Finished Convicted 2 - (Murder/Mystery Roleplaying Game)

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How did you guys like multiple murders? I won't do it every chapter, but I kind of like the surprise factor in it.

I'm also happy to see multiple characters being accused (remember to watch what people say, they could easily be tricking you!). Last time it was narrowed down so quickly, but it looks like I'm doing a decent job at keeping at least a few Pokemon on the shady side.

Also note that Minun is nowhere to be found. What do you think is going on there?
 
I definetly think the double murder adds some pretty deep tension and suspension knowing that 2 of us are gonna die. I also find it quite interesting how I'm being portrayed as the most likely to be the murderer.
 
Sorry for the huge delay. I had a problem with communication, holidays,and work, but here is the next chapter! I have decided to only allow guesses upon the end of this next chapter (chapter six) due to there still being so many characters to go into. Also, just for future reference, please make your guesses the night of or day after I post a chapter because otherwise I'll have to toss my already-written chapter (or partially-written) to reflect the actions of the final chapter. Thanks!

Chapter 5

Minun wakes up in some weird, dark room. It is bare, nothing on the ground, nothing on the walls. Just a room with a door in the front and a light at the top. She tugs on the handle, calls out, pleads for help--all for nothing. She inhales and exhales at uneven rates and then slams her body against the wall, slides down, and sits in a crouched position. She begins to study her surroundings. The wall is made of stone, something she’d have a hard time getting out of. She looks at the door to find some sort of sliding mechanism, as if it were one of those cheesy doorways to a secret club with secret passwords.

The piece of metal soon slides and a small mirror, instead of a set of eyes, is seen. She looks inside to see Plusle, and Plusle escapes into Minun’s mind. She blinks to find herself stuck in the mirror. Plusle, in her body, is blindfolded. The mirror shakes a little, and Minun screams out. It is then covered in a green shroud and set somewhere in another room. “Minun” walks out of the room with the blindfold on.



“It wasn’t me,” Lopunny says crudely.

Vaporeon paces the floors of her office. Lopunny is tied up in a chair beside her, and the bunny refuses to talk. Vaporeon threatened, provoked, and annoyed Lopunny to oblivion, but the Pokemon will not cooperate.

“Then who was it, Lopunny?”

“Even though we all know I'm not the guilty one here,” Lopunny smiles, much to Vaporeon’s dismay, “I'll still defend myself. After my little accident last night, I was at the clinic area with Pidgeot, Leavanny, and whoever else was there. I was more than accounted for--go ahead, ask them.”

“We already have. Pidgeot says you never went to the clinic area, but Leavanny says you left early enough to kill Gallade.”

“Then so could they, right?”

“You had the motive, Lopunny. You had the reason, the time, and the strength. Who else could have possibly gotten away with so many murders?”

“If anything, Vappy, I’d be worried about that boyfriend of yours,” Lopunny chuckles.

“Umbreon?”

“No, I mean Carracosta. Yes, Umbreon. He’s been to every crime scene and gotten all up in your business with his sucking up. He may seem innocent, but you better watch out. He may surprise you.”

Vaporeon gulps a little and unties Lopunny’s binds. The contest star looks up at the Eeveelution with a grin so mischievous that the Water-type closes her eyes.

From behind, a stalking Stunfisk escapes out of the open-doored room and races off to talk to Sylveon for some help.



Umbreon converses with Honchkrow about Stunfisk’s behavior. “Gallade is now dead. That’s yet another one of the competitors up against Gothorita. Do you really think Stunfisk would be this mad?”

“Yes. He took that knife, took my feather, and planted them right in Leavanny’s room to frame both him and me! That fish is a psychopath. Did you know he can use Camouflage to hide places?”

“What?” Umbreon coughs.

“I’m afraid there is a grave evil existing in this building. We need to stop it. I can offer you a deal,” Honchkrow says cunningly.

Umbreon becomes skeptical. “What kind of ‘deal’ are you talking about?”

“You can convince Vaporeon and get in that office of hers to look at the surveillance, right?”

“I’ve been meaning to,” he nods.

“Fantastic. I want you to get in there and see what you find, and then I want you to report it to me,” he explains.

“And why would I inform you on something like this?” Umbreon asks with narrowed eyes.

“Because I know from a little birdie that Lopunny is pinning the murder of Gallade square between your two love-stricken eyes, and I can get the little annoyance to simmer down--in exchange for the information, of course.”

Umbreon blinks. Is someone really trying to get the murders aligned to his name? He ends the conversation with Honchkrow and makes his way over to Vaporeon. He sees her face and immediately relaxes his worrying. Maybe Honchkrow’s just messing with him.



Sylveon takes a break from her practicing and eats popcorn with her new friend. The two exchange smiles and she admits that she didn’t expect him to be so friendly.

“I thought you were some Rare Candy addict,” she blushes.

“I actually am, er, was. Vaporeon took them away and I’ve been feeling strange, but in a good way. I feel like all the effort I’ve put into my experiences the past few days has really made an impact on my power. The Rare Candies were like hollow calories or something,” he shrugs.

Sylveon smiles again. “Now, why don’t you help me with my speed issue? I’m not exactly the fastest Eeveelution around.”

Aipom begins attempting to attack her, and she dodges as a quick result. He repeats the action, this time landing the hit. The two begin to run around the sidelines of the building and laugh at the fun they’re having.

Aipom falls from his mid-air jump and lands on a slip of paper, causing him to lose his footing and smack into the ground. The force of the landing causes the paper to fly in the air, and Sylveon catches the card to read it.

From the Murderer: The next Pokemon to die shall be a rather suspicious guy

Sylveon calls for someone, anyone, to come over and look at the clue, and only Electrike bothers to leave his DJ station. He trots over and reads the card with surprise.

“Hey, dudes, this clue seems pretty important, don’tcha think?”

“That’s why I called you over here, Electrike. I figured a smart Pokemon like you could know what it meant.”

Electrike’s face becomes pink and his headphones are turned down in volume. He scratches his forehead and looks at the card.

“So then one of the guys are going to die?” he asks out loud, but Sylveon only shakes her head in confusion.

“It doesn’t make sense to me,” she shrugs.

“Where’d you find this card?” Electrike asks.

“It must’ve come from the ceiling; I was practicing with Aipom when we noticed it.”

The three of them glance up to see Rhydon working on the electric equipment above. Electrike narrows his eyes and begins to walk in that general direction. Sylveon reluctantly follows him, and Aipom brings up the rear.



Carracosta takes over the DJ station and begins to mess with the records. He goes over to the computer part of the system and looks through the catalog of songs that Electrike keeps. He clicks one called “My Life is a Geodude,” a classic from the early ‘80s. The band, “Brock and the Boyzz,” used to be his favorite back when his hair was longer. Carracosta nods his head to the music and starts to mess with the levers in front of him.

Leavanny runs to the station and begs Carracosta to turn off the garbage. The Pokemon says no, and so Leavanny cuts the power cord to the station altogether, rendering the music useless. The Pokemon brushes a leaf against its head, now with a banging ache, and walks over to Pidgeot to discuss Lopunny.

Carracosta slams a fist into the gears and levers in anger. He decides to look for a microphone so he can go up there and sing for himself.



Umbreon walks up to Vaporeon and offers a friendly expression, only to be turned down with a stone glare.

“What’s wrong, Vappy?” he asks with a paw pushed up against her shoulder.

“Umbreon, why are you doing this?”

“Doing what?” he asks as he brings his paw back.

“Helping. Shouldn’t you, oh, I don’t know, go prep for your little contests or something? Go mingle, start some drama!”

“Vaporeon, I want to catch this killer just as much as you do,” he says, obviously hurt.

“I understand that, but there’s speculation that you’re guilty of the crimes now. I can’t have that going on under my own management.”

“Management? It’s not even been a week and you act like you own the place.”

“Well maybe I do,” she stammers.

Umbreon sighs. “Can I at least look at the footage of the past few days and see if I find anything else? I’ll let you know every detail.”

Vaporeon sits and thinks for a moment. She puts a paw up to her face and stretches her shoulders back. “I guess it wouldn’t hurt. Keep your nose clean.” The last part of the sentence sounded genuinely concerned, not angered or skeptical.

“Yessir,” Umbreon says with a goofy salute.

She does not smile.



Leavanny finds a card on the ground next to where Aipom’s group was, and he takes the paper, reads it, and slips it in his leaves. He looks up to see Electrike making his way to the catwalk, and so he returns to Pidgeot to keep talking about the situation at hand.

“So Gallade got the fake suicide look,” Pidgeot says with some remorse.

“Seems like it, but it was weird that the killer used his own blades. Perhaps this man, or woman, does not have any instrument on his/her body? Take Stunfisk, for example. Last time I saw him, he had a concealed weapon at his very fingerti--fins,” Leavanny suggests.

“Whatever the case, one of my favorite contestants has been axed,” she says. “Lopunny is my prime suspect. After all, she had plenty of time to kill that man after the nurse’s station checkup.”

“That’s very true,” Leavanny nods. “I found this note,” he whispers as he pulls out the card, “near where Electrike was at. I wonder what he’s up to?”

“Not sure, but do you believe that’s the real murderer?”

“I hope so. Maybe the murderer is trying to toy with us, but is actually failing, and we capture the culprit before anyone else has to die?”

“Doubt it. Let’s face it, Leavanny. Pokemon are going to die. No one’s safe in this building, except maybe Vaporeon. Everyone’s afraid of Vaporeon,” Pidgeot explains.

“Maybe we should do some digging and start questioning our leader, then,” Leavanny smirks.

“Makes sense. For her, I mean. She took the position and leads the investigation. She could have captured Minun for all we know.”

“Capture who?” the little blue-eared mouse scurries up to the two Pokemon. “I’m right here!”

“So you are,” Pidgeot says with a worried look. “So you are.”

“There goes that idea, but maybe we can find some other evidence?” the Grass/Bug Pokemon frowns.

“Sounds good to me.”

“Yay~”



Vivillon glides into the bathroom and relieves herself. She goes over to the mirror to wash her hands and senses movement in her peripheral vision. She moves over to the paper towel dispenser and gets enough to dry her feeble hands.

“Show yourself,” she says aloud. “Don’t cower in your Camouflage cover.”

A Stunfisk, alone and afraid, sits in the bathroom with a feather and a knife in either hand. He cries loudly and Vivillon holds a hand to her mouth. She screams out and has Chandelure race in to help her, and the Pokemon threatens to set Stunfisk on fire. The confused Pokemon goes invisible and races out of the bathroom to continue hiding.

“That was terrifying. I hate Ground-type Pokemon,” she squeals.

“We should get rid of them. They threaten my flame every single time,” Chandelure shakes his head in annoyance.

“Maybe,” she sighs. “Violence isn’t going to get us anywhere in this evil place.”



Electrike runs up to Rhydon’s area of the catwalk and finds a pencil, sheets of paper, and Rhydon. He screeches about the Pokemon being suspicious, possibly the murderer, and runs up to Rhydon’s body.

He is shocked to see that, upon his vision focusing in on the Pokemon rather than his materials, Rhydon is dead. The Pokemon is stooped over in his chair with a microphone, still attached to its pole, stabbed straight through his head.

“Guys, let’s get out of here. Rhydon is...dead,” he says to the group, along with everyone else due to the microphone being turned on.

Vaporeon looks up at the catwalk and sprints over to the stairs so she can run up there. She guides Sylveon and Aipom away from Electrike and grabs him so she can take him into custody.

“You’re the number one suspect in this case right now,” she says.

“You keep changing suspects every single time,” Electrike mutters.

“Wait,” Sylveon tells Vaporeon, “I remember Rhydon and Electrike being friends. Rhydon’s enemy was Umbreon--Umbreon accused him of killing Feebas due to the special effects just an hour or two ago, and the two have had this awkward grudge against each other the whole time. Electrike is innocent!”

Electrike’s head goes into his body like a turtle at such a twisted response. He appreciates the far-reaching accusation, though, and looks at Vaporeon hopelessly. She lets the Pokemon go and decides to have a visit with Umbreon.



Umbreon sits and watches the tapes from over the past few days. Nothing. He finds nothing for the first several days until he finally spots a weird nothingness opening Leavanny’s room and going inside. He remembers Leavanny and Feebas talking about how they saw the fish sneaking around inside, and even how Honchkrow was going to be framed as the murderer. He sees the tape and learns of the Camouflage technique, one that he was not aware of, and sees, even in the background of the shot, Honchkrow watching in the very distance.

Could Honchkrow be ordering Stunfisk to kill everyone? Could Honchkrow instead be stalking Stunfisk? What’s going on?

A knock comes from the door. Umbreon opens it to find Vaporeon looking very serious.

“Find anything?” she asks.

“Um, no,” Umbreon lies. It’s better to keep things like this to myself.

“Figures. Umbreon, you’re going into my custody as the suspect for the murder of Rhydon, Gallade, Feebas...and the rest of them. Come into my office,” she says with a fierce look.

“What?!” Umbreon screeches. “After everything I’ve done for you?”

“Especially after everything you’ve done for me. I mean it,” the Pokemon glares.

“Fine, but don’t expect me to be helping you anymore. Whatever I thought we had has just disintegrated into nothingness. Congratulations.”

Dead: Rhydon

Accused: Umbreon (Keeper of Night)
 
King Xerneas said:
I just love wrecking relationships
*gets really sad but kind of aggressive and starts screaming* Damn it Loppuny. Is this what you wanted? To end us before we even started dating or anything?
That makes 2 break ups, one of them happened before the real thing even started. Both times it has been because of a contestant. I'm done with contests. They bring nothing but pain and suffering to some of us. I'll give swimming lessons or something if I get out of this, although right now I wouldn't really mind right now if I didn't survive this...
 
Oh I didn't mean for any of this to happen, but the drama sure makes this waiting around quite interesting. Now if you don't mind I have some grooming to do.
 
I knew Rhydon was innocent.
 
Guys, this is probably the weirdest murder so far. You can start guessing in PRIVATE to me after you read this chapter, though remember that you're running the risk of either killing yourself or ending the story D: There are only ~13 characters left now! Chapter 7 will be a double murder, but before that, you better get ready for a feels trip.

Chapter 6

“What were you doing at the time of Rhydon’s murder?”

“Look, Vappy, I’m sorry,” Umbreon offers. “I have been accused left and right and I just snapped. I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, and I didn’t kill Rhydon.”

“How can I believe you?”

"You'll have to believe me, I wouldn't kill anybody! Not unless they were harming y-” He pauses. “...somebody I cared about. How was he killed, anyway? Certainly not with poison..."

“A microphone pole through the head,” Vaporeon says bluntly.

“A pole through the head?” he asks dumbly. “How am I strong enough--big enough--to do such a thing to a large, armored Pokemon? I’m a quadruped, Vaporeon. I don’t do that kind of stuff.”

“Anyone could,” she snaps.

“Look, Vap, I've been stuck watching tapes the whole time, since right after we parted ways! Follow my scent trail if you feel so inclined, but I can still guarantee you'll find no evidence of me anywhere near that body.”

Vaporeon glances at the floor. “I didn’t mean about the murder. I meant how can I believe you didn’t hurt my feelings? You’re a jerk, you know that? You think you can just humiliate me like that?”

“I’m sorry!”

“Sorry isn’t good enough, Umbreon. I was hurt before by a stupid Lucario. He dumped me straight off. Straight off! How can I trust anyone as even a friend? I don’t know what we are, and, right now, I don’t care.” Vaporeon sheds a tear and breaks down in her office.

“Vaporeon, I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to,” he sniffs.

“Get out. J-Just get out,” she sobs.



Electrike goes back up to Rhydon’s catwalk to investigate the pen and paper from before.

“I still can’t believe Rhydude is dead,” he sighs.

He finds the same paper material used to write the murderer cards. Is it possibly that he wrote the murder notes? Electrike wipes a tear from his eye and walks down the steps from the catwalk to the ground floor. He decides to return to his station as DJ and bring some music back to the hall. He goes over to see his cord has been sliced from the wall.

“My sound system!” he screeches to the top of his lungs, causing objects to shake and Pokemon to clasp their ears. “What fiend bothered my beautiful sound system?”

Leavanny inches away from the scene.



Lopunny steps out of the bath stall and wrings out her ear’s hair. She had previously taken a nice, warm shower to hydrate her hair and give it more structure. She grabs her forehead and sweeps any loose strands of hair back along her scalp.

She steps right into “Minun’s” space. The mouse Pokemon walks in and sees that steam has conveniently covered the mirrors. Lopunny goes to draw a circle in the mirror and shade it in to provide some reference.

“What do you want, you brain disease?” she asks annoyedly.

Minun kicks her in the shin and grabs a long ear, pulling, and causing Lopunny’s head to lower down to Minun’s height.

“That’s better. Now, stay outta my face before I rip yours off, has-been,” Minun smiles, letting go over her ear and causing Lopunny to recoil back and slam her head against the mirror. Minun goes into one of the bathroom stalls and Lopunny hops out of the bathroom.



Umbreon walks down the hallway with an upsetting stride. He sniffs every few seconds and blinks hard to keep from going into tears. After all the suspecting, the skepticism, he thought Vaporeon didn’t like him at all--how was he supposed to know?

He passes Sylveon in the hall and sees her shrink into a blush. He smiles, she smiles. They make eye contact. Umbreon then sees Vaporeon staring in his peripheral view. He stops walking and turns around to speak to Sylveon.

“Hey, Sylveon,” he says sheepishly.

“Hi,” she whispers.

“How’ve you been?” he asks.

“Okay, I guess.”

“Cool.”

“Uh, yeah.”

Umbreon looks to see Vaporeon red in the face. The Water-type walks off in a rage and he sighs at the action. She was supposed to admit her wrongs to him and give him some sort of credit. He tells Sylveon goodbye and goes over to keep an eye on everyone.

Umbreon sees Honchkrow and mouths the words, “can we meet?”

Honchkrow shakes his head. “Tomorrow.”



Carracosta picks at a stone between his toes. He likes the stone upon getting it out, and he holds it between his thumb and pointer finger. He sniffs the stone until Chandelure comes around.

“Hey, candlestick,” he jests.

“Now now. I need to know something: is the contest going to continue? There are five contestants.”

Carracosta shakes his head. “No, actually. Vaporeon said she wouldn’t allow it until everyone is safe and the murderer is caught.”

“She’s so bossy. I’m sick of her interfering with everything in this Arceus-forsaken contest!”

“Hey, calm down. I bet if one more contestant dies, the rest would be in the final four automatically.”

Chandelure’s candles flare a little and appear brighter. “That makes me a little hopeful. I’ve worked so hard to get here, and I can’t back down. I can’t.”



“You’re an idiot, Lopunny,” Pidgeot announces in the Mega Evolution Meeting room.

“Ha,” she chuckles in a rather uncaring manner.

“I don’t need help to lead Mega Evolution into dominance, you know,” the bird says.

“You should at least delay it until the murdering stops and it isn’t in the news. If you come out now or if someone hears you, we’ll both be pinned for these murders. I’m not risking my reputation for you anymore. This is morally wrong.”

“You always were the weakest.”

“You’re being dangerous and stupid,” Lopunny warns.

“You can’t tell me what I am!” she says.

Pidgeot flies out of the room and charges for the stage. She goes to the backstage area, zips by Aipom, and reaches her destination. She knocks Chandelure and Electrike off the stage and talks about an announcement to make. Lopunny joins in and walks down the stage steps to the side wall, where she props herself up and crosses her arms. Lopunny has a smirk stretched on her face and a set of eyebrows raised very high.

“The competition is over,” Pidgeot squawks. “Mega Evolutions will take over the Contest Hall and run it accordingly. If you have any questions or concerns, speak to Pidgeot, the Mega Evolution Leader!”

The whole crowd is silent. Lopunny can be heard giggling. Leavanny, Umbreon, and Sylveon get on the stage to listen to Pidgeot continue.

“Please accept me as your leader or I will mega evolve and threaten you all!”

Honchkrow flies down from the stands and lands beside the stage for the first time ever. The Pokemon blankly stares at the spectacle before him.

“Popcorn! Get your popcorn while the bird squawks!” Aipom screams with bags of popcorn in each hand.

“I’ll take one!” Stunfisk yelps.

Electrike, now on the ground floor, looks off in the distance to see another rectangle-shaped note. He feels a twist in his stomach and goes over to see what it is. To his horror, it looks like the same card from the back. He flips the card around and breathes a sigh of relief.

“One free large popcorn at Aipom’s stand. Good until the end of the contest!” he reads from it.

Electrike slows his breathing to regular levels and decides to head back to his DJ area, at least for now. He walks over to see Vaporeon snooping around at the equipment. He begins to trot over there as he hears Pidgeot talk more and more about megas.

Carracosta stomps the floor, grabs a resultant rock, and slams it at Pidgeot’s head, causing her to fall to the ground. Everyone cheers as the Pokemon gets knocked out.

Leavanny sits on the stage and lets his legs dangle. He kicks back and forth, and then he sees Umbreon sitting alone.

“What’s wrong, Umbreon?”

“Vaporeon accused me of murdering Rhydon and I got upset, so I told her I don’t trust her anymore and now she hates me. I tried to get her to be jealous or something when I talked to Sylveon, but it only made things worse,” he explains.

“You poor, poor idiot,” Leavanny laughs. “Everything’ll work out, you just wait.”

The two exchange encouraging smiles and watch as Carracosta dances around on stage.



“We have a connection, Aipom. I know we do,” Sylveon says to her friend.

“Well then you need to let Umbreon know. Does he?”

“Probably not,” she admits.

“Show off to Umbreon and appeal to him. Vaporeon sure isn’t right now,” Aipom explains.

“You know, you’re right. Thanks!”

Aipom cheerfully hugs her and hides his fiercely determined eyes.



Vivillon sits in the stands and begins to contemplate her life’s meaning. She has seen a judge die, several contestants die, and electrician…! Life is turning terrible for her, and she wonders if she has a place in it anymore. She looks nearby and suddenly spots a knife in the chair beside her. She picks up the knife and looks at her reflection through its blade, and then pokes her finger with the very tip of it.

“Don’t do it,” a voice says from behind her.

Lopunny walks over and grabs a seat beside the Pokemon Contest judge. “You’ll regret it. Most do. What’s troubling you?”

Vivillon looks at the ground. “I can’t say too much, it’s dangerous.”

“Really?” Lopunny, puzzled, asks in surprise. “Well, anyway, look at it this way: you’re alive here and now, and that’s all that matters. Can I please have the knife?”

Vivillon hands Lopunny the weapon.

“Thanks,” Lopunny says, and she stores it away.

In the background, a Camouflaged Stunfisk watches as his knife, which he planted for Vivillon, is now in Lopunny’s possession. He tiptoes / gently flops away and hits a waiting Honchkrow’s belly.

“We need to talk about something,” the bird scowls.

Stunfisk gulps.



Leavanny goes about trimming Minun’s hair again, though this time while facing away from the mirror.

“Not sure why you’d want to ditch such a lovely face, but I guess everyone’s a critic,” he smiles.

“I just don’t like mirrors,” Minun offers as an explanation.

“You seem ill,” he says with a snip at the back of the head.

Minun winces. “Well you seem nosy,” she counters.

Leavanny quits his snipping and looks at her in the eyes. “Minun, that isn’t you, is it?” he asks slowly.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about. Of course I’m Minun.”



Umbreon goes up to Vaporeon to finally face his imminent fate. He nudges her head with his and they interlock, but Vaporeon surprisingly doesn’t destroy him.

“I’m sorry about hurting your feelings. We never really talked about Lucario or Gothorita,” he explains. “It won’t happen again.”

Vaporeon nods and the two hug again.

“I need you to know that I have feelings for you, Vaporeon. Maybe we can get dinner and a movie sometime after this is all over?” he suggests.

Vaporeon smiles and nods again.

Sylveon peeks around a corner to see the two of them conversing. She quickly zips her head back out of view and runs off to cry on Aipom’s shoulder. Vaporeon has done it again.

“Umbreon, did you know I can blend in with water? I can use my Acid Armor attack and fuse my cells with water molecules, thus making me go in water!”

“Cool!” Umbreon says happily.

“I have an idea,” she says. “You’re going to tell Pidgeot that this water is really good, and then you’re going to give it to her. I will be in that bottle. Pidgeot will feel obligated to take that water, and she won’t drink it--must don’t. Or, if she does, I’ll just come out of there and call her as a witness for something. I need to know what she’s doing behind those doors.”

Umbreon looks at her in disbelief. “You’re insane. It’s too risky!”

“It’s creative and unexpected,” she says.

“I won’t have a part in it.”

Vaporeon looks at him with Baby-Doll Eyes. Umbreon forces a smile and changes his mind. “Maybe it’ll work,” he whispers. “But be careful. Vaporeon, I...I lo-” he begins.

“Don’t worry,” she smiles. “I know.”



And so the conversation between him and the bird took place. The bird took the water bottle and thanked him, but she soon slung the bottle in the trash and unintentionally knocked Vaporeon out. An hour goes by and nothing happens.

Umbreon waits patiently backstage, near the curtains. He stares down the hallway and sees nothing. He lies down and dozes off while waiting. He wakes up to find that several hours have gone by.

He jumps up, shocked. He looks around--no sign of her. He goes into the room where the recordings are--no sign of her. He walks into Pidgeot’s private room and beats the door down with his back legs. He hops in to find, again, no sign of her. He goes into Leavanny’s room, into the competitors’ rooms, into the bathroom areas, back to the backstage area, and all around the stage and audience location.

There is absolutely no sign of Vaporeon anywhere. Umbreon tosses the water bottle in the trash can and tries to think rationally. If she was poured down the sink, or flushed down the toilet, she could just move in the water to come back up, right? If she was kept somewhere private, she could have busted herself out.

He goes over to Electrike’s sound system and asks if he can make an announcement over the intercom. Electrike, groggy from sleeping, agrees. As Umbreon walks over to sit down, he finds an open bottle of water with a live wire inside it. He goes to pull the wire out and shocks himself, knocking him back. He looks in horror as the water bottle remains still. He manages to get up and move the water bottle to the top of the station.

“Oh, nice! A drink!” Electrike cheers and drinks the whole bottle in one gulp.

Umbreon stands and watches the display. His head thrusts forehead and he holds his mouth shut. Don’t vomit. Don’t vomit. He runs to a nearby trash can and empties his stomach of any undigested food. He gets up, wipes his mouth, and tastes the acids that had come up through the regurgitation.

“Did...did Electrike just drink my girlfriend?” Umbreon looks back, sees Electrike let out a sigh of satisfaction, and runs to the trash can.

Dead: Vaporeon

Accused: Electrike (Celever)
 
From a non-Umbreon point of view, this murder is very hard to pin on anybody, and we can't actually know for certain if Electrike did it, or if Vaporeon is even dead in the first place (I mean, I assume she is, from a game perspective it seems that way, but from a a story perspective, it wouldn't surprise me if she came back later).

Let's go ahead and see what Umbreon wants to do...
Oh that's right, he already doesn't like Electrike.
* Umbreon kills Electrike.
^Next chapter done for ya, Turtwig.
 
*afterlife*
I was pretty sure I was gonna die next XD I'M SORRY UMBREON I'M STUPID :((((

OOC:Lol, that should be part of dumb ways to die XD
 
Keeper of Night said:
From a non-Umbreon, point of view, this murder is very hard to pin on anybody, and we can't actually know for certain if Electrike did it, or if Vaporeon is even dead in the first place (I mean, I assume she is, from a game perspective it seems that way, but from a a story perspective, it wouldn't surprise me if she came back later).

Because we're getting into the anybody-can-guess duration of the game, we'll be narrowing down the possible suspects. If you go back and read through some of the parts, you may find different motives from different characters, and others have no motives at all. Umbreon only sees Electrike do this stuff. so that's why he's on the hot seat. These characters were the unavoidable deaths, but now you have the power to deduct the killer based on past actions.

In the original doc I keep these in, I put a question mark by her name, but for now you can just assume she's dead. Whether or not she comes back alive depends on how the story progresses.
 
Looks like this is where things may begin to take a turn for the worse. I know right now I still look pretty guilty, but it would be best to just save yourself the trouble and accuse someone that isn't me. Or you could accuse me, your funeral after all.
 
Interesting death.

Also, stop killing pokes on my clear list >:O

I have a pretty good idea who it is, but I'm not going to guess this time. At least, not until later (assuming rng doesn't off me).
 
PMJ said:
Interesting death.

Also, stop killing pokes on my clear list >:O

I have a pretty good idea who it is, but I'm not going to guess this time. At least, not until later (assuming rng doesn't off me).

Now why do you think it is the RNG that is offing people? And, yes, I'm still around.
 
A lady never reveals her secrets.
 
I too have an idea on who the killer is. But I need the next chapter just to make sure my guess will be correct. That is if I live.
 
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