Writing Ash x Misty (chapters 1-16) 13+

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RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

*Bump*
Please are you going to quit with this fanfic?

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RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

Sorry i haven't been adding much on lately school's been hell, but i'll try to add stuff more often, any way what will happen next? (really if you have any ideas please pm me since i've run out of ideas).
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

maybe its goes in time to like 10 years and he marrys her then has children and they get pokemon then ash dies and that can end the story lol
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

its awsome but it needs to go into more detail than him remembering the day after
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

I think it is an interesting story, but I don't think you should go into any more detail. I really do not want inappropriate messages lingering around.
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

Ok...
1. I'M NOT A PERV...
2. the last part of the devious smile version is by shard...
3. I AM NOT A FLIPPIN PERV...
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

This is definately a good fanfic. I love the romance, and I think you have almost everything a good writer has. (Just watch the grammar.)
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

No offense, but this is getting worser and worser. Short Chapters, bad spelling and grammar, and punctuation. It doesn't have qualities to be a good fanfic.
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

Don't you mean more worse?? :) Yes, I admit that there are grammatical errors, but I don't care about the short chapters.
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

i usedthis story for a homework tghing, and i got a vg the second highest grade you can get the highest grade being a vg+
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

When are you going to update? I've been waiting a while...I just can't wait for it! :)
 
RE: Ash x Misty (chapters 1-15) 13+

Sorry I haven't been adding much on lately school's been hell, but I'll try to add stuff more often, any way what will happen next? (really if you have any ideas please pm me since I've run out of ideas).
 
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