If that is your soul staring us in the face, I‘m sorry things suck so much for you right now.
As for the actual writing: abstract monologues often turn out clichéd, boring or excessively whiny. Not yours though. I think this is quite an awesome way of expressing yourself.
As for the actual writing: abstract monologues often turn out clichéd, boring or excessively whiny. Not yours though. I think this is quite an awesome way of expressing yourself.