Writing Pokemon: Ice Folly ~Great for all ages~

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Wow!

This fic is about the best I've read in three years, or so.
The chapters are a bit short, but I think that the story is just as good as it would have been with longer chapters.

One thing though, before I forget:
In the end of chapter 2, you say that Ash sent out a Charmeleon, but in chapter 3 and 4, it says that it's a Charmander.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
 
Okay, I'll add the next chapter tommorow, keep commenting. Tell me what you like or don't like about.
 
This is an amazing fanfic! Please continue, please.

EDIT: I just remembered somthing Ash shouldn't evil (I think). In his place though you could use Blue, Red (I guess), Silver, Gold (I guess), or Wes. Just a thought.
 
This is great!
AWSOME

And, lol, I originally posted this in Pokemon Spoon by accident, and it took me a minute to realize that I did.

Still great. Put Glaceon in it!
 
Well, it is really old, but I suppose I could continue it. Unfortunately, it has already been decided what Eevee will evolve into.
 
Don't worry, I finished the sixth chapter, sorry for its extreme shortness.
 
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