Ex: Holon Family  (I'm in DIRE need of helpers!!!)

Uh... DRK?  And we better stop causally chatting otherwise we'll get banned.  Or something, at least.  And the Closest mod to be active is Abhorsen, and even that's unlikely. No, wait, it's Charizard or MysteryE.
 
RE: Ex: Holon Family (I'm in DIRE need of helpers!!!)

Flygon - I edited my Venusaur. See if you like it. And, by the way, did you like the cards I made on pg. 26? And Mew d on pg. 25 (my personal favourite)?

GPM - I think you should change Blastoise's type. Why are all our delta species starters L-type?
 
Blastoise ?                                120HP{R}
Stage 2-Evolves from Wartortle.
Poke-body:Rage Aura
As long as any of your pokemon's HP is 50 or less,each of your pokemon does 20 more damage to the defending pokemon.

{R}{C}Flamethrower                        30
The defending pokemon is now burned.

{R}{R}{C}Massive flare                    70
You may discard all energy attached to Blastoise.if you do,this attack does 100 damage instead.

Weakness                Resistance            Retreat cost
    {L}                                             {C}{C}
Wartortle ?                                     80HP {F}
Stage 1-Evolves from Squirtle.

{C}Bite                                          20

{R}{C}Lock mist                             
Flip a coin,if heads,your opponent can't evolve,bench,play a trainer card,attack and attach an energy card during your opponent's next turn.If tails,the defending pokemon is now burned.
Weakness             Resistance            Retreat cost
    {L}                                                {C}
Squirtle ?                                    50HP{R}
Basic

{R}{C}Mirror shell      
Once,during your turn,if Squirtle ? is damaged by an opponent's attack(even if Squirtle is knocked out),put the same number of damage counters on Squirtle on the defending pokemon.
Weakness                Resistance             Retreat cost
    {L}                                                     {C}



okay now?
 
RE: Ex: Holon Family (I'm in DIRE need of helpers!!!)

Yeah but...
-use R for fire
-Blastoise's body is good, but I think you should take out that part about delta pokémon
-it should be Poké-body, not Poké-power
-Wartortle's Lock Mist should have no base damage, it is too broken
-Squirtle's attack should say: During your opponent's next turn, if Squirtle is damaged by an opponent's attack, put the same number of damage counters on the Attacking Pokémon (even if Squirtle is Knocked Out).
-Squirtle needs 1 Retreat Cost

Those are the only mistakes, I guess:)
 
RE: Ex: Holon Family (I'm in DIRE need of helpers!!!)

The Ampharos line redone:

Mareep - 40HP [L]

[C] Ascension
Search your deck for a card that evolves from Mareep and put it onto Mareep (this counts as evolving Mareep). Shuffle your deck afterward.

[L] Thundershock 10
Flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokémon is now Paralyzed.

Weakness - [F] Resistance -30 - [M] Retreat Cost - [C]

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Flaaffy
- 70HP [L]

Poké-body: Natural Cure
Whenever you attach a basic [L] Energy card from your hand to Flaaffy, remove all Special Conditions from Flaaffy.

[C] Thunder Slash 10
If the Defending Pokémon is a Basic Pokémon, the Defending Pokémon is now Paralyzed. Flaaffy can't use Thunder Slash during your next turn.

[L][L][C] Lightning 50

Weakness - [F] Resistance -30 - [M] Retreat Cost - [C]

---------------------------

Ampharos - 110HP [L]

Poké-power: Energy Disconnect
Once during your turn (before your attack), you may discard a basic [L] Energy attached to 1 of your [L] Pokémon. If you do, choose 1 Energy card attached to 1 of your opponent's Pokémon and discard it. This power can't be used if Ampharos is affected by a Special Condition.

[L][C][C] Thunderpunch 40+
Flip a coin. If heads, this attach does 40 damage plus 20 more damage. If tails, the Defending Pokémon is now Paralyzed.

Weakness - [F] Resistance -30 - [M] Retreat Cost - [C][C]
 
Great! Just that Flaffy's Natural Cure should read:
Once during your turn, when you attach a basic {L} Energy card from your hand to Flaffy, you may remove all special conditions from Flaffy.
 
RE: Ex: Holon Family (I'm in DIRE need of helpers!!!)

But then it would be a Poké-power... I changed it to "Whenever...". Do you think it is better now? And did you like my Mew d on Pg.25? =P
 
Blastoise ?                                120HP{R}
Stage 2-Evolves from Wartortle.
Poke-body:Rage Aura
As long as any of your pokemon's HP is 50 or less,each of your pokemon does 20 more damage to the defending pokemon.

{R}{C}Flamethrower                        30
The defending pokemon is now burned.

{R}{R}{C}Massive flare                    70
You may discard all energy attached to Blastoise.if you do,this attack does 100 damage instead.

Weakness                Resistance            Retreat cost
    {L}                                             {C}{C}
Wartortle ?                                     80HP {F}
Stage 1-Evolves from Squirtle.

{C}Bite                                          20

{R}{C}Lock mist                            
Flip a coin,if heads,your opponent can't evolve,bench,play a trainer card,attack and attach an energy card during your opponent's next turn.If tails,the defending pokemon is now burned.
Weakness             Resistance            Retreat cost
    {L}                                                {C}
Squirtle ?                                    50HP{R}
Basic

{R}{C}Mirror shell
  During your opponent's next turn, if Squirtle is damaged by an opponent's attack, put the same number of damage counters on the Attacking Pokémon (even if Squirtle is Knocked Out).    
Weakness                Resistance             Retreat cost
    {L}                                                     {C}



okay now?
 
RE: Ex: Holon Family (I'm in DIRE need of helpers!!!)

Squirtle's Mirror Shell is still worded wrongly. It should be "During your opponent's next turn, if Squirtle is damaged by an opponent's attack, put the same number of damage counters on the Attacking Pokémon (even if Squirtle is Knocked Out)."
 
Blastoise δ 120HP{R}
Stage 2-Evolves from Wartortle.
Poke-body:Rage Aura
As long as any of your pokemon's HP is 50 or less,each of your pokemon does 20 more damage to the defending pokemon.

{R}{C}Flamethrower 30
The defending pokemon is now burned.

{R}{R}{C}Massive flare 70
You may discard all energy attached to Blastoise.if you do,this attack does 100 damage instead.

Weakness Resistance Retreat cost
{L} {C}{C}
Wartortle δ 80HP {F}
Stage 1-Evolves from Squirtle.

{C}Bite 20

{R}{C}Lock mist
Flip a coin,if heads,your opponent can't evolve,bench,play a trainer card,attack and attach an energy card during your opponent's next turn.If tails,the defending pokemon is now burned.
Weakness Resistance Retreat cost
{L} {C}
Squirtle δ 50HP{R}
Basic

{R}{C}Mirror shell
During your opponent's next turn, if Squirtle is damaged by an opponent's attack, put the same number of damage counters on the Attacking Pokémon (even if Squirtle is Knocked Out).
Weakness Resistance Retreat cost
{L} {C}



okay now?
now?
 
GPM: Lock Mist is still to broken even if there is a coin flip required. There is a 50-50 chance that you are able to lock your opponent. For this, remove all the effects and stick to Disable-ing Evolution and Retreating. That'll do fine. Remove the secondary effect which will take place when the coin flip is unsuccessful.
 
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