Writing Tetris Revolution

Who's your favorite character so far?

  • Violet

    Votes: 2 22.2%
  • Tommy

    Votes: 1 11.1%
  • The blocks

    Votes: 6 66.7%

  • Total voters
    9
GoRockQuadsGiratina said:
Oh, I'm going into 7th grade. And still haven't hit my growth spurth.
Yeah, I should be going into 7th, but I had to repeat Kindergarten because of my B-day. It's not my grades, I'm in a Gifted and talented class, and got about 4 B's total my entire life.
 
Yeah, that almost happened to my sister. She went to kindergarten at the age of four. You're in Gifted and Talented, too?
Awesome! I am too! I remember I had to take a test. It was kind of like a puzzle. I SO aced it. :D
 
GoRockQuadsGiratina said:
Yeah, that almost happened to my sister. She went to kindergarten at the age of four. You're in Gifted and Talented, too?
Awesome! I am too! I remember I had to take a test. It was kind of like a puzzle. I SO aced it. :D
:cool: SWEET! Girl Twin! How long have you been in? I took the test every year since first, but got in in 4th.:D

mariomaniac said:
MAKE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!
Don't be Violet... I'll get more ideas tomorrow... the plot's dying down... or not! The electrolytes came back on!
 
Ooh, there's big, scary clouds outside right now. ):( Maybe in Tetris Revolution, a big, dark cloud comes and then it starts raining BIG TETRIS BLOCKS!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA*gasp* A-hem, sorry for the random outburst. *brushes shoulder off*
 
GoRockQuadsGiratina said:
Ooh, there's big, scary clouds outside right now. ):( Maybe in Tetris Revolution, a big, dark cloud comes and then it starts raining BIG TETRIS BLOCKS!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA*gasp* A-hem, sorry for the random outburst. *brushes shoulder off*
Nice, now I got mop up the floor.:( Do you have a cell? If so, PM me with your number.
 
GoRockQuadsGiratina said:
No, I don't. But I like talking to you on the computer.
Aw, that sucks. Oh well, Internet For The Totular Winz (and girl twin) !

Shining Suicune said:
GoRockQuadsGiratina said:
No, I don't. But I like talking to you on the computer.
Aw, that sucks. Oh well, Internet For The Totular Winz (and girl twin) !
Maybe we're Soul(Silver) Mates.
 
Eww, NO!! That's gross. I hafta know a guy who is nice to for a dang year before I pull off a stunt like that!! WE ARE ON-LY FRIENDS! We are, like, twins. A-hem, sorry if I was rude, mariomaniac.
 
mariomaniac said:
Are you guys's hooking up on PokeBeach?!?
What she said. :D LOL.

Tetris Revolution
Chapter 6: "I am 'M!" A voice echoed, seemingly out of the Gameboy. " 'M?! But... but,but... you're a friggin' computer program!" Tommy shouted at 'M.
"HOW DARE YOU DEFY ME, FLESH BAG!!!!! I AM SUPERIOR TO YOU!!!" 'M then phased out of the Gameboy and into the real world, almost unnaturally. "Hmmm... I like it here... however, that is not the matter..." 'M quickly zipped off in a mess of pixels, going to an unknown place... "Where did he go?!" Shouted Violet, at Tommy. "I don't know, but let's search!" Tommy replied back. Meanwhile, many screams were coming from the arcade, all the way across the mall...
 
you need to update the first post with all of the chapters back to back. that way, people reading for the first time wont have to search.\
... anyways, its great so far!
 
Two things:

1) Make your chapters longer. Seriously, at the moment it's a paragraph per chapter. You should make less chapters with more content in the future.

2) A lot of the comments to the story are either completely off topic or total spam. Don't do that guys.
 
Tetris Revolution
Chapter 7: "Help!" The Tetrads were screaming in the arcade. "Wait, stop... Vy, I hear something!" Tommy said to Violet. "Queen Violet!" This was the Tetrads name for Violet, of course. "Help us!" They were screaming even louder now. "BE QUIET!" Screamed 'M at the Tetrads. "That's it..." 'M then started glowing. "We made it, Tommy! Look, 'M's attacking them!" Violet said. "Oh no!" Tommy replied. "What?, he's just glowing." "No, there's more. He using-" "SKY ATTACK!" 'M shouted as he charged towards the Tetrads. "Help, Queen Violet!" The Tetrads shouted, before sucking Violet and Tommy into the Tetris machine. "Thank you, savior." A voice told her. "Do you know why you're here?" "No, I'm not sure who you are, either." Violet replied. "I... am, no, was... the ruler of this land... Then 'M came along... My name is Lady Tetra. You have been summoned here as you are one of the most powerful knights in the land, as are you, Thomas. Now, if I may, let me introduce you to your fellow warriors... Mario." The plumber was instantly recognized by Tommy, as was the next. "Link, Samus, and finally, Kirby...."
 
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