thats ok, I really like it the chapter was kinda short, i cant wait till the next 1!
Writing Sevii Island FanFic
- Thread starter Negative Zero
- Start date
I have exams Monday-wed and several essays due Friday so I wont be able to put up a lot of chapters
Chapter 4
It was the morning if the Water Pokemon Tournament. I was up and going I rushed to do everything and even put two different pairs of socks on then I was out of bed and off to the beach. The contestants were already there at the beach. Lucky I had 4 min to spare.
"OK the Contest is about to begin so surfers on the starting line!!!!!!" The Judge shouted.
I was on the starting line ready to go. "OK Begin!!!!" "Go Lapras!" I called out. Then Lapras came out of its Poke ball looking energetic. Everyone just stared at me like I was winning.
"Were Gonna Loose." One of them whispered. "Lets Go Lapras!" I commanded. Then Lapras was racing like the speed of lighting. No one even tried to win they just let me win. "Rhe winner is Davis and Lapras!" The judge shouted. Then the judge just gave me 2 Pokeballs and then I was on my way.
~End of Chapter~
Sorry if it's short
It was the morning if the Water Pokemon Tournament. I was up and going I rushed to do everything and even put two different pairs of socks on then I was out of bed and off to the beach. The contestants were already there at the beach. Lucky I had 4 min to spare.
"OK the Contest is about to begin so surfers on the starting line!!!!!!" The Judge shouted.
I was on the starting line ready to go. "OK Begin!!!!" "Go Lapras!" I called out. Then Lapras came out of its Poke ball looking energetic. Everyone just stared at me like I was winning.
"Were Gonna Loose." One of them whispered. "Lets Go Lapras!" I commanded. Then Lapras was racing like the speed of lighting. No one even tried to win they just let me win. "Rhe winner is Davis and Lapras!" The judge shouted. Then the judge just gave me 2 Pokeballs and then I was on my way.
~End of Chapter~
Sorry if it's short
just question do i need to make tohose trainer cards now or not it's your chose
Thanx guys you can.
here are my trainer cards one with my starter and 1 with my final team
tanks PK
your welkom
sorry for chapter delays I got the stupid chiken pox
Chapter 5 Sudden Capture
It was the day of the Dragon Pokemon Contest, I ran to the contest hall with much excitement. When I got to the hall it was empty at 1st but then 5 seconds ater the place was full of people. "Oh my god this place is so filled!" I shouted. Then there cmae this really skinny person giving me a badge and told me "These badges have numbers on them and will represent you from now on and meorize it!!" Then I looked at my badge I was #54. "54 huh my least favorite number." I sighed. "#54 please come up to the stage." Someone announced. I did what I heard and went up on stage. "Ahh wonder what they want?" I asked myself. When I got up on stage gas appeared then I noticed I was trapped in a cage.
"Let me out Let me out!" I screamed.
~End of Chapter~
It was the day of the Dragon Pokemon Contest, I ran to the contest hall with much excitement. When I got to the hall it was empty at 1st but then 5 seconds ater the place was full of people. "Oh my god this place is so filled!" I shouted. Then there cmae this really skinny person giving me a badge and told me "These badges have numbers on them and will represent you from now on and meorize it!!" Then I looked at my badge I was #54. "54 huh my least favorite number." I sighed. "#54 please come up to the stage." Someone announced. I did what I heard and went up on stage. "Ahh wonder what they want?" I asked myself. When I got up on stage gas appeared then I noticed I was trapped in a cage.
"Let me out Let me out!" I screamed.
~End of Chapter~
Cool!
P.S,you need to delete the p.ms in your inbox, I can't reply to your meessage!
P.S,you need to delete the p.ms in your inbox, I can't reply to your meessage!
Thanxs CA
PS:I already did
PS:I already did
Chapter 6
I was screaming for an hour begging for someone to let me out of this stupid cage. After an hour I got really board so I stopped and fell asleep. I awoke by a crashing sound. As I slowly oppened my eyes I noticed I was in a truck and I have been let out of my cage. "Ok now I'm stuck in a truck can it get any worse." I complained. Then came a really sharp turn and I hit against the wall. "Me and my big mouth." I said. Then I started to rub my head. "That hurt!" I shouted. Then I looked around and it looked like it was enough room to bring out all my Pokemon. "Go everbody!" I called out. All of my Pokemon popped out of their Pokeballs looking really tired. "Come On Guys we need to get out of this truck!" I begged. "Lapras!" Lapras answerd happily. "Ponyta Falme Thrower!" I commanded. Fire Came out of Ponyta's mouth that made a dent. "Lapras Hydro Pump!!!" I commanded. Then a big powerfull blast of Water came out of Lapras's mouth and cooled the dent. "Lucky I've been training." I grinned. "Dragonair Iron Tail and Gible Dragon Claw!!!" I commanded. Dragonair and Gible hit the truck and made a hole where I could go out. "Thanks guys. Return Lapras,Dragonair,and Gible." I said. The three Pokemon returned into their Pokeball looking like they acomplished something. "Ready to get out Ponyta?" I asked. Then Ponyta looked at me with glowing eyes as bright as fire. I heard another crash followed up by a very chilling voice "Bring us with you!" The voice shouted. I turnned around and found a kid with a Piplup and a Pikachu. "What's your name??" I asked. "My name is Matt and what's yours??" Mat answered. "Oh my name is Davis." I answered. "Well can I escape with you??" Matt asked. "UHH OK sure!" I hesitated. Then I turned to Ponyta and asked "Do you think you can let another passenger on a ride?"
Ponyta then started to stare and nodded it's head yes. "OK then Matt put your Pokemon in their Pokeballs and lets go!" Matt did what he was told and put his Pokemon back into their Pokeballs then we both got on Ponyta. "Ponyta lets go!!!" I shouted. Then Ponyta dashed out of the truck as if it was lighting itself. "Hey Davis can I come with you on your journey I can tell your on one." Matt asked. "Sure." I answered. Ponyta's falme was riding through the night like gold.
~End of Chapter~
I was screaming for an hour begging for someone to let me out of this stupid cage. After an hour I got really board so I stopped and fell asleep. I awoke by a crashing sound. As I slowly oppened my eyes I noticed I was in a truck and I have been let out of my cage. "Ok now I'm stuck in a truck can it get any worse." I complained. Then came a really sharp turn and I hit against the wall. "Me and my big mouth." I said. Then I started to rub my head. "That hurt!" I shouted. Then I looked around and it looked like it was enough room to bring out all my Pokemon. "Go everbody!" I called out. All of my Pokemon popped out of their Pokeballs looking really tired. "Come On Guys we need to get out of this truck!" I begged. "Lapras!" Lapras answerd happily. "Ponyta Falme Thrower!" I commanded. Fire Came out of Ponyta's mouth that made a dent. "Lapras Hydro Pump!!!" I commanded. Then a big powerfull blast of Water came out of Lapras's mouth and cooled the dent. "Lucky I've been training." I grinned. "Dragonair Iron Tail and Gible Dragon Claw!!!" I commanded. Dragonair and Gible hit the truck and made a hole where I could go out. "Thanks guys. Return Lapras,Dragonair,and Gible." I said. The three Pokemon returned into their Pokeball looking like they acomplished something. "Ready to get out Ponyta?" I asked. Then Ponyta looked at me with glowing eyes as bright as fire. I heard another crash followed up by a very chilling voice "Bring us with you!" The voice shouted. I turnned around and found a kid with a Piplup and a Pikachu. "What's your name??" I asked. "My name is Matt and what's yours??" Mat answered. "Oh my name is Davis." I answered. "Well can I escape with you??" Matt asked. "UHH OK sure!" I hesitated. Then I turned to Ponyta and asked "Do you think you can let another passenger on a ride?"
Ponyta then started to stare and nodded it's head yes. "OK then Matt put your Pokemon in their Pokeballs and lets go!" Matt did what he was told and put his Pokemon back into their Pokeballs then we both got on Ponyta. "Ponyta lets go!!!" I shouted. Then Ponyta dashed out of the truck as if it was lighting itself. "Hey Davis can I come with you on your journey I can tell your on one." Matt asked. "Sure." I answered. Ponyta's falme was riding through the night like gold.
~End of Chapter~
COOL IM IN IT!!! Cant wait for everything to happen!!
Thanx MonkeyKing
wens the next chapter going to be up?