Writing Savages (Chapter 20)

RE: Savages (Chapter 8)

I'm loving this story more and more, both with the plot and the development of Turtwig. I wonder if this affection that Furret seems to have for Turtwig could develop into something more, either helpful or detracting (plot!). Your description and dialogue are improving steadily and healthily, though again, the speech tags are something that tends to jump out at me as a reader. I would, for example, stay away from using an adverb with a speech tag other that said except for rare occasions; it's a big no-no in general because of how solid and prominent it can be. I also rarely see said as a whole, and there are some places where the dialogue and the speech tag accompanying it seem to scream at each other, thus mitigating their effectiveness somewhat. Alternatively, there is the option to not use a speech tag at all sometimes if it's easy to know who is speaking (advised too).

Happy writing and keep it up! :)
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 8)

Yay, a review! Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you like this story so far. I've worked so hard just getting the first few chapters' pace right, so now I know I've at least accomplished a successful flow so far. Too bad it's going to be getting rapid soon! Furret isn't going to be a main character (spoilers?), but she will come in handy when the time comes. Her actual self isn't important; it's more like her significance to Turtwig's eventual growth as a fighter and survivor.

I'm working on the speech tags and I am aware of when they can go without any tags, but there haven't been too many conversations yet (just wait, this upcoming chapter focuses on character development).
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 8)

Really long chapter filled with some character development. It took such a long time to write because I kept getting preoccupied :p This chapter is not meant to enhance the plot much, though you do at least get to see some of the characters a bit more. There are multiple views to this story, meaning Turtwig is not always in every scene.

Chapter 9: Duty Calls

Turtwig, hazy, stands amongst the others in a line against the western wall. Trapinch and Skitty are doing their jobs, but the trainees have their own list of duties for the day. Scyther mentioned this last night, where a party was thrown in the last expedition's success. Now, though, there is no entertainment. With heavy eyelids, Turtwig forces himself to stay awake as he silently waits along with the rest of his friends.

Breakfast was short. Scyther allowed everyone to eat a couple berries and take a couple gulps of water. He then demanded anyone not a trainee to go to work. Turtwig can still remember the determined look in his eyes. It's almost like today is a special day…but it's not.

"Chores," Scyther began, "are the most important tasks any member of my Expedition Team could accomplish."

A few Pokémon glance at each other anxiously, especially Wurmple, who recently discovered that the Flying-types of Fortree are wanting to eat something other than berries. Working alongside them at a time like this is dangerous.

"I'm going to read off my list of duties for the day and then choose a few of you to work together so the chore will be accomplished. Now, do not think this is 'taking out the trash' work. You are expected to patrol, to garden, to teach, to learn, and to aid in any position I place you. You are not going to just do the dishes and go back to doing whatever."

An intimidating breeze steals away any sense of pride from the crowd; some go from working to save the city from peril to now saving it from weeds or uneducated Pokémon. Turtwig forms a slight frown as he realizes today will be as boring as ever.

"No complaining!"

The two words cause nearly every trainee to stiffen, though Shuppet is holding back a smile from the tone of Scyther's authoritative voice. Scyther then proceeds to say that trainees should be able to help the town in its power and its cultivation. Turtwig begins to tune out the rest of his speech because it's the same sentence he just spoke, though in different sentence structures.

Scyther looks at his paper and carefully fumbles it over between his two scythes. "Now, the list: Bunnelby, Fennekin, you two are going to start it all off with wall patrol. Offer assistance as needed."

Fennekin can be heard grunting about looking at trees all day, but Bunnelby continues to stand at attention without any movement whatsoever. The two of them don't glance at each other, either, since Fennekin normally does not wish to make many friends.

"Wingull and Squirtle, you guys are working the hospital," Scyther says in a similar pattern as before.

Squirtle whispers in excitement about healing others, though Wingull seems hesitant to show any emotion. The seagull has a reputation with his father, so any wrong move could worsen it—and any right one could cause expectations to rise. Squirtle was not born with such a reputable status.

"Fletchinder and Tropius will do air patrol, while Marill and Shuppet are to visit the Pokémon school. Turtwig, Wurmple, you two can work in the garden with our Harvester, Phantump. He is quiet, so don't scare him off."

After barely-existent groans and scuffling of feet, everyone was off to do whatever assigned chore required. Turtwig is at least happy he isn't patrolling the wall because he has a lot of pressure on himself already. Plus, the school is hard to escape from, so Turtwig is somewhat happy with his ultimate position. Phantump, though, is a fairly new name to him. Turtwig has only heard the name a total of two times, and one was last night at the party. He does know that Phantump has a close relative named Pumpkaboo, and the two alternate in the garden. He and Wurmple proceed to make their way to the opposite side of town.

. . .​

"I hate rocks," Fennekin pouts as it joins Bunnelby at the stone wall.

"Well Trapinch told us that we could pack these rocks together in this weaker area of the wall," Bunnelby says.

"But why do we have to do it?"

"As trainees, we have to do the grunt work."

Bunnelby then wanders over to a large pile of rocks not too far away from the hollowed-out section of the wall. He lifts a stone up with his strong ears and carries it over to the desired location. The wall is very sturdy in all other areas; the thick, strong barrier of pure rock is comforting for the civilians of Fortree City. There are mixed splotches of dark and light gray define the blunt compactness of the whole barrier.

Fennekin calmly steps over to one rock and uses Psybeam to bring it to the wall. However, the beam crushes the stone into several little pebbles, much to Fennekin's dismay. He frowns and thinks about how to carry the rock without picking it up.

"Have you tried focusing your mind around the rock's perimeter? Try imagining the action of picking the rock up. Maybe you can use Psychic to carry it over here," Bunnelby says.

The Fennec fox decides to try the idea out and begins to close his eyes. All he has to do is focus his mind on the object. He can see the round, gray rock surrounded by the dark, irrelevant background of his mind. He tries to pick it up, to move it from one location to the next—point A to point B. Fennekin, a dull, lifeless body, is standing still with no movement in the picture.

Bunnelby watches this intense thought process and notices a purple light surrounding the rock's perimeter. It begins to wobble, to shakily move from the rest position. Excited, he watches the fox begin to understand the power of Psychic from square one.

"Well?" a voice asks from somewhere outside of his mind. An orange-colored ant walks over to the wall and sees that the hole is still intact. "How's the fixing?"

Fennekin opens his eyes and drops the rock back onto the ground. He frowns due to his hard work coming to no avail. He has failed the art of Psychic-types. Even though he won't be one for a long time, learning the move would give him an extra edge.

"Fennekin is trying to learn how to use Psychic," Bunnelby explains.

"Well how about you guys work a little bit more and then take a break?"

"Will do," Bunnelby smiles.

Trapinch hobbles back over to the Ralts station so he can be transported. Fennekin lowers its head in defeat.

"Hey, I can do all this in a few minutes flat," Bunnelby says.

While Fennekin sits in the grass, Bunnelby uses Mud Shot to cover the sideways crater with an inner layer of thick, liquidy ground. He then throws a rock up in the air and smacks it down hard—and right into the location, too. Bunnelby continues this while using his Huge Power. Fennekin, awestruck, watches from a distance.

"That's Smack Down. I know that move, Mud Shot, Brick Break, and Quick Attack. Don't mess with me!" Bunnelby laughs.

"I just want to be successful in something," Fennekin says, frowning. "I'm always average or worse. I'm not strong, nor popular, brave, fast, whatever! I'm just sitting here pouting about my failure."

"Sometimes the best of us is the worst."

Fennekin thinks about that statement for a moment and then asks, "well what do you want to do with your life?"

"Before the outbreak, I wanted to become a top competitive fighter. I wanted to be the best of the best, the strongest of the strong. Now, though, I'm lucky to find another Pokémon period—let alone a competitive one."

"I just want to be happy. I've only ever wanted to be happy. I ran away from my sister, Braixen, to join my trainer and make her proud of me—and now she's dead. Dead. I didn't even prove myself in battle much," Fennekin recounts from the past.

The two of them then go silent. Bunnelby continues packing down the wall and edging out spots for more stones while Fennekin focuses on mastering one of the most powerful Psychic-type moves.

. . .​

"Why do I have to fly medication from house to house?" Wingull asks himself as he loads up a small bag courtesy of the Pokémon Center.

"We need you to send some simple medications to some of our citizens," Skitty says quietly.

"Well I don't like this busy work."

"I'm sorry. Do you want me to do it?"

Skitty opens her eyes wider and a small, clear tear can be seen coming down the corner of her eye. Wingull immediately goes berserk in an apology and ultimately decides to do as he was told.

"Thank you!" Skitty immediately beams proudly. It's almost as if that tear was…

"So what do I have to do, then?" the blue Water-type starter asks politely.

"Well, you can send in food to some of the patients while I work with a mad Frogadier," Skitty says thoughtfully. "I'm going to try and calm him down, now, so why don't you two get started? Wingull, before you go, can you help Squirtle gather some food?"

The two Pokémon go to the Storage Room nearby and begin taking food: bread, berries, cookies—you name it. As Wingull sets the rest of the food in a bucket, Squirtle gets overwhelmed as the stack begins to stagger back and forth. As the large, rainbow tower of edibility falls down, Squirtle soaks the floor with Water Gun and slips. He falls on the tiled floor with soggy bread beside his soaking wet face.

Wingull, laughing, then flips over and lands in the floor as well. They both quietly get to work and restack the food as Skitty peeks around the corner. She sighs, shakes her head, and goes back to a crying Frogadier.

. . .​

Woooosh!

The fiery Kalos bird flies over the treetops with haste. Looking down, Fletchinder sees many kid Pokémon begging him to do stunts. Fletchinder was supposed to patrol the air, but if there is nothing to look out for…

"Fire Blast!" he whispers to himself as a star-shaped display of controlled fire erupts from Fletchinder's body.

"Oooooo!" a baby Tyrogue gapes from below, and many other Pokémon hoot and shout along with him.

The small Pokémon rejoice, but Fletchinder is not paying attention to the air zone's safety. Instead, is temporary partner Tropius is doing all the work.

"I have to make sure every roof is in perfect shape," Tropius says to himself with slight worry.

He goes from treetop to treetop, house to house, wall to wall. He occasionally blows a leaf off of a roof simply because it ruins the aesthetic quality of the craftsmanship.

"Fletchinder can have all the fun he wants," Tropius mumbles. "I'll do the real work around here."

. . .​

Marill and Shuppet calmly enter the welcoming atmosphere of Ms. Miltank's classroom. Surrounding them is a vividly-colored array of papers, billboards, pictures, and school supplies. On the floor are several mats, each either green, red, or blue, in the shape of Pokéballs.

Ms. Miltank has a pointer stick and is showing the students a place on the Hoenn map. Shuppet floats into the doorway while Marill inches behind; both, uncomfortable with little children, don't want to be here. The others get to help in the hospital or on the walls…and they have to play with kids.

Shuppet clears his throat. Ms. Miltank immediately ends her speech on the habitat of wild Feebas and excuses herself from the classroom. She guides Shuppet and Marill over to the back of the classroom anxiously and asks about the matter.

"We've come to help you! We're trainees and Scyther sent us here to help with the children" Marill smiles.

"Oh! Goodie! Just shout next time," Ms. Miltank says jokingly. "I want you two to go take a seat and listen to my lecture."

"Ma'am, with all due respect, we're here to help you, not learn from," Shuppet explains.

"I understand that, and you will help me by letting me teach you. The more you know, the longer you'll live," she says to the Ghost-type.

Marill sits on a blue cushion in the back while Shuppet sits beside him on a red one. The two of them listen to the Feebas lecture some more. Apparently, Feebas are known for their rather shabby look and not for their beauty. One of the students, a little Swablu, asks about what moves it can learn.

"Well, Feebas is like a Magikarp in most senses, though it can learn TMs like Ice Beam and can get egg moves like Dragon Pulse. It evolves into the gorgeous Milotic, which is claimed to be one of the most beautiful Pokémon of the sea."

The class gasps at the idea of an ugly Pokémon turning into something beautiful. Some of the rogue kids, like Elekid and Tyrogue, giggle at the ugly sight of Feebas. Swablu, Taillow, and Litleo focus primarily on the beauty of Milotic. Pansage, Pansear, and Panpour, however, are not interested in the subject and instead begin whispering questions to Marill.

"Now, class, can anyone tell me…" Miltank begins to say.

"Why are you here?" asks Panpour, the little blue monkey jittering with curiosity.

"I'm here to help your teacher," the slimilarly blue mouse Pokémon says.

"Mirror Coat is a move that, after taking a special attack head-on, returns the power with double the damage," Shuppet says intelligently.

"This isn't helping! You're here to learn, aren't you?" Pansear giggles.

"Maybe Marill is here to catch up on some information?" Pansage suggests.

"Will you all just shush?! I'm helping your teacher out, I'm not a child!" Marill says loudly—loudly enough for the teacher to hear.

"Marill, if you are not a child, why don't you tell us the base power and status effect that goes along with the move Thunderbolt?" Miltank crosses her arms.

"Well, I, uh…Thunderbolt has the power of…80 and can cause the opponent to flinch?"

The whole class erupts in laughter at the older student's lack of knowledge. The elemental monkeys roll on the floor after destroying Marill's public image.

"Thunderbolt has a base power of 90 and can sometimes cause paralysis, though not as common as Discharge can," Shuppet explains.

"Very good, Shuppet! Marill…why don't you go and grade some quizzes the students took last night? It's about Water-type moves…hopefully you can get that," Miltank stresses as some of the kids giggle quietly. "Shuppet, why don't you tell the class about where you can find a Feebas?"

"Yes, ma'am. Feebas only appears on six random tiles in a certain…" Shuppet says, though Marill then tunes him out.

Grade tests? More like do busywork to keep my reputation alive. This is not training; this is torture! Marill says in his head.

. . .​

Crops everywhere. There are berries planted in every single spot that the farmland can hold. The brown, plowed land looks perfect for farming, too, so the Harvester of Fortree has his work a bit easier than Turtwig expected.

He and Wurmple finally made it to the garden and eventually met the farmer himself, Phantump, and his helper, Pumpkaboo. The two Grass-type Pokémon plant seeds and grow them quickly to meet the demand that the civilians require to feed every mouth in Fortree.

"So what can I do for you two boys, then?" Phantump asks politely.

"We were sent by Scyther to help you in any way possible," Wurmple says.

"Is that so? I'll grab the hose for you. You will water the Pecha berries. It's not hard, so don't screw it up."

Once the hose was given, the ghostly tree stump Pokémon was gone. Turtwig and Wurmple were left alone—Pumpkaboo only came outside to turn the water on for Turtwig. It is going to be a long, boring day.

There are five rows to this garden. The middle row is taken up by the Pecha berries, while the others don't really seem to matter right now. Turtwig gets the hose and gently sprinkles water on the seeds as each small lump in the dirt seems to be satisfied. The dry, almost crumbling soil immediately turns into thicker soil, almost like mud. Turtwig frowns at the weather.

"One is done," he says finally.

Turtwig moves onto the next plant. Letting the water flow out of the hose, Turtwig feels a sense of accomplishment. He's doing something right for Fortree, and it's not in combat. He's helping the children get to eat, the old control their diet, the…

All of a sudden, straight out of nowhere, Turtwig notices that something ate the first plant that he had watered. The soil was dug up and the berry seed completely gone. Figure it was just his own imagination, he keeps watering.

The hose is controlled by Turtwig's jaws, and when his head moves, so does the water. This is the easiest way for him since his stubby legs weren't made for holding many objects. He moves onto his third plant, then his fourth, and then his fifth. Turtwig is breezing through this chore, which means dinner will happen that much quicker.

"Nom," Turtwig hears a small noise from behind his back.

He turns around and calls out to stop eating the garden, though no one is there. Who could possibly be eating these plants?

. . .​

The anonymous eater watches as the Tiny Leaf Pokémon does its best to please Scyther. He laughs inside because that Pokémon tries so hard to prove itself. However, he also feels a bit of encouragement from such a good attitude. In fact, he would help if it wasn't for his empty stomach.

It would be a shame if I…ate up all the berries!

. . .​

Turtwig reverses his stance and finally sees the culprit: while he was watering each berry plant, Wurmple was eating them right after! After severe scolding and blasting of water, Turtwig finally accepts Wurmple's apology for ruining their duty.

However, Phantump is not as amused. The possessed stump hovers outside from his small shack to find his Pecha berries gone and his garden a mess! The Ghost-type frowns as his hard work has been ruined. However, that sadness immediately turns into anger.

"You folks get out of my garden before I have you thrown out into the wild. Think it's funny? That's okay! Pumpkaboo, let's show these two pinheads a lesson!"

"Pinhead? No, I'm—" Wurmple begins to say.

"Now, use Seed Bomb!"

Turtwig and Wurmple exit the farm as fast as they can. Turtwig can't help but laugh the whole way as Wurmple caused their simple job to become such a complete failure.

"I'm so sorry," Wurmple gasps as he inches quickly.

"No, it was kind of funny, actually," Turtwig says.

Once the two finally arrive to the western side again, it's already dark…and everyone else is patiently waiting outside.

. . .​

"Wall defense?" Scyther asks demandingly.

"Success," Fennekin nervously replies.

"Hospital?"

Wingull and Squirtle glance at each other quickly before saying that it was a failure.

"… Air patrol?"

"Success," Tropius gloats.

"School?"

Shuppet looks over to the humiliated Marill. He then calls it a "mixed success," and Scyther quickly understands Marill's failure by the look on his face.

"Gardening?"

"Failure," Turtwig mumbles quietly.

"Wait, what? You two screwed that up? That was one of the easiest jobs given out!" Scyther protests.

"We had a sort of hunger issue."

"Hunger issue, huh? That's fine. Everyone who succeeded, you all get to eat a nice meal tonight. Those that failed…well, you all can eat a berry and go to bed. I don't have time for slackers, and I certainly don't want to waste food on them," Scyther says menacingly.

"Yes sir," they all say respectfully in a single, quick sentence.

"This is not a big punishment. This is motivation."

. . .​

Turtwig, who is now lying in bed and shifting back and forth on his bed, can hear his stomach screeching at him with disapproval. He pounds it with his front leg, but it doesn't stop making the gurgling noise.

"More like deprivation," he mutters quietly.

Nearby, Wurmple is curled up in a ball sulking. Turtwig is mad at him right now, or at least his stomach is, so there are no comforting words from him. He is slightly agitated now. However, when Wurmple glances over at him pathetically, Turtwig loosens his tight, angry expression into a slight smile.

At least Squirtle and some of the others didn't get to eat well, he reminds himself.

The door to the tree house cabin cracks open as Skitty and Trapinch walk in earlier than usual. Trapinch is carefully holding cups of water in his mouth while Skitty keeps a plate of food on the tip of her tail.

"Turtwig, Squirtle, Wingull, Wurmple, Marill, we couldn't leave you out from dinner. The two of us saved a portion of our meals to at least satisfy your stomachs," Skitty politely says while offering handfuls of food to Turtwig's group of failures.

"Thank you, Skitty," Turtwig smiles meaningfully.

Those who did fail at least get a decent meal. They each quietly nibbled at their food and quickly flopped back in place to sleep. The others came in with annoying sounds and loud jokes being thrown around the room.

It was a long night for Turtwig. After saving Furret, who still resides in the hospital as far as he knows, it's as if he's nothing again. He merely fails at gardening in his own town. How is he going to survive the savages if he can't even garden?

Chapter 10 has more action. Because Part One consists of 20 chapters, from chapter 10 and on you can expect the story to start progressing through action and violence.
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 9)

Finally found time to write my next chapter. This chapter does not focus on character development for any side character because this is action-packed.

Chapter 10: Shiver

Blinding. Turtwig's left eye blasts open from its slumber as it becomes blinded by the first rays of sunlight peeking over the trees. Almost simultaneously, his other eye opens in response and eventually his mind creeps away from the dreams of his past. Turtwig rubs his face with his nubby front legs and glances out the window to see the welcoming sun enter his view. Turtwig sees a small figure alongside the western wall. Its silhouette is antlike, so it is obvious that Trapinch is on his morning shift. Likewise, Skitty has gone off to open things up at the Pokémon Center, however all the trainees are simply sleeping in. They all still have another hour before they must get up, so absorbing as much sleep as possible is a good idea. Turtwig, though, is wide awake and cannot even lie around lazily. As such, he decides to accompany Trapinch for at least the hour he has available.

After cleaning up both his bed and his shell, the Tiny Leaf Pokémon tiptoes out the trainee cabin and manages to dangerously slide down the roped side of the swinging ladder. He walks over to Ralts' stand, but she is not up yet, so he has to use the wooden elevator to bring him up to the top of the wall.

Turtwig steps onto the square of wood and plants himself directly in the middle. He then proceeds to crank the mechanism attached so that the platform will slowly raise. As he continues, Turtwig sees the Flying-types beginning to venture off from their nests of the trees above. With the sun completely out, some nocturnal Pokémon, such as Noctowl, quickly proceed back in dark areas, which, in his case, is the Pokémart.

Eventually the crank screeches as Turtwig's platform reaches its peak position. He hops off and watches it slowly scoot back down the wall and onto the grassy earth. He turns back around and sees his friend staring off in the distance. Turtwig smiles and asks his friend how he's doing.

"O…oh," Trapinch manages to whisper.

The Ant Pit Pokémon is almost completely pale; the orange coloring of his head and body has almost drained from him as if life was being sucked straight out of him.

"What's wrong? I can help," Turtwig says kindly, but all Trapinch replies with is a long, cold shiver that vibrates his whole body and causes him to twitch all around.

"Trapinch, what's going on?" Turtwig asks demandingly, but Trapinch only nods his head straight, signaling Turtwig to turn around.

The Grass-type does so. He whips his head around and then feels hydrochloric acid rise up his esophagus and pushes ferociously at his clenched teeth. He can feel the burning sensation from within, the feeling that could best be described as true horror.

"May Arceus help us all," he whispers with a tear rolling down the left side of his face, brushing past his slit-nose, down across his jaw-line, and finally dropping down the wall and into the grass beyond.

A giant blue bear, about 200 feet in height, is off in the distance munching on a tree trunk. The savage, a filthy mess, has trees, cars, and blood smeared all in its shaggy fur. Two pointy teeth protrude from the creature's mouth, either bloodstained and sharp as a Gallade's wrist-blade. Though its back is turned, even the slightest of noises could grab its attention. It seems to be primarily focused on eating, but anything could happen.

"A…savage…Munchlax," Turtwig says in a shocked tone. "We could be in big trouble now."

From somewhere within Fortree City's walls, a bird Pokémon chirps loudly enough for the savage's ears to perk up in attention. It then sniffs the air with the large, mucus-covered nostrils that are covered by only a thin layer of fur.

"Don't move," Trapinch mutters.

It doesn't matter. Before they know it, giant thumps like mini earthquakes come closer and closer to the western wall. The giant bear Pokémon skips along and begins to drip saliva from the corners of its mouth.

"Scyther! Skarmory! Someone! A savage is attacking!" Turtwig screams to the top of his lungs.

Instead of Skarmory answering the call, the first Pokémon to report in is Altaria. The cloud-winged Pokémon screeches loudly with a Hyper Voice to daze the Big Eater Pokémon, though it merely snaps out of the effects and ignores the attack. Altaria is then whacked from the sky and onto the ground by a powerful chop coming from the less-than-intelligent monster.

"Why didn't he eat Altaria when he had the chance?" Trapinch asks.

"I don't know," Turtwig says admittedly.

"We're coming!" replies the late Scyther and his Expedition Team. None of the trainees are present, but most of the official squad members are present.

Scyther hops upon the top of the wall from the ground and leaps again to confront Munchlax head-on. He slashes at the air as the savage Munchlax watches blankly. The other members wait anxiously on the wall top with Turtwig to wait for their orders.

While this happens, though, Ralts beams in and screams loudly. Her feelers vibrate uncontrollably, but she insists on using Protect anyway to keep the western wall up. Ralts stands on the top of the stone structure and it becomes enveloped in a green protective barrier.

Turtwig begs Trapinch to get the other trainees up, too, but when Trapinch goes to the elevator, the ground shakes and he ends up falling off the side of the wall. He lands in the bushes on the outside of the city, though, so he will be okay as long as he is concealed.

"Stay put, I'm coming!" Turtwig says.

"Backup! Backup!" Scyther gasps as Munchlax swipes at him in return.

The savage then uses a glowing finger to randomly spit out a massive air gust—which, appropriately, is the move Gust—to distract Scyther. The monster then stupidly starts clapping at the Bug-type as if it resembled a pesky fly.

Snivy and Chespin jump onto the ground and leap forward, using their Vine Whip attacks to slash at Munchlax's belly. However, they merely bounce off with no reaction or damage whatsoever. Bewildered, both Pokémon tense up quietly as Munchlax then walks on closer to Fortree City.

"Get out of the way!" Snivy screams as she wraps one vine around Chespin and the other around the trunk of a tree, which she uses to sling both of them out of the savage's walking space. They land hard on the trunk and pant loudly.

"Take thisss!" Ekans hisses as he flings gunk at the target, though the Gunk Shot is reflected onto Lairon. Though the attack hit a teammate, at least Lairon is immune to Poison.

Ekans is kicked in the process of Munchlax's motion and the snake only saves his own life by using Dig mid-fall and creating a hole in the ground right as he landed. He otherwise would have died from the impact.

Lairon, meanwhile, is somewhat dazed and pitifully falls over on its side. Houndour uses Flamethrower, though the attack does not even singe the fur. Chikorita's Magical Leaf only clipped a fingernail at best.

Turtwig watches, horrified, as the Pokémon is less than two hundred feet from the town. He sees Scyther lunge at the former Pokémon's feet with great force, but he misses the target and crashes into a tree.

"Darn it!" Scyther musters as he tries to pull his scythes out of the tree's trunk, though he now renders them useless as his strength alone does not free them.

The two hundred foot distance has now shortened to a little over one hundred feet by Turtwig's judgment. Combusken's Double Kick cannot penetrate the thick fur that Munchlax possesses, much less his Thick Fat. Skiddo, meanwhile, tends to Chespin's hurt leg while Linoone tries to free Scyther. Snivy begins charging back toward Munchlax, though she cannot catch up to it—even with tree propulsion from her Vine Whip. Ralts lets go of her Protect for a while so she can charge back up; with the length of time she kept it up, her power was drained.

Munchlax is now walking toward the gate. He touches it with his gigantic hand but then stops for a brief moment. As the giant bear stands near the edge of a sleeping civilization, everyone else stares quietly. Suddenly, Munchlax clenches his right fist. It begins to glow white with a mystical power. Ralts, still standing on top of the wall and now almost looking Munchlax eye-to-eye, uses Protect again for the incoming attack.

"That's Focus Punch," Turtwig says to himself quietly. "Protect can block those kinds of moves."

How wrong he actually is. Munchlax shoves its fist right in the middle of the barrier and shatters it completely. Then, once getting rid of one problem, he grabs Ralts in his meaty hands and squeezes tightly. Ralts screams that she can't teleport and that she's going to die. Turtwig, on the wall, screams in return. Snivy stops in her tracks and looks at the scene. Scyther, still stuck to the tree, views the horrific events to come.

What happens is inevitable. the savage opens its large mouth and drops Ralts right in. As Munchlax do not chew, it immediately swallows the Feeling Pokémon and feels no remorse. Turtwig, Trapinch, Snivy, Scyther, and the rest of the group stare in awe as Munchlax then moves on to the next course: he glances downward and sees a weeping Trapinch in a vulnerable position.

It picks up the Pit Trap Pokémon. It lightly squeezes the Pokémon between its thumb and forefinger. The former Munchlax rolls the Pokémon between the two fingers and it contemplates eating him. Turtwig can see the look of terror in Trapinch's eyes: the glazed top layer and then under it a bright, scary, penetrating stare into death.

No one moves. Munchlax turns its back on Turtwig and lifts Trapinch up to drop him in its disgusting mouth. Screams can finally be heard from within Fortree City. Skarmory is nowhere to be seen. Swellow and Pelipper circle above from the sky. No one is even trying to save Trapinch.

No, someone is. Turtwig is. In an almost-unreal moment, Turtwig launches his body off the wall's top and unleashes one massive Razor Leaf at the savage. Turtwig screams and trots toward the beast, caring neither for himself nor anything around him but his friend. However, that Razor Leaf hit the perfect spot: the nape of its neck.

The giant, sharp boomerang slashes Munchlax's neck—it must be an Achilles heel of sorts. Munchlax drops Trapinch hard onto the ground and slams onto the western wall as it bleeds from the neck. Soon after, a huge puff of smoke emits from the savage and any trace of blood and skin were gone—they disintegrated. However, the large skeleton is still intact…and still leaning on the western wall.

Something from inside the ribcage falls to the ground: Ralts. She slings her head up and squeals in delight. Apparently the stomach acids did not have time to ingest her. However, no one else moves a muscle.

Turtwig, adrenaline done pumping, falls to the ground in pain from his devastating fall and massive energy release. He blinks once, his vision turns red. Twice, his eyes begin to burn excruciatingly. Third, he's out cold.

Trapinch, whose condition is merely bruised, runs over to Turtwig. Similarly, Ralts and the very late trainees go to his aid a few minutes after. The squad members, shocked, stay in their places, with the exception of Snivy, who rushes to Turtwig.

. . .​

"He's going to be okay," Chansey says happily to Trapinch, Ralts, Snivy, Scyther, and others in the waiting room. "He needs a lot of rest. He's lucky he didn't get killed from that thing."

"Okay." When Trapinch heard that word, he exhaled audibly.

Not only was Trapinch worried, but Skitty demanded to treat him as soon as the Grass-type turtle arrived at the hospital. She was just as delighted to hear the news as he was. Now, though, she's tending to his wounds from the fall back in his hospital room.

"Okay, guys, our next goal while he is resting will be to get rid of that skeleton," Scyther orders.

. . .​

For the next two days, these trainees and squad members remove bones and remains from the wall and eventually get it cleared. Not many speak of the events that took place on this day, but Turtwig is at least a local hero. Fortree City survived a savage attack thanks to the clumsy trainee with a lot of determination. Even though today may be safe, there is no telling what may be in store for Turtwig tomorrow.

. . .​

The green bird looks deeply into the sun without blinking. He absorbs the words that the sun's rays describe, the very descriptions of what is yet to come. It extends its black- and red-tipped wings as far apart as he can. Suddenly, a small cloud covers up the sunlight and the Pokémon opens his wise old eyes.

"It is coming," he says mysteriously. "It is coming too soon."

Because we are on the second 10 chapters in part one, expect everything to gradually get darker. I will post a character development side story soon. Not sure who it will be about yet, though, so stay tuned! I want to update the OP of this thread soon detailing each part of this story, so that will be up when I have time! Thanks for reading :D

EDIT: Here is Ralts's side story!
Discrimination

At the start of the Pokérus outbreak

"We have to hurry, honey," a humanlike green/white-bodied Pokémon says to his wife. The Pokémon has a proud stance; his head has a curved crest in the back. He is white from the waist down, though a deep green penetrates the upper half of his appearance. Red horns stick out of his chest and back as if they were a sort of defensive mechanism. At his green elbows, blades protrude from his elbows and create the impression of swords for arms.

"It hasn't hatched yet," remarks the more feminine counterpart. She is similar in appearance, though the white bottom resembles more of a dress. Her head sleeks back and creates a circular shape as if it was styled in such a way. She seemed to have aged from worry of her unborn child; her husband is determined to find the perfect child.

"It moves every now and then. We just have to wait a little longer," Gallade says.

From behind, a giant Munchlax, one whose size is similar to that of ten Munchlax standing one on top of the other, stomps a foot in their direction. The Pokémon, oversized drops of saliva spilling over its bottom lip, searches hungrily for something to satisfy its overgrown stomach. It knocks over trees and steps in rivers, resulting in a rapid collapse of the environment. Gallade is forced to use Slash on an incoming tree, completely uprooted. The trunk is split in two and falls on opposite sides of the family. Gardevoir clenches the cold egg tight at her chest.

"We need to get this last egg out of here," Gardevoir whispers, "or else it isn't going to make it past the night, let alone the full duration."

The couple runs and eventually finds shelter in a large bush farther away from the creature. The egg, now warm due to the mother's nurturing, begins to wiggle in closer intervals than before. The two hold each other together and watch one of the many miracles of life. Soon enough, the egg begins to glow white and pieces are thrown onto the ground.

The baby Pokémon crawls out of its egg and looks around. It has a soft body of white and a head covered in green hair. It, too, has the red horns of its parents, though they are now located atop its head.

Gallade and Gardevoir look hard at the Pokémon to find out a gender. Gardevoir, realizing it is a female, squeals in delight while Gallade scratches the back of his head in disappointment.

"I wanted a boy," he says, frowning.

"Life has decided that we raise a girl. Can you not appreciate what we have?"

"You are treating life as if it is a deity. If Arceus wants us to raise a girl in this land of evil, then that disproves the idea of a perfect "God." Do you not understand that you are worshiping nothing?" the husband says in a scowl.

Gardevoir cups her mouth and closes her eyes in a small prayer. "Dear Arceus, have mercy on this new family, this little baby girl and her new parents. Thank you," she whispers.

Almost as if in response, the giant bush that served as camouflage is pulled from the ground. Small leaves fly off of it as the foliage is thrown miles away from its original location. Gallade and Gardevoir, previously crouching down, stand up in astonishment as they look eye-to-eye with the giant creature that had almost killed them before.

"Where is Arceus now?" Gallade whispers both in disbelief and in disappointment, almost as if he wished there had been a deity to come to their rescue.

"This all has a purpose. We just have to find ours," Gardevoir says in a quick, almost screaming tone.

The two of them run, Ralts in Gardevoir's arms, as far as they can from the giant. They cross a bridge that extends over a small island among a medium-sized blue lake. Gardevoir trips and drops her only child down ironically onto the hard rock below, the only piece of land under the bridge. She screams as the baby falls and thumps onto the rock.

As Gallade and Gardevoir struggle to reach the baby from above it, the giant catches up to their quickness and stops right in front of them. Gallade swipes at the rope bridge's bindings and they run across as it falls into the water. The baby Ralts still watches from below, though it is safe from harm.

Gallade pushes Gardevoir into the brush and begins slashing at the creature. He eventually swipes a chunk of hair off of its hand, though it grabs the father and lifts it up to eye level. Gardevoir screams from below as the imminent event begins: Munchlax devours her male counterpart, her child's father, her own husband. Gallade is first squeezed until the bones in his arms are broken. Once he is unable to fight back, he is shoved into the seemingly stupid creature's mouth.

Gardevoir hears it crunch after each opening of the jaw. She screams out for Arceus to save her, though only the Munchlax can somewhat interpret her pleas. Instead of running further west into Fortree City, she decides to go north into the trees to try and lose the creature. She will have to visit her daughter later.

. . .​

Once the bridge had collapsed, a wave of water began to form. Sure enough, the wave crashed onto the small piece of stone land and washed Ralts away into the stream. She choked and struggled in the water since she was barely a couple of hours old. However, she never went completely underwater. The poor, defenseless Pokémon had used her Psychic energy to save her lungs as a result of an immediate reflex. The baby Ralts washes ashore not too far away and sleeps. As she closes her eyes, shadows and movement begin to flood into her vision and solidify in her brain.

. . .​

"What do you think about our catch today?" one man asks his boss, the driver of the small truck.

"One little Ralts is pathetic. Do we have anyone in the area who would even pay for one?" questions a voice from in front of the first man.

"Actually, a child in Fortree City is in need of a Ralts and his father is too busy to catch one himself."

"Meh," the boss replies.

"He's rich—the CEO of something," the grunt says.

He can hear his boss shift in the seat in front of him. "This might be interesting, then. Let's go," the guy decides.

Behind both men, specifically in the bed of the truck, a small cage holds the future guardian of Fortree City.

. . .​

The truck drives back toward where the Munchlax had rampaged a few days earlier. The two men hop out and see two unidentified Pokémon bodies with red smeared all on the ground. They both glance and each other and hop back in the truck. However, they soon realize the bridge is gone—it's in the lake. They stop to think of what to do when something from behind them comes up startlingly.

A giant Rock-type Pokémon with a large, almost maroon nose, commonly known as a Nosepass, stands before them. The creature looks at the goons stupidly as they run to get back in their truck. The truck, its trunk facing the body of the creature, is turned around in haste and begins to drive far away from the monster. However, a giant boulder now blocks the way out. They turn left, but another one is planted in their way. To their right is a dead end.

"These creatures may not be as dumb as they appear," the boss gasps.

"I still think they are," the grunt replies.

"This is no land for poachers like us, boy," says the man.

The Nosepass attacks the truck and tears the back right off, slinging it across the lake and onto the other side of Route 120. However, the front of the truck, which is comprised of the engine and the inside of the body, which includes the seats and both of the men, is still in danger. A few minutes later and the men were screaming for their lives, though fate has already taken them.

. . .​

"This all has a purpose. We just need to find ours."

The offspring of Gardevoir and Gallade had plopped right at the new gates of Fortree City. Winona, the leader of the town, which still has a population of 12, takes in the baby Ralts and begins to nurture it back to health. Once it has seemed to recovered, she puts it in the bed of her tree house and shuts the door.

"Winona, we should all go on a small walk and scavenge for food or water," one of the men suggests.

"I'll leave my Skarmory in charge, then," she says happily.

Though Ralts is now in the care of Fortree City, she has entered right at the exit of any humanity left in the city. Over her few months in the city, she quickly grew up and learned how to patrol the walls with Altaria, Swellow, and Pelipper. Her teleportation became appreciated and she was eventually put as one of the castle wall heads. Ralts not only became an important part of Fortree society, but she also made it clear that anything is possible—and everything has its purpose, even if it is to end a life in order to bring in the future of another's.
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 10)

That last chapter was very nice. After Chapter Nine being a more down-to-earth characterization builder, Ten was exciting and nicely written at all of the pivotal points. I could feel the fear held by the duo and also put myself in Turtwig's shoes as he went into abandon saving his friends. Turtwig is a strong character with a genuinely human nature, and the fact that he is understandable instead of possessing holy and noble qualities makes me adore him.

The overall flow of this action-filled chapter was great, though in some places the adverbs and prepositions were tricky obstacles, particularly in the spots where Ekans and Lairon are knocked about and in the dialogue (there are a few others scattered around; those are the clusters). Both of the things I mentioned are notorious for creating unnecessary description in little pockets that simply jump up with the "Read me!" sign I've talked about before. Especially in action chapters, the said-bookisms (said with an adverb) really stand out, and I'd advise cutting all of them here, as rarely do they flow well at all. Your dialogue is more than sufficient to carry the mood here, so using just a one-word speech tag will do and blend in more with the surrounding text.

For two examples of the unnecessary things:
It lightly squeezes the Pokémon between its thumb and forefinger, though Trapinch at least doesn't explode. The former Munchlax rolls the Pokémon between the two fingers and it contemplates eating him. Turtwig can see the look of terror in Trapinch's eyes; the glazed top layer and then under it a bright, scary, penetrating stare into death.
The first bolded portion is just an observation that doesn't fit. Given that lightly is there already, that would imply that Trapinch is in no danger of exploding; thus, you can just cut it completely. "The former" seems like it contradicts what you call it the rest of the chapter ("Munchlax"), which implies that it still is a Munchlax. The second bolded part is more a case of trippy adjectives. You're capturing the scene very well, but something more like "Turtwig can see the shades of terror in Trapinch's eyes: the glazed top layer and, underneath, a penetrating gaze into death." would suit it better.
Ekans is accidentally kicked in the process of Munchlax's motion and the snake only saves his own life by using Dig mid-fall and creating a hole in the ground right as he landed. He otherwise would have died from the impact.

Lairon, meanwhile, is somewhat dazed from being hit and falls over pitifully.
"Accidentally" does not matter. Munchlax is less-than-intelligent as you claim, so why should it matter that Ekans getting kicked is meant to happen or not? Besides, something getting kicked during a motion happens accidentally enough to where you really don't need to mention it. The second bolded line is something a reader would draw from the sentence before it; it's a complete restatement of the information you already provide us with. Lastly, the bold part of Lairon's sentence is unnecessary; why would Lairon be dazed from anything else? Awe? Between getting hit by the Gunk Shot and falling over pitifully (this is a good adverb actually), I doubt anything present but the hit would cause a daze. Of course, this last part may be a huge nitpick.

Otherwise, I have no nitpicks aside from a missed capitalization or tense here and there. You have your adjectives under control for the most part, the descriptions are long and short in the right places, and like I've said the chapter is very solid overall.

Looking forward to the next chapter! Happy writing :)
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 10)

You're completely right. Because I did this one chapter in a single night and didn't break it up into multiple days, I didn't have the opportunity to go back and read through and remember what I'd already covered. Looking back over now, I don't even know why I put in those added sentences because they really are pointless and had I written the chapter in the morning like I usually do (best time for me to write), I probably wouldn't have added them :p

Thanks for the criticism, I really appreciate it! I might not have the next chapter up soon due to a busy week ahead, but I will hopefully get the side story up if I can.

Despite the giant Munchlax being rather unintelligent, it kind of acted like a regular Munchlax, huh?
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 10)

Here are some updates: You can find the special side story in this post, which is also where chapter ten is located! I also have another chapter down below that I'll be posting. I did this one during my vacation last weekend and will also be posting another in a day or two since it has also been completed already!

I will say that the side story has a religious tension between two characters, however there is no true/untrue point of view within the chapter itself. If you do not wish to view content threatening the viability of a true Arceus, then ignore the story! :p
Chapter 11: Transition​

"Okay." Turtwig was familiar with the word, especially since he uses it on a regular basis. The simple response can mean a variety of things—how a first day of school might have gone, how a first date went, or even just a small confirmation or answer.

"Okay" was not the best word in this situation. Sure, Turtwig was medically stable. He was physically stable. However, there is another important aspect in which Turtwig is not just okay: mentally, he has changed. That night has scarred his conception of the world—of a cure—after murdering an infected Pokémon. That Munchlax did not understand what it was doing, nor did it realize it was infected. It was just a natural instinct to eat. Turtwig has tried to change that instinct to better suit his own life. Nature, however, does not view this as "okay" at any level. Turtwig, therefore, realizes what he has ruined: he no longer can revert to the ignorant, albeit kind Pokémon he was just a day or two ago. He will never just be "okay." Not in this lifetime.

Turtwig has been conscious a long time (though no one at the hospital knew it—not even Skitty!), but he keeps his eyes closed. He needs to process the past 24 hours. While the nurses frantically deal with other patients, Turtwig hides his vision from the faces of those he has surprised—the faces that are now soiled with the witnessing of a murder.

. . .​

"He's going to be okay," Scyther announces later on in the morning.

While the trainees and squad members celebrate, Scyther then shifts uncomfortably on the ground. He then announces that while Turtwig rests, he wants the other trainees to practice battle each other and determine the two winners for the evening. This exercise will, according to him, bring both coordination and attention back on protection and not on worry. Many of the trainees do not agree with this idea, but they continue it on anyway.

"The two winners, along with Turtwig, will be given lessons by the squad for their hard work—the three will officially be amongst the highest-ranked trainees. You have an hour or two to prepare, so use your time wisely. I am going to go eat something because I'm hungry. You shouldn't raid the food, though, because you're going to be battling all day," Scyther says with a cunning grin.

. . .​

Turtwig must have fallen back asleep because as he involuntarily opens his eyelids upon awakening, he sees Skitty, Trapinch, Shuppet, and Squirtle around the perimeter of his hospital bed. Turtwig yawns and rubs his right eye with a stubby yellow-tipped leg. They all cheer once he seems to have recovered.

"How was the rest?" Shuppet asks politely.

"Much-needed," Turtwig says.

"Do you remember all of what happened yesterday?" Skitty questions, though Turtwig nods slightly and slams his head back on the bed.

"What's wrong?" Squirtle frowns.

"I murdered an innocent Pokémon."

The four look at each other anxiously and scuffle about the floor a few seconds until Trapinch counters the statement with one of sympathy and encouragement:

"You saved our lives—you took one to save dozens. I wouldn't call it a total loss," he says.

"Tell that to Munchlax's dead trainer. I wonder why we don't see more savages than just those few around here," Turtwig changes the subject.

"Probably because up north there isn't a high population," Skitty suggests. "If you're fully recovered, then maybe you should go and get a nice, appetizing meal down at the Pokémon Gym. We store some food there for times like this."

"Excuse me?" Ralts peeks in from the corner of the hallway. "I need Trapinch to come for wall duty."

Trapinch hugs Turtwig tightly and then trots away behind Ralts. Skitty likewise gets called back to look at Frogadier's pounding headache. However, Ralts comes back in the room to thank Turtwig once again for saving her life.

"I owe you one," she smiles.

"No, you really don't. Stop being so nice."

"Turtwig?" Squirtle calls out from behind Turtwig's turned head.

"What?"

"Shuppet and I have a competition to attend. You see, the trainees—well, all but you—are going to be battling it out for some lessons. You automatically get them for your work yesterday, so you go and catch up on some eating. Shuppet and I have to go battle real soon."

Right as Squirtle and Shuppet exit the hospital room, Snivy steps in and knocks on the door. She waits for a second and notices that Turtwig has started to drift off to sleep. She begins to walk out until she hears him asking who is there.

"Snivy," she replies.

"What are you doing here?"

"I just wanted to thank you for saving our butts," she says nicely. "How did you know to aim at the nape of the neck?"

Turtwig stops all motion and focuses his mind on the events yesterday. The savage, it eating Ralts, it almost eating Trapinch…all those beginning events set the stage for his adrenaline-powered attack. Turtwig somehow automatically aimed for the neck and not other vulnerable locations, such as the stomach or even the head. How did he know?

"Must've been beginner's luck," he says as a suggestion.

"I've only seen one other person attack like that; my older sister, then a Servine, would use Leaf Blade right at the neck and easily defeat the opponent. This happened right before the outbreak got really bad, and it was very brief, too," Snivy says, but she then goes quiet.

"What happened to her?"

"I lost her…I think she perished in an ambush or something…" she trails off.

"I'm sorry."

"Don't be. It wasn't your fault."

After that, a long pause came about and they awkwardly began to stare down at their feet. Snivy then looks up, gets ready to say something, but puts a vine to her mouth and ponders whether to or not. Eventually, though, she decides to speak, and she looks much more serious than her sassy self.

"Losing a loved one in person is very hard—especially if that person gets eaten. Seeing someone that is seemingly so strong-willed in such a weak state, such an end to a life…it turns a person hard in the heart. I used to not be so strict. Actually, I used to be carefree and happy like the rest of you. Once I lost my sister, though, I gave up on seeing life's optimistic side and began to writhe in self-pity. …So thank you for saving the town in such a state," Snivy finishes and turns to leave.

"That's true squad potential," she adds as she exits the doorway, walks down the hall, and continues out of the hospital without turning back to see his face.

. . .​

Scyther looks at the sun and sees that it's starting to get later in the afternoon. Once he gathers all the competing trainees, he begins to explain the rules, the awards, and the consequences. After doing the basics, Scyther decides to let the first team go up to battle.

"Fletchinder and Shuppet, I want a good, clean match to start off our tournament!"

Fletchinder immediately uses Flame Charge to boost its already fast speed to a higher level. It glides on its black-and-yellow wings and begins to dive down faster, creating a burning intensity right behind it. Fletchinder aims at Shuppet, but the Ghost-type Pokémon moves quickly and allows the attack to miss it. Shuppet, in return, focuses its energy to the horn of its body and releases an electric attack straight at Fletchinder.

The Thunderbolt bounces off the ground and strikes the Fire-type bird hard. Soon after, Fletchinder hits Shuppet back with a perfect-accuracy Aerial Ace. Shuppet falls to the ground and bounces a bit, but he gets back up and watches the Fire/Flying Pokémon recuperate. It then goes in for another Aerial Ace to finish the attack, but Shuppet dives into Fletchinder's shadow and then sneaks up behind it to attack head-on. This Shadow Sneak knocks Fletchinder to the ground with a hard thump! and Shuppet unleashes a ball of dark, purple Ghost-type energy to finish the job, knocking Fletchinder out of the competition.

"Shuppet wins!" Scyther cheers. "Fennekin and Wingull, you guys are next!"

Wingull flies onto the grassy field and starts off with a Water Gun attack, rocketing a blast of water straight at the Kalos Fire-type starter. Fennekin responds with a newly-mastered Psychic—it bends the torrent of water and bounces it back to hit Wingull straight-on. This happens twice more, but Wingull then decides to use Air Slash and break the chain of repeating events.

The slash of air is retaliated by Fennekin's Psychic, but this time Wingull uses a combo and slyly hits Fennekin with a surprise Water Gun, knocking out the Pokémon and landing Wingull a spot in the next round.

"Wingull gets it! Wurmple and Bunnelby for battle three!"

Wurmple inches onto the battlefield and sees Bunnelby hopping from side to side with anticipation. Bunnelby goes first and uses a Huge Power-boosted Quick Attack to knock Wurmple on its side against the ground, but then Bunnelby easily finishes it with another Quick Attack. It runs at high speeds, high enough for a white streak to follow it, and slams into the Pokémon, erasing its chances of winning the prize.

"Bunnelby effortlessly gets this one! Squirtle and Marill, you're our last battle for the first round. Tropius will get a pass since only nine competitors are here," Scyther continues.

Marill begins the battle with a priority-boosted Aqua Jet, but Squirtle hides in his shell to take less damage. Squirtle then uses Water Gun to attack Marill back, but, like with Aqua Jet, the Water-STAB did very little. Marill again uses Aqua Jet, claiming that is the only attack it really has, and blasts a stream of water, while inside it, at Squirtle. Squirtle then deflects the attack with a Rapid Spin, and he aims the spin right at Marill's tail. Upon impact, Marill concedes defeat since there is not a way to win.

"Squirtle wins a very poorly-fought battle," Scyther groans. "Wingull will get a pass this round. Shuppet and Bunnelby will go first.

Shuppet realizes that in Shadow Sneak, Shadow Ball, and Thunderbolt, it could not touch Bunnelby. Bunnelby, likewise, could not use Quick Attack on Shuppet. The dilemma is very unique, but both Pokémon have tricks up their sleeves.

Bunnelby moves first and grabs a rock to smack at Shuppet, knocking it straight down onto the ground. Smack Down is a Rock-type move, so it at least does some damage toward Shuppet, though it did not appear to do enough. Shuppet retaliates with a non-attacking move. It gets several blue balls of fire around its body and allows them to rotate around in an ominous state. Soon enough, they are unleashed and end up burning Bunnelby.

"Will-o-Wisp," Shuppet says, "halves the attack of the affected Pokémon. Now try using your ability!"

Bunnelby, distraught, focuses on battle plans as it continuously suffers damage from the burn. It then gets the idea and throws gobs of Mud at Shuppet. Because Mud Shot is a special attack, it does regular damage—and the damage is enough to KO Shuppet with the STAB boost. Shuppet falls over unconscious and slowly recovers from the hard blow.

"Bunnelby will make it on to the finals!" Shuppet laughs from the battle. "Now Tropius and Squirtle can give it a shot!"

Tropius and Squirtle arrive on the desired locations of the battlefield and quickly begin. Squirtle uses Water Gun on Tropius, but the Pokémon lifts into the air and dodges it. Tropius then proceeds to collect leaves at Squirtle's feet and kick up some wind.

"You're not doing anything," Squirtle says confusedly.

Suddenly, the air picks up and creates a tornado of grass and leaves, hitting Squirtle in every direction and eventually knocking it out from previous use. Squirtle was just not prepared to face a Grass-type Pokémon, or any Pokémon resistant to it in that regard.

"Tropius will also move on! He, Bunnelby, and Wingull will battle it out in a three-way. Whichever Pokémon faints first will fail!" Scyther drags on.

The three Pokémon line up on the field. Bunnelby and Tropius give each other a slight nod, much to Wingull's suspicion. Wingull decides to charge at Tropius up close for an Air Slash, but Bunnelby uses Smack Down on Wingull and the rock hits it right in the wings, causing it to fall flat on the ground. Tropius then begins to build up stored energy from the sunlight. It will thankfully take a turn or two.

Wingull then uses Water Gun and hits Bunnelby super hard, though the Pokémon is still able to battle. Tropius gets hit with multiple Air Slashes, though Bunnelby gets behind it and Tropius then smiles once it is done charging the Solar Beam.

Wingull, of course, had no chance against the attack. Solar Beam knocked the Pokémon straight out, leaving Tropius and Bunnelby the clear winners of the tournament, and the two of them will be getting the exclusive training.

Disappointed, Wingull goes with the rest of the trainees and watches as the other two celebrate triumphantly.

. . .​

Turtwig is called to the fields for special training, so he climbs out of his hospital bed and walks down the hallway. He exchanges smiles with Skitty and blushes as he exits the Pokémon Center. However, he comes face-to-face with Skarmory for possibly the first time. Skarmory is the town leader, though he seldom leaves the Pokémon Gym. He was previously the Pokémon used by Winona as well. The metal bird stands proudly among the rest of the citizens walking about.

"Thank you, Turtwig, for your service the other day," the leader tells him. "I highly appreciate your sacrifices and triumphs."

Turtwig thanks him back and quickly moves on so the situation does not get awkward. He runs across the field and meets Bunnelby and Tropius in the middle.

"Am I late?" he asks, but the two shake their heads and welcome him back.

The three of them chat a bit until a throat is cleared from behind them. Turtwig glances around and then sees the three squad members—Snivy, Ekans, and Combusken, feeling superior, have their chins up and chests out to show off their power.

"So we have officially confirmed that the monsters have one near-impossible-to-reach spot on the back of their necks…this spot is their Achilles heel, their spot of vulnerability. I am going to teach you how to use this knowledge to your advantage and, hopefully, you will live a couple more days based on how well you do," she says, chuckling toward the end.

"Now, even if you have killed a savage before," she pauses and glances at Turtwig, "you need this class because, chances are, it was luck. Therefore, I'm going to make sure you three can defend the city when needed. I'm counting on you not to screw this up. The fate of this city may just be in your hands."

There's some action in this chapter, but you always need a breather in between big events! I'm glad I finally got to update. I'll update within the next couple of days.
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 11)

Thought I'd post one more chapter before the end of this wonderful weekend. There's a new savage in town! Death is creeping closer, too, so stay tuned because Fortree City is not going to be peaceful anytime soon!

Chapter 12: Imperfect

Turtwig flutters his eyes and sees the dewy grass sticking to his body, causing it to be uncomfortably wet and covered in small pieces of sediment. He stands up from the ground and inspects his full surroundings: he's in the same field as last night. He had fallen asleep during training. Looking to his right, Turtwig sees the bunny trainee sleeping atop Tropius; the Bunnelby lies within the long neck Tropius possesses, and Tropius has his face smothered against the ground. Turtwig ignores them and blinks rapidly to fully wake up.

"Ugh, it's always the twin that does the murdering," a voice says from beyond Turtwig's spot. "I hate reading."

Snivy tosses a small, rough-edged book with a light brown cover into the wet grass and frowns. "Are those two going to sleep all morning? Breakfast is in a half-hour and they should be getting ready for the day."

She then looks over to Turtwig and sees that he is awake. She greets him and remarks that he proved to be a tough opponent in the practice that night. He was by far the best battler of the three. However, she explains that Combusken is nothing like a savage.

"…instead, he's more of a punching back. While smacking him around is fun, it's not the same as attacking a savage. He was our best giant, though, so we kind of failed at that part. At least the practice went well!"

Her sleek, crescent-shaped body shines in the upcoming sun. The sharp leaves of her tail are covered in dew, but it makes them seem more tender and loving. They no longer stand dry and uppity, but rather relaxed and comfortable. Snivy seems in a peaceful mood, but then her eyes narrow and a grin appears on her small face.

"Let's battle," she says, "so that I can see what you know."

"Battle?" Turtwig gasps. "I don't know if I'm ready to battle an actual squad member head-to-head…"

"Just shut up and make the first move," she smirks.

Turtwig decides to use Stealth Rock to cover the field in stones. He unleashes at least three dozen of them and puts them all around him so that he's trapped behind a barrier of stones. Snivy, however, springs upward and hits the rocks with her Vine Whip. Turtwig retaliates with a strong Seed Bomb, which thrusts Snivy to the ground upon explosion. Her light body softly landed in the grass, though the impact was not as cushioned as it seemed. However, Snivy effortlessly uses Leaf Blade to slash Turtwig back and then hits with another one to push him further. Turtwig uses several random Razor Leaf attacks, though they all miss and Snivy uses one swift Vine Whip to finally take the turtle down.

"I'm just weak," he says while frowning.

"It's not that," Snivy explains. "Actually, I think you were doing fine until the end. You turned reckless and forgot where the target really was. Your power is right on the mark, but your thoughts are not."

"My turn," a voice from behind announces.

Bunnelby hops up to Snivy and glares at her. Tropius follows closely behind. Snivy smiles and accepts a two-on-one challenge, but she took out Bunnelby in a single hit and knocked Tropius out with a couple of Leaf Blade attacks. She sighs and tells them to keep practicing.

"Keep this lesson to yourselves, you three. This is important. I don't want the general public to have to worry about these types of things yet," she says calmly.

They all agree with a slight nod. Snivy clears her throat and continues talking:

"There will be another expedition soon. I think you guys should stay here, though. Turtwig, you got to go on the last one, so you should definitely stay here since you also get this practice. The other two are also strong defenders so I want them to protect as well. The other trainees can go, but I think you three would be best served in a defensive position for now."

"Tropius and I haven't gotten to go on an expedition yet!" Bunnelby counters, though Snivy looks at him with a serious, although somewhat angered, face.

"I understand," Turtwig sighs, "but I'm going to miss the thrill of battle."

"Now run to the trainee cabin and enter in quietly. Act as though nothing has happened," she finishes, shooing the others off to their home.

As they begin to run, Snivy walks off to the Pokémon Center to check on its status. She heard that Furret was having problems with stitches, so she wants to make sure the Pokémon has some comfort at hand.

The Grass-type Unova starter walks on with a quick pace. Though her feet and stride may be somewhat lacking in length, she proudly and hurriedly arrives at the Pokémon Center in seconds flat. She blinks and then sees that Turtwig's group is gone. Sighing, she enters the doors and begins to wonder "what if" scenarios.

. . .​

Trapinch hobbles onto the wall's main western section and sleepily watches as his shift has just started. It is still early in the morning, so he does not have enough energy to keep his eyes completely open. In fact, they are practically shut by the time he gets there.

"One day I will get wings and fly into the old world once again," he mumbles in what seems to be his dreams. The ant-like Pokémon then curls up in a ball and begins to snooze, a snot bubble now coming out of an almost-nonexistent nostril.

Bang! something smashes against the western wall and sends small rocks flying backwards. Trapinch immediately jumps to attention and rubs his beady eyes to see what has caused the disturbance. Surely it is just a trainee doing practice or Frogadier smacking his head on the wall.

When he glances in the direction of the attack, which was actually on the outside of the wall, Trapinch first sees a large horn shining in the moonlight. Soon enough, a brown body similar to a caterpillar appears and the savage Weedle makes its appearance known.

Trapinch runs a little ways on the wall and smacks a sleeping Altaria, who responds with Hyper Voice as a means of an emergency alarm. Soon enough, Fortree City was awake in the middle of early morning. It's about to face yet another attack on the outer wall.

. . .​

Within a minute, almost all of the trainees and several of the squad members have arrived for the action—including Snivy, Furret, and Drowzee. They all rush out the gate and confront the giant Bug-type menace. Turtwig, however, is not to be seen…and neither are Bunnelby or Tropius.

"Where are they?" Squirtle panics.

"They must be training still," Fletchinder says with an awkward look on his face.

The savage Weedle rams its horn into the wall, resulting in a powerful blast and a hunk of rock launching into town. Now there is a decently-sized hole within the wall. With overwhelming intensity, most of the trainees now face the fight of their lives. Most of them.

. . .​

Turtwig hears the call and begins to walk over to the gate, however a chill ran up his spine and he decides to instead go comfort some of the kids who may have ran to the Pokémon School for shelter. He runs to the wooden elevator and pulls himself up with the rope in his mouth. He runs across some houses and over a few bridges until he finally reaches the school. Seeing a few kids, such as Pansage, Pansear, Panpour, and Swablu, Turtwig decides to grab a book and cover for the sleeping Ms. Miltank.

"Once upon a time, a Pyroar proudly served as king of the jungle," Turtwig starts nervously, obviously trying to block the attack from his mind. However, he then starts talking faster and faster until it's just a jumble of words.

"Oncehisfatherwaskilledinanaccident,PrinceLitleowasforcedtotakethethroneandprotectthejunglefromanypossibleharm," Turtwig speeds through the book faster than he could comprehend.

Snivy told me to give the others a chance to battle, Turtwig reminds himself. I don't need to be on the front lines all the time…

"Can you continue the story?" the Pansage begs, and so Turtwig nods eagerly and continues on reading.

However, once almost halfway through the story, Turtwig hears screaming and shouting from outside the walls. He tells the kids he has to go and jumps off the tree house platform without using an elevator. He lands in a bush and runs toward the gate's doors. In front of the doors are Tropius and Bunnelby, obviously also worried for their friends.

"I'm going to need a stretcher!" Skitty screeches and she drags a badly scratched Linoone into the city limits.

Chansey and Audino come with a small bedlike structure for Linoone to lie on. The two of them run with him in it in hopes that they will make it in time to operate. Skitty, though, stays behind to monitor the rest. Turtwig walks up to her and leans his head on her shoulder.

"You should try and do something!" she urges.

Behind the other two still, Turtwig rushes out to see the giant, stupid menace—the savage Weedle is actually very tall for its savage species. The Pokémon is drilling holes right in the castle wall, though, so he must kill the thing before he can look at it interestingly.

One of the trainees—Fletchinder, Turtwig believes—attacks Weedle and is slammed into the wall. Seeing this vicious attack stops Turtwig in his tracks: he is frozen. Tropius and Bunnelby run on, but Turtwig doesn't move from his spot. He watches as Fletchinder gets thrown into the crowd, though Turtwig is not sure whether or not he is alive.

"Turtwig! Now is the time to come and help us out!" Snivy screams while she dodges a large amount of Poison from Poison Sting.

Turtwig stares at her in disbelief. He looks from her to the monster and then bolts—he runs for it to save his own skin. Turtwig jogs back into the city where he just might live at least another day.

"What is he doing?!" Snivy says loudly, though the others only shrug.

Turtwig exits the battle and runs on.

. . .​

Shuppet's Confuse Ray has at least paused the destruction—Weedle can no longer understand anything visually. Though it is stupid, it seems to be even smarter than the last…it knew where the food was; furthermore, it also knew how to get to it. Squirtle and Marill end the hesitation and blast it with either Water Gun or Aqua Jet, respectively.

Furret grabs a weakened Fennekin and slings him over to Skitty for first aid. Drowzee, meanwhile, uses his Psychic to super effectively levitate the brown-bodied insect off the ground. The attack seems to be severely weakening it.

The other attacks continue. Water Gun, Aqua Jet, Air Slash, Shadow Ball, Vine Whip—you name it and the attack was probably used. However, after about twenty minutes of continuous use, Drowzee's Psychic gives way and he lets the Pokémon fall.

In return for so unkindly lifting it up, the Weedle begins blasting Poison Stings everywhere—at the trees, at the wall, at itself. However, only one sting actually hit a target: Drowzee.

Drowzee was stabbed by the strong attack and pinned against a tree trunk. As blood began to gush from his stomach area, Drowzee faints and begins to lose all chances of surviving. It reminded Snivy of one of those toothpicks that holds a sandwich together since his entrails are still intact.

"Hit the neck!" she squeals despite wanting to keep the location a secret.

Wingull, in the blind fury, manages to use Air Slash on the nape of Weedle's neck, which blasts it into pieces and its somewhat-of-a-skeleton automatically dismantled. Ekans screams and makes a comment about a Poison Sting almost taking his legs off (it was right beside the tip of his tail) and the group laughs.

. . .

However, the battle is far from over. Skitty walks in the waiting room and explains to all the present Pokémon what the real scenario is:

"After much force, the spike was removed from Drowzee's body. Not only that, but he was given a blood transfusion and was patched up nicely. However, the transfusion is not enough to remove the strong traces of poison running through his veins—Drowzee's outlook is pitifully against him. It seems that the poisons from these savages work like attacks: they are much, much stronger and very hard to cure. I don't think we're going to save him in time," she says apologetically.

Snivy frowns to herself. I don't want to blame anyone, but Turtwig could have helped with the attack. The outcome may have been different had he decided to help. What made him quit like that?

Snivy's expression is very grave, as is most of the other trainees'. However, they must continue on and honor the loss of Drowzee should the events run through that exact course. They all sniffle, let loose tears, or talk about good times with Drowzee in the city.

Outside the Pokémon Center, right under the window closest to the waiting room, Turtwig listens to the display of the emotions. He himself is crying, but not for Drowzee's certain doom—he has failed Skitty, Snivy, and the rest of the city because he encountered a little stage fright with the savage. He didn't protect Fortree City. He only protected himself.

Working on a Table of Contents slowly! It will look all nice and stuff once I get the chance to do something with it!

Oh, and yes, the really long word/sentence was on purpose!
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 12)

Updating sooner and sooner! I even have another chapter already typed up. This chapter is very important on many different levels. Intensity is about to skyrocket. Get ready for an amazing part one finale in chapters 18-20!

Chapter 13: Pain

Purple. Formerly yellow, now purple. The terrifying look of Drowzee's skin causes many of the Pokémon surrounding his hospital bed to cringe that morning. Skitty walks in while balancing her clipboard on her tail. She looks paler than usual. Once she gets the clipboard and glances over the small details of Drowzee's situation, she frowns and sets it face-down on the countertop.

"There isn't much I can do," she says gravely. "His body rejects the Heal Bell I chime, no matter how hard I try. The poison is seeping into his organs, causing all kinds of damage. It's nothing I've ever seen before. It's a matter of hours, to be honest. He isn't going to make it."

Skitty then turns around, tail down, and walks out of the hospital room, into the hallway, and sticks her head in the trashcan to vomit. She looks down to see the hot, burning stomach acids in varying colors from molten orange to sickly green. She hasn't eaten in days due to Drowzee's condition. It gets worse and worse to the point that she can't stomach anything.

"Ma'am?" a voice from behind her asks in a somewhat high, somewhat angry tone.

"What, Frogadier, is the problem this time?" Skitty snaps back, baring her teeth.

"Whoa, whoa, whoa. I didn't come here to be yelled at by a small kitten. I'll just go find Chansey and get her to help me out," the bubble-scarf Pokémon mumbles.

As the blue Pokémon trudges away, Skitty covers her face with her pink tail and tries to coax her stomach to contain itself again. However, she hops right back towards the trash can and unleashes what's left inside of her.

. . .​

"What was that stunt you pulled out there?" Snivy, her tail-leaves quivering in anger, interrogates Turtwig with a scowl on her face. "Was that cowardice?"

Her sharp brown eyes pierce inside Turtwig's body and look deep in his soul almost as if for the answers, but Turtwig turns his head and shuts his eyes tight. She remains in her spot and begins to tap her cream-colored foot on the ground. They're right outside the western gate, but Turtwig would rather be outside the city than inside with a steaming-mad Snivy.

In response to her demands, Turtwig turns the rest of his body around and trots away toward the trainee cabin. Tears stream from his eyes and fly out into the air, evaporating before they could touch the ground. Summer, though, was coming to a close and everyone has begun to stock up big time for the winter. With the weakened defenses, though, times are tough on everyone. In this case, especially for Turtwig.

"You can't hide forever! You may not be able to hide from the savages, but you especially can't hide from me! By the time I catch up to you, you better spill or I'll rip that shell right off your spineless back! You'll be avoiding me next go-around, not the monsters!" Snivy calls out to no one—Turtwig is long gone.

Snivy shakes her smooth head and sighs. Slowly, she begins to follow Turtwig's trail in hopes that she can understand what he's going through. Snivy extends a forest-green vine up and wraps it around one of the posts of the tree house patio. She throws herself aboard and peeks into the house to see Turtwig, balled up and in a corner, crying softly. She touches a gentle vine to his cheek and asks him, this time in a nicer, calmer voice, about what happened.

"I don't know," he says, brushing the vine off.

Snivy freezes, shakes her head as if to return from some trip to another world, and returns the vine to its position on her back. She blinks once, twice, and lowers her eyes to Turtwig's.

"It's okay to be afraid. I've been afraid plenty of times. In fact, I've lost someone very dear to me just for that," Snivy whispers nicely, but then she pauses before continuing. "We just can't let fear dominate our lives. Sometimes, when we lose all of our courage, we just have to think of something—something—that can bring it back. What do you care about most, Turtwig?"

Turtwig pauses his weeping and refocuses his vision. What did he care about? He cares about Skitty, and Trapinch, and Shuppet, and Fennekin, and Marill, and Squirtle, and Snivy, but…what does he actually care about? What matters most?

"My family," he says decidedly.

"You have relatives around here?" Snivy asks, confused.

"No. This—Fortree City—is my family. I don't want to lose any of you," Turtwig smiles weakly.

Well you can't have us all, Snivy thinks to herself. Instead of saying it out loud, she decides to say something sappy like "that's a great thing to care about."

"I'm going to go see Drowzee," Turtwig sniffs, though he has appeared to have lightened up since Snivy first saw him in the tree house.

"I'll go with you," Snivy says, smiling, and helps him onto the ground with the extension of a vine.

. . .​

"Time it," Chansey whispers solemnly.

"3:57 P.M. Unknown date, 2014. Cause of death is poisoning," Skitty continues and decides to mention every bit of information she can without crying.

"Thank you," the Egg Pokémon concludes.

Turtwig and Snivy walk into the hospital room that once belonged to Drowzee, though they both watch in horror as Audino puts the blanket over a purple-bodied thing's face. They silently back out of the doorway and back in the hall. The whole area smells of rotten flesh and organs. Turtwig recognizes the smell from the return trip with Furret. That brown bag had a body in it as well.

. . .​

In the woods, maybe an hour later​

Machoke, the town handyman, lifts the limp body, which is still covered in blankets, and sets it in the fresh hole that Trapinch and Bunnelby dug out. Bunnelby then quickly covers the blanketed body in the original dirt and, after a few minutes of work, pats down the remaining bulges in the ground.

"Let us all have a moment of silence for him," Scyther says, the highest Pokémon in command that came outside.

Everyone, including Snivy and Turtwig, close their eyes and wear frowns on their faces. After the silence is over, not much is said until Turtwig breaks the silence.

"This is all my fault," he whispers.

Snivy cringes from that self insult and slaps Turtwig on his yellow cheek. "You did not cause Drowzee's death. He couldn't help it—he was just trying to save the city and he got the poison on him. We didn't know it was lethal. Maybe you should go on that expedition and take some time off.

Turtwig, staying silent for over a minute while thinking of a reply, says, "I'm not going. The others need experience. I'm fine; it's just a dip in my mood."

Snivy puts on an almost-microscopic smile and thanks him for understanding. She walks quickly and almost sprints back into the walls of Fortree City because it's never safe outside. At least the walls provide some protection, or at least the thought of it. Turtwig, along with the others, walks on and into the town again, though he leans up against the wall's interior and goes through the actions again in his mind.

. . .​

The bed is clean, the bathroom is clean, the floor is clean, and the atmosphere is clean, though each individual aspect of Drowzee's former hospital room has caused only sweat and irritation for the weak-stomached Skitty. She scrubs the tiled floor with a small sponge and tries to clean up any residue or blood that may've seeped into the cracks. The occasional tear runs down her face, though she seems hardened by the sudden death. Once finally done cleaning the room, Skitty goes out the door, through the hallway, and into the Pokémon Center's lobby.

"Please, my head is killing me!" a familiarly annoying voice can be heard from across the room. Skitty doesn't bother looking toward it because she knows exactly who it is.

"Frogadier," a voice, seemingly in the same mood as Skitty, says, "I have your meds right here. If you just calm down, breathe deeply, and take your medication as prescribed, your headache will be gone in a matter of minutes."

Audino slams the small bag of pills (they quickly ran out of bottles and Frogadier collects them, so he does not like reusing them) into Frogadier's chest, turns him around, and suggests him to take the path outside.

"Does life have to be so miserable?" Skitty asks herself, but she knows the answer before she even finished speaking. Of course.

. . .​

Trapinch sits hunched-over on the castle wall and looks over the miles of treetops. The green sea is almost like a giant pillow—Trapinch would love to just jump off a high diving board and land in the cushiony leaves. The solemn day has ruined his generally neutral mood.

Boom! a loud noise can be heard far away, and soon after several birds began to fly straight up in the sky as if they were avoiding something. Trapinch, even when squinting, is unable to distinguish any activity, so he continues to glance back at the area when scanning the other directions.

There is no other noise after that. He waits the whole day before standing upright, so he finally gets teleported to the ground and heads to bed. After finally making it to the tree house, Trapinch just falls over in his sandy bed and snores loudly without even regarding the fact that someone in the room is still awake.

. . .​

Turtwig shifts back and forth within his covers. With nightmares of the savages he has faced, the Nosepass, the Munchlax, and the Weedle, he cannot get over their unknowing stares, the emptiness in their eyes. To get his mind off them, though, he decides to take a walk around town and wear himself down to almost instant sleep.

Turtwig slips down the rope ladder and lands with a ker-plunk! on the ground. He then turns around and begins his quick jog. Once he reaches the other side of town, where some of the squad members live, he decides to take a breather and sits against the tall, brown tree trunk.

"Well aren't you a little suspicious, running around all night and all," says a voice from above. As Turtwig glances up toward the voice, a barely-familiar Pokémon slips down on her vines and lands beside him.

Chikorita looks him up and down before smiling brightly. She reveals that she, too, couldn't sleep at all. However, it was because she drank three cans of soda before trying to close her eyes.

"I can't just not drink it—I have a stash and everything, but don't tell anyone!" she giggles.

"What do you know about savages?"

"I've only personally met one—a giant Nosepass," she recounts. "I've battled against a few here and there, but that Nosepass caught me by surprise.

Upon hearing her say the name, Turtwig immediately thought back to earlier in his Fortree days:

Standing right in front of him—standing right over the wall, like a teenager about to step over a speed bump, is the giant Pokémon. It doesn't make a move, and neither does Turtwig. They both just stare at each other. Even though it's dark, Turtwig can make out some details of the Pokémon. It has a long, red nose that stands out as its biggest feature. It has a stone texture to its body, including arms and legs, that makes it look impenetrable.

This Pokémon—Turtwig identifies it as a Nosepass—is normally only three feet tall…but, to him, it seems to be about three hundred feet tall. His feet go cold. His heart starts beating faster than a rapper can spit out words. His brain freezes, all activity paused momentarily as Turtwig's life may now be over. The Pokémon looks sternly at him, though it does not have full consciousness. It appears to be some sort of lifeless body…like a zombie. Turtwig blinks hard, and then hears it:

Thump! Thump! Thump! Thump!

It's gone.


"Turtwig? Hello?" Chikorita confusingly asks him, and Turtwig snaps back to attention upon hearing his name.

"Oh, sorry. I was just thinking of a similar experience," he explains.

"Well," she says, "I wish you a good night. I'm going to get some shut eye."

With that, Chikorita gives a small smile and begins climbing the rope ladder with her two vines.

"I really need a pair of those," Turtwig whispers to himself.

Chikorita waves as her face gets slightly red for some reason. She turns around, back completely exposed for Turtwig's eyes, and slowly walks back in the house as if she was on some sort of modeling contract.

Turtwig begins back towards his own cabin. By the time that he does manage to get to his bed, he passes own halfway on the pillow and dreams about each of his friends dying one by one. Only he survives. Oddly enough, he continues with the dream instead of waking up.

Thanks for reading! Stay tuned.
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 13)

I'm back with another pre-typed chapter! I'm loving this one-every-three-days pattern, so I'm going to try and keep it at that. This the last chapter where happiness reigns supreme. With the part one finale, chapters 19 and 20 (a two-part kind of thing) coming soon, expect anything and everything. The title is Savages for a reason. A really lighthearted moment finally happens toward the end, so keen in on the final scene! Thanks for reading :D

Chapter 14: Preparations

"It's time for everyone to get up," Scyther calmly whispers in the dark trainee cabin. "There's going to be a quick training session today and I have a couple other squad members with me so we can be here for your own benefit. Please get cleaned up and eat your breakfast! After the training, I will read the list of people that will be attending the expedition."

Groans, whether from stretching or the wake-up call, can be heard from nearly every Pokémon in the cabin. Turtwig keeps his eyes firmly shut and yawns loudly. Once Scyther nudges the door open, the creeping of sunlight causes momentary hissing and pouting. Scyther could only laugh in response. While the others fix their beds, Trapinch and Skitty sneak out to go work while they still can.

. . .​

The training equipment is scattered along the dewy grass outside. Substitute dolls, tall for their size, stand around in a line of ten—the exact number of trainees. They are approximately five feet tall, so they do not match up to the size of a savage. However, the amount of dolls is what bothers Turtwig: this means that every single Pokémon, going on the trip or not, has to train with the others. Wurmple inches up to one and wraps it in silk, but Scyther slashes the web with his scythes and scares Wurmple back a few paces.

"I want you all to slice that substitute doll in the neck. You get one doll and only a couple tries. This training does not determine who is going, but it lets me know who needs the most practice. You have to find a way to defeat this thing or else you will stand no chance in the outside world," Scyther says authoritatively.

Down the line, many Pokémon begin attacking the substitute doll. The green, playful-looking opponents are sturdier than expected—Wurmple and Marill keep on failing. However, while the first two have failed, Squirtle blasts a Water Gun and then uses Rapid Spin to rip through the soaked area of the neck. Fletchinder likewise burns the area and then slashes at it, though there is barely a cut in the location—it would not be lethal to the savage. Fennekin uses Psychic to levitate the Pokémon up, but it still hasn't mastered the move and drops it back on the ground. He sighs and drops his head low. Shuppet uses two Shadow Balls to eventually snap the sewn lining of the neck, though Scyther shakes his head as if that did not count.

Wingull rips a hole open with a single Air Slash. The blast of wind smacks through the doll and breaks it right open. Tropius uses the same attack to the same effect, but it seems to be slightly stronger than Wingull's. However, Bunnelby proves even stronger with a powerful Mud Shot—the balls of mud smack through his doll and rips the head off. When it is finally Turtwig's turn, he looks around to see a couple of other members of the senior team: Chikorita, Combusken, and…Snivy. He freezes in place for a second, glances around to see everyone staring at him, and then unleashes a strong Razor Leaf that slices diagonally and causes the top half to slide down onto the ground, landing sideways on its rounder side. Turtwig moves his eyes to see Snivy smirking as the rest of the group cheers for their decent successes.

"So it's obvious I need to work with a good bit of you," Scyther nods his green head towards the front of the line. "That's okay. Those that will be going on our expedition trip will be Fennekin, Squirtle, Fletchinder, Wingull, Wurmple, Shuppet, and Marill. Turtwig, Tropius, and Bunnelby will be staying here to protect the place. I want you seven, though, to go get packed. We aren't leaving today—maybe not even tomorrow—but I do want you all to be ready when I say we're leaving. I will not wait five minutes for you to grab an accessory or bag. Now, trainees, go do your assignments!"

Turtwig, Tropius, and Bunnelby awkwardly stand still while the others go back to the cabin. However, Scyther walks right past them and calls for all squad members to meet at the inner western wall area. As he waits for everyone to join, he finally turns around to the tree newbies.

"I want you three to attend Swellow's official Fortree Defense class. While the training may be rough, it will definitely help in case of an emergency," he explains.

"How long is your trip going to last? What's it for, even?" Bunnelby asks suspiciously.

"We're going to be scavenging for food, supplies, the likes. It will last several days since winter is approaching in our distant future. We do not have a surplus of food anymore, so we must be careful and begin to eat accordingly."

The three of them stay a bit longer in order to see which upperclassmen are going on the trip. As everyone gets in place, Scyther's seriousness turns into a joking smile and his tense body relaxes into a much more relieved state.

"Okay, everyone, I have a list of those who are going. Chespin, Ekans, Snivy, Houndour, and Linoone, I want you all on the front lines along with me. I think we will make a great team and will do very well in our hunt for food. Combusken, Lairon, Skiddo, Ponyta, and Chikorita, you all are going to stay here and help Skarmory protect the city. If there are any emergencies, then someone like Ponyta may come to inform me immediately," he says.

Snivy's expression seems to have changed from casual to somewhat disappointed. Turtwig wonders whether she really wants to go or not, but the idea soon fades when he sees Chikorita glancing his way. She immediately turns her head back to Scyther, but there is something peculiar about that Pokémon.

"Hey, we need to get going," the banana-chinned Pokémon reminds Turtwig and Bunnelby.

They decide to go ahead and take the class so the day will end on a hopefully happy note, though they all know it's going to be rougher than usual. Turtwig yawns once again and rubs his shoulder with the bridge of his nose.

. . .​

Squirtle walks over and slips a blue hand in his small pillowcase. The case is baby blue, much like his complexion, and somewhat bulky. He takes out the cause—a rather tiny picture frame and smiles at a picture of an older, more distinct version of himself. This Squirtle, though, has a furry tail and different color variations. He seems to admire it for some reason.

"I didn't mean to let you down," he whispers solemnly as a tear begins to swell over his bottom eyelid. "I'm sorry."

The tear trickles down his cheek and lands on the glass frame of the picture. The older Pokémon is with Squirtle, and they're both watering flowers with a Water Gun combo.

"I have to do this for you, for our family."

. . .​

Ouch. A pointed, yellow beak jabs into Turtwig's shell repeatedly. Each time, he cringes back and grits his teeth. Swellow, whose job is to teach defensive techniques to anyone willing to learn, is teaching Turtwig how to be "ready for anything."

"You never know what you might face, whether it be an Ice Punch or a Peck!" he says in a laugh, his jet-blue wings covering his red face. His sleek blue crest of feathers adds a "coolness" factor to his appearance.

"Why is a defensively frail bird in charge of defense?" Turtwig asks in an annoyed tone.

Pck! Swellow jabs again at Turtwig's shell, the beak causing damage despite the armor. Turtwig apologizes and backs away from the slightly odd Swallow Pokémon. Bunnelby and Tropius sort of huddle close to Turtwig in fear of being pecked at as well.

Swellow then rockets up in the air and swoops down right at Turtwig, though the Tiny Leaf Pokémon quickly uses Stealth Rock to block the path to himself. Swellow smacks against a rock and, impressed, comments on his unique usage of the usual hazard move.

"Most Stealth Rock users I know only use it for the hazard technique, not for defense. That was definitely unexpected," Swellow smirks. "This is actually how a Pokémon should be in a dire situation—alert, conscious, and instinctive."

Turtwig smiles at the compliment, though in a slightly uneasy way, and continues with Swellow's lesson. He watches as the Pokémon proceeds to attack Bunnelby and Tropius and how they immediately react like he did before. Hopefully, though, this emergency situation isn't going to happen.

. . .​

Finally, after six patients in a row, Skitty has cleared through a line of impatient patients. Finally, after waiting thirty minutes beyond her shift, she can go to lunch. Finally, after the long morning at the Pokémon Center, Skitty can get a decent break.

Skitty sits alone at a picnic table outside the Pokémon Center. It is the standard wooden picnic table; it even had the red-and-white checkered tablecloth. She opens a brown paper bag and gets a small Oran Berry out. While munching on her lunch, she notices a shadow looming over the table. Groaning, Skitty turns around expecting Frogadier. However, Chansey stands at the table smiling.

"Mind if I sit, Skitty?" she asks kindly.

"Of course!" Skitty pretend smiles—she's still upset that she can't get some time to herself.

"Now, I know you've been working hard, so I'd like to say that you're officially out of training and can call yourself a registered nurse. You've faced several different kinds of danger and embraced them all with your knowledge, calmness, and optimism. Fortree City became a better place when you stepped through its doors!"

"Thank you for the compliment," Skitty says softly.

She continues eating while Chansey studies the table awkwardly. Once she finishes the berry and slips the core into the brown paper bag, Chansey clears her throat in an attempt to speak. Her expression has gone from cheerful to grave. Skitty focuses in on Chansey's eyes, which seem upset with worry.

"Be ready for anything, Skitty," Chansey smiles weakly.

"What do you mean?"

"In a world as dangerous as this, you may not live as oblivious as you get to."

Skitty thinks for a moment and frowns. Oblivious?

"I know you don't understand what I mean right now, but you saw the damage Drowzee had taken before his…departure. You have to accept the fact that you could lose friends along the path through your life. You can't have the perfect scenario, so be prepared for everything," Chansey finishes.

Skitty immediately brings her mind to Turtwig. Her closest friend, Turtwig has put himself in danger numerous times already…could he really just disappear one day? Skitty had never thought of anything but his return. She puts the idea away and snaps back into Chansey's focus.

"Hello, can I actually get some help today?" the familiar voice of an enraged frog screeches from a close distance.

As the lanky figure comes closer, Skitty sees Frogadier with an angry face and a sharp Razor Leaf stuck in his arm. He complains that one of the senior members did it to him for fun, but Chansey only pats his back and leads him in the building once again.

"Looks like we're at it again," Chansey shrugs.

"Great," Skitty says in an unenthusiastic voice.

She steps in slowly, though she stops just short of the door. She looks back at the picnic table, the emptiness in its seats, and frowns again. She goes back over to the table and smoothes out the tablecloth so it covers the top perfectly. She stands back, admiring her work, and then continues to the building with her originally slow pace.

There really is danger out there, but I've only stayed inside this building…and protected myself from it all.

. . .​

The stars begin to peek out of the sunlight, which is a signal for the moon to start taking over for a while. Trapinch watches in awe as if it was his first time gazing at the stars. He squints and sees little flickers of red, a peculiar sight. He smiles contently at the natural occurrence until he hears a small whirring. He turns around to see the familiar teleporting Pokémon. She tiptoes over and sits along the edge of the wall with Trapinch.

"It's beautiful out tonight," Ralts exhales. "I've never seen so many stars in the sky—it's a cloudless night.

"I wonder what I'll do after Fortree City," Trapinch mutters.

"Well let's hope you never leave!" Ralts nervously chuckles, though she quickly grows silent and twiddles her fingers. Then, however, she does decide to pipe up and say something else. "The feeler on my head has been throbbing all day. Do you know what that means?"

Trapinch, confused, brings an odd look to his face before saying, "No, I have no idea. I'm sorry."

Ralts gets the hint and takes off away from Trapinch as he finishes the rest of his day shift. As she has the night shift, Ralts later comes back and relieves Trapinch of the duty so that he can be with his friends before they depart for a journey.

. . .​

"Thanks for coming!" Swellow chirps as he waves a sleek wing in the three's direction.

Turtwig finally trots away from the defense class and sees the night falling in place. He catches a glimpse of Trapinch going up the square elevator and watches as Tropius flies himself and Bunnelby up to the cabin. He sits by the tree and relaxes for a couple minutes.

Turtwig's eyes go from the moonlit sky down to a small movement in the shadows. He stands up straight and stands his ground as a small figure walks down the grassy path. A pink kitten, yawning, waves a friendly tail in his direction. Turtwig smiles as Skitty walks up to him.

"Turtwig," she whispers, "I'm glad you're staying here during this expedition. I don't want to lose you—you're such a good friend."

"I don't really want to go anyway," Turtwig lies. "It's going to be boring."

"And dangerous, too. If anything happened to you…I don't know what I would do."

Turtwig loosens up and relaxes. "I'm honestly glad I don't have to do the back-breaking work in the whole thing. I'd much rather protect the city from a small threat or two. After all, we've taken down several savages with only one casualty. I've never felt so sure of myself until now."

The two of them decide to just go up the square elevator and Turtwig yanks the rope down with his teeth and resets his head in the same position. He literally has to pull the two up, but he doesn't mind.

"Well it has been a long day for me," she rubs an eye. "I think I'm going to call it a day and get some sleep."

Turtwig feels upset that she's sleeping so early. He was going to talk more, to catch up.

"Good night," she whispers.

"Good night," Turtwig says.

Skitty and Turtwig finally lock eyes in the moonlight. She gives him a friendly peck on the cheek and walks away to her bed. It felt almost nonexistent, but it was there. It was real.

Turtwig, with longing eyes, watches her tuck herself in. He continues sitting at the balcony of the tree house and watches the stars twinkle, the moon shine, and the world doze. He smiles to himself for a long moment and then finally goes into the cabin to sleep. Tomorrow is going to be yet another great day for Fortree City.
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 14)

It's that time again! This chapter is where everything begins to change. A new, somewhat upsetting, character is going to have its debut as many characters temporarily exit the city. I love adding in little references to either the basics of competitive gaming or the in-game usage of certain techniques...enjoy!

Chapter 15: Alone

"The green bird is so weird! What does he mean by an 'apocalypse' or whatever he said?" the red elemental monkey asks his friends.

"I don't know, but it sounds really neat!" another exclaims.

Turtwig, who finally has a day off from training, listens in on the conversation from a few paces behind them. The four of them are walking up to the Pokémon School. Turtwig had offered to chaperone their trip there since they have no living parents.

"Who is this green bird?" Turtwig questions the group.

"He calls himself Xatu," Pansear giggles. "What kind of name is that?"

"He lives in the treetops," Panpour, a blue monkey with a weird wave crest at the top of its head, says intelligently.

"He's been talking about some cataclysmic event involving Fortree. I think it's scary," replies a sprout-headed Pansage.

"Thanks for telling me. I'll have to talk to him!" Turtwig says.

He continues talking with the children all the way to the door of the Pokémon School. They begin to wrap up the conversation while Snivy begins to listen in on the conversation from across the rope bridge.

"I wouldn't if I were you. Xatu's weird," whispers Pansage.

"Very weird," the other two add.

Turtwig, however, ignores their warnings and, once he drops them off to the Pokémon School, he runs across the rope bridges, despite their hazardous, rickety planks, and makes his way back to the trainee cabin.

. . .​

"You want us to what?" Trapinch asks in disbelief.

"You and Skitty should come with me to meet Xatu! We can see what future he foretells," Turtwig explains.

"I'd rather go spend a day outside," Skitty, annoyed, frowns after waking up earlier than usual.

"Come on, guys! Please?"

Trapinch and Skitty, still within their covers, reluctantly nod slowly and begin to follow Turtwig outside the cabin, across the rope bridges, and towards one of the elevators. Behind them follows a certain sneaky Grass-type garden snake.

. . .​

The group of three reaches the Pokémon School and then takes one final right, which leads them to the farthest right tree house and, next to it, a barely-used elevator. Trapinch and Skitty hop on board as Turtwig sucks his body in and tries to balance on the square. They pull up for quite a long time; the tree trunk they must run parallel to is the biggest in Fortree City—maybe even in Hoenn.

Soon, though, they are pulled up into the branches. As Turtwig pulls, the wind causes the elevator base to sway back and forth in a limited pendulum-like swing. Trapinch and Skitty hold on tight as they twist up twigs and branches. Even further up the tree comes the top, which is covered in a thicket of leaves and twigs. Scrapes, which are always painful despite the size, run down their legs as they finally surface above the leaves.

The top is surprisingly sturdy. It is a bare wasteland of green plantlife. However, there is no activity to be seen. They all search for the green bird but Turtwig admittedly comes up short. Trapinch gives up soon after. Skitty, though walks over to the edge of the treetop and meets the Psychic-type bird. Turtwig and Trapinch see the two of them in their eyesight and run toward Skitty's end of the treetop.

Xatu is staring ceaselessly at the sun. It has a circular green head with long red feather-crests slimming down like a girl's long hair. It has a yellow beak that is slightly bent toward the end and ovular eyes that seem fitting for such a wise bird. It looks like a flying totem pole; even its wings are white with red and black designs along the edges. It deserves its title of Mystic Pokémon.

"Doesn't that hurt?" Turtwig asks after trying to mock Xatu's behavior.

"Sometimes," the Pokémon says emotionlessly.

"We've come to ask y—" Turtwig begins.

"I know exactly why you are here," Xatu interrupts and turns toward them, though his eyes still gaze at the sunlight.

"Screams will fall upon Fortree City. It is an inevitable fate that is only caused by the tardiness of its hero," Xatu squawks loudly into the sun's rays, but nothing happens.

"What?!" the three of them hop back in fright.

"It is inescapable. Nothing you try to do can stop it," Xatu continues.

"What is it that is going to happen?"

"I do not know our God's term for it, but your citizens like the term 'Poké-pocalypse' or the likes."

"Wh-when will this happen, then?"

"Soon."

Turtwig tilts his head sideways at the comment. "How soon?"

"When the birds fly free in numbers."

Turtwig thinks for a moment and then asks, "Were you a Pokémon of Winona's?"

Xatu cringes at the name and then closes his eyes. He opens them violently, unleashing a green sparkle in them, and causing a small hole in the air to appear. The hole begins to grab at Turtwig and his friends, sucking them all inside. However, nothing else appears to move. Trapinch and Skitty squeal as they hold onto tree branches, but Turtwig looks back towards Xatu.

"What are you doing to us?!" he screams at the Pokémon.

"I cannot do anything more than teleport you down to the ground. You will not visit me again up here, I know it," he whispers.

Turtwig turns around to get a visual of the black hole. It is pitch dark, probably about the size around of a tire wheel. Trapinch willingly lets go and dives inside to see where it takes him. Skitty loses her grip on the branch and gets sucked in. Turtwig, feeling compelled to do the same, dives inside right before the hole closes up.

From afar, Snivy watches the whole display and chuckles to herself on the sight of Turtwig being sucked up by a hole. However, she notices the sacred-looking Pokémon and bows her head.

"It is time for you to go home, too," he says without turning around to look at her. Snivy finds herself going back down that elevator in the quickest attempt yet.

. . .​

"He's back!" announces an excited Combusken. He runs from the gates of the western wall and exclaims that, after a day-long quick expedition for immediately supplies, Linoone is back and perfectly fine. The Fire/Fighting-type chicken bows down as a raccoon dog-like Pokémon runs straight in with a peculiarly rough object in his mouth. He spits it on the grass as Ralts locks the gates back. The item is a very worn standard Pokéball.

"It's gotta be worth a fortune, whatever's inside!" Combusken squeals in delight.

After hearing the commotion, approximately half of the city came to see what's inside the Pokéball—including Turtwig, Skitty, Trapinch, and Fennekin. Fennekin, though, stands alone from the others in an isolated area, as usual.

Snivy and Scyther walk up behind the trio and decide to gaze upon the Pokéball as well. The whole crowd usually doesn't mind a Pokéball being brought in town, but everyone feels this one is different. It's going to be a real let-down if it is indeed empty.

"Okay, here goes!" Linoone says as he taps the button.

The ball splits open down the horizontal midline and spits out a burst of white light. A figure is outlined a yard or two from the Pokéball. Just as soon as it had come, the white light fades and reveals a small, plump Pokémon. It is a brown-colored beaver with enlarged teeth and tufts of fur bunching up along its tail. The Pokémon looks around confused and then begins screaming.

"Where's Master? Is he okay? What's going on here? He was battling just a second ago!"

The Pokémon sees Combusken standing nearby and slashes at it with a pitifully weak Cut attack, which doesn't even cut some of the hair on Combusken's arm. They all look around at the Pokémon with puzzled expressions.

"I was…he was…giant…"

The small Pokémon rolls his eyes in the back of his head and faints, falling flat on his belly.

. . .​

Beep...beep…beep. Bidoof watches the blurred ups and downs of the lines in the black monitor's graph. He's not sure what it means, though. He can't think properly yet. He turns in his hospital bed to see a small kitten staring kindly at him, telling him something in a muffled voice. This pink and round Pokémon sticks some needle somewhere and, soon enough, Bidoof falls back in his sleeping state.

"Exhaustion," some voice explains to another.

That is the first word Bidoof is able to understand after being released. Exhaustion. Bidoof looks around his room and sees many surgical tools, bright lights, and blinding white walls surrounding his every view of the room. He keeps his eyes closed until he gets used to the intensity of the light. When he finally does, though, he looks up to see that kitten face staring at him again.

"Who are you?" he asks quietly.

"My name is Skitty. I'm going to be your nurse for the next couple of hours. It's about 4 in the afternoon right now. Do you remember what just happened?"

Bidoof shakes his head and blinks a couple of times. He has never seen this girl in his life. She is not a Pokémon that Master has ever tried to battle. He only tried to catch the strongest of Pokémon, like myself, Bidoof thinks.

"Someone found your Pokéball during a supply run. We brought it here and sent you out of it. You were confused, attacked someone, and fainted. You're going to be okay, though, because you only suffered exhaustion from a long period without visiting a Pokémon Center," Skitty explains in a short paragraph.

"Is Master here as well? How is his Monferno?"

Skitty looks away and frowns. She scratches her head with her tail and then finally thinks of something to say. "I don't think your master is here anymore. We only found you in the woods."

Bidoof gasps louder than one probably should. "That's impossible! I was right with him!"

"Why don't you tell me what happened?" Skitty says, expecting a shake of the head.

"I'll do my best," Bidoof offers, much to Skitty's surprise.

"Take your time and don't strain yourself for memories if you can't recover them at first."

"Ok…Well, my trainer sent me out to stall in a trainer battle, you see. I was to dodge attacks while his Monferno was bandaged up. Master usually doesn't let me attack foes, and I do tend to faint a lot, but I understand why he does that. Anyway, Monferno took over as I faint from the previous attack. Once my trainer finished the battle, he was on his way to Fortree City to get us fully healed. Also, we haven't met many Pokémon so far. We just moved from Sinnoh a couple of weeks ago. We've never really seen any large Pokémon, but this one in particular was huge."

Skitty thinks of the savages that Scyther and his teams have faced so far. They have almost died several times, but they usually manage to come out okay in the end. She snaps her focus back on Bidoof, which is the cue he was waiting for to start speaking again.

"My trainer healed me up halfway and sent me against this giant monster. I…I don't remember what it looked like. I just remember the empty look in its eyes. I remember that I was easily defeated, almost killed, but my trainer recalled me back in my Pokéball and that's the last I could remember," Bidoof sighs, feeling of an aching forehead with his arm.

"That's selfish of your trainer to sacrifice you like that," Skitty says, frowning.

"No no no! My master gave me the honor of knowing all these field moves. Without me, he couldn't cross terrains or get items! Plus, I get to stall while master heals Monferno! It's all fair and everything!"

"It sounds like he was using you," Skitty confesses.

"He would never betray me! I remember him catching me as a little kid. Though he barely had his Chimchar longer than me, it was already about to turn into an Infernape. I was a ways from Bibarel, but I bet my evolution will take a long time because I will become so strong afterwards. We were a close family."

Scyther walks in the hospital room and asks Skitty about the situation. After telling him the story she had just heard from Bidoof, he apologizes for all the trouble and says he will tell everyone to come outside for an emergency meeting.

. . .​

"That's got to be some sort of abuse," Turtwig rages as Skitty relays the story in their meeting.

"He says it's not. I don't know, I think it's kind of wrong to use a Pokémon like that—almost like a slave. He's asleep right now, so don't bother him about it. We'll ask more questions when he wakes up," Skitty nods slightly.

"Just because a Pokémon can learn convenient moves doesn't mean that should be its sole purpose—well, other than fainting," an angry Tropius adds in the audience.

"I don't like that one bit!" Marill says sadly.

"On a lighter note," Scyther interrupts, "tonight will be the night the selected trainees and team members will be leaving for the trip! Get your stuff together and meet me in this place in three hours!"

The crowd cheers and breaks apart, though Turtwig walks up to Skitty and they go to the Pokémon Center together. From within the crowd, Snivy watches the two of them go inside together.

. . .​

Tropius and Bunnelby decide to go on the wall and watch over with Trapinch instead of waving goodbye with the others. Turtwig, though, exits the Pokémon Center with Skitty and a now-awake Bidoof. The three of them venture to the gates and join the crowd of both civilians and squad members that are being left behind. Wingull and Fletchinder survey the skies for any wanderers nearby, though they find nothing. Wurmple inches onto Linoone's back and stays on it for a while. Most of the others stand at the town's limits and awkwardly wait for Scyther's orders. As soon as one of them steps out, a Taillow zips into the sky from a nearby tree and Turtwig screams out in fright. Though most of the town laughs, Snivy is not amused.

"I'm going to stay here if that is fine by you, Scyther," she says calmly.

"If that is what you want, then so be it. I can manage these youngsters myself," Scyther says without emotion.

Snivy steps back beside Turtwig and watches the others. Squirtle smiles and waves goodbye to Turtwig, who does the same. Fennekin turns around hastily and moves to the front. Houndour brings up the rear and keeps watch. The air becomes full with goodbyes, wishes for good luck, and the occasional "be careful."

As they become too small to pinpoint in the distance, the crowd thins and only the four of them—Turtwig, Bidoof, Skitty, and Snivy, remain. Turtwig offers to train Bidoof and make him stronger, but then Snivy offers to train everyone. Skitty starts tiptoeing out of the conversation and everyone laughs.

"This is going to be a nice vacation for us, too," Turtwig grins.

"Do you guys do this often?" Bidoof asks.

"No, we usually get up early and train until night falls," Snivy says dully.

"Oh."

. . .​

Squirtle walks towards the front of the group. After two hours of nonstop walking, he, like many other trainees, starts to slouch and step slower and slower. Scyther orders to pick up the pace, but Squirtle ignores him. The ground is mushy mud and grass, much like a swamp due to the excess amount of rain, and there are large footprints of all kinds embedded within the soil. Occasionally, someone will fall in a footprint and have to wash off along the river. They follow that specific river until they finally reach the large lake nearby. As they decide to break for lunch, Squirtle goes out to explore a little bit.

He walks across the round lake and pays attention to the scenery. The lake is crystal clear, though there appears to be no life other than plants within the water. Now that Squirtle looks at the lake as a whole, about half the normal amount of water is gone—it's as if some giant picked up the lake and took a large sip of it. He turns to see many trees knocked down, though one in particular stands out from the rest: on one of its lower branches lies a necklace of blue—the Mystic Water. Squirtle looks at it, flipping it through his hands, and sees that it is the actual one Wartortle had back when he was with Squirtle.

He pulls the Mystic Water toward him and allows streams of tears to rush down his face. He lets it all out, crying until he eventually starts to cough. Behind him, a purple snake slithers up and says that he hears small vibrations within the earth. Squirtle decides to put the side of his head to the ground (he's seen it in movies) and feels small pulsations from within it. They both look at each other with amazement and rush to report their findings.

"Aw, it's probably just your stomachs," Scyther says, dismissing the idea of a possible thread. Instead, he admires a small nugget of gold found within a giant bush.

"Don't worry about it. Everything's fine. We've been gone only about three hours now.

. . .​

"What is that smell?" Ralts asks with a disgusted look on her face.

"I'm not sure," replies Bunnelby, who then requests to go back down on the ground floor.

As Ralts fulfills his request, Tropius flies off into a tree house and Trapinch continues watching over the city. The stench was awful—like leftover sludge from a garbage truck—and slid up his nostrils until his tongue went numb. He has never smelt anything so foul in his life. A few Spearow begin to glide out of a treetop and into another one, leading Trapinch to get on his feet and anxiously look at the sky.

"That's it, this smell is making me go crazy," Ralts whines as she returns to the wall.

Ralts, while complaining, marches up and down the stone wall and eventually steps on a loose brick. She puts all of her wait on that foot as she tries to shift it back over to her right, but the brick slips off the construction and Ralts falls of the wall's top.

"Ralts, no!" Trapinch screams, but Ralts teleports down to the ground and saves herself from at least a head wound.

"It's all clear down here from what I can see. Wait….ew, that's disgusting," Ralts coughs.

"What do you see?" Trapinch calls from above.

"There's this purple puddle of slime nearby me. It almost looks like tar or something. It's very thick and stinks worse than anything I've ever known," she says.

Suddenly, with a splat!, another purple glob falls right beside her. Ralts dodges the attack and looks at it to see the exact contents as in the other puddle. Once it settles, the sustance bubbles and oozes mysteriously.

"I see another one—it looks like they're coming from something…but what?" she asks aloud.

Ralts suddenly has the urge to look up. She turns her green-topped head upward and glances at a figure within a reasonably close distance. Upon realizing what it actually is, she proceeds to scream in sheer terror.

. . .​

"Alright Bidoof, it looks like you know Cut, Rock Smash, Protect, and Rock Climb," Turtwig analyzes, though he leaves the part out about most of them being field moves.

"Can we practice Rock Climb? I feel like that's what I need help with the most," the brown beaver Pokémon asks politely.

"Yeah, let's do that," Turtwig says.

The two of them, under Snivy's and Skitty's supervision, go over to the western wall and watch as Bidoof kicks off his hind legs and catches hold of the brick wall. He then begins to trot along the wall quickly and eventually develops longer claws to dig in deeper. He then lunges from the wall and falls flat on his face.

"That was awful. If Master had seen me then, he would've dumped me with the other Bidoof back on that first route near Sandgem town," Bidoof cries in disappointment.

"It's okay, Bidoof. You're still learning!"

Suddenly, a piercing scream can be heard just beyond them, beyond the western wall. Turtwig, Snivy, Skitty, and Bidoof all step back a little due to the surprise, but something seems immediately wrong. Turtwig runs to the other side in order to get a better view of the top of the castle wall, so he ends up going about halfway into Fortree City. The scream causes a massive load of bird Pokémon to fly from the treetops. Hundreds of Spearow, Taillow, and Pidgey immediately flap their wings in a symphonic pattern, causing the sky to momentarily seem black.

"No, no, no! Not yet!" Turtwig complains.

"Xatu's prediction already?" Skitty gasps.

"This is not going to be good," Snivy says.

"What's going on?" a confused Bidoof asks.

Turtwig tilts his head up just a little bit farther, and then he sees it. He sees the scared Trapinch frantically calling for help. He sees civilians running here and there to find shelter. Finally, He sees the savage to end all savages. Turtwig can see the monster. Turtwig can see his end.

Finally, after all this time, I get to write in some violence and death! No one is safe, not even Turtwig. I'm willing to sacrifice any character necessary to move the story on further. Just remember that~ :p

I will be adding the side story in eventually; I have two other chapters already written but have not decided which Pokemon to write about yet. Hmm...decisions, decisions.

Added short story 9/7/2014

Pride

"You got a B+ in Flying Maneuverability? You're a bird, for crying out loud!" remarks a very angry paternal Water Bird Pokémon.

"Dad, my teacher is completely mean. Just because she has Gale Wings and I have Keen Eye doesn't mean I'm too slow and rigid!" Wingull frowns.

"It doesn't matter, I'm tired of your excuses."

"Oh, honey! Let up on the poor child," a voice says from the branch above Wingull's nest.

"Thanks, Mom," Wingull smiles.

The father Pelipper flies on up to his own nest and talks with his wife about overriding his decisions. The two of them bicker for a while until Wingull eventually just tunes them out.

He looks over the bay of Lilycove City. While it is a popular tourist attraction due to its beaches, Pokémon contests, and department stores, the city has very little pollution and the nighttime ocean is peaceful and still. Wingull smiles as the stars glint off the water's reflection and in his own eyes. He focuses over to the moon, which shines bright and, to Wingull, represents the stars' leader. He is always in the sky before them, though that only applies when he comes at all. Wingull sighs and turns to the other side of his nest and rests his small head on the nest's grassy side. He closes his eyes gradually and soon begins to dream about flying along the coast's waters free; he could slide a wing into the water and splash those among the surface in an attempt to play. He could try and become a trainer's Pokémon. There were several options that he just gets so antsy to put into place that he sometimes forgets that he is still a child.

In his dream, though, Wingull was free. He was free from his parents, free from his schoolwork, free from worries. He truly felt at peace in the simple scenario, but he immediately wakes up and hears a loud thud somewhere in the distance.

. . .​

Wingull wakes up in a dark, damp location. He flaps his wings around a little and has to hold on for his life when something tries to suck him down a tunnel. He grabs the edge of whatever he was lying beside and screams for help. He then begins to peck at the walls of his confinement until eventually he hears his father's angry voice.

"Stop hurting your mother like that! You have always had it out for her!"

Wingull opens up the cell and sees that he inside his mother's mouth. They are mid-flight somewhere in the thick woods. Wingull tilts his head at a forty five degree angle. After asking about their destination, he got the usual disapproving glance from his father. His mother tries to speak, but he has to hold onto her lower jaw to avoid being swallowed.

"You're going to make her sick with your moving around," says his father.

"Why are we leaving?" Wingull asks.

"We sensed grave danger over at Lilycove City and didn't want to risk anything."

Wingull has lived in Lilycove City ever since his birth. He has never left the city even to go visit another. In such haste, there must be something wrong with his parents to bring him this far from home already. He thinks about the possibilities: evil Galvantula, evil Raichu, evil Electric-types. That's the only option in his head for some reason.

"What danger?"

Wingull's father glances over to his mother, who nods silently. Pelipper clears his throat and explains that a giant Wooper tried to demolish the whole city last night. It was taken care of, but something is terribly wrong. The human population was halved that night. Three Pokémon were killed in the process. Pelipper sighs and continues flapping his wings.

"So where are we going?"

"Fortree City has an excellent fortification that should keep any creature out," his father says.

Wingull thinks hard about the choice of Fortree City. Are they really going to move? Why couldn't they just stay in the city and wait it out? So many questions buzz through his head at one time that he scrunches his eyes shut in protest. He blocks out the thoughts for only a second. They immediately begin to creep back in his mind.

As they fly, Wingull can see the tree houses of the next down in a distance. The family decides to go by Mt. Pyre in an attempt to miss any stray giant Pokémon. They glide for another half hour until they hover directly over the island.

Wingull has been inside his mother's mouth for over an hour total. He soon notices that she has tensed up. When he glances out at her, he sees a look of sheer terror. Before he can see what she's looking at, the female Pelipper sucks him back in her mouth and uses Stockpile to increase her defenses.

"We have to go over it or we won't make it in time," the male tells his wife, who nods again.

They continue on further until a sudden swish in the air grabs Wingull's mother. He begins to get crushed underneath the weight being exerted on his mother, and she firmly keeps her mouth shut so he cannot escape yet. Wingull begins to scream for air.

Outside, the parents face a giant wild Trevenant guarding the way to the city. The slender tree, light brown in color, stands on six roots and has bushels of leaves on its head and around its wrists. There is a singular red eye in the middle of the eye socket, and there are mysterious pockets of dark energy all around the creature. The mother has been caught and squished in the left hand of the Ghost/Grass type, and Wingull's father begins to panic. Wingull struggles for air until his mother's tongue pushes him against the back of her throat.

"Honey, what are you doing?" the father says desperately.

The mother mouths "protect my baby" and uses her previous Stockpile to Spit Up her son—Wingull gets launched from her mouth and lands somewhere in the ocean below. Wingull, from the lack of air, has been unconscious for under thirty seconds. The father yells as his wife gets put in the mouth of the giant, who proceeds to chomp on her. She screams until a silence so deafening takes over Pelipper's ears. He dives down in the water to search for his missing son.

. . .​

"He's going to be fine," remarks the local Nurse Joy of Fortree City.

She puts the sleeping Wingull beside his speechless father and pats the father on his head. Pelipper immediately scoops up his child and makes a nest in the ocean-less trees with rough branches and unfitting leaves. He and Wingull survive on the bare necessities until eventually, after most of the humans were gone from the town, a sole Skarmory approaches them.

"You're a Flying-type Pokémon, correct?" asks the creature.

"Yes, my son and I both are," Pelipper replies.

"Well I want you specifically to become an administrator of this Pokémon-based establishment. I want only Flying-type Pokémon to be in charge. Congratulations, you now have a place to stay: the Pokémon Gym.

Pelipper, shocked, rids him and Wingull of their hard-earned nest and takes the both of them into the Pokémon Gym. From there on, Pelipper will be caught up in public disputes and wall protection. He will forget his son every existed until Wingull messes up somewhere. Wingull, on the other hand, chooses to remain in the trees until he sees a certain Grass-type Sinnoh starter make him want to join the expedition team. Wingull smiles as he meets new friends, but the immediate scar from losing both his mother and father, though the latter in an emotional sense, takes its toll on Wingull's morale every day.
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 15)

Haven't had time to finish the short story, but I'll have it up by Monday at the latest. Some gaps will be closed today, and there will be *spoilers* some tragedies. Brace yourself because this story is entering the dark side! :p

Chapter 16: Yuck

"You're it!" the red-tuft elemental monkey laughs as he touches the Water-type counterpart.

"Oh no!" Panpour giggles.

Pansage runs as Panpour gets tagged in an effort to avoid a triangle of tagging, though Panpour decides to go back towards Pansear instead. The three Pokémon play in broad daylight; the sun is shining, the air is warm, and there is only but a stench to bother their day. However, there is a large number of Flying-type Pokémon straight above their heads.

"That's weird," Pansage notes.

"Ignore it," says Pansear. "It's probably just some winter thing."

As Pansear speaks, the Water-type monkey shoves him playfully and says something about no tag-backs. The two of them laugh while Pansage frowns at the flying mass of Pokémon. Why aren't they in the treetops like usual?

"Savage!" Turtwig screams to the top of his lungs.

Immediately, civilians begin to run around in fright and knock into each other. The elemental monkeys turn around to see a giant heap of some sort of alive grimy substance—a savage Muk, to be precise—staring at them with a blank face. It raises a hand and allows giant pieces of sludge to drop within the walls of the city.

The savage Muk is not a pretty sight. At almost 400 feet, the giant glob of purple sludge moves by leaning, causing its sludge to fall to the earth and its body reform in the shape of the new pattern. Its mouth is a large black tunnel to death with random strings of sticky purple stretching across its mouth like a bass guitar. Its eyes are sunken in and almost nonexistent. Muk seems to be a terrible Pokémon in general, but its savage form is a living nightmare—a nightmare no Pokémon would ever want to dream.

Purple balls the size of a Shelgon splatter onto the ground and immediately cause the blades of grass to curl and wither. The ground begins to sizzle and bubble from where the poisonous mass lies. Panpour, frightened, backs away along with the other two monkeys. As children, they aren't exactly sure what's going on.

As Turtwig runs off somewhere, the savage slings the muck at the city twice more. The globs chase after the elemental monkeys, one whizzing past Pansage's head and another narrowly missing Panpour's tail. Pansear brings up the rear of the group, but he soon finds himself trapped in an enclosing circle of spreading grime. He panics, screams, and sits down in fetal position until help arrives.

Pansage and Panpour try to grab Pansear's hand, but they fall back and retreat from the spreading grime. Another sludge ball crashes down and lands right on the poor Fire-type monkey's body, swallowing it within the toxic waste. The glob completely covers Pansear.

"Help!" one of them screams, but neither know which one said it since they're paralyzed by fear.

To the rescue comes one of the residents, a Raticate—the same one that tried to join the team a while ago—and bravely sticks his hands in the sludge to fish for Pansage's body. However, he panics and tries to pull back, though his hands become stuck in the sludge. The brown rat moans and decides just to dig deeper as he becomes badly poisoned. To his astonishment, there is not a trace of Pansear's existence—almost like he was eaten away. Soon enough, Raticate finds his paws shriveling up and he screams as another Sludge attack takes him out. Standing right beside him are the two other monkeys, both terrified.

Snivy hears Turtwig's alarm and runs to save whoever she can. She uses her vines to wrap around tree branches and sling herself forward. She eventually snaps one onto the top of the western wall, like a hand clinging to the edge of a cliff in desperation, and begins to run across the wall and grab some momentum in her swing. She pushes off the grey wall with a strong enough force and flies straight toward the other two elemental monkeys, wrapping them in her other vine and eventually landing several yards beyond their previous location. She looks back to see it now completely covered in sludge. She takes the kids and continues on toward some safe place in the city. Behind them, there are random hunks of unidentifiable meat and bones from where the acid failed to finish the job on Pansear and Raticate.

. . .​

"It's a Muk!?" Trapinch gasps from the eastern wall.

He had the idea that patrolling the whole wall would be better, but it appears that the savage got the advantage from his absence on the other side. He rushes to make it to the teleportation center before the savage does, but he is slower than the spreading of the sludge on the ground of the city. Trapinch watches with horror as the Muk approaches the wall with ease. Once he gets right beside the wall, the savage literally squeezes all of its sludge right through—effectively going right through Fortree City's means of protection. The squeezed-out sludge returns back onto the mound of grime that Muk truly is.

Trapinch sees the western wall begin to be eaten away by the sludge. He decides to jump into a bush straight down towards the middle of the city, though once he lands he stays there for a few minutes to recuperate.

The Muk uses an arm to clean up its mess—the meat and bones from before are now being absorbed into the grimy hands of the savage. Its sludge spreads deeper through the city, probably covering over a quarter of it by now. A nearby Pumpkaboo runs home from getting supplies at the Pokémart, but she gest engulfed in one of the Sludge attacks and begins to dissipate from the reaction.

Snivy watches in horror from one of the tree house bridges. She screams for anyone and everyone to attack the creature head on. For that moment, she wonders about Altaria, Skarmory, Pelipper, and Swellow, but forgets about them once she sees another innocent life end.

"This thing is going to destroy our whole entire city!" she says in disbelief. "How has it come this far?!"

. . .​

"It stinks out here," Squirtle says to his expedition group.

"Do you see anything smelly? I don't. Move on," Scyther snaps, obviously mad at their lack of productivity.

The group has walked for miles without any provisions that could come in handy. All they have found are a couple of empty Pokéballs and a crushed watch from some dead trainer. Wingull complains that there might be something wrong with the city, and after a long period of whining, complaining, and begging, Scyther demands Wingull and Fletchinder to go investigate the stench.

"This is going to be a hard trip," Squirtle sighs as he sits on a rock during their break.

Shuppet sees the Pokémon upset and smiles. Negative emotions only feed him, so Shuppet then uses Shadow Sneak to scare Squirtle from his own shadow. Laughing, Shuppet absorbs the dark energy around him and hovers still in the air.

Marill, however, does nothing. He just stands there staring off into space, as usual. Fennekin sits quietly and politely beside Scyther. He has worked on his attacks and believes he is in the top five for most powerful trainee. To prove that, he must have a good stature at all times. Wurmple eats leaves, burps, and goes to sleep on Squirtle's rock. Scyther closes his eyes and shakes his head in disappointment.

"Only the actual expedition team is focused and willing—well, maybe Fennekin is an exception. In any case, you need to try harder if you want to live out in the real world," Scyther says informatively.

"Why would we be brought into the real world?" asks Marill.

"Life doesn't stay the same forever," Scyther shrugs.

. . .​

"Skarmory, sir, there is a savage Muk within the city and we need your help badly," a bushy goat—Skiddo—says to the highest leader in command.

"If you don't help us, we're all going to die," Ponyta adds.

"I'll have Altaria, Swellow, and Pelipper come outside for now. I will retire to my room and read some out of my trainee's books," a mysterious voice says from inside the previous Pokémon Gym.

Skarmory has sharp, metallic wings with bright red feathers and a strong body of fearless metal, though it acts more like a coward would. It has not shown its face to the public, has not revealed anything about itself, and hasn't bothered to show any remorse for those already dead. Skiddo curses the man under his breath and continues trotting to someone that might actually listen to him.

"Try this on for size!" Lair screams as he sends a bunch of stones, which were derived from his Stone Edge attack, the savage's way.

The stones came up from the ground and darted at Muk. However, his grime almost catches the objects since they just get stuck in his body. They go deeper in the muck and disappear. Muk strikes a tree house with the trainee cabin on it and allows the tree to crash on top of Lairon. It first swipes at the tree's roots, causing it to be like a piece of broccoli, and then it slaps the tree right down. The angling was slightly off, but enough to slam Lairon to the ground. The trainee cabin flies out and crashes against one of the stone walls. It implodes and turns into only leftover scrap wood and metal.

After Lairon is trapped underneath a tree trunk, Muk tosses the trunk way beyond Fortree's limits and ingests Lairon's unconscious body. The Pokémon is now as good as dead. Muk continues to spread grime across the ground, causing civilians to have to lock their doors (despite that being pointless).

Combusken, after seeing his friend and colleague get eaten by the savage, tries to Slash at Muk with its claws, however they get stuck in the side once Combusken launches himself at the purple hide. Once they get stuck, the sludge pulls Combusken inside. He first gets his arm stuck, and he then pushes against Muk with his legs to try and break himself free, but the legs got stuck to Muk, too. Combusken is therefore pulled inward and absorbed by Muk's body.

Meanwhile, Snivy moves all civilians to the back east of town. Ms. Miltank huddles with some of her students and cries over the death of Pansear. Pelipper, one of the town leaders, flies in as promised by Skarmory and immediately goes to comfort the teacher.

"We're going to do the best we can to destroy this monster in the honor of Pansear, Raticate, Pumpkaboo, Lairon, and Combusken. I am going to go with Tropius and gather all the flying-type Pokémon and try to move them out of the way," he says comfortingly.

Pelipper takes off to find Tropius and move the bird Pokémon away, but Bunnelby still worries. He announces that he will check and evacuate all the houses he can to get the civilians safe. He first goes to the Pokémon Center, which is about to be overrun with the poisonous substance. Snivy suddenly asks where Turtwig is out loud, though no one answers.

"Turtwig! Help!" she screams aloud.

. . .​

"Turtwig! Help!"

Turtwig snaps out of his long period of nervousness and remembers his reason for survival. He also realizes that he somehow managed to get on the rope bridge above the city and watch his previous home get destroyed. Turtwig shakes his head slightly and begins running.

However, instead of running to help the others, he runs to the elevator to Xatu's entrance. He hops on the block of wood and proceeds to hoist himself up along the side of the tree trunk. Looking down, he sees purple begin to cover the ground as if some kindergartener were filling in a coloring book's blank page with a purple crayon.

He looks away from the city and focuses on the Pokémon above. Muk finally launches a planned attack, a Sludge attack again, right at Turtwig, which is a moving object in an otherwise still location, and he is forced to lean on one side of the wooden elevator to make it sway just enough to dodge the attack. Afterward, it swings back so strong that Turtwig almost falls off. He lifts himself one final time and goes to the same location Xatu was just earlier. The Mystic Pokémon is still staring at the sun, though beads of sweat begin to roll down his head.

"Ah, I thought you'd come back," he says without any glances.

"I need to know what to do," Turtwig announces quickly.

"Like I said, there is nothing you can do. A hero that comes too late…" Xatu continues, but he then mumbles something just short of words under his breath and turns to Turtwig.

"I'm sorry," he says before stepping off the treetop and diving toward the rampage below.

Turtwig watches the Pokémon fall and questions the bird's logic. Too late? How could he come too late?

"Turtwig! Muk is getting the Pokémon Center!" he can hear a screech from down below that belongs to Skitty.

Turtwig's eyes narrow and he steps backwards a little bit. Focusing his attention on the next treetop ahead, he then lunges forward and lands in the soft leaves of the middle tree. He again jumps to the western most tree, though this time he dangles for a second before clutching a branch between his jaws. Turtwig keeps climbing and climbing until he is almost right above the Muk. Turtwig looks down at the purple sludgy body.

"You have caused so much pain and suffering today," he whispers.

Turtwig then jumps at a slight lower angle and falls from the treetops and to the ground. He tucks himself into a ball and begins to roll against the air and spin down to the savage. However, he instead begins to draw a weird white energy from the buildings and trees around him. His shell glows white at first, but then the energy is transferred up to the leaves at his head. He then opens his mouth to release whatever new move he has learned.

A white triangle of blue, red, and yellow erupts from Turtwig's mouth and smacks down on the glob of muck. It smashes the savage due to its raw power and sends Turtwig flying the opposite way back towards Snivy and the others. He skids against the ground, causing sparks to fly, and lands with a halt right at Snivy's feet. He's sideways, but alive. He looks at the Muk and sees a giant hole going straight down the almost-center of the body. The savage stops for a second.

"Is it…is it dead?" he asks.

"No, look."

Suddenly, poison begins to seep down the hole and clog it back up just like bad allergies going through the nasal cavities. Turtwig tries to use Synthesis, but the birds above are blocking the sunlight. He barely recovers any health and stands, weak, in front of nearly all of the Fortree citizens. Bunnelby runs around to him with Chansey, Audino, and Skitty.

"They're all okay. I'm taking them to the back," he says, and Turtwig nods.

"What move was that?" he asks Snivy.

"From the way you used Tri Attack, which you can't normally learn, I'd say that move is called Nature Power. It draws in energy from your surroundings and, depending on what type of environment you're in, you may get one of a variety of attacks," Snivy explains.

Turtwig thanks her and draws in energy again. Once the birds move, he heals himself with Synthesis, causing his twig to glow both white and green at the same time. He blasts another blue-red-yellow triangle, though it fails again and the same thing happens. Turtwig clenches his teeth and thinks back to what Xatu had said just moments before.

A hero that comes too late…

Turtwig then realizes the other half of Xatu's sentence, the half that was mumbled so he couldn't hear.

…will cost the life of Fortree.

There are four more episodes in this part. I still need to type each of them up, but I have time over the weekend to finish at least one up. Here are some details! Part One's official title is going to be Strive. I haven't gotten to make a Table of Contents yet (ugh), but I know for a fact that Part Two will be named Survive. That's the biggest spoiler I'll be giving out for now! Thanks for reading and stay tuned :D

Edit: Temporary ToC is up.

Edit: 8/31 Yes, the chapter isn't up, but it's going to be huge, so cut me some slack!
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 16)

(Made it longer because you told me to XP)
I like the premise of this story. It's very interesting :D Not even a genius and apbest story writer in class like me (kidding, I'm only a genius for my age XP) would come up with a story about how a genius invention could go wrong. Even more, I haven't seen a sad-ending story in a while. I have to admit I love happy endings and don't like a sad one, but the interesting premise of this story covers that.
Overall, I love it!
(P.S. I know I'm under 13 but, like everyone says, I'm mature for my age so :p)
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 16)

This chapter is approximately 4,500 words long. This is why it took so long! :p Okay, so tons happens here and there are only three more chapters left in part one (after this one)! The third side story will be here eventually, don't worry, but right now I'd rather further the regular story.
Chapter 17: Wrath​

"Wait for me!" Skitty screams.

The Kitten Pokémon scrambles from her group of nurses and runs back over to Turtwig and Snivy. She stands behind the two of them and watches as Turtwig uses the Nature Power-turned-Tri Attack several times just to bust up Sludge attacks. Snivy stands back and watches as she only has physical moves at her disposal. The attacks get closer and closer to the trio, but a plump beaver-like Pokémon steps in front of them.

"I don't know you lot very well, but I want to earn my keep!" Bidoof says.

Bidoof covers the group in a protective barrier and they all run away from the rampaging monster. Muk has officially made it into town, but it is only unleashing a couple globs of sludge every now and then. It appears to be studying its surroundings, but it doesn't quite understand what the scene means.

"Let's go to the Pokémon Gym," Snivy says, pointing a vine straight in front of them.

As Bidoof covers the rear with Protect, the rest of the group sprint frantically and eventually make it to the building. Skitty and Snivy run through first, then Bidoof, and Turtwig stays still as he holds the door. He looks at the monster for a brief moment. In one second, the still picture of a sad face on a malevolent body sticks in his mind, sticks to his conscience. He almost feels pity for the creature since it was forced into this state by its own trainer, but he cannot let it destroy his life.

. . .​

Nearly every citizen of Fortree City resides within the walls of the gym. Ranging from the screaming elemental monkey duo to the somewhat-ill Frogadier, Snivy decides to bestow upon herself the duty of calming everyone down one by one. As she walks from the group, Chikorita runs to her side and offers her own help. The two girls walk to those in distress in order to clarify the situation.

"Yes, ma'am, we are under heavy attack," Snivy explains to a screaming Ms. Miltank.

"Are we all going to die?"

"I'd like to think not," Chikorita says.

"Probably," Snivy admits, but she soon adds a "not" to her response upon seeing several pairs of eyeballs glaring at her.

Chikorita separates from Snivy and walks over to Pansage and Panpour. She taps her head's leaf to the cheek of each monkey. She sits down between them and smiles warmly. They have cried for the past few hours since Pansear's death.

"Never forget Pansear and you will always be a happy group. Never split up, either, and the two of you will make it far. We're protect you and I won't let you guys get separated," Chikorita reassures them.

"Thank you," they both whisper through their tears.

Ralts walks around the gym's interior walls and pushes against them as if to test their strength. She glances out the windows and sees the savage Muk just looking around in a confused behavior. She ducks away from the window and presses a finger along the ridged cracks of a brick-made wall. She traces a block path and makes it down almost to the floor, but she quits her fiddling and looks at the scene before her. In the front are Turtwig, Snivy, Skitty, and Bidoof, while the others are loudly yelling at each other. She continues pacing the inner perimeter and decides to keep to herself.

"Is everyone here and accounted for?" Snivy asks in a nervous whisper.

"I believe so—well, everyone that isn't fighting, at least," Turtwig says.

"Maybe it won't sense any movement and it will move on from the city."

"We'll just have to wait it out and see."

Turtwig looks past his serpentine friend and notices that, in the dark shadows straight above him, Skarmory sits proudly, alone and proper.

"I heard he sent the leaders out in danger instead of himself," Snivy gossips.

"I wouldn't put it past him."

He focuses his attention on Ms. Miltank once again. The pink cow is now huddled with Panpour, Pansage, Litleo, Swellow, Taillow, Elekid, and Tyrogue—the whole group of children from her class…minus one: Pansear. Turtwig feels a knot form in his trachea, a knot so big that he could barely breathe. He begins to cough awkwardly as if to choke on air, but he eventually steadies his breathing and avoids unleashing a tear or two.

The shopkeeper and night watchmen, the loony Noctowl from before, is actually standing side-by-side with Xatu. Bunnelby and Tropius are trying to calm down a group of citizens, though Noctowl begins to peck at Tropius's bananas and Xatu looks at the sunlight from the window. Bunnelby gets thrown by a frustrated Frogadier—one that is still complaining about a headache. Turtwig puts a stubby foot to his face and shakes his head in disappointment.

"This way," Trapinch says to Bidoof.

He, Bidoof, and Skitty decide to go walk to Skiddo and Ponyta, who are talking nonchalantly in a corner. The three of them are greeted fondly, but the two expedition members seem to ignore them afterwards. Skitty frowns and turns to see Turtwig's reaction, but she just catches a glimpse of his shell as the Tiny Leaf Pokémon ventures out into danger.

. . .​

Turtwig peeks out from the Pokémon Gym door to see two Pokémon—both lightning bugs, one red and one purple—running frantically to the building of sanctuary. The savage, however, doesn't seem to care about their destination. In seeing his next prey, Muk uses a Sludge attack to at least stop them in their tracks. Volbeat ducks and watches in horror as his purple friend gets hit by toxic waste. Within seconds, her body begins to bubble from the poison and her skin deteriorates. She begs for forgiveness and then quickly ends her breathing. Volbeat screams out in pain as his love dies. Turtwig lunges to the Pokémon, which is approximately 30 yards away, and reaches the red-necked Volbeat.

"I can't go on," he says.

"Illumise would want you to. Come on!"

Volbeat looks at his hands, which are covered in the red blood belonging to Illumise. The savage Muk inches closer and closer until the poisonous sludge begins to spread around near Turtwig's and Volbeat's feet.

"You don't have a choice—come on, now!"

Turtwig grabs Volbeat by the neck and drags him as fast as he can. The two Pokémon barely make it inside; a Sludge attack hits the ground directly in front of the door and begins to eat away at anything it can. Turtwig shoves Volbeat into the care of others and runs back out the door, around the sludge, and in between attacks to see if there are any more civilians around.

He looks toward the former trees and sees no one. He looks at the eastern gate and only notices leaves twisting and turning in the wind. Summer is ending soon. Turtwig then looks toward the Pokémon Center and sees it: Audino is scrambling from the hospital with an armful of medical supplies. Turtwig sighs and begins to run around the slime lake once again to meet Audino.

. . .​

The seagull Pokémon floats along a gust of wind and takes in the beautiful scenery: the green, flowing trees, the swaying of the long grass, the small pieces of debris flying in the air. It's a bird's paradise until he breathes in through his nose.

"This is absolutely disgusting!" Wingull says with a distorted, gross face.

Behind him, a Japanese robin flies fiercely in the same direction. Fletchinder was told to come along in case backup is necessary, but Wingull is a slightly stronger fighter than his Fire-type Fortree counterpart.

Fletchinder also reacts negatively toward the stench, but neither bird is aware of the smell's derivation. They search the area and find nothing until they reach the northern edge of Fortree City, where there is no wall. In an attempt to circle around, they ended up stopping short to see a long, purple trail of toxic sludge coming from the mountains. Wingull immediately sends Fletchinder on a retreat mission in order to warn Scyther, but he ultimately decides to stay and figure out what is going on.

Fletchinder doubles back and glides swiftly toward the location of their expedition squad. Wingull watches with a hint of depression since he's now alone in the fight against whatever is attacking.

Then he sees it. Inside Fortree City, approximately halfway between the castle walls now, lies a giant heap of waste: a savage Muk, grimy and powerful, now resides in his former home. Wingull perches on the stone wall and studies the surrounding area. The town looks almost vacant. The three westernmost tree-houses are smashed into the ground with a mixture of stone and slime. Tree trunks lie rotting against each other in a position almost like a campfire. The Pokémon Center has now imploded on itself and allowed the roof to crash overtop the walls, leaving Fortree City without a hospital. Houses have pieces of wood, probably debris, protruding from them, and the remaining trees are rotting away, leaving a poor foundation for what tree houses do remain. Fortree City is nearly gone, nearly out of life.

Out of the corner of his eye, Wingull sees a green turtle with a rabbit-looking Pokémon, and they seem to be running away from the Muk. He narrows his eyes to see Turtwig and Audino desperately scrambling from the purple sludge. Wingull leans forward from the edge of the wall so only his claws cling to the edge. He repositions them and then pushes off, jetting himself close to the threatening savage.

Wingull ignores the other figures nearby him, the administrators of Fortree City, and focuses his attention on saving his friends. As he tucks his wings in and dives toward them, he fails to recognize his father watching him from above with bulging eyes. He fails to recognize Altaria begging him to be careful, Swellow screeching that there's already backup. He fails to recognize anything other than the danger at hand.

Wingull lashes out a powerful Air Slash, a gust of swift air strong enough to break one of the sturdy tree trunks of Fortree City, and slices an incoming glob of sludge in half. He swoops down and zips around the Muk's head in an effort to confuse it, which allows Turtwig to shove Audino into the Pokémon Gym.

. . .​

"Oh, an Oran Berry!" Shuppet gasps as he floats from a bare bush to one holding a single blue berry. He glances around to see no lurkers or distractions and then shoves the succulent fruit into his mouth happily.

. . .​

"Get in there and stay with the others!" Turtwig shouts as he shoves Audino inside the Pokémon Gym.

Outside of it comes Snivy and Ralts, both wishing to help some way. The three of them step in front of the Pokémon Gym and look at the rampaging Muk. Even if they kept hiding, they would eventually be covered in the slime. They have to destroy this creature once and for all.

"I don't think you should come, Ralts," Snivy says while putting a vine around the small Psychic-type's shoulders.

"But I have super effective STAB attacks that I can use—I can help defeat this thing!"

Suddenly, a streak of white swoops down and lands on Turtwig's shell: Wingull. The Pokémon greets them and waves a blue-striped feather in Muk's direction as if to show them the danger. They nod softly and blink a couple times as the creature finally catches their movements in its eyesight.

The group decides it best to attack head-on until backup arrives. In the event that no one survives or even if it gets too hazardous, all the citizens will be evacuated through the eastern wall and around the northern side of the wall in order to get far west without running into the purple trail of slime.

Turtwig stores energy in its leaf, drawing in the power from residing buildings. He then aims his twig at the creature and unleashes three powerful Tri-Attacks. The spinning triangles of power collide with the beast as it yelps back a couple of yards. As Turtwig recharges, Ralts jumps ahead and uses Psychic to pick up pieces of sludge and throw them back at the creature. Wingull uses Water Gun to wash away any leftover grime, but Turtwig does the most direct damage to the creature. Snivy, having only physical attacks at her disposal, runs into the Pokémon Gym to check things out really quick.

Though Wingull was part Water-type and Fennekin was part Fire, Tropius completes the group with his Grass-STABs. However, he himself sits in the Pokémon Gym with only a small rabbit to accompany him.

"We're not fit to fight," Bunnelby frowns.

"Sure we are," says Tropius.

"We're sitting on the job."

From behind, a throat is cleared and Snivy steps in front of them. She analyzes the two head-to-toe and shuts her eyes for a brief pause, though one long enough to distinguish from a blink. She tells them to get out there and fight, which causes both faces to light up.

The Grass-type garden snake walks past many civilians and meets up with two of Turtwig's friends: Skitty and Trapinch. The two of them, cat and ant, are tending to a sick Litleo, but Snivy whispers in the Kitten Pokémon's ear that she's now in charge of the entirety of the building. Skitty readjusts her head a bit and makes a facial expression that looks almost completely straight, straighter than the dead line of an EKG graph.

"What about Skarmory?" she asks quietly while she bandages a wound.

"He's just standing there," Snivy says in a hushed voice.

. . .​

Altaria's Hyper Voice only deafens the Muk for a minute at most. Pelipper's Hydro Pump doesn't quite damage the Pokémon enough, either. Swellow, like Snivy, only has physical attacks, so even the smallest of touches would kill it.

Turtwig pants loudly as he ends his long streak of Tri Attacks. Wingull, Tropius, Bunnelby, and Ralts have attacked the Pokémon for a long time now, but nothing has happened that is really noteworthy.

He snaps out of his break and sees Snivy rushing back to him with some news: everyone is okay right now. She suggests that maybe Ground-types should be focused on since Ralts does have a weakness to Poison-types.

"I resent that and I will continue breaking this monster's sludge up!" she says.

The stubborn Pokémon stands alone and focuses all of her attention on the monster—not on her friends or her surroundings—and attacks it with Psychic, lifting debris and hurtling it in the direction of the savage.

"Trapinch's Dig would probably cause the savage to cave in on the tunnel and fill it with poison if he was to try and dig a giant hole," Turtwig says aloud.

Turtwig freezes his movements and begins to think about what to do. Instead of breathing heavily in fear because of the savage, which he has been doing almost nonstop, he decides to look at the big picture on how to approach this thing. If he can't go above it, below it, or through it, what is he going to do? He notices that, like him, the Muk has quit attacking. Though the town administrators above are still firing off attacks, the savage doesn't seem to mind them anymore.

"Wingull," Turtwig suddenly says quietly.

"Yes?"

"I need you to use Rain Dance right now."

"Right now?"

"Yes."

. . .​

"There is a giant savage Muk attacking the city!" explains a small Fire-type bird.

"What?!" Scyther screeches.

"Yes! Apparently there was a breach in the wall and the savage almost slipped through without leaving any trace—all we could find was this purple, slimy residue! If we don't hurry, we may be seeing a row of corpses along the perimeter. It doesn't look good. We must make a full retreat at once," Fletchinder says.

"So be it…give me ten minutes to get the others ready. We will be on our way. Until then, feel free to pilfer through our food and gain some of your energy back," he sighs.

. . .​

The first drop. When you feel it, you feel rushed. You want to get inside. You want to grab an umbrella. Duck for cover. Find shelter. You want to get as far away as you can. The first drop is a signal, a warning, for what's about to come. It's almost always received with pure anxiety or arrogance. However, this rain was not a bad omen: it's exactly what Turtwig needs.

The first drop fell, then a second, and a third, and then thousands more as the white, puffy clouds above begin to cluster into one dark mass shaped like the mushroom cloud of a bomb. Turtwig, Snivy, Wingull, Bunnelby, and Tropius stay side-by-side while the other Flying-types fly around in distress.

"This water isn't going to dilute the poison or even just wash it all away," Bunnelby says in a frown.

"I'm not trying to make it do that," Turtwig says.

"Then what?"

"I want to try and—" he begins until the savage does something unpredictable: he uses a different move.

Suddenly, upon the creature raising its arms higher, a wave of toxic waste begins to emit from the end of the monster's body. It spreads out quickly and begins to invade the city—a Sludge Wave of sorts. One of the remaining large trees begins eroding from the eating-away of the poisons. Buildings, such as the remains of the Pokémon Center, turn to a mere occasional hunk of wood lying about. The muddy earth turns into a layer of purple.

The mud! Turtwig says to himself.

The rain pelts the ground with a rhythmic, steady beat. Turtwig begins to draw in the energy from his surroundings—the mud and sediment—and yelps as he tries to overcome his new move. Snivy watches in awe as the energy flows through his body in vivid white strings. They enter the tip of his twig and then emit a bright white light.

"Mud Bomb!" he shouts.

Suddenly, he lowers his head and points his twig at the wave of poison. He shoots globs of sturdy mud to make a small hump, an in-between of a castle wall and a speed bump, to make the poison stop in its tracks. He then aims the attacks at Muk. The creature bounces the mud off of itself and, as a result, is pushed back a little each time. As Muk gets further back, the mud begins to miss until Ralts uses her Psychic-type attacks to control the mud's path.

The clumps of sediment, outlined in a tint of light purple, are thrown repeatedly at the creature. It begins to slide back at larger intervals, and Turtwig and Ralts are therefore forced to step closer, inch by inch, to the edge of the muddy barrier. Snivy, Bunnelby, Tropius, and Wingull stay put as the three Flying-type administrators settle down beside them. The rain finally stops, the puddles soon soaking into the ground. The group seems upbeat with the new scenery and newfound hope. They cheer as Turtwig and Ralts suppress the savage, but as soon as Ralts looks their way with a smile, she trips over a rock and smacks her head against the mud wall. Turtwig stops attacking and attempts to backtrack to the others with an unconscious Ralts on his shell. However, Muk quickly recovers and unleashes another Sludge Wave.

The savage slams a pulse of poison onto the ground and unleashes its second wave. The poisonous liquid sloshes against the mud barrier and, after a few pushes, eventually breaks free from the restriction. It then proceeds to loom onward toward Turtwig's back feet. The Tiny Leaf Pokémon kicks off farther with his back legs until he meets with his friends. A puffy-winged Pokémon, Altaria, tells Turtwig that she will bring Ralts with her, and so she slips the Pokémon off his shell so he can be with his friends. She, Pelipper, and Swellow stay put for the time being despite the purple sludge coming on its way. Turtwig hops on Tropius's back, as does Snivy and Bunnelby. The banana-neck Pokémon kicks off the ground and flies toward the Pokémon Gym. Behind him, Wingull and Pelipper follow.

"What are you doing out here, son?" Pelipper asks.

"I'm here to protect my friends," Wingull says blandly.

"Well, aren't you the hero of today?" says the sarcastic father.

"Look, Dad, I can be strong—I can be a survivor! I'm going to make it farther in life than you will," Wingull sneers.

"I wish—" Pelipper starts angrily, but then he grows silent and flies past Wingull in an upset mood.

Tropius thuds against the ground beside the Pokémon Gym and lets Bunnelby, Snivy, and Turtwig run inside. Soon after, he ducks his head in and stomps around. Out from under the dinosaur-like Pokémon's belly comes a curious Bidoof. Bidoof sees the giant Sludge Wave and screams loudly, though the lack of any reaction makes him seem inaudible. Beside him, on the side of the building facing the savage Muk, Wingull and Pelipper sit on opposite corners. Both are using the move Protect on the building, though it only gets part of the gym and not the whole thing. Bidoof studies how they use the move and then gets in between them to join in on the support. He smiles when he notices the whole building submerged within the green protective sphere.

. . .​

Turtwig walks around and sees Altaria and Swellow perched at the end of the gym, which is home to the nearly invisible Skarmory. He begins to direct his path toward them until he hears some trouble around him.

"I miss Illumise so bad," cries Volbeat. "I don't know if I can make it without her."

His tail, home to a usually bright glow, is dim. The thick red band around his neck is covered with the soiled texture of drying tears. He doesn't seem able to think of anything else but poor Illumise, who was killed by the sludge earlier. Turtwig sighs and moves on.

"I wish I was in a coma. At least I wouldn't have to go through this. I'm getting a headache," says Frogadier's voice from afar.

"Oh, Frogadier, please calm down!" Skitty shouts.

"Is the poison ever going to stop?" asks Panpour.

"I'm getting tired of all this staying inside," Wurmple says while frowning.

"How long are we going to be in here?" Chikorita gasps.

"How long…in here?"

"Are we …die?"

"I'm….not …good!"

Turtwig begins to feel overwhelmed by all the complaining. He begins to try and ignore the voices, but they come at him faster than a Sludge attack. Everyone shouldn't be whining when there is a life-threatening danger going on just beyond this building.

"Wait," Turtwig says slowly, "what's going on outside?"

He runs to a window to see the savage still trying to drown the city. However, the whole view is in a light green tint, almost as if he's wearing some sort of 3D glasses. Almost right under his eyes, he sees Bidoof, Wingull, and Pelipper creating the green field—they're using Protect to keep the building safe. Why Turtwig didn't worry before, he isn't sure, but he does hear one name being screamed several times: Ralts.

"Ralts! Ralts! I forgot to grab Ralts!" Altaria chokes behind tears.

"What?"

. . .​

Turtwig, Snivy, and Altaria look to see, beyond the green tint of the Protect, a limp body floating in the poisonous ocean outside. Turtwig narrows his eyes to see the corpse: it's almost purely white, though there seems to be some green at one of the ends of the body. It is lying face down in the water-like poison.

"She's…she's gone," Snivy says solemnly, and despite no tears erupting from her ducts, Turtwig can tell that single fatality has injured Snivy deeply.

"I'm going to go talk to Skarmory," she says after swallowing down her emotions.

Altaria continues to scream and cry in self pity, but all Turtwig can do is look at the previously hopeful body now floating in its own deathbed.

. . .​

After two hours of persistent waves of poison, the savage finally rests. It breathes heavily, debris and leaves flying in its open mouth. Soon after the attacks stop, so does the flooding of poison. The ground soon comes into view, and after Snivy bravely walks outside first, several other Pokémon join her to investigate the remains of their previous home.

"We can't stay out long. It could recover any minute," Bunnelby whispers.

"Sludge Wave is so strong…we only have two large trees left—the Pokémon School and one of the squad cabins," Turtwig notices.

"I'm so glad I'm not a kid. I'd be so mad if the school building was still up," jokes Snivy, but she quickly hushes after receiving several glares.

Altaria goes to where Ralts's body was last seen but finds no remains. Whatever happened, there is nothing to bury as far as she can see. The Pokémon wails loudly and slams her body on the ground in a seemingly pathetic rage.

To Turtwig's surprise, Volbeat comes out to look around. Turtwig asks him why he decided to come outside, but the Pokémon only says that he wants to look at Fortree one last time. As the Muk begins to stir again, Bunnelby, Snivy, Altaria, and most of the others run inside the building for more cover. Bidoof, Wingull, and Pelipper, although tired, decide to use Protect again just in case.

"We need to go, Volbeat," Turtwig says hastily.

"No."

Turtwig steps back a little in surprise. "What do you mean? Aren't you coming in?"

"No."

"You can't just stay outside!"

The savage Muk moves closer and decides to resort back to its primary move again—Sludge. It spits out three sludge attacks, one hitting one of the last tree trunks, another missing the Pokémon Gym, and one slamming just beyond Turtwig and Volbeat. After another Sludge attack, Volbeat closes his eyes and opens his arms out.

"Stop this, Volbeat. It doesn't have to end this way!"

Volbeat maintains his posture. "It will eventually. There is no escaping this new world. There is no escaping death. This is God's wrath on us all. Whatever we did, Arceus wants us to pay for it. This is for you, Illumise. I love you."

When Turtwig tries to intervene, Volbeat does open his eyes. He sees the Sludge coming right towards them, like a mythical meteorite that some little girl, probably miles away, wished upon that night. Volbeat unleashes a purple orb of dark energy and launches it straight in front of Turtwig, causing him to fall back directly into the open Gym's doors and landing inside. One of the citizens, in a panicky state, shuts and locks the door. Once Turtwig recovers from the Shadow Ball, he runs to open the door.

However, he only sees a small yellow tail's glow soon fade into darkness as the rest of the body is submerged in the engulfing giant purple sludge.

I killed off some important characters, but here's a spoiler: I'm not done yet! The danger has only begun. Even though Muk seems repetitive right now, remember that it isn't supposed to be completely aware of its surroundings. It's going to do the same thing multiple times, kind of like a wild Pokemon using a random move.
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 17)

One chapter fresh off the document! This chapter finally ties some loose ends and helps me get rid of, oh, twelve characters at least? The question is...did I kill them all? Read and find out!

Chapter 18: Hope

"Muk, the Sludge Pokémon. Apparently its poison, once coming into contact with plants and even trees, can instantly seep in and kill them," Bunnelby reads from a textbook within the Pokémon Gym.

"So then let's try and figure this Pokémon out before we die," Turtwig says. "Let's go over what we've learned so far."

"It seems reckless, but it's still partly unaware—like a toddler. It wants to dispose of us, yet it doesn't understand how. Otherwise, it wouldn't have started out with the Sludge attacks, but rather with its Sludge Wave," Snivy says while rubbing a hand against her forehead.

"Therefore?"

"Its brain seems to have regressed, possibly during the transformation itself," Chikorita suggests.

"And the regression was an exchange of brainpower for its newfound strength, almost like a balance of sorts," Snivy continues.

"Well it can at least attack, and it knows how to properly. It does have some sort of understanding, however little, and it does sense movement, though only more noticeable actions like walking. I'm not sure if it could sense our breathing," Skitty adds.

"So, in other words, this creature, after receiving the shot of the strand of Pokérus, grew one hundred times its size and, in turn, lost some understanding. However, it is not dumb—it knows we're food and that it should kill us, but now how? Is that it?" Turtwig asks the group as a whole.

Behind the study area, a loud cackling can be heard. Turtwig and the others look to see who could possibly be laughing during such a serious situation, but then he sees this figure officially close-up for the first time.

Skarmory lands on the floor with a thud as he begins to laugh. His steel wings cut into the floor, leaving a mark, and he quickly gets up when seeing the damage he caused.

"How could you possibly make jokes at a time like this?" Turtwig asks disapprovingly.

The whole town nervously glances around. Skarmory narrows his eyes toward the Tiny Leaf Pokémon. His sturdy body is very intimidating, almost impenetrable—both physically and mentally—as he cannot get into Skarmory's head. He doesn't understand what is so funny! Is it something they said, something they did? Skarmory glares, but he says nothing.

Turtwig scrunches his face into a sneer. "Well?!"

. . .​

"We can't go back," Scyther decides after the group paces for a minute.

"What are you talking about? We have to go back!" one of the members protests.

"I'd rather save lives than the mission. Scyther, this is a bad call," Houndour informs him.

Scyther looks at the Pokémon. A dog, black and orange, with this bone-like system along his spin and head. Who does he think he is? Scyther is the commander of this group, not Houndour. Scyther scrapes his scythes together to make a horrid sound like the squeak of cheap pencil graphite on poor quality paper.

"I'm not going to endanger the lives of my men. The defensive team can handle it. They are there for a reason, you know," the green-bodied insect scoffs.

The whole group of members goes quiet as they refuse to stand up against the leader. Houndour, however, begins walking toward the direction of Fortree City—alone. Scyther calls to him, but the Pokémon doesn't turn back around. Soon enough, Squirtle starts walking, and then Fletchinder flies onward to guide. Shuppet glides over to Squirtle, Fennekin begins prancing along with them, and Marill waddles behind them. Eventually, everyone begins to start walking. Scyther, shocked, stands alone in an almost frozen state. His own men betrayed him for the good of the city. That's something to be proud of, at least.

"Wait!" he screeches, running in front of the whole group as fast as he can.

"What do you want?" Houndour shows his teeth in frustration.

"To lead the way," Scyther sighs, closing his eyelids for a brief moment of time before buzzing quickly to his home town.

Behind him, a whole army of brave souls decide to put their lives on the line and run as well. Squirtle and Marill begin to propel themselves with water. Shuppet follows quickly, though his hovering is nothing out of the ordinary. Fletchinder flies faster and faster. Even Fennekin, who is usually the stick in the mud, is running much faster than several others.

. . .​

After regaining his composure, Skarmory looks to see hundreds of eyes glaring at him. He, the leader, is one of the most unpopular Pokémon at this very moment. Outside the Pokémon Gym, three Pokémon are struggling to save them all. He is standing here and wasting time while laughing at observations.

"I'm sorry for my ignorance. The truth is," Skarmory says, glancing at Turtwig and his friends, "I know all about these, these savages."

Someone gasps and the crowd goes silent. Turtwig's eyes bulge as he sucks in a large amount of air. Whether he really is aware of the situation or not, Skarmory at least appears confident. However, while he begins thinking, Skarmory rockets outside the gym, breaking the door into wooden planks, and begins to fly the singular target: Muk.

. . .​

"What is it?" Shuppet asks, moving his nose over to a purple glob at the side of the dirt path.

Ekans looks at the substance carefully. He cocks his head sideways and grabs a twig with his mouth to prod at the glob. Upon contact, the twig begins an accelerated rate of decay and eventually withers in Ekans's own mouth. It tosses the remains and pushes Shuppet out of the way.

"Thisss poissson isss not normal Pokémon poissson. Thisss iss a mutation of poissson. Think of it like…putting Pokérussss in a tube of Ssssludge. From the twig'ssss rate of decay, I'd sssay the power of thisss poisson iss enough to alsso kill Pokémon, humanssss…anything. I'd ssssuggest we continue on. I sssee more purple globsss ahead," Ekans decides.

"Everyone please avoid the poison. Touch it and you die. Okay, back on the road," Scyther nods.

The large group of Pokémon walks onward in two lines, Scyther leading the very front and Houndour and Ekans leading the two subunits. They continue walking (they've done so for a few hours now) and should be coming up to Fortree City in a matter of minutes. Scyther sees more and more poison globs and begins to get nervous. Are they really going to see a destroyed town, a dead city?

A piercing screech can be heard from miles away. There is no mistaking it; Scyther is completely aware of the warning call: Altaria is signaling an emergency situation. Scyther tells his ranks to stay behind him and go by his order, but no one listens. Several of the Pokémon begin on their own—Marill and Squirtle, Fletchinder, and Fennekin all go on their own to the gates of Fortree City. The others, however, stay behind Scyther as he leads them forward. He gulps as they approach the city gates. When he peers inside, he gulps again.

Squirtle and Marill shoot up over the side of the wall with a powerful Water Gun combo, causing them to land on the wall's top edge with a hard thud! Squirtle rubs his rump and looks forward to inspect the damage. Nearly every tree and tree house is ruined, the buildings are smashed in, and there is a giant heap of poison in the middle of the city—and it has arms. Squirtle squints to see it is a Pokémon, but the weird thing is that there are birds flying around it.

"Those are the administrators," Marill whispers.

Fletchinder glides over to see Wingull in the far distance. He decides to begin a long chain of Flame Charges to boost his speed. He flies around and around in a small circle until his whole body catches on fire. He continues on and on until he feels the power surge through him.

Fennekin skips into the gateway of the city. He sees the same destruction that everyone else saw, but he is instead looking for survivors. He steps inside the city and skips over to the Pokémon Center's remains, but all that is left is the occasional piece of wood. He runs back to the gate as a thin layer of poison begins to invade the surrounding earth, almost like a horror film based on childhood fantasies of skipping over the lava of a volcano.

Scyther stops the rest of the expedition members right before entering Fortree City. He pushes them to lean against the wall's exterior and explains the battle plan. Chespin is to maneuver by trees. He will glide around and look for survivors. Ekans will slither around and look for safety routes. They are going to work together to find everyone else, but conditions have went from previously hard to even worse.

. . .​

Since Skarmory went outside, the Sludge Waves have stopped. Turtwig thinks about the possible outcomes (Muk's death or Muk's new dinner) and decides it necessary to look outside to see what did actually happen. He peeks his head around the corner of the doorway, which no longer has a door of any sort, and sees Skarmory repeatedly attacking the creature.

The poison is still creeping closer. He hears the voices and screams of many civilians, the crying of children. He thinks of the sacrifices, the risks, the consequences of the action he is about to plead. Turtwig swiftly walks around the doorway without being noticed by his friends. He inches toward three of the administrators—Swellow, Pelipper, and Altaria, along with Wingull—and begs Altaria to consider his opinion.

"I personally think we should evacuate. There is no telling when the others are going to get here, if they get here at all, and these Protects aren't going to last forever. We're going to die if we don't do something. I at least want to get some people to safety."

Altaria ruffles her cloudlike, puffy wings and thinks for a moment. She frowns at the idea, but she then seems to glow at some sort of breakthrough. She nods her head, spits out a taste of dread, and looks at Turtwig with depressed eyes.

"I failed Ralts. However, I don't want to fail anyone else. If Skarmory is going to act like this, then I am the leader of Fortree. I will evacuate. I will lead Pokémon to safety. However, I will only take the civilians that can't battle. I will return them to Fortree once Muk is out of the way. You all will have to risk your lives here because I can't risk mine for you," she solemnly decides.

"I understand," Turtwig says quietly, eyes to the ends of his nubby legs.

. . .​

Miltank holds all of her children and whispers their names: Pansage, Panpour, Litleo, Swablu, Taillow, etc. She tells them everything will be okay, everything will end up like it should. Beside her, Audino feels of Frogadier's head and confirms that he is indeed sick. She even says he may die. Whether or not she's telling the truth, Turtwig isn't sure. However, Noctowl, Phantump, and Machoke are not as talkative. They stay on their own and gulp down tears. Xatu stares at the cloudy sky while Magikarp flops about. Altaria stands before them all with Turtwig and Snivy at her side.

"You two, I am going to march these citizens out to the outskirts of the city, possibly to the far left city on the map, and either start an establishment there or come back here. I'm not sure. I can't just risk their lives by coming back, so maybe we'll meet again someday. Audino is coming so that we have a nurse on standby, so don't worry about us. Snivy, take care of these soldiers. They're good, every single one. Turtwig, thank you for your service thus far. It has been a pleasure working with this city and I hope you all survive to the end of it all," Altaria announces with tears in her eyes.

"You were a good commander," the grass snake comforts. "I couldn't have done better."

Turtwig smiles and says a few words of encouragement before they all turn to hear the savage Muk scream loudly—Skarmory has just hit a sensitive spot on it!

They all cheer until Muk sends out random Sludge attacks like their bombs. Turtwig tells Altaria all the trainees made a pact to stay together and fight for the glory of Fortree City, and they will do so until their deaths. Altaria hugs him and unleashes a stream of tears. Nearby, a ball of sludge crashes down and embeds itself into the ground. Turtwig ushers them outside the city and Altaria leads a crying group of citizens outside to some unknown fate.

"They're not going to make it, are they?" Turtwig breathes unsteadily.

"No, and neither are we if we stay out here!" Snivy shouts as she pushes the two of them away just in time to miss an attack. They return to the temporary salvation and explain the past events.

Skitty takes care of a crying Chansey while Trapinch nervously looks outside. His little outpost on the wall to his far left has melted to some degree. He had so many memories and daydreams up there that he almost cried from the sentimental value he placed in it.

Outside the Pokémon Gym, Wingull and Bidoof fall over from exhaustion. Pelipper, too, ends his shield as he falls over and begins to wheeze. Swellow urges him up but ultimately fails. The Swallow Pokémon looks inside the gym to see Turtwig looking upset. He turns back around to see a rampaging Muk, but it is now focusing its attacks on Skarmory. It throws a Sludge attack so strong that it did seem like a bomb. The attack hit the northern wall of the city and destroyed the whole entire protective barrier. Beyond it, a guilty-looking group led by Altaria quickly retreats. The Muk sees the group and begins to conjure waves of toxic sludge once again, causing Phantump to get damaged heavily by it. The rest of the group, however, dived behind the remaining side of the northern wall in time. Altaria screams at the sight of Phantump dying. The Muk seems to get stronger from Phantump's death, though it never ingests the Pokémon.

Skarmory does his best to divert the attention. He continuously attacks with Steel Wing, but it does very little damage even in sensitive areas like the eyes. He gets thrown against the wall somehow and doesn't move to get up. Machoke, the town handyman, fights the urge to go fight Muk, but he can't help it; he cannot run while the rest of them fight. He runs back in the town and goes to pick Skarmory back up.

Machoke glances back to see the group completely gone. Altaria has led them onward. The only trace of them that remains is the rotting corpse of a ghostly tree trunk.

. . .​

Turtwig grabs Wingull and Bidoof and brings them inside. The shelter of the Pokémon Gym may not provide physical protection, but at least the savage can't see them inside. There is some closure in that note, even if they were to die.

He sets the Pokémon next to Skitty and kindly asks her to give them something, and she happily accepts the request. Nearby, Trapinch talks to Tropius about escape routes. Bunnelby counters with the speech that there will be no escape. Turtwig rolls his eyes and steps outside. Behind him, Snivy and Trapinch decide to follow.

. . .​

Machoke gets poisoned after punching the Pokémon in the bottom region of its slimy figure. He doesn't mind death, though. Suddenly, his muscles begin to grow uncontrollably and, in the heat of the moment, his Guts ability kicks in. He uses a strong Dynamic Punch to knock the Muk back a good couple of yards—much to Skarmory's surprise—and the Fighting-type Pokémon goes down in a poetic way. He knocks Muk back once more before falling to his knees, panting loudly, and then landing on his face with no further movement.

Skarmory glides over to the body and apologizes the sacrifice. He was too weak to protect Machoke, both as a leader and as a Pokémon. He looks down quietly as the Muk begins to creep closer again, his trail of purple extending farther and almost at Skarmory's feet. The Pokémon moves back a little and watches as the poison takes over Machoke's body. Behind him, Swellow, Snivy, Turtwig, Trapinch, and an exhausted Pelipper watch the touching scene. From somewhere within the building, he can hear voices screaming for others to calm down. Skarmory frowns at the chaos all around him.

. . .​

Chespin slings his vines against the outside trees and catches hold of a branch. He walks backwards along the ground and uses the stress of his vines on the branch to serve as a slingshot. Once he jumps up, he is thrown into the city and almost on Muk itself. He screams and wraps a vine around the way-below Pokémon Gym's sign. With a tug, his angle is changed and he misses landing on the creature.

Marill and Squirtle rocket themselves forward with Aqua Jet and intertwine, making a DNA-coiling appearance. They land nearby the Muk, avoiding the tide of purple that moves in closer, and wait for others to come. Fletchinder flies in and lands beside Pelipper while Fennekin prances around along the walls. There is now a giant circle in the very middle of town that expands more and more—the thin layer of sludge.

Shuppet hovers in and makes a weird face. "What stinks in here?" he asks.

. . .​

Why isn't Turtwig fighting? He wonders the same thing. Turtwig stands outside watching the spectacle, Skarmory, try and take down the savage Muk. The giant, ever-so-changing figure just slumps over and never flinches.

Is that even possible? he asks himself. It wouldn't have been this time a couple of years ago. Thanks to humanity, this is what society has become. Thanks to humanity, there is no humanity.

All Turtwig can do from this point is hope. He can't physically attack, he can't make an intelligent plan, and he can't chicken out and run away like last time. All he can do at all is hope.

Thanks for reading. There are only two more chapters left in part one. These two chapters are more like a season finale two-parter, but for the sake of the chapter numbers, they will be separated. You still haven't seen the most intense chapter yet. To be continued.
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 18)

It's finally here. The final two chapters of Part One are here--well, the first is. Chapter 19 experiences death, tragedy, hope, and a possible end. Warning: there is definitely a cliffhanger. Not sure if anyone reads these, but I'm writing them anyways.
Chapter 19: Boom

Turtwig opens his eyes to find himself among shattered planks of wood and puddles of blood. He is lying on his left side, and there are pieces of debris and small poison globs on either side of him. Turtwig rolls over onto his belly and look straight through the space where the eastern wall used to be. Hours earlier, it was barely harmed, but now it has been shredded into a group of medium-sized stones.

He looks around at his body: he is perfectly fine in a physical sense. The occasional cut and bruise, he was not damaged. He plants his left forefoot on the ground and groans with the agony of his soreness. He leans on his right side and then shifts his body onto his left in order to free his right leg from his weight. He lifts himself up and catches his back weight with his hind legs. Shaking off the dirt and wood from his body, Turtwig looks around, cries out a small, disturbing gurgle, and falls back onto his belly and closes his eyes in an attempt to rid himself of the setting before him.

. . .​

Four hours earlier

"Hey, they're here!"

Turtwig gallops over to greet Scyther's group. He walks along the southern wall of Fortree, one of the last two intact, and eventually stops to embrace the reunion of his friends. However, Houndour, Squirtle, Marill, Shuppet, Fennekin, Scyther and Chespin run forward and place themselves in battle stations for Muk. Fletchinder glides over to Turtwig and perches on his hardened shell.

"What's the situation?" asks the Fire/Flying Pokémon.

"We have lost possibly a dozen so far, some of them citizens and some of them not. Most of us have taken shelter in the Pokémon Gym, which is one of the only buildings left. The Pokémon that know Protect have been shielding us from the waves of poison, but the attacking has momentarily stopped—for us, at least. Skarmory himself has started to aid in the fighting, and we have been able to hide away while he pulls through with his promise of defeating the thing," Turtwig says.

Fletchinder nods and signals for the rest of the Pokémon—Wurmple, Ekans, and Linoone—to follow him. They move past Turtwig and run towards the Pokémon Gym. However, as they leave, both Snivy and Skitty walk up to Turtwig. They sit on tree logs, still located at the front end of Fortree City (almost directly in front of the Pokémon Gym, but situated in the small forest inside the city), and exchange information.

"Bidoof and Wingull are still using Protect, but only one at a time in order to conserve energy. We don't have much of a shield left. The only reason that building is still standing is because Skarmory is repeatedly damaging his wings in attacking that savage," Snivy explains.

"Everyone is worried sick. Pelipper and Swellow are on their way to attack the savage as well, but we have no active administrators watching over the shelter anymore," Skitty adds.

"Any news on Altaria's group?"

"None that I've heard…"

The three of them begin to swiftly run back to the shelter as the trees begin to rot. Turtwig remembers the Pokédex entry of Muk being able to kill trees just by being near them. He begins to think of the ways to kill Muk, whether it be making a giant hole, capturing it, and then burying it, or by fortifying it in a pile of stones. He frowns because neither option seems realistic. Snivy nudges his neck with her green elbow and points at the sky.

Swellow glides in and stabs the savage Muk with a powerful Aerial Ace, which punctures a hole in the creature. However, Swellow's beak gets stuck in the poisonous grime. It cries out a muffled, sheer screech that resembles the sound of a microphone-speaker squealing issue. It attaches its claws to the grime and attempts to free itself from the Muk's belly, but then its legs get stuck and it eventually hangs there, limp, and allows itself to get absorbed into the creature's viscous body.

The grown pelican, with beautiful blue-tipped wings, rams into Muk in a desperate attempt to free the engulfed Swellow. However, the father of Wingull is poisoned on impact and, though escaping the Muk's sticky grime, slowly glides down until it smashes into the ground and begins a somewhat quick death.

"Dad! No!" Wingull screams, ending its turn of Protect and rushing to the aid of his strict father.

"Go to Lilycove City. We have a home there. As long as life is sustainable and nothing has changed, you should live with your aunt Swanna," Pelipper says through a tight, giant beak.

Wingull sheds a tear and it runs down his predominantly white body. Turtwig and Skitty look down at the ground solemnly as Pelipper's breathing becomes irregular. His vision begins to darken, his pain begins to die down, and Pelipper's heart begins to give out.

"Oh, and Wingull?"

"Y-yes, father?"

"I'm proud of you," the Water Bird Pokémon says before closing its eyes for the rest of eternity, the rest of what short life the world may have.

. . .​

Bidoof decides to end the protection as well. Because Skarmory is still battling the savage, there is indeed hope. He begs Chikorita, Trapinch, Skiddo, Bunnelby, Snivy, and the rest of those inside to rush to another area for safety, possibly the trees. However, they all only come outside to observe the situation at hand. Turtwig and Skitty walk over to them and watch in awe as Skarmory continues to lash out on the Pokémon.

"Why isn't Skarmory dying?" asks Bunnelby.

"Maybe his Steel typing slows down the poisoning," someone suggests.

"Lairon begs to differ," says Skiddo.

"Lairon was eaten alive, not poisoned to death."

"I think," Snivy begins, "that the poison does take longer for Skarmory. However, I do believe that his wings are deteriorating, but they are doing so at a much slower pace than another Pokémon. If someone like Ekans decided to battle, then there may be another slowed death or maybe no consequences at all."

"Either way, it looks like the savage is taking the attacks very well," Turtwig sighs.

"It's letting one small thing get in its way of dinner," a voice from the trees says.

Turtwig turns around to see his close friends again. Squirtle runs up and hugs Turtwig, Trapinch, and then Skitty. Marill smiles and hops around happily. Fennekin sits beside everyone but at least a small smile on his face. Shuppet floats around and tells about the sights of the trip.

"We don't have time right now," Turtwig says.

"This is our time to shine, everyone. I've been waiting my whole life to make a difference in someone else's, and it looks like I've found my calling," the usually shy blue mouse cheers.

"Marill, you don't have to risk your life. Skarmory is doing enough!" Squirtle says.

"No, he's not, and the two of us could help with some Water-type action," Marill counters.

"There's no beating that logic."

The two of them leave the group once again, but this time in the direction of the monster. Turtwig sighs and thinks about Squirtle, about the possibility of losing his friend, and pushes it out of his mind. Ahead, he sees Chespin attacking with the mysteriously green Energy Ball.

While everyone else is just watching the battle and doing nothing else, Fennekin senses a small cry up in the trees. He looks straight above and, sitting on the lowest branch to the ground, a baby Swablu cries for its mother, the same Altaria that left the group. He uses Psychic to control the Pokémon's fall and makes it land in a cushiony bush. He slings the baby cloud-winged Pokémon on his back and runs it into the Pokémon Gym, where he will stay to nurture it to health as long as he can. The Pokémon continues to scream for Altaria, but the Fennec fox only frowns in response to the desperate pleas.

. . .​

Turtwig runs to the eastern wall, which is luckily still in one piece, and peers through the door to find out the source of a wheezing noise. He scans the area and finds no trace of a savage, though he isn't so sure on what the source of the noise could be.

"Help," the voice, grave and anxious, whispers.

Turtwig turns a corner and finds a long body of cream and brown stripes, which he quickly connects to Furret. He takes the Pokémon and drags it along the ground. Eventually, he puts her by the hurt Swablu and lets her recover. He'll ask questions later.

After putting down the Furret, Turtwig's mind clicks into some mode, some new outlook on the whole situation. While he's caring for the sick and thinking of stupid plans, the others are risking their lives. He should be out there. He should be the one who dies in this sort of situation. He should be the hero.

. . .​

Houndour drags the leftover bones and bodies from the poison blobs that have finally left. He lines them up horizontally along the northern wall, which was blasted apart when Altaria's group had tried to escape. However, the Dark Pokémon, with slightly depressed eyes, pays his respects before blowing a Flamethrower on a twig and burning the remains. He whispers some sort of prayer to Arceus and jumps back in the battle zone. As he left the area, he decided to breathe in and prepare for battle. The fire's smoke tasted refreshing, the smell was delightful. It was like getting a small piece of Pokémon Heaven.

. . .​

Wurmple begins inching up a tree trunk. He extends his front end onto the trunk, grabbing hold of it with a good grip, and slowly treks up the vertical path. He inches upwards, his midsection rising up and flattening down in order to thrust his body up the tree. Eventually, he loses his grip and has to catch himself, but the Pokémon continues to go upwards.

Marill and Skarmory, with the former on top of the latter, are now attacking the creature up close. The savage is still confused from all of the different distractions. Scyther and a pack of other squad members begin attacking the lower ends of the creature, while Snivy tells the sporadic trainee about the current situation. Chespin is also still attacking with its weaker Grass STABs, but Squirtle has called it quits for now. He had jumped off of Skarmory moments before and landed on Tropius, who has put upon himself the task of caring for the injured. He flies Squirtle inside the gym and sets him down by Furret and the baby Swablu.

Turtwig, still burning with an overwhelming passion for survival, begins to scream at the creature. "I just want to live! Is that so bad that you just have to destroy the whole town? You were once a Pokémon, too! You were just like us! Can't you understand that?"

The creature stops its confusion and focuses in on Turtwig. For a long, awkward moment, there was almost a sense of connection between the two. Turtwig stares intensely at the blank face of the monster. He sees a face of stupidity, but not of complete ignorance; instead it's as if the creature has forgotten its past, like a child forgets how to do a math problem. However, it moves an arm upwards and unleashes a final Sludge Wave upon the city. Scyther immediately ducks behind a rock and watches as a thin purple layer of poison washes over the dead ground.

Scyther, shaking, looks over the rock and sees Tropius carrying Houndour, Linoone, Skiddo, and Fennekin to the safety of a treetop. Though he struggles to support the weight, Tropius instead lands on the Pokémon Gym's roof.

Furret looks outside to see the wave of poison coming. She frantically gets Swablu, wakes Squirtle up, and looks for some exit, but the only door to the outside has been ripped off, and it is in the very direction of the poison. She runs out anyways and peeks around to see her death coming her way. She runs back in the building and sits on a spare pillow, curled up, and prays to Arceus for mercy.

. . .​

Trapinch and Ekans, sweaty and caked with mud, quickly escape the trench they made around the gym. At the advice of Snivy, they were instructed to dig a small area out so that there would be some protection to the gym. There is a small piece of wood extending from one side of the trench to the other for quick access to the gym, but there is otherwise no way for the poison to contact it without going over the trench. That, according to Turtwig's judgment, isn't going to happen anytime soon.

Nearby, Wurmple inches onto the top tree branch and aims a String Shot straight at the Muk. It shoots a silky beam of web at the savage, however it falls short, lands in the poison, and disintegrates.

. . .​

Turtwig leads everyone else on the ground to the small wooden plank that connects the two sections of land. Scyther is the first volunteer to run in, but everyone else goes in quickly and calmly. After Skitty and Snivy walk in, Turtwig brings up the rear and enters the building. The only Pokémon that haven't returned are Skarmory, Chespin, and Marill because they are still battling the savage. Turtwig called out to them before, but they do not answer. He just shrugs and steps inside.

. . .​

"This is for happiness!" Marill screams until its voice begins to crack.

"We're going to defeat it!" Chespin says between Seed Bombs.

Skarmory just smiles and continues attacking the very tired savage Muk. Suddenly, a small white spot at Muk's belly begins to shine through the grime. He targets it and attacks again and again with Steel Wing, causing the orb of white to grow larger and larger. Skarmory then realizes the mistake he made and watches as the glowing intensity inside begins to blind Skarmory, Chespin and Marill. Chespin and Marill continue to use Seed Bomb and Water Gun from Skarmory's back, though their only target is that same white spot.

From inside the building, Turtwig and the others watch as the creature begins to glow. They all whisper at the same time, leading to vocal chaos. Turtwig hushes them up and watches from the window. The white light engulfs Muk until its whole silhouette begins to shine. Scyther screams in fear as both he and Turtwig realize what is about to happen.

"That's explosion! Everyone duck!" Scyther screeches.

Turtwig sees his friends above and runs out of the building and onto the solid ground beyond the plank of wood. He runs and dodges puddles of poison. He runs as fast as he can to make it to them and warn them about Explosion.

As the move charges and Turtwig runs, Snivy moves her attention nervously to Scyther, who is still cowering in the corner of the room.

"Aren't you supposed to be out there or something? You are the head of the Expedition Team. Not me. Not Turtwig. You."

Scyther just weeps in the corner while the rest of the survivors stare and judge him. Skitty puts on a sympathetic smile and goes to pat his back, but the rest of the Pokémon are not treating him as kind.

"I came back from Altaria's group because I was grateful for what your team has done for me. I didn't know you were as bad as the regulars in town," Furret insults him.

"You told us to be brave!" Shuppet says angrily.

"I know I should have done things differently! I'm a horrible person and I hope I die for it! For Arceus's sake, though, GET DOWN!"

Tropius and the others that were with him immediately fly down to the Pokémon Gym upon seeing the events and hearing Scyther's warning. Everyone in the building crouches down to the floor, with some of them desperately trying to find some sort of fortification within the building. Snivy quickly glances up to see what is outside and finds Turtwig stopped in the middle of his journey to Skarmory. The three Pokémon in the air, though, are still attacking the creature.

"Is this town always in shambles?" asks Bidoof.

. . .​

Turtwig keeps walking until he eventually catches a glimpse of the true situation. Muk is bulging outwards as if it is about to pop. Skarmory is immobilized and cannot move, though Marill and Chespin would surely die if they were to jump down 300 feet. Turtwig screams and steps backward a few feet to figure out what to do. He looks as the Muk swells to the shape of a Golem and he begins to run back as the events begin to take place.

Dddddddoooooooooooommmmm!

In a mix of dust, large chunks of poison fly every which way. A giant fire from Arceus himself spreads across town and deep, black smoke begins to billow from within. It penetrates the whole town, causing Turtwig to cough as he continues to run. Leftover debris begin flying. Wooden planks shoot out like missiles and the ground gets ripped up from its foundation as if an earthquake had happened. The sky went from a tearful blue to an evil, fiery array of searing-hot ashes and complete and utter darkness. Turtwig gallops as fast as he can but the explosion eventually overcomes him, the scenery behind now enveloping him. His vision goes black. He feels himself getting slammed by random objects. He looks around and only manages to sting his eyes with whatever's in the air. Something slams against Turtwig's head and knocks him clean out. He falls over in a heap of wood left from the Pokémon Gym.

. . .​

Turtwig opens his eyes to find himself among shattered planks of wood and puddles of blood. He is lying on his left side, and there are pieces of debris and small poison globs on either side of him. Turtwig rolls over onto his belly and look straight through the space where the eastern wall used to be. Hours earlier, it was barely harmed, but now it has been shredded into a group of medium-sized stones.

Some scenes are brief simply because they aren't important yet. Some are long because they are wrapping up a character's story. You will understand Pelipper and Wingull if you go back and read SS three, which is located here.
 
RE: Savages (Chapter 19)

Chapter 20 is more of the emotional toll on the calamity as compared to the previous chapter, so there is not as much death. However, there is still a lot of mystery left in the incident and many of the "survivors" are still on the chopping block.
Chapter 20: Farewell

Not everyone was blessed with the gift of death. Of course, it is hard for one to commit the act himself, but there are many that are willing to accept death—should it come. An unassociated cause of death can be very rewarding for the deceased. They are able to escape from the world without having to do it themselves. Turtwig fights back tears as he walks along the path of the former city. Why was he not one of the lucky? What purpose is there left for him?

Yes, the giant creature had died in the blast, but at a cost; Turtwig looks at the mangled corpses of Skarmory, Marill, and Chespin as little bubbles of poison seep through their bodies and onto the ground again. They had fought valiantly and, in Turtwig's eyes, Skarmory redeemed himself in the end. The scrap pieces of metal wings and the occasionally identifiable patches of skin sicken Turtwig enough to make him vomit off to the side. The product was bright orange-yellow, acidic, and had small clumps of food—clumps of the last meal would share with friends.

He moves on to find more survivors, not that his hopes are up. At one point, Turtwig trips over a rock and lies there, still, against the ground. He gives up after finding no traces. A tear trickles down his face, down his dry cheek and into the ground. It is soaked up in a heartbeat, never to be thought of again. Is that going to happen to him? He puts his left side against the ground once again and rests. He breathes heavily and unsteadily, like a woman during childbirth, but without the immediate stress. He finds himself sniffling and bawling, curled up, like a Sandshrew with a cold. He thinks about how his trainer no longer has her full party anymore; only five of the six remain…if that.

His face pounds against the ground as a mildly strong vibration emits from deep within. The ground is moaning in pain. Turtwig quickly jumps up and looks around. Back towards the western wall of former Fortree, he sees a savage mole, tan-colored and with a light pink nose, probably less than seventy feet tall. However, it moves fast: the Pokémon slips into the dirt and simply moves its round body within the earth's crust. It rushes to find any leftover bodies. It leaves its back turned to the hidden Turtwig, who is about a hundred yards away.

One Razor Leaf did the trick. Before the creature could disappear into the ground, the leaf slammed into its neck and caused it to poof into a dusty substance. Turtwig moves his gaze toward the trees beyond the western wall, where he sees a giant spider Pokémon begin to crawl around. The green baby spider has a sad-looking face on its neon abdomen. Its red pincers crush more of the western wall in an effortless pinch. Turtwig turns and walks away as if barely affected by the creature's presence. The creature, meanwhile, feasts on one of the bodies left aligned at the back of town.

With the force of each leg, Turtwig feels the pressures of depression seeping in. It's as if rigor mortis sets into his muscles, causing them to contract and tense up. He limps as far as he can go, not looking back. Tears stream down his face. His gut clenches. His friends and family are gone.

. . .​

Skitty and Snivy, clenching their bodies together with their faces hidden from view, open their eyes and see the blue protective barrier around them. On top of it, rocks, scraps of wood, and other debris lie and pack down. The two of them glance around and see nothing but rock. Behind them, they spot Bidoof struggling. The Pokémon had used Protect right before the explosion. Suddenly, he falls over from exhaustion. The barrier breaks and Skitty uses Wake-Up Slap to knock some of the rocks away, however they still crumble down on the group. Snivy snaps her vines above them to avoid any serious damage.

The resulting rocks that do cave in on them are notably small. The worst injury they receive is a small scrape on Snivy's left arm. She grits her teeth as it begins to sting, but she bites her bottom lip and tries to ignore it. Skitty tells her that it will get cleaned when they reach a source of clean water.

Snivy sees the giant Spinarak not too far away. She wraps Bidoof up in her vines and drags him behind her as she and Skitty walk away from it. They exit the town and head eastward. As they move on, Skitty watches as the city begins to drift from her view.

"Were there any other survivors?" she asks.

"Didn't see any," Snivy whispers down to her feet. "We all knew the risks."

Both of them are well aware of the circumstances. They, nearly defenseless, are left with a weakened Bidoof and no form of shelter, let alone food. Not far from the city's limits, Skitty's forelegs jiggle from exhaustion and she is forced to sit and rest. Snivy sets Bidoof down next to a tree trunk and leans her body against the yellowing grass.

"Winter is coming. I don't know if we will ever return to this city, but we need to find some shelter."

. . .​

"I'm going to die! I touched that poison and I'm going to die!" screams the juvenile Swablu.

She cries for her mother, Altaria, as Fennekin sets her on his small, pathetic back. The Pokémon immediately sinks to the ground, but he continues walking despite the muddy ground ruining his beautiful fur and fragile paws.

"You haven't died yet, so maybe you'll be okay," he says.

"I don't know why… I still touched it!"

Fennekin sets the Swablu down and looks around. He is in the middle of nowhere, of some unnamable forest, and he looks her in the eye. He tells her he doesn't know what's going on, he doesn't know how she touched that poison, and he doesn't know why she's still alive. The point is that she is alive, though, and that's what matters to him.

"Where is my mother?"

Fennekin puts a paw to his forehead and pinches the fur right between his eyebrows. He feels of his face with his muddy paw and wipes his nose. He sits with the Pokémon and listens. He listens for survivors, for savages, for some sign. He needs to get this Swablu medical attention. However, since he can only attack savages, he sits there and waits. He doesn't have to wait long until…

"Skitty, can you hand me that berry? It should help Bidoof's slight fever."

Skitty? Bidoof? Fennekin's gloomy face brightens into something hopeful. He jumps onto his four feet and looks back at the little Pokémon, who is still down about her mother being gone. Fennekin puts Swablu over his back again and continues walking toward the voice—and he does so with a smile on his face.

. . .​

Turtwig jumps over a tree trunk right before it gets smashed by the Spinarak's giant pincers. He uses a Razor Leaf to try and attack the nape of the creature's neck, however Spinarak deflects it with its red pincers. The creature quickly runs to him using every one of its legs. Turtwig dives underneath a low tree branch while, right behind him, Spinarak smashes it. Turtwig keeps running until he trips over a root extending from the earth. He looks at the creature's hungry face and braces himself for impact.

From some other direction, a vine snaps onto one of the pincers. Meanwhile, a small yellow fox jumps from the top of a tree and lands on the creature. He runs up its back and uses a large funnel of dancing flames on its neck, burning through the skin and causing the creature to eventually burst into dust. Turtwig runs over and thanks Snivy and Fennekin, while Skitty, Bidoof, and the baby Swablu follow behind.

"You're alive!" Skitty cheers.

"Yes, but…Fortree isn't."

. . .​

Though Turtwig did reunite with a few of his friends, they are not the only survivors. In the midst of the explosion, several Pokémon were thrown from town and placed in separate locations. Skiddo and Ekans were sent deep in the woods, alone, with no food, no shelter, and no will to live. Scyther, ashamed of his cowardice and misaimed intentions, walks on slowly with no one alongside him. Chansey and Linoone escape a collapsing building and manage to meet up with Shuppet and Tropius, who find a scared Tyrogue hiding in the debris.

Several Pokémon were fine, in fact. Wingull and Bunnelby were left in the city and, after recovering from their minor injuries, look for survivors. Squirtle and Trapinch were hidden underneath rubble and managed to narrowly escape the Spinarak, probably only a few minutes before the savage found Turtwig. Alone, separated, and afraid, the residents of Fortree City are no longer united under one group, one army; instead, they now have to fend for themselves.

. . .​

"What? Panpour?" a voice yawns from inside a tree trunk.

The Pokémon gets a furry hand to scratch its back. He rubs his eyes open and peeks out the tree trunk. He brushes his sprout off and strokes his tail. Pansage looks around for the rest of his group, which was with Altaria, and gasps.

"They're gone?"

Nothing. There is no trace of anyone else in the area, except for a small trail of dripping blood heading in one direction. Pansage cups a hand over his mouth and begins to follow it, thinks about the consequences, and turns back to the tree trunk. He waits to see if they come back for him, but he knows the truth somewhere in the back of his mind.

. . .​

Bunnelby looks up at the sky and squints as the sun shines harshly in his eyes, and he searches for Wingull. The Pokémon flies back over and comes to a halt.

"Find anything?" the hopeful bunny asks.

"I found a savage Dratini, but nothing else," Wingull frowns, his wings dropping down at his sides.

"No sign of anyone?"

"Afraid not."

The two Pokémon sit among the rubble and wait for the savage Dratini to attack. The bushes shake and they both turn to face the obstacle, but instead a heartwarming Tiny Leaf Pokémon comes to greet them.

"You're alive!" Turtwig cheers.

"Wingull, I thought you didn't see anyone?"

"I..I didn't."

Turtwig explains how he felt terrible for leaving so soon and forced the group to double back for survivors. He tells how Snivy and Skitty were with Bidoof, how Fennekin was protecting a poisoned Swablu, and about how he's faced several savages on his own. Bunnelby and Wingull join them as they go eastward out of town.

. . .​

A noise is all it takes. A noise can pierce the quiet and disrupt the peace. A noise can annoy an individual into insanity, leading to anger and depression. What else can a noise do? It can bring someone to his senses.

Chikorita hears a distant cry and snaps awake. She moves her body around and find herself trapped. Her leaf has been damaged and her body is crushed under rubble. She sits under the remnants of a wall some great distance beyond Fortree. That blast sent her rocketing to the east.

Reality sets in. She starts to panic. She begins to lose air in the dark, squeezed position she's in. Only a small hole above her head provides the oxygen she needs. Chikorita puts her mouth up to it like a goldfish to pellets of food. She takes in sips of air and cries, her diaphragm controlling her irregular breathing and causing hyperventilation. Is anyone going to save her in time?

. . .​

A flame sets the savage Nincada on fire and leads to its vaporization. Houndour jumps through the smoke and calls for Ponyta and Fletchinder to follow him closely. The three Fire-types are right outside Fortree, probably in the northeastern direction, and are heading to the next city, whichever that may be.

They continue running through the grass patches, dodging loose limbs and avoiding any collisions with obstacles. They can't afford any delays. Houndour hears something within one of the trees, which seems to be hollowed out. He perks a black hear up and moves over to the trunk, finding an exposed cavity containing a familiar face.

"Pansage, what are you doing here?"

The simian Pokémon jumps on top of Houndour and cries with tears of joy, happiness, and relief. He isn't alone anymore; he's saved. Houndour shakes him off and tells him to walk on foot. The Pokémon, cold and tired, presses on slowly behind the Fire-types.

. . .​

"It's going to be fine, Squirtle. You're panicking over nothing," Trapinch explains. "Just be optimistic about the situation. We're alive! I'm sure Turtwig is alive, and Marill; maybe even Skarmory!"

"I know, Trapinch, but what if they're hurt? We're completely fine. It seems unfair."

The two of them have been walking for two hours. They look back and no longer see the smoke of the town in the distance. Savages had started to head to the smoke, sensing activity, so the two of them were forced to move on. Trapinch stops and uses Superpower, causing him to glow red and strike hard, on a large boulder of remains, resulting in a small indentation to be made—like a very small cave. They settle under the shelter and decide to camp for the night.

"We'll start up again first thing tomorrow," Trapinch says. "I'll put a smaller rock in front of the orifice of this cave so the savages don't smell us so easily."

"I always feel like I never do anything right, especially when my brother was around. I've been spared twice now, but why? Is there any reason?" Squirtle shouts angrily at the rocks. "Tell me!"

He begins crying, and Trapinch pats his back. They continue this cycle for a few minutes until Trapinch yawns. Soon after, the two drift off to sleep and forget all of their worrying. For now, at least.

. . .​

"Next stop: Lilycove City," Turtwig announces to the group, and everyone cheers. "We'll be there in just a few days."

They walk down a trail as it begins to rain. The light background noise is rather soothing to Turtwig, especially compared to the devastation he faced earlier. The group comes across a very narrow, muddy intersection and walk one-by-one across it to get to the destination. Fennekin gives Swablu to Skitty to carry as she goes on, and almost everyone continues. Almost.

Fennekin slips down the hill and slides through the mud to the bottom of the slanted walkway. His fur turns brown from the ground and sediment, and he shouts at the top of his lungs for help. He receives no response. He panics, legs trembling as he attempts to slide in the mud, and falls face-first right back in. He slips down in the mud and lands in a small pond nearby, and he rinses himself of any debris. The mud washes right off. He steps out of the pond and enters some tall grass, alone, in a new sort of fright in the pit of his stomach.

. . .​

Chikorita shifts underneath the rubble. She hears Fennekin's shouting, his pleas for help, but she only figures that he is acting normally, that he's whining or complaining. She calls out to him upon seeing him walk beside her debris, and she screams, but no sound comes. Chikorita watches in horror as she, with her weakened ribcage and vocal cords, witnesses her one chance of escaping walk right by her. She closes her eyes and bangs her head against a rock in frustration.

. . .​

Fletchinder swoops down and crouches through a small orifice in a large bush. He pecks at the ground and steps into the warm fire. Houndour's ears perk up in curiosity and he asks for a status report.

"No sign of any survivors," the bird frowns.

"What could have happened to them?" Ponyta asks in horror.

"Just assume the worst," Houndour instructs.

The three of them, along with Pansage, sit by the fire and talk about their past lives, their excitement for the future. Ponyta talks about being a race horse; her mother was a famous racer back in Kanto. Fletchinder dreams to meet a wonderful Pidgeotto and start a family—nothing out of reach. Pansage explains that, as a kid, he only thought about playing with his two best friends.

"Pansear is dead," he sniffles, "and Panpour is who-knows-where. I-I want my mommy."

Ponyta allows him to lean against her, and she keeps him warm as well. He smiles and snuggles up to her belly. She puts her head between her bent legs and drifts off to sleep.

"I had a brother," Houndour says, his eyes ignited by fire. "He was my best friend. We were going to take on the Pokémon League if a trainer happened to stop by. That didn't happen, of course, but I still like to fight." Houndour's eyes become solemn and he joins the others in sleep. That night, he dreams of attacking a giant tycoon, an amazing force of power. He fails.

. . .​

"He's dead," Skiddo says with an ugly voice. "Wurmple is dead."

He and Ekans were walking down a path, tracing some tracks they thought were Turtwig's, and Skiddo found Wurmple's lifeless body all stiff and pale.

"He wasss a good sssoldier," Ekans nods. "Usss ssslithering Pokémon were sssupposssed to ssstay together."

"He inched."

"…"

The two Pokémon sit there in disbelief. Is there anybody left in this Arceus-forsaken world? Skiddo urges for Ekans to continue on, and the two of them walk in the tracks of their prey, whoever it may be. Perhaps they'll meet some familiar faces, or perhaps they'll find some new friends. In this world, who knows?

. . .​

Shuppet's group continues on in search of food. Linoone's Pickup ability has caused him to find some random objects, but he has not found a berry yet, let alone any meat. Chansey wipes a tear away as her large belly grumbles in impatience. She pats it and wipes her forehead. The group walk over a bridge-like area that is caked in mud, and they stop short to evaluate their goals.

"Are we wanting to find the others or live off of what we know?" Shuppet asks the survivors.

"Both," Tyrogue whispers.

"Well I have bananas growing from my neck," Tropius explains. "We can just eat those one at a time for now. Linoone, what do you think?"

As the group converses, Shuppet's horn throbs with the sensing of negative emotions. He feels powerful, invigorated, even, and suddenly begins to wonder why. He looks around and finds no one with any negativity, and then his ghostly senses begin to tingle.

"We aren't alone. Someone's here."

He feels around the energy of the location and begins to develop a headache. Nearby, however, a crushed Chikorita begins to stop as she painfully gives up on any chance to live. She prays to Arceus to cast her life away now, or else some savage will come and devour her. She painfully cries the tears straight down to the ground, wetting the earth that resides in her little stone prison.

"Did you hear that?" Linoone asks quickly, his mouth twitching at the sound of crying.

"H-hhhep," a voice squeaks.

Linoone flips around and stares in the location near Chikorita. He still seems unclear that she is underneath the stones. He scratches his head and then calls out, "hello?"

. . .​

Squirtle dreams that he, his brother, and Turtwig are having a blast with a three-sided battle. Squirtle falls flat between Wartortle and his friend, and he lands square on the ground. As the other two Pokémon are in the air, it turns into slow motion. The two turtle-like Pokémon clash and slowly feel the recoil, both being knocked back slightly. As they fall, Squirtle squirms to get up. He finds himself a baby, an infant incapable of communication. The baby Squirtle watches as a giant Blastoise throws her arms at the two Pokémon and catches them mid-fall. Squirtle cheers until he sees her shove them in her mouth, and Squirtle crawls up to save them. The Blastoise laughs and lowers a foot down on Squirtle's baby head.

Squirtle wakes up hearing creepy sounds outside. A savage must be near. Perhaps he could simply walk outside and end it all? No, that's the easy way out. He wants to go out with a bang, right? Or should he allow his death to just be like nothing happened? He drifts back off to sleep while pondering that very question.

. . .​

Turtwig finds himself with a million thoughts banging around in his head like a bunch of air particles in a container. They jet back and forth and slam into each other, and they eventually make their way to the brain and knock into it as well. His head pounds with the intensity of being the leader. No, that's not it. It pounds with the intensity of despair.

Now there are only five Pokémon left from his trainer's party. He walks on without looking back, without thinking of the past failures he's seen at hand. Marill was such a young Pokémon, too; it's a shame such a lively soul should have to suffer. Turtwig gulps as a feeling of guilt is squirted on him like a cheap bottle of old perfume. He coughs at the thought of it. Turtwig has failed as a trainee. His friends are in danger. He's already lost some of them. What's next? He loses himself in the midst of their walking?

Turtwig stops walking. A tear rolls down his green face, around his yellow jaw, and onto the soaking wet ground. He falls to his knees and allows the crying to continue. For the first time, Turtwig reveals his emotions to everyone. They thought he was strong, that he could withstand it. They were wrong. He isn't a trainee, he isn't a leader, and, at the moment, he doesn't even feel real. Turtwig covers his eyes with his nubby paws as Skitty pats his back.

"Hey, where's Fennekin?" Bunnelby blurts.

Turtwig yanks himself from self-pity and becomes alert with worry.

. . .​

Fennekin falls up from a nap and finds himself still in the dark, tall grass. He hears a roar somewhere in the distance and screams, probably inaudibly. He begins running through the tall grass, through the mysterious path of which no trail lies. He finds himself running toward the sound…or away from it? He stops, an ear twitches, and he finds himself lost. Dead lost. He takes a step and hears a branch snap. Then, he hears a bunch of rustling coming from the grass nearby. He steps back a little and scoots against a log. He's trapped. Something—no, some things—are coming. He runs forward, or at least the forward he believes in, and is then smacked against the back of the head with some sort of blunt object. His vision goes black and his memory fades.

The last sensory image he remembers is the act of being dragged away, dragged away from friends, from society, from survival. The pack of Pokémon drag him away from whatever chance he had at making it in this world. And, oddly, that is okay with him.

And thus, part one has concluded. Stay tuned for part two, which will feature a possible apocalyptic insane asylum!
 
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