I like it. It seems fun. Do it.
I saw a few grammatical errors (The humans began to wonder and drift around *their* new world) but nothing bad.
Plot seems cool and has potential for a good story.
Are pokemon intelligent? Can they talk to humans?
Maybe explain the conflict more (something better than pokemon didn't want to play with kids, maybe more like they didn't like being enslaved, doing humans' dirty work, etc)
In other news: Someone should make a Terra Nova inspired RPG. That would be so BA.
I saw a few grammatical errors (The humans began to wonder and drift around *their* new world) but nothing bad.
Plot seems cool and has potential for a good story.
Are pokemon intelligent? Can they talk to humans?
Maybe explain the conflict more (something better than pokemon didn't want to play with kids, maybe more like they didn't like being enslaved, doing humans' dirty work, etc)
In other news: Someone should make a Terra Nova inspired RPG. That would be so BA.