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Chapter 8

You and Piplup leave the vicinity of Rowan's lab at a brisk walk, grateful for the mild temperatures and lack of snow. You take a moment to get your bearings, then follow a small, wooded track that goes deeper into the forest to the west. The trees and mountainous regions of the Coronet Range are more comfortable and familiar to you, and you’d rather not take your chances in new territory, at least not yet.

Around noon, you stop for lunch, finally tearing open the package Molly had packed for you before you left the town. Inside are several strips of jerky, a couple rolls of slightly-stale bread, and a thick, sugary berry mash. You tear open the rolls and spread some of the berry mixture inside to mask the staleness, then hand one over to Piplup. You eat the other yourself, followed by the jerky. It’s stringy and salty, but it’s the last meat you’ll likely be eating in some time, and you savor it, licking the last bits of flavour off of your fingers.

The package also contained one non-edible item, a small leather pouch holding a few small metal coins stamped with a ₽. You figure this must be money, though having lived in a barter system all of your previous life, you had never had an occasion to see any before now. It must be similarly worthless in the northern village where the townsfolk all provided for themselves. That could certainly explain the gift; Rex probably figured you could use the little coins more than he or his wife could.

You pack the coins and the remnants of the berry mash back in your bag as Piplup settles down for a midday nap. You figure you’ll let him rest for a bit--after all, you’re in no hurry to get anywhere--and to kill time for yourself, you pull out the Pokédex and scan him with it. “Piplup, the Penguin Pokémon,” the device chirps at you. “Because it is very proud, it hates accepting food from people. Its thick down guards it from cold.”

You chuckle at the description as you look over at Piplup’s sleeping form, berry juice staining the feathers around his beak. Just goes to show that not all Pokémon have the same personalities, through you can’t help but wonder if he would have been much different if he’d been born and raised in the wild.

You flip through the contents of the Dex, looking up other information about Piplup. As you’d already suspected, it’s a Water-type Pokémon, and you take care to try and remember its type strengths and weaknesses, as well as some of the other moves it can learn.

Over the next few days, you trek up the mountains with Piplup, eventually leaving the path and beginning to hike through the trees. Through your prepared food from both Molly and Rowan goes by quickly, the forest is thick and full of gathering opportunities. You find berries, honey, and some edible plants and fungi, though you take no chances on eating anything you don’t recognize. Surprisingly, you see very little Pokémon. You would have thought that you’d be seeing more and more of the little creatures the further you got from the inhospitable northern areas, but instead the exact opposite seems to be the case.

Instead, you and Piplup train as you did before you match with Bullet, working on drills. With the aid of the Pokédex, you try teaching Piplup some new moves, and refining those he already knows, and he eagerly enjoys the practice. The Pokédex has become something of another companion for you, though with only having recorded two Pokémon, the information it reveals to you is slight. Still, any help is better than none, and you don’t feel as blind and ignorant as you did before the match against Bullet.

Eventually, the trees even out and you find yourself on another dirt path. You and Piplup follow the path gratefully, glad to take a break from the constant hiking and fighting for every meter of advance. As afternoon turns into early evening, the path winds out of the trees and into a small, pleasant valley with a village in the center.

However, you barely even see the village at first, your eyes immediately drawn to the spectacle in front of your eyes dead to the south. The peak of Mt. Coronet, the main mountain in the range, was glowing with a white so bright and dazzling you could hardly look straight at it. You squint at it carefully, but you can’t make out any details, even after your eyes have adjusted to the brightness. Piplup, too, seems enthralled at the spectacle and the two of you spend a few moments ogling the spectacle before you shake your head and decide to make a move on towards the village.

This town certainly seems more prosperous than the tiny place you saw up north. It even has a name, Sandalstraw Town, that you see carved into a wooden sign near the town limits when you enter. None of the buildings are particularly large and prosperous, except for a wide building with a tall tower towards the west side of town, but they were well-kept and clean, and there were plenty of people bustling about, especially in a large market area.

At the sight of the market, you catch the scent of roasted sweet potatoes on the wind and your stomach rumbles, reminding you that cold meals of berries and mushrooms will keep you alive and healthy, but not warm and full. You decide to treat Piplup and yourself to a small, warm meal and you head over towards the market, a skip in your step. Your nose leads you right to the sweet potato vendor stand and you part with a few of the small metal coins for a couple roasted potatoes on sticks, still steaming from the fire.

Piplup bites into his immediately then drops the stick on the ground and flaps his wings anxiously, trying in vain to cool his mouth down from the hot explosion of potato. The vendor chuckles and hands a waterskin to Piplup to help it cool down. She smiles at you as Piplup takes a long swallow and shakes its head vigorously. “That’s a nice Pokémon you have there, and well-behaved, if not quite the brightest. You don’t see too many like that, not anymore.”

You take a break from blowing on your own potato to smile back at the woman. “Thanks. I’ve had him since he was an egg, so we’re very close.”

She cocks an eyebrow at you. “A wild egg, eh? You must not be from around these parts. Anyone here would just as soon eat the thing as hatch it. Most of the Pokémon we see are a nuisance at best.”

“You’re right, I’m from up north. Even still, I almost ate him at first, too, but I’m glad I didn’t. He’s been a good friend.” Finally cool enough to eat, you tear open the potato pouch and take a large bite, the warmth of it sliding down your throat and heating you up from the inside.

“They say Pokémon and people used to be good friends but,” the vendor shook her head sadly, “you don’t see that much anymore. The few we see around here are either killing each other, or trying to kill you. The Black Rings have a few tamed ones among them, but like yon penguin there, that’s the exception more than the rule.”

You finish your bite of potato and swallow loudly, looking at the woman. “The Black Rings?”

“Oh, they haven’t made it up where you’re at?” She waves a hand. “They’re our local gang. They keep us safe from the others provided that we give them a tithe from our earnings. A small price to pay, and less violence than you have to put up with some of the more destructive gangs. Really, we’re lucky they’re around.”

You feel your heart clench at the thought of another gang running around this town. The vendor’s words sounded pleasant on the surface but ring hollow to you, the words of someone willing to accept the lesser of two evils. You’re not quite sure what to say, so you gulp down the rest of your potato in silence while the woman sells a few more to a passing family.

However, just as you’re about to go find a place to stay the night, a question enters your memory and you turn back to the vendor before you leave. “If You don’t mind my asking, ma’am, what is that thing that’s glowing so much at the top of Mt. Coronet?”

She looks taken aback. “You don’t know? No, I suppose you wouldn’t if you don’t live up here since the shine doesn’t get all the way down beneath the mountains. That’s the Shining White City up there. The walls are made of bright crystal that reflect the sunlight. In the midday during winter, the light refracts and it turns all kind of pretty colours, but mostly it’s just bright at white. Take a look there tomorrow around noon if you want a pretty show.”

You thank the woman and head off on your way. The Shining White City, a place you only heard of in legends and stories as a kid. Was it truly real, with the White Lord himself inside? You wrack your brain, trying to think of any pertinent details about the place, but you can’t really recall many. You know that it’s filled with a bunch of rich, fancy people, and that they have something to do with the lack of Pokémon in the wild, but that’s all. The top of a mountain seems like a pretty weird place to have a fancy city, but maybe rich people simply think differently than the rest of us.

You spend another few of your precious coins at a local tavern to buy a place to sleep for the night. They don’t offer private rooms, but you manage to secure a pallet next to the hearth for you and Piplup. Thoughts of the City and its rich, beautiful inhabitants swirl through your mind as you doze off.

The next morning, you hit the market again. The potato vendor is nowhere to be found, but you manage to grab some travel bread and a couple waterskins with a couple more coins. Your money supply is beginning to dwindle, however, so you decide to pocket the rest and save it in case of an emergency. You’re beginning to feel a bit uncomfortable among the large presses of people in the village, and you’re glad to find yourself back on the road, heading back into the familiar, quiet forest.

The path you’re following dead-ends at a small pond and you stop to fill up your waterskins before beginning your hike. You’ve gone a good distance and are preparing to call a break and practice some more drills with Piplup soon when you hear a strange, high-pitched chirping scream. Piplup immediately turns towards the source of the sound and dashes off between the trees, leaving you to rush after him.

You emerge, chest heaving, into a small clearing before a rugged cave. The cries must have come from inside, because you see Piplup waddling into it, feathers on edge. “Piplup, wait!” You call out, but he’s already disappeared into the cave.

You grit your teeth and sprint towards the cave entrance, eyes widening as you get close enough to see what’s going on. Two scrawny men in black uniforms are inside, one clutching his head as if paralyzed by a horrific headache, the other armed with a long length of rope he was brandishing in preparation to tie up a small creature. At first you think it’s a human child, but upon closer inspection, and based on Piplup’s reactions, you realize the small being is a Pokémon.

You hardly have enough time to connect these thoughts before Piplup puts its recent training into action, giving the man with the rope a solid Pound right in the kneecap. “What the-” The man growls, turning his attention away from his other target and towards the small penguin Pokémon. “If you’re so feisty, maybe you’d like to come with me instead, huh, buddy?” He grabs the rope, stretching it between his hands as you finally make it to the cave, bursting in.

“You can’t take him, he’s mine!” You shout. “And you leave that other Pokémon alone, too,” you add, wishing you’d had the time to pull out your Pokédex and check it so you’d at least sound more knowledgeable. “You don’t tie Pokémon up with ropes if you want to train them.”

“Huh, Lenny, check it out.” The man with the rope chuckled deep in his throat. “Leggy bitch with a Piplup. This must be the one we’d heard about!”

Lenny, apparently recovering from his headache as the small white Pokémon dashed past him into the cave, turned towards you, mouth agape. “You mean the girl that took out Bullet and that dragon of his? Here? You really think that’s her, Roger?”

“Who else would it be, dolt? Just how many blue-haired girls with Piplups do you think are running around Sinnoh.”

“Yes, that was me,” you assert, staring coldly at both of them. “Now get out of here before I freeze your asses and string you up in the trees.”

Roger and Lenny look at each other and shrug. “Scrawny li’l thing wasn’t worth capturing anyway,” Roger mumbles. “But I bet the boss will want to know Mia’s around here, and that knowledge is probably more valuable. Let’s go.”

You watch them both leave the cave and head into the trees and purse your lips, wishing you could think of some kind of catchy comeback to shout after them. You’d gotten them to leave the Pokémon alone, and without any damage to yourself or Piplup, but the knowledge that your actions, appearance, and name had traveled this quickly, and that your location might be of interest to the leader of a gang sent chills up your spine.

You turned back towards the cave but fall to your knees suddenly as you become crippled by a blinding headache. You raise your hands to your head reflexively as if to block out a sound, but the power of the headache is coming from your mind, not your ears. The pain ends as quickly as it came when Piplup flies through the air and tackles the white Pokémon you manages to save from the poachers. Had it caused the headache for the other guy, too? If so, the Pokémon didn’t think any better of you than it did of him, and it seemed to like Piplup even less, based on the gleam in its eyes.

You had a feeling a serious Pokémon battle was going to start soon if you didn’t stop it, and you weren’t quite sure you like where that’s going. You quickly fumble out the Pokédex and point it at the strange creature.

“Ralts, the Feeling Pokémon,” the device announces, showing you a rather happier-looking version of the small Pokémon in front of you. “It is highly attuned to the emotions of people and Pokémon. It hides if its senses hostility.”

“Well, that explains why you ran off earlier, but not why you’re back picking a fight now,” you grumble. As a Psychic- and Fairy-type Pokémon, it didn’t have any particularly strengths or weakness against Piplup, but those Psychic-type moves could be painful, as you yourself already learned. As if to prove your thoughts, Ralts’s eyes begin to glow a bright purple as he turns his attention towards Piplup and the small Penguin Pokémon doubles up in pain.

You don’t know if this is a battle you can win. You bite your lip as you think. Should you go grab Piplup and make a run for it? Either way, you’ll need to make your choice quickly.




A) Grab Piplup and run like hell
B) Stay and fight
C) Try to reason with the Ralts

Thankfully for you all, you don’t need to make your choice quick as quickly as Mia does. You still have the standard 3 days to vote, so please make sure to get your final votes in before Tuesday, October 21.
 
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I'll vote B. Mia could possibly catch the ralts, and piplup still hasn't had too much training.
 
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I'm gonna go with C here. I think Mia should try to reason with Ralts and explain that Piplup had only attacked it because he saw the Ralts causing Mia pain.
 
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C

Coming victorious from the fight isn't certain and the aim doesn't seem to win per se but to make Ralts stop. Running might be a good option but Mia could lose track of Ralts so it's best to take the opportunity, despite being a painful one, to try calm down the Pokémon with words...it'll probably sense Mia's feelings.
 
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I was going to say B... but that point about Ralts sensing feelings is a good one. I'll go C.
 
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They did just save the Ralts so it might listen to them. I definitely don't want to run from the fight and give up on this chance of a new Pokémon.

I'll go with C.
 
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If we're ever getting a vote about this, we're going for Mega Gallade, right? That Pokémon is amazing!
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 8

Chapter 9

You smile at the Ralts, much to its surprise. It is taken aback by your kind advances. For a split second, you question why, but then you remind yourself what the girl had said earlier in town:

“They say Pokémon and people used to be good friends but,” the vendor shook her head sadly, “you don’t see that much anymore.”

“Hey there, Ralts,” you say. “I know you must have gone through a lot to be so angry--tell me, look into my mind, and see what emotions I’m going through. Can you feel my stress and pain?”

The Pokemon slowly nods and intensifies Piplup’s pain with its negative energy. You frown at the fact that it didn’t let you finish talking, but you decide to go ahead anyway. You brush your blue hair back and briefly think about those men. They were blunt and brutal. You think about how you treated the scared Piplup back when it first hatched.

“Ralts, where there is pain, there is just as much happiness. In the place of stress is relief if you look in the right places--focus on my thoughts, my feelings at this very moment.”

Ralts’s red horn throbs with the sensitivity of a new flow of emotions. Ralts’s light purple eyes turn back to normal fast, and it falls over weakly. You go over to it and feel its hot temperature; however, you think about that berry mash and how good it made Piplup feel. You get some of it out and smear it on some of your leftover bread. Once you offer it to Ralts, the Pokemon quickly swipes the food and observes it and then takes a bite out of it. After downing the whole piece of bread, Ralts looks at you with newfound respect. You smile.

“There’s plenty more where that came from. Speaking of which, where are you from?”

Ralts looks down at its feet and shies away from you. You realize that the Ralts is just like you--lost, afraid, an easy target. Just before reaching that first town, you didn’t even know what to do, really. You think about Ralts’s predicament as it sits there quietly.

“I got it!” you chirp. “How would you like to accompany me? Piplup seems to like the journey so far.”

Piplup waves from afar as it finishes off the last of the berry mash, much to your dismay. Ralts seems hesitant at first, but it soon smiles and cheers at the thought of it. You grab your bag and feel around for a Pokeball.

Later that evening, you arrive back in town with Ralts in its red-and-white cell. Aren’t these “Pokeballs” just prisons? You couldn’t imagine putting Piplup in such a ball because, well, it’s your partner. You go back to that tavern you slept in previously and remove a few more coins from your sack. It seems to be getting lighter and lighter as the days go on, so you decide to start spending your money wisely...maybe buying decent meals is an option you should not consider

You grab the key from the front desk assistant and thank her. Walking down a small hallway of the two-story building, you see that on your key ring is a small attachment labeled “Rm. 280,” which is apparently on the second floor. You and Piplup walk up a staircase that clings against the wall behind the assistant and you eventually reach the second floor. The rooms are labeled with different characters, some that you could read, and some that you could not, so you look for the one with a pattern similar to yours.

Inside is a single bed, a desk with a bunch of flyers on it, a bathroom, a small closet, and a window. It seems somewhat bare, but enough for you to work with your Pokemon. Piplup runs in and immediately rips down towels from the bathroom, drags them by the bed, and makes a small nest for the night. It lies there, restless, and stares at you. You shake your head at its silly behavior; the sun is still up. However, you ignore your silly Piplup’s actions and call out your latest friend.

The white-bodied Pokemon fell to the ground. It is still in rough condition from the fights earlier...did it not recover while in the Pokeball? What kind of carrier is this ball? You tell Piplup to stay in the room, shut the door until just a crack connects the hallway to the room, and run downstairs with Ralts in your arms. You begin skipping steps and nearly trip yourself in order to reach the hotel desk lady.

“You’re going to have to visit our town nurse, who is in the house straight across the road. You better hurry, many people get hurt these days,” the lady says between pages of a personal-looking diary.

You give her a “thank-you” and burst out the door. It’s started snowing again. You return Ralts into its Pokeball and trudge across the white path. Beyond the city you see the mountains you encountered, and, if just for a moment, you catch another glimpse of the mysterious white light. You think back to the story of the Shining White City. One day, you know you are going to visit whatever is up there. First, though, you need to get your Pokemon into a healthier condition.

You make it to the other side of the dirt-snow path and walk right in the small, shabby building made of wood. Inside, you feel a sudden surge of warmth. A fire is being maintained in the fireplace by a weird-looking Pokemon. An orange-and-cream colored chimp, the Pokemon scratched its underarms and blew another fire attack at the wood. Near him are a few people, one with orange hair and another in a hoodie, but the other couple are just regular-looking people.

You acknowledge all of these details in a mere moment and then go back to looking at the smiling nurse. She’s an elderly woman, probably in her late 60s, and she had a damaged white hat with a small pink plus on it. She wears a light pink blouse and a white apron, and she reminds you of Rex’s wife, a kind, helpful women filled with pride and independence.

“Hello, and welcome to the Pokemon Center!” she smiles warmly. “We restore anyone to full health that needs it. What conditions are you facing, miss? Stomach aches?”

You frown. “No, I’m here for a Pokemo--”

“You’re a trainer, too? That’s two in one day!” the woman throws her arms up to her face and clenches her cheeks. “What can I help you with? What Pokemon is injured?”

“My Ralts…”

The nurse holds out her hand in a cupped form and looks at you, waiting. You fumble around in your money bag and drop two coins down into the palm of her hand. She looks at the currency and smiles fondly.

“That’s very sweet of you in these relatively tough times, but I do not take offerings if I’m only treating Pokemon. I was holding my hand out for your ball, right there,” she says, gesturing towards your Pokeball.

You take the two coins back, put them in the bag, and then set it on the counter as you fumble in your bag for your Pokeball. As you get it out, a man swipes your bag of coins and makes a break for the door. You call out in frustration, but you are not the one that causes the man in the hoodie to stop running--that chimp Pokemon is.

“Chimchar, Leer!” a voice calls out from over at the fireplace, but you focus more on the action than the background noises.

The Pokemon narrows its eyes and gazes maliciously at the man. He drops the bag of coins and darts out of the building. That creature picks up the sack and tosses it at you, and you stow it away. The nurse thanks Chimchar and then tells Mia it will be a few minutes until Ralts will feel better.

“Why don’t you go sit down and socialize?”

You go over near the other people waiting and sit on a couch cushion alone. You see the chimp--Chimchar, the name was?--go toward that orange-haired man and you stare at him.

“You’re such a good Pokemon, Chimchar! You saved that girl’s money and knew exactly what to do,” the boy smiles.

You think back to Piplup, your own trusty partner. What is he doing right now?

Meanwhile

Piplup peeks inside the bathroom and sees a giant bowl (the bathtub). He goes over to the nozzle and spins it a couple times to see the water gush out and into the tub. It begins to fill up quite fast, and Piplup plops into the freezing water. He splashes and dunks and dives in the pool of water for a few minutes, but he eventually gets tired of the fun and leaves the small room, shutting the bathroom door. He then goes on your bed and pecks at it. Once he learns of the bounciness, he begins to jump on the mattress and messes up the covers on the bed. He scatters the flyers around the room and eventually runs out of the hotel room, slams the door, and hops on the handrail down the stairs. It slides down and eventually slams into a wall, falls down one more flight of stairs, and lands with a splat! right by a bellhop.

“I don’t get paid enough for this,” the boy says, tossing his red hat on the ground. “I quit.”

Piplup tilts its head slightly at the spectacle. It then runs back up the stairs for more hotel fun.



You see the boy and his Chimchar talking and laughing by the fire. You whip out your Pokedex to see what data is already recorded for the Pokemon.

“Chimchar, the Chimp Pokemon,” it begins. Its fiery rear end is fueled by gas made in its belly. Even rain can’t extinguish the fire.”

Your face crinkles at the entry and you add a note to it saying “relly fast” for future reference. You look at the word “relly” and scribble an “a” in between the “e” and “l,” causing the whole word to look jumbled up. You sigh.

“Hey, do you want to learn something real about my Chimchar?” the boy suddenly says in your direction.

“Um, sure?” you shrug. The boy looked young, maybe fourteen, and is rather scrawny. However, his fiery hair dances just like the fire that sits on the logs. He has rough-looking clothes with different patches of grey and brown put on his shirt. He has small planks of wood for shoes and a straw hat on his head. The boy looked like some western redneck.

He notices your judgment and blushes a little. “Chimchar and I were from a village in the west. We caused some trouble by accident and began travelling east. Once this storm hit, we kind of got stuck here. Hey, that’s a fancy red machine you got there. What does it do?”

“It records data for the different Pokemon I encounter. I want to be a great trainer some day,” you say in an almost brag.

“Really? How many sections of data do you have stored?”

“About four.”

The boy scratches the back of his neck and then introduces himself. “I’m Nikolas. What’s your name?”

You tell him and then see the nurse come back with your Pokeball. You stand up and run to grab the container, thank the nurse, and begin walking out.

“Hey, northern girl, you should meet me right outside this building tomorrow at noon if you want some real information! I can show you where the local library is, and then you’ll really have the information you need. What do you say?” the boy asks, standing up from the couch.

You smile. “I’ll think about it, Flameo.” The nickname stung the boy, causing his face to twitch unattractively. You walk out the building and make your way to the hotel room.



Inside the dark room, you see a peaceful Piplup dozing beside your bed. You go to turn a lamp on and see a horrible mess that takes up the entire room. The bathroom is flooding with water, the bed is messy and has a spring exposed from within the mattress. The floor is littered with small tourist attraction pamphlets. You sigh and send Ralts out of its Pokeball. The Pokemon looks around confusedly and then sees your smiling face in the darkness.

“I’m going to sleep now, Ralts. Tomorrow is going to be a fresh day for us--and we’ll really start training!”

Ralts hops off your bed and goes over to the door to pick something up. You toss and turn in your bed and then move to the second pillow. There is something lumpy under it--and it smells terrible. You turn the lamp on, look under the pillow, and--

“PIPLUP!” you scream loudly, causing several neighbors to screech shh!

You put the pillow and the covers into a trash can and set them inside the bathroom, close the door, and go to the closet for a second bedspread. You don’t mind the smell so much--after all, you get used to smells out in the wilderness--but just knowing it’s there…

Piplup begins snoring by the bedside and you smile. You notice a figure emerging from the darkness of the other side of the room and see Ralts walking back to the bed. It gives you a small note card with black lettering on it, probably from a quill or pen of some sort. On the front, the card is addressed to you. A deep sensation is felt in your stomach. Out of all the words you know, "Mia" was the first you mastered. After all, most kids learn their names relatively fast. Reluctantly, you turn it to the back and find the following text:

“Meet me at the same cave you were at earlier, but at noon tomorrow. We need to talk about something -Z”

You put the card on the small table beside the bed and then flip the lamp’s switch. Ralts goes and lies down by Piplup. Tossing and turning, you can't help but to think about tomorrow. Two different appointments have now been made for you. There is the library visit with Flameo, your new acquaintance, and the threatening note written by a possible gangster. What are you going to do? Will you…




A) Stick to your promise and go with Nikolas to the library
B) Visit the caves and see what the mysterious “Z” wants
C) Make a break for it--run out of town!

Keep in mind that there is a street gang that dominates the area. You may not make it safe, and you may not make it alive (is this a hint? Maybe, maybe not) if you skip that confrontation with the anonymous person. However, that nice boy helped you out and wants to help you with your journey! Isn't he more important? What, PB, are you going to do? No pressure :D

You have until Saturday, October 25th to vote!
 
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I think A. If any people come, then Nikolas could help our Character.
 
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I'll go with A!

Right now, Mia won't die or something because she's the main character, so let's meet the boy! Also, I don't want to go with B and have Mia then say "It's a trap!" a la Admiral Ackbar! :p
 
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C. From this chapter, you've made me hate this place.
 
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Keeper of Night said:
A
As much as I love living, this seems much more exciting.

I wanted to write something elaborate, but this seems good enough. :p A, please.
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 9

Nice chapter! Awesome that we got to meet Nikolas. I'm going for A.

I would definitely like to see more of Nikolas. He seems like a nice guy and it would be nice if she made some friends along the journey. Whoever wants to talk to her in the cave will probably contact her again at another time if they're serious about it. It's probably someone from the gang and I don't think she has to confront them right now. She can use some more training first.
 
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Since the gang members she met at the cave are probably how Z found out about Mia I do think that Z is in fact the leader of a strong gang. Do you all think Z has good intentions or bad intentions with Mia? I personally think he might try to recruit her and if she declines try to harm her.

Who do you think Z is and what he wants to meet Mia for? Will he try to contact her again? If he does offer to join a gang, would you accept the offer? I think it's nice to think about, since we might get that option in the future when they do finally meet.
 
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Chapter 10

You wake up the next morning from a weird dream--one that you remembered vividly just seconds before, but cannot recall. It was strange, almost terrifying. You crawl out of bed and take a nice shower, the cold water soaking in your hair. You finish getting ready for the day and slip on your shoes. Beside the bed lie two sleeping Pokemon. You smile at their laziness and begin poking at Piplup to wake up. After it reluctantly bats an eye, you get Ralts up and you take them over to the bottom floor of the hotel.

Down there is a breakfast buffet, much unlike the lodges you had back up north. Even though this city is still northern, it’s a completely new territory with different social and economic values. Apparently, tourism is one of them. You take them down to a table and get two small bowls of Pokemon food, free of charge. As they eat up, you get some flattened bread circles and, after glancing at how others ate them nearby, poured this brown, sticky liquid all over them.

As they ate, you pulled out the card.

“Meet me at the same cave you were at earlier, but at noon tomorrow. We need to talk about something -Z”

Should you meet this man? After all, you remember what that nice vendor had said just the other day--there were gangs swarming this town to “keep it safe” and benefit from the town’s donations. You think about the after effects of what could happen--should you decline the date, anyway. You might be hunted down, attacked, or kidnapped. However, if you go there and meet the person, the same thing could happen. Instead of this mystery “Z” person, you decide that you may as well go to the library with Nikolas this afternoon. After all, he seems like a decent boy--something you haven’t seen on your journey thus far. You and your Pokemon finish up your meals and, after recalling Ralts into its ball and grabbing Piplup from its chair, you head outside the hotel and into the lone streets.

The snow has finally let up. You could see the street clearly now; and, while it was still encased in yesterday’s snow, it was melting. There is now many people wandering the streets-- a “hustle and bustle” feeling in the atmosphere. You hurry across the street and see through the Pokemon Center’s glass door a clock--and there are still two more hours until noon. To kill time, you feel your bag for your pouch of coins and feel relieved to find the item still inside. You walk down the street and come across a small shop labeled “Boutique” and decide to go inside.

A small bell rings above the door handle, much to your amazement. You enter the doorway and are greeted by two fashionable girls, one with a sweater vest and knee-high socks and another with square frames around her eyes and a wire encompassing her teeth--she even had random bunches of hair pulled up with scrunchies. You grab a small strand of your own hair and frown at its dullness.

“Welcome to the Sandalstraw Boutique! Are you here to make yourself look even better?” the wiry-mouthed girl asks with a smile.

You shake your head, but you’re guided across the store and towards the women’s clothing. They hold up many ugly sweaters to your torso, several reds and yellows. You tell them you were only looking for a bigger bag, but they proceed to guide you through their collection of shoes.

“You will just love these fancy heels I picked up from Veilstone a few years ago. I couldn’t fit my feet into them--even when I constricted them--so I’m selling them for a cheap ten thousand,” the medium-sleeved girl says.

“Honestly, I just need a bigger bag!”

You go past a coat rack that is instead filled with a selection of bags. You immediately stop in your tracks, the two girls falling forward thanks to inertia, and you begin flipping through the colored shoulder straps that line the rack’s different branches. Down in the floor, a fine, thick-textured, icy-blue bag catches your eye. You pull it out from under the other bags and dust it off. It isn’t like the others--you have always preferred shoulder bags, but this one was actually a backpack. It has two deep pockets, one in front of and slightly smaller than the other, and a mini top pocket to store something like money in. On the sides are drink holders with a net-like cloth webbing them. At the very front of the bag, the pocket closest to the ground, zips open and has six little indentations on a hard surface that are perfect for holding Pokeballs. You give one of the girls the amount of coins on the price tag--five mere coins of this currency, whatever it is--and run out the door into the street.

You empty out your bag and place the leftover food in one of the side pockets. You put your Pokedex in the other side pocket for easy access and the gold in the top pocket, of which is comparable to the deepness of a small purse. You sit Ralts’ ball in one of the empty slots and zip almost everything up. You sit Piplup in the largest pocket and begin walking again. Only half an hour until noon.

While continuing your walk down the street, you begin to notice several people eying you as they walk by. You begin to feel cautious because, after every pair of eyes moves on, another takes its place. You slowly begin hastening your pace and eventually begin jogging, and then running to the Pokemon Center. You swing open the doors and sit on one of the couches by the fire again.

“Hiding from someone?” asks an almost-bald man sitting on the other side of a coffee table.

“Actually, yes. There are several people glaring at me as if I’ve done something wrong.”

“Maybe they aren’t staring at you, but perhaps that Pokemon that you travel with. It’s unusual to see a trainer in these parts. That’s why I want to ta--” the man begins, but you interrupt him.

“I need to meet a boy here in just a few minutes from now, so I can’t talk. I’m sorry,” you tell him, standing up and exiting the hospital. You feel some creepy vibe from him and forced yourself to seem rude and hasty.

You lean against the outside wall and see your friend Nikolas coming, though Chimchar seems to be put away. You run to him and tell him the two of you need to hurry to the library. He runs his fingers through his orange hair and runs after you. You are directed to the local library, which is a small, two-story building that overlooks the town between the boutique and another random outlet. It is brown and surrounded by a strong scent of paper and dust.

The two of you enter the public area and see very few people inside; only two others are on the first floor, and one of them is the librarian. The floor is covered with books, magazines, and shelves of more books and magazines. Books are stacked to the ceiling and litter nearly every inch of the floors. Pages are ripped out everywhere. Nikolas leads you upstairs into a completely vacant floor.

“Have you ever heard of the Shining White City?” he asks with a smile on his small face.

“Only a reference here and there,” you say.

“Well,” he says while searching through the books of a particular shelf’s third level, “I’m about to teach you a whole lot more.”

He slides out a big book with a blue, dusty cover. The title is very worn and faded--too faded to see what the book is even called. Nikolas grabs a small chair and sits down in it, leaning on a green table with his elbows as he gazes at the pages. You pull up a chair, too, and watch as he flips pages and looks for the Shining White City.

“Ah, here it is,” he whispers.

“Why are we whispering?” you ask loudly.

“Because we aren’t supposed to look up the background of the Shining White City. It’s prohibited. I’ve stashed this old book up here because no one comes anymore. Anyway, here’s some info in case you’re interested: ‘The Shining White City has been the most advanced city for a long time. Its leader, the White Lord, encourages technological advancement only within his own divine city. The citizens of this city are the only ones to flourish; the rest of Sinnoh has come into the Dark Ages; it now resembles a barren wasteland. Humanity has dwindled in numbers outside of the Shining White City because the White Lord has ordered it to do so. Reality has not been the same since L_c__ a_d __n___a ent__ed __e D__t____o_ __r_d.’ Ah, the stupid text has been smeared here! The rest of it is fine, but these important words are gone! Who would do such a thing, and why?” Nikolas growls.

“Well, keep going with what you have!” you order.

“‘Though humanity has turned into savagery outside of the White Lord’s realm, his inner city has become the pinnacle of society and a representation of what humans could be. However, Pokemon have never been treated the same since the cataclysmic event, and both the Shining White City and the rest of Sinnoh have mistreated Pokemon for the rest of recent history. The whereabouts of Professor Rowan and some of the Gym Leaders are unknown, but one fact is known for sure: if there truly is an apocalypse, we’re in the middle of it.’ Well, that little bit of this chapter was salvaged, but that’s all I could find,” he frowns.

“Don’t worry, Flameo, I learned more than I knew just a few hours ago,” you cheer him up.

“Why would the White Lord only wish for humanity to flourish in his own town? Isn’t that illegal or something?” he asks.

“No idea, but I do know that all of this research spent eight hours today. It’s already almost time for the hotel to close its doors. If I don’t get back in time,” you remind him.

“Then we better get on home. You go ahead first. I’ll be out right after you. I just have to put this book up in a new, safer hiding spot and try to find something to check out so it doesn’t look like I just stayed up here researching all day,” Nikolas smiles.

You go on downstairs and feel a small bobble in your bookbag. You turn your head around and see Piplup fast asleep in your little bag. How could you forget him so easily? You zip the bag almost to the top, but not quite, so Piplup can both have quietness and some fresh air. You wave goodbye to the sleeping librarian and walk outside. Without waiting for Nikolas, you jog down the street with a skip in your step and try to find your way back to the hotel. You make some twists and turns and eventually find yourself in an alleyway between two large, dark buildings. The median is pitch-black, but it’s the quickest way home. You walk on and, about halfway through the small section, you hear a can clang from one of the trash cans and onto the ground, rolling eerily in your direction. A can of instant soup slowed to a stop once it hit your foot. You look up and see no one. You turn your back and keep walking. Another scurrying sound. You turn around, but no one is there. You step back and sense a figure--a small, green Pokemon with roses for hands.

“Roselia! Rose, rose!” it chants.

“Well aren’t you the cutest thing? Wait, what are you doing out here…?”

“Stun spore,” a voice says from the darkness.

The Roselia unleashes a powdery yellow substance that covers the sleeping Piplup and even yourself. Your appendages begin to tense up. Your arms and legs go numb. You fall to the cold, hard ground. You knew Roselia was trouble when it walked in. You, still able to move your head about, look up to see a strong man grab your body and hoist it over his shoulder. Piplup slips out of your bag and lies in the dark alley. You call out, but it’s asleep. Your companion fades as you get taken away. Why isn’t the man taking her Pokemon?

He keeps walking and walking until it begins to lightly snow again. You feel yourself slipping away. You accidentally fall asleep while thinking about Piplup.

Meanwhile

Nikolas walks out of the library and sends out his Chimchar to light the way home. They move past a couple roads until his Chimp Pokemon begins to act weirdly. It sprints down an alley and screeches at Nikolas to come over and look. There lies a sleeping Piplup, cold and alone. Nikolas picks it up and rubs its face to wake it up.

“Piplup, where is Mia?” he asks.

“Lup?!”

Nikolas looks out into the darkness and frowns. Something isn’t right. In fact, it’s very, very wrong.

Location Unknown

You wake up and find yourself tied up in a chair. Your bag is still around your shoulders, but your hands are killing you. They are tied behind you and right under the bottom of your bag. You blink a couple times and find yourself in near darkness yet again. The only light supplied is a fire in the distance and a couple of candles that align the walls. You are in some building with tiled flooring, but where?

“Mia,” a voice whispers.

“I’m...I’m not some gangster. I’m a loner,” you tell the darkness.

“We both know that I am not affiliated with anything gang-related,” the voice calmly continues.

“And how do I know that, exactly?”

“I left your Piplup, did I not? Your bag is still intact, isn’t it? I have not stolen a single item from you.”

You ignore the darkness and, with tears in your eyes, begin screaming for Piplup, for Nikolas, for someone. Just someone. Anyone. Professor Rowan, Rex, Bullet, even. Anyone is better than total darkness. You’re driving yourself completely insane.

“You’re not real,” you decide while shaking your head vigorously--as if that were to uncloud your memory.

“I’m very real,” the deep, booming voice says.

“Show yourself, you coward.”

“As you wish, but we have to talk about something.”

Suddenly, the silhouette of a man becomes clear in the dark--he is probably around six feet tall, sturdily built but not overweight by any means, and seems confident. He walks closer, showing a caucasian forehead and sharp, fierce eyes. He walks in the light fully and exposes his body; he has no shirt on, but he is wearing a pair of red gym pants. He has a series of slash marks that have been embedded on his chest, and they uniquely resemble the letter “Z”. Your eyes bulge and you breathe in and out at an uneven pace.

“I wanted to do this in quiet and without force, but hello Mia, my name is--well, I go by “Z” for obvious reasons. Now, I really need to talk to you about something concerning the Shining White City. I’m the leader of,” he says, but you scream at him to go away for no apparent reason.

You listen to him tell you to calm yourself down, but as you fidget with your hands, you notice your Pokeball pocket’s zipper isn’t completely on the zipped side--there is a hole! You slip your index finger and thumb in and can feel the smooth surface of a Pokeball. You can fight with Ralts--your first fight ever!

“Please, Mia, hear me out. My people and I desperately need your power to--you know what? You aren’t listening. I need you to take this seriously. If you don’t help me, then I’ll have to force you to help me. Please, if there is any trace of humanity left in you, then hear me out!”




Well, what are you going to do? You have three choices, all of which can leave nasty effects on you if you don’t play your cards right. PB, you can…

A) Get Ralts’ Pokeball and fight with it
B) Listen to what this man has to say
C) Manipulate him to set you free, no matter what may happen as a result


Your past decision has finally made an impact! What do you guys think, should you have chosen differently? Your votes are due on Thursday, October 30th.
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 10

A. We can talk to this guy, but i'd prefer to get mia out of any possible danger first.
 
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