Finished Convicted 2 - (Murder/Mystery Roleplaying Game)

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I know that I said I'd be doing some analyses and whatnot, but I think that I'm going to keep my own theories private as well. I've managed to narrow it down to a few main suspects, and plan to submit a guess within the next three chapters if more evidence comes up that relates to one of them.
 
Hey guys, I've been thinking about it, and if your first character is dead but you also made an NPC, feel free to PM me for notes I have on them and I'll tell you if your new character is the killer, etc. There'd be nothing wrong with that. You can act as that character.

Edit 12/30: Guessing is now off-limits and whatever happens is set in stone. Will post next chapter asap!
 
Chapter 7

“Vaporeon’s dead, so can we get on with the contest?” a rather inconsiderate Chandelure begs. “I’ve come all the way from Unova to be in this set of contests, and you’re going to stop at the quarterfinals? Even for you, Pidgeot, that’s pathetic.”

“Vaporeon is dead, that’s true. Hmm….no,” Pidgeot shrugs.

“Why not? You can’t just say ‘no’ without asking anyone else about their feelings toward it!”

“I understand your concern, but I don’t make the rules. I just formulate, emphasize, and contradict them. Oooh, wait, I do make the rules….No!”

Chandelure glares at the bird as she flies out of her room. The Ghost-type looks around the room and admires the Mega Stones kept in display cases, the feather collection over on the table, and the beautiful carpet. Chandelure walks out the door and pretends to hit the side of it, causing an ember from one of its candles to set a rug ablaze. He shrugs as the whole room begins to burn apart from the inside.

Leavanny screeches as he smells the burning. He runs past Chandelure and goes to pick up the rug, which was sewn from his bare hands and String Shot, and stomps on it to put the fire out. However, being a Grass/Bug type, he catches on fire and runs around until he makes it to the bathroom. Chandelure slowly moves away.



“I heard you were trying to frame me for the murder,” Honchkrow says with fixed eyebrows.

“No, sir, I ju’t told ‘em I found yer feather ‘nd a knife in Leavanny’s room.”

“So you tried to frame both me and that bug thing? You disgust me.”

“But you said--”

“I know what I said, but I’m not telling you. You’re too stupid to understand it. You can just go frame some other idiot because I don’t want some ignorant flounder trying to get my nose dirty. I’ve stayed out of this murdering dilemma the whole time until you’ve started gossiping to your little fishy friends,” Honchkrow screeches.

“Feebas died,” Stunfisk says with a sigh. “We’re fri’nds, bit not now.”

“I ought to slit your stupid little Ground-type throat for all the pain you’ve caused.”



“We don’t know if she’s dead, bro,” Electrike insists.

“Shut up.”

“Dude, I had no clue dat water was yo bae. I was jus’ thirsty from all da rockin’, ya hear? I seen Pidgeot throw dat same bottle into da trash earlier, though. Why did he take it out again and give it to me? He must've known Vappy was in there!" The Electric-type then makes a face that sort of looks like an “:eek:” or something.

Umbreon’s face softens to a puzzle. “I don’t know what you’re saying, but you killed her! Arceus knows you drank her straight up. But why?”

“I’m tellin’ you, the rockin’ gets to me, dude. I can’t stop the vibes~”

Umbreon facepalms and rubs his eyes. His face turns dull and he tells Electrike to go on. Perhaps he’s right. Maybe she isn’t dead. He walks out of the equipment room and goes onto the stage to look over the crowd. Everyone’s there but Leavanny, and Umbreon already knew the Pokemon was hurt and in the bathroom or something.

“It has come to my attention that Vaporeon is no longer among us,” he says with a slight pause in between the final words. “As such, I will do my best to lead this investigation. Once it gets to an amount of people we can handle, I will give the police permission to interrogate us all.”

Several people speak up and Umbreon feels bombarded with questions, but these Pokemon are not the press.

“Do you have an idea of who the murderer might be?” asks a nervous Vivillon.

“Not yet,” he says sheepishly.

“Do you have an idea of who the murderer is not?”

“Me?” he suggests, but no one replies. “Any more questions?”

“I have one,” says a voice from the back. A black-tinted Leavanny walks up with his leaves tattered and ruined. “Why is Chandelure still walking among us? He set Pidgeot’s entire room on fire.”

Whaaat?” Umbreon screeches.

“My feathers! My mega stones!” Pidgeot flies out into the backstage area, screeches at the sight of a spreading fire, and flies back to report.

Umbreon runs back as well. He sees as the bird changes her course and he then decides to block the whole area off completely.

“Does anyone have any moves that can help with the rocks?”

Everyone looks at Carracosta, who feels overwhelmed. “I can use Rollout, or, uh, Whirlpool?”

“How about you use that last move to extinguish the fires. After you’re done, I want you to slam yourself into the wall and stack the rocks up as a barrier.”

“I can use Earth Power,” Stunfisk suggests. “I can use it ‘nd make the hallway cave in. Then we’d only be in dis ‘ere room.”

“I guess it’s our only shot,” Umbreon shrugs.

“I have a question,” Honchkrow says aloud. “Why did you not make the proposition to restrict everyone into this room in the first place? If you had, several of us might still be here.”

“I wasn’t in charge, Vaporeon was.”

“She was sweet on you and you know it,” says an angry Aipom.

“Aipom, calm down, it’s okay,” Sylveon coaxes him, but he pushes her off.

“Several of us have died and all you’d have to do it ask her to shut the facility down. You crooked Pokemon probably planned this all from the start.”

“Don’t be a conspiracy theorist, Aipom,” Umbreon says.

“There isn’t any conspiracy about what’s going on,” Lopunny says as she stands up on the stage. “There is a murderer in this room and a fire behind us. We can either have Carracosta clean the fire up and Stunfisk destroy the rest of the building or we can die here right here, right now.”

Everyone seems surprised at Lopunny’s leadership speech. She blushes and prepares to step down, but Stunfisk starts gulping out loud. The others begin to clap.

Lopunny smiles. “Alright then, Umbreon, tell us what we need to do.”

“Okay,” Umbreon says nervously, “Carracosta, you whip up some water to stop the fire from spreading. Once he comes back, Stunfisk, I want you to destroy the hallway and have the wall cave in.”

“Okee,” Stunfisk flops.

“One question,” Chandelure asks really quick.

“What?”

“Can we start the contest back up? It might calm the killer down.”

Umbreon stares at him with narrowed eyes, but he nods slowly. “Yeah, sure.”

“Um,” Leavanny says quietly in the back. “If that’s the case, I need to go to my room and grab the costumes. I can use Helping Hand to improve his Whirlpool, too.”

Umbreon drops his head between his legs and bobs up and down in a nod. “Fine, Leavanny, go get your clothes.”

The turtle and insect run into the fiery hallway and start working together. He begins creating spirals of water and Leavanny begins clapping to increase his abilities. Soon however, everyone else focuses their attention back on Umbreon.

“What next?” Minun asks.

“Well,” he says.

“Well!” screeches Pidgeot. “I say we get the cameras rolling and redo the appeals round! Start practicing, you five! Only four of you can make it to the semifinals!”

Chandelure, Sylveon, and Lopunny squeal in excite. Minun smiles smugly and Umbreon nods in satisfaction.

“I’ll take over from here,” Pidgeot decides.



Carracosta slams one last bit of water onto the fire as Leavanny comes back with makeup kits and cloth and vests and mittens and scarves and dyes. He runs with the materials as Carracosta trails from behind him, and the turtle picks up whatever falls from his friend’s arms.

As the two of them make it into the backstage area, Stunfisk glows yellow and creates a crack in the ground, and the crack goes to the sides of the hallway, into the walls, and to the ceiling. The materials of the hall implode and it turns into an avalanche of wood and stone. Carracosta, Leavanny, and Stunfisk jog away as the last of the rubble falls into place. The result is a doorway of rocks that replaces the emptiness of the hall. Carracosta nods and the three of them return to the main contest platform.



Electrike gets a small copper wire and twists it around the broken wire of his sound system. He then ties it to the other broken piece hanging at the wall. Whoever did this will have to pay, of course. DJing isn’t cheap, and neither is ruining equipment. It would be such a shame for the evil-doer to get pummeled.

Nearby, Leavanny moves clothing around on the seats of the audience and organizes them by person. He starts calling names for people to get clothing.

“Lopunny!” he says.

The rabbit struts over and picks out her fancy brown-leather vest and slips her Mega Stone in it. She thanks Leavanny and continues walking in a rather attention-grabbing way.

“Umbreon,” he continues.

Umbreon walks over and greets Leavanny. He’s then told his clothes burned up in the fire, and so Leavanny doesn’t exactly have his on hand.

“So I don’t have anything for the appeals round?”

“Unfortunately, you don’t,” Leavanny frowns.

“Gee, thanks,” he sighs.

Leavanny watches him leave and then glares through his very soul. How dare the Pokemon not take the fire into account?

Next comes Sylveon, and she’s given a sparkly blue dress. After her, Minun comes to find a renewed purple vest with softer fabric and a looser structure, perfect for battling in.

“Thanks!” she says to the Pokemon as she leaves.

Finally, Chandelure. He walks right past Leavanny and goes over to speak with Pidgeot. Leavanny’s jaw drops. He rips up Chandelure’s clothes and tosses them.

Behind Leavanny, a Stunfisk creepily dances in Umbreon’s black jacket. He sniffs the fabric and his eyes grow wide. He’s in love.



“What are you planning?” Sylveon asks Lopunny as the Pokemon styles her hair in the reflection of a window.

“My performance for the appeals round. Problem?”

“You better watch it. If you even touch Umbreon…”

“Aw, getting defensive of your man even though his girlfriend just died?”

“Don’t talk about it like that. It isn’t funny,” Sylveon asserts.

“Bite, bite, bite,” Lopunny whispers word after word.

Sylveon’s face turns bright red. She coughs and looks around to make sure no one heard Lopunny say anything.

“You better know who you’re messing with before you get trashed. I’m trying to keep a clean slate for now.”

“‘For now’ meaning?”

“Meaning leave me alone. I’ve done nothing wrong and I won’t until I need to, so please go get ready to lose.”

Sylveon walks away and joins Aipom as they stroll to some random location, whatever is away from Lopunny. She explains what happened and Aipom clenches its tailed fist.

“I’ll rough her up. Just give me the green light,” he says.

“Thanks, Aipom. I need to go talk to Umbreon for now.”

Aipom and Sylveon part ways, and Aipom goes to sell some popcorn to Honchkrow.

“Hey, Aipom,” the Head Honcho whispers.

“What do you want?”

“I want one large popcorn,” he says loudly, but he then leans in closer, “and a few words in private.”

Aipom looks nervously at the bird, blinks, and nods. The two of them walk away from the activity and head to the staircase near the stage.

“You better watch out for Sylveon,” he says. “I know you’re sweet on her.”

“Butt out, Honchkrow,” Aipom sighs.

“No, you don’t understand. I heard that Chandelure was going to find a way to cheat to beat her. After all, I heard that he set Pidgeot’s room on fire just so he could get what he wants. Now he wants to win. What do you think he’d do for that?”

“Okay, well, what do I do?” Aipom asks.

“Well,” the crow remarks, “I wouldn’t mind having someone watch my back in exchange for me watching his.”

“What does that mean?”

“That means I need a partner in taking down this murderer and getting all the fame. In exchange for your detective work, I’ll help protect Sylveon and give you all the Rare Candies you want.”

Aipom remains silent for a minute. “I’ll do it,” he finally says, “but forget about the Rare Candies. That’s behind me.”



Electrike sits at his table and starts the music. Immediately, he sees a few Pokemon jamming in the back--one being Leavanny. He feels great. He puts on his headphones and listens to the beat.



“Welcome back to the Pokemon Contest Spectacular Quarterfinals, sort of!” Pidgeot announces as Aipom attempts to handle Rhydon’s old job at handling the cameras.

“Aipom, I’m over here...yeah...in the middle of the stage. Am I on? Alright. Welcome back to the--oh, they’ve gotten all of this so far? Oh, okay, thanks for telling me too late...yeah...Okay! We have five contestants that are going to start the appeals round, and the first Pokemon is Chandelure! ... Chandelure!” Pidgeot looks at the stage and grumbles.

“Where is Chandelure?” She glances back at the camera, smiles weakly, and says, “Sorry for the interruption, but it’s time for a commercial break.”

She rushes backstage and looks for the Pokemon. She finds Chandelure talking to Vivillon against the hallway wall. Pidgeot glides over and sets beside the two Pokemon. “What do you think you’re doing here?”

Vivillon rolls her eyes. “I was trying to tell Chandelure that I’m not going to “fix the votes” just because I like his fire! Now, Chandelure, you’re up!

“You guys have some sort of bias against me, I know it!”

Tnnng!

Pidgeot squawks. “Did you hear that?”

“Hear what?” Chandelure demands.

Tnnng!

“That!”

“No, I didn’t,” the Fire-type insists.

Krrrg!

Pidgeot sees the stones from the ceiling falling, and she pushes Vivillon straight out of the way. The moth slams against the floor and slides a ways, hitting one of the side walls, as a heavy amount of rocks slam down on Pidgeot and Chandelure. Dirt rises up into the air and blinds a portion of the room. Vivillon screams for Pidgeot, screams for the rocks to stop, and then gets picked up by a worried Umbreon.

“What just happened?” he asks as the smoke begins to clear. Umbreon sees the rocks and a cracked mega stone lying nearby. His eyes grow wide. Umbreon looks up at the smoke and sees a figure fly overtop the catwalk. Could it be…?

“Pidgeot and Chandelure were crushed by those falling boulders,” Vivillon says weakly.

“What happened?” Carracosta asks as he trudges toward them from somewhere nearby.

“Pidgeot and Chandelure are…”

“Are they?” he asks.

He removes one of the boulders and sees blood soaking underneath. Sylveon blasts another boulder off Chandelure and finds every candle cracked, even the one supporting his face. He’s dead.

Sylveon screams out and falls to the floor in surprise. Umbreon runs and catches her, much to her enjoyment, and then he sets her down on the ground.

“Did anyone see what happened?”

“They came from the ceiling,” Vivillon explained. “I don’t know who did it.”

“I bet I do,” Umbreon, agitated, says.

He runs across the stage, the rolling cameras, and jumps into the stands. Aipom moves the spotlights to Umbreon, and it shows him holding Honchkrow by the feathers of his chest.

“What were you doing up there flying around?” he asks angrily.

Honchkrow smiles. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

“I saw you fly off from the smoke!”

“Oh, that. I was visiting Aipom up in the catwalk. Go ask him.”

Umbreon, forced to accept it as truth for now, leaves the Pokemon alone and runs back to the base of the floor, and then up the stairs of the catwalk. He runs over to Aipom and looks at the Pokemon.

“Did Honchkrow just come to visit you, or did he just fly away from the smoke?”

Aipom, sweating, looks around to see no escape. He looks at Umbreon a moment until something shines in his eye.

“Honchkrow was not here at all,” he says.

“For Arceus’s sake, I need the truth!”



Minun and Lopunny stand beside each other and look at the wreckage.

“I never liked her,” Lopunny says quietly.

“Neither did I. That stupid bird was an attention hog,” Minun mutters.

“I’ll say.”



Electrike runs back to his DJ station. He pants and drinks two bottles of water afterward. He smiles at the victory and looks over at the stones. His smile soon fades as he sees several Pokemon hurt.

“Where were you?” Sylveon asks as he runs over.

“I was running around the inside perimeter to keep my heartbeat up, why?”

“No reason,” Sylveon says.


Leavanny and Stunfisk walk around at the base of the stage and cross paths.

“You know what happened?” the Grass-type asks.

“Not really,” Stunfisk shakes his head.

“I wonder how long this has to go on until the murderer is happy,” Leavanny says.

“A while,” Stunfisk says.

Dead: Pidgeot, Chandelure

Accused: No one?!

(Just means I won't need a PM this time)
 
King Xerneas said:
And so ends those Mega Evolution extremists. It's about time.

Or maybe Lopunny will recruit Electrike and start anew? May not be done with it just yet.

After this next chapter, we will reach the final ten. If I'm able to, I'd love to re-PM everyone and give them an update on where their characters will be going, but I'll have to see how my schedule works.
 
Turtwig said:
King Xerneas said:
And so ends those Mega Evolution extremists. It's about time.

Or maybe Lopunny will recruit Electrike and start anew? May not be done with it just yet.

After this next chapter, we will reach the final ten. If I'm able to, I'd love to re-PM everyone and give them an update on where their characters will be going, but I'll have to see how my schedule works.

Naw dude, I could never get that mega stone from my cruel mama...
 
"So, let's take a roll call. Vivillon, Carracosta, Electrike, Aipom, Honchkrow, Leavanny, Stunfisk, Lopunny, Umbreon, Minun, and me. "
 
Of course I'd die when guesses are allowed. :<

Oh well. I enjoy reading this thread and look forward to its conclusion. Good luck, everypony!
 
The next chapter won't be up until later tonight/tomorrow (sorry, schoolwork is coming back into my life), but I do want to tell you all that if you are interested in co-hosting Convicted 3 with me, please send me a PM. I will reply back with five or six questions for you to answer. If you have a reputation to not finish games or have too much on your plate as it is, don't pressure yourself into PMing. To be honest, it's not really a lot of hard work. The next round will have ~15-16 slots instead of 20 as well, so it will be much easier to manage.

These six questions are very basic, yes, but important. I will be accepting PMs until Tuesday, January 6th and will look over different applicants from now until then. Applicants aren't limited to whoever has played the game; anyone that wants to co-host can PM. Experience in either writing or hosting is preferable, but not required. Feel free to ask questions in this thread and I'll get back to you as soon as possible. Thanks!
 
Shorter chapter. Now there are only half the participants left! Are you going to guess, or are you going to risk it? You have a 10% chance to die, but if you guess, it could be more. Good luck, suspects, because none of you seem completely innocent. Not now.

Chapter 8

“It’s the final four. It’s been decided: two battles will determine our two finalists. Our single judge, Carracosta, will be taking over as the chief determining factor. He will subtract points as he sees fit. I, Vivillon, will be the new host as a dilemmas has arisen. Anyway, let me introduce the first two battles! Umbreon and Minun will take the stage first and decide our first official finalist! This is so exciting!” Vivillon cheers. “So now we will watch as the two Pokemon get on stage!”

One side of the stage is occupied by a rather gloomy Umbreon. He stands proud, though you can see the sorrow in his eyes from Vaporeon’s death, which only happened the day before yesterday. When the spotlight moves to him, his posture changes and he assumes a more noble stance, though his eyes are weak with emotion.

The opposite end has a proud-looking Minun smirking back and forth between the camera and her competition. She raises her eyebrows at him and mouths the words “you’re going down.” She makes him gulp as Vivillon grabs hold of the microphone to speak again. On the split screen that represents points above the stage, each half has ten points.

“Now, competitors, begin!”

Umbreon jumps out from his starting position and pounces to Minun, though she dodges with an Agility attack and begins to run around the stage with impressive speed. Due to the sheer coolness of her move, Umbreon loses a point. She goes in for a Swift attack and unleashes an array of stars, but Umbreon uses Protect and causes them to bounce off. She drops down to nine points as well.

Umbreon watches as Minun runs around him in circles. He times her laps and theorizes when to pounce. He uses Foul Play and smacks Minun out of her quick agility, knocking her over and making her dwindle down to seven points. She uses agility again to gain her speed and then knocks Umbreon back with an Electro Ball, which became even more powerful from their speed difference increasing. Umbreon loses four points; he’s now at five.

Umbreon uses Toxic and throws sludge at Minun, causing her to turn purple like her vest and match as a combo of her own. They both lose a point, and then Minun loses another due to the residual damage of the poisoning. She uses Swift and knocks his point value down to two. Five to two. Umbreon uses Protect, though Minun never uses another attack. She then prepares to break the shield and beat him, but she sees her reflection in the barrier.

Using it to her advantage, Minun takes over her own body and thrusts Plusle out of her head. She backs away from the shield and rubs her head as she struggles to fight Plusle. She loses another point, and then another, due to the poisoning. Umbreon uses Foul Play to knock Minun down to one point, and she falls to her knees. She smiles. Minun knows she can win. Umbreon’s legs are tired, she can knock him out with a Swift, but she knows what she has to do. Minun pretends to use Thunder far away from Umbreon and misses, and the poisoning knocks her out. Minun’s point value goes down to zero.

“Take that, cheater,” she mutters as Leavanny gets her off the stage.

“I didn’t cheat?!” Umbreon says defensively.

Vivillon gets back on the stage as Minun exits, and she congratulates Umbreon on his victory. He walks off, shocked, and smiles at Sylveon as she feels even more nervous.

“After our commercial break, it’s the fight of the century between Lopunny and Sylveon!”

Sylveon goes over to Umbreon and sits beside him. “Good job out there!”

“Thanks. You’ll do fine; if Lopunny goes mega, you can Moon Blast her to oblivion,” he smiles.

“Yeah, you’re right!” Sylveon says with a glimmer of hope.

“It’s the only way she’ll beat you easily, and she knows it’s a gamble.”

“So you want me to win, then?”

“Of course I do! Lopunny’s a jerk,” he says.

“Is that...the only reason?”

Umbreon’s face gets a little red. “Well, uh, Sylveon, it’s a little too soon to be looking for relationships. I’m sorry.”

Sylveon immediately backs off. “Hey, now, I didn’t mean anything about relationships,” she lies.

“Oh, I’m sorry. I’m just a little on edge.”



Aipom watches from above as Vivillon gets on stage and starts talking. He looks over to see Sylveon talking to that idiot Umbreon who won by luck. His eyes narrow and his palms get sweaty with the urge to hit something. How dare she just be his friend and go off with an Eeveelution like that! He thinks about how Honchkrow made a promise, and Aipom got him in trouble. Maybe he should go and apologize.


Leavanny cleans his leaves after getting a certain Powder all of them from Vivillon’s anxiety bursts. He’ll have to clean for hours. He watches dully as the Pokemon talks like a mini Pidgeot. He stands between Electrike’s DJing station and the stage.



Electrike rocks out to the music and watches as Stunfisk dances in the back. He smiles. He then sees Vivillon’s evil stare and the Eeveelutions’ annoyed faces. He turns his music louder and pumps the volume up a notch. Vivillon signals to Honchkrow, who’s perched near Leavanny, to cut the cords again. He snaps them in half with his beak.

Electrike, enraged, starts fighting with Honchkrow. The two go at it in a heated argument over the music. Vivillon makes Aipom steady the lights and camera, and Stunfisk flaps in the background. Aipom, annoyed at the mini-Pidgeot, turns the intensity of the light on and shines it straight at her, causing her to be blinded by it. Stunfisk flops again.

“Now, before I get caught on fire, let’s give a round of applause for Lopunny versus Sylveon!”

The two get on stage while Umbreon gets up close to watch. Both sides of the screen have the double-digit number. Lopunny poses cutely and Sylveon stands in petrification.

“Go!”

Sylveon stares at the camera with stage fright. Lopunny then proceeds to come up and kick her, making Sylveon fall to the ground and lose a point. She gets up and uses Dazzling Gleam to blind Lopunny, and then Draining Kiss to suck energy from her. Lopunny falls to seven points. The rabbit looks and smiles at her opponent. She jumps up in the air and then smacks down on Sylveon, paralyzing her as a side effect. Sylveon drops to five points due to collateral damage. She uses Draining Kiss again, bringing back some life force, but not points. Lopunny loses a point and still has six.


Leavanny gets his makeup kit and starts fixing his leaves. Honchkrow goes over to Aipom and the two start conversing. Upon reaching an agreement to separate Sylveon and Umbreon, Honchkrow flies down to Umbreon’s level.

“Did you find anything in that surveillance room?”

“No,” Umbreon lies.

“Liar. You better watch out, or you might find something bad happening to you. I couldn’t save Vaporeon due to your lies, and I won’t save Sylveon,” he taunts.

“What did you just say to me?”

Honchkrow flies over to Electrike and taps his shoulder. The two start fighting again.

“Dude, leave me and mah vibes alone!”

“Very well,” he says, and then leaves right after.


Sylveon uses Moon Blast, causing a bright bring sphere to be made, and then smashing it into Lopunny. She loses two points in the process, but she returns a blow with Shadow Ball that knocks them both down to an even four points. Lopunny goes in for another Bounce as Sylveon uses Dazzling Gleam, and Lopunny goes down to one point as Sylveon goes to two.

Sylveon catches the attention of Lopunny’s mouth.

“Bite, bite, bite,” she yells, and Sylveon screams at the sound of the words.

Seeing her opportunity, Lopunny gets her Mega Stone out as a last resort. She gets surrounded by a pink sphere of energy, and it grows bigger and bigger. The sphere then explodes and Lopunny grows longer, stronger, and cooler. She goes over to Sylveon and causes the Eeveelution to lose another point just by the intimidating power factor.

“Now!” Umbreon yells.

Sylveon goes to use Draining Kiss, but she gets stuck from the paralysis. She finds herself unable to move. Lopunny then High Jump Kicks Sylveon off the stage and into the stands. Realizing she won, the bunny devolved back into herself and walked off stage. Vivillon nervously gets back on stage and announces Umbreon and Lopunny as the final two.

“Sylveon really had no chance!”

Sylveon, still on the floor from her loss, cries harshly. She gets up on that stage and, in a rage, uses Dazzling Gleam to blind the whole room. She screams that Lopunny cheated, that she should have won, that it wasn’t fair, but no one seemed changed by it.

Once the light ends, Vivillon is found dead on the floor. Her body appears withered and dry. Her wings are tattered from marks of electricity, and it appears that there are teeth marks on her head.

Sylveon screams and runs off stage. Umbreon goes up and looks at the corpse in shock. Lopunny walks up.

“Oh man, she really did Bite!”

Umbreon, horrified, looks at his former companion as some sort of monster, but she insists she is innocent. The light is blinding, but it allowed someone the perfect opportunity. Is Sylveon the prime candidate?

Dead: Vivillon

Accused: Sylveon (raichulover11)
 
"Hmm!" Sylveon sniffles a little. "I may have overreacted a little, but did you see me off the stage at anytime during my beautiful Dazzling Gleam?" she exclaims. She then walks off towards Aipom.

OOC: Wow. I am accused. HOW DARE YOU LOPUNNYYYYY
 
To be honest I never expected to make it this far alive, or make it to the final two in the contest.


Also Sylveon I'd watch that junkie Aipom you call your friend. He's defiently up to some crazy monkey business.
 
raichulover11 will co-host Convicted 3 with me whenever the time comes! However, I do want another survey at the end of this game so I can fix it up even more, and we may try new mechanics as well. There will be a gap between games, obviously, because I'll need a little time to recuperate, change things up, and situate every needed detail. Start thinking of settings for when I post the survey! Right now, I'm thinking of on a train, but that's only a thought.

Next chapter'll be posted eventually! Only a few Pokemon left...
 
Turtwig said:
raichulover11 will co-host Convicted 3 with me whenever the time comes! However, I do want another survey at the end of this game so I can fix it up even more, and we may try new mechanics as well. There will be a gap between games, obviously, because I'll need a little time to recuperate, change things up, and situate every needed detail. Start thinking of settings for when I post the survey! Right now, I'm thinking of on a train, but that's only a thought.

Next chapter'll be posted eventually! Only a few Pokemon left...
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Chapter 9

“I wasn’t off killing poor Vivillon! I was on the stage demonstrating why my beautiful Dazzling Gleam is better than Lopunny’s soggy, tangled fur!” Sylve jabs.

Lopunny’s eyes reflect the corpse below. “I don’t think this is fun anymore,” she says.

“When was murder ever fun?” Umbreon shouts.

“It was kind of cool at first,” Carracosta, sitting at the judge’s area, nods.

“But--” Umbreon interjects.

“But what?” Electrike says from the DJ stuff.

“You know what?” Umbreon snaps. “I think I’ll just stop helping the rest of you out and watch as you all die one by one! I’ll be the winner of this stupid ‘game’ of yours!”

“So you’re the murderer, then?” Aipom yells from the catwalk.

“No!” he frowns. “This situation isn’t minor anymore. The whole thing started out as what seemed to be an accident, but now there’s only half of us left. We lost innocent lives, and we’re going to continue losing them for as long as we bicker!”

Electrike and Aipom meet up at the base of the catwalk stairs. They both look at each other and nod. Aipom calls for Sylveon. As he sees his companion walking over, he notices Honchkrow looking from him to her, and then to Umbreon. Aipom feels sweat forming upon his brow.

“We need to figure out who this murderer is,” he tells the small group.

“How do we know it isn’t one of you?” Sylveon asks innocently.

“How do we know it isn’t you?” Electrike replies.

“Fair enough,” Sylveon says, “but how are we going to protect ourselves? We can’t exactly work together without Umbreon’s help…”

“Why not? We’ve done pretty well without him so far, haven’t we? One of us is bound to figure out that murderer, and with ten people, we have a good chance of living by defending ourselves. We need to recruit others to work together,” Electrike says.

“The more we recruit, the larger the chance that we’re housing a murderer,” Aipom says.

“Perhaps you guys could use some assistance, then,” a voice says from behind them. Minun walks up in her purple vest. “I heard something nasty’s been going on?”

The three of them look at each other blankly. “Don’t tell me you have no idea what’s happened so far?” Aipom frowns.

“Well, I don’t remember much of anything once I was kidnapped,” she explains.

“Who did it?”

“I don’t know, but I’ve been having this...identity crisis of sorts. My alter ego is an aggressive one.”

Sylveon, Electrike, and Aipom glance at each other in worry. “Sorry, Minun, but we have all the help we need, heh, and we can’t have our group too big!” Sylveon stutters.

“Fine. If I die, it’s your fault,” Minun pouts. “It’s not my fault Plusle’s been taking over my mind. Anyway, who do you think the murderer is?”

Sylveon glances around the room at everyone. Umbreon talks to Carracosta, Leavanny sharpens his leaves, Stunfisk flops around, and Lopunny sits alone on the stage. Honchkrow perches nearby her, his eyes staring straight through her thoughts.

“Lopunny,” the Eeveelution whispers. “She’s become quite the bully around here, knocking me around, playing with Umbreon’s emotions, demanding respect from everyone. I’m pretty sure everyone would have a reason to kill her, so she’s probably the murderer.”

Aipom’s eyebrows lower. “That didn’t make much sense, Sylveon. I think the murderer is Umbreon. He acts like a detective, kills his ‘girlfriend,’ and then takes over so he can pick us off one by one.”

“Carracosta’s the last judge,” Electrike reminds. “And Leavanny’s always getting mad easily and holds grudges. He was mad at Gothorita before for her comments on his clothes. Heck, Stunfisk got caught with a knife and his Camouflage technique. That fish is absolutely insane, and he doesn’t even know it. Anyone of us could be the killer at this point.”

“Honchkrow is a shady character,” Aipom says. “It could also be him. He’s trying to start trouble and confuse us all with his ties to everyone.”

“To be honest, I don’t know who the murderer is because I can’t remember. It could be Plusle, err, me,” Minun admits, “for all I know.”

The three others stare at her awkwardly. “Is that a confession?” Sylveon asks.

“It’s a possibility,” Minun corrects. “And Sylveon, you have the motives to kill people, too. Gothorita was a threat, and all the other competitors were, too. You killed the judges as well, and Feebas wasn’t your fan. Rhydon didn’t give you the spotlight much. I wouldn’t be surprised if you killed Lopunny today. Don’t you try making me out to be the murderer because I said I don’t know.”


“This whole murder thing is starting to scare me,” Carracosta admits. “I’ve been listening to music and focusing on my career the whole time, but now Pidgeot, Vivillon, and Flygon are dead. Umbreon, what do you know? What aren’t you telling me?”

Umbreon sighs. “The murder isn’t me, and I bet it isn’t you. I just don’t know who. I can’t point fingers anymore. Vaporeon is gone and now everyone’s dropping like flies.” Umbreon leans in closer to the turtle and whispers, “If I can find some evidence on him, I’ll gladly take Honchkrow in and get his wings clipped.”

“That bird is dangerous,” Carracosta agrees. “Why don’t we attempt to make some evidence?”

Umbreon thinks for a moment and sighs. “I don’t know what else to do. Can I do something so demoralizing and make up evidence? I’d be putting a possibly innocent man in prison. I don’t know if I could live with myself.”

“You sure didn’t mind spying on Pidgeot,” Carracosta mutters.

“You knew about that?”

“Vaporeon never could keep her mouth shut when she needed to,” he says. “Umbreon, what did you do before contests?”

“Exploration teams,” the Pokemon says. “We caught bad guys and took the profits. It was good money.”

“How is it going to be different this time?”

Umbreon sighs, wipes his forehead, and looks at Carracosta with an unsure expression.



Honchkrow flies over to Stunfisk. “Hello, fish,” the bird says with a rather cheery voice. “Remember that favor you owe me?”

“No,” Stunfisk responds.

“Of course you do...the favor that you owe from the other day?”

Stunfisk seems confused, but he then pretends to understand. “Oh, that favor! Sure.”

“Well I’m here to redeem it. I want you to spy on Aipom and make him as uncomfortable as you can, okay?”

Stunfisk nods. “Uncomf’table is my middle name!”

“I’m...I’m sure it is.”


Leavanny and Lopunny sit side-by-side. They smile at each other and Leavanny opens his mouth.

“You know, I’ve made over a thousand outfits and don’t recall wearing a single one myself.”

Lopunny’s smile turns into a frown as she looks at her hands. “I’ve made a thousand insults that I should probably make up for,” she says.

“Come on, now. Don’t be so hard on yourself. You only beat Sylveon to win that round,” Leavanny says.

“That isn’t it. You don’t understand. I feel so guilty about my past mistakes; I was so intent on being famous, but my time was up when Gothorita got on stage. I knew it, too. It made me mad. It made me insane. I joined a Mega Evolution Supremacist group to rub it all in her face, but she died before I could show off my power. I slowly began to realize that it isn’t worth it anymore. In fact…”

Lopunny goes up on stage and grabs the microphone. She taps it and does a sound check, causing nine sets of eyes to stare back at her.

“Hello, everyone,” she says shyly. “I know I haven’t been the kindest Pokemon in the Contest Hall, but I want to thank you all for the kindness you’ve given me. In the past, I’ve felt so focused on my own self-gain that I never realized the hard work you put into making this contest happen. Leavanny, you work days and nights on end to make costumes for everyone to wear. Carracosta, you’ve been a brave judge that has faced ridicule and now loneliness. Electrike, you play your heart out every single time that camera’s rolling. Aipom, you were an addict before the murderers started, and now look at you. Even the shady characters in the back aren’t so bad. The competitors have worked their butts off to make it this far, yet I’ve only thought about myself. I’ve only thought about beating Gothorita. That was my only goal the past week or so. I’m sorry. Gothorita’s corpse, along with eight others and a bottle of empty water, lies in a room alone, and I don’t know who caused it, but I feel like I fueled it at least. I’ve not been the best person in this room, and I probably never will be, but thank you.”

Everyone stands up and claps for Lopunny. She hops off to the bathrooms that are nearby Aipom’s popcorn stand. She walks in and goes to cry. Electrike turns on his music player and hooks it into the sound system. Dancing starts.

Lopunny stands in the bathroom and looks at herself in the mirror. She gets on her knees, despite the unsanitary ground, and weeps. The bathroom door opens, but Lopunny doesn’t bother to see who has come in. She knows what’s coming. The murderer’s knife slides into her back almost automatically, and the movement is repeated vigorously to ensure Lopunny’s death. She smiles as her blood spills across the floor in a red velvet pond. The murderer cleans its hands behind her. Just as she stabbed her friends in the back before, she’s getting exactly what karma ordered. Lopunny feels the life leaving her body, and she turns around to see who the murderer was all along. However, she finds the bathroom door closing just in time for the murderer’s identity to remain sealed. Her smile fades as her body becomes stiff. Lopunny is no more.

Dead: Lopunny

Accused: No one

Chapter 10 will feature a double murder most likely.
 
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