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Sorry, I was just about to post the story. Here it goes.

Two Cheese Pasta is a family recipe, and my dad was showing me how to make it. We were almost done makng it, when there was an "accident". We didn't notice. When we served it, we noticed it tasted better. We found out about what had been put in it, and that was added to the recipe.

Oh, and here's the recipe if you want it.

Ingredients:
2 Cups of Parmesean Cheese*grated*
2 Cups of Cheddar Cheese*grated*
1 Box of Pasta
1 *censored*
 
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Chef Lax: Ringmaster the entire assignment was about the recipe. And to Mewtric: what I was looking for was the recipe (includes ingredients and how to make it) and the family history about it. And I was just asking for 1 main meal, snack, drink, etc.; not an entire meal entre and all.
 
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Okay here's my story again. I'd posted my story's parts seperaty because I had to go before I finished it. Next time could you please read the posts before giving grades?

It was the middle of the winter and my family was starving to death. My sister had already died. My dad always went out desperatly looking for food.One day my father walking through the forest and came across a dead Torchic. So he brought it home with him so we wouldn't starve to death. My mother took what little honey we had left and managed to put it on the torchic. Earlier my mother had made some pie crust on the off chance he found berries when I remember that one of my friend's,Cherrim ,had offered to give us any berries we ever needed.

I was flying as fast as I could go to get to Cherrim's house(by the way I had just learned how to fly so I wasn't good at it).Cherrim happily gave me the Cherri berry's.On the way home I ran into a mankey and he looked hungry.He put up a good fight but in the end brains beat brawn and I trapped him in some vines. I returned sucessfully and my mother baked it up and by the time dad got home we were waiting for my big brother (Scizor) to return with the Moo Moo Milk. He got home at around 7:30 and mom got out the good Glailie ice plates.

That's the story behind my dish.

[Confessional Stall]
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If he wanted the recipe he should have made it more clear then what he put in the instructions. Oh well if it means passing then I might as well write it down.

Recipe:
1 Cooked torchic chicken
2 teaspoons of Beedrill honey
3 Glalie ice plates
2 cans of cherri berries
1 Pie crust
1 Bottle of Moo Moo Milk.
 
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Chef Lax: Slicer in your original recipe there was no Mankey involved.
 
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OH, that was the assignment? Can i still submit my story?
 
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That's part of the story. I run into a mankey and he wants my Cherri berry's so I trap him in some vines.
 
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Lunar Wing said:
Chef Lax: Without further ado your grades!

Grade: C+ Tortle: Salted Huntail Scales with Oddish Oil on a Tangela-vined plate.

Grade: F- Dur: Ravaged Seaking. Who knows how he managed.

Grade: C- Omnigross: Roasted Pikachu tail with Sneasel oil on an ice plate.

Grade: F- Riverna: Lumineon Soup with diced Oddish, served with Roast Chimchar, and blended Sitrus Berry mixed with
Vespiquen's honey to drink.

Grade: B+ Luke: Roast Grumpig glazed with Combee honey with a side of Tropius fruit.

Grade: C- Slicer: Torchic Chicken with Beedrill honey on top; Cheri Berry Pie also with Beedrill honey on top; fresh Moo Moo milk, all on Glalie ice plates.

Grade: D- Chuck Norris: Minced Stantler dipped in Camerupt Sauce with a hint of Whiscash; refreshing Lemonade chilled with Nevermeltice; Lava Cookies for desert.

Grade: C- Hugh Jass: Split Crawdaunt tail, grilled over wood, with fresh churned melted Moo-moo Milk butter, a Shuckle's Homemaid berry juice, aged to perfection, with a side of fresh Oddish leaf salad, Slashed with oran berry slices, and Kanto Shelleder Chowder.

Grade: A+ Star: Wurmple l'Oran.

Grade: B- Mason: Perfect Poffin.

Grade: B- Mewtrick: Mouse on a Stick.

Grade: C- Ringmaster: Two-Chesse Pasta with a surprise on top. [EDITED]

Grade: A+ Flaming Dragon: Roasted Farfetch'd.


For those of you that got a C or lower I am allowing you for this one time to make up the work you are missing. The main reason why the grades aren't that good is because of he lack of the family history; how it came into your family. If you would like to know what is wrong with your project I will let you know after class.
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xtrabaggage said:
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*Comes to school and goes to Chef Lax's class to see if he's done rating and looks under the chowder* My report!

During when Hoeon pokemon were coming to the Johto, many Crawdaunt invaded my family's lake and we had to get rid of them, so we ate some of them as a warning, but they were so good and because of my family this became one of water pokemons favorite food. While most of them were running away they threw shelders at us, and we collected them and made them into a chowder. The shuckle juice was the easiest part, a shuckle put his whole body in his shell and juice started pouring and we collected it and after most of the crawdaunt swam away we had a big feast with all the water pokemon, and that's how it was made.
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There's my recipe and family history if you missed it and if you saw it, what else is wrong with it.
 
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M' gr't gr't gr't gr't gr'ndf'th'r gots hungry. He saws a Seaking and... ye'h.
 
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Chef Lax: So Pokemeanic your recipe is just eating a Seaking raw? If so please provide how it came into your family.
Hugh Jass I'm sorry I didn't see your story part. I guess I didn't really notice it since it came in at a different time than the actual food.
*Will be changing grades tomorrow. Just write a letter to me [pm me] with any complaints about your grade and I will take care of them.
 
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I got an A+? That's cool. =]
Can we eat yet? Or do we have to wait for the competition?
I'm hungry. :(

*Goes to get a quick meal from the cafeteria.
 
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So let's see those histories and recipes, guys!

TORTLE
DUR
OMNIGROSS
RIVERNA
SLICER
CHUCK NORRIS
HUGH JASS
RINGMASTER
PEYTON MANNING - STILL NEED ACTUAL FOOD
 
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Name: Gio the LXX
Species: Duskull
Gender: Male
Personality: Sadistic, evil, but very persistent and helpful.
 
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Snorchu said:
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So let's see those histories and recipes, guys!

TORTLE
DUR
OMNIGROSS
RIVERNA
SLICER
CHUCK NORRIS
HUGH JASS
RINGMASTER
PEYTON MANNING - STILL NEED ACTUAL FOOD
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I entered mine.
 
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Chef Lax: Good job in turning in those reports. Here are the updated grades.

Grade: B+ Tortle: Salted Huntail Scales with Oddish Oil on a Tangela-vined plate.

Grade: B- Dur: Ravaged Seaking. Who knows how he managed.

Grade: B- Omnigross: Roasted Pikachu tail with Sneasel oil on an ice plate.

Grade: A- Riverna: Lumineon Soup with diced Oddish, served with Roast Chimchar, and blended Sitrus Berry mixed with
Vespiquen's honey to drink.

Grade: B+ Luke: Roast Grumpig glazed with Combee honey with a side of Tropius fruit.

Grade: B+ Slicer: Torchic Chicken with Beedrill honey on top; Cheri Berry Pie also with Beedrill honey on top; fresh Moo Moo milk, all on Glalie ice plates.

Grade: D- Chuck Norris: Minced Stantler dipped in Camerupt Sauce with a hint of Whiscash; refreshing Lemonade chilled with Nevermeltice; Lava Cookies for desert.

Grade: B- Hugh Jass: Split Crawdaunt tail, grilled over wood, with fresh churned melted Moo-moo Milk butter, a Shuckle's Homemaid berry juice, aged to perfection, with a side of fresh Oddish leaf salad, Slashed with oran berry slices, and Kanto Shelleder Chowder.

Grade: A+ Star: Wurmple l'Oran.

Grade: B- Mason: Perfect Poffin.

Grade: B- Mewtrick: Mouse on a Stick.

Grade: B- Ringmaster: Two-Chesse Pasta with a surprise on top.

Grade: A+ Flaming Dragon: Roasted Farfetch'd.

I'm happy to say that these grades here are much better, but a caution of warning: I won't be allowing you to turn in late work again. And if you're confused about an assignment don't be afraid to ask.
 
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The only one we're still missing is Peyton Manning.

Azure Gio Hellfire said:
Name: Gio the LXX
Species: Duskull
Gender: Male
Personality: Sadistic, evil, but very persistent and helpful.
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Rejected. Enrollment is full and has been for quite some time. Why can't you people understand that?
 
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Yay I got a B+ =] Can we Submit our votes yet?

Snorchu said:
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So let's see those histories and recipes, guys!

TORTLE
DUR
OMNIGROSS
RIVERNA
SLICER
CHUCK NORRIS
HUGH JASS
RINGMASTER
PEYTON MANNING - STILL NEED ACTUAL FOOD
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I've already done that check page 19.
 
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Bob Franklin said:
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Yay I got a B+ =] Can we Submit our votes yet?

Snorchu said:
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So let's see those histories and recipes, guys!

TORTLE
DUR
OMNIGROSS
RIVERNA
SLICER
CHUCK NORRIS
HUGH JASS
RINGMASTER
PEYTON MANNING - STILL NEED ACTUAL FOOD
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I've already done that check page 19.
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No, no, these would be the guys who were given a second chance because they flunked the first time.
 
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Snorchu said:
Bob Franklin said:
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Yay I got a B+ =] Can we Submit our votes yet?

Snorchu said:
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So let's see those histories and recipes, guys!

TORTLE
DUR
OMNIGROSS
RIVERNA
SLICER
CHUCK NORRIS
HUGH JASS
RINGMASTER
PEYTON MANNING - STILL NEED ACTUAL FOOD
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I've already done that check page 19.
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No, no, these would be the guys who were given a second chance because they flunked the first time.
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Oh but the one on page 19 is my re-submission. It's the second post from the bottom.
 
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Bob Franklin said:
Snorchu said:
Bob Franklin said:
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Yay I got a B+ =] Can we Submit our votes yet?

Snorchu said:
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So let's see those histories and recipes, guys!

TORTLE
DUR
OMNIGROSS
RIVERNA
SLICER
CHUCK NORRIS
HUGH JASS
RINGMASTER
PEYTON MANNING - STILL NEED ACTUAL FOOD
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I've already done that check page 19.
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No, no, these would be the guys who were given a second chance because they flunked the first time.
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Oh but the one on page 19 is my re-submission. It's the second post from the bottom.
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Yeah, I know, but I just wanted to get the list up there.
 
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