D Dr4g0n Why so seriously Canadian, eh?! Member Aug 30, 2009 #21 Nice job! I wasn't surprised at who William's partner was, but I was surprised at his reaction! Great way to keep suspense!
Nice job! I wasn't surprised at who William's partner was, but I was surprised at his reaction! Great way to keep suspense!
PokeChamp Aspiring Trainer Member Aug 30, 2009 #22 Dr4g0n said: Nice job! I wasn't surprised at who William's partner was, but I was surprised at his reaction! Great way to keep suspense! Click to expand... Lol, thanks! Now I've got to collect ideas for my third chapter. P.S: Yeah, William teaming up with Richard was probably predictable. Ah well, the next chapter will be tons better!
Dr4g0n said: Nice job! I wasn't surprised at who William's partner was, but I was surprised at his reaction! Great way to keep suspense! Click to expand... Lol, thanks! Now I've got to collect ideas for my third chapter. P.S: Yeah, William teaming up with Richard was probably predictable. Ah well, the next chapter will be tons better!
