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RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 2

TwistedTurtwig said:
Is it too late for me to cast a vote? I know that the deadline was supposed to be the 14th, but I just found this thread and the story so far is great! If not, I'll just wait for the next part, no problem.

I'd just cast it now. If you wait for a response you might not be able to vote at all when you could have.


Omega Soul said:
Keeper of Night said:
Wow, sometimes I feel like the only person with no heart.
C
Because night-time adventures are amazing.

You know what you just changed my mind.

C

I'm not kidding on this one too, btw. A is gonna win anyway so whatever.
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 2

Sorry, TT, you'll have to wait for the next chapter since this one is already written and being posted... now! :D

Chapter 3

You stare into the fire, eyebrows furrowed. No, you couldn’t turn your back on these people, tempting as it might be for your own well-being. They’ve given you food and shelter, and now it was time to play by the rules of the south. The people of this village likely looked up to Rex as a leader, relying upon him; now he, and the rest of the villagers by association, were looking to you.

You sigh and look down at Piplup, still shoveling his face with bits of bread, gravy dripping off his tiny beak. Not exactly the sporting image of a fierce warrior, but compared to the Psyducks you had seen outside, he’s a right beast. He’s a bit thin from the recent travels, but a couple days of work and good food would build him back up quickly. Depending on how long it would take for the gang to arrive, they might even have some time to train.

The worst that could happen… well, there was no saying, really. You weren’t exactly sure how the gang would react to the challenge, how they would treat Piplup or you if they won, but chances were that you’d have a better shot at surviving the encounter if you were here in town rather than on your own. After all, even if you escape the gang’s wrath this time, there was no guarantee that you wouldn’t see them further down the road. In fact, you probably would. If not this gang, than another.

With another sigh, you swivel around to look at Rex. You’d already made up your mind; there was no need to justify it to yourself anymore. “Alright, I’ll stick around and give this Pokémon battling thing a whirl.”

Rex leans back in his chair, face filling with relief. “Oh, thank ye kindly. You’ve got no idea what this means to us.”

I nod and look back down at Piplup. “Can you tell me what you know? About the gang, that is.”

“Ayup. Well, for starters, their numbers are always changing as they gain or lose boys, but there’s usually about fifteen or so; never less than a dozen, never more than twenty. The only one you need worry about is their leader, a mean fella goes by the name of Bullet.” Rex snorts. “He’s the eldest, and he always goes about wearing these stupid dark glasses, even in the middle a winter. He’s the one of em that has a Pokémon, you see, a nasty little guy that he keeps on a chain. He always threatens to let the thing loose in the Psyduck pens, though he never has yet.”

“Do you know what kind of Pokémon it is?” You don’t know all too much about the creatures, but you do remember that some were better or worse against certain types of moves, and any edge you could learn might be vital.

Sadly, Rex just shakes his head. “Never seen another one like it, I’ll tell ye that much.” He scrunches up his face as he tries to recall. “About twice as tall as your Piplup, but much uglier, with a huge mouth that takes up half his body, seems like. Most of the thing just kinda looks like a giant pointy head with stubby legs and arms, but those teeth!” He shakes his head again. “The thing is constantly slobbering and snapping like it’s always hungry and bites damn near anything that gets in its reach. I think that’s why he has the thing on a chain, so it don’t bite his own people.”

You grimace at the description. A giant mouth filled with teeth that bites anything that comes near it. Sure doesn’t seem like any Pokémon you’ve seen before, and certainly not the kind of thing you’d really like Piplup to fight, but you’d given your word, and that was that.

“If this goes bad, would you be willing to help us out with that?” you asked, gesturing your head at the rifle Rex left near the door.

“What, you mean shoot at em?” Rex laughs. “Twould be a death warrant, that. I’ve the one rifle, and Robbie down the lane has a little handgun that, well, I’m not even sure if the damned thing would shoot anymore. But all them goons have a gun o their own. No,” Rex shakes his head sadly, “no, I couldn’t get more than a single shot in without my own head getting blown off and putting the whole town in danger.”

You feel the blood drain out of your face. “You mean the entire gang is armed?”

“Ayup. Reckon that probably not all their guns work so great, specially in this cold, but if even a quarter of them is decent, we’d still be outgunned.”

“So what makes you think they won’t just take what they want, even if I do beat them?”

Rex shrugs. “They respect a Pokémon battle, same as everyone else. If you beat em fair and square and they don’t honour it, their pride and reputation would be ruined, much moreso than just losing the battle. No, if we beat em in a fair fight, they’ll let us go. Rather to allow us that small victory than to face the wrath of one of the gang leaders down south. They won’t brook for any of that nonsense.”

Well, that’s somewhat encouraging anyway. “How long do you think it’ll be before they come?”

“Could be tomorrow, could be a week from now. Guess it depends on how much those storms laid them up. You’re welcome to stay with us until they get here, through. We’ll give you plenty of food as we can, since we’ll be saving more by you winning than you could possibly eat.”

In Rex’s mind, you’d already won the battle just by agreeing to fight it, but you couldn’t force yourself to catch his enthusiasm. You thank him for the offer and curl up with Piplup next to the banked fire to enjoy the warmth as you fall asleep.

The next day dawns sunny and cold, but with no sign of the gang. You and Piplup eat a hearty meal and help Rex and some of the other men of the village repair a downed roof and some other minor damage that still needs fixing from the bad storms. After a warm lunch, you go off to the Psyduck paddock in hopes of getting some training in, but the silly little creatures flee from Piplup’s advances, so you’re forced to take your training to the woods instead. There are no wild Pokémon to fight, so you have Piplup go through some endurance training, running and jumping and flying and strengthening. Any training at all is better than nothing. You’d have to make your time count.

You have another big dinner and an early bed in Rex and Molly’s house, only to awake the next morning before dawn as the sound of a rifle shot explodes through the quiet air. You’re up on your feet in a shot and soon Rex is there beside you, all dressed and ready.

“That’s them, alright,” he says grimly. “Let’s go out and assess the damage.”

You nod at Piplup and the two of you leave the house to follow Rex out to the square.

There’s a large group of boys in the middle of the village, and boys they really are, some as young as twelve or thirteen by your judgment. But just as Rex had warned, every one of them is armed, and most have cold, hard faces. The man in the center is obviously the leader of the pack, the oldest, the biggest, and the meanest looking. Bullet’s clothing is patched and a bit dirty, but his hair is slicked back with wax and, like Rex had mentioned the other day, he wears a pair of dark black glasses that covered his eyes, giving him a menacing expression.

The leader clutches a short metal chain that held captive quite possibly the meanest and nastiest Pokémon you’ve ever seen. It was a sort of dusty blue, but aside from the colour, it’s hard for you to make out anything aside from giant jaws of teeth that constantly snap at the air. The thing constantly dances and pulls at its chain, biting at the air, lunging at threats perceived and real. It nips at the leader’s pants leg and the young man gives the thing a kick, knocking it down to the dirty snow for a second before it was back on its feet, snarling.

Alright, so, that’s the Pokémon Piplup’s supposed to fight. “The poor thing looks half mad…”

“I’ve heard it said he starves the beast so its always hungry to make it meaner,” Rex mutters at you. “But, of course that should make it weaker too.”

Bullet knows Rex is the one in charge and he begins to walk towards us, through he stops and cocks his head oddly when he catches sight of me and Piplup. “Hey, old man, who’s this, your daughter?” He laughs. “I wouldn’t mind taking her in place of your stores.”

Rex opens his mouth, but you lay a hand on his arm and step forward yourself. This was your battle now. “I’m not his daughter, and you can’t have me. You can’t have the stores, either.”

You hear a growling sound coming from their direction, but you’re not sure if Bullet is making the noise or his Pokémon. “Huh, and you’re going to stop me, eh? You and that little blue turd of yours?”

“Yes. I challenge you to a Pokémon Battle!”




Mean of me to end on a cliffhanger, I know, but I thought it would be most appropriate to let you guys have something of a say for Mia’s first battle. To that end, I’d like to let you pick Mia’s overall strategy for the battle:

A) Fight offensively
B) Fight defensively
C) Fight speedily

The species of Piplup’s opponent is purposefully left vague (after all, Mia doesn’t have a Pokédex), but an astute reader might be able to puzzle it out.

If it makes any difference to your decision-making, note that battles in this story will not be as rigid as regular video game battles. Levels and experience are vague concepts; no Pokémon is limited to only knowing 4 moves, but they still learn new moves as they grow and learn. In short, expect battles to play out more theatrically and with story, rather than the straightforward back-and-forth of a simulated VG battle.

If you have any questions, you’re always welcome to ask, and the writer team will be happy to answer however we can.

And speaking of the team, my own “introductory” period is done and the story will be now be open to our full group of writers. Since the basics of the story and world were my own, we thought it best if I wrote the first few chapters to establish the universe and style, but now that there’s a good chunk of story in, my fellow authors will also be contributing chapters here and there. Hopefully this will serve well to broaden the story and keep everyone involved and interested. Of course, I’ll still be contributing chapters myself, too, just not all of them. :)

Voting will be open until Monday, September 22nd.

Also, thank you everyone for voting for Mia’s next Pokémon! The people have spoken, and one Pokemon in particular gained the most votes among readers; the authors didn’t even need to step in and make the final choice. I hope you all will enjoy its arrival!
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 2

Sun protection is important, even in Winter! U.U

The gang is armed, so what? It's still gunpowder and it doesn't do much if watered!

My vote is C ! Piplup doesn't have that big defense, its attacks won't do much either, so I think speed is the best to go, but used wisely in order to not make it sweat for nothing.

PS: Mia could still try to go aroung the gang while they fight the villagers, and try to assassinate the gang's leader!
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 2

Fight speedily. This seems like the best chance Mia has as an unskilled battler. After all, "dodge it!" has gotten Ash this far. No reason why it won't work for Mia :)
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 2

So I'm guessing the Pokémon is Gible. Its mouth is the largest part of its body and the colour matches. In the anime it's also seen biting everything without thinking too much (or at all).

Can we know which moves Piplup knows right now? That would help us decide which battle style fits it. Or wil the moves be determined based on our choice? I.e. if we pick offensive Piplup will have strong offensive moves, if we pick defensive, it will have defensive/status moves.
 
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At first I was thinking it was a riley Loudred but now I'm thinking...Dieno? Well if starving it makes it weak and the quicker it goes down the quicker we can get out of this mess. To Fight Offensively and show how weak it really is would be a sure way to humiliate them.
 
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I vote Fight Defensively. I want piplup to evolve into a defenseive tank.
 
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Drohn said:
Can we know which moves Piplup knows right now? That would help us decide which battle style fits it. Or will the moves be determined based on our choice?

I think that the selection will determine the move choice. Either way, any move can be used offensively or defensively (for the anime, at least :p), so anything could work. I'm sure at least most of the moves will be shown in the next chapter.
 
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Piplup is relatively young and inexperienced, so its move pool is rather small, but that doesn't mean that it can't make the most of any situation. :)

And for the record, this story is using the Sinnoh National Pokedex, Platinum version. So as much as Deino is one of my favourite Pokémon, that couldn't be it since Deino was never in Sinnoh.
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 2

As others have said, its probably Gible.

I'll go with C, Fighting Speedily.
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 2

So everyone, how do you think the battle is going to play out? I think that if Mia wins, she'll finally be credited as a trainer, but if she loses, it would be a great lesson for her and Piplup. What do you guys think?
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 2

C) Fight Speedily

Hit and dodge all the way!

I definitely think winning this battle will make her stronger in her own way. ;) Something will be born in them and you know.. cool things like that.

If she wins I definitely think she'll be more confident in her training skills and that should motivate her to train more and become even stronger. If she loses it might result in avoiding future battles.
 
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Aren't gible and piplup the smae size? if anything piplup is taller! and it says it towers over piplup...hmm...
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 2

Hm... Have you guys considered Rattata? On its hind legs it could fit the description. I think C is our best shot either way though so this is just speculation.
 
RE: Winds of Time - PokéBeach CYOA - Chapter 2

The Pokemon really can't be anything but Gible.
Almost considered shiny Tyrunt, but no spiky head there (wasn't even considering Sinnoh-only 'mons at the time).
Also, Gible is a full foot taller than Piplup... Who knew?

Anyway, we should:
A) Fight offensively

Because honestly, I can't fight another way, so I won't look toward those options.
Little upset there's no run option, as this would be that point in the book where this is your last chance to turn around before dying... Dunno, just gives that vibe.
 
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You already had the run option last choice, and you guys chose to stick your guns. No running from a trainer battle! :p
 
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Lugia123 said:
Hm... Have you guys considered Rattata? On its hind legs it could fit the description. I think C is our best shot either way though so this is just speculation.

Rattata isn't sand blue.




I was thinking it could be Totodile, Loudred/Exploud or Gible because of the blue colour but row of teeth, bitting behaviour and the mouth size gave it away as Gible.
...In the end, it can be a different coloured Sharpedo or Carvanha that also can hold its own on land! :p :D
 
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I'll vote for C) Fight Speedily. That Gible is clearly weakened by its trainer's abuse, but it's definitely still able to injure Piplup if it gets the chance. So fighting defensively would be more or less suicidal. Fighting offensively might work, but it still leaves the opportunity open for Gible to attack. That's why Piplup needs to try to dodge as many attacks as possible, getting in an attack every so often. That'll result in the best scenario for Mia.
 
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Athena said:
You already had the run option last choice, and you guys chose to stick your guns. No running from a trainer battle! :p

I chose no such thing.
I'll change my vote to:

D) Run away like a madman all the way up the mountain with our arms flailing behind us shouting "WOOOO-O-LOOOO!"
 
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Athena said:
You already had the run option last choice, and you guys chose to stick your guns. No running from a trainer battle! :p

Well yeah, we could have avoided the battle altogether last time.
 
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