Writing Ash x Misty (chapters 1-16) 13+

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RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-13) 13+

Thank You My adoring public...
If i can get a sighning/publishing contract i will sell this as a book of course changing the names of the characters but of course if i did you lot would be able to say " we knew about that story/book when it was still being made"...
Daydream over if only that could really happen...
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RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-14) 13+

You may keep the romantic themes in your fanfic, but please edit out the sexual ones.
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-14) 13+

Not to fight Doc Robot, but their are none. Only soon to be on HIS site which has nothing to do with PokeBeach.

Also, PDP, you already told me what happens on her 16th birthday. I cant wait to see read the devious smile version xD
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-14) 13+

there is a link to the site if you click The Dragonfly Region in my signature, but to read that version of the story you need to have the password...
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RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-14) 13+

I only saw a couple of places that are noteworthy. They are minor, but I still think they should be left out:

Example 1:

As May walked into school she saw Ash as she walked past him she whispered,
"Hi sexy",

Example 2:

"What?" Misty asked,
"Kiss me" Gary replied,
"You pervert!" Misty screeched, slapping Gary across the face.


I can relate to the writer's block feeling... when I am writing a research paper, sometimes I cannot get any ideas. I think the same process can be applied to creative writing as well. Here are a couple things that I have tried for helping resolve this:

1) Breaking away from the writing. I've found out that my mind will continue to think about my topic even when I am working on something completely different. If you were to break away from your topic (doesn't necessarily have to be an extended period of time), you may run into an experience in real life that might give you inspiration.

2) Brainstorming. Try grabbing some scratch paper and writing down as many ideas as you can. The obvious ideas will come out first, but once you have exhausted all of the obvious ones, you will start coming up with more creative ideas. Even if you can't use any of them immediately, you might be able to use them later on.

3) When you do get an idea, try sitting down in front of the computer for an extended period of time and continue to type out your story. Keep trying to use the momentum gained from your new idea to continue to develop the storyline.

I would not be surprised at all if you know any or all of these already... it is clear that you have put a lot of effort into developing your story. However, I do want to point them out just in case you didn't know any of them. Good luck with continuing your work.
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

So what happens on devious smile? Mwahahahahaha, i'll update devious smile soon...
If no there are no knew posts by friday i'll stop adding more to the story...
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! keep up the good work ;)

EDIT: Just read devious version...nice!;)
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

How long has it been since you updated the devious smile version?

Edit: Dear god I just read the devious smile version. Wow, BTW you spelt a word wrong but I can't write it on here.
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

Eww the devious version was freaky but I loved the detail lol
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

LOL if you compare the devious smile version to this one, it's like a whole other story.
 
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