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Alright, it will be judged when the contest officially starts.
 
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Onix Lv. 35 90 HP [F]
Basic Pokemon

Pic : An Onix is resting at a rocky mountain. The sun shine very brightly. A Rhyhorn is seen trying to tackle it.

Poke-Body : Solid Barrier
Reduce any damage done to any your Basic Pokemon by your opponent's Pokemon wit 2 or more energy attached to it by 20. You can't use more than 1 Solid Barrier Poke-Body each turn.

[F] Bind 10
Flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokemon is now Paralyzed.

[F][C][C] Underground Crawl
Does 50 damage to 1 of your opponent's Pokemon (Don't apply Weakness, Resistance, Poke-Power, Poke-Body or any other effect on that Pokemon for this attack).

W - [W] +20
R - [L] -20
RC - [C][C]

Flavour Text : This Pokemon usually lay in the mountains... It is often mistaken for a pile of boulders.
 
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MS Eeveelution said:
Onix Lv. 35 90 HP [F]
Basic Pokemon

Pic : An Onix is resting at a rocky mountain. The sun shine very brightly. A Rhyhorn is seen trying to tackle it.

Poke-Body : Solid Barrier
Reduce any damage done to any your Basic Pokemon by your opponent's Pokemon wit 2 or more energy attached to it by 20. You can't use more than 1 Solid Barrier Poke-Body each turn.

[F] Bind 10
Flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokemon is now Paralyzed.

[F][C][C] Underground Crawl
Does 50 damage to 1 of your opponent's Pokemon (Don't apply Weakness, Resistance, Poke-Power, Poke-Body or any other effect on that Pokemon for this attack).

W - [W] +20
R - [L] -20
RC - [C][C]

Flavour Text : This Pokemon usually lay in the mountains... It is often mistaken for a pile of boulders.

When the contest starts, it will be judged.
 
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Chimchar – Lv.21 – hp50 – {R}
Basic Pokemon

{Pokepower} Soul Burn
Once during your turn, before you attack, you may discard Chimchar and all cards attached to it from play. If you do, until the end of your turn, all of your active {R} Pokemon’s attacks do 10 more damage to the defending Pokemon. This power can’t be used if Chimchar is affected by a special condition.

{R} Flare Up
Search your deck for a {R} energy card and attach it to one of your Chimchar in play. Shuffle your deck afterward. Chimchar is now burned.

Pokedex entry: Its a tail burns as an image of its spirit. It can move quickly even through thick underbrush.
Weakness: {W} +10
Resistance:
Retreat Cost: {C}
 
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Porygon Lv20 HP 60 {C}

{Poke-Body} Cyber Travel
Once during your turn, before you attack, you may flip a coin. If heads you may search your deck for a Basic Pokemon and put it into your hand. If tails search your deck for a basic Energy and put it into your hand. You cannot use more than one Cyber Travel Poke-Body per turn.

{C} Tech Support
Place a card from your hand onto the bottom of your deck. Search your deck for two basic Energy and place them into your hand.

Weakness {F} +10
Resistance
Retreat {C}
 
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{C} Taillow - Lv. 18 - 60 HP{C}
Basic Pokemon

Picture: Taillow dive bombing a Mightyena. It is in a forest clearing. The forest is dark green, with eyes looking out at you.

(Pokebody) : Guts
Reduce all damage by half (rounded to the nearest ten) done to Taillow by non-basic pokemon (both yours and your opponents).

{C}-One way Divebomb-10 damage: This does 10 damage to one of your opponents bench pokemon. Switch taillow with one of your bench pokemon.

Flavour text: Taillow has been known to challenge and defeat pokemon that are twice it's size.

Weakness: {L} +40

Resistance: {F} -20

Retreat Cost: 0
 
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Okay, guys, I am going to start a little early. Lowest score is eliminated. Each judge gives you from 1/10. Then, those scores are combined. Happy faking! This round, you must make a basic Pokemon that has a general use besides just evolving into a higher stage. No legendaries allowed!
 
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Light Venusaur said:
Cool...here's my one already done.

Edit: I forgot about weakness & retreat cost.
Weakness: {F} 10+
Retreat Cost: 1 {C}

I give it 7/10.

MS Eeveelution - 6/10.
Daren - 5/10
Muddy68 - 7/10
Joethegreat1 - 7/10.

Those are my scores.
 
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MS Eeveelution said:
.. Can I know the reason.. My card only gets 6...

Well I think a 6 is quite good but I rated it a 6 because on the attack Underground Crawl does 50 damage which I think is too much for a Pokemon that hasan't evolved. I would of gone up to 40.
 
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{R}Magmar Lv.28 80HP{R}
Basic Pokemon
Pic: Magmar soaking in a lava pool.
{Poke-Body} Fire Wall
If there is a Magby anywhere under this Magmar, prevent all effects(excluding damage) done to this Pokemon by Basic Pokemon with 50 HP or less.

{C} Fire Slap: 10 Damage.
{R}{R} Flame Ball: 40 Damage-Ignore any Weakness, Resistance, or any other effects on the defending Pokemon by this attack.

Weakness: {W}+20
Resistance:
Retreat: {C}
 
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Could I know as well so that I can improve on the next round?
Who's out?
 
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I want to know whats coming up in the next round.
 
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LV : 4/10
This round is to make a basic Pokemon that has a general use besides just evolving into a higher stage. But, you made a Pichu whose attack IS only use to evolve into a higher stage.

MS : 8/10
I actually liked this card. The only thing is, i think the pokebody should only be in affect if Onix is Benched.

Daren : 6/10
Its only a Supportive Card. Cant do much on its own but suicide.

Muddy : 7.5/10
The Body should be a Power. Too "searchy".

Joe : 4/10
+40 Weakness for a basic? Guts is over-powered. Tailow could survive a 100 damage attack. I'm not really sure what the use of Tailow. Is it Tanking damage ?

choccy : 5/10
Im not sure what is the use of this card. Is it tanking basics? There are plenty of "baby evolved" card like yours. It would be a average normal card but i dont think it suit the requirement of this round.
 
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I'm glad you like it.

raichupika33 said:
MS Eeveelution said:
.. Can I know the reason.. My card only gets 6...

Well I think a 6 is quite good but I rated it a 6 because on the attack Underground Crawl does 50 damage which I think is too much for a Pokemon that hasan't evolved. I would of gone up to 40.


But ... Onix is a powerful Pokemon... It was a final stage... in the 1st gen
 
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