RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
Yeah, but sadly I can't change it now.
What has been done has been done.
Sandvich said:
Yeah, but sadly I can't change it now.
What has been done has been done.
Arcticwhite's Fake Cards *Update* Fakémon Water Starter! 28/03/2016
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RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
Kasrane LV.X:
Please comment!
Kasrane LV.X:
Please comment!
RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
Thanks!
I did think it looks like Moltres,
but if you see the whole Pokémon it's completely different.
One of the starter evos.
saurs said:
Thanks!
I did think it looks like Moltres,
but if you see the whole Pokémon it's completely different.
One of the starter evos.
RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
Thanks! Stick around for more!
I noticed your banner isn't the best in the world...
I can make one for you!
CMP still hasn't replied to my ART shop request, so...
Want a free banner?
If not, never mind...
If anyone would like to requst a banner, or avatar, PM me!
Epicness said:
Thanks! Stick around for more!
I noticed your banner isn't the best in the world...
I can make one for you!
CMP still hasn't replied to my ART shop request, so...
Want a free banner?
If not, never mind...
If anyone would like to requst a banner, or avatar, PM me!
RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
NEW sprites!
Left to right:
Firling, Paradoss, Armorian,
Vulant, Leocity, Stoneile
Please comment!
NEW sprites!
Left to right:
Firling, Paradoss, Armorian,
Vulant, Leocity, Stoneile
Please comment!
RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
Wow!!! Your fakemon are so great, Love the dogs!!! Keep up the great work
Wow!!! Your fakemon are so great, Love the dogs!!! Keep up the great work
RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
Thankyou!
Grumpigfarmer said:Wow!!! Your fakemon are so great, Love the dogs!!! Keep up the great work
Thankyou!
RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
I like you already
You are good.... toooo good.
WE MUST FIGHT TO THE DEATH.
Nah, just dont get overcompetitive like me and we'll be fine
Arcticwhite said:Sprite preview (Sprites drawn by me, on photoshop CS5 )
In order...Top to bottom, Left to Right:
Poislorain, Newty, Pachin, Aviheat,
Anglight, Kasrane, Amphel, Enozoim
I like you already
You are good.... toooo good.
WE MUST FIGHT TO THE DEATH.
Nah, just dont get overcompetitive like me and we'll be fine
RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
Your sprites are one of the best I have seen for a while now. I would like to point out a few things first.
First sprite set:
The first thing that I would like to point out on the first sprite would be the whip-like facial features. You might want to add the right whip-like feature more behind the left one mainly because it seems as if it is overlapping the left one (if you look very closely). The clump at the end should be more hidden away.
The only minor problem I found with the second sprite was that I believe you should show a minimal part of the right eye. You have space to actually make that part of the face visible. Another thing I noticed was that the right arm seems to be facing more downward, instead of actually being more dynamic and facing towards the screen (like the other arms & hands). Besides those two things, the sprite looks impressive.
Let's move on to the third one. Out of all the sprites, I believe this one is the one that needs most work. The main body needs to have more dynamic characteristics instead of being static and plain. One way you could improve that is by adding a range of colors to the main body. A few may disagree with this, but for some reason, I believe it just looks plain.
Time to head downward and talk about the fire bird. Well, since I don't have much to say about this piece, I would like to ask you if fire particles are actually present on it's head or if it is some type of spriting error? If it isn't an error, I would recommend you making it more noticeable and adding more fire.
The next few sprites have little to no problems, so I will just go through this quickly.
Make sure you make the make the light ball on it's antenna more circular.
Fire bird #2: Work on the feet a bit. They are quite difficult to make out.
The right hand on the metallic sprite needs to be curved more and you might want to make it more visible by extending out it's arm.
I can't seem to find anything wrong with the last sprite.
Again, you did an amazing job on this sprite set. There were only minimal errors, but the overall job was magnificent; however, make sure the shadow of the sprites are darker. This will give the overall piece more emphasis.
Second sprite set:
I'll go through this recent sprite set pretty quickly, because, again I only found a few minor errors.
You might want to fix the thigh on it's left leg to make it more complimentary to it's right.
Second sprite is fine, couldn't find anything wrong with it. I was a bit confused when I first saw it, because I thought it was a transparent tail, instead of two tentacle-like structures.
Now for the third sprite, I would like to mention that the front and back legs in the background need to be shaped slightly better. They seem a bit too thick to me.
Couldn't find anything wrong with the fourth sprite.
The only thing I would recommend you for the fifth sprite would be to work on its hind foot more by making it slightly more circular.
You might want to make the eye somewhat larger for the last sprite.
Definitely looking forward to seeing more sprite work from you. These were all amazing.
Your sprites are one of the best I have seen for a while now. I would like to point out a few things first.
First sprite set:
The first thing that I would like to point out on the first sprite would be the whip-like facial features. You might want to add the right whip-like feature more behind the left one mainly because it seems as if it is overlapping the left one (if you look very closely). The clump at the end should be more hidden away.
The only minor problem I found with the second sprite was that I believe you should show a minimal part of the right eye. You have space to actually make that part of the face visible. Another thing I noticed was that the right arm seems to be facing more downward, instead of actually being more dynamic and facing towards the screen (like the other arms & hands). Besides those two things, the sprite looks impressive.
Let's move on to the third one. Out of all the sprites, I believe this one is the one that needs most work. The main body needs to have more dynamic characteristics instead of being static and plain. One way you could improve that is by adding a range of colors to the main body. A few may disagree with this, but for some reason, I believe it just looks plain.
Time to head downward and talk about the fire bird. Well, since I don't have much to say about this piece, I would like to ask you if fire particles are actually present on it's head or if it is some type of spriting error? If it isn't an error, I would recommend you making it more noticeable and adding more fire.
The next few sprites have little to no problems, so I will just go through this quickly.
Make sure you make the make the light ball on it's antenna more circular.
Fire bird #2: Work on the feet a bit. They are quite difficult to make out.
The right hand on the metallic sprite needs to be curved more and you might want to make it more visible by extending out it's arm.
I can't seem to find anything wrong with the last sprite.
Again, you did an amazing job on this sprite set. There were only minimal errors, but the overall job was magnificent; however, make sure the shadow of the sprites are darker. This will give the overall piece more emphasis.
Second sprite set:
I'll go through this recent sprite set pretty quickly, because, again I only found a few minor errors.
You might want to fix the thigh on it's left leg to make it more complimentary to it's right.
Second sprite is fine, couldn't find anything wrong with it. I was a bit confused when I first saw it, because I thought it was a transparent tail, instead of two tentacle-like structures.
Now for the third sprite, I would like to mention that the front and back legs in the background need to be shaped slightly better. They seem a bit too thick to me.
Couldn't find anything wrong with the fourth sprite.
The only thing I would recommend you for the fifth sprite would be to work on its hind foot more by making it slightly more circular.
You might want to make the eye somewhat larger for the last sprite.
Definitely looking forward to seeing more sprite work from you. These were all amazing.
RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
Thanks!!!
I haven't seen many of your sprites apart from the one on your avatar/ banner.
Do you have your own thread with them???
If so, tell me!!!
Thanks, I do make minor mistakes, but are easy to correct.
The Fire Wyrm said:I like you already
You are good.... toooo good.
WE MUST FIGHT TO THE DEATH.
Nah, just dont get overcompetitive like me and we'll be fine
Thanks!!!
I haven't seen many of your sprites apart from the one on your avatar/ banner.
Do you have your own thread with them???
If so, tell me!!!
Ice Arceus said:Your sprites are one of the best I have seen for a while now. I would like to point out a few things first.
First sprite set:
The first thing that I would like to point out on the first sprite would be the whip-like facial features. You might want to add the right whip-like feature more behind the left one mainly because it seems as if it is overlapping the left one (if you look very closely). The clump at the end should be more hidden away.
The only minor problem I found with the second sprite was that I believe you should show a minimal part of the right eye. You have space to actually make that part of the face visible. Another thing I noticed was that the right arm seems to be facing more downward, instead of actually being more dynamic and facing towards the screen (like the other arms & hands). Besides those two things, the sprite looks impressive.
Let's move on to the third one. Out of all the sprites, I believe this one is the one that needs most work. The main body needs to have more dynamic characteristics instead of being static and plain. One way you could improve that is by adding a range of colors to the main body. A few may disagree with this, but for some reason, I believe it just looks plain.
Time to head downward and talk about the fire bird. Well, since I don't have much to say about this piece, I would like to ask you if fire particles are actually present on it's head or if it is some type of spriting error? If it isn't an error, I would recommend you making it more noticeable and adding more fire.
The next few sprites have little to no problems, so I will just go through this quickly.
Make sure you make the make the light ball on it's antenna more circular.
Fire bird #2: Work on the feet a bit. They are quite difficult to make out.
The right hand on the metallic sprite needs to be curved more and you might want to make it more visible by extending out it's arm.
I can't seem to find anything wrong with the last sprite.
Again, you did an amazing job on this sprite set. There were only minimal errors, but the overall job was magnificent; however, make sure the shadow of the sprites are darker. This will give the overall piece more emphasis.
Second sprite set:
I'll go through this recent sprite set pretty quickly, because, again I only found a few minor errors.
You might want to fix the thigh on it's left leg to make it more complimentary to it's right.
Second sprite is fine, couldn't find anything wrong with it. I was a bit confused when I first saw it, because I thought it was a transparent tail, instead of two tentacle-like structures.
Now for the third sprite, I would like to mention that the front and back legs in the background need to be shaped slightly better. They seem a bit too thick to me.
Couldn't find anything wrong with the fourth sprite.
The only thing I would recommend you for the fifth sprite would be to work on its hind foot more by making it slightly more circular.
You might want to make the eye somewhat larger for the last sprite.
Definitely looking forward to seeing more sprite work from you. These were all amazing.
Thanks, I do make minor mistakes, but are easy to correct.
RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
Thanks! I will be uploading more... once I've drawn them. I'm just
a bit busy writing a manga comic book on Manga Studio EX...
Blui129 said:
Thanks! I will be uploading more... once I've drawn them. I'm just
a bit busy writing a manga comic book on Manga Studio EX...
RE: Arcticwhite's Fakémon Cards, sprites and stuff!!!
We need to do a duo sometime.
We need to do a duo sometime.
