Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *Looking for programmer* *Region Map is Done!*

What do you think of Granite and Cumulus?

  • It's doing great!

    Votes: 21 27.3%
  • It's good, but needs more work

    Votes: 38 49.4%
  • It's really bad. Little cooperation

    Votes: 18 23.4%

  • Total voters
    77
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus

Now we wait for the moment of truth,to see if It was worth me making a map on paint or should I release the angry Castform army?
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus

Hey guys, I just got to a scanner, and I have more artwork!! Here it is, I'll try to post more in a bit!

http://boddy903.deviantart.com/#/d2wdcej
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus

Go ahead, I'm not going to stop you. Also, more artwork coming!
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus

sweet dude thanks :) i will get started right away :) oh and if u can get the neo starters up right away :) please
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

Here are some of the characters that are in Granite and Cumulus:

http://boddy903.deviantart.com/#/d2wdhvc
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

Some new Pokemon have appeared!!

http://boddy903.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2wdr95
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

Here's some more new ones! Enjoy!!

http://boddy903.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2wdzqk


Woops, sorry. The last one is Lapking.
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

hey boddy here is pursuna:

http://i33.tinypic.com/2vacawl.png

i had trouble on the mouth
rogicean on the way
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

It's not bad, blindstien, but it does seem kinda large. I like it.
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

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I really don't like it. The mouth is too large and not a good colour, the body is another terrible colour and not very good looking. I would revise the sprite, may be put it at an angle as it looks very 2-D like it.

I'm only saying. No oofence meant.

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This one is slightly better. However, the body is very bland and the anntenae are wiggling all over the place. The wings are too bright a yellow, don't use any of MS Paint's standard colours as they are too bright for Pokémon sprites.

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His face is very green. His beak thingy is too yellow, like before but his Wings and body are ok. You need more detailed sprites like toille's Frosing. That one was good. Yes, this Wormant is very simple.

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This Queenlany is a little strange. Is it meant to be cute? The green colours need to go together without clashing. I can easily see the rounded edges of it.

I think these are all I can find to critique tonight. I'm not an official critiscist but I have just done all this.
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

^ Thanks for the critique Fire Arceus, just saying I did those two drawings in less then 2 minutes just so I can sorta get a better understanding of the drawing, this wasn't meant to be a perfect drawing. :x
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

Ok, I just finished the Map. Here are the features and Town names. If you think a Town could use a name change, let me know!

1. Freshent Bay (Starting Town)
2. Torstill Town (2nd Town)
3. Pokebeach (Just a little Easter Egg I decided to have connect to the second town. It's going to have Trainers with your Names.
4. Abdin City (3rd Town and 1st Gym Battle)
5. Arachno Path and Insect Hill (The place where you catch Bungast)
6. Enthrel Forest
7. Greenwood City (4th Town and 2nd Gym Battle)
8. Prestin Cave
9. Boulder Cave (A cave connected to Prestin Cave where you catch Bouldlagon)
10. Webous Town (5th Town and 3rd Gym Battle)
11. Mt. Volcan (The Volcano where Flaratore is)
12. Plava Town (A town nestled on Mt. Volcan. 6th Town and 4th Gym Battle)
13. Anily Town (7th Town)
14. Debri Isle (The place where you catch Speector)
15. Mt. Hone (A mountain connected to Anily Town where you catch Glaceander)
16. Magnum Cave (A Cave connected to Anily Town where you catch Elelagon)
17. Cycling Road (A path connecting Anily Town and Freshent Bay)
18. Chilick Town (8th Town and 6th Gym Battle)
19. Maze of Glory (A large Maze created ages ago to train a Trainer's potential)
20. Playful Spring (A small area connected to the Maze of Glory where you catch Funalof)
21. Orzone Town (9th Town. It's the Town where you catch up with your old friend Robert)
22. Lake Polta
23. Safari Zone
24. Pokeathlon
25. Angex Town (10th Town and 6th Gym Battle)
26. Superior Power Plant (This is the Laboratory where Voltan was made, and Team Superior headquarters)
27. Electric Garden (The place where you catch Burstlan)
28. Star Cave (The place where you catch Offlagon)
29. Tourney City (11th Town and 7th Gym Battle)
30. Ascending Path (The place where you catch Vocuatta)
31. Ice Floe Beach (The place where you catch Commice)
32. Sueno Sea (The sea that splits the two main islands of Galei)
33. Sueno Sea Chamber (The place where you find Coroneria)
34. Porbor Town (12th Town)
35. Mt. Elenos (The Mountain where you find Granod/Cumulutan. Also the final battle with Team Superior)
36. Lower Earth (The place where you find Endire)
37. Chalix Town (13th Town and 8th Gym Battle)


I'll post some more stuff soon!!
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

Boddy903 said:
Ok, I just finished the Map. Here are the features and Town names. If you think a Town could use a name change, let me know!

1. Freshent Bay (Starting Town)
2. Torstill Town (2nd Town)
3. Pokebeach (Just a little Easter Egg I decided to have connect to the second town. It's going to have Trainers with your Names.
4. Abdin City (3rd Town and 1st Gym Battle)
5. Arachno Path and Insect Hill (The place where you catch Bungast)
6. Enthrel Forest
7. Greenwood City (4th Town and 2nd Gym Battle)
8. Prestin Cave
9. Boulder Cave (A cave connected to Prestin Cave where you catch Bouldlagon)
10. Webous Town (5th Town and 3rd Gym Battle)
11. Mt. Volcan (The Volcano where Flaratore is)
12. Plava Town (A town nestled on Mt. Volcan. 6th Town and 4th Gym Battle)
13. Anily Town (7th Town)
14. Debri Isle (The place where you catch Speector)
15. Mt. Hone (A mountain connected to Anily Town where you catch Glaceander)
16. Magnum Cave (A Cave connected to Anily Town where you catch Elelagon)
17. Cycling Road (A path connecting Anily Town and Freshent Bay)
18. Chilick Town (8th Town and 6th Gym Battle)
19. Maze of Glory (A large Maze created ages ago to train a Trainer's potential)
20. Playful Spring (A small area connected to the Maze of Glory where you catch Funalof)
21. Orzone Town (9th Town. It's the Town where you catch up with your old friend Robert)
22. Lake Polta
23. Safari Zone
24. Pokeathlon
25. Angex Town (10th Town and 6th Gym Battle)
26. Superior Power Plant (This is the Laboratory where Voltan was made, and Team Superior headquarters)
27. Electric Garden (The place where you catch Burstlan)
28. Star Cave (The place where you catch Offlagon)
29. Tourney City (11th Town and 7th Gym Battle)
30. Ascending Path (The place where you catch Vocuatta)
31. Ice Floe Beach (The place where you catch Commice)
32. Sueno Sea (The sea that splits the two main islands of Galei)
33. Sueno Sea Chamber (The place where you find Coroneria)
34. Porbor Town (12th Town)
35. Mt. Elenos (The Mountain where you find Granod/Cumulutan. Also the final battle with Team Superior)
36. Lower Earth (The place where you find Endire)
37. Chalix Town (13th Town and 8th Gym Battle)


I'll post some more stuff soon!!

What about the oldest town/the biggest one and the Valley for the granite legendary/Castforms after you catch it and beat E4
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

cool boddy and i like how i will be a trainer in pokebeach u rock
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

The oldest and newest Towns are in there. But... I think I forgot the Valley, I'll just add it into the Map. Don't worry, it's taken care of.
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

Remember the biggest town IS the oldest one.And I can design some other stuff for the proffesionels(typo) to make look better.
 
RE: Pokemon Granite and Pokemon Cumulus *New wave of Artwork!*

I think I'm going to have that town be Anily Town.

Oh, and just so you guys know, Galei is just basically a large landmass made of a large main island, and a smaller one off the coast of the bigger one.

Orzone Town is going to be a town where they are SUPER eco-friendly.

Freshent Bay is your starting place, and it's basically just a harbor/port town just like Slateport in Ruby and Sapphire
 
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