Writing Return of the Aura: Dead. I just can't write about it anymore. Sorry.
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RE: New Fanfic: Return of the Aura! Chapter three is up!
I really like it.
I really like it.
RE: New Fanfic: Return of the Aura! Chapter three is up!
Thanks man!
You guys keep me going. To be honest, I almost quit because I couldn't get myself into my own storyline (LOL), but I figured that if I continued I could make the storyline better.
Thank you to everyone who has given me nothing but the most sincere compliments. I am glad everyone here seems to like the storyline (besides me, lol).
PokeKid Brandon said:
Thanks man!
You guys keep me going. To be honest, I almost quit because I couldn't get myself into my own storyline (LOL), but I figured that if I continued I could make the storyline better.
Thank you to everyone who has given me nothing but the most sincere compliments. I am glad everyone here seems to like the storyline (besides me, lol).
RE: New Fanfic: Return of the Aura! Chapter three is up!
You made me want to write a story now to.
You made me want to write a story now to.
RE: New Fanfic: Return of the Aura! Chapter three is up!
PokeChamp, your like the best author EVAH!!!
LOVE 'EM!!!
PokeChamp, your like the best author EVAH!!!
LOVE 'EM!!!
RE: New Fanfic: Return of the Aura! Chapter three is up!
This has a great storyline and I will keep reading, but there is one more thing you must adjust. The plot goes by WAY too fast. Slow down some sections, give a bit more detail, and make the chapters following these flow together. THEN will this story be REALLY good and could easily drawn in a lot of the Pokebeachers. =P Good luck!
Also, there is a slight typo. Our instead of Out. =P Just thought you would want to know. =D
This has a great storyline and I will keep reading, but there is one more thing you must adjust. The plot goes by WAY too fast. Slow down some sections, give a bit more detail, and make the chapters following these flow together. THEN will this story be REALLY good and could easily drawn in a lot of the Pokebeachers. =P Good luck!
Also, there is a slight typo. Our instead of Out. =P Just thought you would want to know. =D
PokeChamp said:
RE: New Fanfic: Return of the Aura! Chapter three is up!
Aw man! ; (
I've started that again!
That's what I did in my last fanfic. I tried very hard not to do that again, but...
Oh well, I'll try even harder in the next chapter. Yeah, I could have drawn this out for a few more chapters before this happened, but I wanted to get on with the fact that he was Xavier's son and all, as it is really important that he would know that.
Thanks for telling me what was wrong with it, though, as I've got to know where to begin fixing this.
I'll fix that typo, as well.
Bubba235 said:
Aw man! ; (
I've started that again!
That's what I did in my last fanfic. I tried very hard not to do that again, but...
Oh well, I'll try even harder in the next chapter. Yeah, I could have drawn this out for a few more chapters before this happened, but I wanted to get on with the fact that he was Xavier's son and all, as it is really important that he would know that.
Thanks for telling me what was wrong with it, though, as I've got to know where to begin fixing this.
I'll fix that typo, as well.
RE: New Fanfic: Return of the Aura! Chapter three is up!
Well written. I liked rocket prison and brock being imprisoned there. And at least you didnt call your characters red or blue.
Well written. I liked rocket prison and brock being imprisoned there. And at least you didnt call your characters red or blue.
RE: New Fanfic: Return of the Aura! Chapter three is up!
What did poor Brock ever do to you?
No, Red, or even Blue, don't have anything to do with this storyline.
Chase is the main character because he is the user of the Aura, as opposed to whipping in some Aura on Red or Blue, which would be very cheesy.
xanaseviper said:
What did poor Brock ever do to you?
No, Red, or even Blue, don't have anything to do with this storyline.
Chase is the main character because he is the user of the Aura, as opposed to whipping in some Aura on Red or Blue, which would be very cheesy.
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You're running into the habit of being a little too arcane. Most of the names are downright odd and the description is hazy. It just doesn't...'fit' in the Pokemon world.
You're running into the habit of being a little too arcane. Most of the names are downright odd and the description is hazy. It just doesn't...'fit' in the Pokemon world.
RE: New Fanfic: Return of the Aura! Chapter three is up!
Arcane? Wow, very pointed opinion there.
Hang on a second... how exactly are the names odd? I mean, the main character is Chase... Oh, I see your point. Chase is a very odd name, and you will never meet a single Chase in your life. I mean, who ever heard of someone named Chase?
The only odd name I've used is Xavier, and that hardly qualifies, seeing as it is indeed a name that is used on occasion. So... odd names... how? That's what I want to know. Maybe in my last fic, yeah, but not this time around.
As for hazy descriptions... I have suffered them many times. No matter how hard I try, I manage to make descriptions hazy. I will try harder in the future, though!
Dictator Dauntless said:
Arcane? Wow, very pointed opinion there.
Hang on a second... how exactly are the names odd? I mean, the main character is Chase... Oh, I see your point. Chase is a very odd name, and you will never meet a single Chase in your life. I mean, who ever heard of someone named Chase?
The only odd name I've used is Xavier, and that hardly qualifies, seeing as it is indeed a name that is used on occasion. So... odd names... how? That's what I want to know. Maybe in my last fic, yeah, but not this time around.
As for hazy descriptions... I have suffered them many times. No matter how hard I try, I manage to make descriptions hazy. I will try harder in the future, though!
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You're an amazing writer PokeChamp!
And if you think the name Xavier is strange, check out the names of Organization XIII:
There's Xemnas, Xigbar, Xaldin, Vexen, Lexaeus, Zexion, Saïx, Axel, Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia, Larxene, Roxas, and Xion.
You're an amazing writer PokeChamp!
And if you think the name Xavier is strange, check out the names of Organization XIII:
There's Xemnas, Xigbar, Xaldin, Vexen, Lexaeus, Zexion, Saïx, Axel, Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia, Larxene, Roxas, and Xion.
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Yes, and these are all stupid names in an astoundingly stupid game. :/
mariomaniac said:
Yes, and these are all stupid names in an astoundingly stupid game. :/
RE: New Fanfic: Return of the Aura! Chapter three is up!
Thanks for the positive comments!
Edit:
I have quit writing this. It is boring for me to write about this storyline.
Thanks for everyone that read my fic, and I while be working on a new one soon!
mariomaniac said:
Thanks for the positive comments!
Edit:
I have quit writing this. It is boring for me to write about this storyline.
Thanks for everyone that read my fic, and I while be working on a new one soon!