Writing Time Fracture (Chapter One: Cyrus)

[dmaster]

RE: Time Fracture (Prologue is up)

“Looks/b] Cyrus, I don’t know who you think you are, but-“

Who proofread again? ;p

Anyway, yeah, nice cliffhanger. If it's not Cyrus, I WONDER WHO IT COULD BE lol.

dmaster out.

 

[Lenny]

RE: Time Fracture (Prologue is up)

Ahh, thanks d master. I'll go edit that immediately.

Also, time will tell. But I do need opinions. Do you want the chapters to be longer, shorter, or stay the same? I mean, Ch. 1 felt short to my standards, but if it's ok with you guys :3

 

[Kingdra King]

RE: Time Fracture (Prologue is up)

It's great for me...

 

[fortegoddx]

Nice. It's getting better. Keep it coming.