Seven Days of Terror (now with an epilogue)
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RE: Seven Days of Terror (ch 10 mega pwn up)
Okay, so I don't think chapter 11 is going to be as long as chapter 10 was. It's about 3,200 words so far and the fighting is almost over. That doesn't mean the chapter's almost finished, but it's not going to be as long as I envisioned at the start.
But hey, that's good news for you guys, right?
edit Someone else just died! Things are moving along quite nicely... a bit over 5000 words at this point.
Okay, so I don't think chapter 11 is going to be as long as chapter 10 was. It's about 3,200 words so far and the fighting is almost over. That doesn't mean the chapter's almost finished, but it's not going to be as long as I envisioned at the start.
But hey, that's good news for you guys, right?
edit Someone else just died! Things are moving along quite nicely... a bit over 5000 words at this point.
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RE: Seven Days of Terror (ch 10 mega pwn up)
Of course there wi Are you nu Maybe. :3
The only ones who weren't buried were Max (he kinda... couldn't be) and Luxray. For fear out of accidentally letting slip the identities of those who die in chapter 11, I'll not name the names of the ones that were buried (cause I almost did). :x
At any rate, I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. Tell your friends! ^_^
The only ones who weren't buried were Max (he kinda... couldn't be) and Luxray. For fear out of accidentally letting slip the identities of those who die in chapter 11, I'll not name the names of the ones that were buried (cause I almost did). :x
At any rate, I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. Tell your friends! ^_^
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RE: Seven Days of Terror (ch 10 mega pwn up)
Well no wonder no one's been posting, this thread's dead! >:O
/me casts Resurrection
Status report:
Not a whole lot has changed since then, but I will say this: I brought someone back to life.
Obviously, I can't note any details, but yeah. Someone was dead, but they're not anymore. Make of that what you will. ^_^
I know this is not much of a timeline, but chapter 11 will be done, at the very latest, by month's end, and just so I got all my bases covered, that's not a joke.
Hopefully it won't take me like three weeks to get done with chapter 11, but I want to finish this story. I impose this limit so there's not another six-month gap between chapters, lol.
This is normally the part where I say "here's a little excerpt to keep you interested," but I honestly can't find anything that won't spoil something about the chapter. So, to make up for it... here's a bunch of random sentences that don't make any sense out of context (but are still from chapter 11, subject to change), in no particular order:
"Weavile fen!"
"That's... that's a lie..." he said aloud.
Surely that had to count for something.
"Be careful, it's a trap!"
Even the most level-headed of people has that point where the stress is just too much to handle; logic and reason take a back seat to insanity-filled rage.
Maybe he'd wear himself out?
I couldn't lose.
Be strong.
I'm actually trembling right now.
Now then. What next?
Weavile would not be able to see his plan's success.
=D
Well no wonder no one's been posting, this thread's dead! >:O
/me casts Resurrection
Status report:
Not a whole lot has changed since then, but I will say this: I brought someone back to life.
Obviously, I can't note any details, but yeah. Someone was dead, but they're not anymore. Make of that what you will. ^_^
I know this is not much of a timeline, but chapter 11 will be done, at the very latest, by month's end, and just so I got all my bases covered, that's not a joke.
Hopefully it won't take me like three weeks to get done with chapter 11, but I want to finish this story. I impose this limit so there's not another six-month gap between chapters, lol.
This is normally the part where I say "here's a little excerpt to keep you interested," but I honestly can't find anything that won't spoil something about the chapter. So, to make up for it... here's a bunch of random sentences that don't make any sense out of context (but are still from chapter 11, subject to change), in no particular order:
"Weavile fen!"
"That's... that's a lie..." he said aloud.
Surely that had to count for something.
"Be careful, it's a trap!"
Even the most level-headed of people has that point where the stress is just too much to handle; logic and reason take a back seat to insanity-filled rage.
Maybe he'd wear himself out?
I couldn't lose.
Be strong.
I'm actually trembling right now.
Now then. What next?
Weavile would not be able to see his plan's success.
=D
RE: Seven Days of Terror (ch 10 mega pwn up)
Hmm, the sentences are random, and therefore useless and impervious to speculation! The bringing back of a character is cool though, I'm rooting for Misty. If Max comes back, I'll have to shoot something. I'm glad the story is finally coming to a close, it's been too long already. x_x
dmaster out.
Hmm, the sentences are random, and therefore useless and impervious to speculation! The bringing back of a character is cool though, I'm rooting for Misty. If Max comes back, I'll have to shoot something. I'm glad the story is finally coming to a close, it's been too long already. x_x
dmaster out.
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RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)
;D
Also to everyone who has been rooting for May's demise:
THERE. SHE'S DEAD. I KILLED HER. JERKS. I HOPE YOU'RE ALL HAPPY >:O
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;D
Also to everyone who has been rooting for May's demise:
THERE. SHE'S DEAD. I KILLED HER. JERKS. I HOPE YOU'RE ALL HAPPY >:O
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)
Lol. I find it funny that, despite all your protesting about killing her, she was the first to go. But holy wow that was a strong Thunder... I guess it's a good thing that Weavile just went SMASH and wrecked him for good afterwards D:
I also find it funny that Shelly was only seeing the casualties on her side, despite the fact that she had already taken out almost everyone on the other side. Nothing like a bit of bias, eh?
Excellent as always my man! Don't you dare finish this prematurely - we HAVE to know what happens! You'll leave a hole in me if you end this before the real conclusion
Lol. I find it funny that, despite all your protesting about killing her, she was the first to go. But holy wow that was a strong Thunder... I guess it's a good thing that Weavile just went SMASH and wrecked him for good afterwards D:
I also find it funny that Shelly was only seeing the casualties on her side, despite the fact that she had already taken out almost everyone on the other side. Nothing like a bit of bias, eh?
Excellent as always my man! Don't you dare finish this prematurely - we HAVE to know what happens! You'll leave a hole in me if you end this before the real conclusion
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)
I can just imagine the ending.
James, Ash, Brock and Tracey go to Rocket HQ and kill Giovanni and Shelly. They get a boat off the Island but are attacked by pirates on the way. THey then get abducted by aliens. Max and May come back to life, but then drown in the ocean. AFter getting onto dry land, Galactic come and start threatening to kill everyone and steal the Stark Mountain orb thingy, sayin they will blow up all of sinnoh when Stark Mountain erupts. Ash and co save all of sinnoh, and hten get rid of the glatic head. They then save the whole univerese from some guy called 'Dr.X' who tries to make dialga and palia blow up the sapce time continum. Then....
Caroline hits them with a frying pan and they die.
I can just imagine the ending.
James, Ash, Brock and Tracey go to Rocket HQ and kill Giovanni and Shelly. They get a boat off the Island but are attacked by pirates on the way. THey then get abducted by aliens. Max and May come back to life, but then drown in the ocean. AFter getting onto dry land, Galactic come and start threatening to kill everyone and steal the Stark Mountain orb thingy, sayin they will blow up all of sinnoh when Stark Mountain erupts. Ash and co save all of sinnoh, and hten get rid of the glatic head. They then save the whole univerese from some guy called 'Dr.X' who tries to make dialga and palia blow up the sapce time continum. Then....
Caroline hits them with a frying pan and they die.
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)
Epic. :O
Brilliant, brilliant chapter. Can't wait to see the end too. ^___^
Epic. :O
Brilliant, brilliant chapter. Can't wait to see the end too. ^___^
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)
*Shock Horror!*
Too long?! It's not long enough!
As always, an amazing read, well worth the wait.
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*Shock Horror!*
Too long?! It's not long enough!
As always, an amazing read, well worth the wait.
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)
Yeah, I want it to continue, but not at the expense of ending the story when I'm 50. Yeah, still getting around to reading this latest chapter. I have Homework to do, so I'll fit it in sometime this week. ;x
dmaster out.
Yeah, I want it to continue, but not at the expense of ending the story when I'm 50. Yeah, still getting around to reading this latest chapter. I have Homework to do, so I'll fit it in sometime this week. ;x
dmaster out.
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RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)
Hardy har har >:O
I am flying through chapter 12; I already have 5000 words. And by 5000, I mean zero. \o/
I hope that it doesn't take me two months to get chapter 12 done, though. This story will be completely complete by July at the absolute latest. After that, it's idea creation time for the second fic, and I hope to have the first chapter of that done by January.
Hope you guys tune in to that when it comes out. ^_^
Hardy har har >:O
I am flying through chapter 12; I already have 5000 words. And by 5000, I mean zero. \o/
I hope that it doesn't take me two months to get chapter 12 done, though. This story will be completely complete by July at the absolute latest. After that, it's idea creation time for the second fic, and I hope to have the first chapter of that done by January.
Hope you guys tune in to that when it comes out. ^_^
RE: Seven Days of Terror (it's chapter 11 time!!!)
Yeah, read the chapter yesterday. I should say "speed read". ;] Great chapter. I'm glad Brock got revived, but kinda expected. May's death was brutal, but I'm happy she's dead. Mr. Mime's was the worst though. It must've killed you to write off your favorite Pokemon's death, PMJ. ;o Giovanni is next. (It never ends!) Funny how all the men survived. (Not counting Max, he's a baby). And I just realized Shelly is from Team Aqua. I knew I heard that name somewhere. I loved her death too. Little confusing with the letters, but I don't mind. It's still a great read.
dmaster out.
Yeah, read the chapter yesterday. I should say "speed read". ;] Great chapter. I'm glad Brock got revived, but kinda expected. May's death was brutal, but I'm happy she's dead. Mr. Mime's was the worst though. It must've killed you to write off your favorite Pokemon's death, PMJ. ;o Giovanni is next. (It never ends!) Funny how all the men survived. (Not counting Max, he's a baby). And I just realized Shelly is from Team Aqua. I knew I heard that name somewhere. I loved her death too. Little confusing with the letters, but I don't mind. It's still a great read.
dmaster out.
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Quite the contrary. While I do like Mr. Mime a whole lot, the Mr. Mime in this story is just plain mean. He pretty much had to die or else the story would have ended with him killing everyone... and that wouldn'ta been much fun to read.
Also, where have you been? Max has been dead for a while now...
Quite the contrary. While I do like Mr. Mime a whole lot, the Mr. Mime in this story is just plain mean. He pretty much had to die or else the story would have ended with him killing everyone... and that wouldn'ta been much fun to read.
Also, where have you been? Max has been dead for a while now...
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