Fake Spoiler Competition: The winner is... Muddy68!

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Ok, so I am an actor, so I chose to do Ambipom because it is very energetic like me. That is where the on stage and such comes from.

Ambipom Lv43 HP 100 {C}
Stage 1 Evolves from Aipom

{Poke-Power} Attitude Change
Once during your turn if Ambipom is your active Pokemon (or on stage), before you attack, you flip a coin. If heads choose confused, burned, poisoned, or asleep. The Defending Pokemon is affected by that Special Condition. You cannot choose the same Special Condition two turns in a row because you don't know what Ambipom will do next. You cannot use this power if Ambipom is affected by a Special Condition.

{C} Lead Role
You may switch the Defending Pokemon with one of your opponent's Benched Pokemon so Ambipom can perform for it.

{C}{C} Anger Scene 50
Do not mess with Ambipom! Ambipom cannot attack during your next turn to cool down.

Weakness {F} +20
Resistance
Retreat {C}

I thought this could be a play on a Imakuni? cards. I hope that you get it, and enjoy.
 
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Juliacoolo said:
I kylz: I wish that I could of seen "You" in the card through standard text, raather than the extra stuff. 7/10


The problem with this card is that if the MS part was taken away, I would of never known this was your card. I like the creativity, but that lack of description gets you a 7/10.
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Description for what
 
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Muddy68 said:
*Spoiler*
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9/10.

Super creative card, and I can accurately guess your personality from them. I deduct a single point because you fail to capitalize Burned, Confused, or Poisoned.
 
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Muddy68 said:
Ok, so I am an actor, so I chose to do Ambipom because it is very energetic like me. That is where the on stage and such comes from.

Ambipom Lv43 HP 100 {C}
Stage 1 Evolves from Aipom

{Poke-Power} Attitude Change
Once during your turn if Ambipom is your active Pokemon (or on stage), before you attack, you flip a coin. If heads choose confused, burned, poisoned, or asleep. The Defending Pokemon is affected by that Special Condition. You cannot choose the same Special Condition two turns in a row because you don't know what Ambipom will do next. You cannot use this power if Ambipom is affected by a Special Condition.

{C} Lead Role
You may switch the Defending Pokemon with one of your opponent's Benched Pokemon so Ambipom can perform for it.

{C}{C} Anger Scene 50
Do not mess with Ambipom! Ambipom cannot attack during your next turn to cool down.

Weakness {F} +20
Resistance
Retreat {C}

I thought this could be a play on a Imakuni? cards. I hope that you get it, and enjoy.
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I love it. You really captured your self without going overboard with non-standard text. 10.10.



MS eevee: What I meant was that the card wasn't very related to you besides the Use of "MS" I would of liked to see more reasoning of how it all relates to you as a person.

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Thanks guys! I cannot wait to see the other two scores.
 
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Juliacoolo said:
I love it. You really captured your self without going overboard with non-standard text. 10.10.



MS eevee: What I meant was that the card wasn't very related to you besides the Use of "MS" I would of liked to see more reasoning of how it all relates to you as a person.

Description for what
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How could I related it to me since ...If i did the card can't be understand
 
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How could I related it to me since ...If I did the card can't be understand
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He means that he can't understand your personality through the card.
 
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Roserade Lv.48 {G} 90HP
Stage 1
Evolves from Roselia

Item : Poison Barb
If Roserade is damaged by the Defending Pokemon, The Defending Pokemon is now Poisoned.

Poke-Body : Innocence
Whenever Roserade is damaged by an attack, reduce that damage by 10 for each Bench Pokemon you have in play. For every 10 damage reduced, put 1 damage counter on one of your Bench Pokemon. You can't put more than 1 damage counter on one of your Bench Pokemon in this way.

{G}{C} Personal Care
Remove 2 damage counters from all of your {G} Pokemon in play.

{G}{C}{C} Rose Whiplash 10+
This attack does 10 damage plus 10 more damage for each Damage Counter on all of your Bench {G} Pokemon. Roserade can't use Rose Whiplash during your next turn.

Weakness : {R} +20
Resistance:
Retreat Cost {C}

In school, I mix around with the "bullies" of the school. This is because, i have been friends with them for a long time, before they became bullies. Of course i do not get bullied. Most of the time, when i made a new friend, they(the bullies) tend to pick on my new friend. Which is shown in Roserade's body, instead of damaging Roserade(Me) Bench Pokemon (My friends) get damaged. After my friend get picked on, i tend to comfort them, which is in the 1st attack. Sometimes, when i think the bullies, gone too far on picking a friend, I tend to lash out on them to protect my friend. Sometimes, the bullies would fight back, then some time later, they would apologize due to guilt hence the poison barb item.

I little inside of how i am in school.
 
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The Reaver said:
How could I related it to me since ...If I did the card can't be understand
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He means that he can't understand your personality through the card.
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The reason was I don't know how descript my personality
 
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iKyLeZ said:
*Spoiler*
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A minor error in your card is that you gave it two attacks, a Poke-Body, and even a Poke-Item. That would never fit on a REAL card, so I'll have to deduct for that.

A further deduction shall be made because of the amount of capital letters you used. "Defending" is not capitalized, "The" is not capitalized, "Damage Counter" is not capitalized, either.

Other than those two errors, the card itself oozes with personality, and it is uber-creative.

8/10.
 
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Where are the other 2 judges? I would like to see my scores.
 
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Muddy68 said:
Where are the other 2 judges? I would like to see my scores.
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Patience is a virtue, you know. Give them some time, they have lives (well, at least I think they do).
 
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Yeah, I have a life. Not much, but still a life

Muddy68: Aside from the grammer errors in the Power, I really like your card. I'll dock you half a point for each grammar error in the power, but since I can't give you half points, I'll give you an 8.

KyleZ: I like your card, but I can't call it creative, which was how we're supposed to judge. So, I'll give you a 7.
 
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Sorry, but we do all have lives, no matter how bad they may be, we all have lives. JK
 
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PokeChamp said:
"Defending" is not capitalized
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uh... "Defending Pokemon" is always capitalized, and the person you're judging capitalized it.
 
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Sorry to all, I have been ill recently but I'll try and post my scores tonight.

~Raichupika33~
 
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esperante said:
uh... "Defending Pokemon" is always capitalized, and the person you're judging capitalized it.
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Wow... I stand corrected. I earnestly thought that it wasn't capitalized. I give an apology. I am only human, and I made a mistake.

Thank you for catching this critical error, esperante, and I promise I will never shame anyone with an inaccuracy ever again.
 
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Muddy68 said:
Ok, so I am an actor, so I chose to do Ambipom because it is very energetic like me. That is where the on stage and such comes from.

Ambipom Lv43 HP 100 {C}
Stage 1 Evolves from Aipom

{Poke-Power} Attitude Change
Once during your turn if Ambipom is your active Pokemon (or on stage), before you attack, you flip a coin. If heads choose confused, burned, poisoned, or asleep. The Defending Pokemon is affected by that Special Condition. You cannot choose the same Special Condition two turns in a row because you don't know what Ambipom will do next. You cannot use this power if Ambipom is affected by a Special Condition.

{C} Lead Role
You may switch the Defending Pokemon with one of your opponent's Benched Pokemon so Ambipom can perform for it.

{C}{C} Anger Scene 50
Do not mess with Ambipom! Ambipom cannot attack during your next turn to cool down.

Weakness {F} +20
Resistance
Retreat {C}

I thought this could be a play on a Imakuni? cards. I hope that you get it, and enjoy.
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7/10.
A good card. Very creative and definitely has a decency. The only things is that I find this card weak for an Ambipom. It has a few restrictions to the card which makes gameplay slightly tricky. I like the idea for the Poke-power, a good idea for the special conditions. I don't think Ive seen that before so marks up. It seems an outdated card if you look at the weakness, with the new Hg/Ss set all weaknesses are now X2. There is a grammar error, it should be Retreat Cost and not Retreat. That has minus points. So yeah, up and downs with the card but a good card overall.

iKyLeZ said:
Roserade Lv.48 {G} 90HP
Stage 1
Evolves from Roselia

Item : Poison Barb
If Roserade is damaged by the Defending Pokemon, The Defending Pokemon is now Poisoned.

Poke-Body : Innocence
Whenever Roserade is damaged by an attack, reduce that damage by 10 for each Bench Pokemon you have in play. For every 10 damage reduced, put 1 damage counter on one of your Bench Pokemon. You can't put more than 1 damage counter on one of your Bench Pokemon in this way.

{G}{C} Personal Care
Remove 2 damage counters from all of your {G} Pokemon in play.

{G}{C}{C} Rose Whiplash 10+
This attack does 10 damage plus 10 more damage for each Damage Counter on all of your Bench {G} Pokemon. Roserade can't use Rose Whiplash during your next turn.

Weakness : {R} +20
Resistance:
Retreat Cost {C}

In school, I mix around with the "bullies" of the school. This is because, I have been friends with them for a long time, before they became bullies. Of course I do not get bullied. Most of the time, when I made a new friend, they(the bullies) tend to pick on my new friend. Which is shown in Roserade's body, instead of damaging Roserade(Me) Bench Pokemon (My friends) get damaged. After my friend get picked on, I tend to comfort them, which is in the 1st attack. Sometimes, when I think the bullies, gone too far on picking a friend, I tend to lash out on them to protect my friend. Sometimes, the bullies would fight back, then some time later, they would apologize due to guilt hence the poison barb item.

I little inside of how I am in school.
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10/10.
Very deep. Perfect. I love how you added the item, don't see that in too many cards. I like how it tells you exactly what happens, I applaud you for bringing on the topic into the card. Personal care, I like the card. It seems like a all or none card which adds mystery. Rose Whiplash is maybe too overpowered for those amount of damage counters, maybe add one and the air will be smooth. Great card, keep up the good work!
 
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Just waiting on Juliacoolo to rate iKylez. Then we can eliminate someone.
 
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Ok raichupika33, iKylez did the exact thing with his weakness, so you are going to dock me points but not him. That is unfair.
 
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