Rickraptor77's Card Reveiw Kiosk!!!

CastformCloud said:
Steelix EX HP150(Metal)

Stiff Tail(2 Metal, 1 Colorless)(50)
Flip a coin.If heads,reduce 30 damage(If any) done to Steelix ex during your opponnet's next turn.

Earthquake(2 Fighting, 1 Metal, 1 Colorless)(100)
Discard 1 ( M ) energy attached to Steelix ex. This attack does 10 damage to Each player's Benched Pokemon Pokemon.(Don't apply Weakness & Resistence for Benched Pokemon.)

Weak:Fire, Fighting
Res: Grass
RC:4
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1.Stiff tail's auto paralyze like lord said a no-no.changed in quote.
2.Changed Earthquake in quote,makes more sense,'cause an Earthquake should affect benches & added discard for balance.
3.Changed Retreat to 4 instead of 5 'cause i've added too many restrictions.

there is your Steelix ex's reveiw CC.

CastformCloud said:
Moltres HP80(Fire)

Fly(1 Fire, 1 Colorless)(20)
Flip a coin. If heads, prevent all damage and effects from an attack by your opponent during your opponent's next turn.If tails, this attack does nothing(not even damage).

Fire Spin(2 Fire, 1 Colorless)(40)
The Defending Pokemon can't retreat until the end of your opponent's next turn.

Weak:Water
Res:Fighting
RC:1
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1.Switch places of attacks on spoiler.Corrected in quote.
2.Fly is ok,except switch places of tails effect & heads effect.Corrected in quote.
3.Changed Fire Spin's attack cost to 2( R ) & 1 ( C ),otherwise ok.
4.Weakness,Resitence &Retreat are all ok.

there is ur Moltres' reveiw CC

*Faking tips sold seperatly*

BTW In ur pm why'd u call yourself a jerk...still pondering 'bout that.

C-m's reveiw is coming up on da house:)
 
Rick, why aren't I able to PM you? Anyways, here's another.

Dustox HP70(Grass)

Stun Spore(1 Grass)
Flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokemon is now Paralyzed.

Poisonous Air(3 Grass)(20)
The Defending Pokemon is now Poisoned. Put 2 damage counters on the Defending Pokemon instead of 1 for Poison by this attack.

Weak:Fire
Res:
RC:1
 
ok,fine i believe u.

here is your reveiw:

CastformCloud said:
Dustox HP90(Grass)

Stun Spore(1 Grass)(10)
Flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokemon is now Paralyzed.

Poisonous Gust(3 Grass)(40)
The Defending Pokemon is now Poisoned. Put 2 damage counters on the Defending Pokemon instead of 1 between turns.

Weak:Fire
Res:
RC:1
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1.incase u haven't noticed,Dustox is a stage 2,therefore it should have HP of at least 90 to 120.I gave it 90 to balance with attacks & retreat.
2.Stun spore could use more "ummph" so u should add some damage.Corrected in quote.
3.Poisonus Gust,sounded better than air especially after it needed to do some damage.Corrected in quote.
4.Grammer & wording mistake on Poisonus Gust.Corrected in quote.
5.Weak,Resist & Retreat all ok.

there u go.

C-m's castform checks out clean except for it's power,it's kinda confusing for beginners.(and everyone else.)
 
Lets see what review I get off this one.

Entei HP90(Fire)

Flamethrower(2 Fire Energy)(100)

Roar(3 Colorless)
The Defending Pokemon is now knocked out.

Weak:
Res:All types
RC:
 
Broken.

You may not post on this thread for 2 hrs.

You must ask my permission before posting a broken card for reveiw!!

*Faking tips sold seperatly*
 
How bout' another good-ol broken card?

Pikachu HP160(Electric)

Thunda-Kaboom!
Every Pokemon is now knocked out.

Weak:
Res:All types
RC:
 
Just havin' a little fun with these broken cards.

Feraligatr HP200(Water)

Energy Consuming Water Gun(15 Water Energy)(10)
Discard 5 basic energy attached to Feraligatr or this attack does nothing.

Weak:All types
Res:
RC:27
 
Can u reveiw all of my cards that I've from my thread?
http://pokebeach.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=1060
 
hold up,hold up.

LV,i'd be glad to reveiw your cards:)

CC,i will not,repeat will not reveiw your broken cards until further improvement.

P.s LV,i'm sry i couldn't send the Pika promo card from JAA,my parents won't let me send overseas.
 
While I am still crying over the fact you shunned my PM privileges, here is another fake.<whine>

Zigzagoon HP50(Colorless)

Zigzag (1 Colorless)(10)
Switch Zigzagoon with 1 of your Benched Pokemon.

Screech (1 Colorless)
During your next turn, Zigzagoon's Zigzag base damage is 20 instead of 10.

Weak:Fighting
Res:
RC:1

I'm truly hurt!<waaahhh!>
 
CastformCloud said:
Zigzagoon HP50(Colorless)

Screech (1 Colorless)
Flip a coin.If heads the defending pokemon is now Confused.

Quick Attack (2 Colorless)(10+)
Flip a coin.If heads,this attack does 10 damage plus 10 more damage.

Weak:Fighting
Res:
RC:1
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First stop ur whining,second i return your privileges,only after u prove that u can besurious & follow rules which are set.

here is ur reveiw:

1.Switch places of attacks.Corrected in quote.
2.If Screech is a sound based attack,how can it raise the attack power of Zigzag?Changed effect in quote.
3.If Zigzagoon is zigzaging in one spot who is it gonna hit anything? Changing name of second attack in quote.
4Changed efect of Second attack.
5Weak,Resist & Retreat all ok.

P.S LV ur reveiws will be on the way.
 
*sigh* here are some more....

Snorlax HP90(Colorless)

Rest(3 Colorless)
Remove all damage counters from Snorlax. Snorlax is now asleep.

Body Slam(4 Colorless)(50)
Flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokemon is now Paralyzed.

Weak:Fighting
Res:
RC:3

I know, it's bad, right?
 
I just spent 10 minutes cleaning up stupid spam posts from this thread. You're BOTH lucky I haven't issued you warnings for spamming. This thread will remain open by request of RickRaptor77, but anymore spam from you Castformcloud will get you issued with a warning immediately. RickRaptor77, please report all offensive posts from Castformcloud if they continue.
 
Slaking ex (c) 160 hp

poke body: Truant

Whenever you announce an attack by Slaking ex, flip a coin. If tails, that attack does nothing and your turn ends.

(c)(c)(c) Mega punch 70
When you use this attack, you may flip a coin. If heads, this attack does 70 damage plus 20 more damage. If tails this attack does 70 damage and Slaking ex does 10 damage to itself.

(c)(c)(c)(c) Hyper beam 150
Discard 2 energy attached to Slaking ex in order to use this attack.

Weakness (f)
Resistance none
Retreat cost (c)(c)(c)



Well, yeah. Wasn't sure how to word the body, but it's something a bit different I guess. Broken with battle frontier though maybe lol
 
Donphan ex HP100

Type: (Ground)

(G)(G) Bomb Charge 20
The Defending Pokemon is now Burned

(G)(C)(C) Extreme Rollout 30x
Flip 4 coins, this attack does 30 damage times the number of heads, if all 4 coins heads, the defending Pokemon is now Paralyzed.

Weakness: (W) (G)

Resistence: (E)

Retreat Cost: (C)(C)

so, what do you say about it!!!!!!!

And here´s one more:

Hitmonlee 70HP

Type: (G)

(G)(G)Bye Jump Kick 20
Flip a coin, if heads, select on of your oponent´s Pokemon,
And put on him 2 damage counters, If tails, Hitmonlee does 20 to
Himself

(G)(G)(C) Phoenix Fierce Fighting Kick 70-
Flip 2 coins, if both of them heads, this attack does 70
damage, if one coin tails this attack does nothing and
Hitmonlee does 10 damage to himself, if both of coins tails,
This attack does nothing and
Hitmonlee does 70 damage to himself

Weakness: (P)

Resistance:

Retreat Cost: (C)(C)

Please do not double post; you can use the "Edit" button to add more information to your post instead. ~DRK176
 
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