Writing Superhero Member story thing? Chapter 2 Is up People :)

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I want to join!

[Name]: Does not have one
[Good or evil]: evil... until I am needed.
[What Pokemon do you want your suit based around]:Lucario
*looks up sadly at his username*
 
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[Name]: Brett
[Good or Evil]: I am on Matt's side. Good. :)
[What Pokemon]: Charizard...DUH
 
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[Name] Anthony
[Godd or evil] Good
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Gallade, Celebi, Chomp, Jolteon
 
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I may scrap the whole idea and just make the prolouge again ok guys!
 
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Scrap the idea?...

You mean, not write it? Or rewrite the prologue? :/
 
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Well this is just too messy so i might start again and scrap the idea and write everythings again, don't worry guys that haqve signed up! I will take a note of your names and write i on the first page of my other one ok?
 
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DON'T MAKE ANOTHER THREAD. Just rewrite the prologue and introduction. : S
 
RE: Superhero Member story thing? Prologe and Chapter 1 will soon be made again!

Actually I changed my mind. I want to be evil for the whole story!
 
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Ok then charizard!
 
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Interesting...

Faviroute?
 
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Prolouge
It was depressing to see so much rain. Pokebeach, the city that everyone loved and had fun in. It was a Utopia. Marc was on his way home from his job, his boring job. Marc’s job was a Post Man. Delivering letters to the same people the same houses wasn’t much fun. Marc’s blond hair was now darkened by the rain and had slopped in his eyes. He had hazel green eyes. Not to mention his pale skin, probably bleached by the computer monitor. One of his faviroute hobbies was computers. Marc loved the whole idea of it. He wished he wasn’t in the cold and rain, Marc wished that he was getting warmed by his house. By his computer monitor and wished that something actually exciting would actually happen in Pokebeach. His bag was getting wetter by the minute and his new vans shoes were getting wet. He muttered “at least tomorrow it would be the ceremony of the energy saving program”. Marc was right tomorrow was going to be the event of the week that everyone was looking forward to.

The event was the program: N.E.S.P (Nuclear Energy Saving Program). In charge were in course the governors of Pokebeach. Especially Water Pokémon Master he was very fond of energy saving, he was the leader of Pokebeach and very well respected. Every one that lives in Pokebeach would be there. The ones that had signed up and had got an email from WPM, personally saying that you now an official citizen of Pokebeach. Not the guests that live there live on Pokebeach’s ground and spend pokebeach’s money. But no they don’t do anything to help the city of pokebeach do they? They just live here. It was only going to be the members and citizens of pokebeach that would be at the glorious event.

In charge of N.E.S.P. was a small and witty professor, Professor Umptuck. He was working alongside WPM to make the generator. Not to mention the human sized robot Nasda. Nasda was Professor Umptuck’s best and only friend. Nasda had paintwork that was yellow and black with red eyes. Her voice was always cool and female, like the ones that you get in the elevators. One day the professor was working in his office on the final stage of the generator. “I better get paid well” The professor mumbled.
“I’m sure you will, I mean you’ve been working on this project for over 5 months” Replied the ever so helpful assistance of the professor.
“It’s tomorrow so I’m sure I will be alright” Beamed the professor. Without noticing the assistant bot, Nasda got out a surgeon knife, Umptuck was ever so fond of biology as well in his study. Umptuck looked across at the bot and cried “What are you doing Nasda?” Her eyes now more dark red, the sort of red that tells you to don’t do it or else its trouble! Nasda held up the knife to her head and kicked the professor in the shins. Umptuck fell to the floor his hands held up. He screamed a deigning screamed. Nasda coolly said “Goodbye friend”. Before he knew it the professor had a knife in his stomach. Red was gushing out of his stomach, collecting at the door. Nasda had no mercy for the 48 year old.
Why did Nasda kill her own creator. Sorry about re-writing it!
 
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Veeerrryyy nice, cool to have the robot too :>.

BTW, Nasda changed to Nada halfway through. Might wanna fix that. ^_^
 
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Much better ^_^
Although still quite short but i guess it is a prolouge :)
 
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[Name] LV (But use: Sakura)
[Godd or evil] Good
[what pokemon do you want your suit based around] Luxray, Leafia, Glacia & Vaporeon.
Edit: They all have ribbons that looks like Skymins "flower".
 
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:DF11: said:
Much better ^_^
Although still quite short but I guess it is a prolouge
HOW WAS THAT SHORT ^^
 
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For a prologue, it's not terribly short and the plot so far seems very interesting.
Keep up the good work. ^^
 
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Cheers Raptor, chapter 1 will be up! By today!
 
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I never said it was too short lol ^_^
/me waits for next chapter :D
 
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A super hero idea for Pokebeach? That's a unique idea. My favorite thing in the Prologue is the evil robot, which sets a villainous mood for the story. Is Fridge responsible (because of Rotom)? I can't wait for Chapter 1. If possible, I'd like to sign up.

Name: Musical
Good or Evil: Good
The pokemon I want my suit to be based off of: Crobat
 
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Thansk musical, funningly enough my mum saw Wicked!!! Nah rotom is ok, he will have plasma swords, but if you do something impossible than never mind I will just make it die in one second!
 
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