Writing Pokemon! The Eternal war- Pokemon Rangers vs. Pokemon Trainers! My fic entry

Will I get an "A" for this?

  • *Hurls* I CAN'T BELEIVE I EVEN READ 1 SENTANCE! This is the worst story ever!!! Ugh...

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Indeed.. well, looking at the quality of writing here, I think you'll do well in both :)

Competition is fierce, however, so make sure you keep this level of quality up and you'll be fine.

Good luck! :D
 
I just finished reading Ch.2 P.1, and so far this fanfic is great!!:D:cool:
I can't wait until the next part of Ch.2!!:D:cool:
 
Ketchup and Mustard said:
A boy, named Chris Trosh, was born just when the Ranger’s attacked. He was born with a birthmark on his forehead, which resembled the God Pokemon, Arceus.

Sorry Legion member, I gotta tell you...this is like the Harry Potter outline. Forehead? Legendary scar? Born when the evil people were gonna rule the world? Yeah.
 
Harry's scar resembled a bolt of lightning that was put onto him by Voldermort, who was a person. Chris was just plain born with it. The only reseambelance is the scar. Harry was born 11 years before evil rose.
 
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