CHAMPIONS ISLAND (Yep its back for those that dont know!)

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It is time... for... the... CHAMPION ISLAND TO RETURN and im finishing off my story this time...

Prologue:
"Dragonite is unable to fight, carnivines the winner!"
The judge announced as steven returned his carnivine and lance called back his dragonite."Congratiolations Steven you our the new champion" Lance muttered under his breath. "thank you Lance!" Replied Steven as lance showed him to the hall of fame."I will now step back as champion and let you come forward..."Lance then showed Steven a computer. " This shows your trainer card along with all other previous champions" Lance announced. "Just put your trainer card in that slot" Lance then pointed at a litle slot in the computer.Steven put his trainer card into the slot then, immediately the computer flickered to life and this is What it showed:

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"Cool" Remarked Steven.Suddenly a middle aged women came rushing into the room."You'll never believe it Steven, Lance, now everyone that used to be a champion counts as a champion!"At this Lance looked very pleased but Steven looked horrorstruck."WHAT IM NOT THE ONLY 1 ANYMORE???"

Chapter 1: Journey to champions island!

Dan woke up at 5:00AM that day, the day when he would catch the first boat to champions island. He had been reading a leaflet about it the week before and it still lay on Dans bedside table:

������������ARE YOU A POKEMON CHAMPION?CHAMPIONS ISLAND!!!
If you've beaten the pokemon league then come to champions island!!! The luxury paradise for every Champion out there!Including a training centre, a thear...

The rest of the leaflet was covered up by a book.
Dan lept out of his bed and sprinted downstairs, he had got dressed and packed his things the previous night, so he simply grabbed his luggage and jumped onto his bike.

Once he got to the harbour he just did all the the stuff you have to do and set off on the boat.On the boat he saw a very expensive plant that looked very odd but he ignored it and set of into his cabin.
On the way he heard a boy saying; "Whats the matter chicken wuss? wet yourself?" Dan looked round the corner, the boy was taunting and pushing 1 boy and 1 girl.Dan quickly ran down the corridoor and said: "Stop it!" "You lookin at me chicken wuss? 'Cause no-one messes with lewis"Lewis replied."Looks like somones messin with yer now! Go Crawdaunt!" "If thats the way your gonna go about it then fine. GO GARCHOMP!!!" Countered Lewis.

"Alright then, crawdaunt use crabhammer!" Crawdaunt launched a claw at garchomp and wacked it round the face! "Garchomp, use dragon pulse!!!" "Quick crawdaunt, dive of the boat to dodge it!" Crawdaunt dived into the water dodging the dragon pulse by millimetres.
"Now crawdaunt jump up and use crabhammer!"With a splash, crawdaunt lept up to the boat and used crabhammer on garchomp.
Garchomp fell to the ground and lewis recalled it and ran away.

"thanks!" the boy said."Im Jack and this is Dawn,"
"maybe we should let our trainer cards do the talking." Suggested Dawn and they all exchanged trainer cards.


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"OH look theres land!" Said Dan.

Chapter 2:Docking on the island!

Dan rushed over to the side of the boat and peered over, Dawn and Jack followed.The island was shaped like a peanut with various bits sticking out here and there."Its a really weird shape!" Said Dan with a smile."I know, my big brother, Tim, helped design the island so did Jacks, Bill, thats how we met,"Replied Dawn."Hey look, its Lance!".And sure enough there was the Champion that had been beaten by Steven. "Hey look!" said Jack as he knelt down and picked up a trainer card that was on the floor:

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"Oh my god thats Lances!"Dawn exclaimed."DOCKING AT HARBOUR COMPLETED PLEASE EXIT THE BOAT" A metallic voice announced."Well we better get off the boat now," Dan said."Maybe we should deliver Lances trainer card to him?" Dawn said eagerly."Fine" replied Jack.

As they stepped off the boat, Dan noticed the plant he had seen earlier, there definately was something strange about it... "Hmmm were did lance go?" Dawn asked with a worried look on her face."He cant of gone that far,"said Jack holding lances trainer card out.
Suddenly Lewis came rushing off the boat and grabbed the trainer card! "Yoink!" Said Lewis triumphantly. "Hey give that back!"Dan Ordered. "Lances? Hehe, you stole it!"Said Lewis looking at the trainer card. "We didnt steal it! Give it!"
" I guess theres only one way to settle this then!" replied Lewis.
"I agree" said Dan.

Chapter 3: On the island, Lewis VS Dan!

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"Lets make this a 3 vs 3 pokemon battle!" Dan suggested.
"Fine," Lewis replied.
"Hippowdon, GO!" Dan shouted.
"COME ON OUT, MEGAYAMNA!!!" Lewis screamed.
Hippowdon was released and afterwards yanmega was aswell.
"Hippowdon, use crunch!"
Hippowdon openened its mouth widely, and jumped to yanmega crunching it.
"Hang in yanmega!Use BUG BUZZ!!!"
Yanmega started beating its wings as fast as light, then circled hippowdon rapidly.Hippowdon roared loudly, but still kept on going.
"You OK hippowdon? Now, I know it herts you to, but use DOUBLE EDGE!!!"
Hippow launched a vicious tackle at yanmega, which KOed it, but also KOed hippowdon.
"sorry hippowdon, return!"
"return yanmega!"
"GO MAMOSWINE!!!" Called Dan.
"GO HOUNDOOM!!!" Summoned Lewis.
"HOUNDOOM, FLAMETHROWER!!!" From its mouth houndoom fired flames at mamoswine.
"MAMOSWINE, USE MIST!!!" The street was filled with mist.
"Hehe, you wasted an attack, USE TACKLE HOUNDOOM!!!"
Houndoom tryed to launch a tackle at mamoswine, but found itself loat in the mist.
"yes...USE EARTHQUAKE!!!"
Mamoswine stamped on the groudn to create a powerful quake.
"FINISH MAMOSWINE OFF WITH FLAMETHROWER!!!"
Houndoom used another flamethrower, and it hit mamoswine, KOing it.
"RETURN MAMOSWINE, GO CRAWDAUNT!!!USE WATER PULSE!!!"

Chapter 4:Dan vs Lewis part 2!!!

"Houdoom, jump through the water pulse!!!"
Houndoom ran fast up to the water pulse and somehow jumped through it!
"Now houndoom, CRUNCH!"
As houndoom headed towards the ground it unleashed a powerful crunch on crawdaunt!
"Quickly crawdaunt! SURF!"
Suddenly a giant wave rose out of nowhere heading towards houndoom.
As the wave approached houndoom Dan cried:"Jump through this!!!"
The wave came tumbling down oto houndoom with a mighty SPLASH!
Houndoom roared, then fell onto the floor.
"Houndoom, come back!" Lewis called.
"GO, GARCHOMP!!!"Lewis cried.
"I thought I KOed that garchomp on the boat!" Said Dan
"I used my last revive, then a hyper potion to get its HP back," Lewis exclaimed.
"NOW GARCHOMP USE DRAGON RUSH!!!"
Garchomp powered up and rushed at crawdaunt with all its might!
Crawdaunt was forced back to Dans side but then got up instantly and crawlled over back to the battle.
"CRAWDAUNT PUT ALL YOUR MIGHT INTO AN ICE BEAM!!!"
Crawdaunt opened its claw to reveal a hidden cannon and from the cannon it fired a freezing cold ray at garchomp!Garchomp struggled to keep up, but it got back up and got ready to strike back.
"GARCHOMP PUT YOUR MIGHT INTO A DRAGON PULSE!"
Garchomp opened its mouth and fired a dragon pulse at crawdaunt.
"CRAWDAUNT, IF HOUNDOOM DID IT, SO CAN YOU, JUMP THROUGH THE DRAGON PULSE AND USE WATER PULSE!!!"
Crawdaunt jumped through the dragon pulse, as ordered, and unleashed a powerful water pulse onto garchomp, it hit garchomp full on, on the head, KOing it...

"I WIN!CRAWDAUNT, RETURN!"Dan celebrated.
Lewis just ran away, dropping the trainer card."Your really good!" Jack remarked."Yeah, maybe one day you could beat Lance!"Dawn added.
"That reminds me, his trainer card!"Dan said, walking over to the trainer card, he then picked it up and when he looked up, Lance was right in front of him!

"Oh Lance!Your trainer card, you dropped it!"Said a surprised dan."I know, thats a fake one," exclaimed Lance."How come you need a fake one?"Said Jack, walking over to Dan and Lance. "Well, alot of trainer cards have been stolen lately, ever since that Luxury private none mobile plane moved in..."Lance said pointing up, and for the first time, Dan noticed a big plane in the air."We dont know why they've been doing it or even who, which is why I left my fake trainer card on the boat, in hope of catching the culprit, but all I got was you 3 who didnt steal it, you just returned it to me, so we havent got any idea about this,"Lance comtinued."Why dont you just use your dragonite to fly you up to the plane?"Asked Dan.
"Its protected by a forcefield, if they are not stopped then there will be an end to all champions, or maybe worse..."
 
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Chapter 5: A surprising encounter

"How can it do worse?" Dan asked Lance.
"Welll, have you ever wondered how your trainer card changes when you catch a pokemon, or get a badge?Well its becauseof a special mind reading energy called hypertech thats in the trainer card, it can be exracted from trainer cards and be used for power, my guess is that the culprit wants to take the hypertech energy and use it,"Lance exclaimed.
"Well we'd like to stay and chat, but we've gotta go, see yer later!" Dan said as Dan, Dawn and Jack walked away to the pokemon centre. "I cant believe I met Lance!" Dawn said exitedly. "Barely, me and Dan did all the talking, you just watched from the sidelines!" Jack replied.
Dan, Dawn and Jack entered the pokemon centre, and Dan saw the strange looking plant again, then healed his pokemon.

"Dan! Dan!" an 11 year old boy came rushing into the room.
"JASON? MY BROTHER?But your not a champion, you dont even have any pokemon!"Dan screamed.
"Have you been paying attention to the last 57 texts I sent you?To prove that Im a champion, look at my trainer card!"

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"And is that lady your girlfriend?" Jason went on.
"NO SHE IS NOT, SHES JUST A FRIEND!AND SHES CALLED DAWN!"Screamed Dan back, boiling with anger.
"Dawn, will you marry me?"Asked Jason.
Jason: :D
Dawn: =.=
"NO, YOU ARE THE MOST ANNOYING PERSON I HAVE EVER MET INCLUDING JACK!"
Dawn thundered.
"Shes right! I challenge you to a battle!" Dan said.
"No, Dan you've had your fun now its my turn!How about 1 vs 1 Jason"
"OK"
Replied Jason

Chapter 6:A battle and an explosion!

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"NURSE JOY???" Screamed crazy aipom and MOT6K

"No not really"Replies Hypertech

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"LETS GO TORTERRA!" Cried Jack.
"COME ON OUT VENASAUR!"Shouted Jason.
"Venasaur, use SOLARBEAM!"
Venasaur powered up using the sun.This was Jacks chance.
"TORTERRA USE LEAF STORM"
A bonbardment of leaves and twigs came rushing towards venasaur.
Venasaur was thrown back off its feet.
"NOW VENASAUR UNLEACH YOUR CHARGED POWER!!!"
Venasaurs leaf suddenly burst an extremely powerful beam of sunlight
"HANG IN THERE TORTERRA"
Jack cried out.
"NOW USE GIGA DRAIN!!!" Torterra use its tree to suck up power from venasaur.
"VENASAUR SHOW THEM YOUR GIGA DRAIN!!!" Venasaur used a harsh giga drain back.
"TORTERRA NOW USE EARTHQUAKE!" Torterra bent its tree down to slam the ground into a heavy earthquake.
Venasaur fell on its back and Jason called it back.
"ALRIGHT JACK" Dan cried but then stoppped because the strange looking plant opened an eye.Then another one then a mouth!It was a carnivine!Then it started spitting bullet seeds al around the place causing mini explosions!
Nurse Joy rushed everyone out as Jack recalled his torterra.
Then carnivine followed them.
Carnivine spat 1 final seed at the pokemon centre and it exploded.
Carnivine started to float away.
"CATCH THAT CARNIVINE!" Jason cried and they al started running after it.

Chapter 7: The avalanche.

As they all started chasing the carnivine, Dan couldnt help noticing that the plane had started to move towards them...

The carnivine suddenly stopped in its tracks, and turned around.
"NOWS OUR CHANCE!, GO WALREIN!" Dawn said has she sent out her walrein.


CARNIVINE VS WALREIN!

Carnivine launched its deadly bullet seed at walrein, walrein recieved the damage full on.
"Walrein try your ice beam!"
Walrein opened its mouth to launch a powerful beam of ice at carnivine.
Carnivine stopped levitating, it seemed like the carnivine was digging his roots into the ground.Then out of the ground beneath walrein carnivines roots came rushing out to grip walrein.
"Walrein, use ice ball!"
But walrein did not respond, it was being clung onto by the roots like bess and honey.
Carnivine spat more bullet seeds at walrein.
carnivine loosened its grip on walrein...
"Walrein, quick, ICE BEAM!"Walrein launched another beam of ice at carnivine.

Carnive ran round a corner, they all followed. But when they looked round, they couldnt see carnivine, but they looked closer and there carnivine was, on am mountain top.

It took about 10 minutes to get half way up the mountain. Then the plane launched a giant laser straight at the mountain!

There was an explosion, then boulders started falling. They all tripped up and started falling down,down down to the ground,Dan was falling right underneath a boulder and if he didnt act soon the boulder would crush him. He screamed, this was surely the end.

Then a hyper beam came out of nowhere and smashed the boulder!It was Lance on his dragonite. Lance then caught Dan with his dragonite, Dan looked around, the rest were safely mounted on Lances other pokemon.

Once they reached the ground. Jack cried: "LOOK ITS MY BROTHERS TRAINER CARD, AND TIMS TOO!"

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"There probably fake, bait."Lance said.
"Can I rip then then?"Asked Jason picking up the trainer cards.
"NO"
But Jason had already started.

Meanwhile...
"Tim, have you seen my trainer card?"
"I was gonna ask you the same thing Bill."

Chapter 8: The plot thickens...

"JASON!I DIDNT SAY THAT THEY WERE FAKE, I SAID THEY WERE PROBLY FAKE, WHAT IF THERE NOT?!" Lance screamed at Jason.
"Simple, they start there journey all over again!"Jason replied cheerfully."EXACTLY!" Cried Dan."Thats the least of our problems, why did the plane shoot at you?"Said Lance.

Meanwhile, on the plane.
"Anymore hypertech full trainer cards?"
"Yes boss, a little girls and a teenaged boys, I think his name was... Lewis?"
"Good work"
"Thankyou boss, did the laser hit?"
"Yes, but Lance saved them, how I hate that Lance..."
"Dont worry boss, very soon you will have enough trainer cards,"
Another man went into the room.
"Boss, those kids destroyed two trainer cards I think there onto us..."
"NOOO! Jordon, James, destroy them!"
"Yessir,"Jordon and James said together, and hurried out of the plane.

"My walreins kinda weak, i mean after the fight it had with carnivine,"
Dawn complained.
"Im more worried about my torterra," Jack replied.
"To bad the pokemon centres out of buiseness, and I expect it will be for a long time,"Dan replied.
"Gee, do you think that the people on that plane are stealing the hypertech?" Asked Jason quizzickly.

"Hold it right there!" Jordan and James had ran out of nowhere!
"Who are you?"Dawn said scaredly.
"We just want your hypertech, then well leave you alone, just after we destroy you, MWAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA!"James laughed evily.
Suddenly, a cage dropped from the plane!

Dan and Lance managed to dive out of the way just in time, but Jack, Dawn and Jason were trapped!
"Let them go!"Cried Dan.
"Theres no way that we are letting them go!"Jordan said, he then pulled three pokeballs out of his belt and said:
"How about kid, Me and James VS You and Lance!Double battle, 6 pokemon on each team!3 each!"
"Your on!"


Yes... Im determined to carry on my story no matter what...
 
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Hehe I just might use that character... BTW I love Kingdom Hearts aswelll...
 
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Chapter 8:
Double battle: VS Team HyPeR!

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"No-one messes with with team HyPeR..." James threatened.
"If your a team then why dont you wear a uniform?" Dan asked.
"We spend our money on USEFUL things... GO NINGASK!"
James sent out a ningask that couldnt stop speeding about the battlefield.
"AND GET YOUR LAZY BACKSIDE OUT THERE BRONZONG!"
Jordan sent out a bronzong.
"GO INFERNAPE!" Dan cried while releasing infernape.
"ITS TIME TO BATTLE, ALTIARIA"LAnce shouted and sent out altiaria.
"Ningask, use extremespeed on that infernape!"
Ningask launched itself at infernape at 120 miles per hour, infernape was thrown back.
"Infernape, use flare blizt on that ningask!"
Infernape produced a gigantic flame and with it, charged at ningask.
"BRONZONG USE A PSYCHIC ON THAT INFERNAPE!"Bronzong launched a powerful psychic at infernape, but infernape hung in there.
"ALTIARIA, USE DRAGON DANCE!"Altiaria use and effective dragon dance.
"QUICK, INFERNAPE USE ANOTHER FLARE BLIZT ON THAT NINGASK!"
Infenape started its attack and charged at ningask, but will he survive the recoil after all that damage?
 
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short chapter but a good one
 
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Its short because I spent a while working on team HyPeRs trainer cards, and I needed to drink a nice hot chocolate...
 
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yeah that is true you deserved a hot chocolate also can you look at my fics at this link http://pokebeach.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=20438
 
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Chapter 9: Double battle: VS Team HyPeR part 2

Infernape finished its attack, and fainted.But at the same time, ningask fainted!
"Return Infernape, come on, FLYGON!"
Dan released flygon.
"RETURN YOU IDIOT POKEMON NINGASK, GO MANECTRIC!"
James sent out a manectric.
"MANECTRIC USE CHARGE!"
Manectric absorbed electricity from nowhere.
"ALTIARIA, USE SKY ATTACK!"
Altiaria started glowing white.
"HE HE, GLOWING WONT SAVE YOU NOW, BRONZONG, GYRO BALL ON ALTIARIA!"
Bronzong formed a gyro ball, and shot it at altiaria with a mighty blow but altiaria managed to block it with wings, however altiaria still recieved some damage.
"FLYGON USE EARTHQUAKE!"
Flygon slammed its tail on the ground 3 times, forming an EXTREMELY powerful earthquake, which hit manetric and bronzong, but not altiaria."MANECTRIC USE THUNDER ON FLYGON!"
Strikes of thunder slammed down on flygon, while flygon tryed to dodge them, but failed.
"ALTIARIA, USE IT ON BRONZONG!"
Altiaria swooped high in the air , then so fast that not even the noctowl watching the battle could see it, slammed down on bronzong.

YAY I think I like putting LOADS more description in attacks.
 
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Very short chapter but a good 1
 
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Yeah im finding it abit ard to divide the chapters for this battle without making pokemon have Blissey high HP and Wailord defence.
 
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Chapter 10:Alone Vs team HyPeR

Bronzong fainted.
"NOOO, you spupid bronzong, RETURN, GO NIDOKING!"
Nidoking was released with a mighty THONK.
It hit the ground so hard, that a boulder suddenly rushed down from the mountain and hit altiaria!
Altiaria fainted.
"Thats not fair!" Cried Dan.
"Since when have eeeviiil teams been fair? Foul play is our way of winning!" replied James.
"GO CHARIZARD!" Called Lance.
"No you dont, as I just said, we play foul..."
Suddenly another cage burst from the plane, trapping Lance and charizard!
"AAHHHHH DANS ALONE, WITH NO WONDERFUL HANSOME HEROIC ETC LANCE TO HELP HIM, WE'RE DEAD!" Screamed Dawn from the cage.
"Grrrr, FLYGON, EARTHQUAKE AGAIN!"
Flygon headbutted the ground mightily, creating an immense earthquake.
Manectric and nidoking were thrown back, but survived.
"Nidoking, use body slam!"
Nidoking launched itself of the ground and slammed flygon to the floor.
Flygon fainted.
"RETURN FLYGON, you did good, GO, MY TRUMP CARD, CRAWDAUNT!"
Dan released his most powerful pokemon, crawdaunt.
"QUICK CRAWDAUNT, USE SURF!"
A massive wave appeared behind crawdaunt and headed towards nidoking and manetric.Crawdaunt jumped onto the wave and surfed on it towards team HyPeRs pokemon, suddendly it crashed into them with a big SPLASH!
OVERKILL!
Manctric fainted.
Nidoking fainted.
"Right ive decided, this is no longer just a double 3 each battle, this is an all-out WAR!" James said, angrily.
"GO OUR TRUMP CARDS!" Team HyPeR called and 2 collosol shapes appeared out of dusk balls.
 
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I like that chapter! I think its 1 of my good 1s.
 
DONT EXPECT UPDATES TILL MONDAY I MIGHT DO 1 MORE TODAY, BUT IM ON HOLIDAY FROM TOMMOROW TILL SUNDAY/MONDAY!
 
If you like then you can make some characters for my next fic about how Dan started his journey and became champion.(This fic will be starting when ive finished this one)
 
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