Writing Round-Robin Contest II (Congratulations, Unique Username!)

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Yeah, but I guess I should've been clearer about that. In any case, don't feel too bad because I'm only just starting to make headway on my own entry.
 
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I have to agree. I'm finding the story extremely hard to follow, not just that its in present tense, but because I have no clue where to go from there. I keep second guessing myself on what the beast should be like, and I can't make up my mind. TFO, why couldn't you have provided more description on what it was...:( I know the point is to make your own addition to the story based on what you think it should be like, but I feel at a loss for ideas. Well, time to start procrastinating and start working, I suppose.
 
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I am currently finished my entry. I am lightly editing and revising until it is satisfactory. I found it incredibly easy to write an addition to the story – then again, I could just have an overtly vivid and/or strange imagination (chuckles).

@Dark Void - I believe it isn't absolutely mandatory for an entry to be in present tense, though it would be considered ideal.
 
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Dark Void said:
I have to agree. I'm finding the story extremely hard to follow, not just that its in present tense, but because I have no clue where to go from there. I keep second guessing myself on what the beast should be like, and I can't make up my mind. TFO, why couldn't you have provided more description on what it was...:( I know the point is to make your own addition to the story based on what you think it should be like, but I feel at a loss for ideas. Well, time to start procrastinating and start working, I suppose.

Because it was supposed to be a mystery~

Unique Username said:
I am currently finished my entry. I am lightly editing and revising until it is satisfactory. I found it incredibly easy to write an addition to the story – then again, I could just have an overtly vivid and/or strange imagination (chuckles).

No such thing as an overly vivid imagination when it comes to writing.

I shall enjoy reading all of these entries. Make sure to triple check for grammar issues please. I've been known to stop reading something because there was a misuse of the word "their" :3
 
RE: Round-Robin Contest II (Signups Begin Now!)

It is open ended. Be glad you have leeway with it.

We are done with that topic.
 
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I'm just a terrible procrastinator when it comes to getting things done right after having done something else. During the last round, I didn't start my entry until just after I received Zorua's a few days after the contest began. I didn't take ideas from him (mind you), but I usually work better once a little pressure's been applied like that. I guess that's just my thing since I'll be the only one to see who wrote what ahead of time and the fact nobody has gotten anything in yet has made me feel lazy about doing this.
 
RE: Round-Robin Contest II (Signups and Submissions still taken!)

Minor update!

After struggling between three different continuations, I've made the decision to drop out of this round. Fact of the matter is that I can come up with a beginning or a story idea on the fly, but I can't continue one that's already been set up to save my soul.

Also, due to the meager turnout thus far, I've decided to drop the required number of entries down to four so that it's still a contest even if some others dropout or nobody new joins before a due date is assigned.

In any case, I currently have received the first entry and await others. Thank you in advance for those who do continue on with this contest.
 
RE: Round-Robin Contest II (Signups and Submissions still taken!)

I'm bumping this to remind people that sign-ups are still open and that I'm still accepting submissions. Currently, I've recieved only two, and I would like to get at least four before I set an official deadline.
 
RE: Round-Robin Contest II (Signups and Submissions Taken until 12/28/11)

I hate to say it, but enough is enough. After long consideration, I'm going to be instituting fixed due dates from here on out. All submissions are due by December 28. I understand that it's Christmastime and that everyone has other obligations, but I should have had more than just two submissions by now or at least notifications why people have chosen to remain signed up despite not getting anything in. If the time comes and the two current entries are all I have, they'll be the only ones posted for judging.

After this round, expect serious changes to the rules in an attempt to make things a little easier on people (such as having the minimum requirement dropped down to 250 words instead of 500, as well as this being changed to a monthly contest so people don't forget about it completely since the timescales are drawing on too long, which may be why nobody new has entered or gotten submissions in).
 
RE: Round-Robin Contest II (Signups and Submissions Taken until 1/4/12)

After some critical thinking, I've decided to extend the deadline another week due to this being the holidays. I know it probably won't mean anything if the remaining contestants don't get their works in at all, but right now I'm honestly not in the mood to have my Inbox potentially flooded with ballots when I won't have a lot of computer-based Internet access until next week anyways.
 
RE: Round-Robin Contest II (Signups and Submissions Taken until 1/4/12)

I'm slightly disappointed. I was really looking forward to this round and seeing what people would come up with. Oh well. :(
 
RE: Round-Robin Contest II (Signups and submissions closed!)

Okay, I decided to change it back! I actually recieved a third entry this morning, so I'm closing any new signups. I'll accept entries from the two remaining entrants up until 3:00PM. Otherwise I'll have the other three submissions posted sometime after that.
 
RE: Round-Robin Contest II (Signups and submissions closed!)

Important update!!! Due to the poor turnout, all entrants who submitted works must vote (at the very least) or face disqualification!

1.
The mysterious creature looked like a large, greenish-brown lizard with red eyes. With its extended claws, it walked slowly to a nearby house and hissed. The lizard was one of the Legendary Eldest. It wanted to destroy all light and hope. However, the lizard had slept for so long, it couldn't remember what it wanted. The lizard confusingly looked around.

However, the lizard was hungry. It quietly crept into the house. There was nobody there but a whimpering dog, who had been frightened by the lizard. With all his courage, he walked up to the lizard.

"Beast, please spare me, for you are a predator. Instead, I will aid you in the search for food. I can also help you hunt," the frightened dog begged.

The lizard confusedly looked at the dog. The lizard growled, then hissed. It nodded its head. The dog barked in excitement, and ran off with the beast. The beast stomped away from the house, unaware of the danger that lurked beyond the outlines of the house's yard.

Darkness was falling. The mysterious creature and the dog ran to a deer that had fainted while the beast was roaring. The lizard finished eating its meal, then walked until they stopped at a lake.

Only it wasn't a lake.

The twosome started to drink the water, but they vanished.

A person who was watching gasped in shock. Slowly, this human walked to the lake and drank the water. But he didn't vanish. So the human drank the water again.

But he vanished. He was never seen again. Not even in heaven. Nobody saw him again.

Meanwhile, the lizard and the dog were trapped in a crystal chamber. The lizard looked at the crystals. They seemed to be shaped in a pattern. They seemed to shine, as if aware of the lizard's knowledge. The Eldest knew many things. This pattern looked somewhat famliar, although the lizard couldn't say where it came from. The lizard was in a cloud of thoughts. What is it? Where did it come from?

Yes, the lizard didn't remember the pattern or what it meant. It only knew that it was a message. A message to the Eldest. It had been important for the Legendary Eldest to send a message. The world would be in big trouble if the Eldest didn't respond soon.

The Eldest knew it had to do something. So it breathed fire on the crystals. The crystals began to shake.

Until the monster came.

It came roaring, with its green eyes focused on the Eldest. It pressed its huge and green claws. The beast was a evil, black tiger much larger than the lizard. The lizard and the dog stared in horror as the beast came closer. The dog blinked, and fell over, dead from fright.

It had been too late. The fate of the world would come to a end. Not afraid to fight back, the Eldest breathed hot, blazing, red fire at the tiger. Suddenly, the tiger disappeared. Its black fur had made it hard to spot in the darkness. However, the blazing fire caught fire of its fur. The tiger screeched, and its claws dug into the Eldest's scales. The lizard roared and escaped into a exit. The tiger looked around. The Eldest was gone.

The lizard couldn't see in the pitch-black darkness of the tunnel. It was very damp and mossy. The Eldest wasn't used to this. Suddenly, with one step, the lizard couldn't touch the ground anymore. The Eldest roared as it fell. The roar echoed across the darkness.

2.)
The creature continued to perch on the roof, its jaundiced claws easily sinking into the soft cedar wood. Its macabre shadow pervaded the lustrous arc of the moon, the pearl sphere fractured by a phalanx of scabrous scales and notched barbs. The tips of its obsidian quills blended seamlessly against the twilight sky, its silhouette perfectly camouflaged amidst the midnight tapestry. The creature languidly flexed its sable barbs, the angular spikes mimicking withered autumn leaves as a brisk wind caressed its spine. It luxuriated in the splendour of its restitution, ascending its calculating glare beyond the pristine fields of golden wheat.

The merciless predator vigilantly surveyed its domain, its crimson scowl piqued by a city fabricated within the sanctum of a slumbering mountainside. Its silhouette harboured a soft glow, the craggy contours embellished by golden flakes of light. The creature cackled malevolently, slowly prying apart its curtailed jaws. 'What a perfect night for a moonlit slaughter...' it voicelessly purred, delighted by its promising discovery. Insatiable hunger ravaged its stomach with an instinctual urge to devour sweet, succulent flesh. The beast smiled maliciously, hungrily tracing its mauve tongue over its broken fangs. It crouched low on its haunches, adjusting its spines as it feverishly thrummed its talons upon its wooden roost. It precariously balanced on the truss, glimpsing upon the fertile earth as it prepared to conquer the six metre plunge.

A serpentine chain suddenly lashed beyond the midnight veil, swiftly ensnaring the beast by its curved neck. A brusque jerk yanked the creature backwards, its throat constricted by steel vertebrae. The beast released a gurgling snarl, its claws clumsily sliding upon the shingled roof. It hastily glimpsed toward a weather vane, snatching the oxidized ornament with its tail and utilizing its fury to snap the metal shaft. It hurled the compass directly into the void, the device crashing inside a mysterious black mist and vanishing beyond existence. The chain was abruptly abandoned by its wielder, collapsing into a lifeless coiled braid. The demon slowly regained its balance, narrowing its carmine eyes as it glowered into a hollow oblivion. 'There's no one else here...?!'

A crooked blade plunged betwixt its onyx scales, an aquiline thorn protruding out of its chest. The creature relinquished a guttural roar, black blood oozing down its scaly chest like viscous oil. It viciously whirled around and smashed its barbed tail against the vindictive assailant, the unknown entity dissolving into charcoal smoke. Inertia drove its tail into the roof, its jagged prongs embedding into shingles, tar and wood. The beast growled in frustration, wresting its barbs out of the debris. It tenderly clutched its wound as searing anguish gnawed at its vulnerable flesh, billows of painful heat seizing its muscles. Whoever this adversary was, they liked to strike hard – and fast.

A tenebrous mist slithered past its feet, gossamer tendrils licking its ankles like a nightmarish flame. The demon shivered violently, the ghostly vapour like the embodiment of winter. 'A ghost...?' it silently mused, watching the obsidian cloud accumulate. The creature gingerly sniffed a fibril of drifting mist, recognizing its pungent scent. It reeked of death and decay, a copper musk clinging to every particle. 'A vampire...' The beast nervously clacked it talons together, feigning intimidation as it watched the swirling nebula. Ethereal fronds solidified into various appendages, a man emerging beyond the smouldering crests. His pale complexion was accentuated by the moonlight, his sable tresses kissing his statuesque shoulders. His scarlet irises harboured a stoic expression, although his arrogant smirk and glinting fangs betrayed his austerity.

“Who are you...?” The demon inquired with a scrupulous hiss.

“Ivan Faust.” The vampire callously fished out his gun, cocking the hammer with an ominous click. “Your executioner.”

“You cannot win, bloodsucker.” The creature growled, its spines erecting in ire.

“Oh, I beg to differ.” Ivan retorted, tracing a fingertip along his pistol. “Three-hundred years ago, your gluttonous escapade nearly exterminated my species. You greedily devoured everything in your path, and left nothing – not even a single drop of blood. My sire warned me of your untimely awakening. If you are not stopped, you will bring a second famine upon us. You cannot slaughter the townsfolk as you please!”

“Watch me.” The demon defiantly snarled, its malignant tone dripping with a venomous hiss. Without warning, it swiftly slithered down the building and vanished inside a labyrinth of saffron grass. Ivan vehemently leered at the abhorrent reptile, reluctantly storing his weapon inside its leather holster. 'I don't need a gun to take care of you...' Ivan sneered, glimpsing to a rosewood fence post skirting the property entrance. The vampire effortlessly leapt onto the picket, stepping down with reserved elegance and kneeling to the ground. Ivan gently pressed his hand upon the earth, summoning a force unbeknownst to the living. An arcane swarm fervently squirmed within the soil, minuscule scratches trembling beneath his fingertips. Ivan grinned triumphantly, a glistening fang curling over his lip.

“The hunter has now become the hunted...”

3.)
The creature's long tongue snakes out of its mouth and around its lips. It inhales deeply through its mouth and its heat sense kicks in, alerting it to tiny pinpricks of heat that it knows are humans, fast asleep in their beds, oblivious to their imminent doom. The creature smiles maliciously. Come dawn, they would remember true fear, the fear it had lived on for so long.

But first, there is something else it had to do. A score needs settling. Somewhere in the world, its brother would be recovering from his own injuries caused by the climax of their millenia old conflict. Right now, locating its brother before it's brother located it was its utmost concern. Little does the creature know that it is already too late.

With a contraction of his hind leg muscles, the being known only as Mortem launches himself into the air. It whirls around, hearing the rush of wind, and sees its brother, silhouetted against the full moon. Mortem is truly a sight to behold, his wolf-like form extended. His mane of razor-sharp spines ripples down his back like miniature tsunamis crashing down upon a beach. His red eyes perceive only his prey. It rolls to the side as Mortem landed where it had just been, Mortem's golden claws rending the air. “Shall we resume where we left off, Exitium?” He asks, his voice dripping with mockery and poisonous saliva.

“We shall,” Exitium hisses back. Exitium pounces forward, its claws outstretched. Mortem flicks his head to the side in a motion that would have appeared casual if not for the silver claws passing mere millimeters from his nose. Mortem cartwheels forward, his hind legs flipping over his head and grabbing Exitium's hide. Mortem's fore claws pushed against the roof, flinging both creatures into the air and flipping them end over end. When the two creatures land, Mortem remains on top. Exitium kicks upwards with his hind legs, flinging Mortem off of it.

“Your sleep has dulled your fighting ability,” Mortem hisses, taunting Exitium. “I expected better from you. You're no match for me anymore.”

Exitium keeps his rage in check. Mortem always did to try to bait Exitium into leaving himself open. It had barely worked the first time, so why was he trying it now?

Distract Exitium, apparently. Quick as lightning, Mortem launches himself forward, but he fails to catch his sibling off guard. Exitium ducks under his brother's slash and jabs at Mortem's eye with its claw. Exitium feints to the left and launches a right hook followed by a flurry of jabs, but Mortem skillfully bobs and weaves around them all.

The first ray of dull light pokes its head above the horizon. All at once, Mortem and Exitium feel pinpricks of blinding heat signatures rising all over the world. Recognition hits them both in the same instant like a flash. “We shall resume this later,” Mortem hisses. “The Others are awakening.” With that, he leaps off of the building into the receding shadows below and disappears.
 
RE: Round-Robin Contest II (Voting runs through 1/4/2011!)

Oh how long I have waited for this~ Good luck to all three entries, I will be placing my vote soon enough.
 
RE: Round-Robin Contest II (Voting runs through 1/4/2011!)

And that's why I'm going to start adding time constraints starting with the next round. To start, the due date will be tentatively set at least three weeks after the thread is revealed, and may be extended or shortened depending on how many people get their works in before then. Also, the minimum entry length will be 250 words as opposed to 500 like I had it set at to this point. I may extend the amount of rounds this goes on for in order to compensate for potentially shorter entries winning. Finally, I might cut down the amount of allowed entries to either six or eight so that I don't have a bunch of empty slots or ones with people's names in them who aren't going to get works in at all. Of course, these are just ideas at the moment and open to debate.
 
It's been a week and nobody new has voted since last Wednesday. By rights I should have announced this over the weekend, but I wanted to make sure I was online with my laptop so as to not make a mistake. In any case, the final results are as follows:

Entry 1 by Lucky Fire received one vote,
Entry 2 by Unique Username received four votes,
And Entry 3 by Dark Void received one vote.

So congratulations, Unique, on a three point victory.

Thanks to all whom participated. The next round will begin soon.
 
The Fallen One said:
Congrats Uni! I voted for you again. :3 This will be interesting...I've never written about vampires before.
Ditto.

Also, I liking sparkling vampires. :>
 
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