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RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Isa reaches a clearing only to see a giant lake in front of her. She jumps out far, hoping to land on one of the boulders.
Ralts! Get me to land on one of these boulders!
Please!
No problem, Master.
She uses Physic to make her trainer safely land.
"Thank you." She scarcely whispers aloud. She turns to see Rudy. She planned to wave at him, maybe get him to join her, but decided against it.
He doesn't really seem to enjoy the fact that I'm the leader. I won't rub it in his face...
She prepares to jump onto the next boulder, quietly.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Looks around. Sees Rudy, and Isa. Runs toward where Isa is going to meet up*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Isa turns to see if anyone is watching her. She see's Poke runs towards the lake, and is surprised. She slips from the rock. Ralts wasn't fast enough to save her, and Isa splashed into the water, causing her system hardrive to start shutting down...
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Isa!"
*Makes OMG face*
"OK, need to help. Horsea, come on out!"
*Horsea appears*
"Go save Isa!"
*Horsea jumps in the water, and uses Surf to bring Isa out of the water*\
"Isa, are you all right?"
*Looks at Isa's eyes.*
Isa's Eyes: System Shutdown, manual Team ROGUE control
Poke: "Oh no..."
*Looks around*
"This could help Dad get Isa back."
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

In front of Poke and Isa, Rudy's Kirlia appears for a split second, and disappears back to Rudy.

"Kirlia! Did you find any ROUGE grunts?"

Kirlia nods.

"Great, take me to them," Rudy holds out his hand.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Hello, Mew! Tyler, what do we do with it?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

We can't just leave it here. ROUGE might try to take it again. Hold on...
*Calls Joey*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

???: "I... Charon... shall.... kill... Lucas, Dawn, Isa, Poke, Culex, and..." *He turns fully and sees me*
Charon: "You overheard me... I need to kill-"
Me: "NOT TODAY, *&$#*! Xatu, Psychic to lift Charon into the air! Prinplup, Bayleef, and..." *Attaches angel wings to Numel* "...Numel, do your combo of a spun up Bubblebeam, Rasor Leaf, and Ember! Pikachu, Volt Tackle, RIGHT NOW!"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Nothing... oh well let's just take Mew with us. It's better then leaving it here with these ROUGE agents around.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*Picks up Pokegear* "What's up Tyler? I'm kinda busy with Charon here." *Hears Mew in background* "Is that MEW?!? Ooh, I just LOVE that thing!"
EDIT: OoC: Forgot about level-ups. I will do 13 now!
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Ralts immediately looks into view, but then remembers this boy carrying her master.
He's the one whom wears the enemie's wears!
She tuggs at Poke's shirt, waiting for him to do something.

OoC: Arceus!
How many of my RPG characters need to die??!!
*slaps forehead*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

OoC: ???
In: *Massive explosion happens, releasing millions of Castform*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Kirlia teleports Rudy next to Poke and Isa.

Rudy looks forward, and makes an angered face.

"Kirlia! These aren't ROUGE grunts!"

The Kirlia motions Rudy's attention towards Isa.

"Hmm? What's wrong with her?"

Rudy walks closely towards her, not making a break in his pace.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Eevee, you're evolving into Leafeon!" *POOF* Eevee evolves into Leafeon.
"I love Mews!" Samuel hugs the Mew.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

*The Castforms make a giant staircase, reaching a far away island*
Me: "...Where are Red and Yellow?"
Yellow: "Sorry..." *Begins panting* "You are hard to keep up with"
Red: ".....Charon... where is he?"
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Hey look! That staircase the Castforms made! I would go there but I better head to the gym."
*Connor dashes to the pokemart to get hyper potions.*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

Me: "Charon..." *Sees figure running on staircase* "Get back here!" *Yellow and Red follow me running down the stairs*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

"Come on lets get a move on to Fortree city."
*Spirit starts heading off there.*
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

C'mon let's get moving. I'm sure Isa and the others aren't far behind.
 
RE: A New Dawn RPG. Sign-ups are over again! Congrats to the 6 that made it!

K :/...
 
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