Writing Short Story Competition #3

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What is it?

This is basically a monthly competition where people submit short stories based on a common theme. Once the entry period is over, your stories will be subjected to a public vote, where the writer of the most popular story will be crowned as the champion for the month!

Rules

The rules are pretty simple here.

1) Standard forum rules apply.
2) Your story must have some relevance to the theme given.
3) Your story can be no shorter than 750 words, and no longer than 3,000.
4) The story must be related to Pokemon.
5) You must submit your story to me, via PM.
6) Your story will need a title

How do I enter?

The entry period starts now and ends in three weeks time, on August 23rd (Sunday). You must submit your work to me via PM, as all entries will be posted in this thread anonymously (so only me and the author know who wrote them). Once the three weeks are up, no more will be accepted. The remaining week will be the voting period (I will expand on how voting works when the time comes).

This months theme is...

"A tough journey"

That's all I am giving you for a theme. How should this be interpreted? Is it a journey across the lands, or a journey of personal growth? Is it rewarding, or does it end in tragedy? Up to you, folks!
 
I have no idea for this topic, so I'm going to take a step back. I might join, I might not. I do wish all competitors luck, though.
 
I might enter...A tough Journey... Can I post the first chapter of one of my stories?
 
Mystery Author #1 said:
The audience was fidgeting, waiting for the President, standing at the podium on stage, to speak. The townsfolk had been called to the Hearthome auditorium, and all the president had done since they got there was adjust his tie. Finally, he nervously spoke up.
“Good morning, people and visitors of Hearthome,” he began, “I’ve called you here to bring your attention to a new law,” he continued, and adjusted his tie again. His voice was high-pitched for a man, and he wore an orange jacket with tan pants, his red and white striped tie askew. His glasses sat atop his nose, clean, as always. It was rumored that they had no lenses, and that was why they were always clean. After a slight pause, he spoke up again. “Due to the decrease of Police Squad Officers, evil teams such as Team Rocket have been able to increase their villainous deeds using Pokémon. Because of this,” the president paused again, and looked at his advisor, who nodded, before speaking again. “Because of this,” he said again, “the use of Pokémon, anywhere, for anything, is now officially illegal,” he finished, and sat down in a chair, sweat rolling down his face.
“What? No!” a voice yelled from the audience, and everyone turned to look at a young trainer, around ten years old or so. A red cap with a Poke Ball on it sat upon his head, and he wore a blue jacket and jeans. A Pikachu sat upon his shoulder, and as the trainer said this, the Pikachu nodded, agreeing with him.
“You seem to be… very attached to your Pikachu,” the president said, “please bring it here.”
“What for?” the trainer asked defensively.
“I will demonstrate what we shall do with Pokémon that belong to trainers. What is your name?” the president asked.
“Ash Ketchum, and I’m not letting you have Pikachu!” Ash, the trainer, yelled, and he grabbed his Pikachu and ran towards the exit.
“Police, arrest him!” the president exclaimed, alarmed. The two policemen guarding the exits immediately ran towards Ash, attempting to block his way.
“Pikachu, Thundershock!” Ash exclaimed, and Pikachu obediently created a bolt of lightning from his forehead. In the middle, it split into two paths, and electrocuted both policemen. They fell over on the ground, unconscious. Ash ran towards the exit and pushed the door open. It wouldn’t budge. Then, he noticed the “Push, not Pull” sign on the door. He opened it and ran through.
I need a place to hide, he thought. As if hearing his plea for help, Team Rocket’s hot air balloon began to float over Hearthome city.
“Go, Grotle!” Ash yelled, sending out his Grotle. “Use Vine Whip! I need to get up there!” He continued. Grotle created two vines and reached them up to the basket of the hot air balloon, creating a ladder. Ash immediately began to climb it, Pikachu on his shoulder. While he was climbing, he looked down, despite telling himself not to over and over again in his mind. Below him, a crowd of police officers stood, holding guns. They were ready to shoot. Ash whispered something to Pikachu. Pikachu nodded, and electrified the vines. Ash was used to the shock, so he hung on and continued to climb. He was so close to the basket, he could almost feel its rough texture.

“I can’t believe it!” Meowth exclaimed, “Da twoip is actually tryin’ to climb into our balloon!”
“Let me see,” said James, grabbing a pair of binoculars and looking down. Sure enough, Ash was climbing up a pair of vines attached to the balloon by a Grotle.
“James, do something!” Jessie yelled in frustration, “we can’t let him sabotage our plans again!”
“Jessie,” James said, “he’s not trying to sabotage our plans.”
“How do you know?” Jessie asked in frustration.
“Because there are cops trying to follow him, and they don’t look happy,” James replied.
“Let me see!” Jessie yelled, forcing the binoculars out of James’ hand and looking down. She was astounded at what she saw.
“The Twerp”, Ash Ketchum, was climbing up a pair of vines attached to the basket of their hot-air balloon by his Grotle. Several police officers were gathered at the ground, yelling up after him.
“We’ve got to help him!” Jessie exclaimed, and she let down a short ladder. Ash grabbed onto it and returned his Grotle. He began to climb up, and in a few seconds, he was in the basket.
“Thanks,” was all he said before telling his Pikachu to Thunderbolt the police. Pikachu obeyed, and the police were soon unconscious.
“Why were you running from the cops?” James asked.
“I’ll explain later,” Ash said, “for now, we’ve got to rid every region of the police forces. We’ll start with Hoenn.”
“Da twoip is acsually on our side now!” Meowth exclaimed. After exclaiming this, a look of puzzlement crossed the Cat Pokémon’s face. “Wouldn’t it be more convenient if we took out da police sqwads in Sinnoh foist?” he asked.
“Hoenn is furthest away from here, so the news about owning a Pokémon being against the law may not have reached it yet. We’ve got to get there before it does,” Ash replied.
“Huh?” Jessie asked. It was her turn to be puzzled now. “Since when is owning a Pokémon illegal?”
“Since the President of Sinnoh made it so. And I’m guessing that he did that under the Governor’s orders,” Ash explained to Jessie, “because he didn’t look like he was doing it willingly.”
“So that’s why you came up here,” Jessie said, and turned to James, who was working with the engine. He turned back towards Jessie and Ash.
“That’s as fast as it can go,” James said, indicating the balloon. It was still moving slower than running speed. He frowned, and said, “we’re going to need a faster method of transportation.”

Delia Ketchum was sitting on the couch, humming to herself while knitting and watching the news. The commercial break was over, so she looked at the television and stopped knitting. The announcer spoke in a British accent, often mispronouncing words.
“This just in- a law has just been passed by the gov’ner that states no citizen of any region is allowed to own a Pokémon.”
Delia stared at the television. She was sure she had heard incorrectly. She assumed this, and continued to watch.
“Also, we’ve go’ a fugitive, from ‘earthome city. If you see him, repor’ him to the polices immediately.”
The announcer held up a picture. Delia stared at it. It disappeared shortly, but it was still there in her mind. The picture had been of Ash. Her Ash.

Giovanni turned in his chair, a stern look on his face.
“What makes you think you have the right to just barge into my hideout and ask for a Personal Jet? Get out!” He yelled. However, it did not have the effect it usually did on Jessie, James, and Meowth. Instead of cowering in terror, they simply smirked.
“Tell him, Jessie,” James said, not wanting to be selfish.
“No, you tell him, James,” Jessie said, wanting James to have the glory.
“No, you , Jessie,” James said. They continued to go back and forth like this, until Meowth finally spoke up.
“We’ve got the twoip’s Pikachu!” he yelled. Giovanni stared at him.
“What did you say?” Giovanni asked.
“I said, we’ve got the twoip’s Pikachu!” Meowth shouted again. Giovanni’s Persian looked over at the situation with a fearful look in its eyes, not wanting to lose its position as his personal pet.
“I need proof,” Giovanni said, “give me proof.”
“Gladly,” Meowth replied, and he motioned to Jessie and James. Giovanni watched patiently as they stood at each end of the double doors leading into Giovanni’s room.
“Prepare for trouble….” Jessie began.
“And make it double!” James cried. At this point, instead of the motto, Ash Ketchum burst into the room, Pikachu on his shoulder.
“To protect the world from devastation!” He cried.
“To unite all peoples within our nation…” James said.
“To denounce the evils of truth and love,” Jessie began,
“To extend our reach to the stars above!” Ash finished.
“Jessie,” said Jessie,
“James,” James said,
“Ash,” Ash said.
“Team Rocket blasts off at the speed of light!” Jessie cried.
“Surrender now or prepare to fight!” James yelled.
“Meowth, that’s right!” Meowth yelled, and instead of the motto ending here, Pikachu cried,
“Pika, Pika!” and all of them got into a pose.
Giovanni applauded. Not the kind of applauding that you hear when there’s only one person clapping for you, but the kind of applauding that you feel like fills the whole room, though it’s a one-person audience. All of the other five bowed.
“Jessie, James, Meowth, you’re getting a raise in your paycheck. Now hand that Pikachu over, if you please,” Giovanni said.
“No!” Ash cried defensively, and leaped sideways. His aim was wrong, and he crashed out of the window and fell down seven stories before falling on the ground, still alive enough to feel the pain.
I… survived… he managed to think, before becoming unconscious.

Ash woke up to the sound of voices. He was lying in a bed, with casts wrapped around most of him. He attempted to sit up, but immediately felt immense pain and lied back down. James, sitting on the bed next to him playing a Game Boy Advance, looked up at Ash.
“Oh, you’re awake,” he said, before shutting off the Game Boy and walking over to him.
“What… happened?” croaked Ash. It hurt to move his mouth.
“That was quite a fall you took,” James said. “I don’t really think you want to know the details. All that matters is that you’re all right. I’m going to save you the trouble of asking questions, as your vocal chords were hurt severely in that fall. I’ll just explain everything to you now. After you fell, we-er… brought you back to life… in a way I’d rather not mention…” he noticed the curious look on Ash’s face. “All right, fine, I’ll tell you. You’re not going to like it though… to bring you back to life… I performed mouth-to-mouth resuscitation.”
“You WHAT?!” Ash yelled, forgetting how much his throat hurt.
“Just be happy that you’re alive, okay?” James said. His face was red. To the disgusted look on Ash’s face, he replied, “we washed your mouth out.” Ash looked relieved. “Anyways, the boss is letting you stay here until you’re better. That’s all I’ve got to say for now,” he finished, and went back to playing his Game Boy.

“I’ve come to a decision, and-"
Giovanni paused, turned his chair around in a circle, and resumed to speak.
“I’m letting him keep his Pikachu. If it means so much to him that he would jump out of a building to protect it, they must have a really strong bond. Also, it’ll probably be able to help Team Rocket in their plans, when needed.”
“Sir, the twe- I mean, Ash, had a plan of his own. He wanted to destroy all the police squads,” Jessie said.
“All the police squads?” Giovanni asked.
“Yes, all of them,” Jessie replied.
“Go ahead and go with him, when he’s better. Destroying all of the police squads will make things easier for Team Rocket. Where does he want to start?”
“Hoenn, sir,” Jessie said.
“Hoenn. I see. I’m giving you that private jet.”
“Thank you, sir. We will see to it that it is returned in proper condition.”
“I’m not letting you borrow it, I’m giving it to you. As in, it’s yours to keep.”
“Why- thank you, sir!” Jessie cried, overjoyed.
“You may leave now,” Giovanni said. Jessie left, Meowth following behind her, carrying Pikachu. Before Meowth could walk out, Giovanni stopped him.
“Meowth,” he said quietly, “do you still want that spot as my pet?”
“Nah, I’m good with Jessie and James. And the twoip, I suppose,” Meowth finished, before walking out the door.

Two weeks later

Jessie and James were waiting for Ash, standing at the entrance to the jet. He finally jogged toward them, Pikachu on his shoulder, wearing his new Team Rocket uniform.
“Ash, are you ready for this?” James asked.
“Yep!” Ash replied happily.
“Are you sure? This is a very dangerous journey,” Jessie warned him.
“I’m sure,” Ash said.
“You won’t bail out-
“The twoip says he’s ready, let’s go!” Meowth yelled from inside the jet. Jessie, James, Ash, and Pikachu all climbed in. All went to their respective seats, Jessie and James in the cockpit, and Ash, Meowth, and Pikachu in the regular seats. James’ voice came on over the intercom.
Prepare for takeoff. 3… 2… 1…
 
Mystery Author #2 said:
Silver Winds

I always knew climbing Mt. Silver would not be without its risks. The forests surrounding the mountains are thick, the air cold, and paths, there were none. Yet I wanted to go up that mountain, in search of rare and perhaps undiscovered Pokémon. Having won the Indigo League and placing third in the Hoenn League the year earlier, I was confident in my abilities to work with my Pokémon to reach the top, or at least the caves in which the Pokémon would live.

I left for Viridian City first, using it as my starting point. From there on, I would proceed towards the Indigo Plateau, but rather then going onwards to the Plateau, I'd go south-west, in the direction of Tohjo falls. From there on, it would be a journey North to get to Mt. Silver. Easy enough, and sure enough, there was no problem up until Tohjo Falls.

But upon arriving there, I found it was already getting colder then I had expected. Going to Mt. Silver in falltime might have been considered a risk, but the risks of summer with forest fires occuring was perhaps even bigger. But winter was settling in early, and already did temperatures drop. I just had to hope it wouldn't be too bad upon reaching Mt. Silve.

I made steady progress, slowly but steadily moving through the dense forests. Plenty of clearings gave me places to scout out, and with Mt. Silver in sight, it was easy to confirm my course. The forests didn't prove much of a challenge, the wild Pokémon living there easily defeated by my trusted Pokémon. Having a Ninetales with you really helps when having to deal with forest creatures.

It didn't take too long before I reached Mt. Silver's base. I set up camp for the night, preparing to climb up the next day. I awoke in the middle of the night and checked outside, and to my horror I discovered it snowing. I could only hope the snow would subside by the next day, or else I'd be stuck at the base, at least until the snow would finally subside.

I awoke the next day to find the layer of snow was still there, but at least the sun was shining and there was no sign of more snow to come. So I broke up the camp, called out Ninetales and Sandslash to help me climb up if needed, and started the slow climb.

Fortunately, Mt. Silver isn't all that steep - at least at the base. However, the mountain is shaped in a peculiar way, as around halfway up, one reaches a large plateau, from which the mountain goes further up in a much steeper fashion. It was rumored that the caves where rare Pokémon made their living was up there, up that steep part. Nobody had ever dared to venture above the plateau though, or at least nobody talked about it, for people did at least try. But I had vowed to be the first catching Pokémon from there.

The climb up, however, took longer then I had expected. The layer of snow was at least a foot high, perhaps two feet. Ninetales and Sandslash had considerably less problems with it then I did, and eventually they started to clear the path for me. Such great helps they were, and also my best friends. Who needs human companions when you have Pokémon like that, I always thought.

I had to set up camp multiple times during the small climb. It was only then I realized just how troublesome the final part, the truly steep climb, would be. As I sat in front of my tent, Ninetales cuddling in my lap and Sandslash sitting next to me, I realized just how rough the final climb would be. I looked up, seeing the edge of the plateau already, and from there on it would still be a day worth of a journey before I'd reach the final peak part. At least, it'd take so long in these conditions. I looked up at the sky, hoping the clear blue skies would stay this way for the remainder of the journey.

Unfortunately, nature decided differently. As I hoisted myself up on the plateau, one look up showed me dark skies, and soon enough, snow was falling. I decided to push on, getting Ninetales and Sandslash to stick close to me, so we would keep each other warm. Its surprising how soft and warm a Sandslash can feel if it relaxes. But the storm turned harsh, and I decided to deploy my tent, wanting to wait out the storm. I got Ninetales to clear the snow so that we would have a good spot, while Sandslash created a stone barrier against the snow. This way, with a campfire and some heated food, we could hold out for at least a few days.

During the night, however, Ninetales woke me, tugging my arm. Sandslash also was awoken by Ninetales, and he looked dazed. Suddenly, Ninetales put all its force into pulling me away and flung me out of the tent, running out with Sandslash in tow. Mere seconds later, the stone barrier Sandslash had created collapsed under the weight of the snow, and suddenly my entire equipment was gone. The snow had turned into a blizzard, and I was in the middle of the plateau, far away from the civilized work. "This...is not good at all" I said, looking at Ninetales and Sandslash with a worried look. "We best try to make a signal people can see, so we can get out of here."

But in the blizzard, Ninetales was unable to produce a lasting fire. Sandslash dug under the snow, trying to find good flammable material, but the cold got to him quickly. Unable to proceed, I got Ninetales and Sandslash together and we held on to one another, keeping each other warm, intending to use the snow as a water source so we could at least survive the blizzard.

The blizzard didnt show any signs of dying down, and soon I started to feel more and more frozen, despite the warmth of Ninetales and Sandslash. A look into their eyes confirmed that they too, especially Sandslash, were starting to have trouble with the heat. I could recall them into their Pokeballs, but they refused it when I asked them if they'd prefer that. Such was our bond.

Soon enough, I passed out from the cold. Knowing Ninetales and Sandslash were there, I had hopes, but I had already resigned myself to my fate, and just hoped my Pokemon would be okay should this end badly for me.

The next thing I remember, I found myself in a bed in a lit room without windows. I found myself wearing clean clothes, wondering just what had happened. I imagined I was in a hospital until I saw that the room seemed more homely then anything. As I looked around I saw a girl roughly my age, sporting an odd blond hairstyle sitting in a chair, reading. I took a deep breath, and asked "Uh...excuse me...where am I? What happened?" The girl jumped, surprised at me being awake. "Oh I'm so happy you made it alive, I thought you were a goner for sure. I found you in the snowstorm, collapsed under your Pokemon. If you wonder where they are, dont worry, I got your belt with them right here, but you had to lay down. How did you ever end up in that storm?" She asked, a soft ensuring smile on her face. "I...tried to go explore the caves of Mt. Silver...I came ill-prepared." I answered. "Hmm, well, guess you're lucky then that you didn't make it. You wouldn't have survived if you did." She said, now looking rather strict suddenly. I gave her a puzzled look, and asked "What...what do you mean? Are the Pokemon that dangerous?" "No, not the Pokemon, but the humans. You see..." she stood up and unbuttoned her coat, revealing a black shirt with a red R on it. "Mt. Silver is a Team Rocket base, which is also how I found you."

I was pretty shocked by this, ofcourse, but didn't show it, and tried to answer calmly. "So...knowing that, I probably can't leave, right?" She nodded. "Right. But you're in luck. I ran a background check on you and knowing your skills, I contacted our boss. He said I could offer you a position as my sidekick, if you wanted to. If not, there will probably something we can work out, keeping this a secret. Nothing personal, but if you don't keep this a secret, chances are you won't be seeing the light of the next day." That remark send shivers down my spine, but I had made up my mind anyway. "You saved me. I owe my life to you. So I'll take you up on that offer." I smiled, nodding. "Good, smart decision, I'm glad too to finally have someone at least as competent as me around me, instead of those bumbling idiots." She giggled, sticking out her tongue. "My name is Domino, by the way, also known as The Black Tulip or Agent 009. Pleased to meet you Antonio." "Pleased to meet you too"

So that's how I ended up with Team Rocket. I dedicate my life to them now, for they saved mine. So you better prepare for trouble, or Domino and me will make that double, as we protect the world from devastation, uniting all people within our nations. This while we denounce the evil, the truth of love, extending our reach to the stars above. Domino. Antonio. We'll steal your Pokémon at the speed of light, so surrender now, dont even bother to fight.
 
Those are some pretty interesting entries. ;)

Quite coincidental that both of them end up with the main character joining Team Rocket. :p
 
Mystery Author #3 said:
Intervention

“So, when do you plan on telling him?”

Eva’s crystal eyes begin scanning me from head to toe, gauging my aura. Her left paw glows softly, the cobalt colour standing out against the forest backdrop. Clearly she’s receiving my obvious uncertainty regarding her tough question. My hazel eyes water a little. Tightly closing them in a vain attempt to hide this from Eva, I turn away to consider my position. Unfortunately this doesn’t please the blue puppy, as she always hates being left in the dark about anything.

“Come on, I know you still care about him...” she says, trying to coax the answer out of me. “If you really care, don’t you think he has the right to know?”

I sigh softly. “Well, yes... but he isn’t going to like the news... I mean, he never has been one to handle that type of thing.” My mind races by itself, thinking up negative scenarios in an attempt to resist Eva’s stern
gaze. “What if he blames me? What if he tries to... kill me?” I gulp at the thought of the last one; if there’s one quality you could associate with Max, it‘s that he’s VERY vengeful. Murder is well within his capabilities if he felt he was wronged badly enough. Eva isn’t having any of this though.

“Now you’re just making excuses!” she shouts, causing me to spin round and face her anger head on. “If you don’t tell him, who will? And if somebody else tells him... what do you think he’s going to do to you then?

I stare blankly at Eva for several seconds, unsure of what to say. But before I knew what I was saying, I blurt out something that I knew I would instantly regret.

“But he loves yo-“

Before I know it, my face skids painfully across the earthen floor, stopping only when I collide with the roots of a particularly large tree. I shakily get to my feet, inspecting myself for damage briefly (a few grazes under my right eye sums up the worst of it) before cautiously eyeing Eva again. She’s breathing heavily, the aura around her paws red with anger. I hastily try to calm her down before I have to go through another Force Palm like that...

“Eva, calm down... you know he does. There’s nothing we can do about it-“
Another furious attack comes my way, but this time I’m more than ready for it. Leaping expertly out of the way, I figure that the only way to calm Eva down from here is to beat her out of her rage.

“If that’s what you want...”

I take a large gulp of air from my surroundings in and open an internal airway. Upon entering the cavity, the air mixes with my special compounds (the composition of which will always remain a trade secret) and superheat the mixture to blisteringly elevated temperatures. Eva is too angry to notice that I’m preparing a counterattack and blindly thrusts herself forward to deliver another Force Palm to my gut. She doesn’t get the chance though; before she gets within range I exhale the air with as much force as I can muster. Poor Eva is far too close to me to get out of the way in time... and the powerful Heat Wave forces her off of her feet! She flies several metres backward, suffering nasty burns in the process.

The angry red aura surrounding her changes to a very murky purple; this is her trademark mix of anger and sadness. She’s still mad at me, that much I can tell. But seeing that we came to blows over it... brought a sadness out that can only be explained by one thing.

“Let’s... get ONE THING straight, Chris...” she says bitterly, staggering to her feet. I can still see singe marks all over her body... was my attack THAT powerful? “I love you, and you alone. I do not love that pompous black mutt, whether he likes me or not!”

She falls to her knees in pain. Feeling a distinct pang of guilt at causing this pain, I rush over with a Rawst Berry in my mouth. Luckily for me, Eva doesn’t seem to be holding me responsible here – in fact, her expression quickly changes when she sees the emotion in my eyes as I pass her the berry. She gratefully accepts the medical aid. Her aura changes back to her usual calm blue as her body reacts to the soothing qualities of the berry. I breathe a sigh of relief.

“I just don’t know how to break it to him,” I whisper softly, tears welling up in my eyes again. “I mean, you two have been together for a while now... and before you saying anything here,” I say quickly, stopping Eva from interrupting with another ‘I don’t love him’, “you can’t deny that this isn’t the sort of news he would want to hear from me. What am I supposed to say anyhow? ‘Oh, hi Max, by the way, your girlfriend has dumped you and is going out with me now! Your best mate, Chris.’”

“If that’s what you have to tell him,” Eva mutters coldly. She stares deep into my eyes with a fierce determination. I look back slightly fearfully, knowing that something bad is coming. “But know this: if you don’t tell him, I will. And unlike you, I won’t sugar-coat anything!”

A sickening lump forms in the pit of my stomach. When Eva says she won’t sugar-coat anything, she REALLY means it. If that little Riolu even BEGINS to tell Max what she wants to... well, all of our lives could be at stake. Something has to give, and as usual it isn’t going to be Eva.

“Alright, alright, I’ll do it,” I say exasperatedly. I really don’t want Eva to have to spill the truth; it has to be me, or else Max will surely kill Eva. “But I want you to know that this is blackmail – Max is one of my best friends... and this is going to hurt an awful lot, telling him that his girlfriend no longer loves him.”

Eva looks away without remorse. “Well, that’s not my problem is it? Just get your furry little Growlithe hide out there and find him!”

“It will be your problem if he doesn’t listen to me...”

But before Eva can react, I have already taken off. Eva isn’t the QUICKEST of Riolu out there, and being a speedy Growlithe I can easily out speed her in a race. Which is just as well, because if I DON’T I will probably be knocked out cold for my last comment.

That’s just the way Eva is though – even though we are in love, her headstrong personality makes this very hard to see sometimes. I ‘m a lot meeker than Eva, but... perhaps that is why I love her so much – her personality is just so appealing! In any case, it doesn’t help my current predicament to be thinking of her... I have to think about how I’m going to break the news to Max. And stay alive in the process...

The woods around me are a friendly place to be. It isn’t often that serious fights take place here; most of the residents are very close to each other. The same cannot be said about Max’s home though... he happens to live in one of the most gang-ridden urban areas imaginable. How awful that must be... but it fits his personality perfectly. Why I am even friends with the guy is beyond me...

But friends we are, and if I want it to stay that way I need to tell him the truth. My steps begin to become shakier as I trudge through the suburban streets of Goldenrod City. A distinct mood swing had occurred from when I had left the forest; in the city, it appears that there are no rules at all. Vandalism, mostly in the form of graffiti, is rife here; even as I tiptoe past the corner, a group of Mankey are sniggering whilst they deface the nearest lamp post. Another lump of sickness forms in my stomach as I watch the gang work – how could anybody care so little about their surroundings?

Making a quick exit before they spot me, I turn left as I search for Max. I can’t believe Eva could force me into this... even I’m not normally THIS timid. I mean, this place is infested with renegade pokémon that would rather take your head off than talk to you! I don’t even know where I’m going either; Max has only even shown me his house ONCE, and that was only to get the door fixed... sighing, I decide that the best course of action is to try and ask somebody where Max lives. But how do I know who is a friend and who is an enemy?

I nervously scan the streets in an attempt to locate the friendliest possible pokémon to try and talk to. It doesn’t take long before I find a cute little Mareep trio playing with marbles outside a shabby apartment block. It looks like they’re having fun practising their Thundershock attack as they cause the marbles to crash into each other and fly in random directions. I think for a second, and decide that they are the easiest place to start in my search. Caution doesn’t leave me though; I know these streets, and even the innocent can prove to be very aggressive...

“Err, e-excuse me?”

I struggle to get their attention with my meek whimpers, however.

“He-hello?”

They still fail to hear. Either that, or they don’t want to pay attention... I decide to pluck up the courage and make myself heard.

“Excuse me!?”

The closest one turns its head round to face me. It looks a little angry to be interrupted.

“What do you want? We’re playing here.”

“Oh, sorry for the interruption,” I start hastily, not wanting to lose a source before I ask any questions. “I was wondering if you knew where a Houndour called Max lives? I can’t seem to find him...”

The smallest one at the back pipes up. “Oh, we know him! He live in th-“

“Quiet Mark,” the largest one said. He is clearly the eldest, and the leader of the group. “Yeah, Mark there is right – we know where this Max lives. But if you want us to tell YOU, you have to do something for US, you hear?”

I look at this young Mareep nervously. “Like what?”

The eldest Mareep smirks, then shocks forward 3 of the group’s marbles. “You’re a fire type, right? Meld these marbles together for us and we’ll talk.”

I raise an eyebrow. “That’s it?”

Mareep frowns. “What, you want to rob a bank or something?”

I chuckle tentatively. “No no, that’s not it. I just thought that you kids would’ve wanted something more than that... well, here goes.”

I gather fire inside of me (not nearly as much as I used to stop Eva though) and let loose a flurry of blue flames to melt the marbles and fuse them together. The sheep trio watch in awe as I work the cluster together into a round shape, forming a larger single marble as requested. Mark then tells me to throw it into their water bucket (why do Mareep need a water bucket when playing anyhow?) to cool off. A large plume of steam billows out as the marble is thrust into the cold liquid. Mark claps.

“Yaaaaay! Now we have a bigger marble to use more powerful attacks on!”

The eldest Mareep nodded in agreement. “Yeah, you did us a favour there. The name’s Colin. If you want Max, go three blocks down and turn left. His house is on the end of the street there, next to the Poké Mart.” As I turn to walk away, Colin adds something. “Oh, but I’d be careful what you say, because he’s in a bad mood today...”

With this new knowledge in tow, I quicken my journey down the road to find Max. Colin and his group were very helpful, even if it was at a price. But then again, this is a ghetto; you get nothing if you don’t pay for it. Usually you get nothing even if you DO pay for it though, so I guess I’m grateful to have even gleaned the information I required out of the kids.

The blocks I pass are in an even more rundown state than anything else I had seen in this dreadful city. ‘Goldenrod’ is it? There’s not even any TRACE of anything golden in this place... why is Max living in such an awful area? No wonder he’s upset...

Finally catching a glimpse of the Poké Mart, I make a run for the left turn. The house Max is meant to live in is surprisingly well kept for the neighbourhood; for one, it has a roof. For another, it has a front door (always helpful for making sure somebody doesn’t come into your house and breaks everything I suppose). Beyond the basic necessities though, it just LOOKS posh compared to the rest of this godforsaken land. I guess THIS is why Max lives here... a little bit of light in the darkness of the area.
With my heart beating faster than ever, I reach the front door and nudge the bell. Max comes up and motions me inside, quickly shutting the door as soon as I get inside. I anxiously take a seat in what I presume to be his living room and await the first move from him.

“Chris! Long time no see man! How are you?”

“Not bad...” I say softly, trying not to let on that I have bad news. It doesn’t work; Max clearly recognises that something is wrong, and gives me a long stare. This only makes me more uneasy though... does he already know?

“Chris,” he starts, “is there something you’re not telling me?”

His tone is so soft, so... dangerous. This isn’t the sort of voice you want to hear as you are preparing to tell a friend that his girlfriend is dumping him for you...

“Well, there’s something important I need to say.” I gulp as I steel myself for the next phase. “It’s about Eva.”

Max looks ominously on at me, saying nothing. I pause to gather courage before continuing.

“She... she... sh-“

“No longer loves you!”

Max and I both turn round in shock as Eva makes her presence felt in a painfully obvious fashion. Max can’t seem to bring himself to say anything, merely looking in disbelief.

“Bu... but Eva... wh-why?”

Eva looks Max straight in the eye in disgust. “Because you are an arrogant gangster who treats females like slaves! There’s no way I could continue on like that!” She turns to face me. “I could see you were never going to tell him, so I had to come and do it myself.

I begin to look at Eva emotively, half thanking her for saving me from having to say that, and half loving her for taking charge like that. Unfortunately for us, all Max sees is love... and his eyes narrow as a result.

“So let me get this straight” he growls, venom oozing from every syllable. “You have chosen him over me!? I thought we were friends, Chris...”

I start to back up, sensing danger. “Max, you know I wouldn’t do this on purpo-“

SILENCE!” he roared, causing even Eva to step back in fear. “This... this friendship is over! You have 5 seconds to get both of your hides out of here before I send my gang after you... and believe me; you don’t want to cross them. Not when I call a vendetta!”
“Max, please!”

But not even Eva’s pleas can get to Max now.

NO! You... you have both betrayed me! And now you will be punished!”
 
I'm not sure if I'll have time to enter. Bummer though. Had a really good story but it's not related to pokemon. :(
 
charidude said:
I'm not sure if I'll have time to enter. Bummer though. Had a really good story but it's not related to pokemon. :(
just add in some pokemon! that's what I did once :D
 
The idea is difficult. I have no idea, no I'll pass on this one and try to enter the next month's contest.
 
There hasn't been many new stories recently... come on people! Get those fics in :S
 
gamercal, this is a difficult topic to write about. It's hard because not many people do a topic like this.
 
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