Finished Big Brother: Supershiny Time! EspeonROX has won Season 4! Prizes now need to be taken up with Guy! A

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Joeypals!! said:
Jirachi event? Really? *Heads to Mystery Gift to get favorite pokemon*
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Starting Saturday and running through July 16. Winner's Path is still available through tomorrow, though.
 
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I already have 2 Jirachi from Gamestop.
 
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Snorchu, let me make this quite simple...










































I'ma boy >:O
 
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I don't do the Gamestop events. :(

EDIT: Ice, I know you're a boy, but I wanted to make a female Espeon in the story. :p
 
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Only Snorchu has made a story with two days left!
 
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So Guy, i herd u liek mudkipz...

So I put a Mudkip in your Mudkip so you can liek while you liek.
 
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I am taking a more story like approach. I'll be done by Saturday morning at the very latest.
 
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If someone here makes it to the top 3, that person will be offered a staff spot! Who? That will be revealed later.
How dare Zero say this game is worthless, making a mokery of Snorchu for staying in the Game Corner alot along with myself! Also, MAYBE season 7.
 
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The boat rocked insanely, almost throwing the Pokémon over its metal rails. The blue-colored, white and orange-finned mudpuppy enjoyed the waves, but the Pink, almost mythological creature held on tightly to the railing as the water raged. The small, white and yellow Pokémon simply floated around the boat carelessly, singing a carol.

It was a bright day, simply with a high tide. Jirachi, Espeon and Mudkip’s human owner, Mark, had decided to go fishing, and he had taken his Pokémon with him. So far, he had caught nothing but Luvdisc, and was now extremely frustrated with the lack of fish in his current area.

Mudkip wanted desperately to go swimming, but Mark had forbidden it, afraid of the possibility of Sharpedos in the water. Mark was a very protective owner, but nothing within his ability could help what was about to happen to the three Pokémon next.

Sighing, Mark cast out another line, using his last caterpie as bait. He started when he felt a large tug on the line, and quickly stood up to fight the large fish. As he tugged at the line, the boat began to rock more and more. Now, even Mudkip began to hang on to the rail, though Jirachi continued to simply float around, almost finished with his carol.

Without warning, the humongous fish burst out of the water, and everyone on the boat paused to stare at it in awe. As soon as it jumped out, the waves began to die down. Then, the gigantic wonder flew towards the boat. Jirachi was taken by surprise when the red scales impacted his body as he was holding the last note of his carol, and he fell, off of the boat and into the waters.

Mark ran over to the edge of the boat, calling Jirachi’s name, but it was too late. One of his beloved Pokémon was gone. Mark continued to cry out hopelessly as the giant he had caught slithered over to Mudkip and Espeon. Mudkip cried out in fear, while Espeon began charging a Psybeam attack. Unfortunately, before either could complete their reaction, the monster whacked its tail against them, and they flew off the boat and into the water.

Mark turned around and furiously dug the hook of his line into the beast’s neck. As it cried out in pain, he kicked it one, two, three times. Its final cry was a short one, as it ran out of breath and fell on the floor of the boat, dead. Mark climbed up to the front of the boat and took a good look at the cause of his pain, and was astonished by what he saw.

The infamous Red Gyarados was lying in his boat, dead. He had caught not only the cause of his pain, but the cause of pain in the entire Johto region. Had he still had his Pokémon, he would’ve been whooping and cheering, crying out in joy. But he wasn’t. There was no one left to share the glory with. His only friends were gone.
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Yeah, this fits the requirements. They're all Mark's Pokémon, so they're all friends. They are characters in the story, so the story's about them. It's a short story. (Actually, very short. Only 509 words.)

I don't know why I made it a sad story. I wrote it between 12 A.M. and 1 A.M., so I have no reasoning right now. ;_; Please don't vote off for content just because it ends sadly. Some of the best stories end like that.

Well, I think that's it.
 
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One continuity error with that, Espeon can swim :p
 
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Ice Espeon said:
One continuity error with that, Espeon can swim :p
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Says who? My story is based loosely on the games, not at all on the anime. ;P

Edit: Unless you meant Mudkip, in which case, he was thrown overboard with no time to truly react to what was happening. However, this is really only part of the story. ;P (But the only part I'm entering in this)
 
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Here is mine. This is how they became friends. Enjoy!

It was a starry night as Mudkip and Espeon laid out on the grass watching the stars. Behind them in the woods, there was the sound of Hoothoots and Kricketots. Mudkip yawned. He was tired after a long day of exploring the woods in search of the a cave that is said to hold great treasure. But, the story was only legend and Espeon believed that Mudkip was wasting his time. Regardless, they were good friends.

“Look, a meteor!” exclaimed Mudkip.

“It is getting closer. Wait, it is headed for us! Into the woods!” shouted Espeon.

Sure enough, it was headed right for them. They ran into the thicket of bushes as the space rock impacted the area that they were just standing in.

Mudkip and Espeon ran to see the crater, but instead, the figure of a Pokemon loomed in front of them. “Who are you?” it whispered.

“I am Espeon and this is my friend Mudkip. Who are you?” asked Espeon.

“I am Jirachi. I will grant wishes for you since you have first spotted me on your planet,” Jirachi said with a sad glance towards them. It was ready for yet another greedy wish.

“I wish to be friends with you so that we can explore the woods to find great treasure,” said Mudkip.

“I wish that you will stay and not leave then. It must be a lonely existence for you with no friends. We will change that,” said Espeon.

Jirachi almost started crying. These Pokemon were selfless at heart and cared for him. He granted the wish and fell asleep in his new friends' house.
 
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Well, all of the active people have entered. EspeonROX and oyeah have 1 day. Hold a sec.

Well, here's why EspeonROX hasn't entered:
EspeonROX said:
Just letting you know, I will not be here for the next two weeks, not being active until the 29th. I'm letting you know so you guys don't go crazy when I'm not here.
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oyeah's last post was 2 days ago, voting for richkid, but he has not posted anything about the challenge.
 
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Okay, someone contact oyeah. Espeon gets immunity until the 29th, when the top 4 challenge will begin.
 
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Some Story Thing for Some Non-College Based Contest


T'was a brilliant dawn, a ruby-red sun shining through the Viridian Forest. An Espeon, named Snow, was using Morning Sun to heal from the previous night's scuffles. Creeping up behind him was one of his friends, Me-Me, a shiny Mudkip of nearby Pewter City. He pokes Snow.
"GAHHH! What in Blaziken's name??!"Oh it's only you Me-Me.
"What'cha doin'?", queried Me-Me.
"Just healing from last night.", replied Snow. Just as he said that, in comes Jack, a Jirachi from Mt. Moon.
"So bone-diddlies, did'ja hear about the 3-on-3 tournament @ Joe Dude's Gym in Pewter City?", asked Jack.
"I heard something about it from Karpman, last night. It's a team-based match where the three combatants are fighting at the same time."
"Oh really? Sounds like fun!"
After deciding to go fight together, Snow, Jack, and Me-Me headed towards Joe Dude's place for their first match.

After arriving at their destination, they registered and got their first match details.

Match One
Jack|Me-Me|Snow
VS
Umbreon|Marshtomp|Pikachu​

Joe Dude, who was the official in this match, signaled "Match Start!"
"Me-Me, use your Mud Shot on Pikachu!
"Got it, Snow!"
After that command Snow went ahead and used Signal Beam on Umbreon. For those who don't know, Signal Beam is a Teal and Electric Blue colored beam that can confuse the target as well as does damage to it too. "Oh come on, it missed??!" Welp this isn't working, so far. I will try to use Grass Knot on it." But alas it also missed. "Why aren't our moves working? Wait could it be their held items? Me-Me, use your thief attack on Umbreon!"Got it! But why, Snow? Dark moves on Dark Pokemon do next to no damage! If my logic is sound then Me-Me should be harder to hit afterwards!
Me-Me went ahead and used thief and stole Umbreon's BrightPowder!
That's what I thought! They are using hax items! After the official found out, Joe Dude disqualified the opposing team and declared Me-Me, Jack, and Snow the winners!
 
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That's it! Judges, we need to do a 3-way PM to decide the winner.
 
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I think we should take off 3 marks for each grammar mistake.
 
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Agreed. Send the stories and bold any mistakes and commentary Ice. I will talk with you through PM.
 
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