Writing HydroCannon's Poetry (New Poems: Post 48)

[Incinermyn]

RE: HydroCannon's Poetry Added #9 "Lies"

There's no need to censor-jump God. I use the term in both religious and non-religious context all the time here, so I know it isn't censored.

 

[Hydro Cannon]

RE: HydroCannon's Poetry Added #9 "Lies"

Sorry, it's a habit I got into, and I put in in my phone to auto-correct the name of G-d to censor it. I posted on your profile as to why I censor it! personal stuff, I guess

 

[Hydro Cannon]

RE: HydroCannon's Poetry Added #9 "Lies"

New poem!

Please stay away, 
  And don't hurt me no more;
Lord you have me praying,
  And crying face flat to the floor,

You've broken my heart,
  And split it into two;
Lord, I want to remain strong,
  So give me something to hold onto,

My first kiss,
  Was a big miss,
For destroyed it you have,

I gave you my all,
  Yet down in my fall,
I you call,

I tried my best,
  And stayed by your side,
And you told me you loved me,
  A deceptively believable lie. 

You laughed at my pain,
  And I didn't shed a tear;
You used my kindness,
  My biggest and greatest fear,

Yet every night I pray,
  That inside you G-d will stay,
And keep the bad things away,

Yet I feel so alone,
  And I wait by my phone,
To hear your set ringtone,

You want something genuine,
  Yet you yourself are not;
You look for joy in the wrong places,
  In wordly pleasures you sought,

Did you ever cry,
  Or ever really care?
You never asked about me,
  Or inquired about my welfare,

Yet all the time you wait,
  To find the perfect mate, 
Hoping that it's destined fate,

One day you'll see,
  Who fate had the perfect man be,
And your conscience will be free.

 

[Briaah]

RE: HydroCannon's Poetry Added #9 "Lies"

Very nice! I like the feeling this one gives

 

[Hydro Cannon]

RE: HydroCannon's Poetry Added #9 "Lies"

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback!

 

[Mewtwomaster]

RE: HydroCannon's Poetry Added #8 -No name-

Thank you. Im glad you liked it! Also, another poem! This one is NOT from me, rather from someone anonymous. They asked their name does not go public, so you may only see their work!

"Lies"

The world is filled with them,
Blinking, shining and hiding
Anything can be made from them
An alternate reality
Worlds created with them

Lives can be lies
Studded with broken family ties
When nothing but dreams fill your mind,
Through day and night
It seems there's no light.
When all you do is fight,
These lies are shaping the things we thought we knew


When people slant,
The world slants
Everything can be bent.
It takes only a lie
And a chocolate pie
To make someone forget,
The Truth of the matter,
Isn't the lie
It's not the pie.
(A mere expression of deception,
The pie)

Lives can't be lies
They shouldn't be
When the Truth of the matter isn't the Illusion
But what you make of it.
A chilling reality,
But the Truth is the way,
The better way,
To explain the day.

DDIIDD TTHHAATT SSAAYY CCHHOOCCOOLLAATTEE??

 

[Hydro Cannon]

RE: HydroCannon's Poetry Added #9 "Lies"

Yeah... It did.

 

[Hydro Cannon]

RE: HydroCannon's Poetry Added #9 "Lies"

New poems!

"There's no such thing as true happiness,
For such a thing is an illusion,

The feeling of warm inner joy,
Is nothing more than a bodily delusion,

There's no such thing as the happiest day,
For such a thing cannot be,

Rather there is only sad and less sad days,
From this truth you can't be free,

This so-called happiness is only temporary,
It will only leave you,

So then where do you turn?
Where do you look up to?

HAPPINESS IS A LIE.
I DON'T EVER TRUST IT."

And another:

"I want to be perfect,
But I never will be,

I want to love you,
With a heart so free,

I want to hold you,
And be a happy guy,

To be there for you always,
That I will always try,

Just don't abandon me,
And leave me to myself,

G-d designed us to be together,
So being alone is bad for my health,

I don't want to be alone,
So here's my heart, take it,

At first, were not always perfect,
But through G-d, we'll conform and fit,

But sometimes were not ready,
So here's the lesson G-d will teach,

Some things were not ready for yet,
So he puts them just out of reach.

JUST BE PATIENT.
THE ONE WILL COME."