CHAMPIONS ISLAND (Yep its back for those that dont know!)
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yeah sure okay
Well hope the next chapter is as good as the other ones or maybe even better
Chapter 11: The Legendary pokemon of time and space!
The dusk balls released a Dalgia and a Palkia onto the battlefield.
"What are they?" Jack asked nervously.
"Ive seen them before..." Dan said.
"They're the legendary pokemon of Time and space... Dalgia and Palkia..." Lance said.
"Youve seen them before dan?" Jason asked.
"Yeah. On Spear Pillar.Just a glimpse, I thought they might be mirages so I rubbed my eyes, and when I opened them again, the only things that were there was 2 men...YOU YOUR THE MEN! YOU CAUGHT THE POKEMON AND RAN AWAY!"Dan explained, pointing at team HyPeR.
"Enough talking. DALGIA USE FLASH CANNON ON CRAWDAUNT!"
Dalgias chest armour started glowing, then it released a beam of light that looked even more powerful than godzillla.
It hit crawdaunt in the chest.
OVERKILL!
Crawdaunt fainted.
"NO CRAWDAUNT! I USE MY ITEM, REVIVE!"
Crawdaunt immediately got back up from the floor.
"CRAWDAUNT USE CRABHAMMER ON THE CAGES TO BREAK THEM!"
Crawdaunt used 2 powerful crabhammers to break the cages and set Dawn, Jack, Lance and Jason free.
"YAY DAN!" screamed Dawn in relief.
"GO TORTERRA"
"GO WALREIN"
"GO VENASAUR... oh wait hes fainted, RETURN, GO TAUROS!"
"GO CHARIZARD... well just stay in the battle.
It would be longer, but I spent some time planning the next series.
And BTW Keyblade pokemon, Your character david, will be a main character in the next story, instead of a small/medium part in this 1 if thats OK.
The dusk balls released a Dalgia and a Palkia onto the battlefield.
"What are they?" Jack asked nervously.
"Ive seen them before..." Dan said.
"They're the legendary pokemon of Time and space... Dalgia and Palkia..." Lance said.
"Youve seen them before dan?" Jason asked.
"Yeah. On Spear Pillar.Just a glimpse, I thought they might be mirages so I rubbed my eyes, and when I opened them again, the only things that were there was 2 men...YOU YOUR THE MEN! YOU CAUGHT THE POKEMON AND RAN AWAY!"Dan explained, pointing at team HyPeR.
"Enough talking. DALGIA USE FLASH CANNON ON CRAWDAUNT!"
Dalgias chest armour started glowing, then it released a beam of light that looked even more powerful than godzillla.
It hit crawdaunt in the chest.
OVERKILL!
Crawdaunt fainted.
"NO CRAWDAUNT! I USE MY ITEM, REVIVE!"
Crawdaunt immediately got back up from the floor.
"CRAWDAUNT USE CRABHAMMER ON THE CAGES TO BREAK THEM!"
Crawdaunt used 2 powerful crabhammers to break the cages and set Dawn, Jack, Lance and Jason free.
"YAY DAN!" screamed Dawn in relief.
"GO TORTERRA"
"GO WALREIN"
"GO VENASAUR... oh wait hes fainted, RETURN, GO TAUROS!"
"GO CHARIZARD... well just stay in the battle.
It would be longer, but I spent some time planning the next series.
And BTW Keyblade pokemon, Your character david, will be a main character in the next story, instead of a small/medium part in this 1 if thats OK.
Well the suspense is killing me. short chapter but a good one 2
well that did not spoil anything for me
yeah okay i can wait. (I wonder when my character will apear?)
Chapter 12: The power of legends...
"TAUROS, USE TAKE DOWN ON DALGIA!" Jason called.
Tauros ot ready, and charged towards Dalgia with all its might.
It hit dalgia, but barely left a scratch.
"PALKIA AQUA TAIL ON CHARIZARD!" Jordan ordered.
Palkias tail suddenly had a strong blue aura, then palkia slammed its tail against charizard.
OVERKILL!
Charizard fainted.
"RETURN CHARIZARD, GO SALEMANCE USE DRAGON BREATH!"
Salemance was called, and as soon as it was out, it used a powerful dragonbreath on dalgia.
"WALREIN USE ICE BALL ON PALKIA!"
Walrein formed ice balls and repeatedly fired them at palkia.
"WHY WONT YOU DIE! TORTERRA USE LEAFSTORM ON THEM!"
Torterra formed a huge leaf storm and it launched at Dalgia and Palkia.
"CRAWDAUNT, AQUA PULSE!"
Crawdaunt launched an aqua pulse at dalgia.
"DALGIA, USE AURA SPEAR ON WALREIN!
OVERKILL!
Walrein fainted.
"RETURN, GO FROSSLASS! USE PERISH SONG!"
Before frosslass could attack, a rope came down from the plane, a man was on the rope, from the sky, the man released a pokemon from his cherish ball and hit the ground.
"I see your looking well, Lance."
Chapter 12: The power of legends...
"TAUROS, USE TAKE DOWN ON DALGIA!" Jason called.
Tauros ot ready, and charged towards Dalgia with all its might.
It hit dalgia, but barely left a scratch.
"PALKIA AQUA TAIL ON CHARIZARD!" Jordan ordered.
Palkias tail suddenly had a strong blue aura, then palkia slammed its tail against charizard.
OVERKILL!
Charizard fainted.
"RETURN CHARIZARD, GO SALEMANCE USE DRAGON BREATH!"
Salemance was called, and as soon as it was out, it used a powerful dragonbreath on dalgia.
"WALREIN USE ICE BALL ON PALKIA!"
Walrein formed ice balls and repeatedly fired them at palkia.
"WHY WONT YOU DIE! TORTERRA USE LEAFSTORM ON THEM!"
Torterra formed a huge leaf storm and it launched at Dalgia and Palkia.
"CRAWDAUNT, AQUA PULSE!"
Crawdaunt launched an aqua pulse at dalgia.
"DALGIA, USE AURA SPEAR ON WALREIN!
OVERKILL!
Walrein fainted.
"RETURN, GO FROSSLASS! USE PERISH SONG!"
Before frosslass could attack, a rope came down from the plane, a man was on the rope, from the sky, the man released a pokemon from his cherish ball and hit the ground.
"I see your looking well, Lance."
Whoever guesses who the man is wins a muffin!
"TAUROS, USE TAKE DOWN ON DALGIA!" Jason called.
Tauros ot ready, and charged towards Dalgia with all its might.
It hit dalgia, but barely left a scratch.
"PALKIA AQUA TAIL ON CHARIZARD!" Jordan ordered.
Palkias tail suddenly had a strong blue aura, then palkia slammed its tail against charizard.
OVERKILL!
Charizard fainted.
"RETURN CHARIZARD, GO SALEMANCE USE DRAGON BREATH!"
Salemance was called, and as soon as it was out, it used a powerful dragonbreath on dalgia.
"WALREIN USE ICE BALL ON PALKIA!"
Walrein formed ice balls and repeatedly fired them at palkia.
"WHY WONT YOU DIE! TORTERRA USE LEAFSTORM ON THEM!"
Torterra formed a huge leaf storm and it launched at Dalgia and Palkia.
"CRAWDAUNT, AQUA PULSE!"
Crawdaunt launched an aqua pulse at dalgia.
"DALGIA, USE AURA SPEAR ON WALREIN!
OVERKILL!
Walrein fainted.
"RETURN, GO FROSSLASS! USE PERISH SONG!"
Before frosslass could attack, a rope came down from the plane, a man was on the rope, from the sky, the man released a pokemon from his cherish ball and hit the ground.
"I see your looking well, Lance."
Chapter 12: The power of legends...
"TAUROS, USE TAKE DOWN ON DALGIA!" Jason called.
Tauros ot ready, and charged towards Dalgia with all its might.
It hit dalgia, but barely left a scratch.
"PALKIA AQUA TAIL ON CHARIZARD!" Jordan ordered.
Palkias tail suddenly had a strong blue aura, then palkia slammed its tail against charizard.
OVERKILL!
Charizard fainted.
"RETURN CHARIZARD, GO SALEMANCE USE DRAGON BREATH!"
Salemance was called, and as soon as it was out, it used a powerful dragonbreath on dalgia.
"WALREIN USE ICE BALL ON PALKIA!"
Walrein formed ice balls and repeatedly fired them at palkia.
"WHY WONT YOU DIE! TORTERRA USE LEAFSTORM ON THEM!"
Torterra formed a huge leaf storm and it launched at Dalgia and Palkia.
"CRAWDAUNT, AQUA PULSE!"
Crawdaunt launched an aqua pulse at dalgia.
"DALGIA, USE AURA SPEAR ON WALREIN!
OVERKILL!
Walrein fainted.
"RETURN, GO FROSSLASS! USE PERISH SONG!"
Before frosslass could attack, a rope came down from the plane, a man was on the rope, from the sky, the man released a pokemon from his cherish ball and hit the ground.
"I see your looking well, Lance."
Whoever guesses who the man is wins a muffin!
Chapter 13:Jacks journey to the shadow kingdom.
The pokemon the man sent out was darkrai, the master of shadows...
"Steven..." Breathed Lance.
"Who?" Asked Jack.
"Steven, the would-be ONLY champion if it wasnt for champions island...He beat my dragonite with his carnivine, but now it looks like hes obtained something much, much more powerful.." Replied Lance.
"You mean that darkrai?" Asked Jack.
Lance seemed surprised that he knew the name.
"How do you know that name?" Lance asked.
"He's invaded my dreams..." Said Jack.
"Invaded your dreams!?" Asked Dan.
"Darkrai is the master of sleep and shadows" Replied Lance.
"Hand over your trainer cards!" Steven ordered.
"NEVER!" Replied Jack.
"So be it..."
"PALKIA, AQUA TAIL!"
Palkia unleashed a powerful aqua tail on crawdaunt.
Crawdaunt fainted.
"NO!" Dan cried.
"GO MR MIME!"
"DALGIA USE ROAR OF TIME!"
Dalgia roared, it sounded as though time was roaring itself.
Frosslass fainted.
"DARKRAI USE SEND TO THE SHADOWS!"
"Ive never heard of that attack..." Said Lance.
"Thats because I made it..." Replied Steven.
"What does it do?"
"It sends the pokemon- or human into the shadow kingdom."
"And where is that?"
"Inside darkrai." Steven said simply as darkrai sent a horific black beam at torterra.
"TORTERRA!"
Jack screamed as he jumped into the beam!
"JACK!"
But it was to late, Jack had already began his journey into the shadow kingdom...[/align]
The pokemon the man sent out was darkrai, the master of shadows...
"Steven..." Breathed Lance.
"Who?" Asked Jack.
"Steven, the would-be ONLY champion if it wasnt for champions island...He beat my dragonite with his carnivine, but now it looks like hes obtained something much, much more powerful.." Replied Lance.
"You mean that darkrai?" Asked Jack.
Lance seemed surprised that he knew the name.
"How do you know that name?" Lance asked.
"He's invaded my dreams..." Said Jack.
"Invaded your dreams!?" Asked Dan.
"Darkrai is the master of sleep and shadows" Replied Lance.
"Hand over your trainer cards!" Steven ordered.
"NEVER!" Replied Jack.
"So be it..."
"PALKIA, AQUA TAIL!"
Palkia unleashed a powerful aqua tail on crawdaunt.
Crawdaunt fainted.
"NO!" Dan cried.
"GO MR MIME!"
"DALGIA USE ROAR OF TIME!"
Dalgia roared, it sounded as though time was roaring itself.
Frosslass fainted.
"DARKRAI USE SEND TO THE SHADOWS!"
"Ive never heard of that attack..." Said Lance.
"Thats because I made it..." Replied Steven.
"What does it do?"
"It sends the pokemon- or human into the shadow kingdom."
"And where is that?"
"Inside darkrai." Steven said simply as darkrai sent a horific black beam at torterra.
"TORTERRA!"
Jack screamed as he jumped into the beam!
"JACK!"
But it was to late, Jack had already began his journey into the shadow kingdom...[/align]
I like this chapter it is coming along to be a good story
Chapter 14: Jacks Story.
Jack sat down in the shadow kingdom, in the shadow kingdom every painful second seemed like an hour.It was more dark than you could ever imagine, Jack closed his eyes, he couldnt even imagine the sheer darkness then.
Well, it does make it equal, torterra sacrificed itself for me when it was a grotle!
Jack thouht to himself, then he thought back to that day, the day when grotle died.
Jack was walking along the path, he had got 2 badges so far, he had caught 7 more pokemon after he had obtained his starter, turtwig(which had evolved into a grotle recently).
Rebirth cave.
A sign read out, underneath it had more writing:
[/i]WARNING
In rebirth cave there is a deep pit of molten lava in the centre of this small cave, and when you perish in the lava, you are reborn, but when you die again after youve been reborn, you will suffer in hell for eternity...[/i]
"Cool! sounds interesting!" Jack said, and continued towards the cave.
Once he entered the cave, he saw how small the cave was, there were many
small rocky roads surrounding an extremely deep pit filled with lava.
Jack described it to himself as the 'Pit Of Doom!'.
Another trainer was in the cave, and as soon as he he saw Jack, he said: "HEY YOU! Want a pokemon battle? One on one?"
"OK sure!" replied jack.
vs
"GO GROTLE!"
"GO BAYLEAF!"
The two trainers sent out there pokemon, and began there battle
"BAYLEAF USE RAZORLEAF!"
Bayleaf started flinging razor sharp leafs at grotle!
"GROTLE USE-WHAAAT"
Before Jack could give the order, all the rubble that they were standing on started moving towards the lava pool!
"AAAH" David screamed, he then jumped on top of his bayleafand it ran out of the cave!
Jack coudnt run fast enough, he knew that.
He was about to die, then be reborn again, he knew.
Jack braced himself, then- Grotle headbutted Jack out of the cave!
Grotle got drowned in lava.
"GROTLE!NOOOOO!"
Then Grotle appeared right next to jack.
Jack smiled, then tried to go to sleep in th shadow kingdom.
Keybladepokemon- Yes this was your character, hes appearing one more time in this story, then will be a main character in the next one, Got it?[/i]
Jack sat down in the shadow kingdom, in the shadow kingdom every painful second seemed like an hour.It was more dark than you could ever imagine, Jack closed his eyes, he couldnt even imagine the sheer darkness then.
Well, it does make it equal, torterra sacrificed itself for me when it was a grotle!
Jack thouht to himself, then he thought back to that day, the day when grotle died.
Jack was walking along the path, he had got 2 badges so far, he had caught 7 more pokemon after he had obtained his starter, turtwig(which had evolved into a grotle recently).
Rebirth cave.
A sign read out, underneath it had more writing:
[/i]WARNING
In rebirth cave there is a deep pit of molten lava in the centre of this small cave, and when you perish in the lava, you are reborn, but when you die again after youve been reborn, you will suffer in hell for eternity...[/i]
"Cool! sounds interesting!" Jack said, and continued towards the cave.
Once he entered the cave, he saw how small the cave was, there were many
small rocky roads surrounding an extremely deep pit filled with lava.
Jack described it to himself as the 'Pit Of Doom!'.
Another trainer was in the cave, and as soon as he he saw Jack, he said: "HEY YOU! Want a pokemon battle? One on one?"
"OK sure!" replied jack.
vs
"GO GROTLE!"
"GO BAYLEAF!"
The two trainers sent out there pokemon, and began there battle
"BAYLEAF USE RAZORLEAF!"
Bayleaf started flinging razor sharp leafs at grotle!
"GROTLE USE-WHAAAT"
Before Jack could give the order, all the rubble that they were standing on started moving towards the lava pool!
"AAAH" David screamed, he then jumped on top of his bayleafand it ran out of the cave!
Jack coudnt run fast enough, he knew that.
He was about to die, then be reborn again, he knew.
Jack braced himself, then- Grotle headbutted Jack out of the cave!
Grotle got drowned in lava.
"GROTLE!NOOOOO!"
Then Grotle appeared right next to jack.
Jack smiled, then tried to go to sleep in th shadow kingdom.
Keybladepokemon- Yes this was your character, hes appearing one more time in this story, then will be a main character in the next one, Got it?[/i]
i looked it is a good story