thanks. Those are good suggestions, I will change them later, as I am too lazy to now. But, they were great suggestions and I will take them into account!
Fixed it. Sorry, it was my fault. The error was me writing "details is" instead of "details are" or "detail is" when I gave you a critique on your own story a while ago (presuming that's what you quoted me on).
*critique (A "critic" is the person making a critique)
And, yeah, it looks like you covered things pretty well. I think I noticed a small grammatical mistake I made in the quote from me you used, but you got your points across well, in my opinion.
MrGatr, Oh. Well, x_x. Gamma rays explodes the Krookrook. Gamma rays are very powerful. They can be seen about 100,000,000,000,000 light years away. Means they are REALLY powerful.
*gamma rays shoots at krookrook, they are super fast and cannot miss.*
NOOOOOOOO- *explodes*
*unlimted number of gamma rays shoots at Krookkrook*
*until you say it's dead, they never stop shooting*