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Dustin DeVine, Couldn't be better! just finished school for the year. How is Deception coming??

Dustin DeVine, Well, I suppose I'm just singed then.

Well, now I'm dead, so I guess you'll never be getting that 'hello'

hEy yOu

Dustin DeVine, Yeah, the haiku contest. But now I remember seeing that post in the WC's thread. Looks to be a great story with an exaggerated plot. Good luck on the project!

Just a friendly reminder that you should enter your poem for the contest. I'm really anticipating to see your work, and I wish you luck on Deception!

Dustin DeVine, Thank you very much, Dustin!

Dustin DeVine, Thanks, that was really actually helpful

Dustin DeVine, Just solving a few errors within the entire story itself.

So the basic plot line is about a person, a recently returned Army Ranger from a large war with N. Korea. He invents this sort of super soldier training program, and puts himself through it to lead his soldiers into battle. The only issue is his girlfriend gets kidnapped, and he goes looking for her in N. Korea.

My only issue is the fact that I cannot seem to find a way to kill or a few of his pals off. For example Rogue, can hide better than anyone in the world, but he's supposed to be cornered in a building and die. It's really confusing.

you should help me work out a plot line for my story... It's not going too hot ATM.

I think Adam is the fastest person to be modded.

Elite Stride, Dustin DeVine, thanks so much guys!

Dustin DeVine, haha I'm great. Happier than I've been in a while. And I've been really happy lately, so it's amazing that I got happier Sorry. I just couldn't help but blab about getting back with him

Omg! My bf and I got back together! I'm so happy Oh...uh, what's up?

Dustin DeVine, Passed all of them except for Spanish, which I barely passed with a C.

XD

Dustin DeVine, School's out, how was your report card? XD

Dustin DeVine, goooooood hbu :3

Dustin DeVine, haha, good to know, I'll check it out :3

Haha, if you're consistent, it will. Incinermyn's Haiku Contests have continued for a looong time. You can do the same with these.