The Beginning of the Beginning of Beginnings.
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Yep his name is braden and when do the characters meet again?
king deoxazard,
can u make my charicter go away permadntly.
because my charicter gets like 10 words a chapter and nothing else happens ot him
can u make my charicter go away permadntly.
because my charicter gets like 10 words a chapter and nothing else happens ot him
Now here is what you all have been waitin' for!
Chapter 3: Can you FACE the heat?
After an astonishing rescue by Max, John and his fellow Pokemon have started to hit the road again!
"Man, I wonder how Max was able to get to us that quickly, eh Charmander?" John said.
"Char, Charmander," Charmander said, walking with more confidence this time. The pair walked in silence for a while, until a voice yelled, "LOOK OUT!!!" A boy that looked around the age of eleven was running swiftly toward John and Charmander. At first, John thought nothing was wrong, that was until a whole bunch of Pidgey started to chase down the brown-haired boy.
"We need help Eevee!" John screamed as he tossed Eevee's Pokeball.
"Eevee,vee!" Eevee exclaimed.
"Eevee! Use Growl to scare those Pidgey away!" John commanded. The Eevee yowled out a vicious growl attack and the Pidgey made a wise choice and backed off. "Good job Eevee, now return and have a nice rest."
"Whoa, thanks sir, I thought I was gonna be Pecked to death by those Pidgey," the boy said sheepishly.
"It's o.k, just don't call me sir, who are you?"
"I'm Mark, and I'm trying to find a guy named John, you know him?" Mark said.
"Why?" John said suspiciously.
"I really want to battle him, he's got like the best lookin' Eevee, and I want it REALLY badly," Mark said.
"Mark, I AM John," John said uncomfortably. Did Mark want his Eevee?
"Wh-, wh-, HOW DID YOU GET THE EEVEE?!"
"Uhh.... let's say it was very cheap and some guy sold it to me."
"Oh, YEAH? Well let's have a quick battle, one-on-one, and the winner gets the other guy's Pokemon of their choice!" Mark said seethingly.
"Hold on! You can't just battle for another guy's good partner, it's like some guy kidnapping your Pokemon!" John said. "But I won't back down from a battle though! Let's just forget about a refer-"
"I'll be the ref," a running Max said, as he sprinted toward the two of them. "I heard one-on-one, right?"
"Yeah, winner gets the guy's Pokemon of their choice," Max said.
"Fine, it's your Pokemon," Max said. "Get into place now, ALL RIGHT! This will be a one-on-one Pokemon battle with John from Pallet town and this guy from somewhere!"
"That's Mark from Viridian to you, stupid," Mark said, expressing anger on his face. "Yeah, and I choose you, Machop!!"
"Charmander! He's all yours!!" John said.
"Hey, Machop is a girl, so be quiet," Mark said.
"Oh," John muttered, he had never seen a girl Machop.
"BEGIN!" Max yelled.
"Machop! Karate Chop Charmander!"
"Dodge quick, then Scratch!" John said.
"Heh, I was expecting Apple Throw..." Max said. Machop had clearly missed his karate chop, and Charmander hit full force with his claws, knocking Machop down, but not out.
"Machop, SEISMIC TOSS!!" Mark screamed, as Machop began to reach for the fire lizard.
"Charmander, full power Ember!" John yelled. Machop was again on the ground, but this time John seized his chance.
"Charmander, finish him off with SLASH!!" John said. This time, Mark was ready,
"MACHOP!! EARTHQUAKE!!" Mark yelled at the top of his lungs. Machop crashed the ground, and Charmander was immobilized. "Now Mega Punch him!" Charmander was knocked flat onto the ground, and he was critically injured.
"CHARMANDER!! NOO!" John yelled in despair. At that, Charmander got up and unleashed a huge Flamethrower attack.
"CHAAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!!" Charmander bursted out.
"Machop! Use REVERSAL!!" Mark screamed.
Both attacks clashed, and a huge explosion had occurred. Will Machop win the battle, and will John's Eevee be Mark's? Or will Charmander come out on top, and will one of Mark's Pokemon be John's? Find out soon!!
Phew... 46:32 of working! That's 42 minutes and 32 seconds, COMMENT!
Chapter 3: Can you FACE the heat?
After an astonishing rescue by Max, John and his fellow Pokemon have started to hit the road again!
"Man, I wonder how Max was able to get to us that quickly, eh Charmander?" John said.
"Char, Charmander," Charmander said, walking with more confidence this time. The pair walked in silence for a while, until a voice yelled, "LOOK OUT!!!" A boy that looked around the age of eleven was running swiftly toward John and Charmander. At first, John thought nothing was wrong, that was until a whole bunch of Pidgey started to chase down the brown-haired boy.
"We need help Eevee!" John screamed as he tossed Eevee's Pokeball.
"Eevee,vee!" Eevee exclaimed.
"Eevee! Use Growl to scare those Pidgey away!" John commanded. The Eevee yowled out a vicious growl attack and the Pidgey made a wise choice and backed off. "Good job Eevee, now return and have a nice rest."
"Whoa, thanks sir, I thought I was gonna be Pecked to death by those Pidgey," the boy said sheepishly.
"It's o.k, just don't call me sir, who are you?"
"I'm Mark, and I'm trying to find a guy named John, you know him?" Mark said.
"Why?" John said suspiciously.
"I really want to battle him, he's got like the best lookin' Eevee, and I want it REALLY badly," Mark said.
"Mark, I AM John," John said uncomfortably. Did Mark want his Eevee?
"Wh-, wh-, HOW DID YOU GET THE EEVEE?!"
"Uhh.... let's say it was very cheap and some guy sold it to me."
"Oh, YEAH? Well let's have a quick battle, one-on-one, and the winner gets the other guy's Pokemon of their choice!" Mark said seethingly.
"Hold on! You can't just battle for another guy's good partner, it's like some guy kidnapping your Pokemon!" John said. "But I won't back down from a battle though! Let's just forget about a refer-"
"I'll be the ref," a running Max said, as he sprinted toward the two of them. "I heard one-on-one, right?"
"Yeah, winner gets the guy's Pokemon of their choice," Max said.
"Fine, it's your Pokemon," Max said. "Get into place now, ALL RIGHT! This will be a one-on-one Pokemon battle with John from Pallet town and this guy from somewhere!"
"That's Mark from Viridian to you, stupid," Mark said, expressing anger on his face. "Yeah, and I choose you, Machop!!"
"Charmander! He's all yours!!" John said.
"Hey, Machop is a girl, so be quiet," Mark said.
"Oh," John muttered, he had never seen a girl Machop.
"BEGIN!" Max yelled.
"Machop! Karate Chop Charmander!"
"Dodge quick, then Scratch!" John said.
"Heh, I was expecting Apple Throw..." Max said. Machop had clearly missed his karate chop, and Charmander hit full force with his claws, knocking Machop down, but not out.
"Machop, SEISMIC TOSS!!" Mark screamed, as Machop began to reach for the fire lizard.
"Charmander, full power Ember!" John yelled. Machop was again on the ground, but this time John seized his chance.
"Charmander, finish him off with SLASH!!" John said. This time, Mark was ready,
"MACHOP!! EARTHQUAKE!!" Mark yelled at the top of his lungs. Machop crashed the ground, and Charmander was immobilized. "Now Mega Punch him!" Charmander was knocked flat onto the ground, and he was critically injured.
"CHARMANDER!! NOO!" John yelled in despair. At that, Charmander got up and unleashed a huge Flamethrower attack.
"CHAAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!!" Charmander bursted out.
"Machop! Use REVERSAL!!" Mark screamed.
Both attacks clashed, and a huge explosion had occurred. Will Machop win the battle, and will John's Eevee be Mark's? Or will Charmander come out on top, and will one of Mark's Pokemon be John's? Find out soon!!
Phew... 46:32 of working! That's 42 minutes and 32 seconds, COMMENT!
Okay, sorry I didn't give your character a speaking part, and DudeMan, you don't have to get angry.
Chapter Two Continuation:
Our heros are just ariving in Viridian City, When they notice a big mass of grass missing.
"I wonder what happened here." Terry said.
"Dont know." Kyle said.
"Char, Charmeleon." Blaze said.
"Char, Charmander." Flame said.
"Oh well, hey theres the Gym!" Kyle said.
"Dude I dont think it's open." Terry said, "I remember that the teacher at pokemon school said that the Viridian Gym is closed."
"Well lets just see anyway." Kyle said tugging on the bars that alow you into the Gym.
Sudenly the door flung open and Kyle flew back and out came three men dressid in red, two were had horened red hoods over thier heds and an M on their chests, and the other one had red hair with an M on his heart.
Terry and Kyle ran to the side of the Gym before the men could even notice them.
"It turns out Giavoni isn't here Maxie, sir." one of the men.
"Dee, da, dee! I have eyes ya know!" Maxie said.
"Yes sir." the first grunt said.
"Let's keep moving, mabey we'll find him at five Island in Rocket headquarters." Maxie said.
"Magma Operatives." Terry whispeared.
"Uh oh, their headed this way!" Kyle whispeared back.
Maxie and his grunts walked around to Terry and Kyle. They tried to run but it was to late, the grunts had found them.
"Hey kids were you spying on us?!" the second grunt asked.
"Nope, we were just passing by." Terry said.
"Oh, okay, lets go guys they were just passing by." The second grunt said.
"No, you idiate!" the first grunt muttered as he puncked the second grunt in the back, "What are your names kids?"
"I'm Flufferpantys Jhonsinsmire, and this is Yernomay Mattafella." Kyle said.
"Oh, so I ges your not those guys who saw the Arsues then." The first grunt said.
"BOTH OF YOU ARE IDIATS!!!!" Maxie shouted while smacking both grunts in the back of the head.
"Well lets go now!" Terry (or Yernomay Mattafella) said.
"Yeah, lets go!" Kyle (or Flufferpantys Jhonsinmire) said.
"ENOUGH NONSENSE!" Maxie shouted, "You don't know who your dealing with, so to show you I'm going to battle this kid who claims to be Yernamay Mattafella! So what is your real name?!"
"Terry! And I exept your challenge!" Terry (Thank goodness we can call him by his real name) said.
"So you are the boys who saw the Arsues! How about if I when I get information about were Arsues is!" Maxie said.
"Fine!" Terry said.
To be continued...
Chapter Two Continuation:
Our heros are just ariving in Viridian City, When they notice a big mass of grass missing.
"I wonder what happened here." Terry said.
"Dont know." Kyle said.
"Char, Charmeleon." Blaze said.
"Char, Charmander." Flame said.
"Oh well, hey theres the Gym!" Kyle said.
"Dude I dont think it's open." Terry said, "I remember that the teacher at pokemon school said that the Viridian Gym is closed."
"Well lets just see anyway." Kyle said tugging on the bars that alow you into the Gym.
Sudenly the door flung open and Kyle flew back and out came three men dressid in red, two were had horened red hoods over thier heds and an M on their chests, and the other one had red hair with an M on his heart.
Terry and Kyle ran to the side of the Gym before the men could even notice them.
"It turns out Giavoni isn't here Maxie, sir." one of the men.
"Dee, da, dee! I have eyes ya know!" Maxie said.
"Yes sir." the first grunt said.
"Let's keep moving, mabey we'll find him at five Island in Rocket headquarters." Maxie said.
"Magma Operatives." Terry whispeared.
"Uh oh, their headed this way!" Kyle whispeared back.
Maxie and his grunts walked around to Terry and Kyle. They tried to run but it was to late, the grunts had found them.
"Hey kids were you spying on us?!" the second grunt asked.
"Nope, we were just passing by." Terry said.
"Oh, okay, lets go guys they were just passing by." The second grunt said.
"No, you idiate!" the first grunt muttered as he puncked the second grunt in the back, "What are your names kids?"
"I'm Flufferpantys Jhonsinsmire, and this is Yernomay Mattafella." Kyle said.
"Oh, so I ges your not those guys who saw the Arsues then." The first grunt said.
"BOTH OF YOU ARE IDIATS!!!!" Maxie shouted while smacking both grunts in the back of the head.
"Well lets go now!" Terry (or Yernomay Mattafella) said.
"Yeah, lets go!" Kyle (or Flufferpantys Jhonsinmire) said.
"ENOUGH NONSENSE!" Maxie shouted, "You don't know who your dealing with, so to show you I'm going to battle this kid who claims to be Yernamay Mattafella! So what is your real name?!"
"Terry! And I exept your challenge!" Terry (Thank goodness we can call him by his real name) said.
"So you are the boys who saw the Arsues! How about if I when I get information about were Arsues is!" Maxie said.
"Fine!" Terry said.
To be continued...
Okay Boss! I need to know one thing though, what will hapen to me when the characters meet in chapter four? Will we both write about the four characters, or will I be fired?
To try not to give this part away, I'll tell you when to stop writing, right now, just get to chapter 4, and STOP. I will then write chapter 4 & 5 and have a WHOLE new chapter set up. For now, just get to chapter 4, and I'm getting short on time, so maybe I'll get to write the rest.... NOW.
Chapter 3 continuation..
In a large puff of smoke, John and a new friend Mark have met up in a battle for one of the other's Pokemon. While John had Charmander use a Flamethrower, and Mark commanding Machop for a Reversal attack, we do not know about who will win this intense, and heated battle.
"Hang in there Charmander!!" John yelled, praying for Charmander to stay in the kerfuffle. (You might want to look that word up, I think it means cluster or argument)
"C'mon Machop!! You've got to do this!!!" Mark said, coughing in his arm. A few seconds later, a huge light erupted from where the Pokemon had been fighting, and all that was left was a note.
"Wait a moment!! This battle must be forfeited by the referee, and we will resume this battle later!" Max said.
"WHAT!? Where'd our Pokemon go?" John said, running for the note. "What's this?"
"Well, don't just stand there! Read it!" Mark said furiously.
"Geez! Chill out. Here, it says,'On top of a hill we will meet once more, and one last battle will settle the score.' What the heck?" John read.
"Well, we better start lookin' for a hill.....A," Max suggested. The threesome walked around looking for a hill that might lead them to this mysterious "A."
"Hey!! I found it!" Mark hollered, and the boys all went to the hill.
"Well, let's get going!" John said. The three boys walked up the tiresome hill, and they finally had reached the top.
"This is weird, I was hoping something would be here," Max said. As they walked toward the edge, a huge warehouse loomed over them.
"I see you've made it," a person said behind them. The boys looked back and saw a man with a mask and a black cloak on.
"Who are you!?" John demanded.
"Me? I'm just merely a man who wants to make his way in the world by stealing Pokemon.... or 'A,' " the person said.
"YOU! You were the one who stole our Pokemon!" Mark had screamed.
"Yes, it was I who left that note, and if you want your Pokemon, I suggest you battle me," the man said in reply.
"Fine! If it's a battle you want, it's a battle you'll get!" John had snapped back. "Let's make it a 1 Pokemon double battle!"
"Sure... just don't feel bad when I beat you..." the man said coldly.
"Wait... I'm battling too, right?" Mark questioned.
"Yeah! You want your Pokemon back, right!?" John yelled.
"All right, then let's go!!" Mark said.
"Fools, then I'll send my Pokemon out first... go Raticate! You too Cubone!" the man said.
"Eevee! Go!" John screamed.
"Eevee! Eevee!" Eevee said, glowing its colors.
"All right, Cubone huh? Then, Poliwag, I choose you!!" Mark said in confidence.
"Poli, Poliwag!" Poliwag said.
"Go ahead.... make your move..." the mysterious figure said.
"Eevee! Sand-Attack!" John commanded. A large amount of dust floated in the air, and Raticate and Cubone could not see a thing.
"Now Poliwag, use Water Gun!" Mark yelled.
"Raticate, use Quick Attack, while Cubone, use Bonemerang!" the man said. The pair moved swiftly, and none of them were hit, but fortunately for Poliwag, the Bonemerang attack missed.
"Nice dodge Poliwag!" Mark said proudly.
"Sweet! My Sand-Attack really must have decreased their accuracy!" John said in astonishment. "Now Eevee, let's shake things up with a Mud-Slap on Cubone!" Eevee had hit Cubone hard, and Cubone was left dazed, unable to move.
"Cubone!! No!" A said. "Whatever, Raticate, Super Fang!" Raticate's teeth bit down hard on Poliwag, knocking him backward.
"Poliwag!" Mark exclaimed. Once again, our heroes are caught in another enraging battle, with Mark and John tag teaming against the suspicous A, who could win this horrifying battle for their Pokemon partners?
Chapter 3 continuation..
In a large puff of smoke, John and a new friend Mark have met up in a battle for one of the other's Pokemon. While John had Charmander use a Flamethrower, and Mark commanding Machop for a Reversal attack, we do not know about who will win this intense, and heated battle.
"Hang in there Charmander!!" John yelled, praying for Charmander to stay in the kerfuffle. (You might want to look that word up, I think it means cluster or argument)
"C'mon Machop!! You've got to do this!!!" Mark said, coughing in his arm. A few seconds later, a huge light erupted from where the Pokemon had been fighting, and all that was left was a note.
"Wait a moment!! This battle must be forfeited by the referee, and we will resume this battle later!" Max said.
"WHAT!? Where'd our Pokemon go?" John said, running for the note. "What's this?"
"Well, don't just stand there! Read it!" Mark said furiously.
"Geez! Chill out. Here, it says,'On top of a hill we will meet once more, and one last battle will settle the score.' What the heck?" John read.
"Well, we better start lookin' for a hill.....A," Max suggested. The threesome walked around looking for a hill that might lead them to this mysterious "A."
"Hey!! I found it!" Mark hollered, and the boys all went to the hill.
"Well, let's get going!" John said. The three boys walked up the tiresome hill, and they finally had reached the top.
"This is weird, I was hoping something would be here," Max said. As they walked toward the edge, a huge warehouse loomed over them.
"I see you've made it," a person said behind them. The boys looked back and saw a man with a mask and a black cloak on.
"Who are you!?" John demanded.
"Me? I'm just merely a man who wants to make his way in the world by stealing Pokemon.... or 'A,' " the person said.
"YOU! You were the one who stole our Pokemon!" Mark had screamed.
"Yes, it was I who left that note, and if you want your Pokemon, I suggest you battle me," the man said in reply.
"Fine! If it's a battle you want, it's a battle you'll get!" John had snapped back. "Let's make it a 1 Pokemon double battle!"
"Sure... just don't feel bad when I beat you..." the man said coldly.
"Wait... I'm battling too, right?" Mark questioned.
"Yeah! You want your Pokemon back, right!?" John yelled.
"All right, then let's go!!" Mark said.
"Fools, then I'll send my Pokemon out first... go Raticate! You too Cubone!" the man said.
"Eevee! Go!" John screamed.
"Eevee! Eevee!" Eevee said, glowing its colors.
"All right, Cubone huh? Then, Poliwag, I choose you!!" Mark said in confidence.
"Poli, Poliwag!" Poliwag said.
"Go ahead.... make your move..." the mysterious figure said.
"Eevee! Sand-Attack!" John commanded. A large amount of dust floated in the air, and Raticate and Cubone could not see a thing.
"Now Poliwag, use Water Gun!" Mark yelled.
"Raticate, use Quick Attack, while Cubone, use Bonemerang!" the man said. The pair moved swiftly, and none of them were hit, but fortunately for Poliwag, the Bonemerang attack missed.
"Nice dodge Poliwag!" Mark said proudly.
"Sweet! My Sand-Attack really must have decreased their accuracy!" John said in astonishment. "Now Eevee, let's shake things up with a Mud-Slap on Cubone!" Eevee had hit Cubone hard, and Cubone was left dazed, unable to move.
"Cubone!! No!" A said. "Whatever, Raticate, Super Fang!" Raticate's teeth bit down hard on Poliwag, knocking him backward.
"Poliwag!" Mark exclaimed. Once again, our heroes are caught in another enraging battle, with Mark and John tag teaming against the suspicous A, who could win this horrifying battle for their Pokemon partners?
Don't do that!plz continue yr story,i always come and see yr stories,plz don't quit.
Thank you Metagross!! You are my all time favorite reader of this story! Now, here you have been waiting 12 days for this, so here is what finally happens to John, Mark, and "A."
Chapter 3 continuation....
"POLIWAG!! NOO!" Mark screamed out to his Pokemon.
"Pol-Poli," Poliwag barely muttered, as he tried to get up on his feet.
"Mark! Let Poliwag rest, he's injured, you need to use a potion or something!!" John called to his teammate. Mark rummaged through his duffle bag and found nothing but a few Lum berries and an Oran berry.
"DANG IT!! Stupid berries...." Mark yelled out in anger.
"WAIT! That Oran berry might help! Toss it to Poliwag!" John advised to Mark.
"Enough of this talking! Raticate! SUPER FANG!" A said.
"Eevee! Jump in front of Poliwag and use Sand-Attack!" John ordered.
"Hey! Poliwag! Eat this quick!" Mark hollered as he threw the Oran berry at his injured tadpole Pokemon. Poliwag slowly nibbled at the berry, and soon looked a bit healthier. Meanwhile, Raticate only bit through dust and sand, and could not attack the duo.
"It worked!" John said happily. "Now Eevee!! BITE!"
"EEVEE!!" Eevee cried out as he jumped onto Raticate, lashing out at him.
"Poliwag! Use Hypnosis on Raticate!" Mark commanded.
"POLI!!" Poliwag responded, sending out many waves toward Raticate.
"Eevee! Jump off of Raticate!" John said. The hypnotic waves struck Raticate, and he fell to the ground.
"WE DID IT JOHN!!" Mark said. "We beat uh...A!"
"HAHAHA!!" A cackled. "You know I like to count my Pidgey AFTER they hatch." At that, Raticate woke up, and looking much stronger at that.
"RATICATE!" Raticate seethed through his clenched fangs.
"USE HYPER BEAM!!!" A yelled. A large beam of light illuminated the night, and our heroes were left blinded.
"EEVEE!!!" Eevee screamed.
"POLIWAAAG!!" Poliwag yelled in agony.
"JOHN! MARK!" Max tried to say, but his words were drowned into the Hyper Beam.
"That's it Dragonite!!! DRAGON RAGE!!" a voice from afar said.
Chapter 3 continuation....
"POLIWAG!! NOO!" Mark screamed out to his Pokemon.
"Pol-Poli," Poliwag barely muttered, as he tried to get up on his feet.
"Mark! Let Poliwag rest, he's injured, you need to use a potion or something!!" John called to his teammate. Mark rummaged through his duffle bag and found nothing but a few Lum berries and an Oran berry.
"DANG IT!! Stupid berries...." Mark yelled out in anger.
"WAIT! That Oran berry might help! Toss it to Poliwag!" John advised to Mark.
"Enough of this talking! Raticate! SUPER FANG!" A said.
"Eevee! Jump in front of Poliwag and use Sand-Attack!" John ordered.
"Hey! Poliwag! Eat this quick!" Mark hollered as he threw the Oran berry at his injured tadpole Pokemon. Poliwag slowly nibbled at the berry, and soon looked a bit healthier. Meanwhile, Raticate only bit through dust and sand, and could not attack the duo.
"It worked!" John said happily. "Now Eevee!! BITE!"
"EEVEE!!" Eevee cried out as he jumped onto Raticate, lashing out at him.
"Poliwag! Use Hypnosis on Raticate!" Mark commanded.
"POLI!!" Poliwag responded, sending out many waves toward Raticate.
"Eevee! Jump off of Raticate!" John said. The hypnotic waves struck Raticate, and he fell to the ground.
"WE DID IT JOHN!!" Mark said. "We beat uh...A!"
"HAHAHA!!" A cackled. "You know I like to count my Pidgey AFTER they hatch." At that, Raticate woke up, and looking much stronger at that.
"RATICATE!" Raticate seethed through his clenched fangs.
"USE HYPER BEAM!!!" A yelled. A large beam of light illuminated the night, and our heroes were left blinded.
"EEVEE!!!" Eevee screamed.
"POLIWAAAG!!" Poliwag yelled in agony.
"JOHN! MARK!" Max tried to say, but his words were drowned into the Hyper Beam.
"That's it Dragonite!!! DRAGON RAGE!!" a voice from afar said.
OMG this is 100% beast i cant wait till the next part of this story!!!!