XY: Delta Guardians - A Text-based Set by Steffenka

[steffenka]

Long time no see! Here's a few new cards!~
Sorry for the long cardless period, I've been very busy with school!

[Basic] Mareep [Delta Species] HP: 50 [C]

[C] Woolly Jump 20

Weakness: [F]
Resistance: [M]
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Flaaffy [Delta Species] HP: 90 [C]

[C] Smack 20

[C][C] Thunder Wave 30
Your opponent's Active Pokemon is now Paralyzed.

Weakness: [F]
Resistance: [M]
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Uncommon

[Stage 2] Ampharos [Delta Species] HP: 120 [C]

(Ability) Blessed Light
Once during your turn, you may remove a Basic Energy from your Discard Pile.

[C][C][C] Supercharged Voice 100

Weakness: [F]
Resistance: [M]
Retreat: [C][C][C]
Rarity: Rare Holo

[Basic] Manaphy-EX [Delta Species] HP: 160 [Y]

(Ability) Heart Swap
Once during your turn, flip a coin. If heads, you may switch your opponent's Active Pokemon out with a Pokemon on his or her Bench.

[Y][C] Delta Beam 50+
If this Pokemon has a δ Energy attached to it, this attack does 50 damage + 80 damage.

Weakness: [L]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C]

 

[steffenka]

Due to lack of time I've decided that I won't be doing another set after this one. Sorry

[Basic] Deino [Delta Species] HP: 60 [M]

[C] Bite 20

Weakness: [Y]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Zweilous [Delta Species] HP: 90 [M]

(Ability) Dual Heads
Each time this Pokemon attacks flip a coin. If heads, the attack does twice the amount of damage.

[M][C] Delta Crunch 40+
If this Pokemon has a δ-Energy on it, this attack does 20 more damage.

Weakness: [Y]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Uncommon

[Stage 2] Hydreigon [Delta Species] HP: 150 [M]

[M][M][C] Metal Smash 70

[M][M][M][C] Draconic Burst 150
This Pokemon does 40 damage to itself.

Weakness: [Y]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C][C]
Rarity: Rare Holo

[Basic] Cubone [Delta Species] HP: 50 [N]

[F][C] Bone Smack 30

Weakness: [G]
Resistance: [L]
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Marowak [Delta Species] HP: 100 [N]

(Ability) Mothers Heart
If any Cubone is on your Bench, this Pokemon does 30 more damage.

[F][F][C] DragonBone Toss 70

Weakness: [G]
Resistance: [L]
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Uncommon

[Basic] Seviper [Delta Species] HP: 100 [C]

[C] Wrap 30
Your opponent's Active Pokemon can not be switched out.

[C][C][C] Sharp Fangs 70

Weakness: [P]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Non-holo Rare

[Basic] Pachirisu [Delta Species] HP: 60 [C]

[C] Nuzzle 30
Flip a coin. If heads, your opponent's Active Pokemon is now Paralyzed.

Weakness: [F]
Resistance: [color=B8B8D0][M][/color]
Retreat:
Rarity: Common

[Baby] Vinulb HP: 50 [G]

(Ability) Baby Evolution
Once during your turn, you may flip a coin. If heads, search your deck for a Tangela and put it on this Pokemon.

[G][G] Vine Smash 50

Weakness: [R]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]

[Baby] Capam HP: 50 [C]

(Ability) Baby Evolution
Once during your turn, you may flip a coin. If heads, search your deck for a Aipom and put it on this Pokemon.

[C][C] Hand Bounce 40

Weakness: [F]
Resistance:
Retreat:

[Baby] Dremeat HP: 50 [P]

(Ability) Baby Evolution
Once during your turn, you may flip a coin. If heads, search your deck for a Drowzee and put it on this Pokemon.

[P][P] Hypnobeam 30
Your opponent's Active Pokemon is now Asleep.

Weakness: ][P]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]

 

[bbninjas]

Main thing that I noticed - Pachirisu cannot have a definite paralyzing attack; this is one of the unspoken rules. An always paralyze means that the pokemon will never be able to attack or retreat, unless with the help of a trainer (eg switch). Cards avoid this by either inducing a coin flip, discarding two or more enegy, or preventing that Pokemon from attacking the next turn. The only cards I can think of that does this are Megas, such as Venesaur.
Here is an example of a Pikachu with Nuzzle.

 

[steffenka]

Thank you for noticing that BB!

[Basic] Teddiursa [Delta Species] HP: 70 [G]

[C] Honey Punch 20
Flip a coin. If heads, your opponent's Active Pokemon is now Confused.

Weakness: [F]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Ursaring [Delta Species] HP: 110 [G]

(Ability) Honey Coat
When this Pokemon is damaged by an attack, flip a coin. If heads, that attack does 40 less damage to this Pokemon.

[G][C][C] Herbal Kick 70
Remove all Special Conditions attached to both this Pokemon and your opponent's Active Pokemon.

Weakness: [F]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C][C]
Rarity: Non-holo Rare

[Basic] Patrat [Delta Species] HP: 50 [L]

[L] Paralyzing Stare
Flip a coin. If heads, your opponent's Active Pokemon is Paralyzed.

Weakness: [F]
Resistance:
Retreat:
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Watchog [Delta Species] HP: 90 [L]

(Ability) Watcheck
Once during your turn, you may choose 1 card on your opponent's hand and reveal it. If that card is an Item card, discard it.

[L][C] Shocking Tail 30
Flip a coin. If heads, your opponent's Active Pokemon is Paralyzed.

Weakness: [F]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Uncommon

 

[bbninjas]

Thank you for noticing that BB!
-snip-

That's okay steffen! Happy to do it! I would like to know to what extant is fine for me critiquing. I could just pick up on 'illegal' cards such as the before Pachirisu, OP cards, or every nitty gritty mistakes . Well maybe not the last one, but I can look at card wording and etc.

 

[steffenka]

Thank you for noticing that BB!
-snip-

That's okay steffen! Happy to do it! I would like to know to what extant is fine for me critiquing. I could just pick up on 'illegal' cards such as the before Pachirisu, OP cards, or every nitty gritty mistakes . Well maybe not the last one, but I can look at card wording and etc.

You can critique all of it!
As long as it doesn't come of as rude, I'll be fine, as I know you're trying to help me

 

[steffenka]

[Basic] Skiddo [Delta Species] HP: 70 [C]

[C] Stomp 30

[C][C] Bam! 40

Weakness: [R]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Gogoat [Delta Species] HP: 110 [C]

(Ability) Gogoat Away
Flip a coin. If heads, switch this Pokemon with 1 of your benched Pokemon.

[C][C][C] Bushy Tackle 60
Discard an Energy attached to your opponent's Active Pokemon.

Weakness: [R]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Non-holo Rare

[Basic] Ducklett [Delta Species] HP: 50 [L]

[L] ThunderFeathers 20
Flip a coin. If heads, your opponent's Active Pokemon is Paralyzed.

Weakness: [L]
Resistance: [F]
Retreat:
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Swanna [Delta Species] HP: 100 [L]

(Ability) Swanna Song
Once during your turn, you may flip a coin. If heads, your opponent's Active Pokemon is now Asleep. If tails, your Active Pokemon is now Asleep.

[L][L][C] Long Beak 70

Weakness: [L]
Resistance: [F]
Retreat:
Rarity: Uncommon

[Basic] Karrablast [Delta Species] HP: 70 [R]

[R] Peck 30

Weakness: [R]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Escavalier [Delta Species] HP: 130 [R]

(Ability) Burning Victory
If your opponent's Pokémon is Knocked Out by damage from an attack of this Pokémon, the new Active Pokémon is now Burned.

[R][R][C] Fire Lances 80x
Flip 2 coins. This attack does 80 damage times the amount of heads.

Weakness: [R]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Rare Holo

 

[bbninjas]

-snip-

[Stage 1] Escavalier [Delta Species] HP: 130 [R]

(Ability) Burning Victory
If this Pokemon knocks 1 of your opponent's Pokemon out, your opponent's Active Pokemon is now Burned.

[R][R][C] Fire Lances 80x
Flip 2 coins. This attack does 80 damage times the amount of heads.

Weakness: [R]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Rare Holo

Burning Victory probably should be worded like this:

(Ability) Burning Victory
If your opponent's Pokémon is Knocked Out by damage from an attack of this Pokémon, the new Defending Pokémon is now Burned.

Ref Lugia PS, Heatmor PS

 

[steffenka]

-snip-

Burning Victory probably should be worded like this:

(Ability) Burning Victory
If your opponent's Pokémon is Knocked Out by damage from an attack of this Pokémon, the new Defending Pokémon is now Burned.

Ref Lugia PS, Heatmor PS

Didn't they stop using "the Defending Pokemon" with XY, so wouldn't it be "the new Active Pokemon" instead of "the Defending Pokemon"?

 

[Reggie McGigas]

Why do all your baby Pokemon evolve into Magmar?

 

[bbninjas]

Burning Victory probably should be worded like this:

(Ability) Burning Victory
If your opponent's Pokémon is Knocked Out by damage from an attack of this Pokémon, the new Defending Pokémon is now Burned.

Ref Lugia PS, Heatmor PS

Didn't they stop using "the Defending Pokemon" with XY, so wouldn't it be "the new Active Pokemon" instead of "the Defending Pokemon"?

o.0 They did too! Thanks for notifying me of that. So, yes indeed it would be 'the new Active Pokemon'

 

[steffenka]

Why do all your baby Pokemon evolve into Magmar?

'Cause Magmar is fabulous, and I made a mistake ._.'
Thanks for notifying me!

 

[steffenka]

[Basic] Cubchoo [Delta Species] HP: 70 [C]

[C] Sniffle 20

Weakness: [M]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Beartic [Delta Species] HP: 120 [C]

[C][C] Slash 60

[C][C][C] Arctic Roar 100

Weakness: [M]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Uncommon

[Basic] Roggenrola [Delta Species] HP: 60 [G]

[G] Bushroll 20

Weakness: [W]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Boldore [Delta Species] HP: 90 [G]

[G][C] Power Gem 40

[G][G][C] Rocky Rollout 70

Weakness: [W]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C][C]
Rarity: Uncommon

[Stage 2] Gigalith [Delta Species] HP: 150 [G]

(Ability) Sturdy
If this Pokémon has full HP and would be Knocked Out by damage from an attack, this Pokémon is not Knocked Out and its remaining HP becomes 10 instead.

[G][G][C][C] Rocks with Spores 100
Flip a coin. If heads, your opponent's Active Pokemon is Paralyzed. If tails, your opponent's Active Pokemon is Asleep.

Weakness: [W]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C][C][C][C]
Rarity: Rare Holo

 

[steffenka]

[Basic] Wingull [Delta Species] HP: 50 [G]

[G] Leaf Wing 20

Weakness: [L]
Resistance: [F]
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Pelipper [Delta Species] HP: 90 [G]

(Ability) Gulp
If this Pokemon has a Pokemon Tool attached to it, this Pokemon has 30 more HP.

[G][C][C] Delta Wing 60
If this Pokemon has a δ Energy attached to it, discard an Energy card attached to your opponent's Active Pokemon.

Weakness: [L]
Resistance: [F]
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Non-holo Rare

[Basic] Taillow [Delta Species] HP: 40 [L]

[L][C] Big Peck 40

Weakness: [L]
Resistance: [F]
Retreat:
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Swellow [Delta Species] HP: 90 [L]

(Ability) Scrappy
Each of your opponent's Pokemon has no Resistance.

[L][L][C] Hyper Beam 70

Weakness: [L]
Resistance: [F]
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Rare Holo

 

[steffenka]

[Basic] Solrock [Delta Species] HP: 70 [R]

(Ability) Lunar Shade
As long you have Lunatone in play, each Pokemon in play, in each player's hand, and in the Discard Pile has no Abilities (except for Lunar Shade)

[R][C] Solar Explosion 100
This Pokemon does 70 damage to itself.

Weakness: [P]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Rare holo

[Basic] Lunatone [Delta Species] HP: 70 [W]

(Ability) Solar Shade
As long you have Solrock in play, each Pokemon in play, in each player's hand, and in the Discard Pile has no Abilities (except for Solar Shade)

[W] Once in a Blue Moon
Search your deck for 3 [W] Energies and 1 [W] Pokemon, and put them into your hand. This Pokemon does 70 damage to itself.

Weakness: [P]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Non-holo Rare

[Basic] Oddish [Delta Species] HP: 50 [R]

[R] Spicy Leaf
Your opponent's Active Pokemon is now Burned.

Weakness: [R]
Resistance:
Retreat:
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Gloom [Delta Species] HP: 80 [R]

Ability: Burning Spores
If this Pokemon is damaged by an attack, your opponent's Active Pokemon is now Burned.

[R][C] Drool Slap 30

Weakness: [R]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Uncommon

[Stage 2] Bellossom [Delta Species] HP: 120 [R]

(Ability) Sensational Dance
Once during your turn, you may flip a coin. If heads, your opponent's Active Pokemon is Confused.

[R][R][C] Burning Flower Toss 30x
Flip 4 coins. This attack does 30 damage times the amount of heads. If you get any tails, you opponent's Active Pokemon is Burned.

Weakness: [R]
Resistance: [W]
Retreat:
Rarity: Rare Holo

[Basic] Throh [Delta Species] HP: 90 [R]

[C][C] Big-Hand Blow 50

[R][R][C] Flaming Toss 90
Switch your opponent's Active Pokemon with one on his or her Bench.

Weakness: [P]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Uncommon

[Basic] Sawk [Delta Species] HP: 90 [W]

(Ability) Sturdy
If this Pokémon has full HP and would be Knocked Out by damage from an attack, this Pokémon is not Knocked Out and its remaining HP becomes 10 instead.

[W][C][C] Aquatic Kick 70

Weakness: [P]
Resistance:
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Uncommon

 

[bbninjas]

With lunatone, what do you do with the water energies and pokemon?

 

[steffenka]

With lunatone, what do you do with the water energies and pokemon?

Whoops, you put them in your hand

 

[bbninjas]

With lunatone, what do you do with the water energies and pokemon?

Whoops, you put them in your hand

Also, I think Lunatone and Solrock should do the same damage to itself.

 

[steffenka]

[Basic] Spritzee [Delta Species] HP: 60 [C]

[C] Perfume Spray 10
Your opponent's Active Pokemon is now Confused.

[C][C] Smell of Delta
Put 1 damage counter on all of your opponent's Pokemon on his or her bench.

Weakness: [M]
Resistance: [D]
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Aromatisse [Delta Species] HP: 110 [C]

[C] Aromatic Song
Flip a coin. If heads, your opponent's Active Pokemon is Asleep.

[C][C][C] Delta Dance 30x
This attack does 30 damage times the amount of Delta Pokemon in play.

Weakness: [M]
Resistance: [color=704858][D][/color]
Retreat: [C][C][C]
Rarity: Non-holo Rare

[Basic] Swirlix [Delta Species] HP: 60 [C]

[C] Sticky Strings 30
Your opponent's Active Pokemon cannot be switched out during his or her next turn.

Weakness: [M]
Resistance: [D]
Retreat: [C]
Rarity: Common

[Stage 1] Slurpuff [Delta Species] HP: 100 [C]

(Ability) Delicious Smell
Once during your turn you may flip a coin. If heads, your opponent's Active Pokemon is Asleep.

[C][C][C] Sweet Blast 70

Weakness: [M]
Resistance: [D]
Retreat: [C][C]
Rarity: Non-holo Rare

 

[bbninjas]

I think Aromatisse shouldn't say on the field but (you have) in play.