. I also had a very successful Naruto Fanfic which was really popular and I have it saved on word. Back then, those were good times.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1 is up)

Please comment so I can put up Ch. 2. It will be amazing. Better than Ch. 1 in my opinion. Please comment and I promise if you tune into this fanfic, you won't regret it.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1 is up)

Hmm, it's pretty good. I can't wait to see how it will turn out. Once you post the next chapter could you please read my fan-fic? Click on the userbar in my sig.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1 is up)

I'll read it now. I have some free time...
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1 is up)

You might need quite a bit of free time if you want to read all of it so far. It's pretty darn long (believe it or not it's only about a third of the way through).
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1 is up)

I'll put Ch. 2 up right now. It is about Blaziken's past...I'll put it up now...
Alright, Ch. 2 is up. Please comment and everything, thank you very much!
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-2 are up)

Where is it?

EDIT: never mind, sorry. I'm just used to people posting it.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-2 are up)

Oh...that's ok. How is it then? I'll post Ch. 3 after DogMaster40 reads Ch. 2. I don't want to go too ahead without him.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-2 are up)

It's okay. It was a littlee wierd, but I don't exactly know what made it wierd, but the storyline is pretty good. I'm going to post chapter 9 in about an hour or so.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-2 are up)

Alright, thank you. Ch. 3 is still about Blaziken's past but Ch. 4, the one I am working on right now has lots of battling in it. Ch. 4 is called: The Shadow's Arrival! *SUSPENSE*

Alright, I might not be home in an hour, but I'll read it when I can.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-2 are up)

TBH, I don't know what to think here. Having not played Mystery Dungeon, I naturally can't link to that idea. But... I just can't pin what makes me so unsure of this, but something is definitely there... perhaps it's just the nature of the fic.

Sorry I can't comment too much further, but I really can't tell what it is about this that is causing the feeling of uncertainty... I'm sure there's potential there if you choose to make it work for you, so just keep at it :)
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-2 are up)

Its not Mystery Dungeon, it is a world where there are only a few humans and the rest are pokemon.

Blaziken is the main character and there is a human in Ch. 3 who will play a big role, later.

Well, this really doesn't have much to do with Mystery Dungeon, its just that Mystery Dungeon the whole world is with pokemon and same with my story. There aren't any pokemon teams like in Mystery Dungeon.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-2 are up)

Alright, next chapter updated.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-3 are up)

Good story. I see some things in this story that look like they were inspired from my story, which makes me kinda proud inside. It makes me wanna get back to writing my story.
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-3 are up)

Shadow Elite=Dark Six...i didnt copy it completely, but you gave me the idea.
 
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