Writing Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 25 - Now with a TL;DR!
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RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 1
I imagine her a bit like that, but with a hood and a different hairstyle.
I imagine her a bit like that, but with a hood and a different hairstyle.
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 1
I drew the eyes before the hair, so when I realised the hair was too short, I would have to have done the eyes again.
PMJ said:
I drew the eyes before the hair, so when I realised the hair was too short, I would have to have done the eyes again.
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 1
I vote for Go west into the mountains.
I vote for Go west into the mountains.
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 1
I think B is the best choice. With mountains you have rocks. If you have enough you can build a pretty good shelter just using rocks. Maybe start a rock town with rock friends and rock children. It will be a nice little ending.
I think B is the best choice. With mountains you have rocks. If you have enough you can build a pretty good shelter just using rocks. Maybe start a rock town with rock friends and rock children. It will be a nice little ending.
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RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 1
The only thing ending with this plan is your lives. From hypothermia.
Everyone here seems to have forgotten that you have been walking through the snows of Mt. Coronet for five days straight with only a half-assed bow and arrow to protect yourself with. The sea won't keep you warm. It's winter. The mountain will keep you warm, if by warm you mean cold. The village has houses, people, and warmth (real warmth). Desperate times call for desperate measures. Head to the village.
Mr.Muffin said:
The only thing ending with this plan is your lives. From hypothermia.
Everyone here seems to have forgotten that you have been walking through the snows of Mt. Coronet for five days straight with only a half-assed bow and arrow to protect yourself with. The sea won't keep you warm. It's winter. The mountain will keep you warm, if by warm you mean cold. The village has houses, people, and warmth (real warmth). Desperate times call for desperate measures. Head to the village.
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 1
The story isn't written yet. There is no "bad choice" as far as I know. We decide the direction the story takes and after we made a choice the rest of the story will be written. If it was a pre-written story it would make sense to be concerned about making the right choice, but I think in this case, since it's written as we go, they will make each option work out. There are no "if this option is picked they will die" or whatever made beforehand, are there, writers?
The story isn't written yet. There is no "bad choice" as far as I know. We decide the direction the story takes and after we made a choice the rest of the story will be written. If it was a pre-written story it would make sense to be concerned about making the right choice, but I think in this case, since it's written as we go, they will make each option work out. There are no "if this option is picked they will die" or whatever made beforehand, are there, writers?
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 1
Don't forget Heatran! That could keep Mia warm ;D
PMJ is just trying to make you guys think. Drohn is right--I don't think we've finished chapter 2 yet. We're not going to purposely give the plot away. Besides, there is no surefire direction where this will go.
We could never just rule out that option, could we?
I'm not completely sure where we, the writers, are going to lead you all, but I'm sure there will be some situations where not even Mia is safe.
Mr.Muffin said:
Don't forget Heatran! That could keep Mia warm ;D
PMJ is just trying to make you guys think. Drohn is right--I don't think we've finished chapter 2 yet. We're not going to purposely give the plot away. Besides, there is no surefire direction where this will go.
Drohn said:
We could never just rule out that option, could we?
I'm not completely sure where we, the writers, are going to lead you all, but I'm sure there will be some situations where not even Mia is safe.
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 1
What I mean is that the story isn't written yet and the future possible choices aren't known yet (by us or the writers), so there is no fixed way for which choice leads to a "bad ending". It is written as we go. It has not yet been decided (as far as I know) that one of these choices will lead to a more negative ending than another.
What I mean is that the story isn't written yet and the future possible choices aren't known yet (by us or the writers), so there is no fixed way for which choice leads to a "bad ending". It is written as we go. It has not yet been decided (as far as I know) that one of these choices will lead to a more negative ending than another.
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 1
The people have spoken.
A) Walk up to the village (7): PMJ, Delta, SF, Luis, IE, L_R, Drohn
B) Go west into the mountains (4): OS, Lugia, KoN, Muffin
C) Head east to the shore (1): IA
Looks like Mia will be heading up to that tantalizing village after all. Everyone wish her luck! Update will likely be posted sometime in the next couple days.
The people have spoken.
A) Walk up to the village (7): PMJ, Delta, SF, Luis, IE, L_R, Drohn
B) Go west into the mountains (4): OS, Lugia, KoN, Muffin
C) Head east to the shore (1): IA
Looks like Mia will be heading up to that tantalizing village after all. Everyone wish her luck! Update will likely be posted sometime in the next couple days.
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 1
I'm calling a mob hit.
Lugia123 said:
I'm calling a mob hit.