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Well heres what everyones been waiting for. Hope you like it! Dont mind me trying to add comedy at the beginning....I figured that was the place for it seeing that this is a serious chapter.
Chapter Six
September 2nd 2114
Snow…….its white and cold and fluffy. I heard of people who’ve never seen snow in their life……well I’ve seen more of it in the past two days then most people have, ever. Let me rewind….I know everyone’s just DIEING to hear what happened.
So like OMG, I was like at this like tent thing, and I was SO like FREAKING OUT because it was like SOOOOOO cold! Sorry, bout that, seeing if I could pull it off…..seems I can.
Let me start this off right….we left in while I was writing in the tent. At that point, it wasn’t THAT cold…overnight however…..that was a completely different story. I couldn’t sleep…..at all. I’ve been all over…but nowhere like this….its like a tundra…..x10. I couldn’t sleep….and neither could Joey. I went over to his tent…..to see if he was awake. They’re was a light on, and I could see him writing also. It was a letter….to Black Rayquaza…..I knocked…well you know…tapped….on the tent.
“Jason?” He asked while continuing to write.
“Yeeesss….,” I stammered. “Is it possible to venture into the house now?”
“Are you that cold?” he asked.
“Yes….I cannot sleep…..please?”
“Fine….we can venture tonight….but I’m afraid you might not like what you’re about to do…..you sure your ready?”
“I can do it….anything’s better than this.”
We started walking…..it wasn’t a horribly long walk….just a couple of miles. We came upon the great house….it was definitely old. It was great…..if you love old broken down houses. I still didn’t know why we were here. I walked up to the door.
“Jason…..If you want the way in….that’s not it,” he said.
“Then how do you get in?” I asked.
“Watch this.”
Joey went into the pocket of his Jacket, pulled out a dusk ball, and thrust it into the air.
“Go Blastoise! Jason, bring out your water pokemon….you do have a Red Gyarados right?”
“Yep! Go Gyarados!”
The two water pokemon were standing on land, as if they were waiting for something.
“Now watch this Jason…..get on Gyarados,” he said.
I got onto where I ride Gyarados…..
“Now take this,” he said as he gave me a silver envelope. “It’s a water suit, put it on.”
I couldn’t imagine how he meant that it was a water suit. I opened the envelope and it held a green ball….not a pokeball….but a green metal ball with a blue button. I pressed the button; a red water suit arose from the ball. It was a little small but after I put it on, it adjusted into the perfect fit. I must say I’ve never seen technology like this. James had a red ball which went into a green water suit.
Joey got onto his suit, and then he told me the instructions.
“Now….be ready to submerge when those doors open.”
I stood on Gyarados waiting…..then he commanded his Blastoise to use Hydro Cannon on the door. The door rushed open, and what I found was very…..well aquatic.
The house was filled with water. I couldn’t believe it. The biggest thing was….the water never left the house…..it was like bound by some kind of force.
“Jason….do you think you know why the water’s not moving?”
“I have no idea…..what?” I asked him.
“Well, as you’ve probably figured out, Black Rayquaza made this specifically. He channeled Alakazam’s Psychic energy to bind the water to the building. That way, people can’t just wait for the water to drain, and then go on. You have to go through the water. That’s where the water pokemon come in. Now, I have an idea where the passageway is. Put this helmet on.”
He gave me a helmet to put on….it had an airy sense to it, and had a microphone in it. I put it on, and he put an identical one on his own head.
“Now, can you hear me?” He spoke through the microphone and went into my helmet. They were like 2-way radios!
“Yeah,” I responded back to him.
“Now Jason, this helmet has an air producing system. It can take the water, and channel the air to from the water into the helmet so we can breathe. And then we can talk too….that way if we get separated….I can help you. Now were going to have to make our way through the house. We need to collect pieces of a golden pokeball amulet. There are 5 lost in the house. But there’s a catch…….the thing is, that water is colder than the snow out here. I told you you wouldn’t be happy with what was inside. It won’t be so bad with the suits on so don’t worry!”
Frankly, I was scared when I went into the water. It was weird….it just kind of sucked us in. I lost all feeling of being scared, when I came to the sick realization of how cold the water is. It was horrible. I felt like I was freezing right then and there. Joey, who must have been a natural swimmer because of the way he just flew through the water, had been looking crazily for a piece of the amulet with Blastoise following close behind.
“Jason….look upstairs……I’ll take the kitchen”
I swam to what looked to be the upstairs……I looked through the bedrooms and what looked to be a bathroom……I saw a toilet. I swam toward it, and opened the closed lid. I found a piece of the amulet!
“Joey, I found a piece!”
“Good, now we have three…..two more to go! Look up in the attic, I believe there might be one there….and I’ll go to the basement to see if I can try to find the final one.”
I was riding through the icy water with Gyarados, who was moving quite fast. The Attic was long and narrow……I had to leave Gyarados and swim through…..I cleared it a couple of times, and found a glimmer of gold in the left corner of the attic. I swam to it and grabbed it. One more!
“Joey, I’ve found the one in the attic….did you find the one in the basement?”
“Not yet, Jason,” He replied. “I’ve searched everywhere…..”
“Well keep looking….we’ll find it,” I said.
It was really the only thing we could do……I got back onto Gyarados, and I started coming down to the 1st level, when I see the piece on the roof of the house.
“Gyarados, up there,” I shouted.
Gyarados swam up to the roof and I jumped off and grabbed the piece.
“Joey, I have the rest, now what?”
“Meet me in the basement.”
I mounted myself back onto Gyarados and he took off toward the basement. I saw Joey waiting for me treading in a golden door with 5 slots, two of them being filled with golden pieces. I cam over to him and gave him the other three golden pieces. He pushed them into the slots.
“Return your Gyarados….the water will be gone in a second,” he said.
“Okay, Gyarados, thank you, return!”
Joey opened the door and waited as if he was waiting for something to happen. The Psychic energy holding the water in the house collapsed, and the water drained out the door into this large cave with very high ceilings. After the water was gone, the Pokeball pieces from the door came together, made the ball, and fell into the water. Then out of the pokeball came a bridge stretching over the water from the doorway from where we were in the house, to an elevator at the other side of the cave. That was where we needed to go. What I didn’t know what there was a slight problem. The key was in the ground that the water drained to.
We crossed the bridge to the other side, and one of us had to go down to get the key.
“I’ll go,” I volunteered. “I can use Salamence to fly down there then take out Gyarados and land on him. Then I’ll return Salamence, and go down into the water again.”
“There’s a slight problem,” Joey commented. “You remember how the water was bound in place by Psychic power…..well as you might have noticed, it’s free now…and these waters are very special. They were taken from a sea storm by Black Rayquaza himself. He could manipulate the rage of the water and multiplied it to make sure only the toughest could pass.”
“I can do it….Gyarados and I will get this key. Go Salamence!”
Salamence came out onto the bridge and I climbed on. I motioned to Joey to ride up too, and he followed. We flew to the other side, which was very long. I’d say a football field wide. Joey got off of Salamence, and gave me the “thumbs up” to go ahead.
“Go Gyarados!” I yelled as I threw the ball into the air. Gyarados landed in the water and I flew on Salamence and caught the luxury ball that was housing my water pokemon.
“Now Salamence, return,” I said as he was returning right under me….I fell into the water, where Gyarados came and got me. It was time.
The water wasn’t as cold here, so it was a little better in that respect. However, the waves were dark and raging….Gyarados couldn’t move. The waves had stopped him in his tracks.
“Gyarados, return!”
I knew I had to do this alone. I dove into the deep waters, and was just trying to swim against the water…..harder than it sounds. I got to the bottom, but didn’t see the key. Then I turned and saw it floating around the bottom about 50 yards away. I started to swim and the water took me….I was flown against the hard rock wall….after that I don’t remember much…….All I know is I saw a Blastoise grab me seconds before I passed out, and a man whose face I could recognize on any day grab the key I was so desperately longing.
I awoke a couple of hours later, to Joey standing over me compressing my chest….water was coming up. Supposedly I had drowned when the water forced me against the wall.
“It’s okay…..you’ll be fine Jason,” Joey said as he finished helping me cough up the excess water.
“Thanks…..can we open the door now?”
“Okay….lets open it….”
I took the key and sat up…..I walked over to where the elevator was and put the key into the hole. I heard the elevator “Ding” and we entered the elevator. This elevator was specifically different. It did not have any buttons, emergency levers, nothing. It just closed the door, and started moving downward. The door opened to find a room with a desk right in the middle and nothing else. There was a hallway that leaded to another series of rooms. This was it…..the underground city.
And this is where I must stop….as were too tired to even walk. I only have enough strength to write this down….but now we must rest, for we know there is much to come.
Sincerely,
Jason Viel.
Well I hope you enjoyed that.....Please Comment on this so far.....the comments will be greatly apprieated.
Thank You,
-Black Rayquaza
Well heres what everyones been waiting for. Hope you like it! Dont mind me trying to add comedy at the beginning....I figured that was the place for it seeing that this is a serious chapter.
Chapter Six
September 2nd 2114
Snow…….its white and cold and fluffy. I heard of people who’ve never seen snow in their life……well I’ve seen more of it in the past two days then most people have, ever. Let me rewind….I know everyone’s just DIEING to hear what happened.
So like OMG, I was like at this like tent thing, and I was SO like FREAKING OUT because it was like SOOOOOO cold! Sorry, bout that, seeing if I could pull it off…..seems I can.
Let me start this off right….we left in while I was writing in the tent. At that point, it wasn’t THAT cold…overnight however…..that was a completely different story. I couldn’t sleep…..at all. I’ve been all over…but nowhere like this….its like a tundra…..x10. I couldn’t sleep….and neither could Joey. I went over to his tent…..to see if he was awake. They’re was a light on, and I could see him writing also. It was a letter….to Black Rayquaza…..I knocked…well you know…tapped….on the tent.
“Jason?” He asked while continuing to write.
“Yeeesss….,” I stammered. “Is it possible to venture into the house now?”
“Are you that cold?” he asked.
“Yes….I cannot sleep…..please?”
“Fine….we can venture tonight….but I’m afraid you might not like what you’re about to do…..you sure your ready?”
“I can do it….anything’s better than this.”
We started walking…..it wasn’t a horribly long walk….just a couple of miles. We came upon the great house….it was definitely old. It was great…..if you love old broken down houses. I still didn’t know why we were here. I walked up to the door.
“Jason…..If you want the way in….that’s not it,” he said.
“Then how do you get in?” I asked.
“Watch this.”
Joey went into the pocket of his Jacket, pulled out a dusk ball, and thrust it into the air.
“Go Blastoise! Jason, bring out your water pokemon….you do have a Red Gyarados right?”
“Yep! Go Gyarados!”
The two water pokemon were standing on land, as if they were waiting for something.
“Now watch this Jason…..get on Gyarados,” he said.
I got onto where I ride Gyarados…..
“Now take this,” he said as he gave me a silver envelope. “It’s a water suit, put it on.”
I couldn’t imagine how he meant that it was a water suit. I opened the envelope and it held a green ball….not a pokeball….but a green metal ball with a blue button. I pressed the button; a red water suit arose from the ball. It was a little small but after I put it on, it adjusted into the perfect fit. I must say I’ve never seen technology like this. James had a red ball which went into a green water suit.
Joey got onto his suit, and then he told me the instructions.
“Now….be ready to submerge when those doors open.”
I stood on Gyarados waiting…..then he commanded his Blastoise to use Hydro Cannon on the door. The door rushed open, and what I found was very…..well aquatic.
The house was filled with water. I couldn’t believe it. The biggest thing was….the water never left the house…..it was like bound by some kind of force.
“Jason….do you think you know why the water’s not moving?”
“I have no idea…..what?” I asked him.
“Well, as you’ve probably figured out, Black Rayquaza made this specifically. He channeled Alakazam’s Psychic energy to bind the water to the building. That way, people can’t just wait for the water to drain, and then go on. You have to go through the water. That’s where the water pokemon come in. Now, I have an idea where the passageway is. Put this helmet on.”
He gave me a helmet to put on….it had an airy sense to it, and had a microphone in it. I put it on, and he put an identical one on his own head.
“Now, can you hear me?” He spoke through the microphone and went into my helmet. They were like 2-way radios!
“Yeah,” I responded back to him.
“Now Jason, this helmet has an air producing system. It can take the water, and channel the air to from the water into the helmet so we can breathe. And then we can talk too….that way if we get separated….I can help you. Now were going to have to make our way through the house. We need to collect pieces of a golden pokeball amulet. There are 5 lost in the house. But there’s a catch…….the thing is, that water is colder than the snow out here. I told you you wouldn’t be happy with what was inside. It won’t be so bad with the suits on so don’t worry!”
Frankly, I was scared when I went into the water. It was weird….it just kind of sucked us in. I lost all feeling of being scared, when I came to the sick realization of how cold the water is. It was horrible. I felt like I was freezing right then and there. Joey, who must have been a natural swimmer because of the way he just flew through the water, had been looking crazily for a piece of the amulet with Blastoise following close behind.
“Jason….look upstairs……I’ll take the kitchen”
I swam to what looked to be the upstairs……I looked through the bedrooms and what looked to be a bathroom……I saw a toilet. I swam toward it, and opened the closed lid. I found a piece of the amulet!
“Joey, I found a piece!”
“Good, now we have three…..two more to go! Look up in the attic, I believe there might be one there….and I’ll go to the basement to see if I can try to find the final one.”
I was riding through the icy water with Gyarados, who was moving quite fast. The Attic was long and narrow……I had to leave Gyarados and swim through…..I cleared it a couple of times, and found a glimmer of gold in the left corner of the attic. I swam to it and grabbed it. One more!
“Joey, I’ve found the one in the attic….did you find the one in the basement?”
“Not yet, Jason,” He replied. “I’ve searched everywhere…..”
“Well keep looking….we’ll find it,” I said.
It was really the only thing we could do……I got back onto Gyarados, and I started coming down to the 1st level, when I see the piece on the roof of the house.
“Gyarados, up there,” I shouted.
Gyarados swam up to the roof and I jumped off and grabbed the piece.
“Joey, I have the rest, now what?”
“Meet me in the basement.”
I mounted myself back onto Gyarados and he took off toward the basement. I saw Joey waiting for me treading in a golden door with 5 slots, two of them being filled with golden pieces. I cam over to him and gave him the other three golden pieces. He pushed them into the slots.
“Return your Gyarados….the water will be gone in a second,” he said.
“Okay, Gyarados, thank you, return!”
Joey opened the door and waited as if he was waiting for something to happen. The Psychic energy holding the water in the house collapsed, and the water drained out the door into this large cave with very high ceilings. After the water was gone, the Pokeball pieces from the door came together, made the ball, and fell into the water. Then out of the pokeball came a bridge stretching over the water from the doorway from where we were in the house, to an elevator at the other side of the cave. That was where we needed to go. What I didn’t know what there was a slight problem. The key was in the ground that the water drained to.
We crossed the bridge to the other side, and one of us had to go down to get the key.
“I’ll go,” I volunteered. “I can use Salamence to fly down there then take out Gyarados and land on him. Then I’ll return Salamence, and go down into the water again.”
“There’s a slight problem,” Joey commented. “You remember how the water was bound in place by Psychic power…..well as you might have noticed, it’s free now…and these waters are very special. They were taken from a sea storm by Black Rayquaza himself. He could manipulate the rage of the water and multiplied it to make sure only the toughest could pass.”
“I can do it….Gyarados and I will get this key. Go Salamence!”
Salamence came out onto the bridge and I climbed on. I motioned to Joey to ride up too, and he followed. We flew to the other side, which was very long. I’d say a football field wide. Joey got off of Salamence, and gave me the “thumbs up” to go ahead.
“Go Gyarados!” I yelled as I threw the ball into the air. Gyarados landed in the water and I flew on Salamence and caught the luxury ball that was housing my water pokemon.
“Now Salamence, return,” I said as he was returning right under me….I fell into the water, where Gyarados came and got me. It was time.
The water wasn’t as cold here, so it was a little better in that respect. However, the waves were dark and raging….Gyarados couldn’t move. The waves had stopped him in his tracks.
“Gyarados, return!”
I knew I had to do this alone. I dove into the deep waters, and was just trying to swim against the water…..harder than it sounds. I got to the bottom, but didn’t see the key. Then I turned and saw it floating around the bottom about 50 yards away. I started to swim and the water took me….I was flown against the hard rock wall….after that I don’t remember much…….All I know is I saw a Blastoise grab me seconds before I passed out, and a man whose face I could recognize on any day grab the key I was so desperately longing.
I awoke a couple of hours later, to Joey standing over me compressing my chest….water was coming up. Supposedly I had drowned when the water forced me against the wall.
“It’s okay…..you’ll be fine Jason,” Joey said as he finished helping me cough up the excess water.
“Thanks…..can we open the door now?”
“Okay….lets open it….”
I took the key and sat up…..I walked over to where the elevator was and put the key into the hole. I heard the elevator “Ding” and we entered the elevator. This elevator was specifically different. It did not have any buttons, emergency levers, nothing. It just closed the door, and started moving downward. The door opened to find a room with a desk right in the middle and nothing else. There was a hallway that leaded to another series of rooms. This was it…..the underground city.
And this is where I must stop….as were too tired to even walk. I only have enough strength to write this down….but now we must rest, for we know there is much to come.
Sincerely,
Jason Viel.
Well I hope you enjoyed that.....Please Comment on this so far.....the comments will be greatly apprieated.
Thank You,
-Black Rayquaza
RE: Secrets by Black Rayquaza [Fanfic Tourney Entry] CHAPTER SIX POSTED! COMMENTS please!
He almost drowned... ouch! But, it's as I said - your last chapter holds that bit more significance in the light of THIS one! All I can say is way to go for defying the laws of physics in more ways that 1 (like, HOW was the water colder than the snow? That's technically impossible without a huge variation in pressure... which isn't going to happen going from air outside to inside a house lol. Maybe at the bottom of the ocean, but not there
).
You're doing good man - keep at it!
He almost drowned... ouch! But, it's as I said - your last chapter holds that bit more significance in the light of THIS one! All I can say is way to go for defying the laws of physics in more ways that 1 (like, HOW was the water colder than the snow? That's technically impossible without a huge variation in pressure... which isn't going to happen going from air outside to inside a house lol. Maybe at the bottom of the ocean, but not there
).You're doing good man - keep at it!
RE: Secrets by Black Rayquaza [Fanfic Tourney Entry] CHAPTER SIX POSTED! COMMENTS please!
Well I had to make something that could possibly be realistic if pokemon were real. I definately think Psychic energy could keep and cool water in the house.....I was going for a tank of doom sort of feel.....didnt come across as well as I wanted but I was happy with it. I have two ideas of how the next chapter could go.....but Im not sure if I wanna go how everyone thinks, or ?. I'm still thinking about it....anyways thanks for the comment.
gamercal said:All I can say is way to go for defying the laws of physics in more ways that 1 (like, HOW was the water colder than the snow? That's technically impossible without a huge variation in pressure... which isn't going to happen going from air outside to inside a house lol. Maybe at the bottom of the ocean, but not there
Well I had to make something that could possibly be realistic if pokemon were real. I definately think Psychic energy could keep and cool water in the house.....I was going for a tank of doom sort of feel.....didnt come across as well as I wanted but I was happy with it. I have two ideas of how the next chapter could go.....but Im not sure if I wanna go how everyone thinks, or ?. I'm still thinking about it....anyways thanks for the comment.
RE: Secrets by Black Rayquaza [Fanfic Tourney Entry] CHAPTER SIX POSTED! COMMENTS please!
You'd be right about water in the house, but my meaning was that it's actually not possible to get water colder than ice (or snow in this case) unless you have an enormous pressure, the likes of which would be impossible to survive in (unless you're Aggron or something... but then you'd freeze to death).
I'm not against the story at all, I'm just backing up what I said - water CANNOT be a liquid if it's to be colder than snow, under anything CLOSE to the conditions you would have encountered there.
However, this is a story, so... realism is out of the window
How's the next chapter looking? Hopefully you'll have it up soon - good luck with writing it
Black Rayquaza said:
You'd be right about water in the house, but my meaning was that it's actually not possible to get water colder than ice (or snow in this case) unless you have an enormous pressure, the likes of which would be impossible to survive in (unless you're Aggron or something... but then you'd freeze to death
).I'm not against the story at all, I'm just backing up what I said - water CANNOT be a liquid if it's to be colder than snow, under anything CLOSE to the conditions you would have encountered there.
However, this is a story, so... realism is out of the window
How's the next chapter looking? Hopefully you'll have it up soon - good luck with writing it
RE: Secrets by Black Rayquaza [Fanfic Tourney Entry] CHAPTER SIX POSTED! COMMENTS please!
I like it alot also, interestin format!
Alot more people reading your fic than mine lol, I wonder if that is saying something...
Ever heard of road salt, it lowers the freezing temp f water so it couldve been really salty water!
Nice ideas!
I like it alot also, interestin format!
Alot more people reading your fic than mine lol, I wonder if that is saying something...
gamercal said:Black Rayquaza said:
You'd be right about water in the house, but my meaning was that it's actually not possible to get water colder than ice (or snow in this case) unless you have an enormous pressure, the likes of which would be impossible to survive in (unless you're Aggron or something... but then you'd freeze to death
I'm not against the story at all, I'm just backing up what I said - water CANNOT be a liquid if it's to be colder than snow, under anything CLOSE to the conditions you would have encountered there.
However, this is a story, so... realism is out of the window
How's the next chapter looking? Hopefully you'll have it up soon - good luck with writing it
Ever heard of road salt, it lowers the freezing temp f water so it couldve been really salty water!
Nice ideas!
RE: Secrets by Black Rayquaza [Fanfic Tourney Entry] CHAPTER SIX POSTED! COMMENTS PLZ!
Sorry for reviving this....I was too busy to continue writing, but now I am free and have finished the next chapter. So lets hope this wont be locked as I revived my own thread....
Anyways, here it is. Enjoy and most importantly of all COMMENT.
Chapter Seven
September 3rd 2114
I’m not sure what to say at this point…..were just kind of moving through this inch by inch. Right now were living in the underground city….and what a GREAT city this is. I figured out why I didn’t see anything/anyone…..because it was 4 AM and if anyone was there they would be sleeping.
I awoke to find someone staring over me…..but it wasn’t James.
“Hello?” I asked.
“Who are you????” the man asked.
“I was about to ask the same question…..I am Jason Viel….I’ve come with my friend Joey to find Black Rayquaza’s box.”
“Oh, so your one of the alliance then….welcome. I hope you enjoy your stay here….”
“So who are you?”
“Well it’s a long story…..I’m actually one of Black Rayquaza’s best friends…..well was. My name is George Rock IV. I’ve been down here for quite awhile…..but its okay because I can live for quite awhile thanks to B-Ray. You see, you’re very close to the box…..when he left he told me someone would come here with Joey and need the box. He told me to tell you some things about himself and the box. So here we go. Black Rayquaza was truly gifted as far as thinking….he said that if things got bad with Ruby, he would leave the Alliance for awhile, so that Ruby didn’t start a war to kill him. If Ruby killed Black Rayquaza, they’d own the Earth. That’s why he hid….he wasn’t scared…..but he knew he had to in order to keep hope and power in the Alliance. He asked me, the 2nd in command of the Alliance at the time, to help him construct a plan that the Alliance could only complete. They could only complete it because they wouldn’t be able to find the key….it was hidden in the National Headquarters. I’d like to see someone sneak into Black Rayquaza’s office, mess around with his computer, and take the key. Nearly impossible. I’ve been waiting for you to show up. Theres some information I’ve been asked to give you about the box. First of all, its not here……that would be too easy for Ruby so we didn’t choose to hide it here. Second of all, I have food and supplies for you here…..you can stay as long as you need to. That’s why I’m here…..B-Ray told me if anyone needed a rest and they were a true Alliance member, that this location could be used for a makeshift base. Third I have to give you these”…..he handed him 2 little boxes. “That is for you and Joey. They are life capsules. “
“Wha?” I asked.
“Let me explain. You see, 16 years ago, when Black Rayquaza first realized he had to go into hiding, he needed to rest assured he wouldn’t die hiding. Obviously, we all can realize why that’s not a good thing. So, he created a small organization of scientists and friends….only people he could trust. He put them to work on one of the biggest projects in Alliance history….a pill that would make you never die……but that’s impossible. This is a close second……you can only die one way…..but we wont get into that as its VERY VERY uncommon. Just take the pill, and all sickness, physical wounds, diseases, etc will disappear forever. There were only 7 made…..one for B-Ray, one for me, one for you and Joey, and one given to B-Rays cousin, Katie. The rest are hidden with the box…..we did this to ensure the human race’s survival. If Team Ruby wins the war…..they might try to blow up the Earth trying to find B-Ray. We took the pill….to always have a shot….to have a chance to fight back…..so that the Alliance will never die.”
“So can I take it now?” I asked.
“No….we need to prepare the formula first. You need to drink a special formula of herbs and plants to react with the pill to make it work. Lets go over to the kitchen and cook some up.”
We got up out of the room with the desk and ventured down that hallway I mentioned earlier. We went down past 12 doors, and George finally went into a room that resembled a modern kitchen. It had a sink, a big row of counters, a stove, a toaster, a microwave, with a little black coffee maker next to it. Lying in the far left corner, was the refrigerator. It was chrome with an ice maker inside the freezer door. Pretty Cool huh? George went over to the fridge and took out 4 oddly shaped plants. One was shaped like a star….one like the sun, the other like a circle, and one more shaped like a crescent moon.
“These plants were made to represent balance…..one is for the sun, one for the stars, one is for the Earth, and one for the moon,” George said.
“So what do you do with these?” I asked.
“Team Ruby would blend them….but that’s a trap. We actually have to use a move on it using a Pokemon.” George grabbed a pokeball from his tool belt and threw it into the kitchen.
“Go Gardevoir!” he shouted.
“Use Magical Leaf, then Psychic!”
Gardevoir sprang leaves of all colors, made them spin in a circle, and then added the plants. The Pokemon created a mixing bowl! Then the leaves that made the pot turned purple, and the plants were shredded. Then, they rose out of the pot, and were concentrated into the glass to form an orange liquid.
“Wow, that’s amazing” I applauded.
“Why thank you…..it was actually all B-Rays doing….he figured nobody in Team Ruby would have a Gardevoir with both of those moves…..and not many I know can do it like that. Anyways, drink up…..but not all of it, only Half. We have to save some for Joey”
I drank the orange liquid….it tasted like every fruit taste I could think of, combined….it wasn’t bad….but it definitely was pure. That’s the one thing I remember tasting the most. The mixture was so pure, full of life, it really just brightened the surroundings. So now I guess I’m never going to die…..
“Good….now that that’s all over I can give you some more instructions.” He told me.
“Black Rayquaza knew that you needed help…..so he provided it. Here is a something he told me to give to you…..even I haven’t seen it yet. He told me to save it for Jason…and then when the time arose, he would need it. Come with me……”
We walked back towards the way we originally were, and took a sharp left. We walked down another hall for a very short time and came across an old iron door. The ironic thing was it had no handles….it was a solid door. George took out a pocket knife from his pocket and carved the letters P M C onto it. The letters started glowing and below it a line was made from the glow. George wrote “Beyond all expectations” on the line…..the letters glowed green this time, and yet another line appeared. He drew his pocket knife and carved into the iron door How it used to be. The whole door flashed purple, then gold, then black. Then the door plunged into the ground and opened the room. This was a sight I will never forget…….and at that moment…….it seemed as if everything had been explained to me.
*End of Chapter Seven*
So there it is....once again COMMENT and thanks for reading
-Black Rayquaza
Sorry for reviving this....I was too busy to continue writing, but now I am free and have finished the next chapter. So lets hope this wont be locked as I revived my own thread....
Anyways, here it is. Enjoy and most importantly of all COMMENT.
Chapter Seven
September 3rd 2114
I’m not sure what to say at this point…..were just kind of moving through this inch by inch. Right now were living in the underground city….and what a GREAT city this is. I figured out why I didn’t see anything/anyone…..because it was 4 AM and if anyone was there they would be sleeping.
I awoke to find someone staring over me…..but it wasn’t James.
“Hello?” I asked.
“Who are you????” the man asked.
“I was about to ask the same question…..I am Jason Viel….I’ve come with my friend Joey to find Black Rayquaza’s box.”
“Oh, so your one of the alliance then….welcome. I hope you enjoy your stay here….”
“So who are you?”
“Well it’s a long story…..I’m actually one of Black Rayquaza’s best friends…..well was. My name is George Rock IV. I’ve been down here for quite awhile…..but its okay because I can live for quite awhile thanks to B-Ray. You see, you’re very close to the box…..when he left he told me someone would come here with Joey and need the box. He told me to tell you some things about himself and the box. So here we go. Black Rayquaza was truly gifted as far as thinking….he said that if things got bad with Ruby, he would leave the Alliance for awhile, so that Ruby didn’t start a war to kill him. If Ruby killed Black Rayquaza, they’d own the Earth. That’s why he hid….he wasn’t scared…..but he knew he had to in order to keep hope and power in the Alliance. He asked me, the 2nd in command of the Alliance at the time, to help him construct a plan that the Alliance could only complete. They could only complete it because they wouldn’t be able to find the key….it was hidden in the National Headquarters. I’d like to see someone sneak into Black Rayquaza’s office, mess around with his computer, and take the key. Nearly impossible. I’ve been waiting for you to show up. Theres some information I’ve been asked to give you about the box. First of all, its not here……that would be too easy for Ruby so we didn’t choose to hide it here. Second of all, I have food and supplies for you here…..you can stay as long as you need to. That’s why I’m here…..B-Ray told me if anyone needed a rest and they were a true Alliance member, that this location could be used for a makeshift base. Third I have to give you these”…..he handed him 2 little boxes. “That is for you and Joey. They are life capsules. “
“Wha?” I asked.
“Let me explain. You see, 16 years ago, when Black Rayquaza first realized he had to go into hiding, he needed to rest assured he wouldn’t die hiding. Obviously, we all can realize why that’s not a good thing. So, he created a small organization of scientists and friends….only people he could trust. He put them to work on one of the biggest projects in Alliance history….a pill that would make you never die……but that’s impossible. This is a close second……you can only die one way…..but we wont get into that as its VERY VERY uncommon. Just take the pill, and all sickness, physical wounds, diseases, etc will disappear forever. There were only 7 made…..one for B-Ray, one for me, one for you and Joey, and one given to B-Rays cousin, Katie. The rest are hidden with the box…..we did this to ensure the human race’s survival. If Team Ruby wins the war…..they might try to blow up the Earth trying to find B-Ray. We took the pill….to always have a shot….to have a chance to fight back…..so that the Alliance will never die.”
“So can I take it now?” I asked.
“No….we need to prepare the formula first. You need to drink a special formula of herbs and plants to react with the pill to make it work. Lets go over to the kitchen and cook some up.”
We got up out of the room with the desk and ventured down that hallway I mentioned earlier. We went down past 12 doors, and George finally went into a room that resembled a modern kitchen. It had a sink, a big row of counters, a stove, a toaster, a microwave, with a little black coffee maker next to it. Lying in the far left corner, was the refrigerator. It was chrome with an ice maker inside the freezer door. Pretty Cool huh? George went over to the fridge and took out 4 oddly shaped plants. One was shaped like a star….one like the sun, the other like a circle, and one more shaped like a crescent moon.
“These plants were made to represent balance…..one is for the sun, one for the stars, one is for the Earth, and one for the moon,” George said.
“So what do you do with these?” I asked.
“Team Ruby would blend them….but that’s a trap. We actually have to use a move on it using a Pokemon.” George grabbed a pokeball from his tool belt and threw it into the kitchen.
“Go Gardevoir!” he shouted.
“Use Magical Leaf, then Psychic!”
Gardevoir sprang leaves of all colors, made them spin in a circle, and then added the plants. The Pokemon created a mixing bowl! Then the leaves that made the pot turned purple, and the plants were shredded. Then, they rose out of the pot, and were concentrated into the glass to form an orange liquid.
“Wow, that’s amazing” I applauded.
“Why thank you…..it was actually all B-Rays doing….he figured nobody in Team Ruby would have a Gardevoir with both of those moves…..and not many I know can do it like that. Anyways, drink up…..but not all of it, only Half. We have to save some for Joey”
I drank the orange liquid….it tasted like every fruit taste I could think of, combined….it wasn’t bad….but it definitely was pure. That’s the one thing I remember tasting the most. The mixture was so pure, full of life, it really just brightened the surroundings. So now I guess I’m never going to die…..
“Good….now that that’s all over I can give you some more instructions.” He told me.
“Black Rayquaza knew that you needed help…..so he provided it. Here is a something he told me to give to you…..even I haven’t seen it yet. He told me to save it for Jason…and then when the time arose, he would need it. Come with me……”
We walked back towards the way we originally were, and took a sharp left. We walked down another hall for a very short time and came across an old iron door. The ironic thing was it had no handles….it was a solid door. George took out a pocket knife from his pocket and carved the letters P M C onto it. The letters started glowing and below it a line was made from the glow. George wrote “Beyond all expectations” on the line…..the letters glowed green this time, and yet another line appeared. He drew his pocket knife and carved into the iron door How it used to be. The whole door flashed purple, then gold, then black. Then the door plunged into the ground and opened the room. This was a sight I will never forget…….and at that moment…….it seemed as if everything had been explained to me.
*End of Chapter Seven*
So there it is....once again COMMENT and thanks for reading
-Black Rayquaza
RE: Secrets by Black Rayquaza [Fanfic Tourney Entry] CHAPTER SEVEN POSTED! REVIVED!
Yay it is back after all! I was looking forward to this chapter and I like it. I'm going to Birger King today and ask for a "Herbal Shake and life pill please." I wonder how they will respond...
Good chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
Yay it is back after all! I was looking forward to this chapter and I like it. I'm going to Birger King today and ask for a "Herbal Shake and life pill please." I wonder how they will respond...
Good chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
RE: Secrets by Black Rayquaza [Fanfic Tourney Entry] CHAPTER SEVEN POSTED! REVIVED!
I finally read them all, and I agree, it's a wonderful story, backed up with great, likeable characters. The person in the last one was Max Shade IV, BTW. Can't wait for the next chapter.
dmaster out.
I finally read them all, and I agree, it's a wonderful story, backed up with great, likeable characters. The person in the last one was Max Shade IV, BTW. Can't wait for the next chapter.
dmaster out.
RE: Secrets by Black Rayquaza [Fanfic Tourney Entry] CHAPTER SEVEN POSTED! REVIVED!
Heres Chapter Eight....be sure to read this one....this is where it starts to take shape.
Chapter Eight
September 4th 2114
Black Rayquaza was a very smart man….but I knew nothing until I’ve seen this….it was unbelievable. It seemed he always knew what to do at the right time….what was in the room was simply amazing…..
The room was not at all like I expected. It wasn’t extravagant, but it was everything you could hope for. The walls were painted purple….with gold trim. Besides the color, the room was actually quite bare. The only things in it were a desk, a package sitting upon it, and a metal door off to the left.
We stood in awe at the room…..to imagine that we’d even gotten in was enough, but we couldn’t believe that this was what we were looking for. On the wall was a rather long letter….written in what seemed to be marker.
It read: Hello. I’m sorry to say that I am not here to greet you….weather you are good or evil. I’ve left……to go to where it is safe. When I was thinking of where I could go…..I found the right place where nobody would ever look to find me…..and if they did, they’d die as soon as they set foot there. Please open the package on the desk….its crucial to my survival.
-Black Rayquaza
We both started reading, and even though I finished reading before George, I still stood staring at the words……where did he go?
“Lets open the package,” Max said.
We walked over to the small package….it was incased in gold foil…..we opened it to find a box. This was black and hard unlike the foil. We took off the top to find a scrap of paper, a letter……and a pokeball.
“Letter first.” The scrap read.
We opened the letter…..it was written on what seemed to be silver paper…..with small little gold lines….we opened the letter and we were amazed.
September 21st 2100
Reader,
The world is not what it was. It’s funny how you think you’ve figured out how to make something foolproof, and then of course it becomes horrible. It happens…..it’s just a realization that people have to accept and get over. Some people have a hard time doing that. It is been awhile since I’ve seen anybody. I don’t mind it, or regret it, but it’s the truth. Things haven’t been the greatest in the past 10 years…..its been horrid. I didn’t cause it, nor influence it, but nonetheless it happened. Crazy how something like that can happen. Anyways, let me introduce myself…..not that it matters as nobody will probably find this, but I’m Andrew. If any human life form is reading this right now, congratulations. This means there must be survivors…..which are good. As of now, which is while I am writing this, I’m going to be saving my life. I’ve come to the conclusion that the world, Earth if I wasn’t specific enough, is not safe any longer, and it is crucial for my existence. This piece of writing is the last thing I will leave behind as a sign of my living being. Until I return, stay safe. And take this you’ll need it. I’m sure your not wondering what it is, it shouldn’t be hard to figure out. It is a pokeball…..since they are indestructible it should be around until someone finds this. Either you….or if there is no you, me. In the pokeball, you will find a rather rare pokemon; some may know it as Celebi. Ask it to take you 15 years into the past from the date I have written this. Meet me at the Empire State Building in New York City, USA, top floor. I was there that day…..I do not remember why. Maybe I was waiting for someone……anyways; I must end this letter now. Time is of the essence.
Sincerely,
-Black Rayquaza
PS: Bring this letter. And Celebi.
We both just looked at each other……he had left Earth?? This doesn’t make sense……Team Ruby tried to make a moon base….but soon abandoned the idea as it was impossible to live on the moon. I grabbed the pokeball….and Max just stared at it. It was a solid green colored ball, with a S engraved on the top.
“Go Celebi!” I yelled as I threw the green ball into the air.
The green Pokemon arose from the green light that came before it…..it was simply beautiful. It was bouncing through the air….just waiting for my next command.
“Celebi….we need to go into the past…..September 21st 2100. New York City.”
Celebi’s body flashed a bright yellow…..the whole room turned blue, then red….then we arose into a daze as we went through the years.
After a short period of time….our journey had ended. I was sitting in a bed, in what looked to be a hotel room. There was a bed beside mine, and George was sleeping in it as well. There was a window off to my right….I got up and looked through it. It was a raging city of colors and Pokemon flying recklessely upon it. The shops were filled with merchants and customers……the town was still very much alive from the last time I’ve seen it…..and I hope Black Rayquaza is the same.
*End of Chapter 8*
Heres Chapter Eight....be sure to read this one....this is where it starts to take shape.
Chapter Eight
September 4th 2114
Black Rayquaza was a very smart man….but I knew nothing until I’ve seen this….it was unbelievable. It seemed he always knew what to do at the right time….what was in the room was simply amazing…..
The room was not at all like I expected. It wasn’t extravagant, but it was everything you could hope for. The walls were painted purple….with gold trim. Besides the color, the room was actually quite bare. The only things in it were a desk, a package sitting upon it, and a metal door off to the left.
We stood in awe at the room…..to imagine that we’d even gotten in was enough, but we couldn’t believe that this was what we were looking for. On the wall was a rather long letter….written in what seemed to be marker.
It read: Hello. I’m sorry to say that I am not here to greet you….weather you are good or evil. I’ve left……to go to where it is safe. When I was thinking of where I could go…..I found the right place where nobody would ever look to find me…..and if they did, they’d die as soon as they set foot there. Please open the package on the desk….its crucial to my survival.
-Black Rayquaza
We both started reading, and even though I finished reading before George, I still stood staring at the words……where did he go?
“Lets open the package,” Max said.
We walked over to the small package….it was incased in gold foil…..we opened it to find a box. This was black and hard unlike the foil. We took off the top to find a scrap of paper, a letter……and a pokeball.
“Letter first.” The scrap read.
We opened the letter…..it was written on what seemed to be silver paper…..with small little gold lines….we opened the letter and we were amazed.
September 21st 2100
Reader,
The world is not what it was. It’s funny how you think you’ve figured out how to make something foolproof, and then of course it becomes horrible. It happens…..it’s just a realization that people have to accept and get over. Some people have a hard time doing that. It is been awhile since I’ve seen anybody. I don’t mind it, or regret it, but it’s the truth. Things haven’t been the greatest in the past 10 years…..its been horrid. I didn’t cause it, nor influence it, but nonetheless it happened. Crazy how something like that can happen. Anyways, let me introduce myself…..not that it matters as nobody will probably find this, but I’m Andrew. If any human life form is reading this right now, congratulations. This means there must be survivors…..which are good. As of now, which is while I am writing this, I’m going to be saving my life. I’ve come to the conclusion that the world, Earth if I wasn’t specific enough, is not safe any longer, and it is crucial for my existence. This piece of writing is the last thing I will leave behind as a sign of my living being. Until I return, stay safe. And take this you’ll need it. I’m sure your not wondering what it is, it shouldn’t be hard to figure out. It is a pokeball…..since they are indestructible it should be around until someone finds this. Either you….or if there is no you, me. In the pokeball, you will find a rather rare pokemon; some may know it as Celebi. Ask it to take you 15 years into the past from the date I have written this. Meet me at the Empire State Building in New York City, USA, top floor. I was there that day…..I do not remember why. Maybe I was waiting for someone……anyways; I must end this letter now. Time is of the essence.
Sincerely,
-Black Rayquaza
PS: Bring this letter. And Celebi.
We both just looked at each other……he had left Earth?? This doesn’t make sense……Team Ruby tried to make a moon base….but soon abandoned the idea as it was impossible to live on the moon. I grabbed the pokeball….and Max just stared at it. It was a solid green colored ball, with a S engraved on the top.
“Go Celebi!” I yelled as I threw the green ball into the air.
The green Pokemon arose from the green light that came before it…..it was simply beautiful. It was bouncing through the air….just waiting for my next command.
“Celebi….we need to go into the past…..September 21st 2100. New York City.”
Celebi’s body flashed a bright yellow…..the whole room turned blue, then red….then we arose into a daze as we went through the years.
After a short period of time….our journey had ended. I was sitting in a bed, in what looked to be a hotel room. There was a bed beside mine, and George was sleeping in it as well. There was a window off to my right….I got up and looked through it. It was a raging city of colors and Pokemon flying recklessely upon it. The shops were filled with merchants and customers……the town was still very much alive from the last time I’ve seen it…..and I hope Black Rayquaza is the same.
*End of Chapter 8*
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This is Chapter Nine....comment and enjoy.
Chapter Nine
September 21st 2100
Well, I’ve officially made it into the past. Since I wasn’t alive at the time, I’ve just gotten settled here, and I must say the past is a heck of a lot better than the future. Things are joyous here…..there really aren’t many problems. I went for a walk outside…..the sidewalks are clean and shiny, the stores and flourishing with shoppers, and everything just seems brighter. The walk was great….people were friendly overall. I met some kids battling in the nearby school. The kids reminded me of my youth…..school always was fun. I returned to the Hotel, took the elevator and pushed the white 5 on the panel. The elevator quickly rose up, and in a minute the doors released and I walked out. This was a very nice hotel-The walls had pretty, green wallpaper with a nice stripe pattern. The floors were in a black fabric and softened the force of your foot when walking. The Ice machine was in the room next to the elevator and as I went that way I heard some commotion in Room 503 as I passed.
“No, I will NOT move to Boston,” the women screamed.
“Honey, you know we need this job. Mr. Brinker has offered double the salary I’m making at the Alliance base…..he said we could have full benefits and everything. We can finally take that vacation to Hawaii you wanted.” the man replied.
“I won’t…..the Alliance means way to much to this family. How could you even think of betraying Andrew. He believed in you…..he made you, Tom. If you quit your job, I’m leaving you and taking John with me. Andrew can get me a job as a receptionist.”
“Fine then….I’ll e-mail you the divorce papers.”
At that point, the door opened and a tall, stocky, guy walked out of the room. His face was red with anger as he stormed off and hit the elevator button. He opened what looked to be a cell phone….although as soon as I knew what those were, they were replaced with our Alliance Messengers. For some reason, I could hear both sides of the conversation.
“Hello?” the man on the other end answered.
“Hi, it’s me. I’ve decided to take your generous offer and move to Boston. Unfortunately, my soon to be ex-wife and child wont be joining me.”
“Ah, well I’m very sorry you had to do that. Don’t worry, once our little project is done, she’ll come CRAWLING back.”
“Sounds fair…..thank you Brian.”
“Welcome to Team Ruby, Mr. Spriter”
Whoa. Wait a minute….that guy on the phone was Mr. Spriter?? It wasn’t Adam, though. It was most likely his father…or grandfather even. I was still in shock I’ve heard of someone this early. From what I heard, Team Ruby is just starting up. I continued thinking until I reached Room 223. To my surprise, the door was open.
I walked into the suite to find George making what looked to be Egg’s and Bacon on the stove. He was standing tall, with his long black hair and white hotel robe.
“Well, I see you’ve awoke George,” I said.
He jumped.
“Whoa….you scared me there. Yes, I did wake. We made it! I’m glad you’re here…..I thought you didn’t make it for a second….I left the door open just in case….I see you forgot your room key.”
I looked at the coffee table in the living room….two room keys were sitting on the table.
“Yeah, wasn’t thinking about that….anyways, now that were here….what do we do?”
“We have to get to the Empire State Building….and quick. I have a feeling Black Rayquaza won’t be there for long.”
“Oh by the way…..did I tell you that before I made it to you in Greenland, I was met on the train by Adam Spriter?”
“No you didn’t…..I guess you and James handled him all right. I imagine it would have been hard….he’s very well trained. His family comes from a long line of Team Ruby soldiers. His great grandfather helped Brian start Team Ruby.”
“I know……I’ve just seen his great grandfather. He just went down to the lobby.”
“What? You’re telling me, you just saw Tom Spriter in the hall there?”
“Yeah….he just left his wife….and then called Brian and told him all about it. Supposedly he’s moving to Boston to help Brian start Team Ruby.”
“This is bad, Jason….we need to talk to Black Rayquaza and quick. This is actually important.”
At this point, George took the bacon and eggs off the pans, put them onto a silver plate and ran into the bathroom. A second later, I heard the shower water running. I took the plate and dug in…..he was a very good cook. I remember that he was a chef before Black Rayquaza met him…..thank you very much Alliance History 1. I got an A- in that class.
Some time passed as I was eating my breakfast. I decided to turn on the TV. I changed the channel to the news channel. I didn’t believe what I was hearing.
“Authorities say Brian Winter, a rebel who escaped from the Alliance just weeks ago, is STILL at large. The man who had swore to take revenge on not only the Alliance, but the world is now #1 on the World’s most wanted list. We’ll keep you updated on this story as more news comes in. Back to you Scott.”
The woman’s picture faded into the news desk of the man, who was talking about how the Miami Dolphins were once again the best team in Football, becoming 20-0 last season, beating the previous record held by the New England Patriots since 2008. But I had no time for football….we had a crisis on our hands. Luckily, we had someone we knew who could fix it. I heard the bathroom door open, and in a cloud of smoke George appeared in a black pinstripe suit, white shirt, and red tie. He completely outdid me…who was only wearing the Red Jumpsuit I had worn 14 years past now.
“Here,” George said as he handed me a hanger with a white suit.
I went into the foggy bathroom and changed quickly. I emerged back through the door and quickly showed George the news reel I had just seen. Thanks to DVR, which has been around FOREVER, he saw what I did. He just stood there in awe as if everything were put together.
“We need to get to Black Rayquaza now,” was all he said.
We both got up off the couch and grabbed our coats and shoes. We left the hotel and hailed a cab. We had to as we had no idea where the Empire State Building was….
“The Empire State Building please,” I said to the driver.
The Cab sped up and made a quick right turn. We went down a couple of blocks and made a quick left. At that point we could see it towering over everything in the sky. There it was.
We pulled up to the tall building and the man held his hand out, expecting money…..the meter said $6.44 in L.E.D lights…..but we didn’t have any money….we only had Alliance points, which became the official currency of most of the world by 2109. George and I quickly looked at each other, and recognized what we were gonna do. I quickly slapped his hand as to give him a Hi-Five, opened the door and ran into the building. I ran up to the receptionist.
“Hello….what are you looking for?” The woman asked.
“Hi, I need to know what floor Black Rayquaza is currently at,” I replied.
“Im sorry, there is no Black Rayquaza on my list,”
George looked at the woman, and then looked at me like I was some dumb person.
“Hi, Im looking for Andrew Abad please…..sorry my friends a little under the weather,” George told the woman.
“OH...,” she said. “Mr. Abad is currently on the top floor…he had it reserved for today. He said he was expecting some visitors later….well just go through the elevator there and push the green button.”
“Thank you,” I told her.
We went over to the metal elevators and pushed the button. The doors opened familiar to the one’s I saw before at the hotel. We entered and George pushed the green button. The Elevator quickly rocketed up and stopped to a halt. The door opened and I saw something I was not very pleased about. Tom Spriter was standing over Black Rayquaza who was tied in a chair…..
*End of Chapter 9*
This is Chapter Nine....comment and enjoy.
Chapter Nine
September 21st 2100
Well, I’ve officially made it into the past. Since I wasn’t alive at the time, I’ve just gotten settled here, and I must say the past is a heck of a lot better than the future. Things are joyous here…..there really aren’t many problems. I went for a walk outside…..the sidewalks are clean and shiny, the stores and flourishing with shoppers, and everything just seems brighter. The walk was great….people were friendly overall. I met some kids battling in the nearby school. The kids reminded me of my youth…..school always was fun. I returned to the Hotel, took the elevator and pushed the white 5 on the panel. The elevator quickly rose up, and in a minute the doors released and I walked out. This was a very nice hotel-The walls had pretty, green wallpaper with a nice stripe pattern. The floors were in a black fabric and softened the force of your foot when walking. The Ice machine was in the room next to the elevator and as I went that way I heard some commotion in Room 503 as I passed.
“No, I will NOT move to Boston,” the women screamed.
“Honey, you know we need this job. Mr. Brinker has offered double the salary I’m making at the Alliance base…..he said we could have full benefits and everything. We can finally take that vacation to Hawaii you wanted.” the man replied.
“I won’t…..the Alliance means way to much to this family. How could you even think of betraying Andrew. He believed in you…..he made you, Tom. If you quit your job, I’m leaving you and taking John with me. Andrew can get me a job as a receptionist.”
“Fine then….I’ll e-mail you the divorce papers.”
At that point, the door opened and a tall, stocky, guy walked out of the room. His face was red with anger as he stormed off and hit the elevator button. He opened what looked to be a cell phone….although as soon as I knew what those were, they were replaced with our Alliance Messengers. For some reason, I could hear both sides of the conversation.
“Hello?” the man on the other end answered.
“Hi, it’s me. I’ve decided to take your generous offer and move to Boston. Unfortunately, my soon to be ex-wife and child wont be joining me.”
“Ah, well I’m very sorry you had to do that. Don’t worry, once our little project is done, she’ll come CRAWLING back.”
“Sounds fair…..thank you Brian.”
“Welcome to Team Ruby, Mr. Spriter”
Whoa. Wait a minute….that guy on the phone was Mr. Spriter?? It wasn’t Adam, though. It was most likely his father…or grandfather even. I was still in shock I’ve heard of someone this early. From what I heard, Team Ruby is just starting up. I continued thinking until I reached Room 223. To my surprise, the door was open.
I walked into the suite to find George making what looked to be Egg’s and Bacon on the stove. He was standing tall, with his long black hair and white hotel robe.
“Well, I see you’ve awoke George,” I said.
He jumped.
“Whoa….you scared me there. Yes, I did wake. We made it! I’m glad you’re here…..I thought you didn’t make it for a second….I left the door open just in case….I see you forgot your room key.”
I looked at the coffee table in the living room….two room keys were sitting on the table.
“Yeah, wasn’t thinking about that….anyways, now that were here….what do we do?”
“We have to get to the Empire State Building….and quick. I have a feeling Black Rayquaza won’t be there for long.”
“Oh by the way…..did I tell you that before I made it to you in Greenland, I was met on the train by Adam Spriter?”
“No you didn’t…..I guess you and James handled him all right. I imagine it would have been hard….he’s very well trained. His family comes from a long line of Team Ruby soldiers. His great grandfather helped Brian start Team Ruby.”
“I know……I’ve just seen his great grandfather. He just went down to the lobby.”
“What? You’re telling me, you just saw Tom Spriter in the hall there?”
“Yeah….he just left his wife….and then called Brian and told him all about it. Supposedly he’s moving to Boston to help Brian start Team Ruby.”
“This is bad, Jason….we need to talk to Black Rayquaza and quick. This is actually important.”
At this point, George took the bacon and eggs off the pans, put them onto a silver plate and ran into the bathroom. A second later, I heard the shower water running. I took the plate and dug in…..he was a very good cook. I remember that he was a chef before Black Rayquaza met him…..thank you very much Alliance History 1. I got an A- in that class.
Some time passed as I was eating my breakfast. I decided to turn on the TV. I changed the channel to the news channel. I didn’t believe what I was hearing.
“Authorities say Brian Winter, a rebel who escaped from the Alliance just weeks ago, is STILL at large. The man who had swore to take revenge on not only the Alliance, but the world is now #1 on the World’s most wanted list. We’ll keep you updated on this story as more news comes in. Back to you Scott.”
The woman’s picture faded into the news desk of the man, who was talking about how the Miami Dolphins were once again the best team in Football, becoming 20-0 last season, beating the previous record held by the New England Patriots since 2008. But I had no time for football….we had a crisis on our hands. Luckily, we had someone we knew who could fix it. I heard the bathroom door open, and in a cloud of smoke George appeared in a black pinstripe suit, white shirt, and red tie. He completely outdid me…who was only wearing the Red Jumpsuit I had worn 14 years past now.
“Here,” George said as he handed me a hanger with a white suit.
I went into the foggy bathroom and changed quickly. I emerged back through the door and quickly showed George the news reel I had just seen. Thanks to DVR, which has been around FOREVER, he saw what I did. He just stood there in awe as if everything were put together.
“We need to get to Black Rayquaza now,” was all he said.
We both got up off the couch and grabbed our coats and shoes. We left the hotel and hailed a cab. We had to as we had no idea where the Empire State Building was….
“The Empire State Building please,” I said to the driver.
The Cab sped up and made a quick right turn. We went down a couple of blocks and made a quick left. At that point we could see it towering over everything in the sky. There it was.
We pulled up to the tall building and the man held his hand out, expecting money…..the meter said $6.44 in L.E.D lights…..but we didn’t have any money….we only had Alliance points, which became the official currency of most of the world by 2109. George and I quickly looked at each other, and recognized what we were gonna do. I quickly slapped his hand as to give him a Hi-Five, opened the door and ran into the building. I ran up to the receptionist.
“Hello….what are you looking for?” The woman asked.
“Hi, I need to know what floor Black Rayquaza is currently at,” I replied.
“Im sorry, there is no Black Rayquaza on my list,”
George looked at the woman, and then looked at me like I was some dumb person.
“Hi, Im looking for Andrew Abad please…..sorry my friends a little under the weather,” George told the woman.
“OH...,” she said. “Mr. Abad is currently on the top floor…he had it reserved for today. He said he was expecting some visitors later….well just go through the elevator there and push the green button.”
“Thank you,” I told her.
We went over to the metal elevators and pushed the button. The doors opened familiar to the one’s I saw before at the hotel. We entered and George pushed the green button. The Elevator quickly rocketed up and stopped to a halt. The door opened and I saw something I was not very pleased about. Tom Spriter was standing over Black Rayquaza who was tied in a chair…..
*End of Chapter 9*
Hmm hmm... looks like they got there slightly too late -_-
Nice chapter though - seems like your style of writing has changed SLIGHTLY, as it's much easier to read this now than it was to start with
I dunno what'll happen next though... which is pretty nice! Cliffhangers are cool... so it'll be interesting to see what you do with this one
Good luck with the story, as well as with the contest
Nice chapter though - seems like your style of writing has changed SLIGHTLY, as it's much easier to read this now than it was to start with
I dunno what'll happen next though... which is pretty nice! Cliffhangers are cool... so it'll be interesting to see what you do with this one
Good luck with the story, as well as with the contest
