Writing Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-5 are up)

RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-3 are up)

Ch. 4 will be put up right now. Just to tell you, there is a huge twist that you would not expect to happen. It might seem the the roles of the characters change, but they don't that much. And two new characters get introduced in this chapter. Well, I hope you'll enjoy it!
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-4 are up)

So...Shin's now the antagonist? Hmm...does that make Kyzan and Giratina the protagonist?
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-4 are up)

Well, you see. Everything is a blur right now. You see, in Ch. 5 that is already finished which I will post right now, it kind of goes back to normal and it seems like an end to the "season" but some even more crazy will happen at Ch. 6 to distort everything back again!

(Well, did you at least like the chapter, or did you not like it?)
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-4 are up)

It's intriguing... you have a fair level of detail in terms of the characters in there, although sometimes maybe not enough about the areas around them. Sometimes it's nice to know about where people and events are, yes?

It seems pretty cool though, so keep at it! :)
 
RE: Pokemon Chaos Eternity (Ch. 1-4 are up)

Like for example...: The dusty plain road ahead of Shin was covered with little shrubs. The sky was covered with the night stars, so close to him, but so far away at the same time. He lay down on the hard and cold covered ground.

Was that better? Of course that is just a random statement, but is that what you meant? More descriptive?

(Also, Ch. 5 is up, take a good look at it. It isn't very long like my other chapters)
 
My whole computer reset and I lost all my work! I lost Ch. 6 that I had saved also! Thankfully, Ch. 1-5 are here so I just copy and pasted it and saved! But I lost Ch. 6 and also a project I was working on for school! This really annoyed me! Ch. 6 might be on later tomorrow on in 2 days. I'm sorry, but my computer is an idiot and like, killed itself and came back to life with no memory of its past life!

(I am just really angry now...!)
 
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