All right, here goes:
Snorchu:
Content: 20/50. For one thing, was a bit unoriginal, and another thing, the Pokémon are supposed to be friends, not enemies. It also confused me.
Grammar: 45/50. Though I didn't really like Snorchu's story, I must admit he has almost perfect spelling and grammar.
Total: 65/100
Muddy:
Content: 45/50. I liked the selfless acts of the Pokémon, though, as Ice Espeon said, the meteor thing was a bit cliché.
Grammar: 40/50. There were some minor things, such as forgetting commas in some places, but that's pretty much it.
Total: 85/100
oyeah:
Content: 40/50. I enjoyed the story a lot, it actually made me laugh out loud. Some parts I didn't really get, however, and the formatting was a bit unnecessary. :-/
Grammar: 20/50. As much as I enjoyed the story, the grammar was absolutely terrible. Really, that of a novice.
Total: 60/100
So really, the rankings from me are:
1. Muddy68
2. Snorchu
3. oyeah1988
So, the scores are now
