Writing The Half-Demon(PG-13)

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Here is a little story I made. Post if you like it or if it needs changes.

In the deeps of a forest, there was a boy. He had to be a teenager. He wore baggy jeans, and a sleeve-less shirt. It was red and had a Pokeball on it. He also had a belt with two Pokeballs on it and a necklace that had a UltraBall attached to it. He had brown hair and a ponytail. His name was Peter.

Peter ran away from his parents because they didn't believe he could live on his own. He had a bag of supplies that he would need on his life. He was cursed the day he was borned, being a half-demon. He never shown his demonic nature otherwise people will die if he was angry.

He saw the light of the full moon. It reminded him of his parents. The next morning Peter went from his home, Celestic Town to Veilstone. He went to a diner to get some food. Peter looked at the menu.

Peter,"I'll have some scrambled eggs with a side of bacon please."

Waitress,"Sure thing."
After he ate he heard yelling. He paid the bill and went outside to find out what was happening. He grabbed a person and asked,"What is happening?!"

Person,"There is a possessed Gyarados! It is a demon!"
Peter released the person and he ran, while Peter went to find the Gyarados causing the problem. He found the Gyarados burning down buildings. It had a Demons eyes. They were red, meaning it was possessed by Shinon, Demon of Hatred. Peter decided to fight a Demon he will have to be one. His eyes turn purple, nails grew long and sharp, and fangs grew.

From one of his Pokeballs he sent out his Charmeleon, his starter, and shared his Demon powers with it.

Peter,"Charmeleon we are bonded now! Use Dragon Rage!" Charmeleon used a powerful Dragon Rage. Gyarados's Demon was in pain like it, and used Hyper Beam. Charmeleon didn't had time to react, getting blast. Charmeleon was in alot of pain, and since Peter joined with it he felt it too.

Peter,"Damn! The Demon found the loop hole Charmeleon! We will have to work together!" Peter and Charmeleon ran up to Gyarados, dodging its Hydro Pumps. Peter and his Pokemon started to use a Demon attack called the Blade Claw. It cut and hurt Gyarados, leaving cuts on it.

Peter,"Now's my chance!" Peter began a spell that will seperate Gyarados and Shinon. Shinon camed out from it wounds and Peter destroyed it with the Demon attack Wolf Fang. Peter had slayed Shinon and return to his human form and called back Charmeleon. Everyone was happy and thanked him for his acts.

As he left the city, the Gyarados followed him. Peter,"You want to come with me do you?"

Gyarados,"Gyara!!!" Peter used an UltraBall, catching it, making it part of his team. From there he left to Pastoria City.
End
 
RE: The Half-Demon

o_O, odd to say the least

But no one likes people who curse in the stories. Even if it's censored. It still needs a lot more work
 
RE: The Half-Demon

Pokebeach is a different forum. Some don't appreicate storied like this. Also, give a rating (G, PG, PG-13)
 
Thanks! I got ideas from InuYasha because it was great and I though,"Man this is good! I wonder if I could make it into a story..."
 
Um...interesting. But watch the language. Not sure what it was, but I asked a mod personally, and censored or not, we can't use curses or other bad language. :(

But great story, looking forward to more!
 
Here is the newest story. Hope you like it!

Peter arrived at Pastoria City from Veilstone. Something was wrong. There was claw marks everywhere. There wasn't a soul in site. There was blood on the ground. Peter took some of it to find the scent. The blood's scent lead to no where.

Peter,"What happened? The blood can't tell me anything."

He began walking to find someone. He still saw no one just the ground, buildings, claw marks, and blood. Nothing but blood and marks. he started to hear some noises.

Peter,"Hello? Anyone there?" No reply. He sensed something was wrong. Very wrong. He started to hear the noises again. He looked back and saw a shadow flashed by. He changed into his Demon form.

Peter,"If you won't appear I will have to make you!" He began to run to where the shadow flashed to. It was under a hay. Peter lifted the hay, finding crying kids. Peter,"What's wrong?"

Girl Kid,"There is a monster.. behind you...." She sniffed.

Peter,"What-" He turned back and got punched, flying. He landed on a sharp rock, cutted on the back, bleeding. Peter,"Uhh.." He looked in front finding the Demon was Genshi, Demon of Blood. He was a scarlet red, the color of blood.

Genshi,"You should never came here. I ate all the people here! The only way you can get them back it by murdering me, which you will fail to do!!!"

Peter,"We'll see. Hope you're ready to die!"
Peter and Genshi began the fight. Peter block the attacks from Genshi. Genshi was overpowering him. Peter missed one cut, getting a huge cut on his arm, bleeding alot.

Peter,"Dang! Dragonite go!"
Dragonite carried Peter and the two kids who hid and hid in a library. Peter sealed up his wounds while the kids hid again. Peter found a book on a floor that talked about Demons. Peter picked it up and began to read something about Demon/Pokemon fusions.

Fusions
A Demon and a Pokemon can fuse. By focusing on the Demons powers it can have the Pokemon enter it body as a spirit. The Demon who fused gains the Pokemon's element powers.

The rest of the pages were filled with more knowledge. Peter hid the book in his bag. The Demon entered the library, looking for him.

Genshi,"You can't hide from me...I smell your blood!"
Peter called out his Dragonite.

Peter,"Dragonite! We have to fuse to defeat Genshi!"
The fusion began. There was a huge light. Genshi saw it and jumped aisle to aisle.
Genshi,"There you are!!! Huh?"
He saw Peter, but changed. His Demon features appeared: Dog Ears, Long Fangs, Sharp nails, and Purple eyes.

Peter,"I...we are one. Dragonite and I...will kill you!"
They used what looked as a Dragon Breath blowing Genshi away. They came in using Dragon Claw on Genshi's legs, cutting them off.

Genshi,"Agghhh!!!!"

Peter,"Here we go!!!"
Peter and Dragonite used Dragon Rage, burning what was left of Genshi. He was killed and all the people appeared outside the building, confused of what happened. Peter defused with Dragonite and called him back, thanking it for assistance in the battle.

As Peter left to Hearthome, the kids came back. Kids,"Thanks for bringing everyone back mister!!!"

Peter,"Your welcome. It's what I do."
He dissapeared into the darkness of the light.
End
 
Here is my latest story. Check it out!

Peter was on the way to Hearthome City. He was wearing a brown jacket. The air was cool and crisp. Fall's leaves were scattered all over the ground of the forest. Peter was finally in a state of peace and happiness.

He arived at Hearthome City under an hour. He found the latest newspaper. He found his parents put an add in the paper:
Lost!
Please help! We lost our beloved son, Peter, and we don't know where he is. Please find him! If found, bring him to this Celestic Town address:555 RedWood Lane.

Peter threw it out of his sight and walked away. He went to a hotel for a night's rest. He entered his room. Is was well organized. He had a wide screen TV, bed, couch, and a fully stored fridge and kitchen. He fell asleep on the couch while watching TV and reading about Demons.

The next morning Peter opened his labtop and caught up with some news. There was something that upsetted him.
Boy stolen by some Demon
Yesterday a boy of thege age of twelve was taken by a Demon. He was found today in a forest, unconscience. He can't remember what happened. His father and mother, Swordsman and Breeder was upset.

Peter ate his breakfest and went to the seen where the boy was found. He got the address of his parents home. He went to the home. It was lovely and beautiful. He ranged the door bell and out came a Twenty yr. old woman. She had brown hair and she was wearing a pink robe.

Women,"May I help you?"

Peter,"I came to see your son. I specialize with accidents with Demons."

She entered him into the house. There was swords lying on hooks on the wall. She had two eggs on the table. On the couch was her husband, the Swordsmaker.

Swordsmaker,"You came to see my son?" Peter nodded. He called his son. He had blonde hair and blue eyes. He was wearing a blue shirt and a black jacket. His name was Ryan.

Peter,"Would you come with me for a walk Ryan?"

Ryan,"Sure man."
They were walking outside the home looking around.

Peter,"Are you a Pokemon trainer, Ryan?"

Ryan,"Yeah. I own Prinpulp, Dragontini, and Alakazam."

Peter,"Nice. Ryan can you remember anything what happen with this Demon?"

Ryan,"Yeah. He was black, red eyes, and he had huge fangs. I can sorta remember what he did."

Peter,"What happened?"

Ryan,"He entered my body, like if it was a fusion."

Peter,"That explains it! He wasn't harming you. He was helping you. Demons have senses if humans have weak bodies so they entered them and fuse to be one with them. I have the same thing."

Ryan,"So you are telling me that I have a Demon living in me?"

Peter,"Basically. But Demons gets angry went this happens because the Demon goes up against it word to harm people. So the Demons will be back."
Peter was suddenly attacked by a big black Demon. Ryan was stunned from the sight. Peter had a huge cut on his arm.

Peter,"So that's how you want to play?"
His Demon form began. His nails grew long, fangs grew, eyes change purple, and dog ears appeared. He sliced the Demon up and used a Flamethrower from the plams of his hands to slow it down. He took Ryan home and locked the door.

Woman,"What happened?!"

Ryan,"We are being chased by a Demon!"
Peter took off his jacket because he was getting harm in his Demon form. Peter,"Ryan you have to learn to become a Demon!"

Ryan,"How?"

Peter,"Focus! Think Ryan think!"
Ryan began to think. Peter took one of the Swords from the wall and went outside.

Swordsman,"Don't use that one! It's cursed!"

Peter,"It'll have to do!"
He found the Demon and started to slice it up. The Demon was to strong for him, healing itself. Peter,"What?!"

Demon,"It's true!" He punched Peter away. Ryan's body changed. His nails grew sharp, dog ears appeared, fangs grew, and his eyes turned red.

Peter,"Finally.."

Ryan,"Now it's my turn!" He began to use Pychic powers to beat the Demon up. Peter notice one of the eggs on the table began to glow. The Demon aimed to attack the egg. Peter went inside and grabbed the egg and the Demon striked at Peter's back. Peter was in pain and the egg hatched into Pichu. The Pichu was crying.

Peter,"I'm getting tired of you..."
He striked at the Demon's waist, slicing it in half. Peter and Ryan turned back to their normal state. Peter handed back the sword.

Swordsman,"No. I want you to keep it. You seemed to take a liking to it."

Woman,"And the Pichu took a liking to Peter aswell! Keep him! I sure he'll like to travel with a half-Demon!"

Peter,"Thank you both." He caught the Pichu in a Pokeball, placing it as his. The Swordsman gave him a sword career, so he can take it anywhere.

Ryan,"Can I travel with you, Peter? I'll like to learn more about my Demon state."

Peter,"Sure. Lets go. Next City is Eterna City."
Peter left the area and Ryan came, making the adventure better. And with Peter's new baby Pokemon, Pichu, that will teach Peter to care for other things.
End
 
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