CHAMPIONS ISLAND (Yep its back for those that dont know!)

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Chapter 15 (Yep Im back from holiday): Giving up already?

"NOOOOOO, WHY WHYYYYYYYYY WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY"
Dawn was screaming, while crying up about 20 buckets of water which were landing on Torterra, who was also weeping.
Dan felt like 200 bullets had hit im in the head, he was more angry than the hulk on a bad day in an auto anger machine.
"Hand over your trainer cards unless anyone else wants to go to the shadow kingdom..."
Jason walked up to Steven and said:
"Why did you have to do that, it was a start of a beautiful rivalry..."
Before handing his trainer card to him.
Then Lance walked up to him and said:
"One day, you will pay for all the lives you sent to the shadow kingdom..."
Before hesitantly putting his trainer card in Stevens hand.
Then Dawn walked up to him, and screamed an even louder:
"NOOOO WHY WHYYYYY WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!"
Before throwing her trainer card into Stevens hand.
And finally, Dan walked up to him and said:
"You..will....pay...team...HyPeR!!!"
Suddenly, Dans eyes turned red, and he punched Steven in the face which sent him flying back against the mountain.

"STAY AWAY FROM US, AND GIVE OUR TRAINER CARDS BACK, OR I WILL CAUSE YOU MORE PAIN THAN YOU CAN BEGIN TO IMAGINE!"
Dan shouted at Steven.
Without a word, Steven, James and Jordan caught a rope that had appeared from the plane, and they got pulled up by some team HyPeR members.
Everyone stared at Dan.
 
Chapter 16:Team Anti HyPeR

Everyone was shaking, as if Dan was about to attack them aswell, it was complete and utter silence, until Jason suddenly spoke.
"What in the world? You were always so weak at home!"
"I dont know what just happened... but it was like I was a totaly different person all of a sudden... Not only did I have amazing strength, but also, I had an amazing idea!"
Dan said, with a small smile.
"But, what was that idea, Dan?"
Asked Dawn, who was still whimpering.
"To make a team to fight team HyPeR, if Steven made a team, why not us!"
Dan replied as his smile broardened.
"But making a team takes months, and months, and team HyPeR could do their evil plan at any time!"
Lance replied, he was ashamed at himself for giving up so easily against team HyPeR.
"Then we better get going! We need members! Quite alot, and we need a name and a base!We'll look around the island and find lots of champions to become members, and we can contact are old friends from Sinnoh and any other region!Theres prof Ballance, and his sister Sinny, and Bebe and David but he..." Dans voice trailled off.
"Anyway, we can find loads of people!"
Dan continued before Lance soon replied:
"But what about the base?"
"Simple,"
Dawn said, who was no longer whimpering.
"My Brother helped design this place, he knows every single place there his here!"

"Who's in for team... well, i'll think of a name later!"
Dan cried.
Dawn and Jason immediately put there hands up, then Lance hesitantly followed suite.
"Oh, oh can we name it team OwNaGe!"
Cried Jason.
"NO!"
Replied Dan.
"We'll think of a name once we have more members!"
"My Bro and Bill will join!"
Said Dawn excitedly.
"I'll go and tell them!"
"I can go and find some more members from the island!"
Said Jason.
"I have some friends in fiore..."
Said Lance.
"I'll fly to Sinnoh annd search for members there!"
Cried Dan.

"Meet here in 3 hours sharp!"
And they all ran in seperate directions.
 
The registration sheet!

3.5 hours later...

Jason, Dawn and Lance were at the meeting point with the new members of team ???.
"Wheres Dan... He shoud've been here half an hour ago..."

Lance was holding a registration sheet in his hands with a list of members:

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It wasnt really another part of that chapter... it wasnt really a chapter either... it was just something random that I decided to do because I was bored, but yeah.
 
Chapter 17: I dunno, this time if you want to write this chapter, just post! But it has to be about Dans trip to Sinnoh...
 
Yeah, if you want, I suppose that Jacks 'death' has made there be one less character, so yeah...
 
Chapter 17 Find David!

Dan called his Mom to check up things at home. The he left for Twinleaf Town hopping his friend be there.

"I wonder where David is." Dan said wondering.

He was finnaly at his home town and went to see if David was home.
Dan saw his mother in the kitchen and decided to ask her where David was.

"Umm excuse me i was wondering where David was." Dan asked.

David's mother turned around and replied that he is in Canalave City with his father Bryon.
Dan then set off to Canalave City to find David but stop by Oreburgh City and visit Roark.
The gym was closed because Roark left to Canalave City as well. So he left for Canalave City.

"David he should be around the gym I guess." David said.

David looked around all over the place and decided to look in the gym.
Sure enough there was David battling Bryon.

"David!" Dan shouted.

David and Roark turned around and saw David and they were running towards him.

"What are you doing here." David asked.

"To take you to Champion Island for." Dan replied

"Why are you taking me to champion island." David asked.

"To help me and my other friends defeat an evil orginisation." Dan replied.

"Fine then I'll go." David said.

Dan and David left to champion island and went to the place where Dan was suppose to meet the others.

"What took you so long!" Everyone asked.

"To get someone." Dan replied.

Dan then gives Dawn David's Trainer Card and she looked it over carefully to see if it was not a fake.

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"So this is David." Lance said looking at the tc

*That is the end of chapter 7 and thanks t hypertech for letting me get this chapter up for him*
 
OK Everyone, Ive been very busy over the summer, and forgive me for not posting reguaraly, so to make up for it, im going to try my hardest to update regurarly in September, please forgive...
 
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