Writing Pokemon: The Master Tournament! *Finally updated with Chapter Two*

PokeChamp

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Chapter one: The Invitation, The Journey Aboard The S.S Wailord, And My First Competitive Battle

I started off like most Trainers; Easily impressed, and hopelessly inexperienced. I had caught many powerful and unique Pokemon, yet I lacked the skills to make much use of them. I never won any major battles before in my life. But then came that invite...

I remember my excitement when I got the letter; It said in clear, legible writing:

To William McAdams,
You have been given the opportunity to compete against other Pokemon Trainers, and the chance to be crowned the "Supreme Pokemon Master". A boat is leaving from Snowpoint City tomorrow at 8:00 AM. Be there if you are interested in joining the tournament. The boat in question will transport you to a lush and tropical paradise; It is the location of the Master Tournament, to which you are being welcomed to. All you need to bring is your Pokemon and clothes, as well as this invite, for it is your ticket to the S.S Wailord, which is the most luxurious in it's class. Be aware that this tournament will not be easy: Only the best of the best have been chosen, and if you aren't ready for some serious competition, you'll easily be blown away by the intense abilities of the Pokemon Masters. If you think you have what it takes to be the very best, then welcome to the Master Tournament!

Sincerely,
Cynthia, Champion of Sinnoh


I could only imagine what amazing experiences lay waiting for me on that island; I couldn't even get any sleep, so excited was I! I told my Mother about the invite, and she gave me permission to leave for the tournament... but on the condition that she could come with me. It wasn't a problem, of course; To be honest, I wanted her with me. The more people who could cheer on my victories, the better!

And so we set out for Snowpoint City! The road was very long, and all we had was two bicycles; Indeed, our feet were tremendously sore when we arrived in the white, snowy land of Snowpoint City. Despite the fact that we were completely covered with fur coats, the chill of the icy wind was savagely freezing. My mother and I, shivering like the unseasoned travelers we were, made our way to the hotel, "The Snowy Inn". We walked in, and were greeted not only by the immense warmth of the open fire, but also by the merry laugh of the Hotel Manager. The man was at least 6 feet tall, and he towered above us. He was a very thick man, and his face was very red; A jolly old fellow, by the looks of it. On top of his gray head, he wore a very weathered hat. As his worn-out name tag implied, he was Mr. Dereby, the owner of the inn. He spoke with a deep, resonate voice.
"What can I do for ya good folks?", he politely inquired. My mother walked up to the man, and said,
"My son and I need to engage the services of your lovely inn; We need a room that can occupy two". The hotel manager walked toward a door, and he pulled out a key from his pocket. Having unlocked the door, he made his way into the room. A few seconds later, he reappeared with small and rusty key.
"Here's the key to your room. Have a nice stay, Ma'am". The Hotel Manager tipped his hat to my Mother, and we made our way to the room.

If the hotel lobby was pleasant, our hotel room was even more so. There were two beds, neatly made; We headed for those first. In front of us was a huge television. But we were too tired to care about what was being shown. Alas, for is it was time to rest.

The very next day, we awoke at 7:55 clock in the morning. Noting the time, we rushed from out of our beds quickly, and got dressed. The boat would leave any minute! We quickly opened the door of our hotel room, and we rushed down the hallway, and in turn the lobby. My Mother quickly placed the money on the table of the Hotel Manager's desk, and we ran from the hotel as fast as we could.

Outside, the day was surprisingly warm. We hardly noticed, though, as our eyes were searching for the dock... and there it was! A little shabby old dock. But hardly fitting of the massive and modern boat, the S.S Wailord. We made it just in time. As soon as we boarded the ship, it set sail for the mysterious island that payed host to the Master Tournament.

The letter did not lie; Indeed, the S.S Wailord was quite luxurious. The rooms that were given to us were quite exquisite. Not only did they provide rooms for us, they also provided free food and refreshments! I felt myself regretting the fact that I did not bring my swimming trunks. There was a large pool at the center of the massive ship. I decided to take a little stroll through the ship. I told my Mother before I left, and she stayed behind in the room.

I wandered the corridor that was adjacent to our room in search of the elevator that was supposed to take me to the upper levels of the boat. I found it eventually, and it opened the moment I approached it. I pushed the button that said "Upper Level", and the doors momentarily closed. While it took me upwards, I had my thoughts accompanied by a catchy tune generated by the speakers which had been installed into the elevator.

Finally, the doors of the elevator opened wide, and I entered the upper levels of the S.S Wailord. I was on board the deck of the ship, which was host to a very refreshing breeze, a breeze which is only felt when one travels the open sea. There were many different buildings on the deck of the ship, each with a neon sign proudly announcing what was kept in store in that building. There was a Game Room, a Dining Room, and a Lounge. But what caught my eye was not any of the former. Instead, my eyes were attracted to a sign which was more spectacular than the others. It was decorated with a massive Blastoise on the side of the sign. But what was most noteworthy about the sign, was that it said "The Training Arena".

I had to see what that was all about. So I walked towards the massive building that was known as "The Training Arena", not exactly sure what I might find there. Upon entering, I saw many Pokemon Trainers engaged in battle. Many magnificent skirmishes has taken place, and I saw the techniques deployed by the Trainers. Can I attribute the eventual skill that I would find myself in the possession of to what I saw here? Not all of it. No, I would find my skill against a person who I would find myself to utterly loath, a person whom I could call my rival. It was the very fact that I loathed him that gave me strength and ability, which I would find myself using in the actual Master Tournament itself. His name was Richard Huntsworthy, and he was standing in a corner with a group of people who absolutely worshiped him; They were, indeed, his groupies. For reasons unknown to me, I felt myself compelled to approach him; Perhaps it was destiny that drew me to him? I came towards him, and whilst I did so, I came to notice what he looked like. He wore a tuxedo, and his very air seemed to signify his posh. He held us his head high, and bragged about his accomplishments to his little group. His hair was a bright orange. His face was clean, and not a single speck occupied itself on his face. He wore a necklace that was shaped in the form of a crown. The moment I saw him, I could tell he was an arrogant and selfish person. I drew closer, and he saw me. He scowled at me,
"What are you trying to do, sir? Are you spying on me, trying to find my weaknesses in order to learn how to defeat me?", at this point of his speech, he paused, and gave a chuckle.
"Well, I tell you good sir that Richard Huntsworthy have no weaknesses! I will sweep this competition, and when I am done all of you newbies will see how terrible you are at battling!". I was infuriated at his nerve. Alas, looking back perhaps I needn't have made this rivalry with him. But the cards were set; I was going to battle him.
"See here, Richard Huntsworthy: You think you're the best? Well you'll have to battle me first and prove it!", I barked at the boy. He lost his cool for a moment, but no longer than that. Then, he replied,
"So be it! I shall humiliate you in front of this huge crowd of Pokemon Trainers! But first, we have to go over the ground rules: It will be a one-on-one battle between both of our strongest Pokemon. First to fall loses! Are you ready for this?", and with that, he threw a Poke Ball into the air. It loosed a bolt of red energy, and a sleek, beautiful serpent came from the capturing device.
"Milotic and I will beat you!", shouted Richard. I contemplated my choice first, and after a moment, I chose my Pokemon. I sent out a Pokemon that I had caught at the beginning of my Pokemon journey: Charizard. It's form was that of a dragon, and it spewed flames with it's every breath. On the tip of it's tail, a small, yet extremely hot flame.
"We can do this, Charizard!", I shouted, although I can't say I quite believed myself. But what I felt didn't matter at this moment: The only thing of importance in that entire room was the battle between me and my to-be rival. All eyes were gazing upon this epic battle. The crowd was wild! It was a perfect battle: The shouts of both Trainers, the execution of the moves that which the Pokemon knew, the climatic battle cries of both Pokemon, engaged in an attempt to defeat one another. I was losing horribly, however. While I had barely scratched Milotic, my Charizard was beginning to give in to his own exhaustion. I myself was giving up, unable to consider my chances of victory, which in truth were quite ugly. But somehow, I held through. And my persistence payed off; I had found a way to win! Logic surged through my brain, and for the first time in my life, I actually felt like I knew what I was doing.
"Charizard, Fire Spin!", I commanded Charizard.
"Spin the flames around you!". Charizard did as I told it to, and the result was a wall of flame surrounding Milotic. Richard was going to try and end this now, but I was able to anticipate what he was going to do.
"Use Hydro Pump, Milotic!". Milotic let loose a stream of water, and it was aimed at Charizard. But Charizard was untouched by the torrent of aquatic matter. As I thought would happen, the stream collided with the wall of flame, in effect covering Charizard with a veil of smoke.
"Where's his Pokemon?", questioned Richard. Unfortunately, the answer to that question came with a heavy blow dealt against Milotic; Charizard had emerged from the smoke, and taking advantage of Milotic's confusion, Charizard began to deal many blows towards Milotic. In close combat, Milotic was out of it's element. It couldn't defend itself from such a close range, and it fell from the sheer strength of Charizard.

I had done it. I had won my first battle, with nothing but myself and my own Pokemon. Richard began to cry, and he and his group ran out of the room. A Trainer approached me, and asked,
"How did you do that? Richard Huntsworthy is the undefeated champion of the Hoehn region!". A huge following of Trainers came up to me, all asking me questions about battle strategies. In the moment, I was a hero. They all begged to know my secret, and of course, I told them far-fetched stories about how I scaled mountains simply to train my Pokemon, and the like. They all wanted to be like me. They looked up to me. How I won is a slight mystery to me. But one thing is for certain: I'll have even harder matches than this in the future. The honest truth, is that I haven't seen anything yet.
 
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Wow that was awesome, I can't wait until you write the next chapter!
 
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nabby101 said:
Wow that was awesome, I can't wait until you write the next chapter!

Thanks! ^_^

Well, the next chapter will probably be up within a week, I need ideas for the second battle (minor spoiler: I intend on there being a battle in every chapter!).
 
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Dude....
you make my story look like it was made by an idiot....
(that means it was amazing!)
Cant wait for the next chapter!

Dude.....
that was amazing....
 
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aggiegwyn said:
Dude....
you make my story look like it was made by an idiot....
(that means it was amazing!)
Cant wait for the next chapter!

Dude.....
that was amazing...



Thanks, aggiegwyn!

Don't be too hard on yourself. Writing takes practice, and I've been doing it for a while, now. Just keep up with it, and soon enough, I'm sure even your stories could be as good as mine!


Raquaza96 said:
As usual great job. :)

Thank you, Raquaza96!

P.S:
This time around, I intend on finishing this. I WILL write this fic, lol.
 
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PikachuGirl said:
Wow that's intense! :O

I have read better things, but it's pretty good.

Intense... wow, I didn't know that. I must be a pretty good writer, then!

I'm sure you have read better. I'm not the best, but I sure aspire to be.

Thanks for your comments, anyway.
 
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Awesome story dude. I'll be following this the whole way.
 
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I just want to make 1 more comment
I didn't like this part.

Finally, the doors of the elevator opened wide, and I entered the upper levels of the S.S Wailord.
 
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Flare said:
Awesome story dude. I'll be following this the whole way.

Thanks, Flare! Glad you enjoyed it!


PikachuGirl said:
I just want to make 1 more comment
I didn't like this part.

Finally, the doors of the elevator opened wide, and I entered the upper levels of the S.S Wailord.

Care to explain why?
 
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PikachuGirl said:
Well I think it's a little weird xD

Well, what's weird about it? Please, enlighten me as to how I can improve my writing.
 
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Well I wood say this part

the doors of the elevator opened wide.

that just has weird all around.
 
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Weird? That isn't weird. Weird is PokeChamp giving up on this amazing story!!

Great storyline so far. I love that it's being said in first person! It really adds to the "connecting withe the reader". (I blame my Language Arts teacher for that XD)

All I'd say to improve on is minor spellchecks. You missed two mistakes. The first one is nearby "When we set for SnowPoint!" In the second sentance of your sixth paragraph. "are" should be "our". I forgot where the second mistake is, so I'll tell you about it when I re-read this on my main computer.

Great work!
 
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Dr4g0n said:
Weird? That isn't weird. Weird is PokeChamp giving up on this amazing story!!

Great storyline so far. I love that it's being said in first person! It really adds to the "connecting withe the reader". (I blame my Language Arts teacher for that XD)

All I'd say to improve on is minor spellchecks. You missed two mistakes. The first one is nearby "When we set for SnowPoint!" In the second sentance of your sixth paragraph. "are" should be "our". I forgot where the second mistake is, so I'll tell you about it when I re-read this on my main computer.

Great work!

Thanks for your comments!

Yeah, I know, there are a few errors. Spellcheck doesn't help, because the words that I typo are actually real words! :O

I'll try and fix that up a bit.
 
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Chapter Two: Arrival at the Island, Breakfast, and the Team Battle
BAROOM! BAROOM! That was the sound that had woken me up from my deep sleep. Alarmed at that hideous noise, I rose from my bed with blazing red eyes, like a madman who had been caught in committing a crime. My state was laughable, and indeed, if anyone who had seen my facial expression upon my rude awakening, they would have found it quite hilarious! My Mother took it worse than I did, and she looked pale as if she had seen a ghost. Without any action of mine, the television set turned itself on. On the screen was the image of an incredibly thin man wearing a ridiculous hat, which had a large, golden "C" in the middle of it. He wore a nay blue suit, and it made him look even more comical. Apparently, he was the captain of the S.S Wailord.
"Good morning, passengers!", he exclaimed from the television screen. I grumbled,
"Good morning indeed". The captain had no way of hearing my sarcastic remark, and so he continued,
"We have arrived at our destination, Paradise Island. Please be ready to de-board". Doing as he had commanded, my Mother and I quickly got dressed, and we soon exited our room.

We had been directed to the side of the boat that would allow us to de-board. Many Trainers, all looking frazzled from the mighty alarm that had woken us up as well, awaited the chance to exit the ship. Almost immediately, a large staircase was attached to the side of the massive boat, and one of the staff members opened the gate. At once, a huge commotion began. Everyone was scrambling to get out of that boat, and we had to work to get out of it. Somehow, we made our way down the staircase, and we were greeted by the immediate fact as to why this place was called, "Paradise Island". The place was surrounded by palm trees, and a cool and refreshing breeze was felt. The most beautiful beach anyone had ever seen could be found to our immediate right, and it was truly a magnificent sight to behold; The waves roared and crashed against the land, and the palm trees swayed from the morning breeze. We had no time to check out the beach, however, as a man dressed in a completely black suit roared at everyone,
"Follow me to the Arena!". We did as we were told, and apparently everyone else did as well. He led us down a brick road. Our destination was, presumably, a huge golden dome that was surrounded by many towers and buildings. Having approached nearer to this massive piece of architecture, we could clearly see a golden archway. It greeted us:
"Welcome to the Master Arena: Home of the Master Tournament!". The dome had a massive door protecting it. Any moment, the man in the black suit would lead us inside! The man pulled out his wristwatch, and pushed a series of buttons that which no one could have seen, even if they payed attention. Having done so, the doors began to open wide; Wider and wider and... the doors had opened! What awaited us inside was a lovely array of shops, buildings, and... the most impressive sight: While no one could see what was inside the dome from the outside, somehow, we could see what the island looked like from the inside! The man kept leading us toward some unknown destination. Eventually, he led us to a massive tower that almost protruded from the dome itself. Entering, we saw many people working on computers. Their purpose was not known to us at the time. We were lead past them, and into an open room which almost barely couldn't contain all of the Trainers. Many computers and a giant television set were in this room. In the center of the room, a large podium stood, and a woman was standing on top of it. She wore a black fur coat, and her hair was blond. She seemed pleased at the arrival of the many Trainers. Upon further inspection, though, one realized that she was Cynthia, Champion of Sinnoh! She picked up a microphone.
"Welcome, Master Trainers! You have been invited to the grandest tournament ever held in the history of grand tournaments! Whoever wins here is the undisputed Pokemon Champion... the Supreme Pokemon Master," she said. Many Trainers looked excited at the possibility of them becoming the next Supreme Pokemon Master. She continued,
"Unfortunately, you will not all be able to stay here forever... indeed, some of you will go home tonight! Before we begin the first battles that which will start off this tournament, you are expected to fill yourselves up with breakfast. After all, you must be hungry... right?", upon asking this question, most of the Trainers, including me, screamed,
"Yes!". Cynthia laughed, and announced,
"You are free to go and eat breakfast. You can find it in most of the shops located here. Au revoir!", and in a giant puff of blue smoke, she was gone. The Trainers cheered at this great illusion.

And so we left, looking for some decent breakfast. We came across a place called, "The Breakfast Palace". The title did not lie; When we had come inside, the place was truly decorated like a palace. We sate down on of the many golden booths, and took a menu. My Mother ordered a eggs and sausage, but I was not incredibly hungry. I simply asked for some cereal. My Mother and I talked a bit about what had happened in the past few days until our food came. And it was delicious! This was truly paradise, I thought to myself. After having breakfast, me and my Mother walked back to the place where Cynthia had left us all. We were some of the first ones there. We had to wait for everyone else to come back inside of the tower. Practicing perfect timing, Cynthia resumed her spot on top of the podium. Looking very important, she announced,
"Trainers! The tournament starts NOW!". Cheers erupted from the crowd. Cynthia continued,
"Our first battles will take place in the Battle Ring, a stadium designed for massive amounts of Trainers and people to battle at; Battle like you mean it, though, as a live audience will be watching you, and it will be broad-casted live on TV!". More cheers from the crowd.
"For your first challenge... The Pokemon Team Battle! In this battle, you and your opponent will be paired up with a partner to fight with. The true challenge lies in teamwork. Lose, and you will go home tonight! Win... and you will get to continue on in the tournament. But enough idle explanation... it's time to battle, Trainers! Good luck!". And as she vanished once more, covered by red smoke, the Trainers went wild and cheered. The doors of the Tower opened, and everyone left to find the Battle Ring.

The Battle Ring was located to the west of the tower that the Trainers were now leaving. A sign pointed to it, which all of the Trainers, including myself followed. Eventually, we came across an arena of sorts; It was shaped in the form circle, and there were many entrances into it. I could hear people cheering in the ring; The people who had come to watch this great great spectacle. I saw a sign that said "Trainer Entrance". I took this path, and it led me straight into the center of the great arena. Upon the entrance of the Trainers, the crowd roared and cheered. I saw many cameramen collecting footage through their cameras. In the center of the ring, a great field had been prepared. Cynthia was standing in the center of this field. The Trainers were told to sit down. Then, Cynthia began to speak:
"The Team Battle has begun! I will randomly announce your name and the name of your partner, and who you will be facing. When your name is called, you will come to the side of the field that I tell you to go to. Understood?". The Trainers agreed, and it was time for the first challenge! Many people had their names called. The went to their respective side of the field, and released their Pokemon from their Poke Balls. The Trainers fought valiantly, but not everyone could win. Already, people were being sent home. I released that this was an all or nothing deal, and that I had to do my best. And when I did, my name was called. I felt nervous, but I tried not to look it. I went up to Cynthia, and she told me to take the blue corner. I did as I was told. Then, she announced the name of my partner... Richard Huntsworthy! I was filled with a sense of surprise. After all, the odds were slim that I would be paired up against him. He approached me, with a shocked expression on his face. But he quickly recovered. He sneered,
"You better not blow this for me!". I laughed, seeing as it was I that had defeated him. Our opponents were two brothers, who had been called together by mere chance. They seemed very comfortable. And indeed, as it turned out, they actually practice together, and they had a special routine for Team Battles. I was about to send out Charizard, but I hesitated. I changed my mind, and threw a different Poke Ball into the air. From out of it, came a great serpent, who roared with rage.
"Let's do this, Gyarados!", I shouted encouragingly. Richard also had a change of Pokemon.
"Let's win this Furret!". A small, ferret-like Pokemon came from the Poke Ball. It cried out,
"Furret!". The twins sent out two different forms of Gastrodon; Giant, sea slugs coming from the east and west seas, one pink, one green. Cynthia cried,
"Are you ready? On your marks... get set... BATTLE!", and the battle began. The twins were perfectly coordinated, and they attacked with a combination of Surf and Mud Shot, the result which formed a very powerful attack of muddy water, which was know flying towards me and Richard's Pokemon. We both acted quickly. Almost in unison, we shouted,
"Dodge!". Our Pokemon did as they were told, and they evaded the attack. It was our turn to attack.
"Gyarados, use Hyper Beam!", I shouted.
"Furret, use Giga Impact!", Richard shouted. Gyarados shot out a powerful bolt of energy, and it hit the purple Gastrodon straight on. Richard, however, wasn't so lucky. Before Furret could hit, one of the brothers commanded,
"Gastrodon, Double Team!". The green Gastrodon disappeared for a moment. Then, one, two three green Gastrodon reappeared. Two were fake, while one was real. Furret hit a fake copy, and it fell from exhaustion of using that powerful attack for nothing. Richard had been eliminated. His fate and mine all counted on myself. The purple Gastrodon multiplied itself into three copies with Double Team as well. They kept on using Double Team over and over again until there were many fake Gastrodon. The question was, which ones were real? A thought occurred to me: If I could attack them all at the same time, the copies would disappear! So, I commanded Gyarados,
"Use Surf on all of the Gastrodon!". Gyarados made a great wave appear, and it crashed down upon the many proxies of Gastrodon. What was left from the massive attack were two Gastrodon, almost too tired to fight, barely still in the game.
"Time to finish this, Gyarados! Use Hydro Pump, and split the streams to hit both Gastrodon!" Upon hearing this command, Gyarados opened it's mouth wide. Then, a stream of water came rushing from Gyarados' mouth, and it was aimed at the two Gastrodon. Too weak to dodge, they were hit by the attack, and in one strike, they fell.

The brothers stood there, astonished. Their teamwork had been overthrown. Cynthia cried out on her microphone,
"William and Richard win the battle!". The crowd began to cheer my name,
"William, Wiliam!". I stood there with a great sense of accomplishment. being courteous, I went to shake the hand of my partner, Richard despite how much I hated him. But he was already leaving the field. I ran after him, and cried,
"Where are you going, Richard?". Richard turned around, tears once again running from his face.
"I'm leaving the tournament, William. Once again, you have stolen my glory. I'm going home." I was surprised at his attitude. After all, he was still in the tournament. He continued,
"Mark my words, William; I will come back one day! And when I do, I will be too strong for you or anyone else to defeat!". Having said his peace, Richard stormed off, and it would be a long time until I would see him again. I felt the presence of a hand on my shoulder. I turned around, and gazed at the face of the Champion of Sinnoh.
"Where are you going?", she asked me. She presented me with a trophy. It was shaped like an opened Poke Ball, and in the Poke Ball a there was a golden Dugtrio. The trophy said, "Winner of the Team Battle".
"Every win you get in this tournament gets trophy," Cynthia explained.
"Don't even think about leaving until you accept this." I took the trophy, and thanked Cynthia for it. My Mom rushed towards me.
"You did so well, Richard! I'm so proud of you!". She embraced me, and together, we left the Battle Ring to get some rest. For tomorrow the next challenge awaited me, and I intended on going at it with my very best.
 
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Great story Pokechamp! Can't wait for more! :D

Also, just noticed one teeny, tiny error
PokeChamp said:
Richard also had a change of Pokemon.
"Let's win this Furret!". A small, ferret-like Pokemon came from the Poke Ball. It cried out,
"Furret!".


"Linoone, use Giga Impact!", Richard shouted.
I'm pretty sure you meant Linoone right? Anways, keep up the great work!:)
 
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Daren said:
Great story Pokechamp! Can't wait for more! :D

Also, just noticed one teeny, tiny error
I'm pretty sure you meant Linoone right? Anways, keep up the great work!:)

I actually considered Linoone, but changed to Furret at the last minute. Sorry for the error.
 
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