Writing Rose Quartz And Onyx- Part 1 Complete!

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Sorry for not commenting earlier. I was just being a lazy jerk. (The laziness virus has hit me in full wave this time). Anyways great two chapters! I like Dragola, she seems like a five year old on a sugar rush.

~NZ
 
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Dude where's all my homeys? :/ Definitely need to stop going on the chatroom so much, lol.

gamercal: I seriously lol'd at your entire post. I am not even kidding. XD Protip: Crystal is easily amused apparently.

*reports for swearing*

Regardless, it's a good thing that Crystal's not seen as a total drama queen (yet), so that's good! And yeaahhhh, I can't wait for that bit with Aeron. >_> That will be one fight I'm not sure how will end...

And yes the naive youth. ;D Her and Crystal are on the same boat apparently! Also, true that with the whole bit on inexperience. Still, although Aeron's not one to say 'I told you so'...I guess we'll have to see how this works out.

Freak: Hee, thanks. I try to pride myself on those sorts of things when I can. If that makes sense :0 Regardless, it's really good to know that someone appreciates the loss! I've been trying really hard to make Crystal a believable character and making the story believable in that sense. The story would be wholly boring if our two protagonists won all the time and didn't taste defeat, now wouldn't it?! ;D So yeah thanks!

NZ: *slaps around a bit for not posting* LOL Just kidding. |D It's aight, dude. I know how things can get. I've been mad busy myself.

Also if you like Dragola, you're gonna LOVE Hikari. ;D Just sayin'!




Anyways! I am just posting because I am proud to announce that I have completed Part 1 of RQO (finally)! \m/ It took way longer than I expected it to, honestly, given how I had to split Chapter 11 up into 11/12 (which was gonna probably happen anyways, given the way 12 is the longet chapter to date...), but yeah! 11's a touch boring, but 12 will definitely be jam-packed with excitement and general awesomeness. :D Oh, man, you guys. I am so DONE with Part 1 lolololol. So stay tuned this upcoming Tuesday and the following Tuesday for some crazy RQO!

I've begun work on my RQOcast, so be sure to get any more questions you can think of in! There will probably be a prepatory week in between 12's release and the RQOcast's release, so you'll have plenty of time to mull over some questions! SO DO IT PLEASE! I'll be working hard on some special artwork that will be featured in the RQOcast long before it comes up here or on DA, so keep your eyes peeled if you wanna see what some of the characters look like! Or something!

And as always thank you all so much for reading. It ALWAYS makes me happy to go back and read all of your comments except for Zyflair's critiques. I really mean that. ^^
 
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Crystal Hikara said:
And as always thank you all so much for reading. It ALWAYS makes me happy to go back and read all of your comments except for Zyflair's critiques. I really mean that. ^^
I am so going to slam you a hard one for that. >=D
 
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Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere's Johnny!
I present to you this critique! Sponsored by those that like to rip stuff in haaaaaaaaaaaaaalfff... x3

A good side of the fanfic in general is the variety and consistency of character tone; plenty of distinct voices were present and no one says a line that someone else would more likely say. However, despite the colorful personalities, they don't serve much of a purpose besides entertainment and liveliness of the fiction. It certainly does a good service with character development, but personalities can accomplish more.

In your fanfic, we start with Crystal Hikara, who once was an innocent, care-free, 'newbie,' and by the legendaries would I be lucky if I can guess how she turns out in the end (I kid. I can already see what she's going to be like... or do I?). But where exactly is the point of such a development? Why even bother with the developing and have her be like Ash Ketchum in the anime series? The answer is obvious: to have a person not change with experience is not only unrealistic, but also uninteresting. And yet, so many classical literature have little character development, so what makes it great?

The answer lies in archetypes, general representations of a type of person; as expected of literature's role to be reflected upon society, characters become excellent role models and stereotypical (in a good sense for now) to serve a point.
A key point of personality in literature is to setup two different types of archetypes:
-To justify a person's action and possibly prove a point with its outcome (A situational archetype).
-To be compared to another personality/archetype and to judge between the two (No clue what this is called).
Your fanfic has a few situational archetypes lying around, such as the loss of innocence/disillusionment, fatal risking to save another, and a few others, but try to utilize them with a purpose and not only does character development become clearer (although I'm sure you although have planned how to end), but with introducing some real, general situations to our not-so-typical hero, then the reader can relate more easily and understand our protagonist very clearly. Just consider the major events of the plot; are each of them a scenario that tests Crystal's or someone else's personalities/ideas/beliefs? You're almost there with this concept, but I wanted you to be aware so you can consciously apply later on.

There is not enough effin' foreshadowing. D=
No really, foreshadowing and Chekhov's gun is gold no matter where you go, because they not only clear plotholes, but they make it as if the future events so "correct" and indisputable with the clues giving earlier. If you mention black clouds, then when it rains, everyone will just nod their heads and continuing to read (Gee, I wonder where this could be useful in your fanfic). Likewise, when Crystal was in her torturous imprisonment, if you had one of he grunts mention a bag with a description that wasn't like Crystal's, we'd think it was redundant information... until Aeron discloses her reason for her infiltration into the evil base. But alas, you didn't, and now I'm still wondering if you just stuck in that reason because you couldn't think of anything better. If you're going into fiction, this needs to be mastered. Not one classic ever leaves this technique out (heck, in Harry Potter, they were all over the place). I see plenty of events in Part One that could be used to line up for events in the later Parts. So use them!

You're probably going to slap me for this: Symbols. If you're not going to have any, then at least don't trick the reader into thinking there's one. What am I talking about? Dragola's ball. Why would you have a ball undergo a transformation? To highlight its importance. Yet there's nothing special about besides its cool look. Therefore, the transformation itself is an unneeded (and thus useless). Really, why is that there?

Pulling out to broader terms, you are still way too explicit in your narration. There are many instances where you speak through Crystal's thoughts and feelings when a simple descriptive action could have been plenty more concise. But I can assume its your style, so if you're going to get wordy, make it for its worth and not just some character development stuff.

Speaking of words, you are addicted to one of them. Look at your chapters and count how many "thought" and "thoughts" you used. =D

I actually have just a few other possible things to say, but it's honestly not worth either your time nor mine. It is a definitely solid fanfic; consistent plot, consistent characters, consistent description. I look forward from you moving from having a solid fanfic into a brillant one. [/lazy ending]

Edit: And crud now I've used up a day for this instead of my own fanfic. _-_
 
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Tsk, tsk, Johnny Zy, you should have held off to the end of Part 1 to critique all of that nonsense.

On a few small notes, I actually include a LOT of foreshadowing in this fic. Of course, it's sort of a subtle thing. I actually talked to Kiyo about this for a bit, and we both agreed that neither character should be giving too much away so early on. I mean, it's only Part 1 of 12! I got to keep some surprises up my sleeve, but trust me, I can at least think of...*counts on both hands...* Maybe seven or eight hints towards some plottwists to come? I dunno, there's a BIG ol' obvious one at the end of 12. Just giving stuff away so easily would go against everything at lease Aeron stands for. Why, do you think, she's as nasty as she is? Typical response: She's got some traumitizing stuff she would rather keep in her past...a lot of traumitizing stuff. It's not gonna slip out of the bag so easily (and Kiyo made me actually cut some of Aeron's and Umbree's dialogue back!). It will make sense in time...give it like...16 or so more chapters ;D

Also lolololol symbols. They'll only really come up later. I will admit, there was some funky fun to designing Dragola and the Onyx ball, but there's a very convienent reason why they are like so. If you want me to get crazy spiritual on you, I will explain the meaning of it. There's also a reason for Crystal's necklace and/or bangs, as well as Aeron herself, but that would be giving too much away and that'll be covered in Part 7 anyways. So you can't ask about that yet ;P

I plead 'guilty' to too wordy, of course. I always struggle to try and cut stuff out of my story! It's really hard for me because I see it all as necessary. Aaaaaaaaand stfu. I'm actually addicted to anyways and Also more than anything else. Holy toledo it's like impossible for me to stay away from those words when writing a reply. But I mean...there's not too many other good words for 'thought' and 'thoughts' that I know of, so that could be part of the problem. >>'

Like I said, just wait until part 3 before you go jumping the gun on anything! Part 3 starts to expose a TON of foreshadowing that has happened, plus more.
 
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I jump the gun. It's my habit. Usually the gun gets me in the air. I think it only grazed me this time. =D

If foreshadowing wasn't subtle, then there wouldn't be a point to it. Would it be more acceptable if I say that I felt as if alot of short-term opportunities were missed? I like having small events toying with one another just as much as large plot-twists and stuff.

And if I had to wait for so many parts to be completed, you might as well just expect me to lurk until the very end of the whole thing. >>"

Also, if there's no good substitute for such words, how about... dare I even suggest this... finding a way to reword it or to just simply remove it? Even more, you have frickin third person! THE MOST powerful POV possible. =O

Oh. You even used the phrase, "jumping the gun". =P

Very well. I shall continue my lurking.
 
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Poor Dragola...
:(

Anyways, I think that Crystal has completely changed. She used to be optomistic and stuff, but then Team Missle came and she went all negative, I can understand that though. I just want to scream at you sometimes for making Eru so mean to Crystal. She is very EVIL sometimes....

Anyways, good work, looking forward to the next chapter.
 
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Zy: Better watch out next time else I may be a better shot next time. ;D

And I guess I get what you're saying. I'm not sure. I generally don't think of such things as important. With a story this big, are smaller things such as a thunderstorm really important in the long run? No. Not at all. And hey I do want SOME surprises in store for the reader. ;D

May wanna lurk till the end of each part at the least. |3

I may end up doing that, whenever I go back and try and look at the first chapter. Whoo third person \m/ but I can't be too bothered right now. I'll get back to you on that bit...

aggiegwyn: Yeah :/

Anyways, Crystal may have changed, or this could have been her somewhat similar attitude to the past. We don't know yet, and probably will not know for a while. |P So sorry about that bit. Also hahahahaha, Eru's job is complete.


GUEEEEEEEEESS WHAT FOLKS?! IT'S THAT MAGICAL TIME OF THE WEEK! A new chapter is to be added! This one chapter is slow (and I'm still upset at myself for having to separate this into two chapters, but it was bound to happen anyways...), but guess who's in for the ride?!

Also if Zy can say frickin' and cal can say hellbent I get to cuss a little in my fic so HERE IS MY WARNING ANYWAYS SO THERE >0

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Chapter 11: Regroup

“Hey.”

Crystal didn’t respond to the voice. She simply sat, her clothes becoming muddied as she continued to hold Dragola close to her.

“I said, hey.”

Nothing. In all truth, the girl let the words fall on completely deaf ears. She didn’t want to be seen crying, nor did she want to stop. She forced herself to somewhat regulate her breaths. Gingerly she pet the creature; she had done what she could for her with a Potion, but the dragon was still fast asleep.

The rain suddenly stopped overhead. Sounds of raindrops hitting cloth brought the gifted girl’s attention up and over to the figure standing solemnly over her. Aeron didn’t speak, yet simply gazed at her with a look of pity.

The youngest Hikara gazed back down at her Pokemon, still torn.

“Crystal…” the fire trainer began slowly with a long sigh. “… …come on, let’s get back to the Pokemon Center…”

“-my fault,” the blonde whispered. Water droplets trickled down her back, making her shiver and clutch the Dratini tighter.

“…what?”

“It’s all my fault,” Crystal hiccuped. “Everything thus far has all been my fault. I-I probably got, got Breeze and Flora killed, m-my family is in danger, I-I’m just some sort of dummy-burden to you, a-and even n-now, I, I couldn’t react straight in the b-b-battle, and Dragola was in a lot of, lot of pain because of me! I-It’s all my fault! I-I should have never, never gotten this gift! Never! I’m sick of it! I-I just keep losing and-and I’m never…I’m never…I’m never going to be anyone special and helpful at all!”

Only the sound of her hyperventilating wails and the rain could be made out on the scene. Ashamed, Crystal buried her head deep into Dragola’s smooth, wet body. Her legs were beginning to ache from being sat upon, although it didn’t matter to her.

Eru breathed in roughly, before kneeling down to the girl. She gently placed her empty hand on her shoulder. “You’re not a burden. Ignorant sometimes, yes, but otherwise no.” Crystal glanced up. The elder had to hold her breath for a moment; her student’s eyes were red and puffy, along with her cheeks and nose. Her hair clumped together unnaturally from the rain and appeared tangled. She attempted to soften her normally stern, sarcastic expression further. “…come on. Let’s get you two out of the rain. We can talk back at the Pokemon Center…”

“A-Aeron…” Crystal weakly slurred, sniffling. “I…I’m not so sure I can be a trainer anymore…”

“Stop that nonsense for right now. Come on. Wash up first, and then you can be all emo at the Center.”

The blonde couldn’t even mutter a retort. She allowed herself to be lifted by her arm up to her feet, as though she was a lifeless doll. With a small roll of her eyes to the heavens, Eru pushed the blonde onwards, back down into the city.

* * *​

“Are you gonna be a mute for the rest of your life or what?”

Once again, Crystal wasn’t up to answering her mentor. She had taken to sulking on the top bunk, her sleeping bag tightly wrapped around her. Her messy hair still stuck to the back of her neck and seeped through her nightgown. She faced the wall, eyes blank as she simply tried to keep her mind off of the battles.

Aeron scowled, letting loose a faint swear. “By the legendaries. You are freakin’ unbelievable. You gotta cut this out right now. So you lost! It isn’t the end of the world. I, for one, am not going to have you play the crazy pop-emo girl all night long! Dragola’s doing fine, and I’m sure she’ll forgive you…”

There was another pause, before Gunnar scratched her head in frustration. “Listen. Losing happens. I lost my very first gym battle myself. But you know what? I couldn’t cry. I had some mean, rough-and-tough brothers that wouldn’t LET me cry, let alone go ‘oh, life is so hard, cut-cut, I can never amount to anything, cut-cut…I am sorry, but I am sick of this pathetic little act you’re putting on right now. Either you snap out of it, come to your senses and listen to my advice before you go headfirst into another nightmare, or I swear, I will call out Val so quick it’ll make your head spin.”

“Take me home, then. I don’t want to be here any more. I let Dragola down too much, and I just hurt everyone I come across…” Crystal muttered from above.

The elder’s brow furrowed, her frown showing full-blown frustration. “That’s it. Freya, come out for a minute.” The gifted trainer paid no heed as she heard the ball break open and the Pokemon materialize. “…now…” Aeron whispered, her words too quiet for the younger to figure out. Not that it mattered.

Suddenly, the Flareon leapt up onto the bed, quickly walking over to the girl. She prodded her with a paw, but Crystal didn’t reply. Giving a small grunt, Freya walked around to face the girl head on. The girl shut her eyes, pretending she wasn’t there. The Eeveelution lightly nibbled on her nose. No response.

Finally, Freya shook herself, radiating heat and making herself appear as a Meowth that had just been dried with a hairdryer. She walked over, pawed Crystal once more, before sitting comfortably on her face and upper chest.

At last, Crystal reacted, groaning and trying to shoo the Flareon off so she could breathe. Soon her actions grew more panicked, as Freya’s Flash Fire increased with every moment.

“Oww! Owww! A-Aeron, call her off!”

“Only if you’ll come down here and talk,” she apathetically murmured, pressing a few buttons on her Pokegear.

“Call her off!”

“You gonna come down here?”

“Yes! I’m coming down! I’m coming down! Owwww! She’s really hurting me!” Crystal cried, emerging from the sack and making a beeline for the ladder. Freya stuck close to her, pawing at her with a snicker.

“Okay, Freya, that’s enough I guess…you’ll get your fun later…” Aeron yawned, petting her side of the bed. With a single, artful leap, the Flareon landed by her mistress’s side. The blonde carefully looked on before taking the last step down. Adamantly, she sat on the bed across from Aeron. Soon, the elder closed the application she had open and shuffled forward. A hand absently began to pet her starter Pokemon.

“…so what do you want me to say?”

“Why do you think everything’s your fault?”

“…if I didn’t follow that Pokemon I rescued, none of this would have really been happening,” she began. “I just…I don’t want to be able to talk to Pokemon anymore. I have just been hurting everyone with my gift. And, Dragola really trusted me and gave it her all in that fight. There’s no way I can win…”

“That was your own goddamn fault.”

Crystal glanced up. Her stomach lurched. “How…how can you say such a thing?!”

“Listen, bitchy or not, this is the truth of the matter. You haven’t done any training, and you haven’t even bothered to look at anything concerning Pokemon, including their abilities and moves. Sylvia has a few levels on Dragola, most definitely. It was no surprise that she beat you. In the end, it was inevitable. I told you, many, many times before: stop rushing into things.”

The youngest Hikara let her gaze fall to the ground at that. She watched as her shadow only gently shifted from brief situations she made to keep herself upright. Her eyes burned from crying so much, and she simply closed them.

“Now, if you went out and caught some more Pokemon, as well as doing some training against wild Pokemon, you may still have a chance.”

“Forget it. I’m not going back.”

“Oh, so that’s it? You’re just giving up?” Crystal glared up. Eru had risen to her feet, wrists on her hips. A sly smirk had crawled across her face. “Just gonna say, ‘I failed once, that’s it for me’? Not gonna try again? Okay, you can do that. But first, you’re going to give Dragola back to me, and then, when I bring you home, I’ll have YOU be the one that has to pack all the furniture away while I sip on some ice cold lemonade and laugh as I tell your family what happened. And we’ll move you far, far away from here, far away from Beghta, where you’ll never have to worry about trying to rescue Breeze or Flora ever again.”

Less sarcastic, she kneeled down to face the girl head on. The younger flinched backwards, trying hard to break eye contact. Fury was bubbling within her, yet that plain look in Aeron’s face unnerved her. “…you can’t change the past. No one can. It is locked in place. You have to accept that. I…I know how hard it is to lose someone close to you, to never see that person again. I know. I know the pain of losing. I’ve definitely lost my fair share of battles when I was younger, before I was toughened up by my own teachers. But, if I didn’t suck up and learn from my mistakes, I’d probably be dead right now…or worse.

“…hahaha, I know that this will sound really crazy to you, kid…” she continued, patting her shoulder. “…but you and I? We’re not that different. At all. I was just like you when I was starting out. Only difference is that I grew up in a family that embraced the idea of being a battler openly, but I was still like you are- headstrong and naïve. And that’s how I know what you need.

“You can and will win the next time you battle the Gym Leader. And like hell if you think that I’m not going to force you to train hard for it. If it takes days, weeks, even a month! I’m not going to let you humiliate yourself for something so…menial, so stupid. Got that, Crystal?”

Crystal gulped, unable to look elsewhere. Aeron had a stern grasp on her, her eyes sincere. The lighting aged her face. She glanced down gently for a moment, before gazing at her mentor again, still disheveled in her emotions. Weakly, she finally managed, “I don’t have a choice in the matter…do I?”

“Nope,” Aeron beamed, slapping her on the back a few times. “Now, no more tears! Tomorrow, we will start your training.”

“…so don’t be mad, Aeron, but…”

“Oh god. If you’re about to say what I THINK you’re going to say…”

“How exactly does one-”

“AUGH,” the teacher groaned, planting her face into the palm of her hand before leaving the girl’s side. “…where’s that copy of ‘Pokemon Training for Dummies’…”

* * *​

Before the odd duo, a Ratatta lay unconscious as a result of Freya’s Ember. The evolution of Eevee coolly breathed out an exhaust cloud in the shape of a few rings. “…That’s…that’s it? That’s all you have to do to train a Pokemon? I thought there was some sort of trick involved in it,” Crystal stated in disbelief.

“Deceivingly simple, yet extremely important.” The fire trainer nodded, before tilting her head off to the still-sleeping rat. “Fight against an opponent that has higher speed than anything else, and your Pokemon will learn how to fight faster. Fight against an opponent with stronger attack, and it will learn how to hit harder. Those are the basics as I was taught. Granted, all of this takes a while, but those are the basics of training. We really don’t need to worry about trying to make Dragola faster, as she’s plenty fast, so just battle whatever we can find here. It won’t matter so early on, at any rate.”

The blonde began twiddling her hair again as the Onyx Ball was offered to her. She hadn’t seen Dragola since Aeron made her recall her and give her to the nurse down at the center. Once again she went into deep thought as to how to apologize. A rustle from a nearby bush caught her attention before hand, and she quickly snatched it from her mentor.

“So what do you think that was?”

“Hmm? I’m not sure, really…Freya, investigate.”

Giving a small ‘Tch! Recon duty again…’, the Flareon tip-toed over to the brush on the side of the road. Using great agility, she leapt upwards and landed on the other side. A small, round, blue creature with leaves sprouting from its head tumbled out of hiding onto the road.

“Aw, shizzle, did you gotta do ‘dat, foo’? Here I was, ‘bout to go an’ give mah trainer da’ jump, but noooo, you gots to go an’ get all up in mah grill, fo’ rizzle!” the Oddish spat back at the bushes, shaking her leaves wildly.

Crystal stared dumbly for a moment, before an unstoppable smile crossed her face. “F-Flora?!”

The small grass type shifted about, taking in the sight of the younger trainer. “Oh shizzle! Don’t do dat to dis’ flowah, lady, else I may jump you fo’ real!”

“Flora, is that really you?! Oh my god, is it?!”

“Da one and only purest flowah of da Northside hood! Damn straight, lady!”

At that, Crystal collapsed to her knees, scooping the Oddish into her arms tightly. Her words fell into disarray. Aeron slowly shook her head as she listened to absolute nonsense. “Oh, oh god, Flora…I’m so glad that you’re not hurt and that you got out alright, I am SO sorry for what happened, I couldn’t battle back enough and did they hurt you in any sort of way? What about Breeze? How is she doing?”

“Yo makin’ mah head go ‘round like some foo’ dat just got Seismic Toss’d, girl, slow down for dis weed!”

“You’re not hurt, are you? What about Breeze? Where is she? In the woods?” she attempted to babble slower. Flora shook her leaves at that. A sweet smell leaked out from the crown of the Pokemon’s head.

“Naw, them foos’ ain’t gone an’ got in mah grill. I be fine but dis weed need some zs soon if ya catch.”

“Flora, what about Breeze?” the young girl pressed.

“Man, you got any place I can chill, lady? I be as beat as a Tauros on whoopin’ days…”

“Flora…” Crystal painfully attempted one last time. Her stomach sunk, praying that her Pokemon wouldn’t say what she expected her to. “…what happened to Breeze?”

At last, the radish hopped out of her grasp, gazing into the distance. “Sorry, homes, but when I gots busted outta dat joint, da bird be nowhere near me, fo’ rizzle…”

Once again, the young girl felt like she had been punched in the stomach by a Machamp. She rose to her feet, all excitement gone from her expression.

“…so what was with the kissy-happy lovey-dovey moment gone bad with that Oddish? You’re always leaving me outta the loop when you switch languages, you know…” Aeron whistled gently, eyeing Flora dubiously.

“Well, ah, Flora’s back. That’s Flora, I can guarantee that, one-hundred percent, just with the way she talks. We really only talked once, but I remember the way she spoke, without a doubt.”

“Ah, so if your Oddish was near…”

“Unfortunately…she hasn’t seen Breeze,” Crystal cut the elder off, her gaze distant and locked on some tree far in front of them.

“…oh. Well, I mean, if you found Flora, then maybe Breeze is still out there and safe as well, you know? Either way, this is gonna make your life way easier,” Eru clapped her hands. Freya pounced forward, finally returning to her trainer’s side. A small lick of a flame escaped her mouth as she watched the every eccentric move of the weed Pokemon. “Assuming she doesn’t have her Pokeball anymore, you’ll need to catch her again. So, go on, take out one of the Pokeballs I gave you. Any will do…”

The gifted girl watched as her Pokemon muttered something about the sunlight being too much for her. Shaking her head, she unzipped the Pokeball compartment on her waist. Of the five tiny red and white orbs, she chose one of the precious commodities and clicked the button twice to maximize it to full capacity. “…Hey, Flora?”

“Shizzle?” the poison type responded, tilting her leaves.

“Since…you probably don’t have your Pokeball and all and I think you said you were tired…why don’t you rest inside this one for a while? We’ll head right back to the Pokemon Center…”

“Oh, praise da Legendaries, girl, dat sounds somethin’ blessful!” She leapt at once, teetering over and slapping her leaf against the orb without a further word needed. The red light died within one moment. Aeron gave a small smirk.

“Alright, now we’re in business. Let’s head back to the Center. Afterwards, we’ll start on training. Best be prepared mentally for some heavy training.”

“Okay,” the blonde replied, shrinking the Pokeball and letting it catch on her belt’s magnet. Soon she was by her teacher’s side, and whether she knew it or not, a smile crawled over her face. “…so how long do you think training will take?”

“Given you just got back Flora and probably haven’t trained her…well, closer to two, three weeks max now.”

“T-two weeks?!” the student exploded. I…I suddenly feel faint…

The elder paused, noting her student’s appearance. She grasped her shoulder with a serious frown before dragging her along. “Oh, yes. Two weeks of whipping not only your team, but yourself as a trainer into shape. I’m going to prepare you for all sorts of trouble on the battle field, starting with Sweet Scent, because knowing you, you’d just happily let the scent fog your senses. Oh, two weeks. Joy.”

“Help me,” Crystal whimpered.

* * *​

“Okay, I think it’s time for our supper break…”

Covered in beads of sweat, Crystal immediately sat herself down on a nearby stump in the clearing. She collapsed over it on her stomach dramatically, her breaths as labored as a Pokemon clinging onto consciousness by the skin of their teeth. Both Blaze and Freya faltered with their Flamethrowers as they watched their trainer raise up her hand.

Aeron, too, panted heavily, grunting something about being out of shape as she monitored her heartrate. She disgustingly glared at her student for her overly dramatic display of exhaustion. She ruffled her hair gently before finally allowing herself to sit down.

“Oh, come on. Running a mile isn’t that bad.”

“E-easy for…for you to say…” Crystal breathed out lightly, still fighting for breath. “I…I don’t see why I have to do any training…anyways…”

“Tch! Typical as always,” Eru grunted. “Let me put it to you this way- what if you were in the way of a Surf attack? Or any attack of brutal nature, for that matter? You got to be able to get the hell out of there, and fast.”

“I still don’t see what that has to do with me…”

“Even better…” the fire trainer hesitated, taking a long sip from a water bottle. “…better yet, what if Team Missile was in hot pursuit and I was a mile away?”

“But that’s…”

“No buts with me, kid,” Aeron gave a heavy laugh. “It’s do or die in this world, unfortunately. It’s a very realistic situation. Ahhhh…hah. I think I’m going to go get some firewood. It’s getting late. Might as well spend the night out here, to get you used to that as well. Come on, Blaze, we’ll grab some. Freya, stay with the kid and keep her out of trouble.”

“Always recon duty,” the Flareon grumbled as she wandered over to the passed-out trainer’s side and adamantly stuck her butt down. She glared enviously at Blaze, who simply buffed up his chest.

“Love you too, Freya,” the Charmeleon mocked Umbree, before setting his tail high up in the air and following his trainer. The Eeveelution sneezed at that, before glaring at the still panting girl. Crystal had somehow managed to pull herself to an upright position, and she let her eyes fall onto the fire type. She emptily gazed back at the new trainer, tilting her head gently.

“What are you looking at?” Crystal queried innocently.

“Nothing much, that’s for sure,” Freya snickered gently. She stretched out, mimicking a cat in her movements, before sneezing once more. Soon Aeron and Blaze were out of view. “So how is that egg of Blaze’s doing? Please tell me it’s sunny-side up. That arrogant fool doesn’t deserve a child…”

“Ah, right! The egg…” Crystal noted, gingerly taking off her bag and opening the back. The egg, still wrapped in its many blankets, had not changed, though it did show its liveliness by shaking in the young girl’s arms. With a small smile and a sigh, she rubbed the top of the egg before wrapping it back up and sliding it carefully back into her bag. “Freya, do you have any idea what it will be?”

“Not a clue, nor do I care really. All I know is that it’ll be another fire type…and between Blaze, Centaura, Ty and all of Aeron’s other fire types, I’ve got enough competition to last me a lifetime.” She emptily yawned, stretching her legs again before sitting in a more comfortable manner. “Not that those three are any sort of threat to me, but god, you would think two is plenty in one team.”

“No Arcanum?”

“Arcanum’s cool. She and I grew up together, practically, as Aeron’s second starter. And, we make a vicious double battle team, given we both can activate Flash Fire. She’s the only one, but that’s probably because she knows how to keep her trap shut.”

Second starter…The words stuck in Crystal’s mind as she glanced down to Dragola’s Pokeball. Without a doubt, one could call her that. Yet the dragon hadn’t emerged from her orb, even at her pleading, which not only angered Aeron as they hadn’t been able to train her, but it worried the blonde deeply. “Dragola…” she muttered as she plucked the capsule off her belt and gazed into it. Freya glanced over, yet rose to her paws quickly as gentle footsteps approached. She inhaled, a glow shimmering at the back of her throat, yet it soon died out as Sylvia reached the camp. Crystal looked up with a soft ‘oh’, as she attempted to make herself appear less frazzled from her exercise regimen.

“I heard you were out here. …ah, what a cute little Flareon. Is that your partner’s?”

“Y-yeah,” she nodded gently as Freya wandered over, carefully sniffing the gym leader. Gently Sylvia offered out her hand to the evolved Eevee; Freya surprisingly allowed herself to be stroked for a few seconds before retreating to Crystal’s side. “What are you doing out here?”

“Oh, I was just out on a walk with some of my Oddish,” she beamed gently. As though on cue, one of the little weed Pokemon waddled to her side, gazing up at the rising moon. It sighed in content, only briefly glancing at the Flareon. “…but in all honesty, I was hoping to come and talk to you. Are you okay from a few days ago?”

“For the most part…Aeron’s slavedriving me into submission, though,” she chuckled, a hint of her past breathlessness showing through. Her smile faded as she let her eyes fall to the orb in her hand. “…Dragola’s not doing so well though. She refuses to even come out and look at me…”

The gym leader frowned at that. “First loss?”

“Sorta…It’s been a crazy road for all of us within this last month or so.” Crystal sighed, before explaining all of the events to the grass trainer. Sylvia nodded gently, sitting down beside the gifted girl as she went over everything that had occurred with Team Missile and how she and Dragola had over-psyched themselves for the battle. When the blonde had finished, she found herself twiddling with her hair once again.

“Wow…I know Kira said that you had that gift, but I’d never imagine it to go that far, really,” Sylvia bit her lip, unsure of what to say. “You’re okay, though, right?”

Crystal hesitated at that, leaning back as she gazed at the stars gently. “…to be honest…I don’t even know anymore. I mean, I feel as though I’m only training right now to keep promises to people…everyone but myself. And, I’m terrified of Team Missile. To know that they’re after me, and want to use me as their pawn…”

“It is pretty heavy from the sounds of it…”

“I just made so many promises…to my family, to Aeron, to my Pokemon, and to the one I rescued so long ago…I had no idea it would be so difficult to keep them all. I had no idea it’d end up like this.”

Feeling tears threatening to spring a leak, Crystal bowed her head, allowing her pink bangs to hide her face. She felt Sylvia lightly rub her shoulder.

“Hey…there were two things your sister said to me, that to this day I will always remember.”

Crystal kept her head down, although she tilted her head gently towards the Gym Leader.

“No matter what happens, no matter how hard the circumstances are, keep on smiling. We all have those counting on us to give it our best, be it family, friends, or Pokemon. If we can do that, then surely the negative times will all fade away.

“And, well…never give up. Always give your best where it counts, when it counts. Haha, Kira would kill me if I didn’t give my one-hundred percent against you, so you have to promise to do the same, Crystal! She’s kinda scary when she’s upset.”

“Hahaha, scary’s not the word I would have chosen, but we’ll go with that, because I can’t think of a better one right now,” Crystal gave a small smile. The smile faded when she gazed back to her Pokeball. “…still, I’d like to give it my all next battle with you-”

“Oh, you’re challenging again?”

“Yeah, Aeron’s making me…”

“Haha, I’m sorry…”

“It’s okay, apparently it’s necessary…still, I can’t train Dragola like this. She won’t even come out of her Pokeball…”

“I think I have the solution for that,” Sylvia winked, offering out her left hand after calling the Oddish over to her side. “If I may?”

“Well, I should wait for Aeron to come back technically…Dragola’s her Pokemon, but she’s just loaning her out to me for now…”

“What about that somber serpent?”

Crystal leapt and yelped as Aeron stood behind her, a heavy batch of timber secured on her shoulder. Blaze grunted as he set down a log nearly his size in the middle of the clearing. Suspiciously he eyed the Gym Leader, but not before he and Freya were dismissed by a wave of their trainer’s hands. Giving a guttural sound of her own, the fire trainer let the collection of dead branches fall near the giant log.

“Oh, hi, Aeron, was it?”

“Aeron Gunnar, indeed. Pleased to meet you officially, Sylvia,” the fire trainer nodded and offered out her hand formally.

“Same. Sounds like you’ve been giving Crystal a run for her money…”

“She runs for nothing, I swear…”

“Aeron…” Crystal groaned, still recovering from her heart attack.

“Haha. I didn’t know you had so many fire Pokemon…you must like them, huh?”

At that, Aeron’s polite façade dropped to flat-out nervousness. She rubbed the back of her neck. “Haha, I guess you could call me a fire trainer…”

“And you came into my Gym with them.”

“Whoa, slow down there, Princess, I know there’s a rule for your gym about them, but I have some taste in my fire types. Only Blaze bears an open flame, and I didn’t even have him at the time. I’ve been training them for six years. I think I know what I’m doing.”

Six years…? Does that mean that she started late in training or something like that? Crystal passively noted to herself, but not before allowing herself to be cut off by the Gym Leader. “Still, I may have to press charges…”

“Too bad you have no proof I had any fire types at the time,” Eru hastily countered. “Hey, come on you two, hurry up with the rock gathering, huh?”

“Alright, but rest assured you will not have those two at the least at my gym again, less you want a write-up with the Pokemon League and a fine to attend to.” At that, Aeron let loose a small swear before shoving her hands in her pockets. She twitched at the sound of the Pokemon League.

“Okay, okay, I won’t bring them. Sorry…but what’s up with the Dratini?”

“I was just wondering if I could see her.”

“Ah, yeah, go ahead. Don’t mind me, I’m just gonna work on the fire…or do you want to see my fire permit, too, Ms. Rulebook?”

“I trust you have one, especially with so many fire types to deal with,” Sylvia smiled innocently, before gently picking the ball from Crystal’s hands. Aeron merely grumbled sarcastic nothings as she trumped off to help her Pokemon create a campfire spot with rocks and sand. The blonde expectantly gazed at the Pokeball. “Now, Crystal…if you wouldn’t mind translating a bit for me?”

There was the request again. This time, however, the words didn’t affect her so badly. Still gently playing with her hair, the blonde nodded. I hope Dragola can hear me from the Pokeball, still…

“Hey, Dragola, it’s me, Sylvia…”

“Dragola, Sylvia wants to talk to you,” Crystal echoed, switching languages. The brunette briefly glanced at her, taken aback by how odd it sounded, before continuing.

“Now, I know I’m probably the last person you want to see, but I think it’s important that I said that I’m sorry.” Crystal continued the translation, though expectantly gazed at the Gym Leader. “I probably didn’t make you feel that great when I battled against you. But, given how you haven’t trained, you did astonishingly well out there! You had me worried for a bit with Pinchy. And, well, I know it sounds dumb, but I had fun. But…well, it’s not so fun if you’re feeling so down. Crystal’s really trying for you. If you two can train together for the next time, then I’m sure we can all said that we had fun and truly gave it our all.

“I don’t want you to be upset anymore, okay? You seem like a sweet little girl from what Crystal’s been telling me. And, as harsh as it does sound, Aeron was right when she said that you two couldn’t have beaten me at your current state. You can and will get stronger, perhaps strong enough to beat me…”

“But you have to come out to talk it over, first,” Crystal finished translating. “…please?” she added as an afterthought, gazing deeply at the Pokeball.

The ball stayed still for a moment. “I’ve got a Pokeblock with your name on it,” the sly grass trainer added with a giggle.

At last, the Onyx ball snapped open, materializing the lengthy serpent. Reluctantly Dragola glanced up, pain still in her eyes. “…I am kinda hungry,” she whimpered gently, hanging her head low.

Immediately Crystal gave a small laugh and got up to tend to her friend. Sylvia held her back, if only for a moment to give her the small, pink cube. The blonde quickly unzipped a compartment on her bag as well, removing the last can of lemonade her mother had supplied her with. Getting down on her knees, she shuffled close to the dragon-type. Her purple eyes darted all over the place, unsure of herself.

“Crystal…are you upset at me? For losing?”

“Not at all. I’m just glad I can talk to you again,” she calmly smiled.

“But, I couldn’t do it…I couldn’t beat her…”

“Dragola…you said you would give it your best, right?” The serpent gazed up at her trainer for longer, before glancing down nervously again. “That’s all that matters to me. It really was all my fault this time. I couldn’t give it my all in the battle because I was too headstrong. Aeron and Sylvia are right, as much as it hurts to admit it…but we can win, together, next time.” Trying hard not to squish the treat in her hand, the young girl managed to open the can of lemonade before offering it to the Dratini. “I’m sorry. Are you willing to forgive me, so we can train together?”

Dragola didn’t move, as she looked sorrowfully into her trainer’s eyes. “C-Crystal…” she whimpered, before suddenly gulping down the Pokeblock whole. Both trainers gave a small gasp as the dragon anxiously chugged the lemonade down as though it were her last meal, tail crushing the can as it was finished. A split second later, she leapt into her foster trainer’s arms, tightly hugging her. Tears streamed down her body gently as she clung on for dear life. “T-thank you! I’m, I’m the one that should be apologizing, b-but you’re taking all of the blame, and I don’t know what to say…”

“Promise me something, then,” Crystal gave a small smile, although she felt a small lump in her throat.

“A-Anything!”

“Forgive yourself. We can do it next time, but I need you to be strong for the both of us. I just got some advice from my sister in a subtle way…no matter what, always smile, because others are counting on you. So I need you to be strong for the two of us so we can win this next one, okay?”

The Dratini nodded, burying her face in Crystal’s arms.

“And you can’t cry anymore, okay?”

Again, she nodded.

“So are you ready to train?”

More anxious than ever, she furiously nodded her head, attempting her best to smile for the girl. Crystal, likewise, forced herself to do the same. After petting her head gently, she gazed back to Sylvia, whom had risen to her feet. Her Oddish had already begun wandering back south towards the city. “Haha…thank you, Sylvia.”

“Of course,” she nodded with a smile. Aeron peeked up for a moment from the beginning of the fire. “But next time, I want a match I can brag to Kira about! Train hard, you hear me?”

“Haha, of course. Thank you so much again.” With that, the gym leader made her exit. Both trainer and Pokemon gazed happily at each other, before slinking over to the fire’s side.

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The hot, intense summer sun slowly warmed the air of the morning. Groggily the young girl found herself opening her mouth to yawn for the umpteenth time that day. She nearly shut her eyes, the weight of exhaustion making them feel baggy and sore. Various muscles throbbed from lactic acid buildup with every step she took. A disinterested Aeron noted the trainer’s sleepiness and lightly stretched her arms back.

“Jeez, what’s got you yawning like a Slowpoke praying for some rain to come?” she jeered, poking her student as she took another deep breath.

“You should know,” she bitterly began, rubbing her ribs where she had been prodded. “You were the one that had me running for my life from Blaze and my own Pokemon! Slavedriver!”

“Don’t you forget it, because you’re in for a lot more of that in our journey,” Eru chuckled as she removed a pair of sunglasses from her pack and slid them on her face. The rims were red, bringing out the color of the armbands on her windbreaker. Crystal groaned at the thought. “…so, after two weeks of ‘slave-driving’, do you think you’re ready? We don’t have to go today if you don’t want.”

“No, no, I’m sure I’m ready…” Crystal hastily responded, forcing back another yawn. “Both Flora and Dragola seem more than ready to go, and I guess I can’t blame them…”

“Yeah, I guess so. You have been workin’ pretty hard since we recovered Flora. …I trust Dragola’s forgiven herself as well?”

“Y-yeah. She was really torn about that whole thing. I’m…pretty sure she forgives herself, but I have a feeling otherwise…”

As they rounded the corner, once again the large dome of the Sunrise Gym came into view, along with some of the trees resting inside of the building. The younger faltered at the sight of the coliseum; the last match had been more than rough. Her hand traveled to her belt. The smooth surface of two Pokeballs greeted her touch, and that alone was enough to bring a smile to the girl’s face. Crystal forced her grin to become more apparent, remembering Sylvia’s words of wisdom, regardless of her knees knocking in on one another.

Aeron looked at her student, up and down. “Don’t tell me you’re going to pee your pants.”

“A-Aeron!” she shrieked, swinging a fist at the elder. “Stop teasing me, of course I’m not going to!” Bored, the elder easily fended off her fist and other attacks with one single arm.

“Okay, then prove me wrong. Let’s go back in there and show Ms. Fairy Princess what you got. Remember what I told you, and your Pokemon’s moves.” The younger nodded, but before she could dash towards the greenhouse, Aeron stopped her one last time. “Wait. I’m serious. You can’t keep doing that nervous habit thing. Turn around for a moment.”

Reluctantly, the gifted girl faced away from her mentor. At once, Eru had removed the hair elastic from her bag and spread it over her lengthened fingertips. Gently she pulled just the blonde hair back, before she tied her hair into a low ponytail. “There,” she simply stated as Crystal attempted to fiddle with a few hairs that had begun pulling at her scalp. “Now…I want to see a good battle out there. Let’s go.” After the younger had her hand batted away from her hair, the duo glanced once more at the gym. Crystal forced back another yawn, and reluctantly began the long walk to the arena.
 
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Once again, the young girl felt like she had been punched in the stomach by a Machamp.

Lol that made me laugh. Another great Chapter C_H. I enjoyed this chapter a lot and I can't wait to see Crystal battling again. Lol to Flora talking, she/he sounds like a pokemom on drugs :p
 
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<3 I always liked Flora. The rap speaking Oddish has returned! I saw some character development in Crystal. (Not much, but enough that I can vaguely notice it.)

~NZ
 
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Negative Zero said:
<3 I always liked Flora. The rap speaking Oddish has returned! I saw some character development in Crystal. (Not much, but enough that I can vaguely notice it.)

~NZ

Me too^ she isn't as sullen anymore. I guess she used to being on the run...o_0


Anyways, I liked this chapter. it felt like a recovery the attitude of the story. (suddenly I didn't want to paint myself blue after reading this). So I enjoyed that.

Yay! Eru wasn't (as much of) a jerk!

Good chapter.
 
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At long LAST I never thought that this day would come!!! Chapter 12 ends Part 1 of RQO! YESSS! WOOT! *busts out the party poppers and whizzers!* HECK YEAH, I'M SO READY TO MOVE ON!

As I said before, I had to separate this completely from Chapter 11 due to length and all the rest. (I most definitely wanted to add the two parts at the end; with that in mind, it had to be done.) It feels a good bit less rushed, and for that I am thankful, but now I have broken my hopeful 10-chapter quota. Somewhere down the line I have to take it down to 9 chapters twice. Or something. >>' <<' REGARDLESS IT IS THE END OF THE BEGINNING. I'M MORE THAN HAPPY TO MOVE ON. Part 2 will be a considerable bit shorter, at any rate...

I'm interested if anyone can pick up on the subtle theme that I generally include at the end of each part. Like I just said, it's subtle, and it may not appear in EVERY part, but it is gonna be part of the story. :p

So! Without further talking about the story, I think I'll let you guys handle this for yourselves. GO ON HAPPY READING.

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Chapter 12: Arrival

“You’re back, I see…” Sylvia politely waved as she emerged from her garden a mess once more. Lightly she attempted to wipe away any last bits of dirt from her brownish, loose capris. An earth-covered white tanktop was the next in line to be attempted to be cleaned. An expectant glitter found its way into her teal eyes.

“Yeah,” Crystal fought the urge to bite her lip or twiddle her fingers as she dropped her hand. Okay, Crystal, remain calm…you have this under control…you don’t know what will happen in the battle…

“Ready for our rematch, I take it…? Dragola’s fine?”

“Mmhmm,” she slowly mumbled to answer both questions, feeling her innards take a trip on the nervous roller coaster again. Her eyes shot over to the wooden box holding a few audience members. The fire trainer gazed angrily at her third-empty belt; someone had learned of Freya and Blaze and promptly had her remove the Pokemon from her team. Feeling the aquamarine eyes sitting on her, Eru glanced up, smirked and gave a small thumbs up. Crystal waved weakly back, before turning to the approaching referee. Quickly she shuffled back into place amongst the blue flowers.

“This is an official Beghta Pokemon League Gym match! Gym Leader Sylvia Syrakos has accepted Challenger Crystal Hikara’s challenge for a rematch! The Gym Leader may state the rules of engagement, if it so pleases her,” he nearly repeated himself as he directed each flag with boredom.

“Same as last time, hold items allowed, but beyond that no other items may be used. Okay with you?”

“Yeah…”

“The challenger has accepted the terms of battle! Combatants, please send out your first Pokemon.”

Just calm down…remember what Aeron told you. Just have to remember that… Cautiously her hand ran over each of the two Pokeballs. Flora’s weaker, but she’ll have the upper hand in battle here, according to her. I’m not quite sure how, though… Breaking through her inner monologue, Sylvia rose up her own capsule without hesitation.

“You know, Pinchy’s rather upset that he didn’t even get to show you all the trouble he can cause.” She rotated the ball over and over in her hand, though she herself appeared to be considering what to do. “So…let’s show them you’re not a bug to be taken lightly, Pinchy!”

At last, Crystal plucked the red orb off from the magnet securing it. She rose it up, letting it sit in the palm of her hand. Although her hand felt far more stable now that she knew what to generally expect from the opponent, she still had to ensure to herself she wasn’t about to drop the ball foolishly. “Okay, Flora…if you’re ready, let’s show that bug that we can win this one!”

Within a split second both balls had opened at their trainers’ commands. The Paras had returned to the other side of the field, still appearing as jolly as ever. Flora, however, balanced herself on her two feet awkwardly, her leaves spread and swirling in a half circle gently.

“Psh, I gots to be fightin’ dis wannabe grass foo’? Lady, dis be a piece o’ cake back in dah hood for us homies!” She grinned at last, waving one of her leaves in a come-hither motion to taunt her opponent. Pinchy grumbled a touch, yet fought the urge to counter verbally.

It was Sylvia’s turn to nibble on her lip. Once again, she attempted to pick soil out of her fingernails casually. The referee glanced at both trainers, before lifting his flags.

“Pinchy versus Flora! Round one! Begin!”

“Okay, first thing’s first, Pinchy- use Agility to create a Double Team effect! Don’t let that Oddish hit you!”

“Flora, get in there close and use Absorb!”

The weed Pokemon stumbled over herself as she heard the command. “Uh, whut you be saying, girl?! You be trippin’ or somethin’?!” However, before Crystal had the choice to respond, the grass-bug had a gleam in his eye. He began scuttling from side to side, nearly like a Krabby, his steps faster and faster with each movement. Growling gently, Flora dashed in and rubbed her leaf over the bug once. Even if he shot out of the way after that, a green light emerged from his body and flowed into the leaf the Oddish had extended.

Soon, however, Flora faltered back, cursing as a few duplicates had been shifted into place from the constantly fast motions of Agility; the bug had encircled and trapped his opponent. With little hesitation, the mushroom Pokemon rose his claws high into the air. They shone brightly in the late morning sunlight pouring down from above. Within a split second the claws swept down in unison; Flora cursed wildly as she fought for balance, barely avoiding the attack.

“Wha…but you didn’t even give an order for an attack!” Crystal gasped, playing with a strap hanging loosely from her bag.

“Pinchy knew what he needed to do. Sometimes Pokemon don’t need orders from their trainers if their trainers appear confident enough in themselves to install that sort of trust in their Pokemon.” Sylvia coolly continued to watch the scene. “Keep it up, Pinchy. You know what you need to do!”

“Agh, come on, lady, gimme some sort of order!” Flora howled, her eyes darting back and forth in an attempt to follow the movements of the many Paras before her. Crystal continued to fiddle with her strap as she watched Pinchy preparing Metal Claw again, closing in on the grass-poison type.

“Ah, that’s it! Flora! Spread out your leaves as far as you can and twirl with your Absorb attack to find out which one is the real one!”

“Ah, finally a half-pimpin’ order!” Flora gleamed, taking to a single foot before spinning around rapidly. Her crest leaves flowed out straight, and touched the bug. However, green light was not only sapped from the one point, but from the other four points of the other leaves as well. Confused as to what happened, the Oddish stumbled about, left at the mercy of the Metal Claw. She cried out loud, swearing soon following as the claw gently broke her skin all the way around her body.

“W-wait, what just happened?!” Crystal nervously glanced at her Pokemon; Flora had only the one wound, but it was enough to make the Oddish pant.

“I said Agility, remember? They’re all real,” the Gym Leader chuckled. “Though, that was pretty smart, using Absorb like that. You did hit Pinchy harder that time than before.”

Great, just great…the gifted girl began to chew at a fingernail absentmindedly. Flora barely leapt out of the way of another Metal Claw’s full wrath. The earth beneath Pinchy and his illusions began to slowly erode. What am I supposed to do here? Flora can’t do much, regardless of what Aeron’s said she could, and there’s no definitive way to break his Agility so easily…wait, what’s that?

Her eyes fell onto the ground where Pinchy was scampering about wildly with Agility. As the soil was tossed from side to side, she could make out something that appeared to be a tree root. The gifted girl glanced to her Pokemon; Flora had nearly gone cross-eyed in an attempt to keep up with the Paras.

“Flora! Get out of the circle he has you in and use Absorb on the root Pinchy exposed!”

“Wait, what?!”

A devilish gleam found its way into the Oddish’s eye. With surprising ease she hopped out of a Metal Claw’s way, taking minimal damage from it and fell outside of the circle. Before Pinchy could react, Flora pressed all her leaves down to the root and sucked the root itself upwards with Absorb.

Pinchy, caught completely off guard, tumbled over the root and lost his speed. Landing roughly on the ground, he groaned. Yes! We got him! Crystal immediately began to cheer, yet with a glance to Aeron, she wasn’t so sure. The fire trainer nodded back to the bug Pokemon; after a moment of being stunned, he easily returned to his feet, shaking his head dizzily. What…?!

“I’m surprised you know how to use moves so well. I wouldn’t have thought of Grass Knot being used against me in a hundred years,” Sylvia smiled. “You’ve definitely improved, Crystal! …however, you’re not beating Pinchy this time, especially with grass-type moves.”

“Awright, now lemme finish this foo’ off, lady!” Flora leapt ecstatically as she eyed the Paras. “Lemme get all up in his grill an’ make him wish he ain’t never been born, fo’ rizzle!”

“But…how? He barely seems fazed from all the attacks we’ve managed to get on him…”

Once again, the Oddish tripped forward angrily. “You’s got to be messin’ with dis weed, homey! Let me make that bug lunch on some Acid!”

“Acid?” Crystal murmured gently, watching the bug finally snap back into reality from his trip. “…alright, Flora! If you insist…Acid!”

“Not so fast. Pinchy, get out of the way of Acid fast with your Agility again!”

“Boo yeah, now we’s rappin! Foo’ you goin’ down in dah name of dah hood today!” Flora howled, before dipping her head. The sound of one gathering spit into one’s mouth could be heard from the plant, before she tossed up her head. With eerie precision she let loose the oddly colored saliva straight at the Paras. Pinchy simply scoffed and dashed easily to the side of the attack. Growling, the Oddish continued to use Acid, yet every time the mushroom Pokemon easily sidled out of the way. “Gah, dis ain’t be workin’! Stay still so I can fry you up, Mushroom boy!”

“Pinchy, start with the Agility circle again! You’ve got her close to fainting!” The Gym Leader bellowed. A faint swear could be heard from the grass-poison type as she halted her assault. Within sheer seconds Pinchy was up to speed and had surrounded her again.

“I had dat foo’! I HAD dat foo’!” the radish Pokemon hopped up and down angrily.

This is bad…I don’t think I can let Flora hit again by Metal Claw…there’s got to be…wait a sec… “Flora…” The blonde kneeled down, part of her ponytail sliding over her shoulder. It took everything in her power to avoid playing with the hair. The Oddish bounced over the Paras, drawing nearer, before being surrounded once more. “…Flora, do you think you can take out Pinchy without my commands?”

“Whuzzawhut?” Flora dumbly noted, peering at her trainer queerly. “Whatchu mean?”

“I…I’m going to put my trust in you, Flora, because you seem to know what you’re doing with your moves better than I do. I mean, I can help a little bit, but…”

“…so what be your name again, lady?” the Oddish grunted as she side-stepped a Metal Claw.

“Crystal…?”

“Well, I be damned, because you be Homey-C from now on! You’s part of mah hood for bein’ so smooth to put all dah glory on me like dis to take down Mushroom boy!” Flora beamed, before turning to Pinchy. Her crimson eyes glimmered.

“Homey…C?”

At once, Flora took action; she spread her leaves in a circle again, although as she twirled, a light pink powder seeped out from the crown of her head instead. Immediately Pinchy relaxed, stumbling as his steps became much slower. The Oddish continued pouring out the Sweet Scent, before she began approaching the dazed Pokemon.

“Pinchy, don’t be fooled! If it’s gonna get close to you and actually do some damage, use Leech Life to keep yourself healthy!” Sylvia’s voice began to rise in pitch; she began fiddling with her fingernails more.

“You know what to do, Flora!” Crystal enthusiastically cried, biting her fingernails and her lip. Is this it? Is it gonna be this close?!

Flora stepped from side to side, somewhat dazed from the spinning she had done. The movements angered Pinchy as he attempted to keep up with the teetering dance. At last, the Oddish shook her head clean of disorientation, although her back was to her opponent. The Paras, too, saw the perfect opportunity to strike; he latched on to his rival tightly with his pinchers. Flora cussed loudly as she struggled. A puke green light covered Pinchy as energy was sapped away from the weed Pokemon.

“Gah! Da bug be too tough to jump from hea’!” Flora groaned, struggling wildly to shift around. “Dis may be it, Homey-C!”

“You may want to recall your Pokemon, Crystal. She doesn’t really have a hope of winning right now,” Sylvia offered. Her muscles betrayed her suggestion; her arms were tightly flexed as she fidgeted more and more.

“What dat foo’ be sayin’, Homey-C?! WHAT DAT FOO SAY? RECALL? HAIL no! You do dat, Homey-C, and I be nevah rappin’ wit chu again!”

A small amount of blood leaked into Crystal’s mouth as she peeled a patch of dry skin off her lip. Against her protests, Flora was becoming less and less sluggish in her flailing. She could barely make out Pinchy tightening her grip. Her heart pounded nervously; this was Flora’s last chance to do damage, and even with her trust, she had to say something.

“Flora’s not giving up so easily,” the young trainer spoke with false confidence. Her legs quivered. “Flora! Get him to loosen his grip on you with Sweet Scent, and then leap into the air with that twirl move!”

“Pinchy, paralyze her, quick!”

“What?” the Paras finally spoke, glancing back to his trainer. He tilted his body gently in confusion.

“Oh, shoot-”

“Haha, Mushroom Boy don’t be rappin’ Stun Spore yet, lady!” Flora cackled, using the brief pause to her advantage; spreading her leaves one last time, the pink powder flowed directly down onto the grass-bug. Lazily his eyes flickered back to the fight, though the Leech Life seemed to stop entirely. His pinchers, too, loosened their grip on the weed. At once she took the opportunity to begin her counterstrike. Planting both feet firmly on the ground, she twisted and leapt simultaneously. The dazed Paras was left with no choice but to release his grip. Flora hovered above him in the air for a moment, a heavy smirk ingraining itself onto her face as she was now facing him with her mouth.

“Now!”

“Pinchy, quick, with your Agility-”

The bug could only stare upwards in confusion as the opponent pulled her head back. He rose his body up, legs ready to scuttle as the Oddish was only a foot away from him.

Crystal closed her eyes, wincing at the tension. It’s now or never!

She heard something crash to the ground, followed by the sound of the other Pokemon roughly sliding on the soil a second later. A brief moment quiescence had swept over the greenhouse; it was as though all Pokemon had turned to watch the battle, and had silenced themselves at that minute.

Flags could be heard waving gently in the dead air of the greenhouse. Still, the challenger daren’t open her eyes.

“Pinchy is unable to battle! Round one goes to Flora and Challenger Crystal Hikara!”

At once sky blue eyes shot open. Flora had created a small path in front of her where she had slid after bouncing off of the Paras. Pinchy lay on the ground, eyes crossed, before they closed in defeat. A puddle of the Acid eroded the earth around him, as well as some of his scales. Sylvia watched, breathless, her hand brought to her mouth in shock. “…hoo boy! ‘Bout time dat foo stay down! Boo yeah, how’s about dat, Homey-C?! Dis be dah weed of da game or what?!” Flora panted through her heavy breaths as she shuffled side-to-side in a victory dance. Her enthusiasm belied her true condition; her leaves had nearly wilted over her body in sheer exhaustion.

Still in shock, the Gym Leader strode over to her Pokemon. Gently she picked up the Paras in her arms after the Acid had worn off, gently stroking his undamaged underbelly. She rose up her Pokeball sternly, recalling the bug. A different tone found its way into her voice; Crystal couldn’t discern what it was as she turned around and returned to the red corner. “…I trust you’re not going to switch now, either, regardless of her health as it stands.”

“Haha, probably not,” the challenger nervously laughed as she watched Flora suddenly fight for her balance during her ramblings.

“Very well then…” Suddenly Sylvia turned around, tossing out a Pokeball as she did so. “Chika! It’s on the ropes; avenge Pinchy for his awesome efforts!” she cried in command. At once the Chikorita emerged, staring down the opposing grass type without so much as a flinch. Anxiously the Pokemon swung her crown leaf. Flora assumed her battle stance once more, yet found herself wobbling on her feet.

“Round two! Flora versus Chika! Begin!”

The reaction to the call of battle was swift; immediately the pure grass type shot forward, aimed straight at Flora. Even as Crystal’s Pokemon attempted to shoot out another round of Acid at the opponent, she was too lethargic from all the damage Pinchy had inflicted on her. Chika collided nearly head on with the Oddish, sending her flying back towards her trainer with ease. “Chik-a,” she stubbornly called out as she watched her adversary slide to a stop, unmoving.

“Flora!” Crystal called out at once, rushing to her Pokemon’s side and taking the wilted weed into her hands. Weakly, Flora opened an eye.

“Sorry, Homey-C…I couldn’t…weakin’ dat foo’. …take dat ho down for dis flowa…” With that, Flora relaxed in her arms, completely unconscious.

“Flora is unable to battle! Round two goes to Chika and Gym Leader Sylvia!” the referee quickly waved his flags, then backed off just as hastily. His normal sleepy tone disappeared as he eyed both competitors.

Crystal frowned, yet found her sister’s words ringing in her head. She forced a weak smile to her face as she recalled Flora. “Thank you Flora…you can rest now. I’ll make sure to keep that promise for you, right here, right now…and to fulfill another one in the process.” Sylvia expectantly gazed over, her ever-innocent smile still on her face. With a few steps, the blonde returned to her battling square. With less hesitation, she unhooked her remaining Pokeball, and held it before her. “…now, it’s all up to you, Dragola! Let’s both give it our all!”

The black ball gave a small shake of anticipation before snapping open suddenly. The serpent wearing a small cloth around her neck took to the scene, calmly staring down the Chikorita, before faltering back a little. Worried, she glanced back to her trainer. Crystal blinked, slightly surprised, before giving her best smile for the dragon type and reassuring her with a fist pump. At once the Dratini nodded, and gave an enthusiastic smile back before facing Chika. Sylvia simply waited.

“Round three! Dragola versus Chika! Final round! Begin!”

As soon as the flags had been swept down, both trainers leapt into action.

“You have to make it slower, Dragola, else we’ll have Pinchy version-two-point-oh all over again! Thunderwave!”

“Chika, evasive maneuvers with Vine Whip! Don’t let it paralyze you!”

At once the rare Johto Pokemon leapt up into the sky, three of her vines uncurling as she quickly dashed off to the side on them. The arch of static electricity barely avoided her as she soared forward to Tackle down the opponent.

A little more confidently, Crystal shouted. “Now! Catch it in a Twister!”

Sylvia gasped, befuddled as Dragola suddenly used her crazy speed to twirl around rapidly. Her body glowed a light blue for a moment as air began circulating, quickly forming into a funnel. Chika tried to back out of the attack, yet was caught in the tornado with a cry. Crystal winced, trying to hold her ground as the wind picked up various stones, branches and leaves and brought them into the Twister. The wind soon turned a dull brown from all the material picked up within it.

“Combo into Wrap!”

As soon as Dragola finished rotating in her circle, she gazed at the funnel created by her energy. Precisely she leapt into the mini tornado, flying up on the air currents to meet Chika head on. Manipulating the wind further, she curled tightly around the grass type.

“Chikaaa!” the leaf Pokemon cried out desperately for her trainer as Dragola delved into the more debris-ridden part of the Twister. While she, too, was pelted by some stones, she used Chika’s own body to shield herself from the blunt force of the attack.

“Extremespeed!”

Giving an affirmative cry, the serpent suddenly disappeared from the already clouded attack. Seconds later a thud could be made over the sound of the dying winds. The offensive Pokemon soon re-emerged on the challenger’s side, smiling excitedly back to her trainer.

With the twister gone, it was clear that Chika was flat on the ground and unmoving. Her eyes were squinted shut, and her vines were tensely knotted beneath her. The referee moved to raise his flags as he opened his mouth, yet Sylvia raised her hand.

“This is far from over.”

Reassuring her trainer, the small grass type shot her crimson eyes open suddenly. She violently shook off the debris clinging to her as she bounced right back. Crystal gaped, astonished.

“Chika is a grass Pokemon…and like most grass Pokemon, she knows how to take a hit. We’ve specifically trained against bird-type moves like Gust, as well, and we’ve further been able to decrease the damage taken by using Vine Whip as a sort of shock absorber from any free-fall. Like I said, this is far from over.

“Chika! On the offensive now, with Body Slam!”

Still shocked, neither Crystal nor her Pokemon could manage a word as the grass type shot forward and slammed her body down onto Dragola’s tail. The little dragon cried out as she attempted to struggle away. In her flailing, she noticed the scarf come loose from around her neck and a blue berry roll to the ground.

“Wha- Chika, get that-”

Far too late, the challenger gleefully thought as Dragola shot her head forward and mashed the berry in her mouth. She hastily swallowed before being thrown to the side by Vine Whip. The dragon-type landed comfortably, her wounds beginning to disappear within seconds. Still, she can’t take another attack or two from that. It’ll be too much…

Sylvia shrugged it off. “Chika, take this moment to heal yourself, too! Synthesis!”

Although Crystal could not see it, Aeron frowned deeply. Giving a confident smile, the Chikorita unfurled all of her vines as well as laying out her head leaf. As the sunlight poured down onto her, the debris wounds began to fade away.

“Oh, shoot-” Crystal fought to think quickly. “Dragola! Stop it at once with Extremespeed!”

Dragola had already vanished from few when the first syllable of the attack had been pronounced. Caught in her meditative stance, nothing could be done for Chika as Dragola appeared right on top of her leaf, tail first. She immediately slammed her down into the earth, trying her best to cover the leaf up.

“Counter it, Chika! Slam it into the ground with your Vine Whip!”

“Before it’s too late- Thunderwave!”

“Wait, no!”

The order had been issued; Dragola allowed herself to be thrown to the ground, yet forced the jolt of electricity to be discharged to the Chikorita through her vines. Chika cried, stumbling back with a shudder.

Anxiously, Crystal considered the situation at hand; Dragola looked slightly weary from the second slam attack, yet Chika was hardly better off. I may not be able to beat her if I don’t think of something, and fast. Sylvia said it could just recover from a free-fall, so unless I can do something about that Vine Whip…

The lake flashed before her. Crystal’s eyes widened gently as Dragola swiped emptily at the bean-sprout Pokemon before receiving a few whips. That’s it! It’s risky…but I have no choice!

“Go in for the final attack, Chika! Vine Whip to Body Slam!”

Wait for it…

Dragola glanced back and forth between her trainer and the suddenly paralyzed Pokemon. It wouldn’t be long before the paralysis wore off…

“If I can catch Sylvia off guard…” she whispered out loud, watching as the Chikorita took to the skies, flying right towards the serpent. She whined, backing up slightly.

“Finish it! Now!” Crystal suddenly repeated Sylvia’s same words at the same time. Dragola saw the spark in her trainer’s eye, and proceeded to whip up another Twister just in time to stop the Body Slam from becoming truly dangerous. The two disappeared into the storm; once again Dragola tightly wrapped herself around the grass type and sunk lower into the air funnel.

“Chika, get ready with your vines! You can win this!”

“Dragola! You can’t let go this time!” the challenger cried, watching as she spun in the high wind currents. Dragola appeared nerve-ridden, yet still nodded, gazing down to her opponent.

“Now! Extremetree!”

Crystal could make the sound of something falling over in the distance. Seconds later she could make out the sound of Aeron howling in laughter. However, the blonde didn’t falter; she simply stood as encouragingly as she could for the dragon as she shot out from the Twister in a circular motion.

BAM! Both Pokemon suddenly reappeared after slamming harshly into the tree. Sylvia gasped wildly as Chika and Dragola fell to the ground, the latter collapsed over the former. While the grass type bore more signs of damage, the serpent didn’t move.

Silence.

Crystal closed her eyes. “Please, Dragola, get up…” she whispered weakly, unsure if she could take the suspense.

As she opened her eyes, she noted the dumbstruck referee shake his head gently. “Ah, it seems that neither Pokemon are able to…”

Sylvia had risen her hand once again. Her eyes fell to her Pokemon. “Come on, Chika…You can do it…”

Both watched in silence as there was movement.

Dragola rose her weary head up, shaking off some of the debris gently as she untangled herself from the grass type and wobbled her way back to the ring.

Still, there was no movement from Chika.

Crystal’s heart swelled with excitement and joy as the announcer continued. “Chika is unable to battle! Final match goes to Dragola! Challenger Crystal Hikara wins the game!”

A second after the last words had left his lips, Dragola gave a small smile to her trainer before collapsing down onto the ground. Immediately the victor rushed over, a stupid grin plastered over her face.

“Dragola! We did it! You did it! Are you okay?! We won!” she excitedly clamored, hugging the panting Pokemon firmly.

“We did, huh…?” Dragola weakly cooed, allowing herself to be snuggled tightly.

Aeron leapt from the spectator’s box and sprinted down to her student’s side, a satisfied smirk on her face. The fire trainer only glanced back for a moment to gaze at the defeated party; Sylvia tenderly scooped up the fainted Pokemon in her arms, muttered something to her, before recalling her. She gazed back at Crystal and happily pet her on the shoulder. “Good work, kid. That was one heluva match right there.”

“Haha, thank you,” the blonde beamed, before she noticed Sylvia approaching. The smile had disappeared from her face. Sympathetically, she rose to her feet, trying not to smile too much. “…hey, that was a great game. You nearly had us there for a little bit,” she offered.

At once, Sylvia broke into a smile. “Yeah! That was definitely fun, Crystal. Thank you for that. I definitely enjoyed myself, which is something I can’t easily say to each match I get. Ah…” she muttered quietly to herself, before searching her pockets. “Well, you defeated me, fair and square, as they say. As first member of the Gym Leader Association of Beghta…” Crystal’s heart beat faster as a small, silver and green pin was brought into sight and extended forward to the girl. A thousand-dollar bill along with some change rested beneath the shiny object. “I hereby claim defeat and bequeath to you the Nature Badge, as well as some victory money.” She smiled wider. “Take it. You’ve earned both.”

“Hahaha…thank you so much, Sylvia…” the gifted girl laughed, picking up the pin and pocketing the money. She looked over the badge; outlined in silver, two different greens formed the symbol of a wavy leaf. She clung on tightly to it, still hugging her Pokemon.

“And thanks to you, Crystal. Now I can tell your sister that I honestly lost to you without feeling guilty, haha,” the gym leader giggled heartily. “Well best of luck on your adventures. I’ll be sure to let Kira know all about our match!”

“Haha, yeah! Thanks, good luck with all of your gym stuff too, Sylvia-”

A bump in Crystal’s back nearly caused the girl to stumble forward. She quickly glanced behind her, then to Aeron. The elder rose her eyebrow, folding her arms in confusion. Another motion caught her off guard. “What the…”

“Something the matter?”

“I dunno, something keeps hitting me in the back or somethi-there it is again!” Crystal spun around, still not seeing anything. The fire trainer’s eyes lit up suddenly with a small smile.

“Kid, the egg…” As though psychic, Eru opened her arms to take both the Dratini and the badge momentarily.

“Ah, right!” the blonde muttered, slipping her bag off within seconds and pulling out the wiggling bundle of blankets. Cautiously, she peeled back the layers to see small black cracks running through the surface of the shell. The young trainer nearly leapt back as a sharp tap could be heard on the egg from within. Parts of the shell began to flake off as the little embryonic fluid seeped into the blankets. Soon there was a small hole just large enough to let the sunlight into the egg for one to see. Crystal peeked down into the egg.

The egg suddenly exploded, bits and pieces flying this way and that. The gifted girl winced, still holding onto the egg during the barrage. She could hear Aeron giving a small swear before she laughed gently. Finally, the egg shell attack died down. A sudden ‘d’awww’ could be made out from the eldest trainer before the sound of cheeping greeted Crystal’s ears.

Gingerly, she opened her eyes. Sitting in the blanket was not an egg, yet a fluffed-up bundle of orange and yellow down. The remaining liquid quickly evaporated off of the chick’s body. Slightly tired, the newborn slowly opened its eyes; they were a deep sapphire, and seemed to acknowledge the girl right away as her trainer.

“…good morning,” she sung gently, leaning forward towards Crystal and attempting to snuggle up to her with a shiver. The rest of her words were muttered and in disarray.

“Hi, haha…Aeron, what is she?”

“Awww, it’s a Torchic…man, Blaze just HAD to give you the ONLY fire type I didn’t have!” the fire trainer groaned, yet still couldn’t resist petting the small bird with her finger. “Sorry, this is kinda ridiculously cute right now.”

“Pity, though, that she hadn’t hatched a day sooner, though. I would have been in real trouble then!” Sylvia chuckled. She, too, crowded around the fire type.

“…that’s riiiiight,” Crystal whimpered, hanging her head as she noticed the irony of the situation.

“Ah, who the hell cares? You got your badge anyways! It’s time to go PARTY! Bill’s on me, of course,” Aeron beamed, before adding, “So long as you nickname her Flare for me.”

“Flare, huh…” The Torchic meekly opened her eyes at the name.

“Blazeburst later, okay…?” she cooed, before falling back to her slumber again. “Flare is nice though…”

“Okay, Flare it is. That’s a cute name,” Crystal beamed, before realizing the situation again. She only could groan for a moment before Aeron slapped her on the back excitedly.

* * *​

A man that seemed to be in his later thirties glanced at his watch as the city of Saffron filled his view. Stepping out of the train station was more of a relief than anything to him. His beard was gruff, graying from its dull black, and already he had begun to go bald. Wearing a thin jacket over bulky yet thin clothes, he resituated his massive form and blinked from the bright sunlight. The underground bit of travel on the Magnet Train was less than pleasant on the eyes.

At once he began to stride along, perfectly melding in with the vast majority of people. No-one gave him a second glance; everyone had more important things on their mind at that time, suck as work, dates, or children. It made the man’s life easier, at any rate. He had gone a few blocks in the dirtied city before he came across a tiny coffee shop shoved between two larger stores. Reassured immediately that this was his destination, he hastily entered. A small set of bells emptily rang in his mind as he stepped into the shop.

It was far from occupied; only one other customer was present in the store besides himself. The décor screamed European culture, with various vines and distinguished artwork making its tacky appearance. Within seconds of entering, he found himself greeted by the single employee of the building.

“Good afternoon, sir. Is there anything I can help you with?”

As the large man turned to him, he lightly scratched his beard before giving a short, sarcastic ‘ha’. “Good mahn,” he gruffly noted with a heavy Russian accent. “I’ll take the blackest, strongest coffee you have.”

“Right away, sir!” the employee smiled politely, before turning away. The Russian man peered around further, continuing to thumb his beard, before his beady black eyes fell upon the only other customer. The lady in question was sitting cross-legged, a tiny cup of expresso being held by her ring finger whilst she read through a copy of Central Kanto NOW!. A lighter rested on the table beside her. Occasionally she would scribble something on the magazine, before casually swiping her strawberry blonde hair back or readjusting her glasses.

Casually, the man meandered over to the table near her. A copy of the Saffron Times had been carefully placed on the table, folded over neatly. Giving a grunt, he let himself sit down, before picking up the newspaper.

“Finire omnium significare anime,” the woman suddenly muttered, low enough for the employee not to hear, before taking a small sip from the cup on her finger.

The man, again, gave his short satirical laugh. “Ah, ah, salve, Fenix Igneus. Your Latin has become quite well in time.”

“Thank you, Fenix Aeternus, for your kind words,” the woman gently laughed, making sure to keep her voice down as she put down her cup of coffee. She scribbled away at the magazine, her steely cobalt eyes darting behind her as the coffee slave brought the man a tall cup of the black hell. After he had left, she continued. “I shall be straight to the point. I have been a tad…unsuccessful in tracking Fenix Solus as of late.”

“You know how that makes me feel. Proditor,” he scoffed quietly before swigging the burning hot liquid down. “Ahhh, this is very well.”

“I was correct in thinking Solus had fled from our grasp. Solus definitely made a return here.” Idly, as though attempting to make it appear as an accident, she swiped the magazine casually. “…oops.”

The man noted the subtle bend in one of the magazine’s pages. Glancing to the lady, he gave a small smile before picking it up and examining the tabloid’s articles. He rose an eyebrow, recognizing the person in the outrageous article at once. Politely, he handed it back, before resuming his spot. “So Solus was here.”

“Yes, Aeternus. Some truth always stems from these sorts of articles. But, better yet, I have received word from that nequissime Lothar that Solus has been spotted in Beghta, not too far from here.”

He had been gulping his cup of coffee, before he paused. “Fenix Ira, huh…? Hah. That man too headstrong,” he grunted, turning a page. “He has not attacked yet?”

“A fool he may be, yet he knows of our true goal. He awaits Ultimus’s response.”

“…I see. I shall let Ignacio know. Is Solus stationary?”

“No. Solus is always moving. Aei…it was difficult to track our little piece of filth. Solus went under a different alias, one that he hadn’t let us know of.”

Something about that made the man boom with laughter suddenly. He shook his head, sipping at his coffee again. For safety, he had folded over to the comics page. “Smart,” he coolly remarked below his breath.

“Yes. We are certain the target is Solus, though. Canem…Ironic of one thing or another, though-”

“Serafina…durate et vosmet rebus servate secundis,” the man coldly muttered. “There will not be more on the subject.” Indifferent, Serafina sipped at her expresso, turning the page of the tabloid resting on the table before letting it drop to the ground again. “I shall speak with Ignacio. Keep in touch with that nincompoop. Tell him ‘videbimus’ if he questions whether to strike. He knows not to disobey us.”

At that, the man finished his cup in one swig, flicked out his bulging wallet from his gigantic pocket, and planted more than plenty for the coffee plus tip underneath the mug. Casually he rose to his feet after bending down. For once, Serafina rose her eyes to fully focus on the man.

“I shall do as you instruct, Fenix Aeternus.”

“Very well, very well,” he concluded with a harrowed smile. “I must leave now. Stupid train departs soon to Johto. Do be swift with that lighter.”

“Of course,” she nodded gently, her own smirk widening as she eyed the seemingly innocent device on the table. “Omnia ut fortiora crescant perurenda.”

“Omnia ut fortiora crescant perurenda…” Aeternus coldly whispered with a head tilt. Chills ran through the store as he left from his last words.

As the man boarded the Magnet Train, he smiled as he glanced over the tabloid he had slipped underneath his jacket. “Solus…we shall meet again soon.”

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...BUMBUMBAAAAH! And with that, Part 1 of RQO: Beginnings has come to its close. There are obviously so many questions left in store for all of you to be answered later on...how did Crystal get her powers? What dark secrets does Aeron harbor? Team Missile...what is their exact mission? Who leads them? And what of these two mysterious figures, set on either bringing back one 'Fenix Solus' alive or dead? What do they have to do with this story?!

All this and more, in the continuing story of Rose Quartz and Onyx! Hold onto your spats, kiddies, because this is gonna get to be a rough ride. Hoo boy! *flails*

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ANYWAYS, this is your last chance to get any new questions in, folks! Be them silly, serious or just strange (pancakes, I'm looking at you, bacon), get them in to me! And I'll see what I can do for you all in answering as many as I can. :3 Feel free to ask the same question someone else has asked that you desperately want to know, btw. The more people ask, the more urgent I know the question to be answered will be!

...in other news, I'll be preparing for the RQOcast in the next meanwhile. RQO will have very few updates for a while, but the RQOcast will have OODLES of goodies in it, rest assured. :D So I guess kinda sorta unofficial hiatus for now. I just want like 5-6 chapters of buffer before I start posting Part 2, that way I can concentrate on stuff like THAT ONE WRITING GUIDE AHEM...and maybe kicking back and playing some Animal Crossing or something.

Yep. Cue long discussion time. Also feel free to punt some theories back and forth about the characters. I may even feature the best 'LOL' theory in my RQOcast, so DO IT. Also silly short stories are welcome, like something about Extremetre-er, the Gym Leader Extremespeed or pancakes. I love getting fan feedback, even if completely sattirical in nature. I can whole-heartedly laugh at my work! :3 So don't be shy. The RQOcast will be mainly Pg-15 as a warning. It's hard to curb my tongue, so outlandish stuff IS welcome. Just no like hardcore smut and we'll be fine. >> << AH HA HA HA...
 
RE: Rose Quartz And Onyx- The Revival

Wow...
That was amazing Crystal!

Things I liked:
-Eru wasn't a jerkface in the end! YAAAY!
-Crystal won the second match! YAAAY!
-Sylvia was a good sport! YAAY!
-Torchic, my favorite fire pokemon!YAAAY!

Things I didn't like:
-Nothing! YAAAY!

-aggs

PS:
Did I forget to mention that this chapter made me feel awesome?
(unlike some other chapter that made me want to stab myself they were so depressing...o_0)
 
suck as work, dates, or children.

:3

No hardcore smut?? psh I am so outta here- Uh, I mean, good, good. Let's keep it family friendly!

THE BURNING QUOTE I SAW IT ABOUT BURNING AND THE NUMBER ONE? UH.... Yeah.

Also did I miss the Extremetree joke because I don't get it :[
 
Pssh, Extremetree isn't as fun when Crystal's not nervous :(

I will do a proper comment on this later, PMJ stole the one thing I noticed on the way through. One thing I would've found funny though is, after the Dragola/Chiko fight, if Dragola poked Chiko to see if there was any response. As if to cement her victory :p
 
Coming out of my lurker corner to say: I'M GLAD YOU FIXED THE PORK-BUN PART. SO, SO GLAD. BUT I'LL STILL MAKE FUN OF YOU ABOUT IT FOREVER.

I'm looking forward to more, as always. :3
 
aggiegywn: Yaaaay-*shot* And emoness it is necessary. ;D

PMJ: ...AFK gonna go talk to my proofreader. >0 Why does h and k have to be so close and look so much alike it is sickening. D:
Also lol. Yes, that one quote about something or other. Shush yourself on that for now. We got to keep the little 'uns entertained in the low light. ;D
Explained through chat. For those who were not aware, Crystal accidentally said 'Extremetree' in Chapter 7. It was meant as a one-time thing but I wanted to use it one more time to show Crystal is kinda sorta aware of what she's doing.

gamercal: Apparently Aeron disagrees with you, good sir, the way she fell over and cracked up. ;D
And yeah, I think it was more important to get Dragola back into the ring. I dunno- I wouldn't have been so concerned, especially if I knew what was at stake with the match. It just wouldn't have fit in my opinion.

Kiyo: CHIKORITA IS SUCH A YUMMY PORKBUN THOUGH LIES LIES LIES!
You better look forward to more at any rate >0

Again, I have no idea when I'll be ready with the RQOcast, so PLEASE ask questions if you have any!
 
Please do not post in threads that have not been posted in for two weeks or longer.

Crystal: PM me if you want this opened :p
 
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